huafenshaonv wrote:

[General]
开aimod看
里面还有些小问题
offset感觉还不准 我每个难度玩起来都有9~12ms的late
[Easy]
00:46:149 (3) - 口哨去掉 k
01:09:483 转盘这里结束吧 音乐这里有个finish
后面1 2 3压红线不太好 (就算不用2 4clap 也应该保持 2 4白线上有个tick
01:25:483 (5) - 弄得好看点 后面的弧歪的厉害 k
[Irie's Normal]
k
00:19:149 (2) - 删了这note如何？ 这里节奏有点密了
[Flower's Hard]
00:48:816 (4,5,6,7) -实际距离不跟着slider sv变小会更好 1.4左右
01:11:649 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - nc的有点多 感觉乱
[popner's Insane]
k
[Insane]
00:04:150 (1) - 叠在00:02:816 (1) - 上面
00:46:140 (4) - 去了口哨 k

就这些 good luck and star

eikkaleyd wrote:

怎么又是神图，不mod了啦！

以下全是nazi

[荔荔]
00:29:149 (5) - 00:29:316 开始的这个词明显和后面三个slider是同一句话，所以这里应该是一个圈，然后slider放到后面红线上，NC也和后面三个一组的slider一起（像是风车梗专用的节奏），是这样的： k
00:31:983 (x) - 感觉漏拍
00:42:316 (4) - 这个似乎可以也做成弯的，我试了下3水平翻转然后顺时针30度，差不多和3对称又和下一个1对称（反正对称啥的都是人随便看的但总比直条好 k
00:44:316 (1,2,3) - 让3直的和1对称怎样。。1的头尾和2可以在同一条水平线上
00:52:650 (3) - 这里的唱词密集，估计没有让你放长拖条的余裕，目测1/2拖条带reverse会合适一些
01:04:816 (3,4) - 换一下，4那个红线上根本没有歌声 k
01:05:399 (x) - 上面那个改了的话，推荐这里加个note
01:08:983 (5,6) - 还是换一下。。mukashi mukashi一样的节奏比较好 k
01:12:650 (4,5) - ^ 因为01:12:816 上没有字，红线换气，01:13:149 上有字 k
01:27:816 (4) - 用拖条的话感觉最后一拍没压到，也换两个圈？（发现后面几个难度全都是拖条所以这个你看着办？

[泡泡]
00:52:649 (2) - 似乎是一点+一个1/2拖条
01:05:316 (7,8,9,10) - 有三连的应该是前面那个拖条，感受一下，应该不用我细说？
01:17:983 (7,8) - 这里互换一下，重音压在slider开头上应该比结尾上更好

[花花]
00:06:483 (3) - 放在2包围的地方（380 240）DS可能误读概率低一点
神hard耶

↑飞天小女警的赶脚↑

[艾利]
性别不明那我就用个性别不明的译名吧（你是来mod还是来搞笑的
00:14:816 (3) - 好像再往上两格才能包围2
00:33:483 (3) - 移动到（100 176）既不遮盖1也可以包围2的尾巴，注意移动后面的notes

[Easy]
01:10:149 (1,2,3) - 好像应该往前1/2吧这三个？
应该是歌曲的问题，这难度的整体节奏都有点微妙……不过E难度玩家其实都不会感觉到而且rank标准是没问题，建议一下下次做E的时候全都水平或者垂直放。

好啦快rank去

sammy711 wrote:

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pink=advice
General
Good!
Easy
00:21:483 (1,2) - 滑条尾遮note在Easy里可能不太好(?
如果要这样的话把2和1的结尾对齐，有一点偏差
00:23:483 (3) - 遵守DS k
01:18:149 (3) - 遵守DS k
Irie's Normal
tag哪里去了
00:09:483 - 无用的绿线 现在貌似不管了
Flower's Hard
01:16:149 (1) - 滑条的中间出界了 ..改惹
01:08:983 (1,2,1,2) - 最好不要和之前 (00:58:316 (1,3,1,2,1,3) - )用过的节奏一样
已经用过1次的梗用第二次会让人觉得乏味吧。可以试试拆成一个slider+一个circle 或者是三个circle
popner's Insane
00:20:316 (5) - 这个换circle? 感觉音乐是重音
泡泡的diff没啥可说的....
Insane
00:08:149 (7) - 滑条中间出界了0.0 k
00:37:149 (5) - reverse一次? 感觉节奏断了不太舒服
00:41:483 - 无用的绿线
01:01:816 (2) - 这个ctrl+G? 感觉反过来之后flow好一些 k
01:07:316 (4,5) - 这两个头尾没完全叠在一起啊。。微调一下 k

my star 快去rank了吧~!
要是能帮忙看下我的图就更好了>.<

Suishohana wrote:

Coming from my modding queue to mod the insane as requested

Insane

00:08:149 (1) -
The slider is coming out from the star pattern but the beginning circle's placement looks off. Try moving it over to the left so it matches the spacing of these notes 00:07:483 (3,4,5,6) - better done

00:15:649 (4) - Try moving this circle so it's a more equal distance from this slider's end 00:15:316 (3) - and this slider's beginning 00:15:816 (5) - done

00:30:316 (3) - The placement of this slider seems off compared to the previous two. Try moving it so it matches those better done

00:56:983 (6,7) - Put more distance between these two notes so it'll match these notes 00:56:316 (2,3,4,5) - better done

It's not much but I hoped this helped ^^ it quite helps :>

William K wrote:

Hi, NM from my queue :3

[Insane]

1. 00:01:150 (5) - Making this consistent would be better. Since it would be odd if you pass an instrument here but you don't pass it here 00:00:316 (2) - . Consider making it a reversed 1/2 slider. You may make a curved slider or a horizontal one. thinking about this :/
2. 00:04:150 (1,3) - Why does number 1 has higher spacing than the slider, number 1 should have lower spacing than the one in number 3 since the beat in number 3 feels stronger. yes you are right. made some change to let it have the same spacing as 1.6
3. 00:08:149 (1,2) - Making a 1/1 gap is fine, actually. But putting 00:08:816 (2) - is not recommended since people might misread it. Consider making 00:08:816 (2) - farer than number 1, like the one you did with 00:09:483 (1) - :3 done~
4. 00:09:483 (1,2,3) - This would be hard to press imo. Since it has a 1/4 gap between each object, try making these sliders nearer. not so hard in my view :/ even i can clear it without difficulty..
5. 00:18:483 (5) - How about Ctrl+G-ing this one. It would improve the flow to 00:18:816 (1) - and it would also emphasis the drum there better. ye, done
6. 00:37:483 - How about putting a note here, it would be better imo. Skipping a downbeat isn't a very good choice, exception: patterns, maybe. But here, as long as you put the note at the correct place, it would not break the flow. ye, i'm thinking about where to put the note, added anyway :>
7. 00:58:649 (7) - How about making this a 1/2 slider and put a note 00:58:983 - . This 1/2 gap seems odd, I suppose. And it might cause misread by players. done
8. 01:06:150 (3) - Fix blanket if you meant it xD fixed

That's all from me :3 Hope this helps. yes it does
Your flow's not bad, but try improving your pattern by mapping more. i will :>

1. 00:50:483 (3,4) 再稍微包好一點吧~

1. 全部的音量下降5%~10% 覺得有點吵..
2. 01:26:816 NC?

1. 整體來說我覺得下音效的地方可以再用點心，有些重音的地方沒聲音打起來沒實感很可惜。
   排列的話挺亂的... 雖然能讀也能打，flow也沒有太大的問題，但可以再加強
2. 00:02:483、00:03:816、00:04:483、00:05:149、00:15:816 +clap
3. 00:04:816 clap拿掉
4. 00:29:316 +finish
5. 00:29:649 - 00:31:149 這段裡的slider head都+clap、00:31:316 這個note也加
   00:31:816 slider tail +clap、 00:32:149 +finish (整段弄好你自己聽聽看差別在哪)
6. 00:47:816 (5)、00:49:150 (5) +clap
7. 還有一些小地方24clap應該算是基本，我建議再多聽聽歌來下音效會好一點

1. 00:08:816 (2) - 这个slider换一下方向(?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:22:816 (1) - 这里之后总觉得漏了一拍 打的时候没什么很大的感觉就是了
   四暗刻了一下00:22:983可以加个note填充一下(不加也没啥问题
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:29:649 (1,2,3) - 只是一个意见3个slider都做变速逐渐拉长啊!不变速不是咸鱼吗!
4. 01:23:649 (4) - 前面两个短滑条都是方向这个也继续下来怎么样
   
   SPOILER

   

Flask wrote:

拉拉鈴兒霸氣回歸

edit: 233祝早日rank啊 4年好快啊

Artist: リリアナシスターズ
Artist Unicode: Liliana Sisters
Title: Lifeる is LOVEる!! (TVサイズ)
Title Unicode: Life-Ru is LOVE-Ru!! (TV Size)
Tags: 姫小路秋子 木戸衣吹 那須原アナスタシア 茅原実里 猿渡銀兵衛春臣 下田麻美 二階堂嵐 喜多村英梨

我來做個gd吧

Azure wrote:

[Insane]

1. 整體來說我覺得下音效的地方可以再用點心，有些重音的地方沒聲音打起來沒實感很可惜。
   排列的話挺亂的... 雖然能讀也能打，flow也沒有太大的問題，但可以再加強
2. 00:02:483、00:03:816、00:04:483、00:05:149、00:15:816 +clap
3. 00:04:816 clap拿掉
4. 00:29:316 +finish
5. 00:29:649 - 00:31:149 這段裡的slider head都+clap、00:31:316 這個note也加
   00:31:816 slider tail +clap、 00:32:149 +finish (整段弄好你自己聽聽看差別在哪)
6. 00:47:816 (5)、00:49:150 (5) +clap
7. 還有一些小地方24clap應該算是基本，我建議再多聽聽歌來下音效會好一點

全部改了:<< 我再听一遍自己修一修 感谢公主~

Cyc17- wrote:

[Insane]
整体建议距离稍微拉开一点,虽然爬行感觉不错总觉不够爽orz

1. 00:08:816 (2) - 这个slider换一下方向(?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:22:816 (1) - 这里之后总觉得漏了一拍 打的时候没什么很大的感觉就是了
   四暗刻了一下00:22:983可以加个note填充一下(不加也没啥问题 感觉和后面的3又很奇怪 加了个NC 观望一下
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:29:649 (1,2,3) - 只是一个意见3个slider都做变速逐渐拉长啊!不变速不是咸鱼吗! .....不知道怎么排啊 need示例
4. 01:23:649 (4) - 前面两个短滑条都是方向这个也继续下来怎么样
   
   SPOILER

   

大概这些了,其他没啥了觉得大概就是整体榜面拉开一点类似00:11:650这类节奏拉开段的连打可以塞一点(塞满它!)
>相当精彩的比赛
祝早日rank
没有说的都改了

Flask wrote:

Artist: リリアナシスターズ
Artist Unicode: Liliana Sisters
Title: Lifeる is LOVEる!! (TVサイズ)
Title Unicode: Life-Ru is LOVE-Ru!! (TV Size)
Tags: 姫小路秋子 木戸衣吹 那須原アナスタシア 茅原実里 猿渡銀兵衛春臣 下田麻美 二階堂嵐 喜多村英梨
有一个小问题啊现在还能不能写TV size？ 我确认一下

Blitzfrog wrote:

Heeey~
From my queue:

Insane

00:04:816 (4,5) - Should be closer together orz why
00:22:649 - A hitcircle here will flow better
00:24:149 (1) - Shorten this to 00:24:649 and add HC after it
00:28:983 (4) - Remove this, due to your distance snap as well, it makes it seem like you're mapping to the background music but you're mapping to the vocals
01:26:649 (1,1) - Stack these or move that hitcircle elsewhere, very confusing! :<< i meant to be not stacked...

Easy

00:00:150 (1,2,3) - This looks better imo

00:07:483 (2,3) - Stack these, makes more sense to me
00:08:149 (1) - Shorten this till 00:10:483 and add stuff after it, because the vocal ends here and a new flow starts
01:02:483 - Missing a hitcircle here, breaks flow
01:07:983 (1) - Spinner is too short, replace this with a slider art
01:26:816 (1) - ^ (I can only get 3000 on this, don't think it's suitable for 1 star)

mostly fixed

[C u r i] wrote:

[General]
Add video easy, normal and popner's insane diff

[Easy]
00:04:816 (1,2,3) - stack is not good idea on easy diff. i recommend to fix it
00:21:483 (1,2) - ^
00:55:983 (1,1) - Leave plenty of recovery time, especially after spinners
01:07:983 (1,1) - ^
almost all done

KuroNeko1509 wrote:

Short NM from the queue
It's short because It pretty clean ~ Good luck on ranking o/


[Insane]

• 00:11:650 (4,5,6) - notes 4 and 5 feel a little awkward and create a sensation of not being 1/4 triple, I think you should move them a bit closer together ~ Otherwise it makes it look like its 1/2 so its confusing ~_~
  
  
  00:25:483 (1,2,3) - I think this could be improved~ she starts singing su su meeee at this part ( 00:25:483 (1) - ) so i think thats where your slider should be starting~ make it a reverse slider; delete note 3 and create a new slider here ( 00:25:983 - ) that goes until there ( 00:26:316 - ) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6075040
  
  
  00:29:149 (5) - shouldn't this slider be shaped as the following sliders are? It would make it consistent with ( 01:13:483 (1,2,3,4) - )?
  
  
  01:20:816 (5) - this feels weird to me, I think making it a triple would be better~
  
  
  01:22:983 (2,3) - same here, i think these sliders dont fit so well, I'd suggest making them into jumps, like add a note on white and red lines so that they would be small jumps
  
  
  01:28:066 - I think you should add a spinner here, and make it go until here ( 01:28:983 - )

fixed most points :>

Fycho wrote:

一转眼就3年了
来射点星星

1. 00:04:816 (1,2,3) - Easy就别叠了
2. 00:11:483 (1) - 转盘后得空一小节，所以这个note得删
3. 00:14:816 (1) - 别NC，下一个再NC，然后00:17:483 (1) - 别NC
4. 00:21:483 (1,2) - 别叠
5. 00:41:483 (1,2) - 感觉可以blanket一个
6. 00:46:149 (3) - 变速NC提醒下
7. 00:59:316 (1) - 01:09:983 (1) - 转盘后空4拍
8. 01:13:483 (1) - 间距小了
9. 01:24:149 (4) - 可以blanket下
10. 感觉整个diff的NC都有点乱，要不无脑大白线吧（

1. 00:14:149 (2) - 可以blanket一下
2. 00:28:149 (3) - 可以注意下和前两个的间距
3. 01:17:483 (1,2,3) - 没包好
4. 感觉难度低了点…和Hard的Gap有点大

1. 00:12:983 - 感觉漏了不太好？
2. 01:06:983 (2,3) - Ctrl+G

1. 00:31:483 (2) - 感觉没摆好？
2. 01:13:816 (2,3,4) - 可以摆开些

1. 00:01:150 (5,1) - blanket
2. 00:15:816 (5,1) - 可以摆开些
3. 00:18:983 (2,1) - 这俩不好看（
4. 00:56:316 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 2016了长钝角跳感觉有点不符合时代（
5. 01:04:150 (1) - 没摆到左右对称
6. 两个insane难度太靠近而且太低了……

-[Hikari]- wrote:

啊我来膜摸图了

[Easy]

1. 00:04:816 (1,2,3) - Easy就别叠了 k
2. 00:11:483 (1) - 转盘后得空一小节，所以这个note得删 k
3. 00:14:816 (1) - 别NC，下一个再NC，然后00:17:483 (1) - 别NC
4. 00:21:483 (1,2) - 别叠 k
5. 00:41:483 (1,2) - 感觉可以blanket一个 k
6. 00:46:149 (3) - 变速NC提醒下
7. 00:59:316 (1) - 01:09:983 (1) - 转盘后空4拍 k
8. 01:13:483 (1) - 间距小了 k
9. 01:24:149 (4) - 可以blanket下 k
10. 感觉整个diff的NC都有点乱，要不无脑大白线吧（ 回头理一下

[Normal]

1. 00:14:149 (2) - 可以blanket一下
2. 00:28:149 (3) - 可以注意下和前两个的间距
3. 01:17:483 (1,2,3) - 没包好
4. 感觉难度低了点…和Hard的Gap有点大 显然福老二too guichu
   我先问问美雪姥爷还回不回来改mod

[Hard]

1. 00:12:983 - 感觉漏了不太好？
2. 01:06:983 (2,3) - Ctrl+G

[popner's Insane]

1. 00:31:483 (2) - 感觉没摆好？
2. 01:13:816 (2,3,4) - 可以摆开些

[Insane]

1. 00:01:150 (5,1) - blanket k
2. 00:15:816 (5,1) - 可以摆开些 k
3. 00:18:983 (2,1) - 这俩不好看（ 荣我思考一下
4. 00:56:316 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 2016了长钝角跳感觉有点不符合时代（ ^
5. 01:04:150 (1) - 没摆到左右对称 k
6. 两个insane难度太靠近而且太低了……

先意念回一下摸得 去上电路了 槽 今天怎么没电路课的

1. Minor Picks
   00:33:483 (1) - Blanket issue, you may need to move the next slider for slight adjustment.
   SPOILER

   
   01:26:483 - I think you can actually end the slider here at 01:26:649 to cover the vocal better.

1. Structrual Issue
   00:58:816 - This place feels off. You are trying to cover the drum in this kiai but just left the first and strongest one uncovered. I would suggest adding a note here to cover the strong beat and make it more consistent.

1. Structrual Issue
   AR is quite low and stuffs are showing up together, so I would suggest AR = 7.5.

1. Minor Picks
   01:25:483 (1) - This place the jump suddenly become closer, personally I would try to keep the distance to make it feel even. You may also want to make some minor adjustments on some other objects accordingly.
   SPOILER

   

1. Structrual Issue
   Structure is quite random and need some improvement, some of the hitsound is also not reasonable enough.
   00:21:483 - This part you can make the volume lower to make comparison with latter parts. If you do so, you may want to gradually get more valume on 00:29:649 this part.
   00:30:649 - 00:30:983 - 00:31:316 - To keep consistency with previous sliders, you can still apply clap onto the places.
   00:58:233 - This song's one difficulty is that the clap and vocal is not so fit, so when you only covered claps, and you are actually following the singers, it will feel off. The solution is perhaps adding whistles onto the vocal you are following.
2. Minor Picks
   00:14:150 (3) - Stacking with 00:13:316 (8) - would make it more tidy.
   00:14:650 (1,2,3) - Distance between sliders looks really random. Personally I would suggest making something like this to balance the distance. Tentative solution:
   SPOILER

   
   00:22:149 (3) - This slider can get a better and balanced shape like this:
   SPOILER

   
   00:31:649 (1) - Overlapped and random place to put this slider. You can try to put it on 00:32:816 (3) .
   00:44:983 (3) - Blanket is not perfect here.
   00:49:816 (2,3,4) - This flow is pretty strange to get a sudden change of direction of the slider. Personally I would rather see this kind of flow:
   SPOILER

   
   00:54:150 (3,4) - Need some small adjustments if you want to make a square. But if you are willing to make the flow and overall fitness better, this is what I suggested:
   SPOILER

   
   00:59:650 (6) - I would perfer doing this rather than clustering the two sliders together:
   SPOILER

   
   01:02:150 (3,4,5) - You can have a better blanket.
   01:03:483 (3,4,5) - Talking about the flow, I would rather have this:
   SPOILER

   
   01:04:150 (1,2,3) - Both blankets are not good here. Try this:
   SPOILER

   
   01:18:816 - This should not be a clap considering the background sound. You can use normal-hitnormal or just whistle to emphasize it if you want.
   01:26:316 - This part I think it's good to apply normal-hitnormal on for emphasizing the slider heads and circles. Like this part:00:29:649 .

Atrue wrote:

Yohalo~ 可以顺手求个mu么？ done :>
[General]
See Flask's post for the correct metadata about the title. Offiicial site for the name of the song Also I prefer using the original Japanese Source. I don't know why but there is no "no vidio" version in beatmap page, but for now let's see if it will affect ranking process. gotta change the metadata on weekend otherwise i'd have to redl the map with the poor speed at home ;_;
[Easy]

1. Minor Picks
   00:33:483 (1) - Blanket issue, you may need to move the next slider for slight adjustment.
   SPOILER

   
   01:26:483 - I think you can actually end the slider here at 01:26:649 to cover the vocal better.

[Insane]

1. Structrual Issue
   Structure is quite random and need some improvement, some of the hitsound is also not reasonable enough.
   00:21:483 - This part you can make the volume lower to make comparison with latter parts. If you do so, you may want to gradually get more valume on 00:29:649 this part. yea done
   00:30:649 - 00:30:983 - 00:31:316 - To keep consistency with previous sliders, you can still apply clap onto the places. k
   00:58:233 - This song's one difficulty is that the clap and vocal is not so fit, so when you only covered claps, and you are actually following the singers, it will feel off. The solution is perhaps adding whistles onto the vocal you are following. done now. considering if normalwhistle fits better?
2. Minor Picks
   00:14:150 (3) - Stacking with 00:13:316 (8) - would make it more tidy. k
   00:14:650 (1,2,3) - Distance between sliders looks really random. Personally I would suggest making something like this to balance the distance. Tentative solution:
   SPOILER

   
   k
   00:22:149 (3) - This slider can get a better and balanced shape like this:
   SPOILER

   
   I didn't mean to let it be like this orz it used to have only 2 ticks... perhaps i accidentally add 1 tick without being aware lol
   00:31:649 (1) - Overlapped and random place to put this slider. You can try to put it on 00:32:816 (3) . k
   00:44:983 (3) - Blanket is not perfect here. k
   00:49:816 (2,3,4) - This flow is pretty strange to get a sudden change of direction of the slider. Personally I would rather see this kind of flow:
   SPOILER

   
   k
   00:54:150 (3,4) - Need some small adjustments if you want to make a square. But if you are willing to make the flow and overall fitness better, this is what I suggested:
   SPOILER

   
   k
   00:59:650 (6) - I would perfer doing this rather than clustering the two sliders together:
   SPOILER

   
   01:02:150 (3,4,5) - You can have a better blanket. k
   01:03:483 (3,4,5) - Talking about the flow, I would rather have this:
   SPOILER

   
   k
   01:04:150 (1,2,3) - Both blankets are not good here. Try this:
   SPOILER

   
   k
   01:18:816 - This should not be a clap considering the background sound. You can use normal-hitnormal or just whistle to emphasize it if you want. k
   01:26:316 - This part I think it's good to apply normal-hitnormal on for emphasizing the slider heads and circles. Like this part:00:29:649 . k

Forum PM for any questions related. Thank you!

no actual question but
i didn't mean to have blankets or make squares in some patterns :p
ofc, they might look better so i applied the changes.

About the guest diffs, i'm kinda sure that i can make small changes for flower but i'd ask popner and miyuki if they are still willing to change by themselves orz
福老二根本不理我

Very helpful mod indeed, thanks so much!

Irie Miyuki wrote:

http://puu.sh/rzEjM/cb20cbfa5d.osu

an update, including adjustments of blanket issues

@raririn feel free to change my diff since I probably can't check mods regularly.

rrr好久不见啊aaaaaa这么久的图把我炸出来了

nika mika wrote:

[Easy]
老实说挺想让你remap……节奏和nc都有不少刺 感觉就是老坑的遗留问题，一个个挑能挑好久……

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

1. 00:06:816 (1,2,3) - 这里节奏下的比较有问题，特别是根据前面的密度，这里不如直接拉一根slider 00:06:816 (1) 到00:07:483
2. 00:19:316 (1,2) - 依然节奏感觉有点问题，建议(1)换成Slider 00:19:316 (1) - 00:19:983，(2)换成00:20:483 (2) - 00:20:816
3. 00:21:483 (1) - 拉的不太好看？
4. 00:21:483 (1,2) - 由于DS原因 这挨在一起我觉得是不太好看，不过又不太好去改DS，干脆直接去掉(2)，合并成1个slider
5. 00:23:483 (3) - 按vocal来最好提前1/2开始
6. 00:28:149 (1) - 怎么感觉这个锚点有点问题？
7. 00:32:149 (1,2) - 合并
8. 01:02:816 (3,4,5) - 合并，结尾可在(4)也可在(5)
9. 01:13:483 (1) - 第二个锚点往上抬点比较好看

1. AR+1
2. 00:14:816 (3) - 可以考虑blanket更好一些
3. 01:08:649 (4,5) - 鉴于有连续2个circle在1/2红线上，最好还是做成一个slider更加舒服点，可以以01:07:983 (3) 为基准复制转一个出来
4. 01:26:816 (3,4,5) - 同上，用一个带reverse的slider替代更加贴近normal难度。不过也可以不改，看个人喜好了。

1. AR+1 7实在低了 而且之后diff都是AR9
2. 00:48:816 (4,5,6,7,1) - 个人偏好DS更加小一点(0.9x) 这个DS不太好看imo
3. 01:00:149 (2) - 这里加个note啊 不然很怪
4. 01:02:316 (2) - 这里感觉没跟好vocal会比较突兀 拆开试试

1. 00:20:316 (5) - Ctrl+G显得更加顺滑
2. 01:05:316 (7) - NC
3. 01:08:649 (7) - NC
4. 01:10:649 (5) - 搞个jump会好很多
5. 01:11:983 (1) - ^
6. 00:58:649 (4) - ^
7. 01:01:316 (1) - ^
8. 01:16:149 (7) - 这里我建议ctrl+g，顺便叠的两个circle也一起跟着走。如果这里改的话01:16:483 (8) - 别忘了也ctrl+g。
9. 01:26:816 (4) - 这里NC下比较好吧 突然停止DS 改的话01:26:316 (1) - 这里就可以remove NC了

1. 00:26:649 (8) - 之前的(5)还没有完全消失掉 有点遮挡视线？建议继续往左边移一点
2. 00:44:649 (3,3) - 这俩可能ctrl+g一下给我感觉更好一点
3. 01:08:649 (3) - 这个slider body完全被遮挡了啊 不建议这样 拿出一点能看见的部位比较能接受

1. 00:01:316 - 这里一个vocal没跟
2. 00:21:483 (T) - 0.5x速度也太慢了感觉，0.75x正常点。这一改要改好多
3. 00:43:816 (6) - ctrl+g
4. 01:20:483 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 连续两个triple有点overmap的感觉 改掉一个试试 或者都不要

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from QQ Group
[Easy]

1. 00:06:816 (1,2,3) - 这里节奏下的比较有问题，特别是根据前面的密度，这里不如直接拉一根slider 00:06:816 (1) 到00:07:483
2. 00:19:316 (1,2) - 依然节奏感觉有点问题，建议(1)换成Slider 00:19:316 (1) - 00:19:983，(2)换成00:20:483 (2) - 00:20:816
3. 00:21:483 (1) - 拉的不太好看？
4. 00:21:483 (1,2) - 由于DS原因 这挨在一起我觉得是不太好看，不过又不太好去改DS，干脆直接去掉(2)，合并成1个slider
5. 00:23:483 (3) - 按vocal来最好提前1/2开始
6. 00:28:149 (1) - 怎么感觉这个锚点有点问题？
7. 00:32:149 (1,2) - 合并
8. 01:02:816 (3,4,5) - 合并，结尾可在(4)也可在(5)
9. 01:13:483 (1) - 第二个锚点往上抬点比较好看

E的部分全改了


[Flower's Hard]

1. AR+1 7实在低了 而且之后diff都是AR9 吼的
2. 00:48:816 (4,5,6,7,1) - 个人偏好DS更加小一点(0.9x) 这个DS不太好看imo
3. 01:00:149 (2) - 这里加个note啊 不然很怪
4. 01:02:316 (2) - 这里感觉没跟好vocal会比较突兀 拆开试试

除了那个加note都改了下

[popner's Insane]

1. 00:20:316 (5) - Ctrl+G显得更加顺滑
2. 01:05:316 (7) - NC
3. 01:08:649 (7) - NC
4. 01:10:649 (5) - 搞个jump会好很多
5. 01:11:983 (1) - ^
6. 00:58:649 (4) - ^
7. 01:01:316 (1) - ^
8. 01:16:149 (7) - 这里我建议ctrl+g，顺便叠的两个circle也一起跟着走。如果这里改的话01:16:483 (8) - 别忘了也ctrl+g。
9. 01:26:816 (4) - 这里NC下比较好吧 突然停止DS 改的话01:26:316 (1) - 这里就可以remove NC了

改spacing不知道算不算合理小改动 我再看一下

[Insane]

1. 00:01:316 - 这里一个vocal没跟
2. 00:21:483 (T) - 0.5x速度也太慢了感觉，0.75x正常点。这一改要改好多
3. 00:43:816 (6) - ctrl+g 我都是想怎么简单 鬼畜的都想怎么难
4. 01:20:483 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 连续两个triple有点overmap的感觉 改掉一个试试 或者都不要

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MrSergio wrote:

4 years and only 76 posts? What did you do in the meantime lol