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Xinely
thx 4 mod
i forget which i fixed and not fixed orz
and thanks 4 star ~
Topic Starter
Hinsvar

indyinyou wrote:

[Together]

01:47:813 : remove this ? Umm, why would I?
02:51:334 : remove and add only note at 02:51:487 ^
03:30:364 : i think add only note and then add note at 03:30:670^
No changes from my part now, but thanks for modding and also for the star :D
Flask
owo/

Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.

[General]
  1. no kiai fountain at the end of "Together" diff? lol
  2. Remove Miku from tags? That's unnecessary since his/her name is already in tag
  3. If you need, take the skin from the rank version (don't forget to ask before you take it lol
[ Xinely's Easy]
  1. 00:10:007 (1,2,3) - well.. "kimi no" is a sentence, if you break them that would be weird o.q so I'd prefer slider first then note second, just like what you did on 00:15:211 (2,3) -
  2. 00:58:987 (1) - Well the beginners will be confused by this since it has 2 reserves, that's not same with previous part. So try something like remove one reserve from this slider, then add an 1/2 slider after that. Don't worry, it won't be so hard since low BPM is low x3
  3. 01:18:578 (1) - Try to remove a reserve and use a note instead, current rhythm kinda odd to me
  4. 01:26:232 (3) - The slider begin/end shouldn't use finish, it's too loud, and inconsistent with other same parts (you've add finish at the downbeat). Remove finish could make the hitsound pattern as well as it should be.
  5. 01:09:089 (2) - / 01:13:681 (1) - / 01:28:681 (1) - Actually these things are great patterns, but it would be better if you can do something like 01:34:191 (2) - . I mean Sliderhead/note at the downbeat. Listen the music carefully, the downbeat always start another lyric, not same as previous. They shouldn't be connect if there's special vocal/music or something else. It still pretty well construct, but could better if you do like what I've said.
  6. 01:36:640 (4) - This should 1/2 longer end at white tick (01:37:864 - ) since you're using 1/1 in the previous/next pattern. Keep 1/1 rhythm would be great to the beginners while playing.
  7. 02:08:476 - Nothing here? It would be so quiet here. Add a soft-whistle perhaps
  8. 02:09:395 (3) - This slider should be rotated by 180° to make this pattern won't be that bored. Current has no flow/boring part since 2 sliders are not same length but towards the same direction.
  9. 02:33:578 - Not really need, but do you forget to use custom hitsound for this slidertick? It makes me feel "wow there's a slider tick but there's no sound, and there's a clap sound in the music." That's not really need, but if you can do it, it'll be 100% cooler.
    Do this for 02:38:476 - / 02:40:925 - / 02:55:619 - / 02:56:844 - too
  10. 02:39:089 - I don't see any reason for adding a clap, the music has no clap sound here. Please remove the clap to be consistent with that clap rhythm!
  11. 03:47:048 - Seems you forget to add clap here (:
  12. 04:36:946 (1) - As I said before, 2 reserves are so boring. Try to remove one reserve, then move the next slider to the downbeat, add a reserve on the next slider. It would be cooler than 2 reserves.
  13. 04:42:762 - You shouldn't put nothing here. As you heard, you will know that the downbeat has a strong vocal/music. If you want to prove that clap at the red line, you should make this slider shorter (ends at the downbeat), then add a note at the red line.
  14. 05:02:966 (2,3) - nazi, but improve blanket here.

    This diff needs some improve for rhythm/hitsounding/placement. Easier diffs are not only follow the vocal with spacing. It should be followed the rhythm more than vocals, so the beginners would play this easier as they can be. Some of vocals on the red line in this map aren't really need to put something to fit it, you can ignore it when it fits by using consistent 1/1 / 1/2 rhythm. And the placement, easier diffs should be clean and flow, not messy or crowded.
[ Normal]
  1. 00:28:068 (3,5) - nazi a bit, but try to make a circle for these sliders. Like example here. If you like it, try to
  2. copy the shape of (3) to instead the shape of (1), too :3
  3. 00:39:701 (7) - I can heard a sound in the background music here, consider to add a whistle to prove there's a sound in the music.
  4. 00:47:966 (4) - I feel like you should use 1/2 slider instead of a note here. Honestly a note suppose nothing here, for the music/vocals/rhythm..etc, a note won't fit with them. An 1/2 slider will fit with 1/2 rhythm, and it follows the clap sound :3!
  5. 00:57:150 - Is that a mistake for adding a clap? Since I don't see any reason for adding a clap (music,vocals,rhythm,consistency..etc), better to remove it.
  6. 01:13:068 - Better to add something here, it'll break the hit-rhythm while playing, even it's fit with music. You can combine 01:12:762 (2,3) - these two notes to solve this problem.
  7. 01:22:558 (4) - Try to stack this under (2)'s slider end, or move it out of (2)'s slider end. Current (4) has been overlapped by (2)'s slider end a bit, but not all. That's ugly since it'll be covered by hit300.png, but not covered all the slider head.
  8. 03:53:783 (4) - ^ It's not hard to fix it, right (:
  9. 01:45:823 (4) - Just suggestion, but I feel this should be "higher" than current, it would be flow, too. If you agree, move this to x:248, y:32 would be a good way to change this.
  10. 03:05:721 (4) - Better to add a NC on this because the rhythm changes here, and there's a little break before this. New Combos will attention the players that "The rhythm isn't same as previous part" while playing :3.
    Nice Normal diff actually. <3
[ Together]
  • Hinsvar's Part
  1. 00:12:150 (4) - Not really like this shape, the curve is not really beautiful imo. Move the curve straighter than current would be better. Here's an example!
  2. 00:15:823 (1) - This too ^
  3. 02:59:446 (4) - I don't get why you use 1/4 slider here, to fit with vocals? If yes, it should be start at white tick; If not, change to a note that place at red line would be better since it's a random 1/2 rhythm.
  4. 04:24:395 (1,2) - Well a bit nazi... but use more node on the curve of the slider, it'll be more curve actually.

    Xinely's Part
  5. 00:31:742 (4,5) - I don't see any reason for jumping, no individual vocal/music here, no downbeat here too. Use 1.0 spacing to place this note would be better.
  6. 00:48:885 (2) - Use the same spacing to place the jump here, the jump here are really fit, but ugly placement without same spacing.
  7. 01:23:170 (7,1) - Same here too, it should jump between (1,2), not (7,1). Ctrl+G (1) would be a way to change this.
  8. 02:45:823 (7,8,9) - That big jump might be a scare for the player, reduce the spacing would be great since this kind of song is too soft ;w;!
  9. 03:21:334 - Add a clap here, seems you forget to do that
  10. 05:11:538 (2) - Move to x:492, y:296, more flow imo
  11. 05:17:048 (3) - x:68, y:93
Good luck for this lonnnnnnnng song >w<!
Topic Starter
Hinsvar

Flask wrote:

[ Normal]
  1. 00:28:068 (3,5) - nazi a bit, but try to make a circle for these sliders. Like example here. If you like it, try to
  2. copy the shape of (3) to instead the shape of (1), too :3 Uhm, this is intentional, so no change, I guess...
  3. 00:39:701 (7) - I can heard a sound in the background music here, consider to add a whistle to prove there's a sound in the music. I'll place it on 00:40:007 (8) instead; the music on (7) is not strong enough to be emphasized.
  4. 00:47:966 (4) - I feel like you should use 1/2 slider instead of a note here. Honestly a note suppose nothing here, for the music/vocals/rhythm..etc, a note won't fit with them. An 1/2 slider will fit with 1/2 rhythm, and it follows the clap sound :3! Umm, I don't think so, actually... I think it's fine like what it is now...
  5. 00:57:150 - Is that a mistake for adding a clap? Since I don't see any reason for adding a clap (music,vocals,rhythm,consistency..etc), better to remove it. The music supports it, actually...
  6. 01:13:068 - Better to add something here, it'll break the hit-rhythm while playing, even it's fit with music. You can combine 01:12:762 (2,3) - these two notes to solve this problem. Did it the other way.
  7. 01:22:558 (4) - Try to stack this under (2)'s slider end, or move it out of (2)'s slider end. Current (4) has been overlapped by (2)'s slider end a bit, but not all. That's ugly since it'll be covered by hit300.png, but not covered all the slider head. Moved it out.
  8. 03:53:783 (4) - ^ It's not hard to fix it, right (: ^ (:
  9. 01:45:823 (4) - Just suggestion, but I feel this should be "higher" than current, it would be flow, too. If you agree, move this to x:248, y:32 would be a good way to change this. Done.
  10. 03:05:721 (4) - Better to add a NC on this because the rhythm changes here, and there's a little break before this. New Combos will attention the players that "The rhythm isn't same as previous part" while playing :3. ^
    Nice Normal diff actually. <3 <3
[ Together]
  • Hinsvar's Part
  1. 00:12:150 (4) - Not really like this shape, the curve is not really beautiful imo. Move the curve straighter than current would be better. Here's an example! Okay...
  2. 00:15:823 (1) - This too ^ ^
  3. 02:59:446 (4) - I don't get why you use 1/4 slider here, to fit with vocals? If yes, it should be start at white tick; If not, change to a note that place at red line would be better since it's a random 1/2 rhythm. Uhm, I'm sure enough the vocal begins from the red tick, and it's still there on the blue tick until the white one, so yeah.
  4. 04:24:395 (1,2) - Well a bit nazi... but use more node on the curve of the slider, it'll be more curve actually. Nope, I'm fine with what I have now.
Good luck for this lonnnnnnnng song >w<!
Thanks for modding \owo/
Xinely
fix all
thanks flask~
Lehon
Hi ~

General:
Nice song, nice map! There aren't real mistakes, so my mod is mainly a bit of suggestions :)

Xinely's Easy:
00:16:436 (3) - move this 2 grids left, 3 grids down to fit perfectly with the slider
00:41:538 (2) - I'm not totally convinced of this slider, maybe make it horizontal? like this: http://puu.sh/1Zr0t
00:43:374 (3) - then move this because of the distance snap
00:56:232 (3) - x:368 y:76 seems better imo
01:02:966 (5) - 3 grids left
01:43:374 (1,2,3,4) - you can make a square, I think the correct position of the 4 is x:196 y:288
02:14:599 (4) - move the second white point 2 grids right for a better curve
03:32:966 (4) - move this in x:36 y:152 for a fit with the circle
03:40:925 (1,2,3,4) - you can make this more symmetrical, like this: http://puu.sh/20i36
04:53:170 (3,5) - overlap!

Normal:
02:17:660
(1) - move the third white point 3 grids right
02:17:660 (1) - you can make them fit better :D
04:29:293 (4) - I don't like this slider xD you can try to stretch it
04:33:885 (2) - move this at x:256 y:92, seems better

Together:
00:32:354 (5,6) - maybe move 5 at x:136 y:60 and 6 at x:72 y:144 to make the distance more regular?
00:48:885 (2) - move this 3 grids up
01:18:272 (6) - this isn't in line with the other circles, move it 1 grid right, 1 grid down
01:56:538 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'm not totally convinced of this xD maybe try to make a line like this: http://puu.sh/20iml because the curve isn't so much effective
02:37:252 (6) - move this at x:303 y:124
02:43:987 (1) - move this at x:100 y:312 because in the next three circles you used a different distance

This is all! Good luck, I hope to see this ranked soon :)
Topic Starter
Hinsvar

Lehon wrote:

Hi ~

General:
Nice song, nice map! There aren't real mistakes, so my mod is mainly a bit of suggestions :) Good to hear that (:

Normal:
02:17:660
(1) - move the third white point 3 grids right Done.
02:17:660 (1) - you can make them fit better :D Not seeing any problems here, still...
04:29:293 (4) - I don't like this slider xD you can try to stretch it ^
04:33:885 (2) - move this at x:256 y:92, seems better Looks better, yes, but it'll break the spacing here.

This is all! Good luck, I hope to see this ranked soon :)
Thanks for modding :D
yoyo1005221
your best friend~~~ :)
Topic Starter
Hinsvar

yoyo1005221 wrote:

your best friend~~~ :)
It's actually about long distance relationship though :P
Loneight
Hi~ Hinsvar
M4M.


  • "re" is means "remove"
    Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
    Blue is recommended to fix
    red is unrankable issue

[Xinely's Easy]

  1. 00:28:987 (1,2) - swap NC, let there like 00:24:089 (3,1) - enactment, because I think there vocal same as 00:24:089 (3,1) -
  2. 01:09:701 (3) - how about NC for kiai time start?
  3. 01:09:701 (3) - why not add clap at end?
  4. 01:13:374 (1,2) - swap NC, I listen a stress vocal in 01:14:599 (2) - , so NC 01:14:599 (2) - will more suitable for vocal
  5. 01:18:578 (1,2) - same as ^
  6. 01:18:578 (1) - I think you forget add a clap at exhumation
  7. 01:26:232 (3) - remove finish at end, it isn't suitable for there
  8. 01:33:272 (1,2) - same as 01:13:374 (1,2) -
  9. 01:38:476 (1,2) - same as ^
  10. 01:39:701 (3) - I think re whistle and change to add clap will more suitable for music
  11. 01:43:374 (1,2) - same as 01:13:374 (1,2) -
  12. 02:59:905 (2,3) - why not same as 01:00:517 (3,4,5,6) - sound enactment add a clap at end?
  13. 03:11:232 (1,3) - same as 01:13:374 (1,2) - , also can get 03:11:232 (1,2) - like 03:06:334 (1,2) -
  14. 03:16:130 (1,2) - same as ^
  15. 03:25:925 (1,3) - same as ^
  16. 03:30:823 (1,2) - same as ^
  17. 03:35:721 (1,2) - same as ^, but if you do this, please don't stack there
  18. 03:50:415 (1) - set a S:C2 green line on 03:50:721 - , I think you know why I suggest this ~
  19. 03:51:946 (3) - I just think this slider is strange in shape,
  20. 03:54:395 (5) - set a S:C2 green line on 03:54:701 -
  21. 04:27:150 (1) - it isn't symmetrical Heart-shaped, try to get more symmetrical
  22. 04:47:048 (1,2) - same as 01:09:701 (3) -
  23. 04:51:640 (1,3) - same as 01:13:374 (1,2) -
  24. 05:36:027 (2) - add a whistle at end like 05:30:517 (1) -
  25. 05:32:966 (3) - strange for me in shape ~ try to get it much pretty
  26. 05:40:925 (2) - same as 05:36:027 (2) -
some place's flow need more attention, and some slider can much pretty, but anyway, good diff >w<

[Normal]

  1. 00:48:578 (5) - don't stack there, it is hard for newbie, if you want stack, try to NC
  2. 00:56:844 (2) - re clap at exhumation, there clap sound strange for me, I think dosen't need add anything sound for there is suitable for music
  3. 02:48:272 (2) - re clap and add whistle, there clap sound is strange for me, also let 02:47:048 (1,2,3) - have new rhythm
  4. 02:57:762 (2) - same as 00:56:844 (2) -
  5. 03:53:783 (4) - NC is more suitable for vocal, also is an innovative for NC law, and easy to read for newbie
  6. 04:04:191 (4) - NC, because interval of time is too long
  7. 05:44:599 (4) - same as 02:48:272 (2) -
  8. 05:32:966 (4) - same as 00:48:578 (5) -
good diff, just think 1/4 should avoid using for Normal diff

[Together]

  1. 00:34:497 (4) - add clap at start to follow the music
  2. 00:40:007 (1) - re clap and add whistle at start, whistle will be more suitable than clap for there
  3. 01:23:170 (7) - don't stack there, it isn't suitable, I feel there should have movement for vocal, and also, don't stack will easy to read
  4. 01:58:681 (1) - re finish, i think it isn't suitable for there, because there give a feeling is need more clam
  5. 02:11:844 (4) - remove finish at end, I think people will hear the loud sound and chaos for play
  6. 03:11:232 (1,3) - swap NC, let there like 03:16:742 (6,1) -
  7. 03:21:027 (1) - add clap at 03:21:334 - , I think you forget xD
  8. 03:34:191 (1) - 2th point on x:320 y:200 will much pretty for me
  9. 03:51:334 (4,1) - swap NC, I think stress vocal is in 03:51:334 - , so 03:51:334 (4) - NC will more suitable for vocal
  10. 03:55:619 (1,2) - same as ^
  11. 04:00:211 (1) - I think finish isn't suitable at end for there, because I can't hear anything it follows, try to re it
  12. 04:01:436 (3,4) - same as ^
  13. 04:24:395 (1) - add a S:C2 green line on 04:25:007 to follow music
  14. 04:29:905 (3) - NC, because interval of time is too long
  15. 05:00:517 (1) - I can't find reason why you NC there, re NC
  16. 05:07:558 (4) - NC this to reduce combo number, also add clap at end, i think you forget again xD?
  17. 05:20:721 (1,2,3) - I am shocked by there, because the normal-hitnormal sound is too loud, try to use 45% volume
good diff, just some NC law and sliders shape I can't understand>~<!

this song is nice >w<! my best friend(run
That's all ~!
good luck! :3
Topic Starter
Hinsvar

Loneight wrote:

[Normal]

  1. 00:48:578 (5) - don't stack there, it is hard for newbie, if you want stack, try to NC NC'd.
  2. 00:56:844 (2) - re clap at exhumation, there clap sound strange for me, I think dosen't need add anything sound for there is suitable for music There IS something on the music that made me placed a clap there.
  3. 02:48:272 (2) - re clap and add whistle, there clap sound is strange for me, also let 02:47:048 (1,2,3) - have new rhythm Used whistle, but I think there's no need to remake (1,2,3).
  4. 02:57:762 (2) - same as 00:56:844 (2) - Nope, this is suitable.
  5. 03:53:783 (4) - NC is more suitable for vocal, also is an innovative for NC law, and easy to read for newbie Nope, I think this is fine already.
  6. 04:04:191 (4) - NC, because interval of time is too long ...Dang it, (3) didn't have a repeat? Fixed another way.
  7. 05:44:599 (4) - same as 02:48:272 (2) - Done.
  8. 05:32:966 (4) - same as 00:48:578 (5) - Done.
good diff, just think 1/4 should avoid using for Normal diff

[Together]

  1. 02:11:844 (4) - remove finish at end, I think people will hear the loud sound and chaos for play It fits with the background music, so why not?
  2. 03:34:191 (1) - 2th point on x:320 y:200 will much pretty for me Done.
  3. 04:24:395 (1) - add a S:C2 green line on 04:25:007 to follow music ...Wait, why it isn't there? Added again.
  4. 05:00:517 (1) - I can't find reason why you NC there, re NC Done.
good diff, just some NC law and sliders shape I can't understand>~<![/notice]

this song is nice >w<! my best friend(run
That's all ~!
good luck! :3
Thanks for your mod! \o/
Xinely

Loneight wrote:

Hi~ Hinsvar
M4M.


  • "re" is means "remove"
    Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
    Blue is recommended to fix
    red is unrankable issue

[Xinely's Easy]

  1. 00:28:987 (1,2) - swap NC, let there like 00:24:089 (3,1) - enactment, because I think there vocal same as 00:24:089 (3,1) - done
  2. 01:09:701 (3) - how about NC for kiai time start? ^
  3. 01:09:701 (3) - why not add clap at end? forget lol , fixed
  4. 01:13:374 (1,2) - swap NC, I listen a stress vocal in 01:14:599 (2) - , so NC 01:14:599 (2) - will more suitable for vocal
  5. 01:18:578 (1,2) - same as ^
  6. 01:18:578 (1) - I think you forget add a clap at exhumation
  7. 01:26:232 (3) - remove finish at end, it isn't suitable for there
  8. 01:33:272 (1,2) - same as 01:13:374 (1,2) -
  9. 01:38:476 (1,2) - same as ^
  10. 01:39:701 (3) - I think re whistle and change to add clap will more suitable for music
  11. 01:43:374 (1,2) - same as 01:13:374 (1,2) -
  12. 02:59:905 (2,3) - why not same as 01:00:517 (3,4,5,6) - sound enactment add a clap at end?
  13. 03:11:232 (1,3) - same as 01:13:374 (1,2) - , also can get 03:11:232 (1,2) - like 03:06:334 (1,2) -
  14. 03:16:130 (1,2) - same as ^
  15. 03:25:925 (1,3) - same as ^
  16. 03:30:823 (1,2) - same as ^
  17. 03:35:721 (1,2) - same as ^, but if you do this, please don't stack there
  18. 03:50:415 (1) - set a S:C2 green line on 03:50:721 - , I think you know why I suggest this ~
  19. 03:51:946 (3) - I just think this slider is strange in shape,
  20. 03:54:395 (5) - set a S:C2 green line on 03:54:701 -
  21. 04:27:150 (1) - it isn't symmetrical Heart-shaped, try to get more symmetrical
  22. 04:47:048 (1,2) - same as 01:09:701 (3) -
  23. 04:51:640 (1,3) - same as 01:13:374 (1,2) -
  24. 05:36:027 (2) - add a whistle at end like 05:30:517 (1) -
  25. 05:32:966 (3) - strange for me in shape ~ try to get it much pretty
  26. 05:40:925 (2) - same as 05:36:027 (2) -
    Fix all~
some place's flow need more attention, and some slider can much pretty, but anyway, good diff >w<

[Together]

  1. 00:34:497 (4) - add clap at start to follow the music
  2. 00:40:007 (1) - re clap and add whistle at start, whistle will be more suitable than clap for there
  3. 01:23:170 (7) - don't stack there, it isn't suitable, I feel there should have movement for vocal, and also, don't stack will easy to read
  4. 01:58:681 (1) - re finish, i think it isn't suitable for there, because there give a feeling is need more clam
  5. 02:11:844 (4) - remove finish at end, I think people will hear the loud sound and chaos for play
  6. 03:11:232 (1,3) - swap NC, let there like 03:16:742 (6,1) -
  7. 03:21:027 (1) - add clap at 03:21:334 - , I think you forget xD
  8. 03:34:191 (1) - 2th point on x:320 y:200 will much pretty for me
  9. 03:51:334 (4,1) - swap NC, I think stress vocal is in 03:51:334 - , so 03:51:334 (4) - NC will more suitable for vocal
  10. 03:55:619 (1,2) - same as ^
  11. 04:00:211 (1) - I think finish isn't suitable at end for there, because I can't hear anything it follows, try to re it
  12. 04:01:436 (3,4) - same as ^
  13. 04:24:395 (1) - add a S:C2 green line on 04:25:007 to follow music
  14. 04:29:905 (3) - NC, because interval of time is too long
  15. 05:00:517 (1) - I can't find reason why you NC there, re NC
  16. 05:07:558 (4) - NC this to reduce combo number, also add clap at end, i think you forget again xD?
  17. 05:20:721 (1,2,3) - I am shocked by there, because the normal-hitnormal sound is too loud, try to use 45% volume
Fix all in my part
good diff, just some NC law and sliders shape I can't understand>~<!

this song is nice >w<! my best friend(run
That's all ~!
good luck! :3
thanks 4 mod (:
No_Gu
From my queue

[General/All diffs]
Artist:倉木麻衣
remove .osb maybe
maybe make 2 diffs for such songs next time..I feel sick after I modded 3 diffs for a song which lasts nearly 6 min

[Xinely]
00:10:925 (3,5) - copy 3 to 5?that will be better
00:41:538 (2) - try something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/611678
00:52:252 start a 1/2 slider and del 00:52:558 (3) - ?
02:13:987 ^ del 02:14:293 (3) -
02:19:191 (2,3) - try something like this for better flow? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/611683
03:42:762 (4) - this isn't symmetrical with 03:40:925 (1) - ,and remove finish bucause there is no drum sound in music here
04:47:048 (1) - why not move to center directly?
05:17:354 (2) - I would change this to a 1/2 slider instead.cuz 05:15:823 (1,2,3) - have a diffrent distance and I don't think new players can read them
05:43:374 (4) - try this?...yours is really ugly..http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/611692 and I suggest removing one repeat for better sound

[Normal]
00:45:211 (1,2,3) - make them symmetrical?
03:05:721 (1,2) - if you play this part,you'll see http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/611695 .stack looks not so good
03:11:538 (1,3) - make them symmetrical?
03:26:844 (1) - I don't think you give an easy part here suddenly is good.maybe change to some normal partterns
03:47:048 (1,2,3,4) - so disorderly
04:02:048 (2) - 1 grid left

[Together]
why not name this Collab directly?
00:22:864 (4,5,1) - stack them is better imo
00:41:232 (4,2) - sounds odd
01:20:415 (4) - why use a red node here?..
01:48:578 (2) - 1 grid left
01:45:211 (1) - remove finish
03:40:925 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - whistles sound not good
04:46:742 (1,2) - this makes nothing and really hard to read,remove this slow down plz
maybe try not to put so many sliders with only one red node.They don't fit such songsa
Topic Starter
Hinsvar

No_Gu wrote:

[General/All diffs]
Artist:倉木麻衣 ...My computer can't read inputted kanji (not really sure if I used the correct term lol), although it can still read kanji texts on websites ._. I'll do it if this map is going to be ranked someday on a computer/laptop in my house that can do it.
remove .osb maybe It's still there? I'm sure enough I've removed it.
maybe make 2 diffs for such songs next time..I feel sick after I modded 3 diffs for a song which lasts nearly 6 min ...I actually thought about this too, a few days ago. Well, I'll make sure to keep my sanity in check next time.

[Normal]
00:45:211 (1,2,3) - make them symmetrical? This is intentional.
03:05:721 (1,2) - if you play this part,you'll see http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/611695 .stack looks not so good Unstacked.
03:11:538 (1,3) - make them symmetrical? It's already symmetrical, just not on a straight line.
03:26:844 (1) - I don't think you give an easy part here suddenly is good.maybe change to some normal partterns I'm doing this for variety to avoid boredom on players for having to play those usual patterns continuously.
03:47:048 (1,2,3,4) - so disorderly Made a square out of this.
04:02:048 (2) - 1 grid left Done.

[Together]
why not name this Collab directly? I'm the type of person that avoids using generic diff names for the hardest diff of a mapset, so yeah.
00:22:864 (4,5,1) - stack them is better imo Done.
01:48:578 (2) - 1 grid left ^
01:45:211 (1) - remove finish The music supports the finish, so I'll leave it there.
03:40:925 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - whistles sound not good Reduced the amount of whistles.
maybe try not to put so many sliders with only one red node.They don't fit such songsa Significantly reduced the amount of those kind of sliders.
Thanks for the mod! \:D/

EDIT: Stuff:
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BounceBabe
Hi, M4M!

General

倉木 麻衣 as Artist
Kuraki Mai as Romanised Artist
Overall, make the volume louder, 30% is way too quiet, also here 00:30:517 - starts a more louder part so this just fits
- 02:07:558 - From here, starting, the volume is too quiet
Add two more combo colours, the song is already so long, so the combo colours gives it a little more attraction and its better to play and not so boring combo colour wise. Try these or find more fitable yourself!


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,183,183
Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 255,255,130
Combo4 : 192,192,192

Dont forget to adjust them on all diffs

Easy

00:26:538 (3,4) - Unstack this, not good for new players
00:37:252 (4,5) - Delete this, i think this rythm would fit better
- make a single circle at 00:37:252, from here 00:37:864 - to 00:39:089 - a slider would fit much better than this!

Example
http://puu.sh/22ojZ
00:47:660 (3) - Sliderend, heres no clap?
03:34:191 (4,1) - Spacing, this should happen in an easy, the antijump is not welcome here, change this so the player can easily follow the normal spacing
03:55:619 (1,2) - Reverse NC, it starts at 2
04:44:599 (1,1) - Between spinner and new element has to be at least 1 white tick space, the player needs time to prepare for new elements, i advise you to just delete 04:47:048 (1) - this circle since it doesnt fit much as well, and the problem would be solved easily
04:51:027 (5) - Unstack, otherwise players might get confused
05:29:293 (4,1) - ^

05:46:742 - Combo spam, it is too much so delete NC

Normal

05:20:721 (1) - Either you remove combo here, to follow your own pattern or you make NC at 05:15:823 (5) - to adjust the combo
05:32:354 (3) - Delete this circle, the circle feels to much and here is no vocal anymore
05:46:742 (1) - Combo spam, it is too much so delete NC

Hard

00:11:232 (1) - Remove NC for consistence
00:42:762 (1,2) - The slider should start where the 1 is, vocal wise, otherwise it feels so wrong, also dont add a circle at 00:44:293 - , it fits better
01:04:191 (1) - Combo spam, remove NC also it doesnt fit, even for the jump
01:17:660 (2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing isnt consistent, the last circle 6 is not well placed
01:56:538 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ make the spacing consistent, also the shape isnt well, its a little curvy and then not curvy
04:26:844 (3,1,2,3,1,2) - The jump from 3 to 1 doesnt fit in this low part, it is soft sung and not much jump vocal here, so make normal spacing to fit the song

05:46:742 - Combo spam, it is too much so delete NC

Thats it, song is nice and sung with heart. Wish you good luck with this.
Xinely
fix some~
Thanks BB~

errr lelet == , code ya
easy
osu file format v11

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68323
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Your Best Friend
TitleUnicode:Your Best Friend
Artist:Kuraki Mai
ArtistUnicode:Kuraki Mai
Creator:Hinsvar
Version:Xinely's Easy
Source:Detective Conan
Tags:40th ending ed40 Xinely collab collaboration 37th single Northern Music J-pop Jpop Case Closed Giorgio Cancemi Giorgio 13
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Together
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[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68323
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Your Best Friend
TitleUnicode:Your Best Friend
Artist:Kuraki Mai
ArtistUnicode:Kuraki Mai
Creator:Hinsvar
Version:Together
Source:Detective Conan
Tags:40th ending ed40 Xinely collab collaboration 37th single Northern Music J-pop Jpop Case Closed Giorgio Cancemi Giorgio 13
BeatmapID:189923
BeatmapSetID:64564

[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:2
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304,200,296538,2,0,P|352:212|352:212|400:188,2,100,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
208,172,297456,6,0,P|160:160|160:160|112:184,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
192,300,298068,2,0,P|240:312|240:312|288:288,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
292,108,298681,2,0,P|316:212,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
116,364,299293,2,0,P|92:260,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
124,68,299905,5,6,0:0:0
200,136,300211,1,0,0:0:0
388,68,300517,5,8,0:0:0
312,136,300823,1,0,0:0:0
312,136,300976,2,0,P|312:188,1,50,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,168,301283,2,0,P|336:220,1,50,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,320,301742,5,10,0:0:0
128,328,302048,1,2,0:0:0
188,212,302354,1,6,0:0:0
188,212,302660,1,2,0:0:0
188,212,302966,5,10,0:0:0
296,68,303272,1,2,0:0:0
376,228,303578,1,6,0:0:0
376,228,303885,1,2,0:0:0
376,228,304191,5,10,0:0:0
160,336,304497,1,2,0:0:0
164,96,304803,6,0,P|112:108,1,50,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
124,132,305109,2,0,P|72:144,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
164,96,305415,6,0,P|220:84,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,64,305721,2,0,P|260:52,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
280,128,306027,2,0,P|300:184|300:184|240:236|280:312,2,200,2|8|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,100,307558,6,0,P|140:128|100:176,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
100,264,308170,1,0,0:0:0
300,272,308476,1,2,0:0:0
100,264,308783,1,0,0:0:0
68,168,309089,2,0,P|96:112|252:60,1,200,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
304,100,310007,1,0,0:0:0
304,100,310313,1,8,0:0:0
304,100,310619,1,0,0:0:0
392,148,310925,6,0,P|440:152|480:220,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
468,288,311538,2,8,P|424:316|360:304,1,100
280,296,312150,1,2,0:0:0
188,256,312456,1,0,0:0:0
104,204,312762,2,0,P|65:118|9:170,2,200,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
192,152,314293,5,8,0:0:0
192,152,314446,1,0,0:0:0
192,152,314599,1,2,0:0:0
244,68,314905,2,0,P|308:112,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
312,124,315211,2,0,P|356:204,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
356,204,315517,1,8,0:0:0
372,300,315823,6,0,P|320:280|288:240,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,152,316436,2,0,P|208:152|132:188,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
88,100,317048,1,2,0:0:0
48,192,317354,2,0,P|104:260|104:260|152:220|256:264,2,200,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
80,96,318885,5,8,0:0:0
116,116,319038,1,0,0:0:0
152,132,319191,1,0,0:0:0
240,84,319497,2,0,P|276:56|360:92,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
248,184,320415,1,0,0:0:0
440,284,320721,5,0,0:0:2
400,284,320874,1,0,0:0:2
360,284,321027,1,0,0:0:2
356,184,321334,1,0,0:0:0
396,188,321487,1,0,0:0:0
436,188,321640,1,0,0:0:0
448,88,321946,2,0,P|404:68|336:88,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,104,322558,6,0,P|200:76|92:160,1,200,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
36,224,323476,2,0,P|32:272|80:320,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,316,324089,2,0,P|208:328|260:308,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
352,300,324701,2,0,P|404:288|448:224,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,208,325313,1,0,0:0:0
392,116,325619,6,0,P|448:88,2,50,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
300,152,326232,2,0,P|244:132,2,50,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,208,326844,6,0,P|304:264|304:264|224:244,1,150.000005722046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,164,327762,1,2,0:0:0
184,164,327915,1,0,0:0:0
184,164,328068,2,0,P|120:140|80:200,2,150.000005722046,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
208,252,329599,1,0,0:0:0
256,328,329905,1,8,0:0:0
304,252,330211,1,2,0:0:0
256,176,330517,6,0,P|332:168,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,176,331130,2,0,P|180:168,1,75.0000028610231,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
152,164,331589,1,0,0:0:0
124,160,331742,6,0,P|96:136|104:96,2,75.0000028610231,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,92,332660,1,2,0:0:0
212,88,332813,1,0,0:0:0
240,80,332966,2,0,P|280:84|280:84|316:136|384:116,2,150.000005722046,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
352,40,334497,5,0,0:0:0
324,184,334803,1,8,0:0:0
352,40,335109,1,2,0:0:0
352,40,335262,1,0,0:0:0
352,40,335415,2,0,P|276:40,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
324,184,336027,2,0,P|248:184,1,75.0000028610231,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,184,336640,6,0,P|96:184,2,37.5000014305115,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
212,112,337252,2,0,P|268:44|308:80,2,150.000005722046,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
392,100,339089,2,0,P|452:108|420:192,1,150.000005722046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
292,276,340313,5,8,0:0:0
256,280,340466,2,0,P|192:284,1,37.5000014305115
136,244,340925,2,0,P|100:184,1,37.5000014305115,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
96,180,341232,1,0,0:0:0
132,96,341538,2,0,P|168:108|200:132,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,192,342150,6,0,P|364:88|388:84,1,150.000005722046,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
440,128,343068,2,0,P|420:184,1,37.5000014305115
420,192,343374,1,8,0:0:0
352,252,343681,2,0,P|324:284|272:312,1,75.0000028610231,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
208,308,344293,2,0,P|116:308,2,75.0000028610231,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
228,220,345211,2,0,P|168:188|220:140,1,150.000005722046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
276,80,346130,1,0,0:0:0
408,200,346742,5,2,0:0:0
Natsu
General:

Remove 13 from tags won't be searched because it has only 2 characters

Together:

01:09:701 (1) - move it to x:268 y:320 nazi xd look better
03:40:925 this circle is so confuse since is stacked after a triplet 03:40:313 (4,5,6) - imo better move it to other place
04:47:354 (2,3) - stack they perfectly

Normal:

00:17:660 this rhythm is bad why no try this: (since you did it in together)

03:05:415 add circle

Xinely easy:

00:10:313 move it to x:108 y:100 since fix a little de distance error and look better
05:20:721 (1) - here thats bad add 1 more repeat or add circle here 05:21:946 to fix rhythm

Sorry about short mod but map is almost perfect don kd if you dont do nothing bye bye
Topic Starter
Hinsvar

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, M4M!

General

倉木 麻衣 as Artist
Kuraki Mai as Romanised Artist
Overall, make the volume louder, 30% is way too quiet, also here 00:30:517 - starts a more louder part so this just fits
- 02:07:558 - From here, starting, the volume is too quiet
Add two more combo colours, the song is already so long, so the combo colours gives it a little more attraction and its better to play and not so boring combo colour wise. Try these or find more fitable yourself!


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,183,183
Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 255,255,130
Combo4 : 192,192,192

Dont forget to adjust them on all diffs

About the artist... See my reply to No_Gu's mod. For the volume... I don't think so. The quietness really fits with the song itself. And for the combo colours... Not sure; will discuss with Xinely later.

Normal

05:20:721 (1) - Either you remove combo here, to follow your own pattern or you make NC at 05:15:823 (5) - to adjust the combo Done stuff.
05:32:354 (3) - Delete this circle, the circle feels to much and here is no vocal anymore Done.
05:46:742 (1) - Combo spam, it is too much so delete NC I don't think so; this is to denote the end of the song.

Hard

00:11:232 (1) - Remove NC for consistence Nope; I'm following the stanza.
01:04:191 (1) - Combo spam, remove NC also it doesnt fit, even for the jump Done.

04:26:844 (3,1,2,3,1,2) - The jump from 3 to 1 doesnt fit in this low part, it is soft sung and not much jump vocal here, so make normal spacing to fit the song
Okay, okay, made a square and stuff here.
05:46:742 - Combo spam, it is too much so delete NC Same as Normal.

Thats it, song is nice and sung with heart. Wish you good luck with this.

Natsu wrote:

General:

Remove 13 from tags won't be searched because it has only 2 characters Nope; it's searchable in-game and is the part of "Giorgio 13" phrase.

Together:

03:40:925 this circle is so confuse since is stacked after a triplet 03:40:313 (4,5,6) - imo better move it to other place Nope; it's perfectly readable and won't be confusing.
04:47:354 (2,3) - stack they perfectly Did other stuff to this.

Normal:

00:17:660 this rhythm is bad why no try this: (since you did it in together)
Nope; I think the current rhythm is better than yours. It feels calmer and is more fitting with the song.
03:05:415 add circle There's nothing to follow there, so no.

Sorry about short mod but map is almost perfect don kd if you dont do nothing bye bye
Thanks for modding, guys \:D/

...And I forgot to work on No_Gu's mod for my parts on Together.

Oh well; will do it later.
Done it.

SHIT, FORGOT TO DO THE ONE ON LONEIGHT'S MOD.

...Later, I guess.
Done that too lol
scanter
Hi, m4m request :D

[General]
You should change artist 倉木麻衣 and Romanised Artist Kuraki Mai. because, this is changed rules :D


[Xinely's Easy]
00:37:864 (5) - Add clap on slider's tick
02:10:313 (4) - How about change repeat slider? like this. http://puu.sh/24zcD
02:56:538 (1) - Add whistle on slider's end?
03:01:742 (6) - Move to x:340, y:144
05:15:823 (1) - Add clap on slider's end
05:20:721 (1) - ^
05:30:517 (1) - Add whistle on slider's first & end
05:32:048 (2) - Add whistle

[Normal]
00:11:844 (3) - This circle is not perfect stacked. move to x:242, y:274
00:19:191 (4) - same. Move to x:158, y:36
00:48:272 - Add circle. because this have clap sound.
02:57:762 (2) - Clear clap at slider's end.
03:31:742 (1,3) - More bending?
03:54:395 (5) - Move x:128, y:228. looks more better.

[Together]
00:23:170 (1) - How about this? because, this have vocal's vibration http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/618729
This is code.
464,84,23170,2,0,P|452:136|452:136|452:152|452:152|444:148|444:148|448:164|448:164|440:160|440:160|445:176|445:176|436:172|436:172|437:187|437:187|420:248,1,200
00:24:089 (7) - Move x:348, y:308
00:36:946 (5) - Move x:96, y:176? looks more better.
01:05:874 (3) - Move x:336, y:204 this is not standard stream's distance.
01:16:436 (6) - Add clap on slider's first
01:46:436 (1) - Clear slider's main whistle?
01:57:303 (7) - Move to x:184, y:248. looks more better.
01:57:456 (8) - same as opinion. move to x:148, y:232
02:29:140 (4) - Move to x:61, y:99
02:39:089 (4) - Move to x:184, y:316
02:58:681 (3) - Clear clap at slider's end. because, this haven't any sound.
03:04:191 (4) - Add clap
03:05:415 (2) - Clear clap
03:25:925 (1,2,3) - Move x:284, y:204?
04:19:191 (3) - Clear slider's main whistle
04:55:619 (3) - Move x:188, y:252. looks more better.
05:21:334 (4) - Add clap

Awesome map and best quality! :D good luck for rank >.<
Topic Starter
Hinsvar

scanter wrote:

Hi, m4m request :D

[General]
You should change artist 倉木麻衣 and Romanised Artist Kuraki Mai. because, this is changed rules :D Waiting when this is about to get ranked. See my reply to No_Gu's mod for details.

[Normal]
00:11:844 (3) - This circle is not perfect stacked. move to x:242, y:274 Done.
00:19:191 (4) - same. Move to x:158, y:36 ^
00:48:272 - Add circle. because this have clap sound. ^
02:57:762 (2) - Clear clap at slider's end. Nope; it clearly needs one, according to the song.
03:31:742 (1,3) - More bending? The shape itself should be fine.
03:54:395 (5) - Move x:128, y:228. looks more better. Done.

[Together]
00:23:170 (1) - How about this? because, this have vocal's vibration http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/618729
This is code.
464,84,23170,2,0,P|452:136|452:136|452:152|452:152|444:148|444:148|448:164|448:164|440:160|440:160|445:176|445:176|436:172|436:172|437:187|437:187|420:248,1,200
Uh, not I guess; I prefer a straight slider here, but good job right there~
00:24:089 (7) - Move x:348, y:308 Nope. Just no.
01:05:874 (3) - Move x:336, y:204 this is not standard stream's distance. Uh, it IS though...
01:46:436 (1) - Clear slider's main whistle? It's actually needed, so no...
02:58:681 (3) - Clear clap at slider's end. because, this haven't any sound. ...Yes. Removed.
03:04:191 (4) - Add clap lol missing clap. Done.
03:05:415 (2) - Clear clap ^
04:19:191 (3) - Clear slider's main whistle Intentional to follow the vocal.
04:55:619 (3) - Move x:188, y:252. looks more better. Done.

Awesome map and best quality! :D good luck for rank >.<
Thanks for modding \owo/
Yasora
buset dah lagu panjang

Easy
00:10:007 (1,2) - ng, I think be more easier if not 1/2 notes in first time altough that follow the vocal. maybe, change this into one slider?
00:12:762 (5) - move this into x:220 y:312 so that make symmetry with (3,4)
00:18:272 (5,1) - I think begin note in red tick is a bit hard to catch for easy and after that 1/2. move circle (5) into 00:19:497 and move slider (1) into 00:18:272 like this the patterns are up to you~
00:32:354 (4) - use code below to make this slider blanket (3)?
316,220,32354,2,0,P|252:200|236:136,1,130,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:47:660 (3) - I guess clap sound should in the tail, not in the head
00:55:619 (2) - move this 1 grid down so that align with (3)?
00:57:456 (5,1,2) - this rhythm good, but the patterns made little confuse.
01:15:517 (3) - since you made (1) straight into (2), why not make this straight too with (1) and (2)?
01:26:232 (3) - I'm worried about slider tail too close with slider head (almost overlap orz). consider change into another shape..
01:39:089 (1) - this is overlap with 01:36:640 (3) - try to move into another place so that more visible
02:10:313 (4) - this, I guess just make this straight like (3) more look better.. also, add clap in the head?
02:18:272 (2) - move this to in front of (1)'s tail? just make easier to click
02:19:956 - no add a green line for clap sound in white tick?
02:22:558 (2) - add clap in the head
02:56:538 (1) - make soft curve for this slider so the tail can align with (2)? like this
03:00:517 (5) - move this 2 grid left
03:12:150 (1) - remove nc in here and add in 03:13:987 (3) - ? just make the 03:11:232 (1,2) - is not too short..
03:27:762 (2,3,4,5) - this patterns was a bit confusing, because (5) will overlaped with (2,3,4) hitburst. consider to change another patterns in here
04:27:150 (1) - same with 01:26:232 (3)
04:56:538 (1) - too many repeats in here, will make newbie player break the combo for the first time ><
05:02:966 (2) - I think finish sound in the tail too suddenly and loud.. maybe remove it?
05:25:619 (1) - same as 04:56:538 (1) -
05:30:517 (1) - ^
05:32:966 (3) - honestly, this slider has weird shape in my eyes .-.
05:41:844 (3) - move last point 2 grid up?

Normal
00:42:762 (3) - change the shape like this? the current is weird because have straight direction..
01:38:170 (6) - move this 1 grid down lol..
02:22:252 (5) - same with 00:42:762 (3) - just make better looking =3=/ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/624360
02:24:089 (2) - remove whistle? I think weird to hear because (3)'s head has whistle again..

naisu =3=

will mod collab diff and sure will edit this post later biling krisis orz
Topic Starter
Hinsvar

Yasora wrote:

buset dah lagu panjang Cuma enam menit lol

Normal
00:42:762 (3) - change the shape like this? the current is weird because have straight direction.. Just made it curved up there.
01:38:170 (6) - move this 1 grid down lol.. lol done
02:22:252 (5) - same with 00:42:762 (3) - just make better looking =3=/ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/624360 ^
02:24:089 (2) - remove whistle? I think weird to hear because (3)'s head has whistle again.. Removed the one on 02:24:395 instead.

naisu =3= Thanks .3.

will mod collab diff and sure will edit this post later biling krisis orz Santai, ditunggu kok~
Thanks lol

Still waiting for the mod on Together~
Xinely
fix all expect the heart's slider Bikinnya susah lel . Ngeditnya apalagi, bikin stresss waaaaaaaaaaaaa *plak
Xinely
hi baka ~
try to mod your part www

[Normal]
make same combo colour with other diff?
00:40:007 (8) - x:412 y: 164?
00:42:150 - clap tick?
00:45:823 (2) - x: 328 y:72
01:10:925 (3) - make little curved?
01:40:925 (5) - make this slider's tail stacked with 01:39:395 (2) - ?
02:26:844 (5) - remove all hitsound and use clap in head, whistle in tail?
02:54:089 (2) - stacked with 02:52:252 (7) - ? if yes, fix the spacing after this w
03:24:395 (4) - better if copy paste from 03:23:170 (2) - for same shape
03:47:048 (1) - since after spin, maybe put in near from center. try (1) x: 256 y:192. (2) x:144 y:36 and (3) stacked with (1) ?

[Together]
00:13:221 (6) - 1 grid up
01:41:232 (2) - just suggestion to put in x:60 y:108
03:43:681 (2) - just suggestion again x: 472 y:276 to make straight with 03:42:456 (2) - - ?
04:25:619 (2) - err, use spacing 1,00?

Dasar baka so pro
Good Luck ya :3
Zero__wind
Hi :3
I'm here just with a smll opinion of mine.
When I test play your collab diff, I found that I'm not too fond of this arrangement 05:00:823 (2,3,4) -
maybe change the order into two sliders followed bt a circle, or a circle between two sliders will be better.

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Hinsvar

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi :3
I'm here just with a smll opinion of mine.
When I test play your collab diff, I found that I'm not too fond of this arrangement 05:00:823 (2,3,4) -
maybe change the order into two sliders followed bt a circle, or a circle between two sliders will be better.

Good luck~
The current rhythm (a circle followed by two 1/4 sliders) fits the song better, IMO, so I'll keep it, but thanks for coming again I guess .-.

Also will check Xinely's mod later ._.
V E
yoo,,, dari huequehehe :DD

xinely

01:26:232 - use grid level 3, easier to make a simetry heart slider
280,184,86232,2,0,B|312:144|344:176|336:240|304:272|256:292|256:292|208:272|176:240|168:176|200:144|232:184,1,390,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
ntar next combo geser kebawah dkit aja....
01:45:211 - apus finish
04:27:150 - slider cinta lagi ^^
232,96,267150,6,0,B|192:16|120:72|104:136|136:208|176:248|256:276|256:276|336:248|376:208|408:136|392:72|320:16|280:96,1,715,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
05:18:272 - NC aja gmn? soalnya dari ngikutin vocal, trus instr.
05:23:170 - ^
05:28:068 - ^
05:32:966 - ^
05:37:864 - ^

together


01:51:640 - flownya kurang enak imo,, mending tuker slider sama repeaternya...
02:11:997 - remove finnish, klo gk mau tambahin finnish juga di 02:12:915
02:13:068 (4) - remove end slider whistle?
02:40:313 - swap NC?
02:42:762 - swap NC after do ^
02:45:211 - NC
02:56:538 - NC?

well, gk banyak2, karena sudah berbintang banyak dan banyak yg mod, dan tentunya banyak yg sudah diperbaiki :yodawgslap, kkk
Xinely

selova wrote:

yoo,,, dari huequehehe :DD

xinely

01:26:232 - use grid level 3, easier to make a simetry heart slider ngikut :3
280,184,86232,2,0,B|312:144|344:176|336:240|304:272|256:292|256:292|208:272|176:240|168:176|200:144|232:184,1,390,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
ntar next combo geser kebawah dkit aja....
01:45:211 - apus finish done
04:27:150 - slider cinta lagi ^^ sebesar rasa suka ku ke hinsvar *runs . ngikut
232,96,267150,6,0,B|192:16|120:72|104:136|136:208|176:248|256:276|256:276|336:248|376:208|408:136|392:72|320:16|280:96,1,715,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
05:18:272 - NC aja gmn? soalnya dari ngikutin vocal, trus instr. sebenarnya gk masalah sih imo.. err gpp deh gni aja huehue (skalian buat semua yg d bawah)
05:23:170 - ^
05:28:068 - ^
05:32:966 - ^
05:37:864 - ^

together


01:51:640 - flownya kurang enak imo,, mending tuker slider sama repeaternya... nunggu respon lain deh :3
02:11:997 - remove finnish, klo gk mau tambahin finnish juga di 02:12:915
02:13:068 (4) - remove end slider whistle?
02:40:313 - swap NC? oke2, ngikut NC yg dibawahnya jg
02:42:762 - swap NC after do ^
02:45:211 - NC
02:56:538 - NC?

well, gk banyak2, karena sudah berbintang banyak dan banyak yg mod, dan tentunya banyak yg sudah diperbaiki :yodawgslap, kkk
makasih selova atas slider cinta nya ~ <3 *slapped by hinsvar

Edit: digendong hinsvar (?)
Topic Starter
Hinsvar

Xinely wrote:

hi baka ~
try to mod your part www wwwwwwwwww

[Normal]
make same combo colour with other diff? Forgot to change the colour on other diffs `-`
00:40:007 (8) - x:412 y: 164? Done~
00:42:150 - clap tick? No need there~
00:45:823 (2) - x: 328 y:72 Hmm? Will follow I guess.
01:10:925 (3) - make little curved? k.
01:40:925 (5) - make this slider's tail stacked with 01:39:395 (2) - ? Impossible lol
02:26:844 (5) - remove all hitsound and use clap in head, whistle in tail? Done.
02:54:089 (2) - stacked with 02:52:252 (7) - ? if yes, fix the spacing after this w ^
03:24:395 (4) - better if copy paste from 03:23:170 (2) - for same shape This is intentional~
03:47:048 (1) - since after spin, maybe put in near from center. try (1) x: 256 y:192. (2) x:144 y:36 and (3) stacked with (1) ? Umm, I actually think putting it on the center will make it harder to catch...

[Together]
00:13:221 (6) - 1 grid up Done.
01:41:232 (2) - just suggestion to put in x:60 y:108 But I want to make a perfect triangle there wa
03:43:681 (2) - just suggestion again x: 472 y:276 to make straight with 03:42:456 (2) - - ? ^
04:25:619 (2) - err, use spacing 1,00? This place is good enough to make a jump~

Dasar baka so pro | wwwww
Good Luck ya :3 :3

selova wrote:

yoo,,, dari huequehehe :DD

together

02:11:997 - remove finnish, klo gk mau tambahin finnish juga di 02:12:915 Nope, di situ perlu, dan finish gak diperluin di 02:12:915, trust me.
02:13:068 (4) - remove end slider whistle? Itu ngikut pianonya...
02:56:538 - NC? Did this and that there lawl~

well, gk banyak2, karena sudah berbintang banyak dan banyak yg mod, dan tentunya banyak yg sudah diperbaiki :yodawgslap, kkk
Thanks untuk mod kalian berdua \o\

*gendong Meli (?)*
tutuhaha
from popner queue~

[Together]
00:19:191 (2) - follow music, move it to x64 y184 make a small jump and will look better with 3
00:24:395 (3,4) - move to x248 y284 will look better with 5
00:29:599 (3,1) - try to use the same space like "2-3"
00:39:395 (6,1) - listen those rhythm, I think you can find more good way to explain this part, not just follow vocal
01:11:997 (X) - add note?
01:48:578 (2) - move x184 y224 will look better with 1 and next 1
02:26:232 (X) - there I am sure has note O.O
02:26:844 (1,2,3,4) - space..
03:13:068 (4) - move to x392 y64 will look better with 3
03:13:987 (6) - ↓
03:15:517 (2,3,4) -
03:17:354 (1,2,3) - ^same space?
03:25:007 (7) - up one grid
03:26:538 (3) - move to x368 y152
04:00:211 (1,2,3,4) - try to make those end look like same space
04:48:578 (3) - overlap with 1 and 2?
04:55:619 (3,4,5) - space
04:56:538 (6,1) - try to make a small jump?

no many problem in another two diff~~
Topic Starter
Hinsvar

tutuhaha wrote:

from popner queue~

[Together]
00:19:191 (2) - follow music, move it to x64 y184 make a small jump and will look better with 3 Done.
00:24:395 (3,4) - move to x248 y284 will look better with 5 ^
00:29:599 (3,1) - try to use the same space like "2-3" I'm fine with what I have now, so no.
01:48:578 (2) - move x184 y224 will look better with 1 and next 1 ...Since when did the note get dragged there again? Fixed.
02:26:232 (X) - there I am sure has note O.O Added.
02:26:844 (1,2,3,4) - space.. ...What's wrong with this?
04:48:578 (3) - overlap with 1 and 2?Fixed.
04:55:619 (3,4,5) - space Can't see anything wrong here...
04:56:538 (6,1) - try to make a small jump?Done, I guess?

no many problem in another two diff~~
Thanks for modding \o/
popner
Hi~ From my queue.

[Xinely's Easy]
00:10:925 (2,3,4) - make a better blanket? Like:
00:31:436 (3,4) - ^
00:33:578 (5) - spacing issue.
01:45:823 (4) - wiggling slider usually causes reading difficulty for new players, be they can not judge the real slider velocity. So please avoid using this kind of slider in Easy/Normal.
04:40:619 - I can hear heart beat here. Add a note to follow it?
04:43:068 - ^
04:47:660 (1) - miss NC
05:28:068 (4,5) - try to avoid the overlap. Looks bad.
05:45:211 (1) - miss NC

[Normal]
02:41:538 (5,2) - symmetry?
02:56:232 (5) - move to here to make it in the same line as 02:56:538 (6)?
03:34:191 (5) - make it symmetric like this?

[Together]
Use same combo color as other diffs?
00:34:038 - I can hear drum here. Why not add a note here to follow it?
01:37:864 (1) - remove NC for consistency?
01:56:538 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not exactly in a line. Try to move 01:56:538 (2,3) a little to make them neater.
02:30:211 (7) - I think rotate it a little provides a better flow:
03:16:130 (5,6) - make them symmetric?
03:17:354 (1,2,3) - spacing issue.
05:18:885 (1,2,3) - not in a line.
05:26:844 (1) - spacing issue.
05:32:966 (4,2) - try to avoid the overlap.

Generally I think you need to put more attention on the details: for example, [Together] 02:20:721 (3,5) - you want to make blanket for those sliders, but you failed to make blanket between (3,5):
They are too close to each other. 02:30:823 (8,1) and 02:32:048 (1,3) is similar. Try to make all these spacing near your normal distance(1.0x) so the pattern can be more neat. Another example, [Together] 02:40:313 (1) and 02:42:762 (4), it seems that they are dragged randomly. At least through out the map, when you use long slider like these, you should use similar curve to make consistency. This suggestion apply to all your diffs.

GL~
Xinely
fix all
thanks popner ~
Easy diff
and
together
Topic Starter
Hinsvar

popner wrote:

Hi~ From my queue.

[Normal]
02:41:538 (5,2) - symmetry? Nope, (2)'s symmetrical (kinda?) with 02:44:599 (3).
02:56:232 (5) - move to here to make it in the same line as 02:56:538 (6)? ...I don't see any difference to be honest.
03:34:191 (5) - make it symmetric like this? Making it symmetric will make it look weird compared to the rest of the patterns around here, IMO...

[Together]
Use same combo color as other diffs? Oops. Fixed.
01:37:864 (1) - remove NC for consistency? Done.

Generally I think you need to put more attention on the details: for example, [Together] 02:20:721 (3,5) - you want to make blanket for those sliders, but you failed to make blanket between (3,5):
They are too close to each other. 02:30:823 (8,1) and 02:32:048 (1,3) is similar. Try to make all these spacing near your normal distance(1.0x) so the pattern can be more neat. Another example, [Together] 02:40:313 (1) and 02:42:762 (4), it seems that they are dragged randomly. At least through out the map, when you use long slider like these, you should use similar curve to make consistency. This suggestion apply to all your diffs.
Hmm, yeah, thanks for the mod and the tips~ :D
Niva
Hi Hinsvar, I'll mod it but very slowly orz (due to school exams ongoing)

[General]

-> Use R:255 G:218 B:140 for your third combo color? idk why your current brown looks more gloomy compared to the other...
-> There are many bass beats that can be beautifully amplified with Sampleset: Normal Addition: Soft here actually, for example 00:30:521~

[Together]

  1. 00:10:011 (1) - Remove whistle to emphasize the whistle on (2)?
  2. 00:18:276 (1,2,3) - To beautify this part, use 120° rotation instead? You'll only need to adjust (2) anyway:
  3. 00:20:725 (1,2,3) - I understand what are you trying to create here though, however the angle you're taking is too forced imo... Try this instead?
  4. 00:28:991 (2,3) - Use circle + 1/2 slider + 1/2 slider here instead? The music's emphasize is on 00:29:297 actually (:
  5. 00:29:603 (3) - Why Sampleset: Normal here on the repeat o.o - As I mentioned in General, Normal sampleset works much better on 00:30:521 - I think whistle (to fit the vocals) is more proper here :3
  6. 00:34:960 (6,7) - This spacing, is it intentional? (moving (6) to ~x:443 y:147 would do good already though)
  7. 00:38:480 (3,4,5,6,7) - Umm, why overlap... Try this instead?
  8. 00:43:991 (3,4,5) - Would be awesome if you can stack (3) to 00:45:215 (1)'s end here and arrange (4,5) somehow here~
  9. 00:48:889 (2,3,1) - Here, would be much better imo if you can create a small jump by placing (2) to be encircled perfectly with (1)'s path and arrange the notes after - it fits the instrument very much anyway (:
    306,203,48889,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    180,202,49195,2,0,L|80:202,2,100,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    241,312,50113,6,0,B|200:358|200:358|120:377|78:307,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  10. 00:52:256 (1,3) - On endpoint slider jumps like this, it's best to give some angle between each others' endpoint like this (not directly below it/90°) :
  11. 01:04:195 (1) - I don't think NC is necessary here, without NC it'll emphasize the stack on 01:04:807 (1) actually (:
  12. 01:09:705 (1) - Use circle only? The music obviously doesn't continue here orz
  13. 01:10:011 (2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm, I don't really think this pattern plays well, the jump on (3,4) feels too sudden while the anti-jump on (5,6) kills the previous jump's feel - I think it's better to stay consistent with the jump's distance here, for example:
  14. 01:11:542 (7,8,9) - Again, is this spacing intentional?
  15. 01:18:582 (1,2,3,4) - Just a suggestion here, consider to do an accelerated spacing like this here to fit the vocals?
  16. 01:24:093 (2,3) - Again, this jump is unexpected imo - something like this should work better actually xD
  17. 01:43:072 (4,1,2) - Add whistle on (4)'s repeat, together with clap - remove whistle on (4)'s end and (2)
  18. 01:43:991 (1,2,3) - Consider manual stacking like this? Plays much more dramatic after 01:43:072 (4), really~
    104,320,103991,5,6,0:0:0:0:
    99,334,104297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    94,348,104603,2,0,L|194:348,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  19. 01:45:215 (1,2,3) - If you do above suggestion, don't forget to adjust this as well (:
  20. 01:57:460 (8) - To give better impression before the break, I highly recommend to shorten this slider to 1/2 and create a small jump with three circles from there until 01:58:685 (1)~
  21. 02:08:476 (1) - Remove whistle on slider's start? (again Sampleset: Normal Addition: Soft works really good here)
  22. 02:10:313 (5) - Not a big issue but... Move to ~x:111 y:142? Also consider making this parallel with your next slider actually:
  23. 02:12:915 (3) - If you do above suggestion - tilt this one to the left a bit?
  24. 02:21:640 (4) - The music is CLEARLY 3x 1/4 here, well 1/2 is usable but something like this would definitely do better though:
  25. 02:26:844 (1,2,3,4,1) - There are a lot of hitsound variation to do here instead of all 1/2 claps to produce a groovier rhythm, really - I've experimented around here and this would be the best in my opinion:
    1. 02:26:844 (1) - Add clap on slider's end
    2. 02:27:150 (2) - Remove clap on slider's start
    3. 02:27:762 (4) - Add clap on slider's start
    4. 02:28:068 (1) - (again) Sampleset: Normal Addition: Soft
  26. 02:30:823 (8,9) - Umm, why overlap here? Also I highly suggest to use circle first then 1/1 slider (instead of vice versa) because the stretching vocals are ongoing from 02:31:130 actually~
  27. 02:36:946 (5) - Add a small circular jump with (4) here?
    389,183,156946,2,0,P|345:211|277:211,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  28. 02:47:660 (2,3,4,5) - Umm, why don't you just made (2) symmetrical here o.o... Also I don't really like how (4) is overlapped much by (2)'s current path, I suggest a symmetrical jump here though:
  29. 02:50:109 (1) - ...then you can just make this encircling (3) afterwards~
  30. 02:51:027 (1,2,3) - Again here, slider jumps like this don't really build up a good flow if they're arranged in 180° angle imo - it would be better to make an arc movement between these three though:
  31. 03:01:895 (x) - Add note here? It's obvious the drums continued here...
  32. 03:07:252 (1,2,3) - Umm, to get flow you can just do a simple jump like this though:
  33. 03:11:232 (6,7) - The endpoint slider jump doesn't feel really well when they overlap, really - try this instead?
  34. 03:17:660 (3) - Minor stuff, move red waypoint to ~x:229 y:310?
  35. 03:21:946 (1) - It's not that hard to improve the flow here by making the slider's first half encircling (3), really (:
    156,179,201946,6,0,B|200:218|183:268|183:268|236:242|292:269,1,200,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  36. 03:25:466 (x) - Add note here to create a triple? (again) the piano is so obvious here xD
  37. 03:37:864 (4) - I recommend to connect them both using slider wave/tilted slider wave like this though, it looks less dull compared with your current shape:
  38. 03:40:925 (1,2,3,4,1) - Stacking (1) under previous (6) doesn't really work imo (breaks the jump's momentum), considering your square jump is big enough I think putting (1) in the center of the square followed by a pentagon like this should do MUCH better:
    185,249,220925,5,10,0:0:0:0:
    296,331,221232,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    400,240,221538,1,6,0:0:0:0:
    347,117,221844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    216,124,222150,5,10,0:0:0:0:
  39. 03:47:354 (2) - The music goes 1/6-ish here actually (no need to change anything, just mentioning xD)
  40. 03:51:334 (1) - Umm, why sudden straight long slider here... It kills the flow imo, perhaps try this:
  41. 04:00:211 (1) - I don't get why you don't continue to fulfill the pattern with something like this, really >_< (the rotation is 72° though)
  42. 04:05:415 - Is the inherit section here intentional? imo it's best to put the 10% in the spinner's end (not in the middle) because you don't have any transition between the 45% and 10% o.o
  43. 04:24:395 (1,2,3) - Not perfect but well... (you might need to readjust your previous (3) but this spot is PERFECT to deliver your artistic vision, really xD)
    203,367,264395,6,0,B|225:334|253:326|253:326|285:316|344:296|354:225|309:163|254:172,1,300,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,171,265619,2,0,B|203:163|158:225|168:296|227:316|259:326|259:326|287:334|309:367,1,300,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,245,266844,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  44. 04:34:803 (1) - Umm, not really sure whether this sharp turn fits your previous shapes' flow...
  45. 04:36:946 (1,2,3,4,5) - Err, I don't think you need spacing acceleration THIS much in the slow part, really >_< - perhaps try this instead:
  46. 04:38:476 (1,2,3,4) - Then follow it up with this kind of jump to emphasize the vocal's swing? It plays REALLY good, I guarantee (:
  47. 04:42:762 (4,5,6) - Once more, an endpoint slider jump won't play good if they overlap orz... (in this case imo it's better to create symmetry jump through y-axis though :3)
  48. 04:46:742 (x) - Add note? Feels weird the vocal discontinued here orz ._.
  49. 04:48:885 (4) - Considering (2,3)'s flow, how about making this slider facing right instead (with the red waypoint bending it down)? Plays better also with your next notes though~
  50. 04:58:681 (3,4) - CTRL + G one by one and give them further distance? This is to avoid a very sharp turn between your current (2,3) actually:
    285,127,298681,2,0,L|262:29,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    18,287,299293,2,0,L|40:384,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  51. 05:12:762 (5) - Due to stacking's nature, notice that 05:14:293 (1,2,3) almost touches your this slider - I recommend to change the shape into something like this though:
  52. 05:15:823 (1,2) - Why this overlap... It's not hard to avoid this overlap with some copy-paste magic, really >_<
    426,236,315823,6,0,P|482:248|527:237,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    336,180,316436,2,0,P|284:169|231:183,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  53. 05:20:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Umm, no whistle at all here? Whistle on (1) at least should be enough to accompany the vocals orz ._.
  54. 05:22:558 (1) - I highly recommend to continue (7)'s flow with tilted slider wave here:
    260,116,322558,6,0,B|214:132|163:104|163:104|114:76|68:89,1,200,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  55. 05:26:844 (1) - Hmm, it's more intuitive imo if you can keep your previous 05:25:619 (1,2) spacing here, and then use slowdown spacing from this note and after~
  56. 05:34:803 (2) - Move to ~x:321 y:200 to avoid overlap?
  57. 05:36:027 (6) - Moving this lower to adjust with above suggestion shouldn't hurt though, because something like this would give your previous flow back already:
  58. 05:46:742 (1) - To give a better impression towards the ending, how about placing this in ~x:260 y:292 to create symmetry with (3)? xD
Hmm, yep, there's still a lot of places for improvement though (especially Xinely's parts), the fact that Moway mentioned a lot of NC issues means that the combo placements aren't very solid as well (the map also doesn't really emphasize some part which better be emphasized though, but it shouldn't be a really major problem)
Moway
Hi, from popner's queue.

[Together]
00:32:966 (1) - maybe rotate this object 90 degrees, then readjust 00:33:885 (2,3,4) so that it is spaced closer. I don't think the way it is flows very well.

00:58:374 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe decrease the spacing here a bit, I think 1.0x maybe a bit too much.
01:04:803 (1) - remove NC
01:05:415 (2) - NC
01:06:027 (1) - remove NC
01:07:252 (3) - NC
01:08:323 (5) - delete this circle maybe, I don't hear any sounds and I think it plays fine without it.
01:19:803 (3) - NC
01:21:027 (1) - remove NC
01:21:946 (5) - NC
01:51:640 (7) - NC
01:52:558 (1) - remove NC
01:58:681 (1) - Add a whistle here maybe, I think having a sound here would be nice.
02:37:558 - add circle here and at 02:37:711, would fit better I think.
02:42:762 (4) - NC
03:19:497 (7) - NC
03:21:027 (1) - remove NC
03:21:946 (3) - NC
03:48:885 (5) - NC
03:50:109 (1) - remove NC
04:03:578 (1) - Map this part, have a spinner begin at 04:04:497 instead.
04:44:599 (1) - I'd say map this part and start the spinner at 04:45:211 instead to match the vocals.
05:06:027 (3) - NC
05:40:313 (1,2,3,4) - both of these are better with just repeating sliders I think.

That's all, good luck!
Xinely
almost fixed all
thanks moe modders ~ *runs

need space for code
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428,92,240823,2,0,P|423:143|389:180,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,288,241436,2,0,P|409:300|364:278,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,372,242048,2,0,P|248:327|255:277,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,236,242660,2,0,P|165:196|215:187,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,188,243272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Hinsvar

Niva wrote:

Hi Hinsvar, I'll mod it but very slowly orz (due to school exams ongoing)

[General]

-> Use R:255 G:218 B:140 for your third combo color? idk why your current brown looks more gloomy compared to the other... This color is based on the couple's hair color.
-> There are many bass beats that can be beautifully amplified with Sampleset: Normal Addition: Soft here actually, for example 00:30:521~ Hmm, the custom finish should be enough, though...

[Together]

  1. 00:10:011 (1) - Remove whistle to emphasize the whistle on (2)? Done.
  2. 00:18:276 (1,2,3) - To beautify this part, use 120° rotation instead? You'll only need to adjust (2) anyway:
    The current pattern works and fit better with the song's atmosphere, so I think I won't do this.
  3. 00:20:725 (1,2,3) - I understand what are you trying to create here though, however the angle you're taking is too forced imo... Try this instead?
    ...Changed, but different from that.
  4. 00:28:991 (2,3) - Use circle + 1/2 slider + 1/2 slider here instead? The music's emphasize is on 00:29:297 actually (: Done.
  5. 00:29:603 (3) - Why Sampleset: Normal here on the repeat o.o - As I mentioned in General, Normal sampleset works much better on 00:30:521 - I think whistle (to fit the vocals) is more proper here :3 Eh wait, it isn't supposed to be there...
  6. 00:52:256 (1,3) - On endpoint slider jumps like this, it's best to give some angle between each others' endpoint like this (not directly below it/90°) :
    ...idk actually; I can't see any problem with the stuff I have now.
  7. 01:04:195 (1) - I don't think NC is necessary here, without NC it'll emphasize the stack on 01:04:807 (1) actually (: Removed the NC.
  8. 01:43:072 (4,1,2) - Add whistle on (4)'s repeat, together with clap - remove whistle on (4)'s end and (2) Done.
  9. 01:43:991 (1,2,3) - Consider manual stacking like this? Plays much more dramatic after 01:43:072 (4), really~ Did something kinda similar like that.
    104,320,103991,5,6,0:0:0:0:
    99,334,104297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    94,348,104603,2,0,L|194:348,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  10. 01:45:215 (1,2,3) - If you do above suggestion, don't forget to adjust this as well (: Done.
...tidur dulu orz, nanti gw edit post kok (: Oke (:

Moway wrote:

Hi, from popner's queue.

[Together]
00:58:374 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe decrease the spacing here a bit, I think 1.0x maybe a bit too much. I don't think so; fits with the music.
01:04:803 (1) - remove NC Removed the one on 01:04:191 (1) instead.
01:05:415 (2) - NC Nope; why should I?
01:06:027 (1) - remove NC Done.
01:07:252 (3) - NC ^
01:08:323 (5) - delete this circle maybe, I don't hear any sounds and I think it plays fine without it. There IS a beat on that spot.
05:06:027 (3) - NC Done.

That's all, good luck!
Thanks for modding guys! \:D/
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