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sphere - Hazy (TV Size)

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frost-b-spec
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Topic Starter
frost-b-spec
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年12月9日 at 19:28:22

Artist: sphere
Title: Hazy (TV Size)
Source: Hanasaku Iroha
Tags: Amu Kotobuki Minako Takagaki Ayahi Toyosaki Aki Tomatsu Haruka
BPM: 125
Filesize: 15998kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Amu's Normal (3.08 stars, 125 notes)
  2. Easy (0.92 stars, 81 notes)
  3. Hard (4.98 stars, 248 notes)
Download: sphere - Hazy (TV Size)
Download: sphere - Hazy (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#17
Hanasaku Iroha ED
2012
Oct 27 - change song name, and combo color
Oct 28 - Normal update.
Nov 01 - Lion8980's mod add.
Dec 17 - revive. hitsound volume 100 -> 80
2013
jan 15 - Lolicore Flandre's mod add.
jan 16 - scanter's mod add. SakiK's IRC mod add.
feb 01 - kajiyatta's mod add.
feb 02 - Natsu's mod add.
feb 05 - Garven and HelloSCV's mod add.
apr 18 - iyasine's mod add.
oct 20 - Losertic and Sekai's mod add.
oct 23 - Asgard and regenz's mod add.
nov 06 - kodora's mod add.
dec 09- Desperate-kun's mod add.
Last edited by frost-b-spec , edited 30 times in total.
Lion8980
42 posts
Joined June 2011
Lion8980
\o/
Totally random mod

[General]

I think kiai time like this is better: http://puu.sh/1kHiE

[Hard]

00:04:889 (3): Add whistle here, for consistency with (2).
00:05:369 (4): Remove whistle from start and add in end (Just apply this if you fixed the previous suggestion).
00:06:809 (3): Same from 00:04:889.
00:08:729 (3): Add whistle in this note, sounds good with ths song and makes a good sound for me
00:10:649 (3): Same as 00:04:889.
00:12:569 (4): Same as 00:04:889, make consistency with (3).
00:14:489 (4): ^
00:15:449 (6): I think is much better start nc here instead of 00:15:689.
00:17:369 (1): Whistle here to match up the vocal.
00:18:329 (3): ^
00:19:289 (1): ^
00:20:249 (3): ^ (You know what i'm trying to say, no? If i point all the mod will be long and boring)
00:29:369 (2,3,4,5,6): Eh...please tell me why this jump is here. Really don't make sense for me a jump here.
00:45:569 - 00:45:689: A two notes here would be cool and fits good with the song.
01:09:929 (4): Missed finish here, or it's intentional?
01:24:569 (4): Finish here due to finish sound in bgm.
01:27:209 (3): Finish in start because this have the same sound as 01:26:489.

[Amu's Normal]

00:51:929 (1): End this spinner in 00:53:849 and add finish.
00:55:769 (1): Finish?
01:09:929 (6,1): What about delete 01:10:649 and stop (6) in 01:10:649?
01:18:089 (8): It's difficult for newbie player click on many notes, so please delete this note.
´
Pretty well constructed, just needs more work.

[Easy]

00:14:489 (1): Finish in the end.
00:30:809 (1): Finish.
00:53:849 (4): Finish in the start.
00:55:769 (1): Finish.

Pretty good Easy ^^

Good luck~
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec
>Lion8980
thx modding.

[General]

I think kiai time like this is better: http://puu.sh/1kHiEI ??

[Hard]
00:29:369 (2,3,4,5,6)Eh...please tell me why this jump is here. Really don't make sense for me a jump here. sry,ignore.

[Nomal]
plz wait amu

[Easy]
all done.
Flanster
5,938 posts
Joined August 2010
Flanster
Graveyarded already :C?

Oh well I'll still put my mod here.

[General]
I set the beatmap genre to Anime: Japanese
The combos and patterns in this map will need a big change, I find too often the ends of sliders being the beginning of the next stanza which is very awkward and not how it should be done.
The beginning of the song is more calm so I recommend lowering the hitsound volume to 30-35%
You can continue the normal volume after 00:07:769 though I suggest using 70% maximum, 80% still sounds a bit loud to be honest.

[Easy]
00:36:569 (2,3,1) - copypasted from 00:22:169 (3,4,1) ? You could try something different, repetative patterns aren't very fun..
I'll make some suggestions here on the flow and how patterns play, it could use some changes.
00:02:009 (2) - move to x:368 y:128
00:02:969 (3) - move to x:448 y:224 ^
00:03:929 (1) - try this
384,336,3929,6,0,B|320:277|231:286,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,2:0:0
00:05:849 (2) - move to x:120 y:344
00:07:769 (1) - add a finish?
00:09:689 (4) - move down to x:256 y:80
00:10:649 (1) - x:360 y:160
00:12:569 (2) - move to x:256 y:240
00:13:529 (3) - x:152 y:168
00:14:489 (1) - x:160 y:296
00:20:249 (2) - this
448,216,20249,2,0,B|448:304|352:336,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:22:169 (3,4,1) - select these and move them to x:232 y:336
00:23:129 (1) - after that use this code for this slider
120,288,23129,6,0,B|56:232|80:136,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:25:049 (2) - move to x:176 y:56
00:26:009 (3) - x:305 y:40
00:26:969 (1,2,3) - select these and move them to x:408 y:112
00:28:889 (4) - move the slider to x:320 y:320 and then put the end sliderpoint to x:160 y:328 and the middle sliderpoint to x:248 y:344
00:34:649 (1) - curve it a bit more (middle sliderpoint to x:368 y:240 for example)
00:50:009 (1) - v
200,40,50009,6,0,B|136:104|176:200,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:51:929 (2) - nudge it to x:104 y:296
00:52:889 (3) - move it to x:240 y:304, curver it so the middle slider point goes to x:280 y:320
00:57:209 (3) - add a note?
01:02:009 (4) - ^
01:04:889 (2) - ^
01:06:329 (3) - how about this this
01:13:529 (4) - add a note
01:20:249 (3) - ^
01:21:689 (5) - curve it a bit more?
01:27:449 (3,4) - how about using a mirrored version of 01:25:529 (2)

[Amu's Normal]
I see symmetry!
00:12:089 (2) - a bit too close to (1) dont you think?
00:39:929 (4,5) - you sure you cant make these two look better
00:49:049 (4,5) - replace them with a mirrored version of 00:48:089 (3) just like the start of the combo with (1) and (2) for consistency
00:51:929 (1) - I think it would be better if this ended at 00:53:849, and you can remove 00:53:849 (1)
00:55:769 (1) - add finish
01:11:129 (1) - add finish at the beginning of the slider
01:26:489 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:53:849 (1,2,3) - kinda overmapped and doesn't fit well.. try this the (4) can be stacked to 00:56:249 (1)
00:59:249 (5,6,7,8) - dont really see any rhythm here to fit into streams, did you put them for difficulty increase?
01:02:729 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:04:169 (4) - I suggest you do better rhythm here instead of just placing 1/2 objects one after another.
For example instead of 01:04:169 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) you made, it can be like this which sounds much better.
01:24:809 (2) - remove note?
01:25:289 (3) - ^
01:27:209 (3) - curve it to 01:26:729 (2) ?

Thats all from me :P
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec
>Lolicore Flandre
[Easy]
almost done.

[Hard]
sry,all no.

edit
00:53:849 (1,2,3) - kinda overmapped and doesn't fit well.. try this the (4) can be stacked to 00:56:249 (1) done.
thx mod~

edt2
Amu diff : all done.
Last edited by frost-b-spec , edited 2 times in total.
scanter
2,385 posts
Joined July 2012
scanter
[General]

SPOILER
More add on sound variation
01:29:369 - This timing should move to 01:28:409
[Easy]

SPOILER
00:20:249 (2) - Move to x:448, y:192
00:42:329 (4) - NC Delete
00:53:849 (4) - NC?
01:11:129 (1) - Add finish
01:16:889 (2) - Straight line slider looks bad. how about bend it?
01:18:809 (1) - ^
01:28:409 (4) - NC
[Normal]

SPOILER
00:15:449 (1) - Add finish
00:30:809 (1) - Add finish at slider's first
00:51:929 (1) - Clear finish & add whistle
00:53:849 (1) - Add finish
00:55:769 (1) - Add finish
00:55:769 (1) - I think, NC is better
01:05:369 (4) - Move to x:184, y:216
01:05:849 (5,6) - Fix suitable distance
01:11:129 (1) - Add finish at slider's first
01:17:849 (7) - Move to x:216, y:208
01:18:809 (1) - ^
01:26:489 (1) - Add finish

[Hard]

SPOILER
00:04:889 (3) - Clear whistle
00:05:369 (4) - Clear whistle at slider's end & add whistle at slider's first
00:06:809 (3) - Clear whistle?
00:09:689 (1,2,3,4) - Jump is big. if you're using jump, how about distance x1.2~1.4?
00:14:969 (5) - ^
00:17:369 (1) - Clear whistle?
00:19:289 (1) - Clear whistle
00:16:169 (4,5) - Same as 00:09:689 (1,2,3,4)
00:17:129 (8,1,2,3) - ^
00:21:689 (2,3,4) - ^
00:29:369 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:31:529 (4,5) - ^
00:33:689 (3,4) - ^
00:37:529 (5,6) - ^
00:51:929 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:09:209 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:11:609 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:25:529 (5,6) - ^
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec
thx mod~
Blue = done
Red = no

scanter wrote:

[General]

SPOILER
More add on sound variation
01:29:369 - This timing should move to 01:28:409

[Easy]

SPOILER
00:20:249 (2) - Move to x:448, y:192
00:42:329 (4) - NC Delete
00:53:849 (4) - NC?
01:11:129 (1) - Add finish
01:16:889 (2) - Straight line slider looks bad. how about bend it?
01:18:809 (1) - ^
01:28:409 (4) - NC

[Hard]

SPOILER
00:04:889 (3) - Clear whistle
00:05:369 (4) - Clear whistle at slider's end & add whistle at slider's first
00:06:809 (3) - Clear whistle?
00:09:689 (1,2,3,4) - Jump is big. if you're using jump, how about distance x1.2~1.4?
00:14:969 (5) - ^
00:17:369 (1) - Clear whistle?
00:19:289 (1) - Clear whistle
00:16:169 (4,5) - Same as 00:09:689 (1,2,3,4)
00:17:129 (8,1,2,3) - ^
00:21:689 (2,3,4) - ^
00:29:369 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:31:529 (4,5) - ^
00:33:689 (3,4) - ^
00:37:529 (5,6) - ^
00:51:929 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:09:209 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:11:609 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:25:529 (5,6) - ^
edit
Amu diff : all done.
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
kajiyatta
M4M request from your queue
General
ほとんど提案です
Easy
Placement
00:18:329(1) こんな感じにずらすとちょうど囲むようになるのでいいと思います
SPOILER
00:34:649(1)　向きを逆にしたほうが流れが良く初心者向きかなと
SPOILER
01:23:609(6,1) NCを逆にしてみては
Rhythm
01:24:089 バックの音も強くボーカルもあるのでnote追加したほうが分かりやすい気がします　また01:24:569のスライダーを伸ばしてこんな感じなど
SPOILER
　
Hit Sonud
00:51:929(2) 始点にfinish追加
00:53:849(4) リバースのwhistle→finish
01:16:889(2)^
01:02:489(5) 終点にfinish追加

Amu's Normal
tick1でいいと思います　slider-tick.wavもないので。
NCはボーカルではなく曲に合わせて置いた方が良いかなと思います
Placement
00:05:369(4) ここだけスペーシングが×0.8になってます
00:28:409(1,2) NC逆にしてみては
00:42:329(7,1)^
00:59:609(7,1)^
00:33:689(6,1)ここのブランケットをもう少し綺麗にできると思います
SPOILER
00:49:049(5,6,1,2,3) ややわかりにくいのでこんな感じなどどうでしょう
SPOILER
01:12:569(2,3,4,5) ここもやや雑に感じたのでこんな感じなど nazi
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:10:649(6,1) 逆にしたほうが曲をフォローしてると思います
SPOILER
Hit Sonud
00:07:769(1) finishつけてみては
00:51:929(1) whistle→finish?
01:02:969(5)　リバースにfinish追加

Hard
譜面の作りから見てOD6.HP6でもいいかなと思いますがお任せします
Placement
00:36:089(6)やや中途半端な感じがします。ジャンプならもう少し間隔を開けてもいいと思います
00:41:129(2) Ctrl+G?
Hit Sonud
00:51:929(1) 始点にfinish追加？
00:54:569(2)^
00:55:769(4) finish追加+NC

良い譜面だと思います :) 　star!
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec
>kajiyatta
all fixed!
thx~
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
Easy:

SPOILER
00:00:089 add whistle
00:23:129 whistle in the head of slider for be consistent with (3)
00:36:569 whistle
00:57:689 whistle in the head of slider for be consistent
01:06:329 this slider look bad imo can u make it more symetrical?
01:26:489 (1) - try to reduce volume to 15 % and add whistle to the spinner

Normal:

SPOILER
00:00:089 whistle
00:34:649 NC
01:10:649 whistle
01:14:009 move the last point of slider really look alot better


01:26:489 same as easy

Hard:

SPOILER
00:00:149 unsnaped snap it to 00:00:089 and add whistle in the head too
00:08:009 add circle
00:08:489 ^
00:08:969 ^
00:47:849 whistle in the head too
00:48:809 ^
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec

Natsu wrote:

Easy:

all no.

Hard:
all no.

00:00:149 unsnaped snap it to 00:00:089 and add whistle in the head too snapped 1/8
ty mod~
Amu
15 posts
Joined February 2011
Amu
Normal:

[spoilerbox]00:00:089 whistle ok
00:34:649 NC ok
01:10:649 whistle ok
01:14:009 move the last point of slider really look alot better i think so too:3 ok

01:26:489 same as easy sorry, frost-b-spec said no , no.


Thank you for mod:3
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
HelloSCV
From #modrequest /o/

[General]
  • - i think normal and hard diffs gap is little bit large :p just my opinion
[Easy]
  • - 00:52:889 (3) - whsitle on end? hears nice
    - 01:09:209 (2) - finish on start and repeat ( and delete whistle on repeat )
    - 01:16:889 (2) - ^ only start
    - 01:18:809 (1) - finish?
    - 01:24:569 (3) - whistle on end

    [Amu's Normal]
    [list:29042] - 00:34:649 (1) - whistle on end
    - 00:35:609 (2) - out of DS
    - 00:48:089 (3) - ^
    - 00:48:569 (4) - whistle
    - 01:12:569 (2,4) - ^
    - 01:14:009 (5) - ^ on end
    - 01:14:969 (1) - ^
    - 01:17:609 (6) - move this note to 01:17:129 (5) - here? better for rhythm
    - 01:26:489 (1) - finish? instead whistle
[Hard]
  • -00:10:649 (3) - whistle on start
    - 00:14:969 (5) - this jump slider feels unexpected, rhythm is not chainging and feels clam so don't need a jump here i guess,
    - 00:27:449 (4) - using 1.0x DS? i have no idea why you reduced DS to 0.4x :p
    - 00:30:329 (6) - finish is better then whistle
    - 00:45:569 (5) - DS issue
    - 00:45:929 (1) - i think add whistle at this slider's end is better for 00:46:409 (2) - here ( if you added, delete whistle on thses 00:46:409 (2,4) - )
    - 00:46:889 (3) - ^
    - 00:47:849 (1,2) - similar reason with above, delete end's whistle instead, add whistle on repeat
    - 00:50:609 (3) - DS issue
    - 00:53:849 (1) - missed finish on start
    - 01:07:289 (1) - ctrl G? i think this is better for play, current pattern is not bad but players maybe want some jump in that part
    - 01:09:209 (1,2,3,4) - so big DS for hard diff? reduce little is better choice
    - 01:12:089 (2,3) - this pattern feels little bit weried when i'm playing, how about ctrl G here? plays better imo
    - 01:16:889 (1,2) - finish on start would be great
that's all what i found haha good luck for rank!
Last edited by HelloSCV , edited 1 time in total.
Garven
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5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
I'm stalking HelloSCV

[General]
MP3 quality feels really low. You should see if you can find a better one.

[Easy]
This feels really slow and rather boring. The patterns have little to no structure to them, so I don't remember them at all. It also feels like you're just slowly moving in circles the entire map.
00:46:169 (1,2,3,4) - These would make more sense to the music if you mapped to the red ticks. Maybe use sliders instead so that it isn't too much of a shock initially.
00:50:009 (1) - End this at 00:50:729 -

[Normal]
This is really boring rhythmically. It's almost all 1/1s with an occasional 1/2 triple. Try using some longer sliders to vary the rhythm a little such as during the beginning of the song. Give that intro some sort of variance so that it's different when the band comes in at 00:07:769 -
00:33:689 (6,1) - Spacing is too close
00:34:649 (1) - Missed a whistle
00:48:569 (4,6) - Missed whistles?
00:48:569 (4,6) - Ugly overlap with 00:47:129 (2) -
01:12:569 (2,4,5) - Missed whistles
01:14:969 (1) - ^
01:17:849 (7) - Delete to have a better emphasis with the percussion
Hitsounding was also really boring. See if you can spruce it up with more finish use and some other sounds. Right now it's mostly just off-beat whistles.

[Hard]
00:50:609 (3) - This really doesn't belong there at all. All the emphasis is at 00:50:729 - but you lose that if you add in that beat at 609
Add a spinner somewhere so that the scores aren't stagnant.
Going from Normal -> Hard is a really big jump difficulty-wise.

You might want to tone down the large jumps (that don't really match anything in the music) and maybe some of the longer streams during the kiai.
Amu
15 posts
Joined February 2011
Amu

HelloSCV wrote:

From #modrequest /o/

[Amu's Normal]
  • - 00:34:649 (1) - whistle on end ok
    - 00:35:609 (2) - out of DS ok
    - 00:48:089 (3) - ^ ok
    - 00:48:569 (4) - whistle ok
    - 01:12:569 (2,4) - ^ ok
    - 01:14:009 (5) - ^ on end ok
    - 01:14:969 (1) - ^ ok
    - 01:17:609 (6) - move this note to 01:17:129 (5) - here? better for rhythm sorry, i like this pattern in this map:( i keep it.
    - 01:26:489 (1) - finish? instead whistle
ok

that's all what i found haha good luck for rank!
ty:3

Thank you for useful mod:3
SakiK
326 posts
Joined June 2010
SakiK
as request

[Amu's Normal]

Noticeable mistakes　DS ,plz check. for examples
00:06:329 (5) - DS
00:34:649 (1) - ^
00:35:609 (2) - ^
00:28:889 (1) - ^
00:30:809 (1) - ^
and many.
Especially,
00:48:089 (3) - too far,must fix here.

hit sound

00:01:049 (3) - whistel
00:02:969 (1) - ^ at head
00:04:889 (3) - ^

00:09:689 (4) - Drum finish
00:11:129 (1) - ^at end
00:13:529 (4) - ^
same here 00:30:809

00:48:569 (4) - whistel
00:49:529 (6) - ^

01:02:969 (6) - finish at reverse
01:09:209 (3) - finish
01:09:929 (6) - ^at head
01:17:609 (6) - finish
01:18:809 (1) - ^ at head

01:18:809 (1) ~01:24:089 (1)
I think more fix to use normal hit sound,
01:26:009 (3) - use normal hit

01:26:489 (1) - put finish insted of whistel

other

00:51:929 (1) -
I think here is most exciting place in front of the KIAI time,but have spaced and long spin.It is very wastefu...
try put notes and sliders here.for example
SPOILER

that's all.gl
Amu
15 posts
Joined February 2011
Amu
hi, garven:3

[Normal]
This is really boring rhythmically. It's almost all 1/1s with an occasional 1/2 triple. Try using some longer sliders to vary the rhythm a little such as during the beginning of the song. Give that intro some sort of variance so that it's different when the band comes in at 00:07:769 - i also thought that this map was boring rhytmically. To improve that, i made a new part before 7:769.
00:33:689 (6,1) - Spacing is too close fixed
00:34:649 (1) - Missed a whistle fixed
00:48:569 (4,6) - Missed whistles? fixed
00:48:569 (4,6) - Ugly overlap with 00:47:129 (2) - fixed
01:12:569 (2,4,5) - Missed whistles fixed
01:14:969 (1) - ^ fixed
01:17:849 (7) - Delete to have a better emphasis with the percussion fixed
Hitsounding was also really boring. See if you can spruce it up with more finish use and some other sounds. Right now it's mostly just off-beat whistles.

Thank you for mod:3 its was so useful:3
Amu
15 posts
Joined February 2011
Amu

SakiK wrote:

as request hi:3

[Amu's Normal]

Noticeable mistakes　DS ,plz check. for examples もちろんです！
00:06:329 (5) - DS 　ok
00:34:649 (1) - ^ ok
00:35:609 (2) - ^ ok
00:28:889 (1) - ^ ok
00:30:809 (1) - ^ ok
and many.
Especially,
00:48:089 (3) - too far,must fix here. 直しました！

hit sound

00:01:049 (3) - whistel　　　　ok
00:02:969 (1) - ^ at head ok
00:04:889 (3) - ^　　　　　　　 ok

00:09:689 (4) - Drum finish ok
00:11:129 (1) - ^at end ok
00:13:529 (4) - ^ ok
same here 00:30:809 ok

00:48:569 (4) - whistel ok
00:49:529 (6) - ^ ok

01:02:969 (6) - finish at reverse ok
01:09:209 (3) - finish ok
01:09:929 (6) - ^at head ok
01:17:609 (6) - finish ok
01:18:809 (1) - ^ at head ok

01:18:809 (1) ~01:24:089 (1)
I think more fix to use normal hit sound, そう思ったのでノーマルヒットサウンドに変えました。
01:26:009 (3) - use normal hit　　　　ok

01:26:489 (1) - put finish insted of whistel ok

other

00:51:929 (1) -
I think here is most exciting place in front of the KIAI time,but have spaced and long spin.It is very wastefu...
try put notes and sliders here.for example
SPOILER
私も指摘されてそう思いましたが難易度がノーマルということもありここでスピン差をつけたいと思ったためここはnoにさせていただきます。

that's all.gl
役に立つモッドありがとうございます。 :)
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec
>HelloSCV
almost done.

>Garven
sry, all no.
Easy is for beginner. i dislike red tick.
Hard, not hard slow BPM stream.
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
Red ticks is fine in Easy maps as long as you use them well. Having lead-in rhythms or sliders can help with that. I'm more worried about the general structure of the map, as it seems to have pretty much none at all. Try to make something that's actually visually appealing instead of just... seemingly random meandering across the play field.

As for the Hard, well, it's your taste I guess, but overall the map is still rather poor and doesn't fit well with the song. It will most probably need a lot more work if you want this to go for ranking.
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec
>Garven
Easy
00:46:169 (1,2,3,4) - These would make more sense to the music if you mapped to the red ticks. Maybe use sliders instead so that it isn't too much of a shock initially. finally done
00:50:009 (1) - End this at 00:50:729 - finally done

Hard
No change.

thx~
iyasine
1,135 posts
Joined January 2012
iyasine
hi~(^^)/

Easy

01:02:489 (5) - Grid snapを外して、もう少しだけ下に下げてみては？01:01:529 (3,4) - に合わせて綺麗な斜めの流れにする感じ！

01:05:369 (3) - ここだけDistanceが乱れています。DS 0.8x　にして手前の01:04:409 (1,2) - と合わせたら、もっとプレイしやすくなるかと！

Amu's Normal

00:26:969 (1) - NC？00:28:889 (5) - remove NC ?

00:33:209 (5) - Distanceが若干乱れています、手前と同じ0.9xにすると良いでしょう！

00:51:449 (3) - 手前のスライダーの延長線上に移動したほうがプレイしやすく、見た目も良くなるかと！
SPOILER

Hard

00:44:009 (5) - ここを少し右上にずらして、00:43:289 (2,3,4,5,1) - の塊を綺麗な星型にしてみては？
SPOILER

nice map!とても和みました :lol: good luck~
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec

iyasine wrote:

hi~(^^)/

Easy

01:02:489 (5) - Grid snapを外して、もう少しだけ下に下げてみては？01:01:529 (3,4) - に合わせて綺麗な斜めの流れにする感じ！
done

01:05:369 (3) - ここだけDistanceが乱れています。DS 0.8x　にして手前の01:04:409 (1,2) - と合わせたら、もっとプレイしやすくなるかと！
DSずれていないので修正していません。

Hard

00:44:009 (5) - ここを少し右上にずらして、00:43:289 (2,3,4,5,1) - の塊を綺麗な星型にしてみては？
SPOILER
done.

nice map!とても和みました :lol: good luck~
thx mod~
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Mod4Mod on your Queue =w=/


Easy:
OD and HP -1 would do be good for the easy diff
  1. 00:08:249 (2,3) - since it's easy diff i suggest you to remove these notes and make 1 1/1 short slider instead, it'll be better imo~
  2. 00:14:489 (1) - Add Normal simpleset on the slider's reverse, it'll sound better~
  3. 00:18:329 (1) - Add finish on slide's end~
  4. 00:23:129 (1) - ^ but on slider's start~
  5. 00:33:209 (4,5) - same as i said in here 00:08:249 (2,3) -
  6. 00:42:329 (4,1) - switch the nc , it'll be better on the 2 not the 1 imo
  7. 00:46:169 (1) - add finish on this note
  8. 00:52:889 (3) - it's kinda boring like this, so maybe make this slider like this?
    SPOILER
  9. 01:06:329 (4) - add finish on slider's end
  10. 01:21:689 (5) - ^
  11. 01:24:569 (3) - ^ but slider's start
  12. 01:26:009 (4) - add drum simpleset in this note

Amu's Normal:
HP -1 will be good for this diff imo~
  1. 00:03:449 (6) - I don't suggest you to use stuck on normal diff, so maybe move it somewhere like this?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:06:569 (4,5) - ^ it's a bit too hard for the normal diff, so maybe do something like this? Just remove this note 00:06:569 (4) - i don't think it'll follow anything~
    SPOILER
  3. 00:10:649 (6) - move this note to x:336 y:216 so it'll be a perfect triangle
  4. 00:14:489 (6) - make this slider a bit curve it'll play a bit nicer and fun imo~
  5. 00:19:769 (2) - move this slider 2 grids to the left so it'll make nice mirror effect to the first slider~
  6. 00:33:689 (6) - maybe make this slider like this, so the end of this slider stuck under this slider 00:31:769 (2) -
    SPOILER

Hard:
I suggest you to reduce the hp and od by one since it'll fit the map more
Good diff, best diff out of all them~


Good job on this map, but wow nice for old map o.o/

Good luck on this <3
Losertic
461 posts
Joined May 2012
Losertic
Hello!

From M4M.

Modding

General

  1. I think fix custom hitsound. also, uh.. 9 month ago? remake it?
  2. I heard start sound " 00:00:209 " this part. uh, change offset..? i don't know. (it is not 1/1 beat)

Easy

  1. 00:14:489 (1) - move slider middle point (108,296), move slider tail point (79,272) because, for blanket
  2. 00:33:689 (5) - check distance. set 0.78x ~ 0.82x
  3. 00:48:089 (1) - NC...??
  4. 01:04:409 (1) - check distance.
  5. 01:05:369 (3) - ^
  6. 01:08:249 (1) - check distance.

Amu's Normal

  1. 00:05:849 (3,4,5) - maybe it's too hard for beginner. (i think not good stack note by normal diff) if you non-fix this mod, plz change perpect stack. 00:06:569 (4,5) - move (307,323)
    00:19:769 (2) ~ 00:28:889 (5) - change this?
    SPOILER
    ─ 00:19:769 (2) - move (99,188)
    ─ 00:20:729 (3) - move (324,197)
    ─ 00:21:689 (4) - move (316,301)
    ─ 00:22:169 (5) - move (218,347)
    ─ 00:22:649 (6) - move (220,239)
    ─ 00:23:129 (1) - move (126,292)
    ─ 00:23:609 (2) - move (154,187)
    ─ 00:25:529 (4) - move (357,187)
    ─ 00:26:969 (1) - move (465,191)
    ─ 00:27:449 (2) - move (409,287)
    ─ 00:27:929 (3) - move (321,231)
    ─ 00:28:409 (4) - move (369,135)
    ─ 00:28:889 (5) - move (269,93)
  2. 00:30:809 (1,2) - check distance.
  3. 00:36:089 (3) - ^
  4. 00:36:809 (5,6) - ^
  5. 00:40:889 (5) - ^
  6. 00:45:209 (5) - ^
  7. 00:46:169 (1) - ^
  8. 00:48:569 (4,5) - ^
  9. 00:50:009 (1) - ^
  10. 01:05:129 (3,4) - ^
  11. 01:08:249 (1) - ^
  12. 01:09:449 (4,5,6) - ^
  13. 01:11:129 (1) - ^
  14. 01:15:929 (2) - ^
  15. 01:16:889 (4) - ^
  16. 01:17:609 (6) - ^
  17. 01:18:329 (7) - ^
  18. 01:18:809 (1) - ^

Hard

  1. 00:00:089 - start note by easy,normal diff ummm.
  2. 00:06:089 (1) - plz change far away
  3. 01:09:209 (1,2,3,4) - maybe it's too hard.
  4. 01:11:609 (1,2,3,4) - not pretty flow...umm change slider shape?
  5. 01:28:409 (1) - NC?
hoLysoup
1,846 posts
Joined September 2009
hoLysoup
I love this song <3
:>
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Mod4Mod on your Queue =w=/


Easy:
OD and HP -1 would do be good for the easy diff 　done
  1. 00:08:249 (2,3) - since it's easy diff i suggest you to remove these notes and make 1 1/1 short slider instead, it'll be better imo~ no
  2. 00:14:489 (1) - Add Normal simpleset on the slider's reverse, it'll sound better~　done
  3. 00:18:329 (1) - Add finish on slide's end~　done
  4. 00:23:129 (1) - ^ but on slider's start~　done
  5. 00:33:209 (4,5) - same as i said in here 00:08:249 (2,3) - no
  6. 00:42:329 (4,1) - switch the nc , it'll be better on the 2 not the 1 imo　done
  7. 00:46:169 (1) - add finish on this note　done
  8. 00:52:889 (3) - it's kinda boring like this, so maybe make this slider like this?　done
    SPOILER
  9. 01:06:329 (4) - add finish on slider's end　done
  10. 01:21:689 (5) - ^　done
  11. 01:24:569 (3) - ^ but slider's start　done
  12. 01:26:009 (4) - add drum simpleset in this note　done
Hard:
I suggest you to reduce the hp and od by one since it'll fit the map more
Good diff, best diff out of all them~


Good job on this map, but wow nice for old map o.o/

Good luck on this <3
thanks m4m~
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec
>Losertic
thanks m4m
sru,almost no
but,fixed distance mod
and little change.

>hoLy
i love sphere~! XD
Asgard
639 posts
Joined June 2011
Asgard
[Hard]
00:12:569 (4) - wrong space
00:15:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not beauty pattern.. try change pattern with slider and notes
00:20:609 (4) - 1 grid right
00:29:369 (2,3,4,5,6) - too hard... remember this is hard not insane
00:30:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as 00:15:449
00:36:089 (6) - too far... how about 204, 268
00:36:569 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about this? http://puu.sh/4UNyE.jpg
00:55:769 (1) - remove NC?
00:56:729 (2,3,4,5) - more curve like this http://puu.sh/4UNAY.png
01:09:209 (1,2,3,4) - too hard... this is hard diff not insane

[Normal]
00:06:569 (4,5) - i think stacked note is hard for newbie players
00:09:689 (4) - NC
00:17:849 (5) - ^
00:36:569 (4) - ^
00:40:889 (5) - ^
00:42:329 (1) - remove NC
00:43:289 (3) - NC
01:05:849 (5) - ^
01:09:929 (6) - ^

[Easy]
well.. looks good
Amu
15 posts
Joined February 2011
Amu

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Mod4Mod on your Queue =w=/


Amu's Normal:
HP -1 will be good for this diff imo~
  1. 00:03:449 (6) - I don't suggest you to use stuck on normal diff, so maybe move it somewhere like this?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:06:569 (4,5) - ^ it's a bit too hard for the normal diff, so maybe do something like this? Just remove this note 00:06:569 (4) - i don't think it'll follow anything~
    SPOILER
  3. 00:10:649 (6) - move this note to x:336 y:216 so it'll be a perfect triangle
  4. 00:14:489 (6) - make this slider a bit curve it'll play a bit nicer and fun imo~
  5. 00:19:769 (2) - move this slider 2 grids to the left so it'll make nice mirror effect to the first slider~
  6. 00:33:689 (6) - maybe make this slider like this, so the end of this slider stuck under this slider 00:31:769 (2) -
    SPOILER

Good job on this map, but wow nice for old map o.o/

Good luck on this <3
all fixed , thx for mod:3
regenz
1,277 posts
Joined November 2009
regenz
M4M

general

i guess no problem here.

Hard

*** after play test this diff with pen. I think AR 8 make a map alot easier to read. some jump is not suit for AR7

00:00:149 (1) - i've felt this note can be make better and I've think it should start at 00:00:329 instead of 00:00:149 ( so It can resolve no sound it normal and easy also )


some set of notes missing a whistle at 3rd beat compare to 00:17:369 (1,2,3,4,5) - not miss
00:15:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 5 miss
00:21:209 (1,2,3,4,5) - head 3 slider
00:26:009 (4) - whistle this is better
and some more until it's - x - x pattern (x = hitsound , - = none)
and if it's pattern please told me to make me learn a pattern

why not follow a drum here 00:55:529,00:55:649

in chorus section it's might be better if you add a snare drum hitsound at each place you 've already place a whistle ( 2nd beat ,4th beat)
http://puu.sh/4UOYV.zip < you can use these
use it until 01:24:569 (1) -
some except 01:19:289 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - use clap every white beat.
01:10:649 (2,3,4) - clap
01:17:609 (2) - finish sound?
01:24:809 (2,4) - remove this is fit more better.

you might not interest. but please try it at once.

Amu's Normal

00:34:649 (1) - whistle at head of slider is mistake ? sound not good for me
01:24:569 (2) - finish at start of slider and remove whistle at middle of slider ( it's sound weird ) previous was fine.
01:24:569 (2) - use soft sound or normal but with more quite maybe 40 percent volume ( if normal )

please read about snare drum additional hit sound in chorus section at hard diff modding.


easy

01:10:649 finish?

rest seem fine ( i guess it can't add an aditional snare drum hitsound.

I didn't moding for a longtime may be I've mistake something . sorry about it . If it's not helpful at all

my M4m maps https://osu.ppy.sh/s/66957
Amu
15 posts
Joined February 2011
Amu
[quote="Losertic"]Hello!

Amu's Normal

  1. 00:05:849 (3,4,5) - maybe it's too hard for beginner. (i think not good stack note by normal diff) if you non-fix this mod, plz change perpect stack. 00:06:569 (4,5) - move (307,323)
    00:19:769 (2) ~ 00:28:889 (5) - change this?
    SPOILER
    ─ 00:19:769 (2) - move (99,188)
    ─ 00:20:729 (3) - move (324,197)
    ─ 00:21:689 (4) - move (316,301)
    ─ 00:22:169 (5) - move (218,347)
    ─ 00:22:649 (6) - move (220,239)
    ─ 00:23:129 (1) - move (126,292)
    ─ 00:23:609 (2) - move (154,187)
    ─ 00:25:529 (4) - move (357,187)
    ─ 00:26:969 (1) - move (465,191)
    ─ 00:27:449 (2) - move (409,287)
    ─ 00:27:929 (3) - move (321,231)
    ─ 00:28:409 (4) - move (369,135)
    ─ 00:28:889 (5) - move (269,93)
  2. 00:30:809 (1,2) - check distance.
  3. 00:36:089 (3) - ^
  4. 00:36:809 (5,6) - ^
  5. 00:40:889 (5) - ^
  6. 00:45:209 (5) - ^
  7. 00:46:169 (1) - ^
  8. 00:48:569 (4,5) - ^
  9. 00:50:009 (1) - ^
  10. 01:05:129 (3,4) - ^
  11. 01:08:249 (1) - ^
  12. 01:09:449 (4,5,6) - ^
  13. 01:11:129 (1) - ^
  14. 01:15:929 (2) - ^
  15. 01:16:889 (4) - ^
  16. 01:17:609 (6) - ^
  17. 01:18:329 (7) - ^
  18. 01:18:809 (1) - ^
all fixed, thanks for mod!!!
Amu
15 posts
Joined February 2011
Amu
[Normal]
00:06:569 (4,5) - i think stacked note is hard for newbie players
00:09:689 (4) - NC
00:17:849 (5) - ^
00:36:569 (4) - ^
00:40:889 (5) - ^
00:42:329 (1) - remove NC
00:43:289 (3) - NC
01:05:849 (5) - ^
01:09:929 (6) - ^

all fixed,thanks for mod!!
Amu
15 posts
Joined February 2011
Amu

regenz wrote:

M4M


Amu's Normal

00:34:649 (1) - whistle at head of slider is mistake ? sound not good for me
01:24:569 (2) - finish at start of slider and remove whistle at middle of slider ( it's sound weird ) previous was fine.
01:24:569 (2) - use soft sound or normal but with more quite maybe 40 percent volume ( if normal )

please read about snare drum additional hit sound in chorus section at hard diff modding.


my M4m maps https://osu.ppy.sh/s/66957
all fixed, thx for mod!!!
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec

Asgard wrote:

[Hard]
00:12:569 (4) - wrong space done
00:15:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not beauty pattern.. try change pattern with slider and notes no
00:20:609 (4) - 1 grid right done
00:29:369 (2,3,4,5,6) - too hard... remember this is hard not insane no
00:30:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as 00:15:449 no
00:36:089 (6) - too far... how about 204, 268 no
00:36:569 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about this? http://puu.sh/4UNyE.jpg done
00:55:769 (1) - remove NC? done
00:56:729 (2,3,4,5) - more curve like this http://puu.sh/4UNAY.png ??
01:09:209 (1,2,3,4) - too hard... this is hard diff not insane no

regenz wrote:

M4M

general

i guess no problem here.

Hard

*** after play test this diff with pen. I think AR 8 make a map alot easier to read. some jump is not suit for AR7 done

00:00:149 (1) - i've felt this note can be make better and I've think it should start at 00:00:329 instead of 00:00:149 ( so It can resolve no sound it normal and easy also )


some set of notes missing a whistle at 3rd beat compare to 00:17:369 (1,2,3,4,5) - not miss cant understand eng :(
00:15:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 5 miss cant understand eng :(
00:21:209 (1,2,3,4,5) - head 3 slider cant understand eng :(
00:26:009 (4) - whistle this is better no
and some more until it's - x - x pattern (x = hitsound , - = none)
and if it's pattern please told me to make me learn a pattern

why not follow a drum here 00:55:529,00:55:649 no

in chorus section it's might be better if you add a snare drum hitsound at each place you 've already place a whistle ( 2nd beat ,4th beat)
http://puu.sh/4UOYV.zip < you can use these
use it until 01:24:569 (1) - no
some except 01:19:289 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - use clap every white beat. no
01:10:649 (2,3,4) - clap no
01:17:609 (2) - finish sound? done
01:24:809 (2,4) - remove this is fit more better. done

you might not interest. but please try it at once.

easy

01:10:649 finish? no

rest seem fine ( i guess it can't add an aditional snare drum hitsound.

I didn't moding for a longtime may be I've mistake something . sorry about it . If it's not helpful at all

my M4m maps https://osu.ppy.sh/s/66957
Thanks Asgard and regenz
Kioshinxs_old
Kioshinxs_old
I can create a one diff in taiko ? :3?

thanks
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec

MachineGunt wrote:

I can create a one diff in taiko ? :3?

thanks
sry,no.
Kodora
Kodora
hey frost =w= as promiced :3


[General]

  1. Maybe mute sliderslide? Doesn't fit calm vocals here imo.

[Hard]

  1. 00:00:149 (1) - I would recommend change for a bit for better flow, try something like this:

    SPOILER
  2. 00:01:289 (4,5,6) - Maybe stack them and try to make a little triangle here? Something like this:

    SPOILER
  3. 00:07:289 (5) - Move last anchorpoint to x208 y108 to make it flows more nicely
  4. 00:09:449 (5,1) - There are two strong beats at this note and at the beginning at slider. How about made normal-sampleset on them? (If you will apply this, try to do same in all parts like this)
  5. 00:16:169 (4,5) - I strongly recommend you decrease DS here to 1.80 to made this jump feels more natural - this is Hard diff, so jumps like this may feels too much. Also, NC to (5) due to jump would be pretty nice here.
  6. 00:22:169 (3) - New combo due to jump?
  7. 00:29:369 (2,3,4,5,6) - Uh, this part is really more Insane-like. To made it easier to play try to reduse DS between those notes to x1.80-x1.60 - it will be more friendly for a Hard diff.
  8. 00:31:769 (5,6) - Same as at 00:16:169 (4,5)
  9. 00:38:489 (1) - Add finish to the beginning of slider to emphazire vocals?
  10. 00:40:409 (1,2,3) - Hmm.. This part looks actually a bit strange... Try something like this?

    SPOILER


    376,64,40409,6,0,B|268:92|204:9,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    184,112,41129,2,0,B|224:160|276:152,1,90
    212,20,41609,2,0,B|160:12|108:48,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  11. 00:42:329 (5) - Add finish to emphazire vocals?
  12. 00:45:689 (6) - Add finish
  13. 00:45:929 (1) - Add finish to emphazire vocals to the end of slider?
  14. 00:54:569 (2) - Maybe curve it a bit? Like this:

    SPOILER
  15. 00:56:249 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uh, this flow feels a bit weird... try something like this?
    SPOILER


    408,104,56249,6,0,B|360:112|312:80,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    240,120,56729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    204,200,56969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    120,232,57209,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    60,300,57449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  16. 00:58:889 (4,5,6,7,8) - This stream is a bit hard to catch due to (5) being on blue tick - try to just remove this note
  17. 01:09:209 (1,2,3,4) - ♥
  18. 01:14:249 (3,4,5,6,7) - Same as at 00:58:889 (4,5,6,7,8)
  19. 01:21:209 (1,2,3,4) - Try something like this?
    SPOILER
    [img]
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078809[/img]
[Amu's Normal]

  1. 00:00:089 (1) - Move this circle to 00:00:149 - like fbs did on his diff
  2. 00:03:449 (6) - This finish sounds a bit random for me, consider remove it from here & add to beginning of 00:03:929 (1) -
  3. 00:03:929 (1) - Remove whistle from sliderbody?
  4. 00:05:849 (3) - ^
  5. 00:06:809 (4) - Follow your previous hitsound patterns here should be whistle i guess
  6. 00:07:289 (5) - If you want to keep this finish try to reduse volume on it, two finishes sounds a bit too loud here
  7. 00:07:769 (1) - 00:09:689 - Use drum-sampleset here too - for consistensy
  8. 00:16:889 (4) - Finish on tail?
  9. 00:23:129 (1) - Finish
  10. 00:31:769 (1,2,3) - Oops, spacing issue here
  11. 00:34:649 (1) - move last anchorpoint to x384y56 to make it flows more nicely
  12. 00:36:569 (1,2,3) - I strongly recommend avoid use a lot of circles in Normal diff - try to replace it with 1/2 slider to made it easier for beginners, something like this:

    SPOILER
  13. 00:38:489 (1) - Add finish to emphazire vocals?
  14. 00:46:169 (1) - ^ (to the beginning of slider)
  15. 00:59:609 (1) - add finish?
  16. 01:04:889 (2,3,4) - Again, this can be too hard for a Normal diff. I strongly recommend you replace it with 1/2 reverse-slider same as at 00:36:569 (1,2,3)
  17. 01:05:369 (4,1) - Spacing issue
  18. 01:14:969 (1) - Finish to the head of slider to emphazire vocals?
  19. 01:17:369 (5,6) - Maybe replace 2 notes with slider here? Fits better imo
  20. 01:18:809 (1) - Why this part suddenly have normal-sampleset?
  21. 01:22:649 (3,1) - Disable grid snap and move (1) to made perfect blanket here
[Easy]

  1. 00:00:089 (1) - Start it at 00:00:149 - same as you did on Hard diff
  2. 00:34:649 (1) - Change form a bit maybe? Like this:

    SPOILER
  3. 00:37:529 (1) - Finish to the tail of slider to emphazire vocals?
  4. 00:46:169 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm, this rhythm feels a bit empty.. try something like this instead?

    SPOILER
  5. 00:59:609 (1) - Add finish please :3
  6. 01:14:009 (5) - ^ (to the tail)
Pretty nice map. Hitsounds in normal feels a bit inconsistent, but i guess it can be easily fixed with some mods. Good luck with rank! :3
frost-b-spec
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frost-b-spec
>kodora
ty mod~
little change.
Myxo
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Myxo
Random Mod~

[Easy]
  1. The easy diff is well made, though some parts seem pretty boring to me. Sometimes, you've just mapped every second white tick for a long time, or reused the same "triple" (01:04:889 (2,3) - ) very often. The song has got more potential. For example:
  2. 00:00:089 (1,2,3) -
    SPOILER
    Infact, the 2 isn't even an important beat. You could make a timeline like that:
    SPOILER
    It would be much more interesting but still easy to read.
  3. 00:03:929 (1,2,3) - Same here.
  4. ( 00:07:769 (1,2,3,4,1) - Here the 4 is placed good, because there's a drum beat. )
  5. 01:06:329 (4) - Blanket could be better.
  6. 01:16:889 (2,1) - Random 90° angles don't make sense here. First of all it doesn't look good and makes your map feel like a 2011-map if it's not rotated, but it doesn't play very good too. If you don't know where to go after a straight slider, go straight on or use low angles.
[Amu's Normal]
  1. The normal diff is ok, but seems boring and repetetive right now. There are some exceptions, but you've mapped almost white-tick only. This makes the map less interesting. You should think of more more variety here. For example:
  2. 00:00:089 (1,2,3) -
    SPOILER
    The red tick where the white bar is located is a more important beat than the white tick before it in my opinion. You could map it like that:
    SPOILER
    It would be much more interesting but still easy to read.
  3. 00:03:449 (6) - Remove finish.
  4. 00:03:929 (1,2,3) - Better, more interesting timeline:
    SPOILER
  5. There are more places like that where you could map red ticks instead of white ticks to make the diff better. Try to listen to the main instruments and fix some circles.
  6. 00:07:289 (5) - Remove finish.
  7. 00:09:689 (1) - It makes no sense to me to start with drum sample set here. Start using it here: 00:07:769 (1) - instead. Also, the first part with drum sample set doesn't have any hitsound placement. You may think of a simple pattern here.
[Hard]
  1. This diff is the best diff of the mapset. Well done :3 It's not as repetetive as the other diffs. Only some small cosmetic things:
  2. 00:18:809 (4,5,1) - Change this to a consistent curve like that:
    SPOILER
  3. 00:22:649 (4,5,1) - Change to straight line between the sliders.
  4. 01:19:289 (1,2,3,4) - Keep the sliders consistent.
Good luck with the mapset :*
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