This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年1月13日 at 10:26:15

Artist: Kawada Mami
Title: Serment (TV Size)
Source: Shakugan no Shana III (Final)
Tags: opening LunaticP
BPM: 212
Filesize: 10731kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (2.39 stars, 90 notes)
2. Hard (4.99 stars, 235 notes)
3. Insane (4.9 stars, 340 notes)
4. Lunasa's Taiko Oni (4.89 stars, 508 notes)
5. Normal (4.32 stars, 143 notes)
6. Taiko Muzukashii (4.72 stars, 352 notes)

Download: Kawada Mami - Serment (TV Size)
Download: Kawada Mami - Serment (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st beatmap
Opening 2 from Shakugan no Shana III
Easy - Finished
Normal - Finished
Hard - Finished
Taiko Muzukashii - 100%
Taiko Oni - 100% by LunaticP
Insane - Finished
Status: Ranked
Redownload after 13/1 (Changed the BG file)

Hong Kong mapper~ Support~

[General]
Wow, the video quality is really bad
Use this one if you like http://puu.sh/1n3TO

[Insane]
00:06:369 - feels empty, add something here
00:06:511 (5,6) - awkward anti-jump
00:21:086 - add something
00:22:784 - ^
00:24:907 - ^
00:29:435 - ^
00:30:143 - ^
00:31:700 - ^
00:34:671 - ^
00:43:869 - ^
00:56:322 - ^
00:56:747 - ^
01:15:426 (3,4,5,6) - this is awkward as well

[Hard]
ehh, this doesn't look like the same mapper at all
Too many overlaps and awkward patterns, I suggest remapping this

[Normal]
AR+1
I'm concerned about the Slider Velocity here
Same here, not the same mapper
00:08:209 (2,3) - this is really hard to read
00:22:077 (3) - too many repeats, really confusing
00:35:096 (1) - ^
00:43:869 (1) - hidden
00:46:700 (6) - remove 1 repeat
00:52:360 (6,1,2) - un-equal spacing
00:54:907 (4,5,1) - ^
00:56:888 (2) - 1 grid right & down
01:01:983 (6,7,8) - not very friendly
01:18:964 (4,5,6,7,8) - evil ending, don't stack and don't put so many repeats

[Easy]
00:22:360 (3) - this should be at 00:22:077 - and fix spacing afterwards
00:36:228 (6,1) - please avoid this spacing, it's really frustrating D:
00:46:700 (7) - remove a repeat
01:19:530 (1) - end this at 01:20:945 -


This really need a lot of work. Well, don't give up!
Good luck~

Saten wrote:

[General]
Wow, the video quality is really bad
Use this one if you like http://puu.sh/1n3TO

[Insane]
00:06:369 - feels empty, add something here
00:06:511 (5,6) - awkward anti-jump
00:21:086 - add something
00:22:784 - ^
00:24:907 - ^
00:29:435 - ^
00:30:143 - ^
00:31:700 - ^
00:34:671 - ^
00:43:869 - ^
00:56:322 - ^
00:56:747 - ^
01:15:426 (3,4,5,6) - this is awkward as well

[Hard]
ehh, this doesn't look like the same mapper at all
Too many overlaps and awkward patterns, I suggest remapping this

[Normal]
AR+1
I'm concerned about the Slider Velocity here
Same here, not the same mapper
00:08:209 (2,3) - this is really hard to read
00:22:077 (3) - too many repeats, really confusing
00:35:096 (1) - ^
00:43:869 (1) - hidden
00:46:700 (6) - remove 1 repeat
00:52:360 (6,1,2) - un-equal spacing
00:54:907 (4,5,1) - ^
00:56:888 (2) - 1 grid right & down
01:01:983 (6,7,8) - not very friendly
01:18:964 (4,5,6,7,8) - evil ending, don't stack and don't put so many repeats

[Easy]
00:22:360 (3) - this should be at 00:22:077 - and fix spacing afterwards
00:36:228 (6,1) - please avoid this spacing, it's really frustrating D:
00:46:700 (7) - remove a repeat
01:19:530 (1) - end this at 01:20:945 -


This really need a lot of work. Well, don't give up!
Good luck~

Thank you very much for your advice!

Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[General]
Disable countdown and letterboxing during breaks.

[Taiko Muzukashii]
01:16:417 - replace with spinner
01:19:954 - replace with spinner
Maybe reduce scroll speed, since it's a bit fast for muzu players?
You can put an inherited timing point at 00:00:568 with silder velocity 0.8x, and change the other two points to 0.8 as well.

[Lunasa's Taiko Oni]
00:27:313 - k
It's a bit overmapped, try reducing some of the 5-streams to 3-streams.

Needs some work~

update

http://puu.sh/1nqkt

ok just these...good luck.

mintong89 wrote:

Taiko Mod ♪
卧槽都懂华文干嘛不用华文!!?? 都欺负我的英文 ;w;

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[Taiko Muzukashii]

00:11:888 - -> 00:18:681 - are you sure you don't want put anything? it seem weird.
00:28:586 - i hear drum sound at here. please put a d.
01:02:549 - i think k is fits better and 01:02:832 - D.

[Taiko Oni]

00:11:888 - -> 00:19:671 - 和Muzu的建议一样 0.0 真不放吗？ ╮(╯_╰)╭

都没问题 0.0....

ok just these...good luck.

Thx a lot

Easy
Some sliders could use some tweaking to look better, and just moving around to look perfect on the grid. Otherwise, this is pretty good

Normal
00:07:926 (1) - My OCD wants this a little to the right. Looks better that way


Hard

Insane

cirno- wrote:

Easy
Some sliders could use some tweaking to look better, and just moving around to look perfect on the grid. Otherwise, this is pretty good

Normal
00:07:926 (1) - My OCD wants this a little to the right. Looks better that way


Hard

SPOILER

circle size 4
00:14:294 (4,6) -
00:41:039 (6) - too short imo
00:58:586 (4) - ^
01:18:539 (3,4,5) - ^
00:41:039 (6,1,2,3,4) - ^

Insane

SPOILER

00:40:190 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Just to comment, This is the hardest part. Everything else I could pass.
01:01:417 (4) - Delete this perhaps? Sounds a little better without it.
01:04:530 (8,9,10) - Kind of awkward to read

Thx

[General]
- Can you improve the video quality? It's quite bad.
- Disable countdown


[Insane]
00:05:237 (1) - Shorten to 00:05:662 and keep the clap of its end. There is a clap on 00:05:662 in the music.
00:05:945 - Add a note if you fixed previous note.
00:25:756 (5) - Stack correctly under the tail of previous slider
00:30:143 (7) - Uhm... this spacing feels quite close to pervious note.
00:44:435 (5) - This anti jump feels bad in this part imo. Because the song is going to the climax.
00:57:737 (1,2,3,4) - These streams really doesn't fit music.
01:01:417 (4) - Missing clap?
01:11:039 (1,2,3) - Oh well, I'd like to put jumps
01:15:426 (3) - Add clap to reverse arrow
01:17:407 (4,5) - Switch their rhythm http://puu.sh/1sFwP
01:20:379 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Are they really necessary?


[Hard]
OD 6
00:14:435 (4,5) - Spacing trap? Please don't do this. Their shape square doesn't let players know spacing change.
00:23:492 - Add a note
00:30:992 (8,9,10) - Adjust spacings
00:41:888 (1) - Move to somewhere. It's too close to previous slider.
00:44:718 (7) - It touches HP bar.
00:46:134 (4) - Spacing
00:48:964 (8,9,1) - Look at these in test mode. It looks ugly due to stacks.
00:49:247 (1) - Add finish to head
00:51:086 (3) - Spacing
00:54:341 (1) - Remove NC
00:54:624 (2) - NC
01:02:124 (8) - I'd like to unstack this
01:07:077 (12) - Add finish to tail
01:02:549 (3) - I don't know what you are following. The lyrics 'ru~' starts from 01:02:832
01:14:860 (10,11,1) - Triple circles in BPM 212 is may be Insane

This diff really needs to improve rhythm and spacing.


[Normal]
00:09:624 (1) - Put finish instead of clap
00:45:851 (4) - It touches HP bar.
00:47:690 (1) - Start from 00:47:832 / End at 00:49:247 and add finish
00:49:247 (1) - Delete this if you fixed previous spinner
00:52:360 (6) - NC
00:52:926 (1) - Remove NC
01:07:360 (1) - Add finish to head
01:13:303 (4) - Spacing
01:19:247 (6) - Maybe stack under 5
01:20:945 - I recommend map to the end of the song


[Easy]
00:09:624 (1) - Put finish instead of clap
00:49:813 (2) - Fix direction like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/500100
00:53:775 (3) - Extend to 00:54:341
01:19:530 (1) - Add finish


I think everything is important I modded.
Alright, I'd advise your first map.
Follow the song, then you won't fail at least on the rhythm.
Choose what you wanna follow, vocal or instrument.
That's all that I can say for now.

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
- Can you improve the video quality? It's quite bad.
- Disable countdown


[Insane]
00:05:237 (1) - Shorten to 00:05:662 and keep the clap of its end. There is a clap on 00:05:662 in the music.
00:05:945 - Add a note if you fixed previous note.
00:25:756 (5) - Stack correctly under the tail of previous slider
00:30:143 (7) - Uhm... this spacing feels quite close to pervious note.
00:44:435 (5) - This anti jump feels bad in this part imo. Because the song is going to the climax.
00:57:737 (1,2,3,4) - These streams really doesn't fit music.
01:01:417 (4) - Missing clap?
01:11:039 (1,2,3) - Oh well, I'd like to put jumps
01:15:426 (3) - Add clap to reverse arrow
01:17:407 (4,5) - Switch their rhythm http://puu.sh/1sFwP
01:20:379 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Are they really necessary?


[Hard]
OD 6
00:14:435 (4,5) - Spacing trap? Please don't do this. Their shape square doesn't let players know spacing change.
00:23:492 - Add a note
00:30:992 (8,9,10) - Adjust spacings
00:41:888 (1) - Move to somewhere. It's too close to previous slider.
00:44:718 (7) - It touches HP bar.
00:46:134 (4) - Spacing
00:48:964 (8,9,1) - Look at these in test mode. It looks ugly due to stacks.
00:49:247 (1) - Add finish to head
00:51:086 (3) - Spacing
00:54:341 (1) - Remove NC
00:54:624 (2) - NC
01:02:124 (8) - I'd like to unstack this
01:07:077 (12) - Add finish to tail
01:02:549 (3) - I don't know what you are following. The lyrics 'ru~' starts from 01:02:832
01:14:860 (10,11,1) - Triple circles in BPM 212 is may be Insane

This diff really needs to improve rhythm and spacing.


[Normal]
00:09:624 (1) - Put finish instead of clap
00:45:851 (4) - It touches HP bar.
00:47:690 (1) - Start from 00:47:832 / End at 00:49:247 and add finish
00:49:247 (1) - Delete this if you fixed previous spinner
00:52:360 (6) - NC
00:52:926 (1) - Remove NC
01:07:360 (1) - Add finish to head
01:13:303 (4) - Spacing
01:19:247 (6) - Maybe stack under 5
01:20:945 - I recommend map to the end of the song


[Easy]
00:09:624 (1) - Put finish instead of clap
00:49:813 (2) - Fix direction like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/500100
00:53:775 (3) - Extend to 00:54:341
01:19:530 (1) - Add finish


I think everything is important I modded.
Alright, I'd advise your first map.
Follow the song, then you won't fail at least on the rhythm.
Choose what you wanna follow, vocal or instrument.
That's all that I can say for now.

Thank you very much for the mod and advise

General, Timing and Design
Combo colours 1 and 4 are pretty close...

Easy
HP Drain lower by one level. And lower slider velocity? It's kinda fast for noobs... And try making the sliders prettier while you're at it.
00:05:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part is kinda boring ^^" Or at least weird? Try making a steady and slow pattern here...
01:00:567 (3) - Distance Snap

Normal
00:36:228 (1) - Make the slider prettier :3
00:59:011 (1) - Avoid double return sliders in Easy. Especially super short ones.
01:12:737 (2,3) - Spread out. Cuz all your previous circles on the same spot were 1/2 a beat apart. People would assume and not know there is a one beat diff.
01:22:360 (5,6,7) - ^ but acceptable

Hard
00:37:360 (3) - Take away one repeat
00:47:124 (4) - Don't hide it...

That's all ^^ not modding insane

You have been modded out by Yurun Neram.

yurunneram wrote:

General, Timing and Design
Combo colours 1 and 4 are pretty close...

Easy
HP Drain lower by one level. And lower slider velocity? It's kinda fast for noobs... And try making the sliders prettier while you're at it.
00:05:096 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part is kinda boring ^^" Or at least weird? Try making a steady and slow pattern here...
01:00:567 (3) - Distance Snap

Normal
00:36:228 (1) - Make the slider prettier :3
00:59:011 (1) - Avoid double return sliders in Easy. Especially super short ones.
01:12:737 (2,3) - Spread out. Cuz all your previous circles on the same spot were 1/2 a beat apart. People would assume and not know there is a one beat diff.
01:22:360 (5,6,7) - ^ but acceptable

Hard
00:37:360 (3) - Take away one repeat
00:47:124 (4) - Don't hide it...

That's all ^^ not modding insane

You have been modded out by Yurun Neram.

Thanks

Req. Taiko mod~>.0

All of them are suggestions~

[Taiko Muzukashii]
00:08:917 - add d
00:19:105 - d
00:24:624 - move to 00:24:483

[Lunasa's Taiko Oni]
no problem.

nice map~good luck >.0~

NewibornCLivee wrote:

Req. Taiko mod~>.0

All of them are suggestions~

[Taiko Muzukashii]
00:08:917 - add d
00:19:105 - d
00:24:624 - move to 00:24:483

[Lunasa's Taiko Oni]
no problem.

nice map~good luck >.0~

Thanks

hi :3

[General]
*taiko muzukashii bg.png & taiko oni bg.png
their size are unrankable,you should use 1024x768

*your combo colors are inconsistent ,since there're not many differences , you may change them

*your audio lead-ins are inconsistent ,this is unrankable , change them

*kiai in insane diff is different from the other diff

*about the title , i think you should follow this :http://osu.ppy.sh/b/135588

[Easy]
00:00:568 (1) - it's confusing for beginners , consider changing into a spinner or what?

00:22:926 (4,5,1) - i suggest your making the DS bigger , since pattern like this is unreadable for beginners

00:39:907 (4,5,6) - too hard ...

01:01:417 (5) - begin at 01:01:700 - will be better

by the way ,sliders in this diff are not so good-looking , try make them by the new editor

[Normal]
00:35:945 (2) - hey,this one is too close to the previous one

00:51:794 - had better not make this empty , or it will be strange for players

01:10:756 - ^ better to add a reverse

01:19:105 (5) - too hard , delete this note

*the more empty the map is ,the harder players catch the rhythm ,especially with DT+HR+HD in E/N

[Taiko Muzukashii]
00:00:568 (1,2) - WTF!? there mustn't be two Ds so close ! delete ②

[Hard]
...just saying this diff is too hard for a hard diff

[Insane]
*use CS4 plz since this diff is considered possible to be played with HR

00:52:643 - why make this empty :/

don't be afraid to use bigger DS in I diffs :/

頑張って＼(*⌒0⌒)♪
good luck with rank　(´∀｀)
哭哭哦 写完才发现是香港 不改了 英文不好真是不好意思 加油加油

raririn wrote:

hi :3

[General]
*taiko muzukashii bg.png & taiko oni bg.png
their size are unrankable,you should use 1024x768

*your combo colors are inconsistent ,since there're not many differences , you may change them

*your audio lead-ins are inconsistent ,this is unrankable , change them

*kiai in insane diff is different from the other diff

*about the title , i think you should follow this :http://osu.ppy.sh/b/135588

[Easy]
00:00:568 (1) - it's confusing for beginners , consider changing into a spinner or what?

00:22:926 (4,5,1) - i suggest your making the DS bigger , since pattern like this is unreadable for beginners

00:39:907 (4,5,6) - too hard ...

01:01:417 (5) - begin at 01:01:700 - will be better

by the way ,sliders in this diff are not so good-looking , try make them by the new editor

[Normal]
00:35:945 (2) - hey,this one is too close to the previous one

00:51:794 - had better not make this empty , or it will be strange for players

01:10:756 - ^ better to add a reverse

01:19:105 (5) - too hard , delete this note

*the more empty the map is ,the harder players catch the rhythm ,especially with DT+HR+HD in E/N

[Taiko Muzukashii]
00:00:568 (1,2) - WTF!? there mustn't be two Ds so close ! delete ②

[Hard]
...just saying this diff is too hard for a hard diff

[Insane]
*use CS4 plz since this diff is considered possible to be played with HR

00:52:643 - why make this empty :/

don't be afraid to use bigger DS in I diffs :/

頑張って＼(*⌒0⌒)♪
good luck with rank　(´∀｀)
哭哭哦 写完才发现是香港 不改了 英文不好真是不好意思 加油加油

Thanks a lot

[General]

Audio Lead-in: Lunasa's Taiko Oni has 2007 and Taiko Muzukashii 1985. I suggest to use 1996 like other diffs instead.

BG: taiko oni bg.png is 1020x735 and taiko muzukashii bg.png is 1018x732, I think you should fix it.

Slider Velocity: I think you use a SV too high for the BPM you have. I really suggest you to reduce it (yes, this will mean re-make almost all sliders).

Suggestion:
Easy:   0,80
Normal: 1,00
Hard:   1,20
Insane: 1,40 (optional)

[Easy]
00:02:832 (1) - End this slider on red tick (00:02:973 - )
00:03:681 (2) - Move to 00:03:398 - and add a repeat
00:43:020 (2) - Move to 00:42:879 -
00:47:690 (1) - Since it's easy I suggest to end this spinner at 00:49:247 - with finish+whistle and to delete 00:49:247 (1) - (new combo on 00:49:813 (2) - )
00:52:360 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part has randomly placed sliders I suggest to place them better, like you did here 00:41:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

[Normal]
00:02:832 (1) - As easy
00:03:681 (2) - ^
01:27:030 (5) - well, unexpected. I suggest to remove.

[Hard]
HP Drain Rate: 4
Approach Rate: 6
Circle Size: 3 (optional)
00:58:586 (4) - End of this slider is unsnapped. End it at 00:58:728 -

[Insane]
Maybe it's just me, but this diff has no sense in most parts

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[General]

Audio Lead-in: Lunasa's Taiko Oni has 2007 and Taiko Muzukashii 1985. I suggest to use 1996 like other diffs instead.

BG: taiko oni bg.png is 1020x735 and taiko muzukashii bg.png is 1018x732, I think you should fix it.

Slider Velocity: I think you use a SV too high for the BPM you have. I really suggest you to reduce it (yes, this will mean re-make almost all sliders).

Suggestion:
Easy:   0,80
Normal: 1,00
Hard:   1,20
Insane: 1,40 (optional)

[Easy]
00:02:832 (1) - End this slider on red tick (00:02:973 - )
00:03:681 (2) - Move to 00:03:398 - and add a repeat
00:43:020 (2) - Move to 00:42:879 -
00:47:690 (1) - Since it's easy I suggest to end this spinner at 00:49:247 - with finish+whistle and to delete 00:49:247 (1) - (new combo on 00:49:813 (2) - )
00:52:360 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part has randomly placed sliders I suggest to place them better, like you did here 00:41:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

[Normal]
00:02:832 (1) - As easy
00:03:681 (2) - ^
01:27:030 (5) - well, unexpected. I suggest to remove.

[Hard]
HP Drain Rate: 4
Approach Rate: 6
Circle Size: 3 (optional)
00:58:586 (4) - End of this slider is unsnapped. End it at 00:58:728 -

[Insane]
Maybe it's just me, but this diff has no sense in most parts

Thanks

妈唉我也mod半天一看啦啦玲才知道你是香港的;_;

[Insane]
00:03:964 (6) - 在白线停(00:04:247 - ),在红线加一个note(00:04:388 - )
00:29:011 (2,3) - 用1.5x的间距比较好
00:58:728 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:14:011 (3) - 红线加个note(00:14:011 - ), 滑条在白线开始(00:14:152 - ).

Emmmm,Insane总体rankable,但我觉得质量实在不太好...
试试去remap.可能你会重新做出一个更好的insane.

[Hard]
很抱歉,在我看来Hard的质量实在是不行,滑条不怎么美观,flow也不是很流畅...
思♂考一下什么是flow,怎样打得爽.滑条尽量拉得圆润点，像这样
[Normal]
滑条速度太快了...这对新手来说根本不能接受;_;

[Easy]
用1/1比较好...因为这歌已经212bpm了...

感觉有点操之过急了,作图的技术还得提升才能做出大家都爽的好图,加油

参考已经rank的图来进行修改，这应该对你有好处
http://osu.ppy.sh/b/135621

Goodluck to you :3

如果还有什么要帮忙的,pm我.可以给你再次检查XD

star,努力吧

lkx_shore wrote:

妈唉我也mod半天一看啦啦玲才知道你是香港的;_;

[Insane]
00:03:964 (6) - 在白线停(00:04:247 - ),在红线加一个note(00:04:388 - )
00:29:011 (2,3) - 用1.5x的间距比较好
00:58:728 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:14:011 (3) - 红线加个note(00:14:011 - ), 滑条在白线开始(00:14:152 - ).

Emmmm,Insane总体rankable,但我觉得质量实在不太好...
试试去remap.可能你会重新做出一个更好的insane.

[Hard]
很抱歉,在我看来Hard的质量实在是不行,滑条不怎么美观,flow也不是很流畅...
思♂考一下什么是flow,怎样打得爽.滑条尽量拉得圆润点，像这样

[Normal]
滑条速度太快了...这对新手来说根本不能接受;_;

[Easy]
用1/1比较好...因为这歌已经212bpm了...

感觉有点操之过急了,作图的技术还得提升才能做出大家都爽的好图,加油

参考已经rank的图来进行修改，这应该对你有好处
http://osu.ppy.sh/b/135621

Goodluck to you :3

如果还有什么要帮忙的,pm我.可以给你再次检查XD

lkx_shore wrote:

star,努力吧

Thanks for the mod and star

Hi~ Mod Request from my Queue

[General]

1. 標題是Kawada Mami - Serment (TV Size) S請大寫. 另外Serment和 Tv Size中間的2個空格請刪掉一個 (另外更改標題時最好用editor內切換diff來更改, 請不要退出editor. 那會發生悲劇.

[ Easy]

1. http://puu.sh/q20x 建議先看看這張圖來下clap. 你的圖clap明顯不足, 變的很奇怪
2. 00:07:360 (5) - 這裡NC
3. 00:43:586 (3,4) - 這兩個的形狀都不好看啊/.\ 建議做成00:46:700 (7) - 之類的 比較順眼
4. 01:14:152 (5) - ^
5. 00:46:700 (7) - 這裡NC會比較好 因為換一句了就跟著NC吧
6. 00:47:690 (1) - Finish. 音樂裡也有finish的音啊...
7. 00:52:643 (2) - 請用1.0DS, 不要轉回0.8
   整體來說這個diff的排版還行 音效就看看那張圖下吧

[ Normal]

1. 00:05:945 (1,1) - 去NC 這裡不需要用到這麼多NC
2. 00:07:926 (1) - 這裡去finish, 音樂沒有finish的音, 下在這裡也不合適
3. 00:28:869 (1) - 這個不需要長到紅線 請縮短1/2長度到00:29:435 - 對音樂
4. 00:30:284 (2) - 依照你的nc規則 這裡就去NC吧
5. 00:37:926 (4) - NC吧
6. 00:40:190 (2) - (end) 這裡也是 不需要finish
7. 00:40:756 (3) - ^
8. 01:19:247 (5,6) - 這兩個slider請把他弄成一樣的 只是剛好相反 這樣會比較好看 example
   音效同Easy

[ Hard]

1. 00:16:841 (4) - 用1.0x DS吧 這裡的差距就很明顯
2. 00:28:869 (4) - NC
3. 00:35:662 (11,1) - 交換NC
4. 00:37:926 (5) - NC 這裡的新vocal很明顯==
5. 01:11:888 (4) - 基本上我不建議這麼多reserve 因為有点短 加上vocal不明顯 所以還是像這樣的好
   排版還需加強 音效同Easy

[ Insane]

1. 00:32:549 (1,3) - 交換NC會比較跟音樂一點
2. 00:56:888 (5) - (begin) 去掉finish 這裡不太需要 也不好聽
   這diff很好哦

基本上hitsound先看看Easy放的那張圖下 然後再求mod會比較好點 說起來Insane diff的kiai 音效下的很好啊其他diff為什麼不統一
加油!

Flask wrote:

Hi~ Mod Request from my Queue

[General]

1. 標題是Kawada Mami - Serment (TV Size) S請大寫. 另外Serment和 Tv Size中間的2個空格請刪掉一個 (另外更改標題時最好用editor內切換diff來更改, 請不要退出editor. 那會發生悲劇.

[ Easy]

1. http://puu.sh/q20x 建議先看看這張圖來下clap. 你的圖clap明顯不足, 變的很奇怪
2. 00:07:360 (5) - 這裡NC
3. 00:43:586 (3,4) - 這兩個的形狀都不好看啊/.\ 建議做成00:46:700 (7) - 之類的 比較順眼
4. 01:14:152 (5) - ^
5. 00:46:700 (7) - 這裡NC會比較好 因為換一句了就跟著NC吧
6. 00:47:690 (1) - Finish. 音樂裡也有finish的音啊...
7. 00:52:643 (2) - 請用1.0DS, 不要轉回0.8
   整體來說這個diff的排版還行 音效就看看那張圖下吧

[ Normal]

1. 00:05:945 (1,1) - 去NC 這裡不需要用到這麼多NC
2. 00:07:926 (1) - 這裡去finish, 音樂沒有finish的音, 下在這裡也不合適
3. 00:28:869 (1) - 這個不需要長到紅線 請縮短1/2長度到00:29:435 - 對音樂
4. 00:30:284 (2) - 依照你的nc規則 這裡就去NC吧
5. 00:37:926 (4) - NC吧
6. 00:40:190 (2) - (end) 這裡也是 不需要finish
7. 00:40:756 (3) - ^
8. 01:19:247 (5,6) - 這兩個slider請把他弄成一樣的 只是剛好相反 這樣會比較好看 example
   音效同Easy

[ Hard]

1. 00:16:841 (4) - 用1.0x DS吧 這裡的差距就很明顯
2. 00:28:869 (4) - NC
3. 00:35:662 (11,1) - 交換NC
4. 00:37:926 (5) - NC 這裡的新vocal很明顯==
5. 01:11:888 (4) - 基本上我不建議這麼多reserve 因為有点短 加上vocal不明顯 所以還是像這樣的好
   排版還需加強 音效同Easy

[ Insane]

1. 00:32:549 (1,3) - 交換NC會比較跟音樂一點
2. 00:56:888 (5) - (begin) 去掉finish 這裡不太需要 也不好聽
   這diff很好哦

基本上hitsound先看看Easy放的那張圖下 然後再求mod會比較好點 說起來Insane diff的kiai 音效下的很好啊其他diff為什麼不統一
加油!

Thanks

Hey.

General

• • Tick rate 1 in all diffs sounds fine to me.

Easy

• - 00:08:492 (2) - Sounds weird this whistle, I suggest to remove to follow your hitsound pattern
  - 00:34:530 (2,1) - This slider is so close to the previous object and this make a bad overlap in my opinion, try to move this slider

Normal

• - 00:30:284 (1,2) - Bad overlap between these objects and (2) is a little hidden to play so move the slider (2) in another place please
  - 01:01:558 (5,6) - Error spacing here? Fix it
  - 01:27:737 (1,2,3) - Try something like this

Hard

• - 00:00:709 (2) - Remove this finish from here
  - 00:22:077 (7) - I really don't like the straight sliders, they don't fit well, in my opinion you should to make this slider like this
  - 00:44:435 (3) - Is intentional this stack? if not, you should to stack this note under the slider

Insane

• - 00:00:568 (T) - Why you use this timing section like the others diff don't have? In my opinion you should to remove
  - 00:28:586 (4) - Remove new combo to follow your combo pattern

/me goes to the kitchen

MoodyRPG wrote:

Hey.

General

• • Tick rate 1 in all diffs sounds fine to me.

Easy

• - 00:08:492 (2) - Sounds weird this whistle, I suggest to remove to follow your hitsound pattern
  - 00:34:530 (2,1) - This slider is so close to the previous object and this make a bad overlap in my opinion, try to move this slider

Normal

• - 00:30:284 (1,2) - Bad overlap between these objects and (2) is a little hidden to play so move the slider (2) in another place please
  - 01:01:558 (5,6) - Error spacing here? Fix it
  - 01:27:737 (1,2,3) - Try something like this

Hard

• - 00:00:709 (2) - Remove this finish from here
  - 00:22:077 (7) - I really don't like the straight sliders, they don't fit well, in my opinion you should to make this slider like this
  - 00:44:435 (3) - Is intentional this stack? if not, you should to stack this note under the slider

Insane

• - 00:00:568 (T) - Why you use this timing section like the others diff don't have? In my opinion you should to remove
  - 00:28:586 (4) - Remove new combo to follow your combo pattern

/me goes to the kitchen

Thanks

Hi there! This is for my modding queue!

[Easy]
There are a number of sliders that is not symmetric. Please try and move the ticks around and see.
00:52:360 (1,2,3,4) - Fix symmetry for this group of notes.

[Normal]
More unsymmetrical sliders. Fix please.
00:44:718 (3,4,5) - Fix the shapes for this group to make the flow more circular.
00:53:209 (3,4) - Fix shape so that they are on one same arc.
01:07:360 (1,2,3) - Fix the shapes for this group to make the flow more circular.
01:11:888 (1) - Not perfectly blanketing (2). Please fix.
01:16:417 (4) - Not perfectly blanketing (3). Please fix.

[Taiko Muzukashii]
Why does this difficulty not have the video? Please stay consistent in video use.
00:09:624 (1) - End instead at 00:10:615 and put notes in that gap.
01:02:832 (1,1) - One whole spinner please.
01:19:813 (2,1) - One whole spinner please.

[Hard]
00:15:851 (2,3,4,5,6) - Fix to perfect circle.
00:23:775 (10) - Not prefectly blanketing (8) and (9). Please fix.
00:27:313 (6,7,1,2) - Fix to one same arc.
00:32:549 (1,2,3,4) - Fix to perfect equilateral triangle.
00:50:096 (2) - Fix to maintain a smooth semi-circular flow from (1) to (3)
01:26:605 (7) - Fix symmertry

[Taiko Oni]
00:09:624 (1) - End instead at 00:10:615 and put notes in that gap.
01:02:832 (1,1) - One whole spinner please.
01:19:813 (2,1) - One whole spinner please.

[Insane]
00:14:152 (4,5,6,7,8) - Fix (4) so that it becomes a perfect pentagon.
00:37:218 (4,1,2,3,4) - Fix to perfect pentagon.
00:46:700 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix to perfect pentagon.
01:25:473 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix to perfect pentagon.

From your Insane I can see you have great flow, but that does not continue in Easy and Normal.
For that I cannot star this map.

tetsutaro wrote:

Hi there! This is for my modding queue!

[Easy]
There are a number of sliders that is not symmetric. Please try and move the ticks around and see.
00:52:360 (1,2,3,4) - Fix symmetry for this group of notes.

[Normal]
More unsymmetrical sliders. Fix please.
00:44:718 (3,4,5) - Fix the shapes for this group to make the flow more circular.
00:53:209 (3,4) - Fix shape so that they are on one same arc.
01:07:360 (1,2,3) - Fix the shapes for this group to make the flow more circular.
01:11:888 (1) - Not perfectly blanketing (2). Please fix.
01:16:417 (4) - Not perfectly blanketing (3). Please fix.

[Taiko Muzukashii]
Why does this difficulty not have the video? Please stay consistent in video use.
00:09:624 (1) - End instead at 00:10:615 and put notes in that gap.
01:02:832 (1,1) - One whole spinner please.
01:19:813 (2,1) - One whole spinner please.

[Hard]
00:15:851 (2,3,4,5,6) - Fix to perfect circle.
00:23:775 (10) - Not prefectly blanketing (8) and (9). Please fix.
00:27:313 (6,7,1,2) - Fix to one same arc.
00:32:549 (1,2,3,4) - Fix to perfect equilateral triangle.
00:50:096 (2) - Fix to maintain a smooth semi-circular flow from (1) to (3)
01:26:605 (7) - Fix symmertry

[Taiko Oni]
00:09:624 (1) - End instead at 00:10:615 and put notes in that gap.
01:02:832 (1,1) - One whole spinner please.
01:19:813 (2,1) - One whole spinner please.

[Insane]
00:14:152 (4,5,6,7,8) - Fix (4) so that it becomes a perfect pentagon.
00:37:218 (4,1,2,3,4) - Fix to perfect pentagon.
00:46:700 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix to perfect pentagon.
01:25:473 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix to perfect pentagon.

From your Insane I can see you have great flow, but that does not continue in Easy and Normal.
For that I cannot star this map.

Thanks