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[General]
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[kevincela's Easy]
Orz
[alacat's Normal]
Orz
[Hard]
Orz
[Flask's Insane]
Orz
[Hinacle]
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yeay good luck for the rank sekai-nyan
[General]
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[kevincela's Easy]
- 01:20:122 (1)- : last slider point 1 grid to right?
[alacat's Normal]
- 00:20:122 (3)- : shorten this slider to 00:20:488- ? Its more follow the music I think ><
[Hard]
- 00:52:683 (2)- : move 2nd slider point to x184 y76? o3o
[Flask's Insane]
- 00:23:598 (3)- : last slider point 2grid down?
[Hinacle]
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yeay good luck for the rank sekai-nyan
Topic Starter
updated and thanks tennya for modding =w=/
Source lol
I'm a dreamer~
[General]
+tag:Card Captor Sakura Sakamoto Maaya
[Easy]
00:33:293 (1,2,3) - triangle nazi
00:45:366 - sc2 tick plz
01:15:915 (3,4,5) - +whis
01:15:915 - vol-5 ; 01:16:281 - vol-10 ; 01:16:647 - vol-15
01:17:561 - remove whis
[alaneko]
00:09:879 - +fin vol-15
00:46:098 (2,3,4,5) -
00:53:415 (7) - +whis?
00:59:269 - vol-10
01:23:049 - ^
[Hard]
where are hitsounds...?
00:26:708 (5) - whis
00:39:513 - vol-10 ; 00:42:440 - <
00:46:830 - clap vol-15
01:15:915 (2) - vol-15
[Flask]
00:04:940 (5,6) - 不是特别好听
00:09:879 - whis
00:24:330 - remove whis
00:30:366 (3) - vol-5
01:04:025 (1,2) - 曲度不是特别好显得很不连贯
01:27:074 (3) - 一个circle好像够了
[Hinmiracle]
00:13:903 (4) - x,y 380,244
00:23:964 (3) - ctrl+G
00:46:830 - soft-finish vol-5
I'm a dreamer~
[General]
+tag:Card Captor Sakura Sakamoto Maaya
[Easy]
00:33:293 (1,2,3) - triangle nazi
00:45:366 - sc2 tick plz
01:15:915 (3,4,5) - +whis
01:15:915 - vol-5 ; 01:16:281 - vol-10 ; 01:16:647 - vol-15
01:17:561 - remove whis
[alaneko]
00:09:879 - +fin vol-15
00:46:098 (2,3,4,5) -
00:53:415 (7) - +whis?
00:59:269 - vol-10
01:23:049 - ^
[Hard]
where are hitsounds...?
00:26:708 (5) - whis
00:39:513 - vol-10 ; 00:42:440 - <
00:46:830 - clap vol-15
01:15:915 (2) - vol-15
[Flask]
00:04:940 (5,6) - 不是特别好听
00:09:879 - whis
00:24:330 - remove whis
00:30:366 (3) - vol-5
01:04:025 (1,2) - 曲度不是特别好显得很不连贯
01:27:074 (3) - 一个circle好像够了
[Hin
00:13:903 (4) - x,y 380,244
00:23:964 (3) - ctrl+G
00:46:830 - soft-finish vol-5
Curisu wrote:
[alaneko]
00:09:879 - +fin vol-15 ok :3
00:46:098 (2,3,4,5) -
00:53:415 (7) - +whis? ^
00:59:269 - vol-10 nice :3 fixed
01:23:049 - ^ ^
Thank you for modding
http://puu.sh/1B6mt
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding :3 and updated ~Curisu wrote:
Source lol
I'm a dreamer~
[General]
+tag:Card Captor Sakura Sakamoto Maaya Tagged: Sakamoto Maaya
[Hard]
where are hitsounds...? There is hitsound you just have to listen :3
00:26:708 (5) - whis ok
00:39:513 - vol-10 ; 00:42:440 - < what o.o
00:46:830 - clap vol-15 no, because it'll break my hitsound consistency
01:15:915 (2) - vol-15 ^
Hi, mod time /o/
[General]
Add a timing section with BPM change to 151 BPM in 01:25:976, as the rhythm clearly goes down, and as you have now, the last notes are out of rhythm.
[-kevincela-'s Easy]
00:59:269 (6) - This note is a bit covered by the HP bar
Nice diff btw~
No more bad stuff, nice mapset, good luck o/
[General]
Add a timing section with BPM change to 151 BPM in 01:25:976, as the rhythm clearly goes down, and as you have now, the last notes are out of rhythm.
[-kevincela-'s Easy]
00:59:269 (6) - This note is a bit covered by the HP barNice diff btw~
No more bad stuff, nice mapset, good luck o/
Moe~ Sekai :3 Mod Request from In-game!
[General]
[General]
- Starting at 01:25:976, the music is slowing down here. You should probably add some timing sections so it's not offsync with the music.
- I was just about to suggest that you Disable Letterbox during the breaks, but there are no breaks on this difficulty.
- Increase HP Drain Rate (+1). HP Drain Rate of 1 looks too easy and almost unfailable!
- 00:06:952 (1) - To be consistent with the previous hit circle (which uses the same melody), I think you should consider adding a soft whistle on the head of this slider. You did so at 00:07:866 (2,3).
- Disable Letterbox during breaks since it has a video?
- 00:26:159 (4) - Since I can hear the same instrument at the head of this slider, I suggest adding a whistle at the sliderend as well since they both share the same instrument.
- 00:35:671 (6) - Consider adding a finish at the end of this slider. You can hear a finish here and the next note.
- Disable Letterbox during breaks since it has a video?
- 00:04:025 (1,2) - Not really an issue here, but make this pattern less rigid by moving circle 1 (x:124 y:316) and circle 2 (x:84 y:284) to increase flow.
- 00:05:854 (6,1) - Feels a bit empty here. For this part, try adding a soft whistle it the end if slider 6 and at the next hit circle to emphasize the melodies.
- 00:35:488 (6) - Consider adding a finish at the end of this slider. You can hear a finish here and the next note.
- 00:58:171 (1) - Consider removing this finish since you don't hear any finish here. In other words, you are not emphasizing anything in the music.
- 00:59:269 (4) - I'm not certain if this was intentional, but you missed a clap here! Consider adding one to be consistent.
- 01:04:757 (1) - Same suggestion as above, but this time at the end of this slider.
- 00:59:269 (4) - You should add a clap here as well to be consistent with the pecussions.
- 01:04:757 (1) - Same suggestion as above, but this time at the end of this slider.
- 01:08:049 (2) - I prefer a normal-finish (at a lower volume) at the end of this slider instead of a whistle here to help emphasize the softer finishes.
- 01:09:696 (1) - Same suggestion as above, except tht it's a hit circle.
- 01:12:440 (4) - Replace this soft-whistle with the clap (or add the clap+whislte) to be consistent with the precussion. If you want to keep the whislte, at least add one at the end of the slider at 01:15:001 (7) to be consistent.
- 01:15:549 (1,2) - No need to spam the finishes, you could just add one at circle 1 and add a clap (removing the finish) at circle 2.
- 01:16:647 (5) - Remove the clap at the end of this slider and add the clap at the head of the slider instead. It sounds better and more consistent with the music.
- Disable Letterbox during breaks since it has a video?
00:04:025 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you should readjust the rhythm here. Try adding 3 hit circles and a 1/1 reverse slider. Here is an example: - 00:04:574 (4) - I think you should just add a hit circle here instead of a mini-slider, because it helps emphasize the vocals better.
- 00:04:940 (5) - This sliderend is offbeat and does not emphase anything. You should replace that slider with a 1/1 slider (ending it at 00:05:305) instead so it's onbeat again. Don't forget to add a soft-whistle back at the sliderend afterwards. Also, add the whislte at the head of the slider as well so it's consistent with the slider at 00:07:501 (4).
- 00:05:671 (1) - It's not really necessary to emphasize the echos if the melodies (only emphasize the most prominent melodies), so conslder removing this whistle here.
- 00:25:976 (1) - The piano starts here (at the slider end), so why not add a whistle here to help emphaszie the piano?
- 00:26:891 (3) - Remove the whistle at the end of this slider since it's there is no piano to emphasize.
01:27:440 (1) - Remove the whistle at this spinner since it's not emphasizing anything.
[General]
fine
[-kevincela's Easy]
more like a normal with less object to me, whatever xD
- eeeh AR4 on easy? i think its quite hard for a beginner to follow, just turn it down by 1
- 00:21:586 (1) - make this S slider a bit smooth? i think it would be better if you dont use the redpoin on the central of this slider here, so just form a normal S slider
- 00:38:598 (4) - actually im prefer this to be on the left side for a better flow on 00:37:683 (3,4,5) - , but looks like you're intended to make it stacked, so it's up to you wo consider this or not
- 00:43:537 (1) - fix the blanket here, imo 92,348 is pretty good here
- 00:50:854 (1,2) - not really sure but i feel quite awkward with this pattern, although the flow is nice already, maybe because they're a fixed slider since most slider on this diff are a curved slider >_<.
just my preference but i think it's better to make them a curved slider too - 00:58:903 (5,6) - why not move the (5) to 00:58:720 - and make (6) into slider from 00:59:086 - 00:59:452 - instead? the beats are definitely better like that imo
- 01:03:476 (2,3,1) - fix'd this blanket, please make it more smooth like what you did on 01:01:830 (4,1) -
- 01:06:586 (3) - move this up? it seems that (3) and (1) are almost toucch/overlap each other there
- HP drain -1?
- 00:05:854 (4) - move this upright a bit? i feel the movement arent quite straight from 00:04:940 (3,4) -
- 00:07:318 (2,3,4) - same as above, since one of them is straight and one isn't (im talking about 00:07:318 (2,3) - and 00:07:866 (3,4) - ) , im prefer if you make them all straight or a bit curved
, although it doesnt affect the flow at all, but the looks is definitely good that way - 00:17:196 (4) - more curved for this S?
- 00:34:025 (3) - make this slider curved? better flow from 00:33:659 (2,3,4) - imo
- 00:35:671 (6) - same as above, why7 not make this small slider curved to down too? better flow from 00:35:671 (6,1) -
- 00:42:805 (5) - curved?
- 00:55:244 (3) - move this up a bit? i think the flow is better that way, just make it looks straight from 00:54:879 (2,3,1) - (but seems you want to make a triangle from 00:53:781 (1,2,3) - , so just consider this part)
- 00:58:720 - i think the beats will be better if you add this spot with note and then move the 00:58:903 (4) - 1/2 beat apart, to 00:59:086 (5) -
- OD 5 here?
- 00:59:086 (5) - make this note position to the right instead left, besides for a better flow, youre also did the same on 00:05:488 (4,5,6) - and imo that one's flow is better than this
- 00:07:135 (2) - make this down a bit?
- 00:16:464 (4,6) - the flow is a bit too sharp here imo, i prefer if you make the (6) to right a bit instead, like this
- 00:17:744 (7,8,9) - again just my opinion, but looking on this patternflow, i think it will be better if you either move (8) to downpart (which is impossible lol) or make (9) goes to up instead down direction (i prefer change the (9) though, because it can also forms a better flow on 00:18:293 (9,1) -
- 00:22:318 (5) - left a bit, doesnt seems straight enough from 00:22:135 (4,5) - for me xD
- 00:23:232 (2,3) - make them more blanket? you can do it by adding one more point on (3) slider and make that slider more curved, but if you agree to fix this, then you need to fx the latter pattern too
- 00:25:061 (8) - why not make this notes to upright instead? forming a curved notes pattern
- 00:25:244 (1,2,3) - ugh, tbh im not really like the pattern direction here, why not move the (2,3) upper a bit? for a better flow and pattern direction?
- 00:42:257 (1,2,3,4) - fix this pattern, doesnt seems symmetrical enough imo
- 00:48:476 (2,3) - why overlapped? D:
- 00:51:952 (5,2) - fix the blanket here, make it like what you did on 00:51:952 (5,1) -
- 00:53:232 (3,4) - same here too, just move the (4) down a bit
- 00:54:330 (2,3) - fix'd the blanket hee too Q_Q
- 00:55:244 (5,6,7,9) - doesnt looks good enough imo, why you make it into something like this instead?
- 00:59:635 (1) - fix the curve here, just make it like 01:00:366 (3) - for a better looks lol
- 01:01:098 (1) - rotate 10% clockwise and move it down a bit here, better flow imo
- 01:02:927 (2) - bad flow imo, i prefer if you make this lider to the right direction than left by move the central pinpoint to right instead left
- 01:04:574 (7,1) - make them more symmetry?
- 01:04:757 (1,2,3) - make them like this? better flow
you need to fix the latter pattern too if you fix these part - 01:08:049 (2) - move this up a bit (with 01:08:598 (3,4) - too if you dont wanna fix many stuff on the latter part) for a better flow from 01:07:318 (3,1,2) -
- 01:13:354 (2,3) - make them straight pls XD
- 01:13:537 (3,4,5) - also make them more symmetry, it looks a bit messed currently imo
- 01:16:647 (5) - move the endpoint to left a bit?
- 01:18:293 (5) - make the slider direction to left instead right? for a betterflow ofc
- 01:21:037 (2,4) - fix the banket here
- 01:23:781 (4,5,1,2,3) - ?
- 00:04:940 (5) - move this down? it seems the pattern direction from 00:04:574 (4,5) - looks "cutted" lol
- 00:05:854 (2) - make it more curved? just like 00:07:501 (4) -
- 00:30:366 (3) - move this to left a bit? to make a better flow from 00:29:818 (2,3) -
- 01:10:976 (6) - move the central point on this slider up a bit, better flow from the streams to this slider imo
- 01:14:269 (1,2) - dont really like the flow here, i prefer if you make the direction more smotth by moving the (2) left a bit (or just stack it on 01:13:903 (8) - end) and then make a curved notes pattern from 01:15:183 (2,3,1) - , something like this
- AR-1? Q~Q, since the song is calm and the bpm isnt so fast too, i think use lower AR will be better
- 00:34:940 (2) - move this left a bit, to form a more symmetrical position between 00:34:574 (1,2,3) -
fix the latter pattern too if you agree with this xD - 01:04:208 (4,5) - make this straight by move the (5) endpoint left a bit? better looks and not changing flow much imo XD
- 01:06:769 (1) - move this upleft a bit, beside for a better flow from 01:06:586 (6,1) - , the startpoint is also overlapped a bit by the 01:06:037 (4) -
- 01:08:415 (3,4) - reduce the curved for this two a bit? i feel better with the flow that way xD
- 01:25:610 (8,2) - make them more blanket, something like this
gl sekai~
BeatofIke wrote:
BeatofIke :3
[alacat's Normal]
- Disable Letterbox during breaks since it has a video? same as sekai diff :3
- 00:26:159 (4) - Since I can hear the same instrument at the head of this slider, I suggest adding a whistle at the sliderend as well since they both share the same instrument. yes! I have already added it >.<
- 00:35:671 (6) - Consider adding a finish at the end of this slider. You can hear a finish here and the next note. ok!
Kuria wrote:
yo Kuria :3
[alacat's Normal]
- HP drain -1? ok
- 00:05:854 (4) - move this upright a bit? i feel the movement arent quite straight from 00:04:940 (3,4) - fixed.
- 00:07:318 (2,3,4) - same as above, since one of them is straight and one isn't (im talking about 00:07:318 (2,3) - and 00:07:866 (3,4) - ) , im prefer if you make them all straight or a bit curved
- 00:17:196 (4) - more curved for this S?
- 00:34:025 (3) - make this slider curved? better flow from 00:33:659 (2,3,4) - imo
ok~- 00:35:671 (6) - same as above, why7 not make this small slider curved to down too?
- 00:42:805 (5) - curved?
- 00:55:244 (3) - move this up a bit? i think the flow is better that way, just make it looks straight from 00:54:879 (2,3,1) - (but seems you want to make a triangle from 00:53:781 (1,2,3) - , so just consider this part) Nope , I made triangle here !
- 00:58:720 - i think the beats will be better if you add this spot with note and then move the 00:58:903 (4) - 1/2 beat apart, to 00:59:086 (5) -
hmm , I want to put a sound to here >_<00:55:244 (3) -
http://puu.sh/1BSOd
Topic Starter
ok Thanks for your helpful mod you guys xD fixed everything on your mods~
and updated~ owo/
EDIT: updated Hinacle's diff :3
and updated~ owo/
EDIT: updated Hinacle's diff :3
#modreqs
little things...
[General]
00:09:879~00:15:732 - put object
01:27:440 (1) - same to hinacle's diff spinner
[kevincela]
01:18:476 (2,3,1) - little hard for easy diff
aochaaaaaaaaaaaaaan
little things...
[General]
00:09:879~00:15:732 - put object
01:27:440 (1) - same to hinacle's diff spinner
[kevincela]
01:18:476 (2,3,1) - little hard for easy diff
BeatofIke
BeatofIke wrote:
[Flask's Insane]
00:04:025 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you should readjust the rhythm here. Try adding 3 hit circles and a 1/1 reverse slider. Here is an example: sorry I want to keep mine D:
- 00:04:574 (4) - I think you should just add a hit circle here instead of a mini-slider, because it helps emphasize the vocals better. As I said above
- 00:04:940 (5) - This sliderend is offbeat and does not emphase anything. You should replace that slider with a 1/1 slider (ending it at 00:05:305) instead so it's onbeat again. Don't forget to add a soft-whistle back at the sliderend afterwards. Also, add the whislte at the head of the slider as well so it's consistent with the slider at 00:07:501 (4).okay D:
- 00:05:671 (1) - It's not really necessary to emphasize the echos if the melodies (only emphasize the most prominent melodies), so conslder removing this whistle here.
- 00:25:976 (1) - The piano starts here (at the slider end), so why not add a whistle here to help emphaszie the piano?
- 00:26:891 (3) - Remove the whistle at the end of this slider since it's there is no piano to emphasize.
01:27:440 (1) - Remove the whistle at this spinner since it's not emphasizing anything.
泡泡
Curisu wrote:
[Flask]
00:04:940 (5,6) - 不是特别好听 先keep有人吐槽在說
00:09:879 - whis 好像不錯
00:24:330 - remove whis k
00:30:366 (3) - vol-5有差嗎
01:04:025 (1,2) - 曲度不是特别好显得很不连贯 我覺得還好 貌似ˊ_ˋ
01:27:074 (3) - 一个circle好像够了 恩
Kuria
Kuria wrote:
[Flask's Insane]
- 00:04:940 (5) - move this down? it seems the pattern direction from 00:04:574 (4,5) - looks "cutted" lol uh I like this flow :3 k
- 00:05:854 (2) - make it more curved? just like 00:07:501 (4) - k
- 00:30:366 (3) - move this to left a bit? to make a better flow from 00:29:818 (2,3) - it's better but I want to overlap this by 00:28:903 (6) - 's end :v
- 01:10:976 (6) - move the central point on this slider up a bit, better flow from the streams to this slider imo ~
- 01:14:269 (1,2) - dont really like the flow here, i prefer if you make the direction more smotth by moving the (2) left a bit (or just stack it on 01:13:903 (8) - end) and then make a curved notes pattern from 01:15:183 (2,3,1) - , something like this fix anyway~
http://puu.sh/1CjcU
thanks \:D/
Topic Starter
updated :3
Hi!! here my mod
imo -> my opinion
Also when you read " ? " that mean just suggestion you can ignore if you not like but if without " ? " that really high suggestion pleasse use you mind is important fix or not but is for you decission
[-kevincela-'s Easy]
Hitsound:
good stuff but my problem i don't like is song body slider pls if you don't get it my eng ask me in-game because my eng is suck
Gameplay:
stuff cool
[alacat's Normal]
hitsound:
Gameplay:
stuff cool
[hard]
hitsound:
Gameplay:
[Flask's Insane]
hitsound:
Gameplay:
[Hinacle]
Nothing problem I check many time, nothing problem really , good diff
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good gameplay but my problem is hitsound only -kevinceli-'s easy,hard and Flask's Insane the song body slider is bad with this relax song
that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand because my eng is suck so pleasse ask me in-game i will try explain better
Good luck ! and bye bye!
imo -> my opinion
Also when you read " ? " that mean just suggestion you can ignore if you not like but if without " ? " that really high suggestion pleasse use you mind is important fix or not but is for you decission
[-kevincela-'s Easy]
Hitsound:
- 00:04:025 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The custom S you will listen the body slider when you play like ZZZZZZ try S to S:C1 like this http://puu.sh/1CN1V if you do that will be most better because this song is relax
- 00:16:098 (2) - I feel this need add clap in end slider because there is drums like you did after at 00:20:122 (3,1,2) that sense lot so better add clap in end slider if you keep it consistency IMO
- 00:17:561 (3) - ^ same
- 00:17:561 (3) - Also when you test play and hit that slider repeat you will listen the song on body slider like "ZZZZZZ" that ugly listen and this song is relax so just do that S to S.C1 like this http://puu.sh/1CMYp if you do that the song body slider will disapear that will most better because this song is relax
- 00:25:976 (3) - ^ same Again body slider ZZZZZ is ugly when i listen this song relax
- 00:34:757 (3) - ^ same
- 00:38:964 (5) - ^ again just this timing 00:38:232 change S to S:C1 will better lot
- 00:40:610 (1) - ^ same
- 00:43:537 (1,2) - ^ same just this timing 00:44:086 change S to S:C1
- 01:01:464 (T) - why this timing is too low ? increassing vol at 70% like you did before
good stuff but my problem i don't like is song body slider pls if you don't get it my eng ask me in-game because my eng is suck
Gameplay:
stuff cool
[alacat's Normal]
hitsound:
- 00:19:391 (2) - you forget add whistle with clap if you keep it consistency like you did before
- 00:28:171 (3) - add whislte in end slider? i guess you forget add whistle if you keep it consistency
- 00:40:244 (6) - add whistle is same happened at 00:19:391 (2)
- 00:42:805 (5) - add whistle in end slider same happened before because i feel this have drum + melody like you did before
- 01:23:049 (6) - can add whistle? will be fit because here only melody IMO
Gameplay:
stuff cool
[hard]
hitsound:
- 00:04:025 (T) - this timing need change S to S:C1 because when you test play you will listen the song body slider like ZZZZZ that is ugly like what happened in diff's -kevinceli- this song is relax also can do you change vol to 60% or 50% ? is better lot
- 00:15:732 (T) - can you do this vol low to 60% or 50%? is better lot because 80% is boring hear
- 00:26:708 (5) - why here whistle ? is not fit follow you consistency remove this whistle in end slider ?
- 00:35:488 (6) - missing add clap in start slider if you keep it consistency
- 00:47:927 (1) - add finish in start slider
is fit lot IMO
Gameplay:
- 00:05:488 (4,5,6) - i don't like this part when i test play i feel this broke flow try this part http://puu.sh/1CO4W and fix spacing at 00:06:952 (1,2,3) this will be good flow IMO if you don't like my part try remap this part with good flow
- 00:23:415 (3) - Can be good blanket with 00:23:232 (2) ? if you fix this you need fix spacing at 00:23:964 (4,5,6,7,8)
- 00:25:244 (1,2) - i can see is inconsistency spacing
- 00:44:818 (6,1) - move to x:376 y:88 look good to gameplay imo because will be nice blanket with 00:44:452 (5) and 00:45:732 (3)
- 00:48:842 (3) - try nice blanket with 00:48:476 (2) if fix this you need fix spacing after
- 00:54:513 (3) - move to x:244 y:240 and 00:55:061 (4,5) - move to x:380 y:340 and fix spacing at 00:55:793 (6,7) will be good blanket and flow IMO
- 01:12:805 (1) - not good align with 01:14:269 (5)
[Flask's Insane]
hitsound:
- 00:04:025 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4) - again song body slider is same happened diff kevinceli and sekai you just do everthing timing this part (00:04:025 at
- 00:07:866) change S to S:C1 will be good IMO because this song is relax
Gameplay:
- 00:49:391 (1,2,3) - try be nice blanket
[Hinacle]
Nothing problem I check many time, nothing problem really , good diff
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good gameplay but my problem is hitsound only -kevinceli-'s easy,hard and Flask's Insane the song body slider is bad with this relax song
that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand because my eng is suck so pleasse ask me in-game i will try explain better
Good luck ! and bye bye!
Topic Starter
Thanks Pereira for modding =w= fixed everything on my diff ~
Pereira006 wrote:
[alacat's Normal]
hitsound:stuff cool
- 00:19:391 (2) - you forget add whistle with clap if you keep it consistency like you did before I put sound with constant rhythm >.< whistle and clap ~
- 00:28:171 (3) - add whislte in end slider? i guess you forget add whistle if you keep it consistency ^
- 00:40:244 (6) - add whistle is same happened at 00:19:391 (2) ^
- 00:42:805 (5) - add whistle in end slider same happened before because i feel this have drum + melody like you did before ^
- 01:23:049 (6) - can add whistle? will be fit because here only melody IMO added :3
Gameplay:
stuff cool
Thank you for modding
http://puu.sh/1Dj3h
Topic Starter
updated :3
General
Nadaa.
-kevincela-'s Easy
AR is pretty damn high for an easy.... and its the same as normal. Set it to 3 please
00:57:440 (3,4) - This type of arrangement could be difficult for most easy players. Remove 4 and change 3 into a repeating slider with the repeat coming at 00:57:988. http://puu.sh/1C4uZ
alacat's Normal
00:47:196 (4,5) - This 1/2 stack right after a 1/4 stack could throw some off (did for me when I first played through it :/) Remove the stack and just stick with 1/4 stacks throughout this map please.
01:26:708 (2) - Add a repeat to this final slider so it goes with the piano there.
Hard
00:04:391 (3) - Slider really doesn't fit as it is. Add a circle at 00:04:391 and make the slider go from 00:04:574 to 00:05:112
00:07:318 (3) - Same this as above.
00:38:232 (7,8) - Goes better if it were the slider first then the hit circle.
00:41:159 (5,6) - Same as above
00:39:513 (2) - Suggest you follow the background music a bit more. Try something like this http://puu.sh/1DLwz
00:42:440 (2) - Same as above
00:46:647 (1) - This pause after the slider isn't needed and ruins the momentum leading towards the kiai time. Add a repeat to it and it solves everything.
00:57:988 (5,1,2) - Sorry but this part here is really poorly mapped. With the sudden slider ending on the blue tick and every part not following anything in that part of the song. Doing something like this is better: http://puu.sh/1DLLS
01:02:013 (4,5,6) - Stack these please.
01:06:403 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Again a poorly mapped section. Every slider seems to be off.
- 01:06:586 (1,2) - Remove 2, move the slider to 01:06:769, and add a hit circle at 01:06:586
01:07:318 (3,1) - Same^
01:08:049 (2,3) - ^
01:08:781 (4,1) - ^
01:21:403 (3,4) - Remove 3 and make 4 start where 3 use to be
Flask's Insane
00:19:391 (3) - Watch out this repeat is pretty much hidden.
Hinacle
Nice diff :O
Good madset here sekai
would advise that you get more mods though especially for hard. Good luck!!
Topic Starter
Thanks Weez for your helpful mod :3 fixed everything~
SPOILER
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Artist:Yuuki Aoi
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Creator:Sekai-nyan
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Tags:alacat Flask -kevincela- kevincela Hinacle Opening MAD Parody Puella Magi Magica Kaname Sakura Kami Nomi zo Shiru Sekai Aoyama Mio Sakamoto Maaya
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Topic Starter
updated :3
request from Flask~
[General]
I think you need a new red line for this part 01:25:976 ._.
but I can't help you.. i suck with red lines :<
[Easy]
01:04:757 (1) - Maybe like this?
because I want to hear a finish on 01:05:488
01:27:440 (1) - Lower or mute the spinner volume
Really nice Easy
[Normal]
perfect o^^
[Hard]
01:17:561 (3) - Finish
01:18:476 - I wanna hear some kind of beat here ;_;
01:23:415 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This part doesn't follow anything. Try this rhythm~
[Insane]
00:21:586 (1,2,3) - You should make this symmetric if you're going to use a pattern like this
00:37:683 (7) - NC here and remove it on 00:38:598 (1)
00:47:104 - Missing a note here
01:18:293 (3) - I'd prefer soft whistle over clap here
[Hinacle]
You should change it to "Hinacle's Insane" before some XAT member starts yelling at you
great mapset ^^/
[General]
I think you need a new red line for this part 01:25:976 ._.
but I can't help you.. i suck with red lines :<
[Easy]
01:04:757 (1) - Maybe like this?
01:27:440 (1) - Lower or mute the spinner volume
Really nice Easy
[Normal]
perfect o^^
[Hard]
01:17:561 (3) - Finish
01:18:476 - I wanna hear some kind of beat here ;_;
01:23:415 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This part doesn't follow anything. Try this rhythm~
[Insane]
00:21:586 (1,2,3) - You should make this symmetric if you're going to use a pattern like this
00:37:683 (7) - NC here and remove it on 00:38:598 (1)
00:47:104 - Missing a note here
01:18:293 (3) - I'd prefer soft whistle over clap here
[Hinacle]
You should change it to "Hinacle's Insane" before some XAT member starts yelling at you
great mapset ^^/
Topic Starter
Thanks Mythol for your helpful mod :3
Fixed everything on my diff~
Fixed everything on my diff~
Weez wrote:
alacat's Normal
00:47:196 (4,5) - This 1/2 stack right after a 1/4 stack could throw some off (did for me when I first played through it :/) Remove the stack and just stick with 1/4 stacks throughout this map please. mm ~ no problem >.<
01:26:708 (2) - Add a repeat to this final slider so it goes with the piano there. Nope.
Mythol wrote:
[Normal]
perfect o^^ <3
Yo.
[Flask's Insane]
• 01:24:513 (5,6,7) - Stacking 1/4 notes under a 1/4 slider like this is a really bad idea. The flow is awful and it does not play well. I suggest unstacking and changing the two notes into a short slider?Like this.
• 01:27:440 (1) - Silence the end of this spinner, it works well with the fading of the music.
[Hard]
• 00:42:257 (1) - In my opinion, stacking this note on top of the slider instead of under (8) plays better.
• 01:22:135 (1) - I don't really like this at all. It does not match with the music at all and does not play well either. It would be better if we reduced the slider so that it starts on 01:22:501 and ends at 01:22:866, then fill the space with a note on 01:21:952 - and 01:22:318 -. Like this.
• 01:26:342 (2,3,4) - These notes are not placed on the time line correctly and does not fit the music. (3) and (4) actually start on 1/12 notes. (3) should be on 01:26:555 - and (4) should start on 01:26:738 - and go on until 01:26:951 -. I suggest putting a repeat on (4) to match the music even better. Like this.
01:27:257 (1) - Silence the end of this spinner, it works well with the fading of the music.
[alacat's Normal]
• 01:02:561 (1) - I know this may not seem like a big deal, but this is asymmetrical and it actually is pretty noticeable in gameplay.
• 01:26:708 (2) - Extend this slider to the blue tick to match the music better. (01:26:982 - )
[-kevincela-'s Easy]
*One of the better Easy difficulties I've modded. Good work!
• 01:27:439 (1) - Silence the end of this spinner, it works well with the fading of the music.
Looks good. Just tiny things I think you should tweak. Holla at me when you've looked over these.
[Flask's Insane]
• 01:24:513 (5,6,7) - Stacking 1/4 notes under a 1/4 slider like this is a really bad idea. The flow is awful and it does not play well. I suggest unstacking and changing the two notes into a short slider?Like this.
• 01:27:440 (1) - Silence the end of this spinner, it works well with the fading of the music.
[Hard]
• 00:42:257 (1) - In my opinion, stacking this note on top of the slider instead of under (8) plays better.
• 01:22:135 (1) - I don't really like this at all. It does not match with the music at all and does not play well either. It would be better if we reduced the slider so that it starts on 01:22:501 and ends at 01:22:866, then fill the space with a note on 01:21:952 - and 01:22:318 -. Like this.
• 01:26:342 (2,3,4) - These notes are not placed on the time line correctly and does not fit the music. (3) and (4) actually start on 1/12 notes. (3) should be on 01:26:555 - and (4) should start on 01:26:738 - and go on until 01:26:951 -. I suggest putting a repeat on (4) to match the music even better. Like this.
01:27:257 (1) - Silence the end of this spinner, it works well with the fading of the music.
[alacat's Normal]
• 01:02:561 (1) - I know this may not seem like a big deal, but this is asymmetrical and it actually is pretty noticeable in gameplay.
• 01:26:708 (2) - Extend this slider to the blue tick to match the music better. (01:26:982 - )
[-kevincela-'s Easy]
*One of the better Easy difficulties I've modded. Good work!
• 01:27:439 (1) - Silence the end of this spinner, it works well with the fading of the music.
Looks good. Just tiny things I think you should tweak. Holla at me when you've looked over these.
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
Fine!
[-kevincela-'s Easy]
00:56:708 (1) - Make this look better just like others.
01:04:391 (3) - Something as above, you may do better on this part.
01:25:976 (1) - :< Why this slider ends at here? It should end at 01:27:165 instead.
[alacat's Normal]
00:44:818 - Try adding a note here? It is ok if you dont do that.
00:46:281 (3) - If I were you, I may choose to end this at 00:46:64, then add a note at 00:47:013.
[Hard]
00:04:574 (4) - hmm..It sounds better if you could end this slider at 00:04:940.
00:07:501 (4) - As above.
00:08:415 (1) - What about using whistle instead of finish?
00:15:732 (1,2,3) - Also..what about this? It might sound better imo.
00:19:391 (3,4,5) - orz..Try this please.
00:21:586 (2,3) - Merge these two notes into one slider.
00:50:854 (1,2,3) - Try this rhythm :3
00:55:793 (6,7,8) - Merge these 3 circles into one slider.
[Flask's Insane]
00:39:879 - It should be something here since the vocal. Not just a slider.
01:09:970 (5) - hmm? Remove this ?
01:24:787 (6,7) - Remove these plz, you could extend the previous slider here instead.
01:27:074 (3) - It should not be here..May be 1/4 later.
[Hinacle's Insane]
00:45:001 (1) - The vocal "me~" from here, so try merging (1,2) into one slider.
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Wonderful Mapset ! :3
Good Luck Sekai-chan
- Red - Important or Issue
- Blue - You'd better fix them
- Black - Normal Suggestions
Fine!
[-kevincela-'s Easy]
00:56:708 (1) - Make this look better just like others.
01:04:391 (3) - Something as above, you may do better on this part.
01:25:976 (1) - :< Why this slider ends at here? It should end at 01:27:165 instead.
[alacat's Normal]
00:44:818 - Try adding a note here? It is ok if you dont do that.
00:46:281 (3) - If I were you, I may choose to end this at 00:46:64, then add a note at 00:47:013.
[Hard]
Unsnapped things
01:26:555 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:26:738 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:26:738 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:26:738 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:26:738 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:04:574 (4) - hmm..It sounds better if you could end this slider at 00:04:940.
00:07:501 (4) - As above.
00:08:415 (1) - What about using whistle instead of finish?
00:15:732 (1,2,3) - Also..what about this? It might sound better imo.
00:19:391 (3,4,5) - orz..Try this please.
00:21:586 (2,3) - Merge these two notes into one slider.
00:50:854 (1,2,3) - Try this rhythm :3
00:55:793 (6,7,8) - Merge these 3 circles into one slider.
[Flask's Insane]
00:39:879 - It should be something here since the vocal. Not just a slider.
01:09:970 (5) - hmm? Remove this ?
01:24:787 (6,7) - Remove these plz, you could extend the previous slider here instead.
01:27:074 (3) - It should not be here..May be 1/4 later.
[Hinacle's Insane]
00:45:001 (1) - The vocal "me~" from here, so try merging (1,2) into one slider.
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Wonderful Mapset ! :3
Good Luck Sekai-chan
Kiddo-Kun wrote:
[alacat's Normal]
• 01:02:561 (1) - I know this may not seem like a big deal, but this is asymmetrical and it actually is pretty noticeable in gameplay. okey. I moved 1 gird left o.o!
• 01:26:708 (2) - Extend this slider to the blue tick to match the music better. (01:26:982 - ) okey.
Snowy Dream wrote:
[alacat's Normal]
00:44:818 - Try adding a note here? It is ok if you dont do that. mm ~ I follow vocal here >_<
00:46:281 (3) - If I were you, I may choose to end this at 00:46:64, then add a note at 00:47:013. yes , you're right. but I think your sugguetion is hard to take a little.
Thank you for modding
http://puu.sh/1FXkG
Topic Starter
Thanks Snowy for your mod :3Snowy Dream wrote:
[Hard]Unsnapped things01:26:555 (3) - Unsnapped circle. They all snapped at/12 so that's why ><
01:26:738 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:26:738 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:04:574 (4) - hmm..It sounds better if you could end this slider at 00:04:940. No, i think it's follows the vocal better like this ><
00:07:501 (4) - As above.^
00:08:415 (1) - What about using whistle instead of finish? ok~
00:15:732 (1,2,3) - Also..what about this? It might sound better imo. No, i liked my rhythm better ~
00:19:391 (3,4,5) - orz..Try this please. ^
00:21:586 (2,3) - Merge these two notes into one slider. No, Notes are better since this a hard orz~
00:50:854 (1,2,3) - Try this rhythm :3 ^
00:55:793 (6,7,8) - Merge these 3 circles into one slider.^
and fixed everything on Kiddo's mod~
and updated alacat's diff ~
@v@ That's ok, yours is also great enough.
Shohei Ohtani
CDFA likes to be lazy.
Overall:
This video tho, it's weird how it just cuts out in the middle. If it's not going the full length, and it's impossible to go the full length, it might be better to not include it.
This BG was used in another Madoka map and it's fine and it's a cool BG but it's like that's one of my favorite maps so looking at this is like "ok lol"
These hitsounds are right but damn this song and its trying to be creative.
Hinacle:
00:12:074 (1) - NC
00:29:452 (3) - Overall the entire map is jumpy, but this one stands out to me for some reason. Try this, maybe? NOTE: Rough sketch. I'm not a wizard with sliders or anything. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546066
That other insane:
00:37:683 (7) - For a diff that isn't jumpy, this is a really random jump that can be easily fixed.
00:46:098 (5) - Add snare hitsample
00:50:854 (1) - Add finish
01:25:976 (1,2,3) - These notes are off. Use Hinacle's diff as a reference to where these should be placed, or re-time this section
Hard:
00:40:610 (6) - Add snare hitsample
00:47:561 (2) - Remove NC
00:50:854 (1) - Add finish
01:26:738 (4) - This slider is off time
Normal:
Seems very 1/1, but it's fine
Easy:
00:58:903 (5,6) - Sightreading this, I got tripped up by this, because it deviates from the lyrics which have been followed for most of the song. Maybe make a slider to follow the lyrics?
yay
Overall:
This video tho, it's weird how it just cuts out in the middle. If it's not going the full length, and it's impossible to go the full length, it might be better to not include it.
This BG was used in another Madoka map and it's fine and it's a cool BG but it's like that's one of my favorite maps so looking at this is like "ok lol"
These hitsounds are right but damn this song and its trying to be creative.
Hinacle:
00:12:074 (1) - NC
00:29:452 (3) - Overall the entire map is jumpy, but this one stands out to me for some reason. Try this, maybe? NOTE: Rough sketch. I'm not a wizard with sliders or anything. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546066
That other insane:
00:37:683 (7) - For a diff that isn't jumpy, this is a really random jump that can be easily fixed.
00:46:098 (5) - Add snare hitsample
00:50:854 (1) - Add finish
01:25:976 (1,2,3) - These notes are off. Use Hinacle's diff as a reference to where these should be placed, or re-time this section
Hard:
00:40:610 (6) - Add snare hitsample
00:47:561 (2) - Remove NC
00:50:854 (1) - Add finish
01:26:738 (4) - This slider is off time
Normal:
Seems very 1/1, but it's fine
Easy:
00:58:903 (5,6) - Sightreading this, I got tripped up by this, because it deviates from the lyrics which have been followed for most of the song. Maybe make a slider to follow the lyrics?
yay
Topic Starter
Thanks CDFA Fixed everything but 01:26:738 (4) because it's snapped at 1/12 ;w; that's why~
Fixed that last slider in the hard difficulty.
This is a well balanced map with well constructed difficulties, and now that everything checks up will - I say this deserves a BUBBLE!
Good luck with the rank!
This is a well balanced map with well constructed difficulties, and now that everything checks up will - I say this deserves a BUBBLE!
Good luck with the rank!
hi sekai
~General~
~kevincela's Easy~
~General~
- Each map is starting on 00:04:025, there is no reason to set an audio lead-in, remove them in each diff
- I think slider tick 2 would fit the song best because there are some sounds in the middle of sliders (on the hardest diff) and you can fill them using slider tick 2
- I don't know but the current video has lyric that goes off screen: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546943
- Still about video.. It ends on 01:22:683.. are you sure that it is whole? I doubt.. or maybe you are using a wrong video offset..
- I checked more times the timing and I think you need to add some other red lines after 01:25:976, you can hear by yourself that they are totally off. I have something like:
~kevincela's Easy~
- 00:07:866 (2) - reduce by 1/2? it fits better
- 00:24:513 (1) - this slider isn't symmetric (you can notice it in test mode), what about:SPOILER
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- 00:46:098 (1) - I don't see a reason to use new combo here also because it breaks the symmetry you made between 00:43:537 (1,2,1)
- 00:59:269 (6) - It touches HP bar, move it some grid down
- 01:12:074 (2) - I'd use soft whistle on reverse arrow to emphasize that sound
- 01:16:647 (5) - circle pattern is still going, add finish here as well to keep consistency
- 00:36:952 (3) - soft default whistle on the slider head?
- 00:40:610 (1) - ^ (I would add some of them on this calmer part, but I don't have headphones now so I can't help you with it ç.ç catch me in game if you need some help), like 00:41:525 (3)'s tail for example and so on
- 00:20:854 (8) - CTRL + G? To make a small jump with the next circle, it also flow better IMO
- 00:23:232 (2,3) - improve this blanket :\ I don't like how it flows now, I mean: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546912
- 00:27:988 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would place 00:27:988 (1,2,3,4) in this way using 1,14x spacing getting a smoother flow (I have also fixed next circles placements using 1,14x) :SPOILER
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412,276,30001,2,0,P|416:320|400:352,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0 - 00:40:610 (6) - add new combo here removing it from 00:42:257 (1), it looks more logical to set combo in this way according to downbeats
- 00:47:196 (1) - useless new combo, the rhythm is still the same of 00:46:647 (1), I would remove new combo
- 00:49:391 (1,2,3) - make this pattern symmetric, it flows really bad atm with this inconsistent spacing:SPOILER
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404,204,50671,1,0,0:0:0 - 00:55:244 (5) - ugly, make it more curved to blanket better with 00:54:513 (3)'s tail: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546930
- 01:20:122 (1,2,3) - the (2)'s curve breaks this flowing part.. what about:SPOILER
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376,264,81403,2,0,P|360:196|320:136,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0 - 01:22:318 (5,1) - unstack them because this is the only 1/4 slider in the full map with so many sliders and it could easily confuse players
- 01:23:049 (1,2) - switch new combo according to finish hitsound set on 01:23:415 (2)'s head
- 01:24:879 (1) - (according to my previous suggestion) remove new combo from here, it's totally useless imo
- 01:26:555 (3) - this circle is unsnapped, snap it correctly (but read in "general" about those red lines)
- 00:30:915 (4) - I'd use new combo according to that jumpy orz pattern
- 00:37:683 (7) - new combo and remove from 00:38:598 (1) ...
- 00:39:696 (6) - What about to use this rhythm? It'd fit better with vocal sound:
- Mh.. I think that this diff can be still improved, I don't like how it flows at the moment to be honest.
- 00:09:147 (1,2) - switch new combo?
- 01:09:696 (1) - finish on the slider head to emphasize the cymbals (whistle + finish would be anyways ok)
Topic Starter
Thanks Chewin for your helpful mod :3Chewin wrote:
hi sekai
~General~
- Each map is starting on 00:04:025, there is no reason to set an audio lead-in, remove them in each diff ok~
- I think slider tick 2 would fit the song best because there are some sounds in the middle of sliders (on the hardest diff) and you can fill them using slider tick 2 ^
- I don't know but the current video has lyric that goes off screen: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546943 it's because of this new widescreen system ><
- Still about video.. It ends on 01:22:683.. are you sure that it is whole? I doubt.. or maybe you are using a wrong video offset.. i toke it from DJPop's map. So you should ask him xD
- I checked more times the timing and I think you need to add some other red lines after 01:25:976, you can hear by yourself that they are totally off. I have something like: ok done~
~Hard~
- 00:20:854 (8) - CTRL + G? To make a small jump with the next circle, it also flow better IMO ok~
- 00:23:232 (2,3) - improve this blanket :\ I don't like how it flows now, I mean: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546912 ^
- 00:27:988 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would place 00:27:988 (1,2,3,4) in this way using 1,14x spacing getting a smoother flow (I have also fixed next circles placements using 1,14x) : oh!!! i liked it >< thanks Chewin~
SPOILER172,216,27988,5,0,0:0:0
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412,276,30001,2,0,P|416:320|400:352,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0- 00:40:610 (6) - add new combo here removing it from 00:42:257 (1), it looks more logical to set combo in this way according to downbeats ok done~
- 00:47:196 (1) - useless new combo, the rhythm is still the same of 00:46:647 (1), I would remove new combo ^
- 00:49:391 (1,2,3) - make this pattern symmetric, it flows really bad atm with this inconsistent spacing: Done, thanks :3
SPOILER312,352,50122,2,0,P|359:354|385:278,1,140,2|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0
404,204,50671,1,0,0:0:0- 00:55:244 (5) - ugly, make it more curved to blanket better with 00:54:513 (3)'s tail: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546930 Done~
- 01:20:122 (1,2,3) - the (2)'s curve breaks this flowing part.. what about: ok done :3
SPOILER120,248,80122,6,0,P|119:327|185:233,1,280
264,196,81037,2,0,P|288:228|296:276,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,264,81403,2,0,P|360:196|320:136,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0- 01:22:318 (5,1) - unstack them because this is the only 1/4 slider in the full map with so many sliders and it could easily confuse players ok ><
- 01:23:049 (1,2) - switch new combo according to finish hitsound set on 01:23:415 (2)'s head ^
- 01:24:879 (1) - (according to my previous suggestion) remove new combo from here, it's totally useless imo ^
- 01:26:555 (3) - this circle is unsnapped, snap it correctly (but read in "general" about those red lines) Fixed~
All fix from Chewin's mod <3
EDIT: 1111th posts lol
EDIT: 1111th posts lol
Thanks for the modChewin wrote:
~kevincela's Easy~
- 00:07:866 (2) - reduce by 1/2? it fits better I am following the synthesizer which ends at 00:09:147 - ,and shortening it by 1/2 would be a bit strange for me instead
- 00:24:513 (1) - this slider isn't symmetric (you can notice it in test mode), what about: Fixed,but adjusted the position just to blanket 00:24:147 (3) - properly
SPOILER248,288,24513,6,0,P|296:320|296:368|296:368|340:348|404:360,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0- 00:46:098 (1) - I don't see a reason to use new combo here also because it breaks the symmetry you made between 00:43:537 (1,2,1) ok
- 00:59:269 (6) - It touches HP bar, move it some grid down k
- 01:12:074 (2) - I'd use soft whistle on reverse arrow to emphasize that sound Done
- 01:16:647 (5) - circle pattern is still going, add finish here as well to keep consistency^
SPOILER
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Topic Starter
updated Kevin and Flask's Diff's :3
Waiting for alacat~
Waiting for alacat~
Thanks Chewin ~Chewin wrote:
ya Chewin :3
~alacat's Normal~
- 00:36:952 (3) - soft default whistle on the slider head? okey. added ~
- 00:40:610 (1) - ^ (I would add some of them on this calmer part, but I don't have headphones now so I can't help you with it ç.ç catch me in game if you need some help), like 00:41:525 (3)'s tail for example and so on okey. I put some whistles
http://puu.sh/1GLIe
Topic Starter
updated :3
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Thanks for checking my map again >< and added it on the tags~CDFA wrote:
Looking for this song on Youtube, found out that it comes from "The World God Only Knows" character album. You already have the character's name in the tags, but it might be a good idea to add "The World God Only Knows" to the tags.
Don't kudosu this btw.
Inconsistency in uninherited red timing sections, check it carefully with AIBat and call me back.
Moreover, don't forget to resnap the unsnapped green lines.
Moreover, don't forget to resnap the unsnapped green lines.
Topic Starter
ok Fixed everything now~ :3
ok
The final part is still messy (and unsnapped) imo, an uninherited point with 150 bpm in 01:25:976 would look better, just saying
I'll take Hinacle's Insane as example
As you have now
If you put the suggested one
Oh, I forgot snap the spinner in the last picture, but I think is enough for understand what I mean. Don't kd this.
I'll take Hinacle's Insane as example
As you have now
If you put the suggested one
Oh, I forgot snap the spinner in the last picture, but I think is enough for understand what I mean. Don't kd this.
General < here is an .osu containing the correct timing and combo colour suggestions
- Hello! As mentioned above, the last section needs to be correctly timed and snapped on all difficulties.
- First offset should be at 4,025 (start of the song) and not 2,562 (lead-in noise thing).
- From what I've searched, the title is captialized as Platinum and not PLATINUM. Also needs to be checked for the ranked version.
- For such a cheerful song, I'd love to see more than two combo colours.
Hinacle's Insane
01:06:037 (4,5,6,1) - (4) and (1) shouldn't overlap, it looks better.
Flask's Insane
01:24:513 (5,6) - Make (6) into a circle and place it on the white tick, it plays more smoothly.
Hard
00:20:854 (8,1) - Aah, 2.78x jump, it needs to be made smaller.
01:16:647 (5,1) - I feel like something should be filling 01:17:013, because there's action in the music but not in the map.
alacat's Normal
- yay
-kevincela-'s Easy
00:09:879 (3) - I'd put a new combo on this note for the downbeat.
01:18:476 (2,3,1) - The pattern is interesting, but for an Easy difficulty it's confusing to read.
That's it! The mod looked boring, so I added some colour. Anyhow, because you need to fix the timing you'll need a different MAT/BAT to rebubble and then you can poke me again and I'll rank it. Don't let anyone else rank it in the meantime or I'm not going to mod your maps anymore!
- Hello! As mentioned above, the last section needs to be correctly timed and snapped on all difficulties.
- First offset should be at 4,025 (start of the song) and not 2,562 (lead-in noise thing).
- From what I've searched, the title is captialized as Platinum and not PLATINUM. Also needs to be checked for the ranked version.
- For such a cheerful song, I'd love to see more than two combo colours.
Hinacle's Insane
01:06:037 (4,5,6,1) - (4) and (1) shouldn't overlap, it looks better.
Flask's Insane
01:24:513 (5,6) - Make (6) into a circle and place it on the white tick, it plays more smoothly.
Hard
00:20:854 (8,1) - Aah, 2.78x jump, it needs to be made smaller.
01:16:647 (5,1) - I feel like something should be filling 01:17:013, because there's action in the music but not in the map.
alacat's Normal
- yay
-kevincela-'s Easy
00:09:879 (3) - I'd put a new combo on this note for the downbeat.
01:18:476 (2,3,1) - The pattern is interesting, but for an Easy difficulty it's confusing to read.
That's it! The mod looked boring, so I added some colour. Anyhow, because you need to fix the timing you'll need a different MAT/BAT to rebubble and then you can poke me again and I'll rank it. Don't let anyone else rank it in the meantime or I'm not going to mod your maps anymore!
Topic Starter
Thanks SG Fixed everything on my diff :3
Thanks for the mod!SapphireGhost wrote:
-kevincela-'s Easy
00:09:879 (3) - I'd put a new combo on this note for the downbeat. You're right,done
01:18:476 (2,3,1) - The pattern is interesting, but for an Easy difficulty it's confusing to read.I really don't want to change it,it could be confusing but imho this plays really well.
SPOILER
osu file format v11
[General]
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Title:Platinum (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:プラチナ (Short Ver.)
Artist:Yuuki Aoi
ArtistUnicode:悠木 碧
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:-kevincela-'s Easy
Source:Card Captor Madoka
Tags:alacat Flask -kevincela- kevincela Hinacle Opening MAD Parody Puella Magi Magica Kaname Sakura Kami Nomi zo Shiru Sekai Aoyama Mio Sakamoto Maaya The World God Only Knows
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@SG
01:24:513 (5,6) - Make (6) into a circle and place it on the white tick, it plays more smoothly. nope I think 01:24:787 - has a music sound so just place something, not only white tick
@sekai use my code to update again >: change something
01:24:513 (5,6) - Make (6) into a circle and place it on the white tick, it plays more smoothly. nope I think 01:24:787 - has a music sound so just place something, not only white tick
@sekai use my code to update again >: change something
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180,320,58354,2,0,P|177:262|181:222,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
252,164,58720,2,0,P|304:112|388:128,1,160
336,220,59268,1,2,0:0:0
336,220,59360,1,2,0:0:0
336,220,59451,1,2,0:0:0
336,220,59543,1,2,0:0:0
336,220,59634,6,0,P|340:268|328:308,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,364,60000,1,8,0:0:0
188,300,60183,2,0,P|184:252|196:212,1,80
228,132,60549,2,0,P|240:88|232:52,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
108,20,60915,1,0,0:0:0
32,124,61098,6,0,P|0:200|48:276,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
100,196,61646,1,0,0:0:0
168,264,61829,2,0,P|200:188|152:112,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
216,40,62378,1,0,0:0:0
216,40,62470,1,0,0:0:0
216,40,62561,6,0,P|256:32|300:40,1,80
384,76,62927,1,8,0:0:0
452,144,63110,2,0,P|460:184|452:228,1,80
400,304,63476,1,0,0:0:0
312,344,63659,1,8,0:0:0
220,324,63842,1,0,0:0:0
176,308,63933,1,0,0:0:0
132,284,64025,6,0,P|104:256|100:204,1,80
100,120,64390,2,0,P|106:81|134:53,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
232,36,64756,2,0,P|308:24|384:52,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
444,128,65305,1,0,0:0:0
444,128,65396,1,0,0:0:0
444,128,65488,6,0,P|448:176|444:216,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
380,280,65854,2,0,P|304:292|228:264,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,188,66403,1,0,0:0:0
100,120,66585,6,0,P|64:92|20:84,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,188,66951,1,2,0:0:0
100,256,67134,2,0,P|72:292|64:336,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,188,67500,1,2,0:0:0
232,260,67683,2,0,P|268:288|312:296,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,188,68049,1,8,0:0:0
236,120,68232,2,0,P|264:84|272:40,1,80,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
364,28,68598,5,0,0:0:0
364,28,68781,1,8,0:0:0
456,54,68964,2,0,P|400:114|320:110,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
500,140,69878,1,0,0:0:0
500,140,69970,1,0,0:0:0
500,140,70061,1,0,0:0:0
488,236,70244,2,0,P|492:280|472:320,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
436,336,70518,5,0,0:0:0
388,344,70610,1,0,0:0:0
340,348,70701,1,0,0:0:0
292,344,70793,1,0,0:0:0
244,336,70884,1,0,0:0:0
200,320,70976,2,0,P|128:304|92:228,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
188,220,71525,5,0,0:0:0
180,124,71707,2,0,P|252:140|288:216,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
384,232,72256,1,2,0:0:0
464,180,72439,2,8,P|464:116|464:116|484:68|460:20,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,68,72988,1,2,0:0:0
292,24,73171,2,0,P|269:68|289:116|289:116|289:180,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
268,276,73720,1,2,0:0:0
224,360,73903,2,0,P|184:332|172:288,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,256,74177,1,2,0:0:0
148,208,74268,6,0,P|136:136|68:64,2,160,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
172,304,75183,1,0,0:0:0
292,352,75366,1,0,0:0:0
416,320,75549,5,4,0:0:0
448,64,75915,1,0,0:0:0
192,32,76281,1,0,0:0:0
160,288,76646,1,0,0:0:0
296,192,77012,1,0,0:0:0
256,280,77195,1,0,0:0:0
160,288,77378,1,0,0:0:0
96,216,77561,6,0,P|48:164|36:72,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
116,24,78110,1,0,0:0:0
116,24,78293,1,8,0:0:0
212,20,78476,2,0,P|260:72|272:164,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
296,252,79024,1,8,0:0:0
324,292,79116,1,0,0:0:0
368,312,79207,1,0,0:0:0
464,304,79390,2,0,P|508:280|520:240,1,80
500,120,79756,5,8,0:0:0
456,96,79848,1,2,0:0:0
412,76,79939,1,2,0:0:0
368,60,80031,1,2,0:0:0
320,48,80122,1,2,0:0:0
196,72,80305,1,0,0:0:0
76,116,80488,2,0,P|43:109|47:197,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
144,180,81037,2,0,P|228:208,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
92,260,81585,5,0,0:0:0
152,336,81768,1,0,0:0:0
248,352,81951,1,8,0:0:0
336,320,82134,1,0,0:0:0
396,244,82317,2,0,P|440:272,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
356,216,82592,1,0,0:0:0
312,196,82683,1,0,0:0:0
264,192,82774,1,0,0:0:0
216,192,82866,1,0,0:0:0
168,196,82957,1,0,0:0:0
124,208,83049,6,0,P|88:268|120:348,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,280,83598,1,0,0:0:0
280,248,83781,1,8,0:0:0
252,104,83964,2,0,P|280:64|320:56,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
156,120,84512,2,0,P|116:76,2,40,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,160,84787,2,0,P|220:208,1,40,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
208,188,85061,1,0,0:0:0
280,248,85153,1,0,0:0:0
280,248,85244,2,0,P|348:244|408:172,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
296,20,85976,6,0,P|228:24|168:96,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
156,184,86576,2,0,P|152:232|164:276,2,80,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,87176,1,2,0:0:0
256,192,87376,12,0,91776,0:0:0
Topic Starter
updated :3
Hey ~! Sekai-nyan ~
As per you request ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
OK ~ Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
As per you request ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
[General]
- 01:04:391 - Unsnapped kiai end point.
- 01:17:561 - I guess #2 kiai time end to here is better.
[Flask's Insane]
- 01:27:176 - Remove whistle and Add finish,sound much better.
[Hard]
- 01:26:361 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
- 01:26:569 (3) - ^
- 01:26:751 (4) - Unsnapped slider.
- 01:27:576 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end point).
- 00:23:415 (3,5) - Try perfect stack these slider.
- 00:50:122 (3) - I guess the slider should end to 00:50:488.
- 01:26:176 - Add a circle,pls don't ignore this vocal.
[alacat's Normal]
- 01:26:776 (2) - I guess the slider should end to 01:27:176 (don't forgot add finish to end point).
OK ~ Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
Topic Starter
Thanks Rika Fixed everything :3
Topic Starter
updated alacat's diff :3
Go Go Go! Rank this!
Recheck ~ No kds pls ~
[General]
- 01:04:391 - Still no fixed unsnapped kiai end point.
- About last spinner all diff should change end point to 01:31:976 - .
[Hard]
- 00:49:391 (1,3) - Make symmetry stuff to here.
- 01:25:976 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Topic Starter
ok Fixed and done :3
OK ~ Looks fine now ~
Here you go :3
Here you go :3
Topic Starter
Thank you moe Rika-chan >w<//
Hi i like this song
[General]
Shouldn't the title be PLATINUM, all caps? DJPop's ranked version is like that.
[Flask]
01:25:061 (7) - Did this get unstacked? I think it's supposed to be on top of 01:25:153 (8) - lol
[Hard]
00:21:586 (2) - Use a new combo here instead of 00:21:403 (1) - . You should stick to the downbeat since there is no vocal phrase I could see a combo would work on.
00:27:257 (6) - Combo here instead of 00:27:988 (1) - , again to stick on the downbeat. Or you can put the combo on 00:27:440 (8) - to stay more accurate on the downbeat if you don't mind multicolor stacks.
Call me back when this is looked over.
[General]
Shouldn't the title be PLATINUM, all caps? DJPop's ranked version is like that.
[Flask]
01:25:061 (7) - Did this get unstacked? I think it's supposed to be on top of 01:25:153 (8) - lol
[Hard]
00:21:586 (2) - Use a new combo here instead of 00:21:403 (1) - . You should stick to the downbeat since there is no vocal phrase I could see a combo would work on.
00:27:257 (6) - Combo here instead of 00:27:988 (1) - , again to stick on the downbeat. Or you can put the combo on 00:27:440 (8) - to stay more accurate on the downbeat if you don't mind multicolor stacks.
Call me back when this is looked over.
Tittle is fine,i have check this too.MMzz wrote:
Hi i like this song
[General]
Shouldn't the title be PLATINUM, all caps? DJPop's ranked version is like that.
Also SG want rank this map,pls read his mod :3
Well according to this: http://vgmdb.net/album/29155, and this: http://kaminomi.jp/cd/index.html#coveralbum (See track 4)
Current title is fine, Artist isn't wrong, but you can put this in romanized artist 青山美生 starring 悠木 碧 (Aoyama Mio starring Yuuki Aoi)...
Hope I've been helpful ^^
Current title is fine, Artist isn't wrong, but you can put this in romanized artist 青山美生 starring 悠木 碧 (Aoyama Mio starring Yuuki Aoi)...
Hope I've been helpful ^^
Topic Starter
Thanks MMzz Fixed everything :3
Well ok.
Hard
01:21:952 (4,5,1) : Spacing is messed up here.
01:23:415 (1) - I think this is meant to be a 1/1 slider.
So close. Please double-check everything and then let me know after fixes.
01:21:952 (4,5,1) : Spacing is messed up here.
01:23:415 (1) - I think this is meant to be a 1/1 slider.
So close. Please double-check everything and then let me know after fixes.
Topic Starter
Thanks SG :3 Fixed them~
Alright, everything looks great now. (My first rank of 2013!)
I tried to think of an amazing Sakura-themed ranking post but I didn't come up with anything, so I'll just go back to re-watching the series now.
I tried to think of an amazing Sakura-themed ranking post but I didn't come up with anything, so I'll just go back to re-watching the series now.
Topic Starter
Thank you once again SG :3
Congrats moe sekai! :3
nice sekai
gz to ranked~
congrats baka :>!
YAAAAY more Madoka!!
congratz on the rank sekai
congratz on the rank sekai
Topic Starter
wow Thank you everyone >w</
gratz~
/late
Gratz Sekai :3!
Gratz Sekai :3!
congrats nyan!
Congratz~~~~~~
congratz lol
Topic Starter
thanks >< /
/me slaps Flask baka~
/me slaps Flask baka~
learn to map sets
congratz