Hi~
Replying the M4M :3
[General]
Looks clean.
You may want to add "eroge" "galgame" to tags (as you added "hentai" lol)
[Easy]
00:01:750 (1) - Remove NC, this still fits being a single combo with the next one.
00:25:943 (1) - Maybe try a blanket?
00:32:137 (1,2) - ^
00:38:330 (1,2,3) - ^
00:47:233 (3) - You're following vocals for previous parts and this looks a bit random as it isn't fitting for vocals and considering you're not too strict in your clap hitsounding, you should try this rhythm <:
00:59:620 (3) - Something similar as above.
01:09:685 (3) - How about making this a 1/1 beat slider with one repeat and putting a circle in 01:10:846, this way it'll match better the music.
01:24:782 (1) - Maybe soften this curve a bit or making a blanket for next slider?
01:49:362 (1) - How about moving this 1/2 beat forward and making it a 1/1 slider, it'll fit better as it'll be following vocals as you're doing since this part.
01:51:491 (1) - You can arrange this slider in a similar way like in the screen, this allow a smoother flow, being more beginner friendly.
01:54:201 (1,2) - I also don't like how this part flows, maybe flipping vertically (2) (Ctrl+J) and fixing the placement would improve it nicely, you may need to rearrange next circles.
02:18:975 (2,1,2) - You could improve this blanketting.
[Normal]
00:00:588 (1) - Maybe soften the curve a bit for this slider?
00:03:491 (3) - You can remove the repeat here and put a circle in 00:04:266, which will fit better with the downbeat there.
00:48:395 (6,1) - I highly suggest you to arrange this in other way, the overlapping looks bad and may be confusing for some players.
01:17:814 (2) - I can think your intention here, but you may want to reverse (Ctrl+G) this and fix the spacing, the way it is now it flows a bit weird.
01:49:556 (1) - Maybe rotate it 180°? The flow will not be that sharpy and better imo.
02:07:362 (4) - Maybe move the beginning around x:4 y:176? This looks a bit odd as it isn't following nicely the curve given by the previous slider.
02:25:169 (4,5) - This overlap looks bad imo, you may want to avoid it.
[merchat7's Hard]
00:01:169 (5) - NC like regenz did in Normal and Insane? I think this combo is quite long.
00:20:911 (2,3) - I'd look out for jumps like these, the intensity in the music is quite simlar for all these part to justify big jumps, making them shorter would be nice.
00:24:588 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd suggest to use a cleaner rhythm here, actual one is too noisy and even if the sliders begin on the instrument I think you tried to follow, I can't find it nice to play. If you do the last, you can split it in circles or sliders, that was just as a reference.
00:39:879 (1,2,3) - I'd replace this with two 3/4 beat sliders, they'll match better the music
00:46:653 (3,4) - I'm expecting more a jump here than in 00:46:072 (2,3), vocals are more intense in the slider beginning than in the circle, like you did in 00:52:266 (2,3,4).
00:47:427 (1,2) - ^Similar as above.
01:21:685 (1,2,3) - I'd replace this with two 3/4 beat sliders, they'll match better the music.
01:35:620 (1,2,3,4,5) - As I mentioned above, this is a bit noisy, though here it feels a bit better, still I'd suggest you to make your rhythm cleaner using 3/4 beat sliders.
01:48:395 (2,3,4) - Here I recommend you to not begin sliders in blue ticks, it's very confusing and maybe frustrating, you should keep your building and use 1/4 sliders with one repeat leaving 1/2 beat between them, like 01:48:008 (1,2).
02:46:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, I highly suggest you to clean your rhythm here, you can achieve a nice one shortening (3) to a 1/4 slider and removing the repeat in (4)
02:51:491 (3,4) - Make these 3/4 beat sliders, the rhythm in the music is the same as in 02:49:943 (1,2) -
[Insane]
Well, I'll only give a general feedback from my feelings about this, I felt some streams really overload the song, you may lower the volume of the hitsounds or use the soft sampleset for them, specially in the part before the first break (00:07:362 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16)). Also I felt the diff quite jumpy and somehow random, I'll just point a few stuff as I don't want to mess too much with this.
00:00:588 (1,2,3) - A regular spacing here would be nice followed by a jump to the next circle.
00:22:846 - A stream would really fit better than just sliders here.
00:31:556 (1) - Remove NC?
00:49:266 (2) - Remove this, fits better as a circle + triple.
01:34:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't recommend to begin slider-streams in a blue tick when the song is strong in white and red ones. But in my opinion, this doesn't even fit with this part, as the music has more emphasis in the beats I put in the screen, maybe you could make something like 00:33:685 (1,2,3,4,5).
01:46:459 (1,2,3,4) - Similar as above.
02:05:620 (4,5) - I was expecting a jump here as the vocals increase the intensity.
Well, that'd be all from my part, I hope it helps, good luck c:
The main reaosn why is that to keep difficulty spread, I need to map this like an Insane (I have slow mapping speed for Insane) and some parts, it's difficult to come up with a simple rhythm.
