Azure wrote:

[Insane]

1. 整體來說我覺得下音效的地方可以再用點心，有些重音的地方沒聲音打起來沒實感很可惜。
   排列的話挺亂的... 雖然能讀也能打，flow也沒有太大的問題，但可以再加強
2. 00:02:483、00:03:816、00:04:483、00:05:149、00:15:816 +clap
3. 00:04:816 clap拿掉
4. 00:29:316 +finish
5. 00:29:649 - 00:31:149 這段裡的slider head都+clap、00:31:316 這個note也加
   00:31:816 slider tail +clap、 00:32:149 +finish (整段弄好你自己聽聽看差別在哪)
6. 00:47:816 (5)、00:49:150 (5) +clap
7. 還有一些小地方24clap應該算是基本，我建議再多聽聽歌來下音效會好一點

全部改了:<< 我再听一遍自己修一修 感谢公主~

Cyc17- wrote:

[Insane]
整体建议距离稍微拉开一点,虽然爬行感觉不错总觉不够爽orz

1. 00:08:816 (2) - 这个slider换一下方向(?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:22:816 (1) - 这里之后总觉得漏了一拍 打的时候没什么很大的感觉就是了
   四暗刻了一下00:22:983可以加个note填充一下(不加也没啥问题 感觉和后面的3又很奇怪 加了个NC 观望一下
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:29:649 (1,2,3) - 只是一个意见3个slider都做变速逐渐拉长啊!不变速不是咸鱼吗! .....不知道怎么排啊 need示例
4. 01:23:649 (4) - 前面两个短滑条都是方向这个也继续下来怎么样
   
   SPOILER

   

大概这些了,其他没啥了觉得大概就是整体榜面拉开一点类似00:11:650这类节奏拉开段的连打可以塞一点(塞满它!)
>相当精彩的比赛
祝早日rank
没有说的都改了

Flask wrote:

Artist: リリアナシスターズ
Artist Unicode: Liliana Sisters
Title: Lifeる is LOVEる!! (TVサイズ)
Title Unicode: Life-Ru is LOVE-Ru!! (TV Size)
Tags: 姫小路秋子 木戸衣吹 那須原アナスタシア 茅原実里 猿渡銀兵衛春臣 下田麻美 二階堂嵐 喜多村英梨
有一个小问题啊现在还能不能写TV size？ 我确认一下

Blitzfrog wrote:

Heeey~
From my queue:

Insane

00:04:816 (4,5) - Should be closer together orz why
00:22:649 - A hitcircle here will flow better
00:24:149 (1) - Shorten this to 00:24:649 and add HC after it
00:28:983 (4) - Remove this, due to your distance snap as well, it makes it seem like you're mapping to the background music but you're mapping to the vocals
01:26:649 (1,1) - Stack these or move that hitcircle elsewhere, very confusing! :<< i meant to be not stacked...

Easy

00:00:150 (1,2,3) - This looks better imo

00:07:483 (2,3) - Stack these, makes more sense to me
00:08:149 (1) - Shorten this till 00:10:483 and add stuff after it, because the vocal ends here and a new flow starts
01:02:483 - Missing a hitcircle here, breaks flow
01:07:983 (1) - Spinner is too short, replace this with a slider art
01:26:816 (1) - ^ (I can only get 3000 on this, don't think it's suitable for 1 star)

mostly fixed

[C u r i] wrote:

[General]
Add video easy, normal and popner's insane diff

[Easy]
00:04:816 (1,2,3) - stack is not good idea on easy diff. i recommend to fix it
00:21:483 (1,2) - ^
00:55:983 (1,1) - Leave plenty of recovery time, especially after spinners
01:07:983 (1,1) - ^
almost all done

KuroNeko1509 wrote:

Short NM from the queue
It's short because It pretty clean ~ Good luck on ranking o/


[Insane]

• 00:11:650 (4,5,6) - notes 4 and 5 feel a little awkward and create a sensation of not being 1/4 triple, I think you should move them a bit closer together ~ Otherwise it makes it look like its 1/2 so its confusing ~_~
  
  
  00:25:483 (1,2,3) - I think this could be improved~ she starts singing su su meeee at this part ( 00:25:483 (1) - ) so i think thats where your slider should be starting~ make it a reverse slider; delete note 3 and create a new slider here ( 00:25:983 - ) that goes until there ( 00:26:316 - ) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6075040
  
  
  00:29:149 (5) - shouldn't this slider be shaped as the following sliders are? It would make it consistent with ( 01:13:483 (1,2,3,4) - )?
  
  
  01:20:816 (5) - this feels weird to me, I think making it a triple would be better~
  
  
  01:22:983 (2,3) - same here, i think these sliders dont fit so well, I'd suggest making them into jumps, like add a note on white and red lines so that they would be small jumps
  
  
  01:28:066 - I think you should add a spinner here, and make it go until here ( 01:28:983 - )

fixed most points :>

Fycho wrote:

一转眼就3年了
来射点星星

1. 00:04:816 (1,2,3) - Easy就别叠了
2. 00:11:483 (1) - 转盘后得空一小节，所以这个note得删
3. 00:14:816 (1) - 别NC，下一个再NC，然后00:17:483 (1) - 别NC
4. 00:21:483 (1,2) - 别叠
5. 00:41:483 (1,2) - 感觉可以blanket一个
6. 00:46:149 (3) - 变速NC提醒下
7. 00:59:316 (1) - 01:09:983 (1) - 转盘后空4拍
8. 01:13:483 (1) - 间距小了
9. 01:24:149 (4) - 可以blanket下
10. 感觉整个diff的NC都有点乱，要不无脑大白线吧（

1. 00:14:149 (2) - 可以blanket一下
2. 00:28:149 (3) - 可以注意下和前两个的间距
3. 01:17:483 (1,2,3) - 没包好
4. 感觉难度低了点…和Hard的Gap有点大

1. 00:12:983 - 感觉漏了不太好？
2. 01:06:983 (2,3) - Ctrl+G

1. 00:31:483 (2) - 感觉没摆好？
2. 01:13:816 (2,3,4) - 可以摆开些

1. 00:01:150 (5,1) - blanket
2. 00:15:816 (5,1) - 可以摆开些
3. 00:18:983 (2,1) - 这俩不好看（
4. 00:56:316 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 2016了长钝角跳感觉有点不符合时代（
5. 01:04:150 (1) - 没摆到左右对称
6. 两个insane难度太靠近而且太低了……

-[Hikari]- wrote:

啊我来膜摸图了

[Easy]

1. 00:04:816 (1,2,3) - Easy就别叠了 k
2. 00:11:483 (1) - 转盘后得空一小节，所以这个note得删 k
3. 00:14:816 (1) - 别NC，下一个再NC，然后00:17:483 (1) - 别NC
4. 00:21:483 (1,2) - 别叠 k
5. 00:41:483 (1,2) - 感觉可以blanket一个 k
6. 00:46:149 (3) - 变速NC提醒下
7. 00:59:316 (1) - 01:09:983 (1) - 转盘后空4拍 k
8. 01:13:483 (1) - 间距小了 k
9. 01:24:149 (4) - 可以blanket下 k
10. 感觉整个diff的NC都有点乱，要不无脑大白线吧（ 回头理一下

[Normal]

1. 00:14:149 (2) - 可以blanket一下
2. 00:28:149 (3) - 可以注意下和前两个的间距
3. 01:17:483 (1,2,3) - 没包好
4. 感觉难度低了点…和Hard的Gap有点大 显然福老二too guichu
   我先问问美雪姥爷还回不回来改mod

[Hard]

1. 00:12:983 - 感觉漏了不太好？
2. 01:06:983 (2,3) - Ctrl+G

[popner's Insane]

1. 00:31:483 (2) - 感觉没摆好？
2. 01:13:816 (2,3,4) - 可以摆开些

[Insane]

1. 00:01:150 (5,1) - blanket k
2. 00:15:816 (5,1) - 可以摆开些 k
3. 00:18:983 (2,1) - 这俩不好看（ 荣我思考一下
4. 00:56:316 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 2016了长钝角跳感觉有点不符合时代（ ^
5. 01:04:150 (1) - 没摆到左右对称 k
6. 两个insane难度太靠近而且太低了……

先意念回一下摸得 去上电路了 槽 今天怎么没电路课的

1. Minor Picks
   00:33:483 (1) - Blanket issue, you may need to move the next slider for slight adjustment.
   SPOILER

   
   01:26:483 - I think you can actually end the slider here at 01:26:649 to cover the vocal better.

1. Structrual Issue
   00:58:816 - This place feels off. You are trying to cover the drum in this kiai but just left the first and strongest one uncovered. I would suggest adding a note here to cover the strong beat and make it more consistent.

1. Structrual Issue
   AR is quite low and stuffs are showing up together, so I would suggest AR = 7.5.

1. Minor Picks
   01:25:483 (1) - This place the jump suddenly become closer, personally I would try to keep the distance to make it feel even. You may also want to make some minor adjustments on some other objects accordingly.
   SPOILER

   

1. Structrual Issue
   Structure is quite random and need some improvement, some of the hitsound is also not reasonable enough.
   00:21:483 - This part you can make the volume lower to make comparison with latter parts. If you do so, you may want to gradually get more valume on 00:29:649 this part.
   00:30:649 - 00:30:983 - 00:31:316 - To keep consistency with previous sliders, you can still apply clap onto the places.
   00:58:233 - This song's one difficulty is that the clap and vocal is not so fit, so when you only covered claps, and you are actually following the singers, it will feel off. The solution is perhaps adding whistles onto the vocal you are following.
2. Minor Picks
   00:14:150 (3) - Stacking with 00:13:316 (8) - would make it more tidy.
   00:14:650 (1,2,3) - Distance between sliders looks really random. Personally I would suggest making something like this to balance the distance. Tentative solution:
   SPOILER

   
   00:22:149 (3) - This slider can get a better and balanced shape like this:
   SPOILER

   
   00:31:649 (1) - Overlapped and random place to put this slider. You can try to put it on 00:32:816 (3) .
   00:44:983 (3) - Blanket is not perfect here.
   00:49:816 (2,3,4) - This flow is pretty strange to get a sudden change of direction of the slider. Personally I would rather see this kind of flow:
   SPOILER

   
   00:54:150 (3,4) - Need some small adjustments if you want to make a square. But if you are willing to make the flow and overall fitness better, this is what I suggested:
   SPOILER

   
   00:59:650 (6) - I would perfer doing this rather than clustering the two sliders together:
   SPOILER

   
   01:02:150 (3,4,5) - You can have a better blanket.
   01:03:483 (3,4,5) - Talking about the flow, I would rather have this:
   SPOILER

   
   01:04:150 (1,2,3) - Both blankets are not good here. Try this:
   SPOILER

   
   01:18:816 - This should not be a clap considering the background sound. You can use normal-hitnormal or just whistle to emphasize it if you want.
   01:26:316 - This part I think it's good to apply normal-hitnormal on for emphasizing the slider heads and circles. Like this part:00:29:649 .

Atrue wrote:

Yohalo~ 可以顺手求个mu么？ done :>
[General]
See Flask's post for the correct metadata about the title. Offiicial site for the name of the song Also I prefer using the original Japanese Source. I don't know why but there is no "no vidio" version in beatmap page, but for now let's see if it will affect ranking process. gotta change the metadata on weekend otherwise i'd have to redl the map with the poor speed at home ;_;
[Easy]

1. Minor Picks
   00:33:483 (1) - Blanket issue, you may need to move the next slider for slight adjustment.
   SPOILER

   
   01:26:483 - I think you can actually end the slider here at 01:26:649 to cover the vocal better.

[Insane]

1. Structrual Issue
   Structure is quite random and need some improvement, some of the hitsound is also not reasonable enough.
   00:21:483 - This part you can make the volume lower to make comparison with latter parts. If you do so, you may want to gradually get more valume on 00:29:649 this part. yea done
   00:30:649 - 00:30:983 - 00:31:316 - To keep consistency with previous sliders, you can still apply clap onto the places. k
   00:58:233 - This song's one difficulty is that the clap and vocal is not so fit, so when you only covered claps, and you are actually following the singers, it will feel off. The solution is perhaps adding whistles onto the vocal you are following. done now. considering if normalwhistle fits better?
2. Minor Picks
   00:14:150 (3) - Stacking with 00:13:316 (8) - would make it more tidy. k
   00:14:650 (1,2,3) - Distance between sliders looks really random. Personally I would suggest making something like this to balance the distance. Tentative solution:
   SPOILER

   
   k
   00:22:149 (3) - This slider can get a better and balanced shape like this:
   SPOILER

   
   I didn't mean to let it be like this orz it used to have only 2 ticks... perhaps i accidentally add 1 tick without being aware lol
   00:31:649 (1) - Overlapped and random place to put this slider. You can try to put it on 00:32:816 (3) . k
   00:44:983 (3) - Blanket is not perfect here. k
   00:49:816 (2,3,4) - This flow is pretty strange to get a sudden change of direction of the slider. Personally I would rather see this kind of flow:
   SPOILER

   
   k
   00:54:150 (3,4) - Need some small adjustments if you want to make a square. But if you are willing to make the flow and overall fitness better, this is what I suggested:
   SPOILER

   
   k
   00:59:650 (6) - I would perfer doing this rather than clustering the two sliders together:
   SPOILER

   
   01:02:150 (3,4,5) - You can have a better blanket. k
   01:03:483 (3,4,5) - Talking about the flow, I would rather have this:
   SPOILER

   
   k
   01:04:150 (1,2,3) - Both blankets are not good here. Try this:
   SPOILER

   
   k
   01:18:816 - This should not be a clap considering the background sound. You can use normal-hitnormal or just whistle to emphasize it if you want. k
   01:26:316 - This part I think it's good to apply normal-hitnormal on for emphasizing the slider heads and circles. Like this part:00:29:649 . k

Forum PM for any questions related. Thank you!

no actual question but
i didn't mean to have blankets or make squares in some patterns :p
ofc, they might look better so i applied the changes.

About the guest diffs, i'm kinda sure that i can make small changes for flower but i'd ask popner and miyuki if they are still willing to change by themselves orz
福老二根本不理我

Very helpful mod indeed, thanks so much!

Irie Miyuki wrote:

http://puu.sh/rzEjM/cb20cbfa5d.osu

an update, including adjustments of blanket issues

@raririn feel free to change my diff since I probably can't check mods regularly.

rrr好久不见啊aaaaaa这么久的图把我炸出来了

nika mika wrote:

[Easy]
老实说挺想让你remap……节奏和nc都有不少刺 感觉就是老坑的遗留问题，一个个挑能挑好久……

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

1. 00:06:816 (1,2,3) - 这里节奏下的比较有问题，特别是根据前面的密度，这里不如直接拉一根slider 00:06:816 (1) 到00:07:483
2. 00:19:316 (1,2) - 依然节奏感觉有点问题，建议(1)换成Slider 00:19:316 (1) - 00:19:983，(2)换成00:20:483 (2) - 00:20:816
3. 00:21:483 (1) - 拉的不太好看？
4. 00:21:483 (1,2) - 由于DS原因 这挨在一起我觉得是不太好看，不过又不太好去改DS，干脆直接去掉(2)，合并成1个slider
5. 00:23:483 (3) - 按vocal来最好提前1/2开始
6. 00:28:149 (1) - 怎么感觉这个锚点有点问题？
7. 00:32:149 (1,2) - 合并
8. 01:02:816 (3,4,5) - 合并，结尾可在(4)也可在(5)
9. 01:13:483 (1) - 第二个锚点往上抬点比较好看

1. AR+1
2. 00:14:816 (3) - 可以考虑blanket更好一些
3. 01:08:649 (4,5) - 鉴于有连续2个circle在1/2红线上，最好还是做成一个slider更加舒服点，可以以01:07:983 (3) 为基准复制转一个出来
4. 01:26:816 (3,4,5) - 同上，用一个带reverse的slider替代更加贴近normal难度。不过也可以不改，看个人喜好了。

1. AR+1 7实在低了 而且之后diff都是AR9
2. 00:48:816 (4,5,6,7,1) - 个人偏好DS更加小一点(0.9x) 这个DS不太好看imo
3. 01:00:149 (2) - 这里加个note啊 不然很怪
4. 01:02:316 (2) - 这里感觉没跟好vocal会比较突兀 拆开试试

1. 00:20:316 (5) - Ctrl+G显得更加顺滑
2. 01:05:316 (7) - NC
3. 01:08:649 (7) - NC
4. 01:10:649 (5) - 搞个jump会好很多
5. 01:11:983 (1) - ^
6. 00:58:649 (4) - ^
7. 01:01:316 (1) - ^
8. 01:16:149 (7) - 这里我建议ctrl+g，顺便叠的两个circle也一起跟着走。如果这里改的话01:16:483 (8) - 别忘了也ctrl+g。
9. 01:26:816 (4) - 这里NC下比较好吧 突然停止DS 改的话01:26:316 (1) - 这里就可以remove NC了

1. 00:26:649 (8) - 之前的(5)还没有完全消失掉 有点遮挡视线？建议继续往左边移一点
2. 00:44:649 (3,3) - 这俩可能ctrl+g一下给我感觉更好一点
3. 01:08:649 (3) - 这个slider body完全被遮挡了啊 不建议这样 拿出一点能看见的部位比较能接受

1. 00:01:316 - 这里一个vocal没跟
2. 00:21:483 (T) - 0.5x速度也太慢了感觉，0.75x正常点。这一改要改好多
3. 00:43:816 (6) - ctrl+g
4. 01:20:483 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 连续两个triple有点overmap的感觉 改掉一个试试 或者都不要

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from QQ Group
[Easy]

1. 00:06:816 (1,2,3) - 这里节奏下的比较有问题，特别是根据前面的密度，这里不如直接拉一根slider 00:06:816 (1) 到00:07:483
2. 00:19:316 (1,2) - 依然节奏感觉有点问题，建议(1)换成Slider 00:19:316 (1) - 00:19:983，(2)换成00:20:483 (2) - 00:20:816
3. 00:21:483 (1) - 拉的不太好看？
4. 00:21:483 (1,2) - 由于DS原因 这挨在一起我觉得是不太好看，不过又不太好去改DS，干脆直接去掉(2)，合并成1个slider
5. 00:23:483 (3) - 按vocal来最好提前1/2开始
6. 00:28:149 (1) - 怎么感觉这个锚点有点问题？
7. 00:32:149 (1,2) - 合并
8. 01:02:816 (3,4,5) - 合并，结尾可在(4)也可在(5)
9. 01:13:483 (1) - 第二个锚点往上抬点比较好看

E的部分全改了


[Flower's Hard]

1. AR+1 7实在低了 而且之后diff都是AR9 吼的
2. 00:48:816 (4,5,6,7,1) - 个人偏好DS更加小一点(0.9x) 这个DS不太好看imo
3. 01:00:149 (2) - 这里加个note啊 不然很怪
4. 01:02:316 (2) - 这里感觉没跟好vocal会比较突兀 拆开试试

除了那个加note都改了下

[popner's Insane]

1. 00:20:316 (5) - Ctrl+G显得更加顺滑
2. 01:05:316 (7) - NC
3. 01:08:649 (7) - NC
4. 01:10:649 (5) - 搞个jump会好很多
5. 01:11:983 (1) - ^
6. 00:58:649 (4) - ^
7. 01:01:316 (1) - ^
8. 01:16:149 (7) - 这里我建议ctrl+g，顺便叠的两个circle也一起跟着走。如果这里改的话01:16:483 (8) - 别忘了也ctrl+g。
9. 01:26:816 (4) - 这里NC下比较好吧 突然停止DS 改的话01:26:316 (1) - 这里就可以remove NC了

改spacing不知道算不算合理小改动 我再看一下

[Insane]

1. 00:01:316 - 这里一个vocal没跟
2. 00:21:483 (T) - 0.5x速度也太慢了感觉，0.75x正常点。这一改要改好多
3. 00:43:816 (6) - ctrl+g 我都是想怎么简单 鬼畜的都想怎么难
4. 01:20:483 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 连续两个triple有点overmap的感觉 改掉一个试试 或者都不要

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鬼畜麻婆怎么这么多I和X标图

MrSergio wrote:

4 years and only 76 posts? What did you do in the meantime lol

raririn wrote:

Σ(｀д′*ノ)ノ改不出更难了啦 拉大这么多才4.4不到 怎么做4.8嘛

Kencho wrote:

不怕，現在4.8的讓我來做233333

抱歉，你求的BN req變成了一個gd(啪.jpg)

1. 00:58:649 - why doesn't the slider pattern start here? it feels really weird! maybe you can delete this object 00:54:816 (1) and make it something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6763320
2. 01:08:983 - same as above?
   other than that I think the map's nice ^^

1. 00:11:650 (4,5,6) - reduce spacing, this map is a little bit too hard for the SR it gives
2. 00:18:816 (1,2,3,4) - increase spacing because you will be initiating jumps. better not to surprise the players https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6763603
3. 00:20:316 (1,2,3,4) - a little bit hard to read, move 3 somewhere? you can also increase distance along the way
4. 00:22:983 - too silent for the player. add a note since the vocals support it
5. 00:56:316 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - would really advise against the use of this, since most people will get misses on here. something like this would be better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6763675

1. 01:02:487 (1,2) - reduce spacing on these kicksliders slightly and make the kicksliders more curved (recommended) or change to hitcircle. this is very hard to get a grasp on
2. 01:07:987 (1,2,3) - part is hard to play unless you memorize the map. move 01:08:653 (3) up?

Flask wrote:

怎麼墳了

拉拉铃 wrote:

btw although Flask brought along with 2 customhitclaps, but I doubt if they are the same as mine. If possible can anyone check it again?

280,76,55983,2,0,P|176:116|240:208,1,250,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Net0 wrote:

Really late mod.

[General]

1. There’s an inconsistency on the video file among the difficulties. The video works on Irie’s Normal and popner’s Insane while the other difficulties there’re no video. You should check the .osu of all diffs on the [Events] and add this line Video,0,"video.avi" under the background line. // The da**ed problem seems to be a bug of old client or something, I've changed them thousands of times..
2. Are you sure about the countdown being enabled? Usually we don’t see this option anymore among ranked maps, but since it’s an older map, I don’t really see it as a problem. But if you’re going to use it, how about a custom countdown sound? // Not sure about this, will ask someone else to see if I should turn it off. Removed countdown.

[Easy]

1. This rhythm here felt really random, even tho it plays fine and okay; 00:00:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - . This first intro could be separated into two parts. The first one starts here 00:00:150 - ~ 00:05:483 – and the second one starts here 00:05:483 - ~ 00:10:816 - . They’re very similar and I don’t a reason for them to be mapped in such a different way.
   In the first phrase you started with a big slider 00:00:150 (1) – following vocal line, which you also did here 00:05:483 (7) - . But as the pattern progresses 00:01:483 (2,3,4) – vs. 00:06:816 (1,2,3) - . I recommend mapping both like you did here 00:06:816 (1,2,3) – with two 1/1 sliders ending with a circle on the next big white tick. About this part as well, this should be the new combo 00:05:483 (1) - . By doing that you will have both parts having 1-6 combo like this 00:00:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - . // OK!
2. This spinner here is ending on such an important beat of the chorus 00:55:983 (1) – and that is making all the transition from the regular verse to the chorus really weak and odd. I really recommend you think about mapping this section 00:58:649 - ~ 00:59:816 - . // There must not be notes so close to a spinner in an Easy; someone told me last year iirc. Will check it. While I do think it's a bit hard to hit a note on ~00:58:649..
3. This one is quite similar to the previous point; 00:21:483 (1,2) - and 00:26:816 (1,2,1) - . They’re very close and similar parts of the song, yet mapped very differently. It’s not something negative or wrong, but for an easy difficulty, you probably want to keep it more consistent for new players. // I really don't think it's a issue here since the patterns are both quite easy to get..
4. This slider end is on the blue tick; 01:24:149 (4) – right here 01:24:899 – instead of the white tick here 01:24:816 - . Since it’s an easy diff I really recommend ending it on the white/red ticks. // Changed to the white tick.
5. This spinner here 01:26:816 (1) – seems too short for this difficulty. //Auto got 5000 on this and it's long enough imo.... But still I'll ask others on this. Extending the spinner really sounds weird since the song itself has already ended..

[Irie’s Normal]

1. Blanket improvement here 01:17:483 (1,2,3) – could be a positive thing. // Reshaped the sliders a bit, but to be honest I'm bad at blanketing orz
2. This would work better 01:10:817 (3,4) – if the slider actually starts here 01:10:816 – and you put the hitcircle here 01:11:816 - . Like this https://puu.sh/u2RNC.jpg
   Same idea applies to this 01:00:149 (2,3) - . // Changed. However changing the latter making 00:59:149 (1) - look weird ... Whatever it does seem better.

[Flower's Hard]

1. Are you sure about breaking the rhythm here 00:19:483 - ? That’s probably the only place you broke rhythm to follow the melody of the music. 00:10:816 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - // Yes it feels inconsistent with other parts, but personally I don't think it sounds bad here..

[Insane]

1. If you compare the spacing of this triple 00:11:650 (4,5,6) – with this section 00:12:150 (1,2,3,4,5) – they are different even tho the section and intensity of the music is the same. You probably want to lower the spacing of this 00:11:650 (4,5,6) – a bit more. // Right! Not very sure what I was thinking.
2. This section here should be mapped with both sliders being 3/4. 00:30:649 (1,2,3) – if you want to give the vocal lines the proper emphasis imo. Some would say that if you do that you can’t really space 00:30:983 (2,3) - , but I think that even if they’re not spaced, ending both sliders on the blue ticks would be more consistent and map better the vocal line. // Right.
3. Are you sure about not mapping this strong beat here 01:20:149 - ? It feels too strong to be ignored as it is now. // I think there was a triple there though... I do think there should be something but not sure what to put, so leave it temporarily.
   

Well hope that you still want to move this foward. Mapset is pretty neat and feels ready to rank. Sorry about taking a long time to mod this. Good luck o/

1. Update BG: https://puu.sh/AweUl.jpg
2. Video: I'll try to check with someone for a better video encode and quality, but you need to at least try to get a better one.
3. Insane diff is not using video
4. Disable letter box in all diffs except for popner's insane since no one besides him used a break
5. Metadata needs to be fixed;
   Source: お兄ちゃんだけど愛さえあれば関係ないよねっ
   Add to Tags: Onii-chan dakedo Ai sae Areba Kankei Nai yo ne!
   In case someone wants to check metadata;
   http://oniai.com/release/cd.html
   https://goo.gl/LENJKC
   https://puu.sh/Awg6F.png
   
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   Easy
6. Fix DS 00:01:483 (2,3) -
7. The combos here are inconsistent with the rest of the diff 00:00:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - are you sure about this combo length?
8. 00:28:149 (1,2) - switch NC's here
9. 00:33:483 (1,2) - ^
10. Remove NC 00:36:149 (1) -
11. Switch NC's 00:38:149 (3,1) - etc, basically fix your combos to make sure they're two full measures lenght and consistent please and that applies to eveything up until here 00:46:816 -
12. 01:13:483 (1,2) - Inconsistent rhythm with 01:02:816 (3,4,5,1) -
13. 01:18:816 (1,2) - Another NC that should be switched for the transition, make sure to re-check the combos in the entire diff
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    Insane
14. Two greenlines in the same snap here 00:46:149 -
15. 01:18:816 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Makes no sense in rhythm, I know it "fits" with the section but you undermapped other sections that were supposed to have streams
16. 01:20:149 - Not mapping this sound here is really a horrible idea, please at least use a circle here to map this main transition
17. Overall I really think you can make a better rhythm on the insane diff, like a lot of stuff is really not up to standards, can you consider re-working the diff? -00:00:150 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:02:816 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - and 00:05:483 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are inconsistent and what you're following is not very clear, make sure to check this 00:06:816 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . The same thing happens on 00:41:483 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
    -Another section that should have a re-work in the rhythm aspect 00:14:650 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - with the how to handle the sound on 00:15:149 -
    -00:29:149 (5,1,2,3,1) - This also maps the same sound with very distinct ideas
    -01:08:816 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - The reverse here kills the transition and doesn't work with the songs rhythm, just check popner diff
    -01:22:149 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Really inconsistent rhythm as well
    So yeah, if you re-work the insane I'm willing to move the set foward. If you need assistance in that let me know.