Yuuki Aoi - Platinum (Short Ver.) · forum

Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

Joined December 2010

Chewin 2012-12-29T09:57:19+00:00

hi sekai

~General~

Each map is starting on 00:04:025, there is no reason to set an audio lead-in, remove them in each diff
I think slider tick 2 would fit the song best because there are some sounds in the middle of sliders (on the hardest diff) and you can fill them using slider tick 2
I don't know but the current video has lyric that goes off screen: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546943
Still about video.. It ends on 01:22:683.. are you sure that it is whole? I doubt.. or maybe you are using a wrong video offset..
I checked more times the timing and I think you need to add some other red lines after 01:25:976, you can hear by yourself that they are totally off. I have something like:

~kevincela's Easy~

00:07:866 (2) - reduce by 1/2? it fits better
00:24:513 (1) - this slider isn't symmetric (you can notice it in test mode), what about:
SPOILER
```
248,288,24513,6,0,P|296:320|296:368|296:368|340:348|404:360,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
```
00:46:098 (1) - I don't see a reason to use new combo here also because it breaks the symmetry you made between 00:43:537 (1,2,1)
00:59:269 (6) - It touches HP bar, move it some grid down
01:12:074 (2) - I'd use soft whistle on reverse arrow to emphasize that sound
01:16:647 (5) - circle pattern is still going, add finish here as well to keep consistency

~alacat's Normal~

00:36:952 (3) - soft default whistle on the slider head?
00:40:610 (1) - ^ (I would add some of them on this calmer part, but I don't have headphones now so I can't help you with it ç.ç catch me in game if you need some help), like 00:41:525 (3)'s tail for example and so on

~Hard~

00:20:854 (8) - CTRL + G? To make a small jump with the next circle, it also flow better IMO
00:23:232 (2,3) - improve this blanket :\ I don't like how it flows now, I mean: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546912

00:27:988 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would place 00:27:988 (1,2,3,4) in this way using 1,14x spacing getting a smoother flow (I have also fixed next circles placements using 1,14x) :

SPOILER

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00:40:610 (6) - add new combo here removing it from 00:42:257 (1), it looks more logical to set combo in this way according to downbeats
00:47:196 (1) - useless new combo, the rhythm is still the same of 00:46:647 (1), I would remove new combo
00:49:391 (1,2,3) - make this pattern symmetric, it flows really bad atm with this inconsistent spacing:
SPOILER
```
312,352,50122,2,0,P|359:354|385:278,1,140,2|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0
404,204,50671,1,0,0:0:0
```
00:55:244 (5) - ugly, make it more curved to blanket better with 00:54:513 (3)'s tail: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546930

01:20:122 (1,2,3) - the (2)'s curve breaks this flowing part.. what about:

SPOILER

120,248,80122,6,0,P|119:327|185:233,1,280
264,196,81037,2,0,P|288:228|296:276,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,264,81403,2,0,P|360:196|320:136,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

01:22:318 (5,1) - unstack them because this is the only 1/4 slider in the full map with so many sliders and it could easily confuse players
01:23:049 (1,2) - switch new combo according to finish hitsound set on 01:23:415 (2)'s head
01:24:879 (1) - (according to my previous suggestion) remove new combo from here, it's totally useless imo
01:26:555 (3) - this circle is unsnapped, snap it correctly (but read in "general" about those red lines)

~Flask's Insane~

00:30:915 (4) - I'd use new combo according to that jumpy orz pattern
00:37:683 (7) - new combo and remove from 00:38:598 (1) ...
00:39:696 (6) - What about to use this rhythm? It'd fit better with vocal sound:
SPOILER
Mh.. I think that this diff can be still improved, I don't like how it flows at the moment to be honest.

~Hinacle's Insane~

00:09:147 (1,2) - switch new combo?
01:09:696 (1) - finish on the slider head to emphasize the cymbals (whistle + finish would be anyways ok)

..orz

Sekai

6,376 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Sekai 2012-12-29T10:34:19+00:00

Chewin wrote:
hi sekai

~General~

Each map is starting on 00:04:025, there is no reason to set an audio lead-in, remove them in each diff ok~
I think slider tick 2 would fit the song best because there are some sounds in the middle of sliders (on the hardest diff) and you can fill them using slider tick 2 ^
I don't know but the current video has lyric that goes off screen: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546943 it's because of this new widescreen system ><
Still about video.. It ends on 01:22:683.. are you sure that it is whole? I doubt.. or maybe you are using a wrong video offset.. i toke it from DJPop's map. So you should ask him xD
I checked more times the timing and I think you need to add some other red lines after 01:25:976, you can hear by yourself that they are totally off. I have something like: ok done~

~Hard~
00:20:854 (8) - CTRL + G? To make a small jump with the next circle, it also flow better IMO ok~
00:23:232 (2,3) - improve this blanket :\ I don't like how it flows now, I mean: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546912 ^
00:27:988 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would place 00:27:988 (1,2,3,4) in this way using 1,14x spacing getting a smoother flow (I have also fixed next circles placements using 1,14x) : oh!!! i liked it >< thanks Chewin~
SPOILER
172,216,27988,5,0,0:0:0
220,280,28171,1,8,0:0:0
300,284,28354,1,0,0:0:0
352,224,28537,1,2,0:0:0
356,144,28720,1,0,0:0:0
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00:40:610 (6) - add new combo here removing it from 00:42:257 (1), it looks more logical to set combo in this way according to downbeats ok done~
00:47:196 (1) - useless new combo, the rhythm is still the same of 00:46:647 (1), I would remove new combo ^
00:49:391 (1,2,3) - make this pattern symmetric, it flows really bad atm with this inconsistent spacing: Done, thanks :3
SPOILER
312,352,50122,2,0,P|359:354|385:278,1,140,2|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0
404,204,50671,1,0,0:0:0
00:55:244 (5) - ugly, make it more curved to blanket better with 00:54:513 (3)'s tail: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546930 Done~
01:20:122 (1,2,3) - the (2)'s curve breaks this flowing part.. what about: ok done :3
SPOILER
120,248,80122,6,0,P|119:327|185:233,1,280
264,196,81037,2,0,P|288:228|296:276,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,264,81403,2,0,P|360:196|320:136,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:22:318 (5,1) - unstack them because this is the only 1/4 slider in the full map with so many sliders and it could easily confuse players ok ><
01:23:049 (1,2) - switch new combo according to finish hitsound set on 01:23:415 (2)'s head ^
01:24:879 (1) - (according to my previous suggestion) remove new combo from here, it's totally useless imo ^
01:26:555 (3) - this circle is unsnapped, snap it correctly (but read in "general" about those red lines) Fixed~

Thanks Chewin for your helpful mod :3

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,466 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2012-12-29T10:44:18+00:00

All fix from Chewin's mod <3

EDIT: 1111th posts lol

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

2,795 posts

Joined February 2010

-kevincela- 2012-12-29T10:47:35+00:00

Chewin wrote:
~kevincela's Easy~
00:07:866 (2) - reduce by 1/2? it fits better I am following the synthesizer which ends at 00:09:147 - ,and shortening it by 1/2 would be a bit strange for me instead
00:24:513 (1) - this slider isn't symmetric (you can notice it in test mode), what about: Fixed,but adjusted the position just to blanket 00:24:147 (3) - properly
SPOILER
248,288,24513,6,0,P|296:320|296:368|296:368|340:348|404:360,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:46:098 (1) - I don't see a reason to use new combo here also because it breaks the symmetry you made between 00:43:537 (1,2,1) ok
00:59:269 (6) - It touches HP bar, move it some grid down k
01:12:074 (2) - I'd use soft whistle on reverse arrow to emphasize that sound Done
01:16:647 (5) - circle pattern is still going, add finish here as well to keep consistency^

Thanks for the mod

SPOILER

osu file format v11

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Sekai

6,376 posts

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Topic Starter

Sekai 2012-12-29T10:52:16+00:00

updated Kevin and Flask's Diff's :3

Waiting for alacat~

alacat

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Joined May 2011

alacat 2012-12-29T13:27:04+00:00

Chewin wrote:
ya Chewin :3
~alacat's Normal~

00:36:952 (3) - soft default whistle on the slider head? okey. added ~
00:40:610 (1) - ^ (I would add some of them on this calmer part, but I don't have headphones now so I can't help you with it ç.ç catch me in game if you need some help), like 00:41:525 (3)'s tail for example and so on okey. I put some whistles

Thanks Chewin ~

http://puu.sh/1GLIe

Sekai

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Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Sekai 2012-12-29T19:21:53+00:00

updated :3

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2012-12-29T20:24:37+00:00

Looking for this song on Youtube, found out that it comes from "The World God Only Knows" character album. You already have the character's name in the tags, but it might be a good idea to add "The World God Only Knows" to the tags.

Don't kudosu this btw.

Sekai

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Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Sekai 2012-12-29T20:29:35+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Looking for this song on Youtube, found out that it comes from "The World God Only Knows" character album. You already have the character's name in the tags, but it might be a good idea to add "The World God Only Knows" to the tags.

Don't kudosu this btw.

Thanks for checking my map again >< and added it on the tags~

Chewin

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Chewin 2012-12-29T21:25:43+00:00

Inconsistency in uninherited red timing sections, check it carefully with AIBat and call me back.
Moreover, don't forget to resnap the unsnapped green lines.

Sekai

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Topic Starter

Sekai 2012-12-29T21:51:07+00:00

ok Fixed everything now~ :3

Chewin

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Chewin 2012-12-30T00:26:19+00:00

ok

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2012-12-30T01:10:21+00:00

The final part is still messy (and unsnapped) imo, an uninherited point with 150 bpm in 01:25:976 would look better, just saying

I'll take Hinacle's Insane as example

As you have now

If you put the suggested one

Oh, I forgot snap the spinner in the last picture, but I think is enough for understand what I mean. Don't kd this.

SapphireGhost

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SapphireGhost 2012-12-31T07:02:14+00:00

General < here is an .osu containing the correct timing and combo colour suggestions
- Hello! As mentioned above, the last section needs to be correctly timed and snapped on all difficulties.
- First offset should be at 4,025 (start of the song) and not 2,562 (lead-in noise thing).
- From what I've searched, the title is captialized as Platinum and not PLATINUM. Also needs to be checked for the ranked version.
- For such a cheerful song, I'd love to see more than two combo colours.

Hinacle's Insane
01:06:037 (4,5,6,1) - (4) and (1) shouldn't overlap, it looks better.

Flask's Insane
01:24:513 (5,6) - Make (6) into a circle and place it on the white tick, it plays more smoothly.

Hard
00:20:854 (8,1) - Aah, 2.78x jump, it needs to be made smaller.
01:16:647 (5,1) - I feel like something should be filling 01:17:013, because there's action in the music but not in the map.

alacat's Normal
- yay

-kevincela-'s Easy
00:09:879 (3) - I'd put a new combo on this note for the downbeat.
01:18:476 (2,3,1) - The pattern is interesting, but for an Easy difficulty it's confusing to read.

That's it! The mod looked boring, so I added some colour. Anyhow, because you need to fix the timing you'll need a different MAT/BAT to rebubble and then you can poke me again and I'll rank it. Don't let anyone else rank it in the meantime or I'm not going to mod your maps anymore!

Sekai

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Topic Starter

Sekai 2012-12-31T08:51:38+00:00

Thanks SG Fixed everything on my diff :3

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

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-kevincela- 2012-12-31T11:04:50+00:00

SapphireGhost wrote:
-kevincela-'s Easy
00:09:879 (3) - I'd put a new combo on this note for the downbeat. You're right,done
01:18:476 (2,3,1) - The pattern is interesting, but for an Easy difficulty it's confusing to read.I really don't want to change it,it could be confusing but imho this plays really well.

Thanks for the mod!

SPOILER

osu file format v11

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ArtistUnicode:悠木 碧
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Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,466 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2012-12-31T16:38:07+00:00

@SG

01:24:513 (5,6) - Make (6) into a circle and place it on the white tick, it plays more smoothly. nope I think 01:24:787 - has a music sound so just place something, not only white tick

@sekai use my code to update again >: change something

osu file format v11

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TitleUnicode:プラチナ (Short Ver.)
Artist:Yuuki Aoi
ArtistUnicode:悠木 碧
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:Flask's Insane
Source:Card Captor Madoka
Tags:alacat Flask -kevincela- kevincela Hinacle Opening MAD Parody Puella Magi Magica Kaname Sakura Kami Nomi zo Shiru Sekai Aoyama Mio Sakamoto Maaya The World God Only Knows
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76,116,80488,2,0,P|43:109|47:197,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
144,180,81037,2,0,P|228:208,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
92,260,81585,5,0,0:0:0
152,336,81768,1,0,0:0:0
248,352,81951,1,8,0:0:0
336,320,82134,1,0,0:0:0
396,244,82317,2,0,P|440:272,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
356,216,82592,1,0,0:0:0
312,196,82683,1,0,0:0:0
264,192,82774,1,0,0:0:0
216,192,82866,1,0,0:0:0
168,196,82957,1,0,0:0:0
124,208,83049,6,0,P|88:268|120:348,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,280,83598,1,0,0:0:0
280,248,83781,1,8,0:0:0
252,104,83964,2,0,P|280:64|320:56,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
156,120,84512,2,0,P|116:76,2,40,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,160,84787,2,0,P|220:208,1,40,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
208,188,85061,1,0,0:0:0
280,248,85153,1,0,0:0:0
280,248,85244,2,0,P|348:244|408:172,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
296,20,85976,6,0,P|228:24|168:96,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
156,184,86576,2,0,P|152:232|164:276,2,80,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,87176,1,2,0:0:0
256,192,87376,12,0,91776,0:0:0

Sekai

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Sekai 2012-12-31T17:56:45+00:00

updated :3

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-12-31T18:14:09+00:00

Hey ~! Sekai-nyan ~

As per you request ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

01:04:391 - Unsnapped kiai end point.
01:17:561 - I guess #2 kiai time end to here is better.

[Flask's Insane]

01:27:176 - Remove whistle and Add finish,sound much better.

[Hard]

01:26:361 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:26:569 (3) - ^
01:26:751 (4) - Unsnapped slider.
01:27:576 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end point).
00:23:415 (3,5) - Try perfect stack these slider.
00:50:122 (3) - I guess the slider should end to 00:50:488.
01:26:176 - Add a circle,pls don't ignore this vocal.

[alacat's Normal]

01:26:776 (2) - I guess the slider should end to 01:27:176 (don't forgot add finish to end point).

OK ~ Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Sekai

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Sekai 2013-01-01T09:47:01+00:00

Thanks Rika Fixed everything :3

alacat

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alacat 2013-01-01T11:34:21+00:00

Thanks Rika chan :3

fixed

http://puu.sh/1I0lP

Sekai

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Sekai 2013-01-01T11:47:47+00:00

updated alacat's diff :3

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2013-01-02T08:13:48+00:00

Go Go Go! Rank this!

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2013-01-02T09:08:00+00:00

Recheck ~ No kds pls ~

[General]

01:04:391 - Still no fixed unsnapped kiai end point.
About last spinner all diff should change end point to 01:31:976 - .

[Hard]

00:49:391 (1,3) - Make symmetry stuff to here.
01:25:976 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Sekai

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Sekai 2013-01-02T09:18:16+00:00

ok Fixed and done :3

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2013-01-02T09:35:14+00:00

OK ~ Looks fine now ~

Here you go :3

Sekai

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Sekai 2013-01-02T09:37:47+00:00

Thank you moe Rika-chan >w<//

MMzz

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MMzz 2013-01-02T13:55:28+00:00

Hi i like this song

[General]
Shouldn't the title be PLATINUM, all caps? DJPop's ranked version is like that.

[Flask]
01:25:061 (7) - Did this get unstacked? I think it's supposed to be on top of 01:25:153 (8) - lol

[Hard]
00:21:586 (2) - Use a new combo here instead of 00:21:403 (1) - . You should stick to the downbeat since there is no vocal phrase I could see a combo would work on.
00:27:257 (6) - Combo here instead of 00:27:988 (1) - , again to stick on the downbeat. Or you can put the combo on 00:27:440 (8) - to stay more accurate on the downbeat if you don't mind multicolor stacks.

Call me back when this is looked over.

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2013-01-02T15:40:54+00:00

MMzz wrote:
Hi i like this song

[General]
Shouldn't the title be PLATINUM, all caps? DJPop's ranked version is like that.

Tittle is fine,i have check this too.

Also SG want rank this map,pls read his mod :3

Hatori-kun

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Hatori-kun 2013-01-02T19:26:14+00:00

Well according to this: http://vgmdb.net/album/29155, and this: http://kaminomi.jp/cd/index.html#coveralbum (See track 4)
Current title is fine, Artist isn't wrong, but you can put this in romanized artist 青山美生 starring 悠木碧 (Aoyama Mio starring Yuuki Aoi)...
Hope I've been helpful ^^

Sekai

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Sekai 2013-01-02T21:28:08+00:00

Thanks MMzz Fixed everything :3

MMzz

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MMzz 2013-01-02T21:55:31+00:00

Well ok.

SapphireGhost

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SapphireGhost 2013-01-03T07:14:22+00:00

Hard
01:21:952 (4,5,1) : Spacing is messed up here.
01:23:415 (1) - I think this is meant to be a 1/1 slider.

So close. Please double-check everything and then let me know after fixes.

Sekai

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Sekai 2013-01-03T07:29:42+00:00

Thanks SG :3 Fixed them~

SapphireGhost

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SapphireGhost 2013-01-03T19:52:53+00:00

Alright, everything looks great now. (My first rank of 2013!)
I tried to think of an amazing Sakura-themed ranking post but I didn't come up with anything, so I'll just go back to re-watching the series now.

Sekai

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Sekai 2013-01-03T20:00:54+00:00

Thank you once again SG :3

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2013-01-03T20:21:38+00:00

Congrats moe sekai! :3

Chewin