1. Futsuu (3.67 stars, 414 notes)
2. Kantan (1.46 stars, 246 notes)
3. Muzukashii (4.71 stars, 793 notes)
4. Oni (4.83 stars, 1190 notes)

mintong89 wrote:

Taiko Mod <3 fast... O.O
omg nano i love her <3

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[Taiko General]
i think use Combo colour is better. pretty lazy right now and still make self change, will change this later
Lead-in is froget to put. please put to 2. 1 enough

[Taiko Oni]

00:49:236 - k? i think kkddd is better.
01:21:210 - d
01:22:631 - d
01:27:683 - don't put Big D or K mix with 1/4 beat snap divisor. use small k. there's a regulation for that

osu!wiki wrote:

Finish notes
Finish notes must not be in the middle or at the beginning in a 1/4 or above stream.
At the end, finish streams may be allowed if there is a reasonable sound for it under following pattern constellations: xxxxxxxxO, xxxxooooX, xxooxxooX

01:42:289 - k and 02:20:578 - d no for 02:20:578, it's weird imo
02:46:710 - i heard drum sound is continued until 02:47:262 - . please put circle. add note at 02:46:868 and 02:46:947 instead
03:04:789 - k

[Taiko Muzu]

perfect 0.0...


[Taiko Futsuu / Kantan]

seem no problem too.

well i can't find much thing...can i do a taiko GD?
Good luck this maps

mariowh wrote:

Kantan

Ok, I don't know if some osu guidelines apply to taiko but I think they do so here goes..
00:40:967 is suggest a note to leadin some offbeats. k
01:05:578 same as above. d
01:09:683 same as above. k
01:11:736 unnecessary, but also is with the real "beat". d
02:01:486 leadin. k
02:04:631 same as above. d
02:07:315 add same unnecessary thing.. d
02:07:789 could be a. k
02:10:947 add same unnecessary thing.. d
02:11:420 add same unnecessary thing.. k
02:41:104 leadin. k/d
02:42:999 same as above. k
02:43:315 change maybe to. K nope, it's kinda weird 'cause note after this is k
02:46:789 leadin. d no, consistent with all kiai time part
02:50:262 same as above. d
03:12:210 maybe. k no, k meet another k note... weird
The only thing that makes me worried is the difficulty may be not the way you wanted it. so... maybe the lead-in should be in the harder difficulty as well or only harder difficulty, yeah... as for everything else, its really good without these things anyways.. well... make lead-in in kantan & futsuu shorter

- t e n n y a - wrote:

I'll do M4M from your queue.

[General]

1. It'll be better if you make lyrics sb for this I'm all for nano ww if I'm not lazy :3 or if someone wanna make it for me~
2. I do suggest to lowing slider velocity at Futsuu and Kantan >~<;; I'll skip Kantan since it was good
3. I think change the diff names to "Kantan" "Futsuu" "Muzukashii" and "Oni" no need to add "Taiko" D: let's see other people's opinion about this, will change this later
4. Start to learn that pain is game ~ <3

[Futsuu]

1. I do suggest to lowing the slider velocity at here
2. 00:14:420 (2)- : D? no, consistent with other same patterns
3. 00:31:473 (13)- : k?
4. 01:20:420- : add k here?
5. 03:01:473- : ^

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:33:841- : add d here? no, keep consistency
2. 01:48:368- : add k here? hm... no, there isn't anything to follow
3. 02:16:947 (18)- : d? no, the guitar sounds higher here
4. 02:27:841- : add d?
5. 02:27:999- : add k?
6. 02:35:736 (9)- : D?
7. 02:50:736 (79)- : k? well, all 1/4 streams use ddd or kkk, so no

[Oni]

1. 00:02:104 (4)- : k? still prefer d
2. 00:02:262 (5)- : d?
3. 00:24:052- : add d here? no, keep consistent break
4. 00:25:473 (43)- : k?
5. 02:23:420 (1)- : how about change this into slider? change to notes
6. 02:38:262 (2)- : K? no, imo it's weird

that's all I can find. NANOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ~/'w')/~*

mintong89 wrote:

OMG WHY I FROGET TO GIVE STAR!!???

Star <3/

shikyu wrote:

- t e n n y a - wrote:

I'll do M4M from your queue.

[General]
[notice][list][*]It'll be better if you make lyrics sb for this I'm all for nano ww if I'm not lazy :3 or if someone wanna make it for me~

- t e n n y a - wrote:

don't make me to sb-ing this map wwwwwwwwwwww <3

1. Your sliders are all messed up, probably because of changes with SV, fix them all please.
2. Your timing is wrong. The offset of the song has lots of changes. It's basically doesn't really matter but it's bad to have the wrong offset both for mapping and Nightcore mod that'll be unplayable. I found this until the first kiai and there's more of them.
3. SV 1,3 is a real bad idea imo, it's nearly the same than 1,4 but just make the spacing between notes ugly. I don't really like 1,2 either for same reasons but it's still better. Personally I would suggest SV 1,05 (1,4x0,75) for both Kantan and Futsuu or SV 1,05 for Kantan and SV 1,2 or 1,4 for Futsuu. Or SV 1,4 for every difficulty, because 1,4 is the best no matter what >:[ Well at least do something about this SV 1,3 please, it's painful.
4. Please consider the fact that for a 3min+ map, the hpdrain is a lot stronger than for a 1:30 map.
5. Imo 80% volume is too quiet, I'd like 100% but if you don't like 100% please make it 90% at least please.
   Also the 40% volume parts are too quiet and not always fitting
   00:11:894 - Here I suggest 60%
   00:16:947 - Here it's louder so 80%
   01:12:526 - 60%
   01:27:683 - 80% but don't snap it on this note because this note should not be quiet 01:27:841 - put it here instead.
   02:08:104 - 60%
   02:38:420 - 60% but at 02:39:526 - it's getting louder
   02:53:578 - 60%

1. Hp drain 3? 4 is too high for a kantan, especially when the map is 3:16

1. HPDrain 7 for 3:16 is high, I would suggest 6. Also the OD should not be the same for Oni and Muzukashii, so you should do: OD 6 for Oni
   or Kantan 2 Futsuu 3 Muzu 4 Oni 5
   OD 6 for Oni at high bpm is the best imo.

NewibornCLivee wrote:

Taiko mod >.0

The map is quite good, so just some suggestions.

[Taiko Kantan/Futsuu/Muzu]
seems no problem .

[Taiko Oni]
01:12:210 (118) - k no, keep consistency
01:14:736 (128) - k ok~
02:38:104 - d no, weird

good luck~

shikyu wrote:

- t e n n y a - wrote:

don't make me to sb-ing this map wwwwwwwwwwww <3

Do it~

CoroQuetz wrote:

Sorry for late mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[Taiko Kantan]
00:50:894 - replace with spinner nope, 'cause slider can help players easier fill the hp bar
02:59:578 - k
03:02:104 - k

[Taiko Futsuu]
00:36:210 - k nope, keep consistent pattern
01:18:526 - k
01:21:052 - k
01:23:578 - k
01:44:736 - k no, drum sounds lower here
02:15:526 - D
02:18:052 - add d no, wanna keep 1/1 notes pattern
02:43:157 - glitched-up slider here, please fix
02:48:683 - reduce slider by one loop
02:59:578 - k
03:02:104 - k
03:04:631 - k
03:07:157 - k

[Taiko Muzukashii]
01:08:578 - remove this note to create a break, the stream is a bit long for muzu.
02:21:841 - remove this note to create a break, the stream is a bit long for muzu.

[Taiko Oni]
no problems, very good map~

Good luck with rank~

-----mliencheng----- wrote:

[Taiko Kantan]

00:01:631 set first timing point here @@?

[Taiko Futsuu]

00:01:631 same, set first timing point here

[Taiko Muzukashii]

00:01:631 same, set first timing point here

[Taiko Oni]

00:01:631 same, set first timing point here

01:27:683 small kat is better ;w;? no, you still can catch it and rules still allow this kind of pattern


[Overall]
Good song, good map
Wish it be ranked soon

hknoboru wrote:

Came from mod queue~

[Taiko Oni]
00:57:210 (32) - 00:58:473 (39) - 00:59:736 (46) - 01:03:526 (68) - 01:04:789 (75) - overuse of big notes, change at lease three of them to "d"s. The notes there are not that strong at all, a d with stop is enough to tell the "strength". change at 00:59:736 (46), other is strong imo and make pattern more consistent

01:27:683 (84) - same as mint. Change it to small k, not for the rules but FOR SUITABILITY. It is not an end of a chorus nor having siginificance to put a big note. A small kat is effective enough here. my other reason to keep this is you still can catch it, but well... let's change this for now

01:44:999 (10,11) - move to 01:44:947 (10,11) -
01:47:736 (27) - and on: same as first kiai, overuse of big notes not really, the drum pretty loud here
02:43:315 (26) - big notes in this kiai is ok though

Generally good, except the big notes

[Taiko Muzukashii]
okay

The "Muzukashii" thing is more capable to more difficult patterns, so feel free to add more elements to make it a little BIT harder will change this later

[Taiko Futsuu]
okay

Fits the music. nothing to mod

[Taiko Kantan]
Too many kats, especially kiai times. Beginners could not handle so many colour changes in the beatmap. Change most of them to dons as long as the fit the music removed some kat

Mic wrote:

[Taiko Futsuu]
02:58:631 (1) -

　　８:03:08:262 - cut this note
　１２:03:12:526 - d->k　　03:13:631 - cut this notes
　１３:ｘｘｏ　ｏｏｘ　ｏ　ｘｘｏｏｘ
finish↓

i think kantan&futsuu are the best in the last,but other part less suitable for beginner?
i think that taking an understandability rhythm more suitable for beginner
(like the last part in kantan&futsuu) it's pretty consistent pattern (for early part, and this is what beginner maps mostly have to contain) than last part and it has much gap between one to another notes, so imo beginner still can follow it

[Taiko Muzukashii]
relative to futsuu,this diff was surge of 400 notes?! O_O this is >3 min song, so it's not really problem
although,where the problem lies not is it,
but it seems look like an "oni" diff
appropriate to reduce the notes is my personal opinion reduce some

[Taiko Oni]
00:21:683

we can see you r using o o x o o x o to set the rhythm
　　３:00:24:683 why you harry the rhythm on your own?
　　５:why used xox,not oox or ooo?

00:47:262

i thinkking don't stop the rhythm in 3 to be good
because this stage nexus of next stage*
how about this↓?


01:42:841

there is sense of violation with 1/3 on your set oni can contain 1/3 notes, besides it follows drum
fix↓


[overall situation]
all the diff is too much emphasis the last part(02:58:631)
and the kiaitime seems too inferior
some abusive and irregular combos cause the shape of map to be odd
well... I wanna make it harder as it come to end of song, it was make almost look like the next diff (I mean if it's futsuu diff I make it almost as hard as muzu) to present 'pain' of this song, for now reduce some. for kiai imo there's isn't much variative music as other part, so just make it harder in some part
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
↑here are my modding

"the mod is only my opinion , whether to accept my opinion its depends on your own"

shikyu wrote:

Mic wrote:

[overall situation]
all the diff is too much emphasis the last part(02:58:631)
and the kiaitime seems too inferior
some abusive and irregular combos cause the shape of map to be odd
well... I wanna make it harder as it come to end of song, it was make almost look like the next diff (I mean if it's futsuu diff I make it almost as hard as muzu) to present 'pain' of this song, for now reduce some. for kiai imo there's isn't much variative music as other part, so just make it harder in some part

Xinely wrote:

i love this song but i can't mod taiko diff orz
and, Indonesian mapper \:D/
Star for u~

tetsutaro wrote:

Hi! This is a mod for your submission to


[General]
Perceived difficulty ratings: 5* Kantan / 7* Futsuu / 7* Muzukashii / 9* Oni
The song's timing is weird in the way the first 3/4 of the chorus is actually not following the bar line (1/2 beat early). To circumvent this relocate the bars using non-inheriting timing sections while keeping BPM 190. Other ranked maps of this song is not affected by this because they are Ouendan diffs, but in Taiko diffs bar lines are an important element to help players feel the rhythm and the isuue should be rectified. not really good with timing, will search someone who good at this
Continue Go-go time for 01:14:420 ~ 01:17:578 and similar locations not fit, really

[Kantan]
The fact that the song has a peculiar beat distribution makes 00:52:631 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,1,2,3,4,5,6) (and similar) actually being on the offbeat. have tried this suggestion, it seems too fast and sounds weird

[Oni]
Towards the end I feel that you are just making things up to rack the difficulty up, while the music is far from being this complex. reduce some

Frans Niko wrote:

here my mod
General
OD (see tetsu's general) yang mana ya

Kantan
00:07:947 - seharusnya spinner berakhir disini karena pas aku denger kurang masuk sama lagunya
dan sepertinya susah nope, di situ emang vocal selesai tapi masih ada suara gitar di 00:08:104 dan sy lebih prefer ngikut musik

Futsuu
00:07:947 - sama seperti Kantan see kantan

Muzukashii
00:07:947 - sama seperti Kantan see kantan

hanya itu

1. this is taiko-only mapset .you don't need ''Taiko''in your difficult

1. 00:14:420 - color is wrong
2. 01:45:841 - remove?

1. 00:11:262 (4,5) - color is wrong
2. 00:43:631 - move to 00:43:789 -
3. 00:44:894 - move to 00:45:052 -
4. 00:46:157 - move to 00:46:315 -
5. 00:50:262 - remove
6. 01:15:052 (7,1) -colors are wrong
7. 01:25:947 - move to 01:25:789 -
8. 01:44:104 - color is wrong
9. 01:45:841 - remove
10. 02:10:631 - color is wrong
11. 02:56:104 (5,1) - ^

1. 01:11:973 - remove
2. 01:35:026 - ^
3. 02:01:394 - ^
4. 02:04:789 -^
5. 02:07:631 - ^
6. 02:20:341 - ^
7. 02:42:052 - i think this part is hard .you should make it easier
8. 02:49:789 - color is wrong
9. 02:51:052 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,1,2,3,4,1) - this part is too hard in muzu. new players don't know to play it when they see this part on the first time.
10. 02:55:710 - remove
11. 02:58:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part is a bit hard
12. 03:15:368 - change red

1. 01:43:868 -color is wrong
   Nice!

qoot8123 wrote:

Request by M4M~
[General]

1. this is taiko-only mapset .you don't need ''Taiko''in your difficult

[Kantan]

1. 00:14:420 - color is wrong
2. 01:45:841 - remove? no, there's drum sound

[Futsuu]

1. 00:11:262 (4,5) - color is wrong
2. 00:43:631 - move to 00:43:789 -
3. 00:44:894 - move to 00:45:052 -
4. 00:46:157 - move to 00:46:315 -
5. 00:50:262 - remove
6. 01:15:052 (7,1) -colors are wrong
7. 01:25:947 - move to 01:25:789 -
8. 01:44:104 - color is wrong
9. 01:45:841 - remove
10. 02:10:631 - color is wrong
11. 02:56:104 (5,1) - ^
    use some

[Muzukashii]

1. 01:11:973 - remove
2. 01:35:026 - ^
3. 02:01:394 - ^
4. 02:04:789 -^
5. 02:07:631 - ^
6. 02:20:341 - ^
7. 02:42:052 - i think this part is hard .you should make it easier
8. 02:49:789 - color is wrong
9. 02:51:052 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,1,2,3,4,1) - this part is too hard in muzu. new players don't know to play it when they see this part on the first time.
10. 02:55:710 - remove
11. 02:58:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part is a bit hard
12. 03:15:368 - change red
    use some forget what I change

[Oni]

1. 01:43:868 -color is wrong
   Nice!

Good song,good map . Hope it can be ranked!

Kuro wrote:

Asked for m4m centuries ago ~ I forgot, oops my bad

d = don | D = Big Don| k = kat | K = Big Kat

[Kantan]

00:13:789 (1) - wrong color
00:27:052 (3) - d
00:33:052 (4,5,6,7,8) - k d kdk ~
00:35:578 (9,10,1,2,3) - ^
00:38:104 (4,5,6,7) - k d kd
00:39:999 (8) - delete ~ Sounds better imo
00:40:947 (2) - k ~ Kantan should have a nice steady feel to it. In this song using claps on the downbeat would pull it off.
00:41:578 (3) - ^
00:42:841 (5) - ^
00:44:104 (7) - ^
00:45:368 (9) - ^
00:46:631 (11) - ^
00:49:789 (17) - ^
00:50:262 (18) - ^
00:52:631 (21) - ^
00:53:262 (22) - ^
00:53:894 (23) - ^
00:54:526 (25) - ^
00:55:157 (26) - ^
00:55:789 (27) - ^
00:57:368 (2) - d
01:02:262 (1) - D ~ emphasize
01:02:736 (2) - k ~ claps, claps, and more claps
01:03:368 (3) - k
01:03:999 (4) - ^
01:04:631 (6) - ^
01:05:262 (7) - ^
01:06:052 (9) - ^
01:06:683 (10) - ^
01:22:631 (3) - d
01:24:526 (5) - ^
01:36:368 (1) - D ~ emphasize
01:37:631 (4) - d ~ vocal drop
01:38:420 (1) - k
01:39:683 (3) - ^
01:40:947 (5) - ^
01:41:894 - add k ~ match to vocals
01:42:526 (2) - d ~ vocal drop
01:42:841 (3) - d ~ vocal drop
01:44:104 (2) - k ~ simple claps
01:45:368 (4) - ^
01:48:210 (8) - ^
01:48:841 (9) - ^
01:49:473 (10) - ^
01:50:104 (12) - ^
01:50:736 (13) - ^
01:51:368 (14) - ^
01:51:999 (15) - ^
01:52:631 (17) - ^
01:57:841 (3) - D ~ emphasize
01:58:315 (4) - k
01:58:947 (5) - ^
01:59:578 (6) - ^
02:00:210 (8) - ^
02:00:841 (9) - ^
02:01:631 (11,12,13,14) - kkkk

*There are more color mix ups that aren't posted.

Overall, this diff. could be better. Even though it's a Kantan you can still add more variety between the notes because most of the rhythms are in 1/1 snap so it'll make very little difference in difficulty and won't make it any harder for beginners.
use most of them, but still keep simple pattern as I won't it looked pretty same as futsuu

[Futsuu]


00:08:736 (1) - wrong color
00:14:420 (4) - D ~ emphasize
00:14:894 (1) - K ~ emphasize
01:06:052 (14,15,16,17) - kkkk
02:25:631 (1) - wrong color
02:47:104 (1,2,3,4,5) - kdkkk
02:58:947 (1) - wrong color

Overall this diff was better. Much more variety but still made sense. Not much else to say
no change, somehow like courrent pattern

[Muzukashii]


00:16:947 (1) - k
00:17:894 (2) - ^
00:18:841 (4) - ^
00:19:473 (6) - ^
00:20:420 (8) - ^
00:21:999 (1) - K ~ emphasize, cymbal crash would work best not really like big note (especially K) here
01:18:368 (1) - d

*A few wrong colors that can easily be fixed.
Watch those kat placements, sometimes it feels like the rhythms aren't making sense compared to the beat.
other than that fixed

[Oni]

00:22:789 (1,1) - dk
00:24:683 (1,1) - dk
00:25:157 (1) - d
00:25:473 (3) - k
00:25:631 (1) - d
00:25:947 (2) - delete
00:26:262 (1,1) - move to 00:26:104
01:07:631 (5,6,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1) - change to this ~ dddkdddkdddkdk

In the beginning there were more awkwardly placed kats, but after 01:09:999 everything else was fine.
do remap for those parts

1. 02:20:420 (8) - move to 02:20:578 - to make this fit on the guitar and drum
2. 02:39:526 - unused green line

1. 00:04:157 (1) - make it d like 00:01:631 (1) - ?
2. 00:10:631 (3,1) - k K fits well here
3. 01:17:894 (1) - this k is weird because there are no hitsounds at the places like 01:20:420 - . I'd prefer move this to 01:17:578 - and change to d
4. 02:03:210 (8) - shorten by 1/1 and add d at 02:04:631 - to better fitting on the vocal. at 02:50:104 - as well
5. 02:39:526 - unused green line

1. from 00:09:683 (3) - change like this picture to follow the strings?
2. 00:31:947 (1) - make it k?
3. 00:52:789 - add d to follow the vocal, this sound better imo
4. 01:27:683 (9) - I prefer using D here because of the deep drum sound
5. 02:34:947 - add d here?
6. 02:39:526 - unused green line

1. 00:10:157 - As I suggested on Muzu, add khere?
2. 00:28:789 - 2 notes in 1ms here!
3. 01:44:026 - add another d here
4. 02:42:052 - I'd love to make stream from here as the drum and piano follows here and this is the climax for the last kiai :3

Naryuga wrote:

Okay Naryuga is here for Taiko modding via forum PM. nano <3
Sorry for 2 weeks delay since my PC could not be used (and now using alternative one).

Here we go~

[Kantan]

1. 02:20:420 (8) - move to 02:20:578 - to make this fit on the guitar and drum
2. 02:39:526 - unused green line

all fix
[Futsuu]

1. 00:04:157 (1) - make it d like 00:01:631 (1) - ?
2. 00:10:631 (3,1) - k K fits well here not really like big note here
3. 01:17:894 (1) - this k is weird because there are no hitsounds at the places like 01:20:420 - . I'd prefer move this to 01:17:578 - and change to d
4. 02:03:210 (8) - shorten by 1/1 and add d at 02:04:631 - to better fitting on the vocal. at 02:50:104 - as well
5. 02:39:526 - unused green line

other than that fixed
[Muzukashii]

1. from 00:09:683 (3) - change like this picture to follow the strings?
2. 00:31:947 (1) - make it k?
3. 00:52:789 - add d to follow the vocal, this sound better imo hm... I follow instruments here, if suddenly follow vocal it's weird
4. 01:27:683 (9) - I prefer using D here because of the deep drum sound actually I wanna make it easier, will change this later
5. 02:34:947 - add d here?
6. 02:39:526 - unused green line

others fixed
[Oni]

1. 00:10:157 - As I suggested on Muzu, add khere?
2. 00:28:789 - 2 notes in 1ms here!
3. 01:44:026 - add another d here nope, no drum there
4. 02:42:052 - I'd love to make stream from here as the drum and piano follows here and this is the climax for the last kiai :3 dunno, prefer current pttern than make it stream... bit noisy actually

others fixed
Overall nice mapset The Kantan's last part is a bit hard though. make it easier, hope it look better
Good luck!

• Oni

  00:01:473 - What in the world is the point of this note? It sounds so awkward. Move it to 00:01:789 - or delete it as a whole. I do not get it's purpose.
  00:14:894 (1,1) - These two notes follow the same "finisher-type" sound as the note on 00:14:420 - . So why no finishers? I believe it would give the notes some extra "oomph". They sound wimpy as they are.
  00:21:210 - Possibly add a don here to keep it going. Breaking flow is so bad, sooooo bad in songs like this where it can easily become awkward.
  00:21:920 - As far as notes and drums go, this most certainly needs a katsu to make it feel "full". There is no finisher on the following note so why not go all out?
  00:40:789 - You probably want to add a don here. It feels empty, again, and that makes it just not sound or play good.
  00:46:631 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I generally avoid ever just doing 5 plets by themselves. A great alternative is k kkd d D. That fixes all problems with the section.
  01:42:210 (1,2,3,4,1,1) - ^ Same as this.
  01:43:999 - add a don PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
  01:47:026 and 01:47:341 - you should add dons and make it a full stream. It's not hard, and actually really fun and fits! You say you want better patterns in your map, but declined it when Love asked you to. I highly encourage it. Like seriously, I would be physically upset if you did not make it a roll.
  02:23:736 - How about a don to make it feel less empty here?
  02:47:104 (1,1,2,3,4) - All finishers since it's the last kiai? Makes it feel real epic. Kat on fourth note would be good, too.
  
  That's about all in Oni. I thought the Kiai and faster/more full parts were great! I liked it, although the problems/additions/suggested that i noted, if added or fixed, would really make this map top notch in my opinion!
  
  

  Muzukashii

  00:21:683 - Now, since you can't do a stream here, I thinking making this a finisher would be in your best interest. It starts out the phrase and gives the begining to the real song some introduction with power and oomph.
  01:00:052 - The part starts here, so add a don. You did the same earlier.
  01:55:631 - ^
  02:38:420 - Add a spinner? It feels so empty and deserving of the spinner more than previous sections similar to this.0
  03:18:368 (2,3,1) - Finishers maybe? I dunno.
  
  I felt this muzu was a little too rough on the player. At this level, they are still learning, so lots of ddd kkk might confuse them.
  
  

  Futsuu

  00:49:157 - Kat because it's the end of her phrase then kat on 00:50:262 - to fit drums.
  01:42:841 - Kat again because of the phrase end. Just makes sense to me.
  02:35:736 - There is a cymbal crash here, which could be open for kat use.
  03:09:052 - I dunno, a kat here might be nice. I have no idea. Just a small suggestion.
  
  It looks fine, and there is usually not so much to mod in these types of diffs. Just small suggestions.
  
  

  Kantan

  00:29:578 (3) - ...don? ;~;
  00:49:157 (5) - In last diff (futsuu) I said that kat would be good here since it ends her phrase. I stand by it here, too.
  01:14:420 (4,5,1) - Sections like these should be d k d always IMO.

Backfire wrote:

• Oni

  00:01:473 - What in the world is the point of this note? It sounds so awkward. Move it to 00:01:789 - or delete it as a whole. I do not get it's purpose. it follow guitar, listen carefully
  00:14:894 (1,1) - These two notes follow the same "finisher-type" sound as the note on 00:14:420 - . So why no finishers? I believe it would give the notes some extra "oomph". They sound wimpy as they are. use with modification
  00:21:210 - Possibly add a don here to keep it going. Breaking flow is so bad, sooooo bad in songs like this where it can easily become awkward. it follow lyric, so it isn't that awkward
  00:21:920 - As far as notes and drums go, this most certainly needs a katsu to make it feel "full". There is no finisher on the following note so why not go all out?
  00:40:789 - You probably want to add a don here. It feels empty, again, and that makes it just not sound or play good.
  00:46:631 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I generally avoid ever just doing 5 plets by themselves. A great alternative is k kkd d D. That fixes all problems with the section.
  01:42:210 (1,2,3,4,1,1) - ^ Same as this.
  01:43:999 - add a don PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
  01:47:026 and 01:47:341 - you should add dons and make it a full stream. It's not hard, and actually really fun and fits! You say you want better patterns in your map, but declined it when Love asked you to. I highly encourage it. Like seriously, I would be physically upset if you did not make it a roll. I refuse to use roll 'cause I feel like miss something, so add notes and change pattern
  02:23:736 - How about a don to make it feel less empty here? nope, doesn't fit well
  02:47:104 (1,1,2,3,4) - All finishers since it's the last kiai? Makes it feel real epic. Kat on fourth note would be good, too.
  
  That's about all in Oni. I thought the Kiai and faster/more full parts were great! I liked it, although the problems/additions/suggested that i noted, if added or fixed, would really make this map top notch in my opinion!
  
  

  Muzukashii

  00:21:683 - Now, since you can't do a stream here, I thinking making this a finisher would be in your best interest. It starts out the phrase and gives the begining to the real song some introduction with power and oomph.
  01:00:052 - The part starts here, so add a don. You did the same earlier.
  01:55:631 - ^
  02:38:420 - Add a spinner? It feels so empty and deserving of the spinner more than previous sections similar to this.0
  03:18:368 (2,3,1) - Finishers maybe? I dunno.
  
  I felt this muzu was a little too rough on the player. At this level, they are still learning, so lots of ddd kkk might confuse them. make it easier, hope it doesn't become suck
  
  

  Futsuu

  00:49:157 - Kat because it's the end of her phrase then kat on 00:50:262 - to fit drums. apply this on 00:50:262, I prefer follow vocal here 'cause it easier to hear and make the pattern easier
  01:42:841 - Kat again because of the phrase end. Just makes sense to me. apply here 'cause vocal getting higher too
  02:35:736 - There is a cymbal crash here, which could be open for kat use. apply with pattern change
  03:09:052 - I dunno, a kat here might be nice. I have no idea. Just a small suggestion.
  
  It looks fine, and there is usually not so much to mod in these types of diffs. Just small suggestions.
  
  

  Kantan

  00:29:578 (3) - ...don? ;~;
  00:49:157 (5) - In last diff (futsuu) I said that kat would be good here since it ends her phrase. I stand by it here, too. same as futsuu
  01:14:420 (4,5,1) - Sections like these should be d k d always IMO.

Looks fine, not much to say really.

Overall a pretty decent set that might be ready for bubble or rank with a mod or two more.

1. fix audio lead-in
2. change bg, found one meh, I don't like see that girl (finally) in my bg =3=
3. kantan: fix all
4. futsuu: not fix 00:32:104 (5), it still needed as keyboard sound still can be heard. remap end part. a bit total remap, hope doesn't suck
5. muzukashii: fix all and remap end part
6. oni: not fix 01:18:052 (1,2,3), still like current one