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Yuuki Aoi - Platinum (Short Ver.)

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Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, January 03, 2013 at 10:29:07 AM

Artist: Yuuki Aoi
Title: Platinum (Short Ver.)
Source: Card Captor Madoka
Tags: alacat Flask -kevincela- kevincela Hinacle Opening MAD Parody Puella Magi Magica Kaname Sakura Kami Nomi zo Shiru Sekai Aoyama Mio Sakamoto Maaya The World God Only Knows
BPM: 164
Filesize: 16619kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. alacat's Normal (4.1 stars, 131 notes)
  2. Flask's Insane (4.97 stars, 268 notes)
  3. Hard (4.86 stars, 230 notes)
  4. Hinacle's Insane (5 stars, 308 notes)
  5. -kevincela-'s Easy (2.79 stars, 92 notes)
Download: Yuuki Aoi - Platinum (Short Ver.)
Download: Yuuki Aoi - Platinum (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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o.o hi


Mapset:

  • Easy ------- Done By -kevincela-

    Normal ------ Done By alacat

    Hard ------ Done By me

    Insane ------ Done By Hinacle

    2nd Insane ------ Done By Flask

    Skin ------ Done By me
Enjoy >w<
Last edited by Sekai , edited 53 times in total.
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
nyan :P

http://puu.sh/1sbbu
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
Thanks alacat :3 added your diff~
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,466 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
Puush crashed, osu crashed @))$%(@)%_@)% anyway here's my diff owo Rename my diffname please

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: PLATINUM (Short Ver.) [Sekai-nyan].mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 47927
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 15732
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:PLATINUM (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:PLATINUM (Short Ver.)
Artist:Yuuki Aoi
ArtistUnicode:Yuuki Aoi
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:I dunno how to name a diff
Source:Card Captor Madoka
Tags:alacat Opening MAD Parody Puella Magi Madoka Magica Kaname Madoka Card Captor Sakura Kami Nomi zo Shiru Sekai Aoyama Mio
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,2000,"PLATINUM (Short Ver.).avi"
0,0,"BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,10079,14982
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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312,344,63659,1,8,0:0:0
220,324,63842,1,0,0:0:0
176,308,63933,1,0,0:0:0
132,284,64025,6,0,P|104:256|100:204,1,80
100,120,64391,2,0,P|106:81|134:53,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
232,36,64757,2,0,P|308:24|384:52,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
444,128,65305,1,0,0:0:0
444,128,65397,1,0,0:0:0
444,128,65488,6,0,P|448:176|444:216,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
380,280,65854,2,0,P|304:292|228:264,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,188,66403,1,0,0:0:0
100,120,66586,6,0,P|64:92|20:84,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,188,66952,1,2,0:0:0
100,256,67135,2,0,P|72:292|64:336,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,188,67501,1,2,0:0:0
232,260,67683,2,0,P|268:288|312:296,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,188,68049,1,8,0:0:0
236,120,68232,2,0,P|264:84|272:40,1,80,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
364,28,68598,5,0,0:0:0
364,28,68781,1,8,0:0:0
456,54,68964,2,0,P|400:114|320:110,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
500,140,69879,1,0,0:0:0
500,140,69970,1,0,0:0:0
500,140,70061,1,0,0:0:0
488,236,70244,2,0,P|492:280|472:320,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
436,336,70519,5,0,0:0:0
388,344,70610,1,0,0:0:0
340,348,70702,1,0,0:0:0
292,344,70793,1,0,0:0:0
244,336,70885,1,0,0:0:0
200,320,70976,2,0,P|128:304|92:228,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
188,220,71525,5,0,0:0:0
180,124,71708,2,0,P|252:140|288:216,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
384,232,72257,1,2,0:0:0
464,180,72440,2,8,P|464:116|464:116|484:68|460:20,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,68,72988,1,2,0:0:0
292,24,73171,2,0,P|269:68|289:116|289:116|289:180,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
268,276,73720,1,2,0:0:0
224,360,73903,2,0,P|184:332|172:288,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,256,74177,1,2,0:0:0
148,208,74269,6,0,P|136:136|68:64,2,160,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,240,75183,1,0,0:0:0
320,296,75366,1,0,0:0:0
416,320,75549,5,4,0:0:0
448,64,75915,1,0,0:0:0
192,32,76281,1,0,0:0:0
160,288,76647,1,0,0:0:0
296,192,77013,1,0,0:0:0
256,280,77196,1,0,0:0:0
160,288,77379,1,0,0:0:0
96,216,77561,6,0,P|48:164|36:72,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
116,24,78110,1,0,0:0:0
116,24,78293,1,8,0:0:0
212,20,78476,2,0,P|260:72|272:164,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
296,252,79025,1,8,0:0:0
324,292,79116,1,0,0:0:0
368,312,79208,1,0,0:0:0
464,304,79391,2,0,P|508:280|520:240,1,80
500,120,79757,5,8,0:0:0
456,96,79848,1,2,0:0:0
412,76,79940,1,2,0:0:0
368,60,80031,1,2,0:0:0
320,48,80122,1,2,0:0:0
196,72,80305,1,0,0:0:0
76,116,80488,2,0,P|43:109|47:197,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
144,180,81037,2,0,P|228:208,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
92,260,81586,5,0,0:0:0
152,336,81769,1,0,0:0:0
248,352,81952,1,8,0:0:0
336,320,82135,1,0,0:0:0
396,244,82318,2,0,P|440:272,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
356,216,82592,1,0,0:0:0
312,196,82683,1,0,0:0:0
264,192,82775,1,0,0:0:0
216,192,82866,1,0,0:0:0
168,196,82958,1,0,0:0:0
124,208,83049,6,0,P|88:268|120:348,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,280,83598,1,0,0:0:0
216,192,83781,1,8,0:0:0
252,104,83964,2,0,P|280:64|320:56,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
156,120,84513,2,0,P|116:76,2,40,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
156,120,84787,1,2,0:0:0
156,120,84879,1,8,0:0:0
208,188,85061,1,2,0:0:0
240,224,85153,1,2,0:0:0
280,248,85244,2,0,P|348:244|408:172,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
296,20,85976,6,0,P|228:24|168:96,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
156,184,86525,2,0,P|152:232|164:276,2,80,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
248,160,87074,1,2,0:0:0
248,160,87165,1,2,0:0:0
248,160,87257,1,2,0:0:0
256,192,87440,12,2,91830,0:0:0
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
Thanks Flask for your insane diff :3
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
2,795 posts
Joined February 2010
-kevincela-
Why are you all so fast ;_;
My diff is almost finished,just a little part to be worked on :P
Birdy
5,742 posts
Joined April 2011
Birdy
[-kevincela-'s Easy]
00:24:513 (1) - http://puu.sh/1yvHx (startpoint x:240 y:276) Unsymmetrical and not-so-perfect blanket at the moment
01:00:549 (2) - Middle sliderpoint 1 square up

[Hard]
00:33:842 (2) - x:228 y:240
00:34:208 (3) - x:88 y:220
01:04:025 (6) - Middle sliderpoint 2 squares up looks better IMO, though it's fine now too
01:10:793 (5) - x:252 y:316 (or 01:10:885 (6) - x:264 y:272)
01:21:037 (2) - Slider end 2-3 squares left

[Flask's Insane]
00:46:098 (5) - x:164 y:248 and slider end two squares right
00:54:513 (3,4,5,6,7) - Not liking this design

[Hinacle]
00:34:940 (2) - x:152 y:120
01:20:122 (5) - First sliderpoint one square down

Not really my favourite type of music, but stylish map and fun to play~
Good luck!
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
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Zero__wind
Hey there~ Here an Aoi Yuuki fan comes!
Star before modding!

General
Change the Artist name to Aoi Yuuki for there is already ranked maps of her song such as this-> http://osu.ppy.sh/b/100303

Easy
00:48:842 (2) - the whistle here NG, unlike the previous one
01:04:757 (1) - ^
01:13:537 (3,1) - make them like this or so ? http://puu.sh/1zeAh
move he wistle from 01:14:269 (1) - its head to 01:13:537 (3) - its end
01:20:122 (1) - remove the whistle at its end

Normal
00:28:171 (3,4,5,6) - make them like this? http://puu.sh/1zeH4 (Oh I don't have good idea about the placement here either but just feeling NG for the present one)
00:47:196 (4,5) - finish hitsounds with lower volume instead of whistles?
01:05:854 (1) - make it stack with 01:04:391 (4) - and move 01:06:220 (2) - to (344,260) or so?

Hard
Maybe change HDR for 6 to 5, as it's a Hard diff
00:04:025 (1,2,3) - maybe add another note before the slider to follow the vocal? surely the slider should be shorter
00:06:952 (1,2,3) - ^
01:02:104 (5) - maybe remove this note
01:06:403 (4) - move it to the gap between 01:06:586 (1,3) - and it feels good
01:10:427 (3,4,5,6,7) - make the rhythm here like this is better http://puu.sh/1zeZt
01:15:549 (1) - move it to (376,276) or so
if you change this ^ one (if not then ignore this) you may also change 01:16:281 (3) - stack with 01:15:549 (1) - and 01:16:464 (4) - move to (300,160)or so, avoid making it too difficult
01:23:049 (1) - move the new combo to 01:23:415 (2) - ?

Insane
00:32:196 (1,2) - remove whistles from their ends (the ones on heads remain)
01:24:513 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - whistles here way too many =.= maybe remove some of them or...Oh maybe lower the volume here a bit
01:27:074 (3,4,5) - these whistles also may be removed
This diff I like the best ^_^ I can't even change a thing on placement =.= looking forward to it

Hinacle
maybe you can tell me what does this diff's name mean? =.=
AR9 may not fit this not fast song, turn it back to AR8 and try to increase difficulty on placement maybe
00:33:293 (1) - CTRL+J and move it to (236,364) or so
01:05:488 - the reKIAI here neccessary ? Oh I don't quite understand if fountains are really needed here

Oh I don't know anything more
And maybe you'll mod my Aoi Yuuki song which will be finished recently ?
I'll post in your queue if I finish mapping, fine ?
Star after modding!
Sagisawa-Yukari
216 posts
Joined March 2009
Sagisawa-Yukari


only suggest


-kevincela-'s Easy
change AR 3
00:39:879 (6) - NC
00:40:610 (1) - remove NC
01:25:976 (1) - this is easy diff,Ummm,I think this slider end at 01:27:074 - will better

alacat's Normal
00:07:318 (2,3) - change like this?
SPOILER
00:08:781 (4) - NC
00:09:879 (1) - remove NC
01:25:976 (1,2) - change like this?
SPOILER
If you want to change,01:27:257 (1) - this spinner will begin at 01:27:440 -

Hard
00:17:196 (6) - NC
01:14:269 (5) - NC
01:22:135 (1) - remove NC
01:23:049 (1) - NC at that
01:27:257 (1) - spinner begin at 01:27:440 -

Flask's Insane
00:52:135 (6) - this note move to x:256,y:188
00:59:269 (4,5,6,7) - change Normal hit?
01:24:513 - change like this?
SPOILER

Hinacle
00:38:598 (5) - I think this part don't jump,move to x:76,y:112 is better
00:42:440 (3,1) - stack？
01:10:244 (8) - NC?
01:18:476 (4) - NC?

good song,I like it~moe Sekai~x3
Sagisawa-Yukari
216 posts
Joined March 2009
Sagisawa-Yukari
M4M

my request: p/1970552

and my map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37275

thanks a lot~
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat

Zero__wind wrote:

Normal
00:28:171 (3,4,5,6) - make them like this? http://puu.sh/1zeH4 (Oh I don't have good idea about the placement here either but just feeling NG for the present one)
hmm , i make the flow here ;w;

00:47:196 (4,5) - finish hitsounds with lower volume instead of whistles? mm , to loud imo >_<
01:05:854 (1) - make it stack with 01:04:391 (4) - and move 01:06:220 (2) - to (344,260) or so? I want keep current pattern :o

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:

alacat's Normal
00:07:318 (2,3) - change like this?
SPOILER

no fit imo , there is follow vocal ><
00:08:781 (4) - NC no~ my map is regularly arranged , so I dont add new combo >_<
00:09:879 (1) - remove NC ^
01:25:976 (1,2) - change like this? no change ._.
SPOILER
If you want to change,01:27:257 (1) - this spinner will begin at 01:27:440 -

Thanks modding :3
Zero__wind
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Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
Sorryy for bothering in the thread^_^
and, good luck
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Evil_Twilight
587 posts
Joined July 2010
Evil_Twilight
moe map and bg ♪
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
plz stop posting mod4mod requests in this thread, just send me forum pm if that so~
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy
lol

　

Hinacle


　●　曲調、BPM的にもAR8が合っていると思います！ただもう一つのInsane diffがAR8なので差を付けるためにAR9にしているのならばこのままでもいいと思います・・(個人的にはAR8を推します)
　●　00:28:720 (1) - 00:27:348 (6) - に始端をスタックさせて、スライダーのEnd pointを1grid右?
　●　00:51:403 (3) - 1grid右に移動すると、00:50:854 (1) - のアプローチサークルをうまく包める配置になります。
　●　01:09:696 (7) - NC?　ここだけ少し長くなってしまっているので

　

Flask's Insane


　●　00:27:348 (4) - remove whistle?
　●　00:53:690 (5) - ^
　●　00:07:501 (4) - slider is short. like this? this pattern sounds good here for me.( slider end is 00:07:866 - . spinner start is 00:07:958 - . spinner end is 00:09:879 - )

　●　01:27:074 (3,4,5) - not good rhythm..

　

Hard


　●　01:04:574 (1) - like this rhythm?

　●　01:10:427 (3,4,5,6,7) - here. back music 01:10:427 - 01:10:519 - 01:10:610 - is drum sound. I think that a sound of this place matches very much.

　

alacat's Normal


　●　何もなかったです・・ good diff :3

　

-kevincela-'s Easy


　●　01:25:976 (1) - slider end is 01:27:211 - ? (same as Hinacle's diff)

That's all~ nice mapset!
Good luck ;)
Bless
194 posts
Joined January 2010
Bless
Hi~ moe sekai~ >3</

[General]
Offset +10 is better

[-kevincela-'s Easy]
00:34:757 (3) - it's out screen?
01:25:986 (1) - slider end at 01:27:175(blue line)

[alacat's Normal]
00:04:025 (1) - remove whistle and add finish on slider's start
00:09:330 (5) - add whistle on slider's end
00:38:598 (3) - add whistle on slider's end
00:41:525 (3) - ^
00:42:805 (5) - ^
00:40:244 (6) - add whistle

[Hard]
00:04:025 (1) - add finish
00:15:732 (1) - ^
00:38:049 (6) - remove whistle
00:38:415 (8) - add whistle on slider's arrow
00:40:244 (2) - add whistle on slider's end
00:41:708 (6) - add whistle on slider's arrow
00:43:171 (4) - add whistle on slider's start
00:44:635 (5) - add whistle on slider's end
01:10:519 - add note
01:10:885 (6) - remove note
01:26:718 (3,4,5) - remove, add accurately red line or use this
SPOILER

[Flask's Insane]
00:47:561 (5) - move to x344,y120
01:27:074 (3,4,5) - remove, change to slider
SPOILER

[Hinacle]
it's really nice :3

good luck :)
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Sekai
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Topic Starter
Sekai
Thanks Guy and Bless :3 fixed everything on your mods ~
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined July 2011
Flask
Thanks everyone >w<

http://puu.sh/1AKWx
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya
`A`

[General]
`A`)b

[kevincela's Easy]
  1. 01:20:122 (1)- : last slider point 1 grid to right?
Orz

[alacat's Normal]
  1. 00:20:122 (3)- : shorten this slider to 00:20:488- ? Its more follow the music I think ><
Orz

[Hard]
  1. 00:52:683 (2)- : move 2nd slider point to x184 y76? o3o
Orz

[Flask's Insane]
  1. 00:23:598 (3)- : last slider point 2grid down?
Orz

[Hinacle]
bb`A`)bb

yeay good luck for the rank sekai-nyan ;)
alacat
osu! Alumni
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alacat
Thank you for modding :P

http://puu.sh/1AMMh
Sekai
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Topic Starter
Sekai
updated and thanks tennya for modding =w=/
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
Source lol
I'm a dreamer~

[General]
+tag:Card Captor Sakura Sakamoto Maaya

[Easy]
00:33:293 (1,2,3) - triangle nazi
00:45:366 - sc2 tick plz
01:15:915 (3,4,5) - +whis
01:15:915 - vol-5 ; 01:16:281 - vol-10 ; 01:16:647 - vol-15
01:17:561 - remove whis

[alaneko]
00:09:879 - +fin vol-15
00:46:098 (2,3,4,5) -
00:53:415 (7) - +whis?
00:59:269 - vol-10
01:23:049 - ^

[Hard]
where are hitsounds...?
00:26:708 (5) - whis
00:39:513 - vol-10 ; 00:42:440 - <
00:46:830 - clap vol-15
01:15:915 (2) - vol-15

[Flask]
00:04:940 (5,6) - 不是特别好听
00:09:879 - whis
00:24:330 - remove whis
00:30:366 (3) - vol-5
01:04:025 (1,2) - 曲度不是特别好显得很不连贯
01:27:074 (3) - 一个circle好像够了

[Hinmiracle]
00:13:903 (4) - x,y 380,244
00:23:964 (3) - ctrl+G
00:46:830 - soft-finish vol-5
alacat
osu! Alumni
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alacat

Curisu wrote:

[alaneko]
00:09:879 - +fin vol-15 ok :3
00:46:098 (2,3,4,5) - Nope.
00:53:415 (7) - +whis? ^
00:59:269 - vol-10 nice :3 fixed
01:23:049 - ^ ^

Thank you for modding :P

http://puu.sh/1B6mt
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai

Curisu wrote:

Source lol
I'm a dreamer~

[General]
+tag:Card Captor Sakura Sakamoto Maaya Tagged: Sakamoto Maaya

[Hard]
where are hitsounds...? There is hitsound you just have to listen :3
00:26:708 (5) - whis ok
00:39:513 - vol-10 ; 00:42:440 - < what o.o
00:46:830 - clap vol-15 no, because it'll break my hitsound consistency
01:15:915 (2) - vol-15 ^
Thanks for modding :3 and updated ~
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane
Hi, mod time /o/

[General]

Add a timing section with BPM change to 151 BPM in 01:25:976, as the rhythm clearly goes down, and as you have now, the last notes are out of rhythm.

[-kevincela-'s Easy]
:!: 00:59:269 (6) - This note is a bit covered by the HP bar
Nice diff btw~

No more bad stuff, nice mapset, good luck o/
BeatofIke
4,172 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Moe~ Sekai :3 Mod Request from In-game!

[General]
  1. Starting at 01:25:976, the music is slowing down here. You should probably add some timing sections so it's not offsync with the music.
[-kevincela-'s Easy]
  1. I was just about to suggest that you Disable Letterbox during the breaks, but there are no breaks on this difficulty. :P
  2. Increase HP Drain Rate (+1). HP Drain Rate of 1 looks too easy and almost unfailable!
  3. 00:06:952 (1) - To be consistent with the previous hit circle (which uses the same melody), I think you should consider adding a soft whistle on the head of this slider. You did so at 00:07:866 (2,3).
[alacat's Normal]
  1. Disable Letterbox during breaks since it has a video?
  2. 00:26:159 (4) - Since I can hear the same instrument at the head of this slider, I suggest adding a whistle at the sliderend as well since they both share the same instrument.
  3. 00:35:671 (6) - Consider adding a finish at the end of this slider. You can hear a finish here and the next note.
[Hard]
  1. Disable Letterbox during breaks since it has a video?
  2. 00:04:025 (1,2) - Not really an issue here, but make this pattern less rigid by moving circle 1 (x:124 y:316) and circle 2 (x:84 y:284) to increase flow.
  3. 00:05:854 (6,1) - Feels a bit empty here. For this part, try adding a soft whistle it the end if slider 6 and at the next hit circle to emphasize the melodies.
  4. 00:35:488 (6) - Consider adding a finish at the end of this slider. You can hear a finish here and the next note.
  5. 00:58:171 (1) - Consider removing this finish since you don't hear any finish here. In other words, you are not emphasizing anything in the music.
  6. 00:59:269 (4) - I'm not certain if this was intentional, but you missed a clap here! Consider adding one to be consistent.
  7. 01:04:757 (1) - Same suggestion as above, but this time at the end of this slider.
  8. 00:59:269 (4) - You should add a clap here as well to be consistent with the pecussions.
  9. 01:04:757 (1) - Same suggestion as above, but this time at the end of this slider.
  10. 01:08:049 (2) - I prefer a normal-finish (at a lower volume) at the end of this slider instead of a whistle here to help emphasize the softer finishes.
  11. 01:09:696 (1) - Same suggestion as above, except tht it's a hit circle.
  12. 01:12:440 (4) - Replace this soft-whistle with the clap (or add the clap+whislte) to be consistent with the precussion. If you want to keep the whislte, at least add one at the end of the slider at 01:15:001 (7) to be consistent.
  13. 01:15:549 (1,2) - No need to spam the finishes, you could just add one at circle 1 and add a clap (removing the finish) at circle 2.
  14. 01:16:647 (5) - Remove the clap at the end of this slider and add the clap at the head of the slider instead. It sounds better and more consistent with the music.
[Flask's Insane]
  1. Disable Letterbox during breaks since it has a video?
    00:04:025 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you should readjust the rhythm here. Try adding 3 hit circles and a 1/1 reverse slider. Here is an example:
  2. 00:04:574 (4) - I think you should just add a hit circle here instead of a mini-slider, because it helps emphasize the vocals better.
  3. 00:04:940 (5) - This sliderend is offbeat and does not emphase anything. You should replace that slider with a 1/1 slider (ending it at 00:05:305) instead so it's onbeat again. Don't forget to add a soft-whistle back at the sliderend afterwards. Also, add the whislte at the head of the slider as well so it's consistent with the slider at 00:07:501 (4).
  4. 00:05:671 (1) - It's not really necessary to emphasize the echos if the melodies (only emphasize the most prominent melodies), so conslder removing this whistle here.
  5. 00:25:976 (1) - The piano starts here (at the slider end), so why not add a whistle here to help emphaszie the piano?
  6. 00:26:891 (3) - Remove the whistle at the end of this slider since it's there is no piano to emphasize.
    01:27:440 (1) - Remove the whistle at this spinner since it's not emphasizing anything.
Very solid map indeed! Good Luck with you map!
Kuria
1,390 posts
Joined May 2011
Kuria


[General]
fine :D

[-kevincela's Easy]
more like a normal with less object to me, whatever xD
  1. eeeh AR4 on easy? i think its quite hard for a beginner to follow, just turn it down by 1 :D
  2. 00:21:586 (1) - make this S slider a bit smooth? i think it would be better if you dont use the redpoin on the central of this slider here, so just form a normal S slider
  3. 00:38:598 (4) - actually im prefer this to be on the left side for a better flow on 00:37:683 (3,4,5) - , but looks like you're intended to make it stacked, so it's up to you wo consider this or not :D
  4. 00:43:537 (1) - fix the blanket here, imo 92,348 is pretty good here
  5. 00:50:854 (1,2) - not really sure but i feel quite awkward with this pattern, although the flow is nice already, maybe because they're a fixed slider since most slider on this diff are a curved slider >_<.
    just my preference but i think it's better to make them a curved slider too
  6. 00:58:903 (5,6) - why not move the (5) to 00:58:720 - and make (6) into slider from 00:59:086 - 00:59:452 - instead? the beats are definitely better like that imo :D
  7. 01:03:476 (2,3,1) - fix'd this blanket, please make it more smooth like what you did on 01:01:830 (4,1) - :D
  8. 01:06:586 (3) - move this up? it seems that (3) and (1) are almost toucch/overlap each other there
[alacat's Normal]
  1. HP drain -1?
  2. 00:05:854 (4) - move this upright a bit? i feel the movement arent quite straight from 00:04:940 (3,4) -
  3. 00:07:318 (2,3,4) - same as above, since one of them is straight and one isn't (im talking about 00:07:318 (2,3) - and 00:07:866 (3,4) - ) , im prefer if you make them all straight or a bit curved :), although it doesnt affect the flow at all, but the looks is definitely good that way
  4. 00:17:196 (4) - more curved for this S? :D
  5. 00:34:025 (3) - make this slider curved? better flow from 00:33:659 (2,3,4) - imo
    SPOILER
  6. 00:35:671 (6) - same as above, why7 not make this small slider curved to down too? :D better flow from 00:35:671 (6,1) -
  7. 00:42:805 (5) - curved? :D
  8. 00:55:244 (3) - move this up a bit? i think the flow is better that way, just make it looks straight from 00:54:879 (2,3,1) - (but seems you want to make a triangle from 00:53:781 (1,2,3) - , so just consider this part)
  9. 00:58:720 - i think the beats will be better if you add this spot with note and then move the 00:58:903 (4) - 1/2 beat apart, to 00:59:086 (5) - :D
[Hard]
  1. OD 5 here?
  2. 00:59:086 (5) - make this note position to the right instead left, besides for a better flow, youre also did the same on 00:05:488 (4,5,6) - and imo that one's flow is better than this :D
  3. 00:07:135 (2) - make this down a bit?
  4. 00:16:464 (4,6) - the flow is a bit too sharp here imo, i prefer if you make the (6) to right a bit instead, like this
    SPOILER
  5. 00:17:744 (7,8,9) - again just my opinion, but looking on this patternflow, i think it will be better if you either move (8) to downpart (which is impossible lol) or make (9) goes to up instead down direction (i prefer change the (9) though, because it can also forms a better flow on 00:18:293 (9,1) -
    SPOILER
  6. 00:22:318 (5) - left a bit, doesnt seems straight enough from 00:22:135 (4,5) - for me xD
  7. 00:23:232 (2,3) - make them more blanket? you can do it by adding one more point on (3) slider and make that slider more curved, but if you agree to fix this, then you need to fx the latter pattern too
  8. 00:25:061 (8) - why not make this notes to upright instead? forming a curved notes pattern :D
    SPOILER
  9. 00:25:244 (1,2,3) - ugh, tbh im not really like the pattern direction here, why not move the (2,3) upper a bit? for a better flow and pattern direction? :D
    SPOILER
  10. 00:42:257 (1,2,3,4) - fix this pattern, doesnt seems symmetrical enough imo
  11. 00:48:476 (2,3) - why overlapped? D:
  12. 00:51:952 (5,2) - fix the blanket here, make it like what you did on 00:51:952 (5,1) -
  13. 00:53:232 (3,4) - same here too, just move the (4) down a bit
  14. 00:54:330 (2,3) - fix'd the blanket hee too Q_Q
  15. 00:55:244 (5,6,7,9) - doesnt looks good enough imo, why you make it into something like this instead? :D
    SPOILER
  16. 00:59:635 (1) - fix the curve here, just make it like 01:00:366 (3) - for a better looks lol
  17. 01:01:098 (1) - rotate 10% clockwise and move it down a bit here, better flow imo :D
    SPOILER
  18. 01:02:927 (2) - bad flow imo, i prefer if you make this lider to the right direction than left by move the central pinpoint to right instead left :D
    SPOILER
  19. 01:04:574 (7,1) - make them more symmetry?
  20. 01:04:757 (1,2,3) - make them like this? better flow
    SPOILER
    you need to fix the latter pattern too if you fix these part
  21. 01:08:049 (2) - move this up a bit (with 01:08:598 (3,4) - too if you dont wanna fix many stuff on the latter part) for a better flow from 01:07:318 (3,1,2) -
    SPOILER
  22. 01:13:354 (2,3) - make them straight pls XD
  23. 01:13:537 (3,4,5) - also make them more symmetry, it looks a bit messed currently imo
  24. 01:16:647 (5) - move the endpoint to left a bit?
  25. 01:18:293 (5) - make the slider direction to left instead right? for a betterflow ofc :D
  26. 01:21:037 (2,4) - fix the banket here
  27. 01:23:781 (4,5,1,2,3) - :D?
    SPOILER

[Flask's Insane]
  1. 00:04:940 (5) - move this down? it seems the pattern direction from 00:04:574 (4,5) - looks "cutted" lol
  2. 00:05:854 (2) - make it more curved? just like 00:07:501 (4) -
  3. 00:30:366 (3) - move this to left a bit? to make a better flow from 00:29:818 (2,3) -
  4. 01:10:976 (6) - move the central point on this slider up a bit, better flow from the streams to this slider imo
  5. 01:14:269 (1,2) - dont really like the flow here, i prefer if you make the direction more smotth by moving the (2) left a bit (or just stack it on 01:13:903 (8) - end) and then make a curved notes pattern from 01:15:183 (2,3,1) - , something like this
    SPOILER
[Hinacle]
  1. AR-1? Q~Q, since the song is calm and the bpm isnt so fast too, i think use lower AR will be better
  2. 00:34:940 (2) - move this left a bit, to form a more symmetrical position between 00:34:574 (1,2,3) -
    SPOILER
    fix the latter pattern too if you agree with this xD
  3. 01:04:208 (4,5) - make this straight by move the (5) endpoint left a bit? better looks and not changing flow much imo XD
  4. 01:06:769 (1) - move this upleft a bit, beside for a better flow from 01:06:586 (6,1) - , the startpoint is also overlapped a bit by the 01:06:037 (4) -
  5. 01:08:415 (3,4) - reduce the curved for this two a bit? i feel better with the flow that way xD
    SPOILER
  6. 01:25:610 (8,2) - make them more blanket, something like this
    SPOILER
uuu my cheeck is still hurts T__T
gl sekai~
alacat
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3,872 posts
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alacat

BeatofIke wrote:

　BeatofIke :3
[alacat's Normal]
  1. Disable Letterbox during breaks since it has a video? same as sekai diff :3
  2. 00:26:159 (4) - Since I can hear the same instrument at the head of this slider, I suggest adding a whistle at the sliderend as well since they both share the same instrument. yes! I have already added it >.<
  3. 00:35:671 (6) - Consider adding a finish at the end of this slider. You can hear a finish here and the next note. ok!

Kuria wrote:

yo Kuria :3
[alacat's Normal]
  1. HP drain -1? ok
  2. 00:05:854 (4) - move this upright a bit? i feel the movement arent quite straight from 00:04:940 (3,4) - fixed.
  3. 00:07:318 (2,3,4) - same as above, since one of them is straight and one isn't (im talking about 00:07:318 (2,3) - and 00:07:866 (3,4) - ) , im prefer if you make them all straight or a bit curved :), although it doesnt affect the flow at all, but the looks is definitely good that way same above
  4. 00:17:196 (4) - more curved for this S? :D yay :3
  5. 00:34:025 (3) - make this slider curved? better flow from 00:33:659 (2,3,4) - imo
    SPOILER
    ok~
  6. 00:35:671 (6) - same as above, why7 not make this small slider curved to down too? :D better flow from 00:35:671 (6,1) - Nope ><
  7. 00:42:805 (5) - curved? :D ok~
  8. 00:55:244 (3) - move this up a bit? i think the flow is better that way, just make it looks straight from 00:54:879 (2,3,1) - (but seems you want to make a triangle from 00:53:781 (1,2,3) - , so just consider this part) Nope , I made triangle here !
  9. 00:58:720 - i think the beats will be better if you add this spot with note and then move the 00:58:903 (4) - 1/2 beat apart, to 00:59:086 (5) - :D
    hmm , I want to put a sound to here >_<00:55:244 (3) -
Thank you for modding :P

http://puu.sh/1BSOd
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
ok Thanks for your helpful mod you guys xD fixed everything on your mods~

and updated~ owo/

EDIT: updated Hinacle's diff :3
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
#modreqs

little things...

[General]
00:09:879~00:15:732 - put object
01:27:440 (1) - same to hinacle's diff spinner

[kevincela]
01:18:476 (2,3,1) - little hard for easy diff

aochaaaaaaaaaaaaaan
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,466 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
BeatofIke

BeatofIke wrote:

[Flask's Insane]

  • 00:04:025 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you should readjust the rhythm here. Try adding 3 hit circles and a 1/1 reverse slider. Here is an example: sorry I want to keep mine D:
  1. 00:04:574 (4) - I think you should just add a hit circle here instead of a mini-slider, because it helps emphasize the vocals better. As I said above
  2. 00:04:940 (5) - This sliderend is offbeat and does not emphase anything. You should replace that slider with a 1/1 slider (ending it at 00:05:305) instead so it's onbeat again. Don't forget to add a soft-whistle back at the sliderend afterwards. Also, add the whislte at the head of the slider as well so it's consistent with the slider at 00:07:501 (4).okay D:
  3. 00:05:671 (1) - It's not really necessary to emphasize the echos if the melodies (only emphasize the most prominent melodies), so conslder removing this whistle here.
  4. 00:25:976 (1) - The piano starts here (at the slider end), so why not add a whistle here to help emphaszie the piano?
  5. 00:26:891 (3) - Remove the whistle at the end of this slider since it's there is no piano to emphasize.
    01:27:440 (1) - Remove the whistle at this spinner since it's not emphasizing anything.
泡泡

Curisu wrote:

[Flask]
00:04:940 (5,6) - 不是特别好听 先keep有人吐槽在說
00:09:879 - whis 好像不錯
00:24:330 - remove whis k
00:30:366 (3) - vol-5 有差嗎
01:04:025 (1,2) - 曲度不是特别好显得很不连贯 我覺得還好 貌似ˊ_ˋ
01:27:074 (3) - 一个circle好像够了 恩
Kuria

Kuria wrote:

[Flask's Insane]
  1. 00:04:940 (5) - move this down? it seems the pattern direction from 00:04:574 (4,5) - looks "cutted" lol uh I like this flow :3 k
  2. 00:05:854 (2) - make it more curved? just like 00:07:501 (4) - k
  3. 00:30:366 (3) - move this to left a bit? to make a better flow from 00:29:818 (2,3) - it's better but I want to overlap this by 00:28:903 (6) - 's end :v
  4. 01:10:976 (6) - move the central point on this slider up a bit, better flow from the streams to this slider imo ~
  5. 01:14:269 (1,2) - dont really like the flow here, i prefer if you make the direction more smotth by moving the (2) left a bit (or just stack it on 01:13:903 (8) - end) and then make a curved notes pattern from 01:15:183 (2,3,1) - , something like this fix anyway~
    SPOILER

http://puu.sh/1CjcU
thanks \:D/
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
updated :3
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined October 2010
Pereira006
Hi!! here my mod

imo -> my opinion
Also when you read " ? " that mean just suggestion you can ignore if you not like but if without " ? " that really high suggestion pleasse use you mind is important fix or not but is for you decission

[-kevincela-'s Easy]

Hitsound:

  1. 00:04:025 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The custom S you will listen the body slider when you play like ZZZZZZ try S to S:C1 like this http://puu.sh/1CN1V if you do that will be most better because this song is relax
  2. 00:16:098 (2) - I feel this need add clap in end slider because there is drums like you did after at 00:20:122 (3,1,2) that sense lot so better add clap in end slider if you keep it consistency IMO
  3. 00:17:561 (3) - ^ same
  4. 00:17:561 (3) - Also when you test play and hit that slider repeat you will listen the song on body slider like "ZZZZZZ" that ugly listen and this song is relax so just do that S to S.C1 like this http://puu.sh/1CMYp if you do that the song body slider will disapear that will most better because this song is relax
  5. 00:25:976 (3) - ^ same Again body slider ZZZZZ is ugly when i listen this song relax
  6. 00:34:757 (3) - ^ same
  7. 00:38:964 (5) - ^ again just this timing 00:38:232 change S to S:C1 will better lot
  8. 00:40:610 (1) - ^ same
  9. 00:43:537 (1,2) - ^ same just this timing 00:44:086 change S to S:C1
  10. 01:01:464 (T) - why this timing is too low ? increassing vol at 70% like you did before

good stuff but my problem i don't like is song body slider pls if you don't get it my eng ask me in-game because my eng is suck

Gameplay:

stuff cool

[alacat's Normal]

hitsound:

  1. 00:19:391 (2) - you forget add whistle with clap if you keep it consistency like you did before
  2. 00:28:171 (3) - add whislte in end slider? i guess you forget add whistle if you keep it consistency
  3. 00:40:244 (6) - add whistle is same happened at 00:19:391 (2)
  4. 00:42:805 (5) - add whistle in end slider same happened before because i feel this have drum + melody like you did before
  5. 01:23:049 (6) - can add whistle? will be fit because here only melody IMO
stuff cool

Gameplay:

stuff cool

[hard]

hitsound:

  1. 00:04:025 (T) - this timing need change S to S:C1 because when you test play you will listen the song body slider like ZZZZZ that is ugly like what happened in diff's -kevinceli- this song is relax also can do you change vol to 60% or 50% ? is better lot
  2. 00:15:732 (T) - can you do this vol low to 60% or 50%? is better lot because 80% is boring hear
  3. 00:26:708 (5) - why here whistle ? is not fit follow you consistency remove this whistle in end slider ?
  4. 00:35:488 (6) - missing add clap in start slider if you keep it consistency
  5. 00:47:927 (1) - add finish in start slider :( is fit lot IMO
stuff cool

Gameplay:

  1. 00:05:488 (4,5,6) - i don't like this part when i test play i feel this broke flow try this part http://puu.sh/1CO4W and fix spacing at 00:06:952 (1,2,3) this will be good flow IMO if you don't like my part try remap this part with good flow
  2. 00:23:415 (3) - Can be good blanket with 00:23:232 (2) ? if you fix this you need fix spacing at 00:23:964 (4,5,6,7,8)
  3. 00:25:244 (1,2) - i can see is inconsistency spacing
  4. 00:44:818 (6,1) - move to x:376 y:88 look good to gameplay imo because will be nice blanket with 00:44:452 (5) and 00:45:732 (3)
  5. 00:48:842 (3) - try nice blanket with 00:48:476 (2) if fix this you need fix spacing after
  6. 00:54:513 (3) - move to x:244 y:240 and 00:55:061 (4,5) - move to x:380 y:340 and fix spacing at 00:55:793 (6,7) will be good blanket and flow IMO
  7. 01:12:805 (1) - not good align with 01:14:269 (5)
stuff cool

[Flask's Insane]

hitsound:

  1. 00:04:025 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4) - again song body slider is same happened diff kevinceli and sekai you just do everthing timing this part (00:04:025 at
  2. 00:07:866) change S to S:C1 will be good IMO because this song is relax
good hitsound but too many song body slider example 00:24:147 (4), 00:25:976 (1,2,3,4,1), 00:43:171 (2,3,4,5,1) and many more you better check this hitsound S to S:C1 pleasse because this song is relax and will be better lot without song body slider like "ZZZZZZ"

Gameplay:

  1. 00:49:391 (1,2,3) - try be nice blanket
stuff cool, nice diff

[Hinacle]

Nothing problem I check many time, nothing problem really , good diff
[]
good gameplay but my problem is hitsound only -kevinceli-'s easy,hard and Flask's Insane the song body slider is bad with this relax song
that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand because my eng is suck so pleasse ask me in-game i will try explain better
Good luck ! and bye bye!
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
Thanks Pereira for modding =w= fixed everything on my diff ~
alacat
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alacat

Pereira006 wrote:

[alacat's Normal]

hitsound:

  1. 00:19:391 (2) - you forget add whistle with clap if you keep it consistency like you did before I put sound with constant rhythm >.< whistle and clap ~
  2. 00:28:171 (3) - add whislte in end slider? i guess you forget add whistle if you keep it consistency ^
  3. 00:40:244 (6) - add whistle is same happened at 00:19:391 (2) ^
  4. 00:42:805 (5) - add whistle in end slider same happened before because i feel this have drum + melody like you did before ^
  5. 01:23:049 (6) - can add whistle? will be fit because here only melody IMO added :3
stuff cool

Gameplay:

stuff cool

Thank you for modding :oops:

http://puu.sh/1Dj3h
Sekai
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Topic Starter
Sekai
updated :3
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez
;)

General
Nadaa.

-kevincela-'s Easy
AR is pretty damn high for an easy.... and its the same as normal. Set it to 3 please
00:57:440 (3,4) - This type of arrangement could be difficult for most easy players. Remove 4 and change 3 into a repeating slider with the repeat coming at 00:57:988. http://puu.sh/1C4uZ

alacat's Normal
00:47:196 (4,5) - This 1/2 stack right after a 1/4 stack could throw some off (did for me when I first played through it :/) Remove the stack and just stick with 1/4 stacks throughout this map please.
01:26:708 (2) - Add a repeat to this final slider so it goes with the piano there.

Hard
00:04:391 (3) - Slider really doesn't fit as it is. Add a circle at 00:04:391 and make the slider go from 00:04:574 to 00:05:112
00:07:318 (3) - Same this as above.
00:38:232 (7,8) - Goes better if it were the slider first then the hit circle.
00:41:159 (5,6) - Same as above
00:39:513 (2) - Suggest you follow the background music a bit more. Try something like this http://puu.sh/1DLwz
00:42:440 (2) - Same as above
00:46:647 (1) - This pause after the slider isn't needed and ruins the momentum leading towards the kiai time. Add a repeat to it and it solves everything.
00:57:988 (5,1,2) - Sorry but this part here is really poorly mapped. With the sudden slider ending on the blue tick and every part not following anything in that part of the song. Doing something like this is better: http://puu.sh/1DLLS
01:02:013 (4,5,6) - Stack these please.
01:06:403 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Again a poorly mapped section. Every slider seems to be off.
  • 01:06:586 (1,2) - Remove 2, move the slider to 01:06:769, and add a hit circle at 01:06:586
    01:07:318 (3,1) - Same^
    01:08:049 (2,3) - ^
    01:08:781 (4,1) - ^
    01:21:403 (3,4) - Remove 3 and make 4 start where 3 use to be
01:22:135 (1) - Add 2 more repeats

Flask's Insane
00:19:391 (3) - Watch out this repeat is pretty much hidden.

Hinacle
Nice diff :O

Good madset here sekai :) would advise that you get more mods though especially for hard.

Good luck!!
Sekai
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Topic Starter
Sekai
Thanks Weez for your helpful mod :3 fixed everything~
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
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Joined February 2010
-kevincela-
SPOILER
osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: PLATINUM (Short Ver.) [Sekai-nyan].mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 47927
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 15732
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:PLATINUM (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:プラチナ (Short Ver.)
Artist:Yuuki Aoi
ArtistUnicode:悠木 碧
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:-kevincela-'s Easy
Source:Card Captor Madoka
Tags:alacat Flask -kevincela- kevincela Hinacle Opening MAD Parody Puella Magi Magica Kaname Sakura Kami Nomi zo Shiru Sekai Aoyama Mio Sakamoto Maaya
BeatmapID:194057
BeatmapSetID:65981

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,2000,"PLATINUM (Short Ver.).avi"
0,0,"BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,10079,14292
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
updated :3
Mythol
1,420 posts
Joined March 2011
Mythol
request from Flask~

[General]
I think you need a new red line for this part 01:25:976 ._.
but I can't help you.. i suck with red lines :<

[Easy]
01:04:757 (1) - Maybe like this? because I want to hear a finish on 01:05:488
01:27:440 (1) - Lower or mute the spinner volume
Really nice Easy

[Normal]
perfect o^^

[Hard]
01:17:561 (3) - Finish
01:18:476 - I wanna hear some kind of beat here ;_;
01:23:415 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This part doesn't follow anything. Try this rhythm~


[Insane]
00:21:586 (1,2,3) - You should make this symmetric if you're going to use a pattern like this
00:37:683 (7) - NC here and remove it on 00:38:598 (1)
00:47:104 - Missing a note here
01:18:293 (3) - I'd prefer soft whistle over clap here

[Hinacle]
You should change it to "Hinacle's Insane" before some XAT member starts yelling at you :P

great mapset ^^/
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
Thanks Mythol for your helpful mod :3

Fixed everything on my diff~
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat

Weez wrote:

alacat's Normal
00:47:196 (4,5) - This 1/2 stack right after a 1/4 stack could throw some off (did for me when I first played through it :/) Remove the stack and just stick with 1/4 stacks throughout this map please. 　 mm ~ no problem >.<
01:26:708 (2) - Add a repeat to this final slider so it goes with the piano there. Nope.

Mythol wrote:

[Normal]
perfect o^^ <3
Thank you for modding :oops:
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Kiddo-Kun
Yo.


[Flask's Insane]

• 01:24:513 (5,6,7) - Stacking 1/4 notes under a 1/4 slider like this is a really bad idea. The flow is awful and it does not play well. I suggest unstacking and changing the two notes into a short slider?Like this.
• 01:27:440 (1) - Silence the end of this spinner, it works well with the fading of the music.

[Hard]

• 00:42:257 (1) - In my opinion, stacking this note on top of the slider instead of under (8) plays better.
• 01:22:135 (1) - I don't really like this at all. It does not match with the music at all and does not play well either. It would be better if we reduced the slider so that it starts on 01:22:501 and ends at 01:22:866, then fill the space with a note on 01:21:952 - and 01:22:318 -. Like this.
• 01:26:342 (2,3,4) - These notes are not placed on the time line correctly and does not fit the music. (3) and (4) actually start on 1/12 notes. (3) should be on 01:26:555 - and (4) should start on 01:26:738 - and go on until 01:26:951 -. I suggest putting a repeat on (4) to match the music even better. Like this.
01:27:257 (1) - Silence the end of this spinner, it works well with the fading of the music.

[alacat's Normal]

• 01:02:561 (1) - I know this may not seem like a big deal, but this is asymmetrical and it actually is pretty noticeable in gameplay.
• 01:26:708 (2) - Extend this slider to the blue tick to match the music better. (01:26:982 - )

[-kevincela-'s Easy]

*One of the better Easy difficulties I've modded. Good work!

• 01:27:439 (1) - Silence the end of this spinner, it works well with the fading of the music.

Looks good. Just tiny things I think you should tweak. Holla at me when you've looked over these.
Last edited by Kiddo-Kun , edited 1 time in total.
Snowy Dream
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Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
  1. Red - Important or Issue
  2. Blue - You'd better fix them
  3. Black - Normal Suggestions
[General]
Fine!

[-kevincela-'s Easy]
00:56:708 (1) - Make this look better just like others.
01:04:391 (3) - Something as above, you may do better on this part.
01:25:976 (1) - :< Why this slider ends at here? It should end at 01:27:165 instead.


[alacat's Normal]
00:44:818 - Try adding a note here? It is ok if you dont do that.
00:46:281 (3) - If I were you, I may choose to end this at 00:46:64, then add a note at 00:47:013.



[Hard]
Unsnapped things
01:26:555 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:26:738 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:26:738 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).

00:04:574 (4) - hmm..It sounds better if you could end this slider at 00:04:940.
00:07:501 (4) - As above.
00:08:415 (1) - What about using whistle instead of finish?
00:15:732 (1,2,3) - Also..what about this? It might sound better imo.
00:19:391 (3,4,5) - orz..Try this please.
00:21:586 (2,3) - Merge these two notes into one slider.
00:50:854 (1,2,3) - Try this rhythm :3
00:55:793 (6,7,8) - Merge these 3 circles into one slider.


[Flask's Insane]
00:39:879 - It should be something here since the vocal. Not just a slider.
01:09:970 (5) - hmm? Remove this ?
01:24:787 (6,7) - Remove these plz, you could extend the previous slider here instead.
01:27:074 (3) - It should not be here..May be 1/4 later.


[Hinacle's Insane]
00:45:001 (1) - The vocal "me~" from here, so try merging (1,2) into one slider.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Wonderful Mapset ! :3
Good Luck Sekai-chan ;)
alacat
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alacat

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[alacat's Normal]

• 01:02:561 (1) - I know this may not seem like a big deal, but this is asymmetrical and it actually is pretty noticeable in gameplay. okey. I moved 1 gird left o.o!
• 01:26:708 (2) - Extend this slider to the blue tick to match the music better. (01:26:982 - ) okey.

Snowy Dream wrote:

[alacat's Normal]
00:44:818 - Try adding a note here? It is ok if you dont do that. mm ~ I follow vocal here >_<
00:46:281 (3) - If I were you, I may choose to end this at 00:46:64, then add a note at 00:47:013. yes , you're right. but I think your sugguetion is hard to take a little.

Thank you for modding :oops:

http://puu.sh/1FXkG
Sekai
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Topic Starter
Sekai

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Hard]
Unsnapped things
01:26:555 (3) - Unsnapped circle. They all snapped at/12 so that's why ><
01:26:738 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:26:738 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).

00:04:574 (4) - hmm..It sounds better if you could end this slider at 00:04:940. No, i think it's follows the vocal better like this ><
00:07:501 (4) - As above.^
00:08:415 (1) - What about using whistle instead of finish? ok~
00:15:732 (1,2,3) - Also..what about this? It might sound better imo. No, i liked my rhythm better ~
00:19:391 (3,4,5) - orz..Try this please. ^
00:21:586 (2,3) - Merge these two notes into one slider. No, Notes are better since this a hard orz~
00:50:854 (1,2,3) - Try this rhythm :3 ^
00:55:793 (6,7,8) - Merge these 3 circles into one slider.^
Thanks Snowy for your mod :3

and fixed everything on Kiddo's mod~

and updated alacat's diff ~
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
@v@ That's ok, yours is also great enough.
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
CDFA likes to be lazy.

Overall:
This video tho, it's weird how it just cuts out in the middle. If it's not going the full length, and it's impossible to go the full length, it might be better to not include it.
This BG was used in another Madoka map and it's fine and it's a cool BG but it's like that's one of my favorite maps so looking at this is like "ok lol"
These hitsounds are right but damn this song and its trying to be creative.

Hinacle:
00:12:074 (1) - NC
00:29:452 (3) - Overall the entire map is jumpy, but this one stands out to me for some reason. Try this, maybe? NOTE: Rough sketch. I'm not a wizard with sliders or anything. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546066

That other insane:
00:37:683 (7) - For a diff that isn't jumpy, this is a really random jump that can be easily fixed.
00:46:098 (5) - Add snare hitsample
00:50:854 (1) - Add finish
01:25:976 (1,2,3) - These notes are off. Use Hinacle's diff as a reference to where these should be placed, or re-time this section

Hard:
00:40:610 (6) - Add snare hitsample
00:47:561 (2) - Remove NC
00:50:854 (1) - Add finish
01:26:738 (4) - This slider is off time

Normal:
Seems very 1/1, but it's fine

Easy:
00:58:903 (5,6) - Sightreading this, I got tripped up by this, because it deviates from the lyrics which have been followed for most of the song. Maybe make a slider to follow the lyrics?

yay
Sekai
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Sekai
Thanks CDFA Fixed everything but 01:26:738 (4) because it's snapped at 1/12 ;w; that's why~
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