-Bakari- wrote:

Oh.. Hi! I think you shouldn't double BPM, I think so because I tried to map this map too. # weeks ago \:D/
Without doubling the BPM, the Hard will be harder to make imo

Anyway, here's my star for now. <3 \:D/

SHINE FOREVER~

[General]

1. Your [Normal] isn't easy enough. It should be under 3.24 - otherwise you need [Easy] I'll make Easy then
2. Add Adam Young in tags, pleeeease~ I think you know why OK!
3. 02:49:531 - break on [Hard] and no break on [Normal] o3o why? It would be more reasanoable if you remove this break at all. Or put it in [Normal] instead of [Hard] Removed such unnecessary breaks

[Normal]

1. Your slider velocity feels a bit too big for me. And 1/1 notes are too far away from each other for easiest diff. (that's why you need easy, too)
2. 00:12:388 (1) - put clap/finish at slider's head. I think that first beat of the map sshould be loud! (Disagree? at least do +10% volume) Added finish :3
3. 00:19:888 (4) - don't hide this note. personally, i think that you should follow vocals at east here. and if you hear word "around" - try to map something like this reverse - clap First of all, i was consisting patterns here, so I won't transform these into a slider.
4. 00:21:317 - it's totally not okay to let vocals start in the MIDDLE of slider. Even if you're not following vocals - this is awkward. replace it with circle and 1/1 slider Umm nope. This slider + reverse is intended to follow the music, not the vocal.
5. 01:00:959 (1,2,3,4) - this way to mix background music and vocals. I think it gives your map a bit more awesomness and better flow Thanks!
6. 01:20:602 (4,1) - flow breaks here because it's totally awkward to play! after 1/2 slider we have 1/1 stack and 1/1 slider than. try to put beat at 01:21:138 - or unstack them. k, that 1/1 space is intended for "break" and a thinking time to realize that we have a 1/1 stack here.
7. 01:21:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - awkward stacks. for example here 01:25:424 (5,6,1) - we can see that 1/1 stacks and after it there's 2/1 stack. Think about players. It's really awkward to play! in fact. I think it's a great place to put break time. Song is long - and it'll be ok. sigh... ok, I'll try to explain anything here.
   These stacked notes are intended for "resting time" where players move their cursors more slower and they have time to rest on the stacks. About confusement, I'll give a much more readable stacks on Easy later, so players can learn about "ok, this part is a resting time, where here we have a lot of stacks". k. there's nothing wrong about this at all.
8. 01:25:424 (5,6,1) - any spinner or something. for all similar patterns. Looks quite awkward to see notes disappearing in the middle of the song :V Umm nope :/
9. 01:45:602 - you should end (3) here! Listen to vocals! Of course it'll hurt symmetrical - but to hurt symmetry is better than to hurt rhythm >.</ Nope either, I'm consisting this pattern from the first part (00:35:245 - )
10. 01:46:674 (1,2,3,4) - you can try to express some words in sliders. For example if you hear "heart" - try to make heart-shaped slider ♥ I know, i know... but slider-shaping art is not really my style ><
11. 02:29:173 (4) - something like Normal Finish will fit here. I think. You know, end of section should be loud! Added soft-hitfinish here
12. 03:22:567 (4) - practically the same as 00:21:317. Not a big problem but I think it should be fixed! what do you mean?
13. 03:22:567 (4) - spaaaaacing~ even for kiais - DO NOT JUMP/ANTIJUMP. same for some similar patterns. Players can easily conclude from the beforepattern that "this note starts here" and they won't get tricked by the spacing, don't worry
14. 03:26:674 (1,2,3,4) - replace them with spinner. Then you will not have SUDDEN SPACING CHANGE which is confusing for beginners. You will get soft transform into cute slowdown spinner here will conflict with the grand start of the storyboard effects ><

[Hard]

1. I'd try OD+2 because it feels better and makes map more interesting. OK!
2. 02:06:674 (1,2,3,4) - How about being creative? I think Star-shaped slider will fit here. Try something like this but do it less ugly, please :V Nope, following pattern
3. 02:52:388 (1,3,4,5) - opinion - totally breaks your flow with random straight sliders. I'd like to see some circular sliders >.</ just opinion If only I could make this curver...
4. 03:06:674 (1,2,3) - YES PLEASE! I love this triplet <3 Thanks (:
5. 03:12:388 (1,2,3,4) - I'd separate (1) from other sliders somehow. Because (1) follows another part of vocals and it feels a bit awkward to play. (same for some similar patterns) Nah. Not really a big problem right
6. 03:26:317 (10,1) - this velocity change still feels too sudden. If you don't use x0.75 to make velocity changes SOFTER (because song is so calm) at least convert 03:26:675 (1,2) - into spinner. It will be border between x1.0 and x0.5 I think it's easier to understand. Same for Normal. x0.75 or Spinner. Changed into 0.75 and I feel this one is more fun to play \:D/ thanks for pointing out!

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Awesome map! ♥

Teru21 wrote:

M4M XD

Basicaly , da beat is good already.. nice SB XD jaa... lets start

[General]
Okeii.. u see.. your map need an Easy diff.. why? ofc lol your Normal is 4.15.. its too hard for newbie and it makes your Map unrankable XD Added Easy diff!

[Normal]
00:13:459 (2,3,4) - I see you want to make a polygonal pattern.. but it makes 00:13:995 (3,4) - doesn't looks good. well.. its okay if you don't want to change it.. but the problem is when 00:13:995 (3,4,1) - its totally looks messy.. we got an auto circular slider already.. why don't you want to use it then.. try it XD Polygonal pattern? o.o no I'm not going to make one. The patterns here looks okay imo and the circular algorithm was implemented when this diff had 67% done .w.
00:15:959 (2) - x:348 y:156 if you dont change ^ Ok.
00:23:817 (1) - x:268 y:232 . if you change this. u need to do/you can use your imagination : Umm no, thanks
- 00:24:531 (2) - x:476 y:100
00:25:602 (4) - how bout x:260 y:156 , to make the 90 degree point stacked with (1)'s Head Nope, not going to stack
U need to replace notes if you change ^
00:34:888 (6) - shouldn't it be x:56 y:240 ok...
00:35:245 (1) - the fourth point or i could say the last point, x:288 y:120 its will make the (3) looks more aline with (1) It's already perfectly aligned actually.
01:03:817 (1,2,3,4) - how bout using this rhythm http://puu.sh/1q5Vt dont know why.. but i think it flows more good Nope.
01:32:031 (5) - just make it as a circle 01:32:388 . it doesn't fit with the music at all >__< For consistency of the pattern, I will keep this. It doesn't follow the music but changing this into a circle will ruin the flow and the pattern
01:34:888 (6) - ^ Same answer.
01:50:959 (3) - the slider tick doesn't at the middle of the slider.. that makes your slider a bit awkward.. how bout http://puu.sh/1q5WM orz ok fixed
01:50:959 (3) - add break? nope
02:59:352 (3) - ara... i don't think that this slider fits with the song.. and I don't accept it if you say its pattern. just make it linear please.. XD hha?
03:18:459 (1) - x:180 y:308 and the end point or i could say the last point slider, move it to x:340 y:272 to make it symetris with 03:17:388 (6) . also to make it looks aline with (3)'s Head But this will ruin the blanket for the before slider ><
03:20:959 (1) - copy from ^ already do.
03:21:495 (2,3,4) - Okayy.. totallly this makes beginner confuse see my reply on bakari's mod

[Hard]
00:27:745 (2,3,4) - how bout make this looks more curve instead linear? 00:27:924 (3) - x:380 y:264 Peoples won't really notice this as linear imo
00:39:352 - this feels awkward.. add note here XD No it's not, and this is intended to follow vocal
00:42:209 - ^ Nope, following pattern
00:43:281 - ^ No thanks.
00:45:245 (4) - add a soft finish. idk why, but it feels awkward when it got no hitsound i mean.. only hitnormal sound It's okay actually.
00:49:531 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - lol.. this pattern is da same with da normal lol XD lol ><
00:54:174 (5) - araa.. please make this looks like (4) . recopy (4) , ctrl+h and ctrl+g okee
01:14:888 (6) - why don't you place it x:196 y:148 to make it looks polygon with 01:13:459 (3,5) Nope, intended for a "bridge" note between (5) and (1)
01:43:817 (1) - idk why.. but this looks not symetris >_> da 2nd point move it 2 grid to da right XD ok .w.
01:52:388 (5) - ahah! you do it lol XD i mean finish XD o.o
02:24:888 (3,4,5,6,7) - ara... ;-; not symetris >_> da pattern <_< so :
- 02:25:067 (4) - x:132 y:168
- 02:25:245 (5) - x:208 y:140
- 02:25:424 (6) - x:256 y:204
- 02:25:602 (7) - x:212 y:272 thanks for pointing this out! fixed (:
02:28:817 (7) - end the slider 02:29:352 without reverse and add circle 02:29:531 . i think its more fit with the song XD I just want to use a reverse here ._.
02:40:959 (1) - why this doesn't symetris ;-; da second point move it 2 or 3 grids up XD okee
02:43:817 (1) - ^ .w.)b
02:42:388 (5,6) - shouldn't the (5) 02:42:567 ? <-------if you change this, please do change the (6) ofc lol XD Nope, actually.
02:45:246 (5,6) - ^ No.
02:56:674 (6,9) should aline and 02:56:853 (7,8) should aline.. (7,8) already aline but (6,9) aren't. you know what you should do Moving (9) will re-move (8) and troll ( /w\)
02:58:102 (1) - is not symetris ;-; i know ><
02:58:817 (3) - the 3rd point x:400 y:104 okay :3

yayy~ done XD >_> how bout asking ------ >_> for easy XD i won't .w. i've already made it by myself \:D/
./runs

Flask wrote:

inverness :3 Mod Request from my Queue ovo

[General]

1. You still don't add tags what Bakari mentioned o.o I dunno what's it mean but you should add it D: Added ><b

[Normal]

1. 00:15:959 (2,3) - Not really like this overlaps. (3) ctrl+H and make a tiny change. Umm nope, I like the way these sliders cutting each other .w.
2. 00:34:531 (4,5,6) - This is a bit off I think D: hard to read due to its 168BPM. Reduce the spacing is a way you can do o/ Stacked to prevent such accidents
3. 00:43:817 (5) - NC here I think. Fits the vocal ovo okee
4. 01:20:602 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - It's hard to read if you overlap this. Beginners would think it's 1/1 rhythm (or 1/2?) then click ._. Suggest you to do simple part here orz no thanks, these stacks are meant to follow the song
5. 01:52:031 (4) - (end) a bit quiet. Maybe whistle instead nothing? owo Added soft-hitfinish .w.)b
6. 02:46:674 (1) - Finish I think o3o A bit quiet but there's a sound Follows music, so nope
7. 03:38:102 (1) - ^ whistle is a bit soft imo, and you just reduce the volume so finish would be great :3 Ok!

[Hard]

1. 01:03:817 (1,3,4,6) - Try this slider : (code just for (1), other sliders you should change them by ctrl+ something o_o) ok. I'll try to fix it
2. 01:12:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Put it on the middle of the screen? well just suggestion. Already on the middle actually.
3. 01:43:817 (1) - Bad slider imo ;; Try this! Fixed ovo
   

   348,208,103817,6,0,P|328:284|464:296,1,240

4. 02:28:817 (7) - (end) finish okee
5. 02:56:674 (6) - NC I think o3o ok
6. 03:19:531 (6) - ^
7. 03:06:674 (1,2,3) - I dunno why you don't overlap these, but please overlap these.
   I like this diff -v- bakari loves this kind of triplet so... \:D/

Good luck ovo If you done Easy just call me back and I'll mod it if you need ^^/

Xinely wrote:

hi :3 hinsvar :3//
i try mod ur map inverness >w<
feel easy with me because i'm still newbie modding other map ;w;

[Easy]
01:21:674 (1,2,3,4) - jgn di stack imo gpp kok, ceritanya buat "break" ini
03:03:103 (6) - imo, lbh baik di sejajarkan sama yang (4) x:204 y:112 Consistency from beforenotes
03:22:745 (4) - x:224 y:80 okee
03:27:388 (4) - NC imo (soalnya kiai time sudah habis di waktu ini) .w.)b

[Normal]
saran doang
jgn terlalu banyak stack note sperti disini 00:19:174 (2,3,4) - dan 00:29:174 (5,2,3,4) - Kalo gak distack rada susah gimana gitu
01:22:031 - just suggest, di kasih slider 4/4 umm nope :/
01:23:817 (4) - jika ikut saran diatas ini dikasih NC
02:02:745 (4) - x: 224 y:32 entar nabrak dong
02:59:888 (4) - x:196 y:340 sama.

[Hard]
03:06:674 (1,2,3) - distack aja (terlihat kurang rapi disini) sengaja kok .w.

nice map

ToGlette wrote:

Hi! Here's my mod back to you!

Newbie modding so all are suggestions!

[General]

Everything seems alright with song folder XD

[Easy]

• 00:29:531(3) - NC feels better here. Okay!
  03:23:102(5) - nazi: I think it fits better on coordinate x: 312 y:40 Umm breaks curve here so nope

that's all I can get for the easy.

Just saying but those overlapping sliders like 03:10:245(3,4) might be confusing when played on default skin. I know ><

I enjoyed so much while playing this diff even though it's easy yay \:D/ me too

[Normal]

• 
  00:44:888(2) - this looks little bit awkward. how about positioning it this way -> http://puu.sh/1vLci Changed into something else but thanks for pointing out!
  01:46:317(4) - how about removing this note? sounds fine imo Umm following music here, so no.
  02:42:745(4) - how about making this slider a repeating one? This is good, but I prefer mine.
  02:45:602(4) - same as above nope either :/

again, wonderful diff imo.

from 01:21:317 ~ 01:30:245 confused me a lot XP but still nice XD lol i know. these stacks are intended for rest

[InsaneHard]
lol overmap

• 
  03:25:245(6) - NC? Following beforenotes so no.

Awesome XD but too hard for a hard diff I guess but it's really good!


Sorry for the brief modding... Your map was beyond my modding ability! but I tried my best! (: Thanks for your effort to mod this, although it's pretty brief but this still help me a lot!

Good luck on your map! I hope your map will get ranked soon!

☆三 star!

Zero__wind wrote:

Mod comming ~ as said before
But I'm not a good modder...so, hope you don't mind
General
Nothing to say but great

Easy
00:55:245 (1,2) - is it alright to put confusing stuffs like this in Easy? Not really confusing actually (:
01:38:102 (1,2) - ^ I appreciate the creativity, just worrying about the weeping beginners lol (:
02:09:531 (1,2) - ^
02:20:959 (1,2) - ^
03:10:245 (3,4) - ^ Well...
01:00:959 (1,2) - maybe not quite delicate Fixed.
I'm not good at Easy diff, your stuff is quite nice Thanks!

Nomral
00:44:888 (2) - both soft whistles at head and tail? Added on only tail instead.
01:42:031 (2,3,4,5) - I don't know if doubles like these are too hard to grab the rhythm maybe change them into short sliders is friendly? Nah, they'll learn shortly and conclude that these doubles are improvisations of the short sliders across the map
01:46:674 (1,2,3,4) - also I thought maybe you should obey the distance snap in Normal? You may change these four sliders into away-and-back ↘↖↙↗ ↘↖↙↗ This doesn't work better and I like my current one so... \:D/
03:29:531 (3,4) - maybe not that delicate, for the gap between them are not with same width everywhere Fixed.

Hard
00:23:281 (6) - maybe change it to soft? Umm nope, following beat here.
00:25:067 (3,4) - not beautiful, maybe CTRL+J to the slider and move it to the current place (blanket-like) Nah, blankets here just unfitting, and I just like this one so...
00:27:924 (3,4) - ^
01:33:638 (3,4) - ^
01:36:495 (3,4) - ^ Same reason for these.
00:34:888 (2,3) - CTRL+G to these two notes? just suggestion, for I'm not quite used to the slider next jumping notes 00:35:245 (1) - is so closed to the last note 00:35:067 (3) - Fixed in a different way, but thanks for pointing out! (:
01:32:031 (2,3) - ^ Same.
01:30:245 (2,3) - maybe the current placement doesn't meet your idea? maybe you should move slider 2 about 4 or 5 grid right → Moved (3) instead.
01:42:209 (4,5) - ^ maybe move slider4 3 grid left and 4 grid up ↖ , Oh, don't forget to move this together 01:42:031 (3) - Ok.
02:19:709 (6,7) - don't think it nice like this. maybe change the slider like ) or maybe make 02:19:174 (3,4,5,6) - like this http://puu.sh/1AJa2 or sth. No, I placed them up like this is intended for a divebomb combo placement. Straight down to the bottom and the slider normalizes the movement flow to the up.
03:06:674 (1,2,3) - plz stack them well No I love these .~.
03:15:959 (3,4) - not quite delicate maybe change the slider3's shape a bit and also move 03:15:781 (2) - ↘ in order not to let slider4 touch it http://puu.sh/1AJdY Nope I like mine better :3

that's all I can find out and hope it'll be useful even only a bit
and I noticed that you're kind of busy and..
I'm really sorry for my map of English song are in graveyard curretly =.=
So...just hope you might like my song here http://osu.ppy.sh/s/69004
though it's japanese
Take your time, there's no need to rush.
I'd really aprreciate it if you bother modding this map I'll try checking it out, of course after I finished some sort of my tasks (;

and good luck with your map^_^