Hi, dropping a mod from my modding queue.
Red: Must be changed.Black: Suggestion.
[General]
- Consider adding "Lunasa" to all of your tags.
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Taiko backgrounds are unrankable now, please find a normal 16:9 background for the Taiko difficulties.- Your claps aren't on the 2nd and 4th beat (or on the 3rd beat in some cases). So most of the hitsound mods will point them out. The claps are needed on there if there's a snare from the drums, and it will help your map sound a lot nicer.
Refer to this for beats.
[Easy]
00:07:360 (1) - Remove the clap and whistle from the repeat and add a clap to the end of the slider.
00:21:228 (2) - Add claps at the beginning and end.
00:37:926 (1) & 00:39:058 (2) - Redo these sliders with the new 3 point sliders? They look a little weird. Also add claps to the end of these.
00:40:190 (3) - Add a clap to the end of this.
00:43:020 (2) - Add a clap to this.
00:43:586 (3) - Add a clap to the end of this.
00:44:718 (4) - ^
00:49:813 (1) - Remove the claps and whistle and add a clap onto the repeat?
00:50:662 (2) - Add a clap to the beginning of this.
00:52:360 (1) - ^
01:04:813 (1) - Add a clap to the end of this.
01:09:624 (3) - ^
01:11:888 (3) - Remove the clap at the beginning
01:13:020 (4) - Remove the clap at the beginning and place it at the end.
01:19:530 (1) - Add a finish to this.
[Normal]
00:22:077 (1) - Remove the clap from the end and add it to the repeat.
00:22:926 (2) - Add a clap to the beginning of this.
00:24:341 (1) - Remove the clap from the end and add it to the repeat.
00:25:756 (1) - Add a clap to the beginning of this.
00:26:605 (3) - Remove the clap from the end and add it to the repeat. ;w;
00:30:284 (2) - Remove the clap from the end and put it at the beginning.
00:31:417 (4) - ^
00:31:983 (1) - Add a clap to the beginning.
00:32:549 (2) - Remove the clap from the end and put it at the beginning.
00:33:398 (4) - Remove the clap from the end.
00:34:247 (1) - Add a clap to the beginning.
00:34:813 (2) - Add a clap.
00:35:096 (3) - Remove the clap.
00:35:945 (4) - Add a clap.
00:36:228 (1) - Remove the clap from the beginning and place it at the end.
00:37:643 (3) - Add a clap.
00:37:926 - 00:47:266 - Make sure the claps are on the 3rd beat.
00:40:190 (2) - Make this into a straight slider and move it up and right 2 grids? Move 00:40:756 (3) up 5 grids and left 1 if you do so. This will make the slider easier to read than having it covered by 00:37:926 (1) slightly.
00:45:851 (4) - Move this up one grid so that it matches with the slider end of 00:44:718 (3). You can also remove it and replace it with the new slider like this:
http://puu.sh/1Jot400:46:700 (5) - Have a clap on the repeat and the end of this.
00:49:813 (1) - Add a clap on the repeat, the 2nd and 4th beats have claps now. So continue the claps on those and remove the claps that aren't on those beats.
01:20:945 - 01:28:869 - You were doing fine with most of the claps in this section. They are on the 3rd beat. So please add the claps onto the 3rd beat and remove the ones that aren't.
01:29:435 (5) - Add claps on the beginning and repeats of this slider? It fits the song more. Leave the end of the slider with a whistle and remove the whistle at the beginning.
[Hard]
- Most of the spacing in this difficulty is a bit awkward.
00:02:832 - 00:09:483 - The claps should be on the 3rd beat, please add them there and remove the rest of the claps.
00:10:756 - 00:37:926 - The claps should be on the 2nd and 4th beat. You have most of your claps correct here, so finish the rest of them so the map sounds nice.
00:12:454 (6) - Remove the 2nd point from this. It will make the slider look neat.
00:14:435 (3) - Move this to the right 1 grid.
00:17:549 (6) - Move this to the left 2 grids.
00:18:115 (1,2) - If you do the above, then move this down and left 1 grid.
00:28:586 (3) - This would look better if you move it up and left 1 grid. This is because your previous notes were spaced, but this is touching the others on each side.
00:37:926 - 00:49:105 - The claps should be on the 3rd beat here, please correct the claps and replace them there.
00:49:247 - 01:20:945 - The claps should be on the 2nd and 4th beat in this section.
00:56:039 (6) - New combo here.
00:57:454 (10) or 00:57:454 (5) - (Depending on if you applied the mod before). Move this to the right 1 grid.
00:58:020 (1,2,3) - Try spacing these out, makes it look a little better.
http://puu.sh/1JoPk01:04:388 (2) - Move this to the left 1 grid.
01:05:662 (1) - Move this down 1 grid.
01:07:360 (5) - Remove this and stack it under the slider end of 01:06:511 (3).
01:11:888 (4) - Move this down 1 grid.
01:13:020 (1) - Move this up 1 grid.
01:15:567 (3) - Move this to the left 1 grid.
01:16:417 (6) - Remove the red point at the end of this slider.
01:20:945 - 01:29:860 - The claps should be on the 3rd beat.
01:24:907 (1) - Move this down 1 grid and remove the red point at the end of this slider.
01:27:454 (1,2) - Move this down 1 grid so that it barely misses 01:28:020 (3).
[Insane]
- This difficulty just lacks the hitsounds.
- Please remove the break, your HP drain is low enough that it's not gonna hurt even if you get 100s.
00:11:039 - 00:37:926 - You are missing claps on the 2nd and 4th beat. Please place them.
00:37:926 - 00:46:417 - The claps should be on the 3rd beat instead of 2nd and 4th beat. Please change them.
01:05:096 (1,2) - Add claps to the end of these sliders.
01:09:907 (2) - Add a clap to the beginning and end of this.
01:16:417 - 01:18:681 - This tiny part is missing the claps on the 2nd and 4th beat.
[Taiko Muzukashii]
00:45:851 (1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1,2,1) - This is a bit to long, maybe remove 00:46:275 (1,1).
[Lunasa's Taiko Oni]
- I'm sorry to say but most of the notes here are random or try to go with the melody. It doesn't fit well besides the very beginning and very end of the map. 00:00:568 - 00:09:624 and 01:16:417 - 01:20:945. There's too many notes as well and it plays very awkwardly.
00:10:756 (1) - D?
00:11:605 (2,1,1,2,1) - This doesn't fit well, try kkddd?
00:12:171 (3) - Change this to a k, it doesn't fit well either due to the snare. The background melody is very unfitting to use.
00:12:525 (1) - Remove this? It doesn't sound or play well with a double here. You can also move this to 00:12:596 and change it to a d.
00:12:737 (2) - k? will go with the drums.
00:24:483 (1) - d? will fit better
00:24:624 (1) - change this to a k if you did the above, it will go with the drums as well.
00:28:303 (3) - d? makes this play a little better.
01:07:218 (1) - k? fits the drums if you change this
01:07:360 (1) - D? same reason as above
01:07:643 (1) - change to a k? plays more with the drums since you have some pauses around here.
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Good luck!~