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senya - Utakata, Ai no Mahoroba

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BeatofIke
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, January 01, 2013 at 8:46:20 PM

Artist: senya
Title: Utakata, Ai no Mahoroba
Source: Touhou
Tags: opening jonathanlfj th08 Imperishable Night Yuuhei Satellite Fujiwara Mokou Rewrite LoliSora Reach for the Moon Immortal Smoke
BPM: 155
Filesize: 15299kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.93 stars, 76 notes)
  2. Hard (4.83 stars, 173 notes)
  3. jonathanlfj's Lunatic (5 stars, 286 notes)
  4. Normal (3.78 stars, 107 notes)
  5. Rewrite (5 stars, 270 notes)
Download: senya - Utakata, Ai no Mahoroba
Download: senya - Utakata, Ai no Mahoroba (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 5th ranked map! This map is similar to my 1st Map! Enjoy!
It's the same Touhou anime series (Fantasy Kaleidoscope ~The Memories of Phantasm~)

Youtube Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jb16UOIO ... ure=relmfu

Easy Difficulty: Completed! (Mapped by me)
Normal Difficulty: Completed! (Mapped by me)
Hard Difficulty: Completed! (Mapped by me)
Rewrite Difficulty: Completed! (Mapped by Rewrite)
Lunatic Difficulty: Completed! (Mapped by jonathanlfj)
wantuole
second~ :D
I like your easy and nor
Topic Starter
BeatofIke
Thanks! :D
Topic Starter
BeatofIke
WTF?! I can't update! :o
Please don't download/update this map atm.

EDIT: Fixed! Please update! :D
Satellite
nice song & senya <3 

awesome map!!!
Topic Starter
BeatofIke
Thanks! Also updated!
Topic Starter
BeatofIke
Moved to Pending!
Ready for Mod! :D
Topic Starter
BeatofIke
Added jomnhnk's Taiko Muzukashii Difficulty!
Added jomnhnk's Taiko Oni Difficulty!
Added "jomnhnk" and "jonathanlfj" in tags!
Updated! :D
BCI
first? owo

[General]
if this is a remix from Kaguya's theme (it is, I'm sure) add some tags >:D
Kaguya Houraisan Flight of the Bamboo Cutter Lunatic Princess Taketori Hishou (<= don't really nessescary since it's the same as Flight of the Bamboo Cutter, but maybe~) th08 Imperishable Night Yuuhei Satellite (<= = senya)
DAT U Y U REMOVE THIS AWESOME VIDEO please add link in creator's words atleast, I tried to find this opening (from IN with Kaguya owo) before and failed
bg isn't so perfect :< (if you don't accept this, please change the 1,3 and 5 combocolours (don't really fit))
current

[Colours]
Combo1 : 231,165,218
Combo2 : 118,10,102
Combo3 : 170,170,255
Combo4 : 13,92,164
Combo5 : 64,0,128
personally i like this bg, hope you can do nice combocolours

[Easy]
last two green sections in end (after red) are useless
up the regular volume to ~70% i don't hear any of sliders/circles
00:04:865 (2) - maybe end this slider at 00:05:639 due to vocal? 1/2 repeat fits nothing
01:03:994 - it will be nice if you put this timing section to do thw slidertick more quiet (breaks pattern but hear more clean)
01:25:784 (4) - spacing here is 0.98 and it's bad and easy to see. fix please

[Normal]
same about volume
last two green sections in end (after red) are useless too
HP and OD -1 pls, this is a normal c: Easy have 2 (HP and OD), Normal 4 and Hard 5 and imo Normal would be closer to an Easy
00:05:445 (2) - don't fit with the vocal :< try smf like this http://puu.sh/1ohEy
00:07:961 (5) - NC due to finish at BGM and square pattern?
00:41:252 (4,5,6,7) - this is a lot harder that can be. try this? (don't care about place at this xD) http://puu.sh/1ohHc
00:42:026 (1,2,3,4) - this sliders is so ugly specially, why? :/ consider to move all middle points to the middle lol; also add at begin of (4) some finish owo
00:59:832 (6) - delete finish pls, BGM don't have it (and Easy too)
01:03:994 - same as Easy
01:06:026 (4) - delete finish and add a whistle (BGM had whistle here :<) (and Easy too [2])
01:24:284 (4) - maybe add a NC like in begin?

[Muzu]
in Taiko mode strongly suggested to keep N hitsounds, pls change this
why no 1.40 sv and no speed changes
00:11:058 (19,20,21,22,23,24) - all of these can be a D
00:16:284 (33) - kat here due to consistency
00:19:574 - add a note here (i'm a newbie and for me this pattern without this note is so hard)
00:19:961 (45,46,47) - why no kdD :<
00:21:316 - add a note here with k or move on there 00:21:510 (49,50) - since BGM have a triplet here
00:24:219 (59,60) - ctrl+g pls
00:25:768 - missed a beat here
00:29:832 (79) - don here
have to stop now since i personally dislike this diff and want to remap :< same as Oni but remember about hitsounds

[Hard]
all the same (volume and two green lines)
00:31:187 (1,2,3,4) - this jump is a bit hard, do it like this http://puu.sh/1oigZ (code below since i got 1.00 spacing with 00:32:736 (1) -
68,204,31187,6,0,P|148:204,1,80
256,280,31574,2,0,P|176:280,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
232,204,31961,2,0,P|312:204,1,80
416,280,32348,2,0,P|336:280,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:48:994 (4,1,2) - maybe NC should be (1,2,1) or (1,2,3) ?
01:03:703 (1) - same as Normal and Easy

[Lunatic]
different kiai and lead-in, please check and fix (kiai must be like others diff, yours is earlier)
HP-1 pls
sooooo pro ;__;

good luck, ignore my noob mod~ /dissapears
Topic Starter
BeatofIke
Thanks for the mod! I just added the tags for all difficulties and added the video for now! I'll fix my difficulties later!
Waiting for jomnhnk and jonathanlfj's fix! :D

-> Added New Combo Colors
-> Fixed Kiai-Time and Lead-In Inconsistencies!
-> Increase Voulume for my Difficulties!
-> Removed the last 2 green timing sections for my difficulties.
-> Insert break time on Lunatic to fix the HP Drain issue when playing with Hard Rock!
-> I didn't like the New Background, so no add!
jomnhnk

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

first? owo

[Muzu]
in Taiko mode strongly suggested to keep N hitsounds, pls change this
why no 1.40 sv and no speed changes
00:11:058 (19,20,21,22,23,24) - all of these can be a D
00:16:284 (33) - kat here due to consistency
00:19:574 - add a note here (i'm a newbie and for me this pattern without this note is so hard)
00:19:961 (45,46,47) - why no kdD :<
00:21:316 - add a note here with k or move on there 00:21:510 (49,50) - since BGM have a triplet here
00:24:219 (59,60) - ctrl+g pls
00:25:768 - missed a beat here
00:29:832 (79) - don here
have to stop now since i personally dislike this diff and want to remap :< same as Oni but remember about hitsounds


good luck, ignore my noob mod~ /dissapears
Thank you mod~i will change and update
Topic Starter
BeatofIke

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

[Easy]
last two green sections in end (after red) are useless Fixed
up the regular volume to ~70% i don't hear any of sliders/circles Fixed
00:04:865 (2) - maybe end this slider at 00:05:639 due to vocal? 1/2 repeat fits nothing What's wrong with the vocal? It fits well for an Easy and it's symmetical. No fix!
01:03:994 - it will be nice if you put this timing section to do thw slidertick more quiet (breaks pattern but hear more clean) No thanks!
01:25:784 (4) - spacing here is 0.98 and it's bad and easy to see. fix please Fixed

[Normal]
same about volume Fixed
last two green sections in end (after red) are useless too Fixed
HP and OD -1 pls, this is a normal c: Easy have 2 (HP and OD), Normal 4 and Hard 5 and imo Normal would be closer to an Easy Fixed
00:05:445 (2) - don't fit with the vocal :< try smf like this http://puu.sh/1ohEy Fixed
00:07:961 (5) - NC due to finish at BGM and square pattern? Fixed
00:41:252 (4,5,6,7) - this is a lot harder that can be. try this? (don't care about place at this xD) http://puu.sh/1ohHc That looks weird as faq XD No Fix!
00:42:026 (1,2,3,4) - this sliders is so ugly specially, why? :/ consider to move all middle points to the middle lol; also add at begin of (4) some finish owo I might consider this later, but for now, no fix!
00:59:832 (6) - delete finish pls, BGM don't have it (and Easy too) I just replaced the finish with a whistle and also added a clap at 01:00:219 (7) since it was lacking one.
01:03:994 - same as Easy No thanks!
01:06:026 (4) - delete finish and add a whistle (BGM had whistle here :<) (and Easy too [2]) Fixed
01:24:284 (4) - maybe add a NC like in begin? Fixed

[Hard]
all the same (volume and two green lines) Fixed
00:31:187 (1,2,3,4) - this jump is a bit hard, do it like this http://puu.sh/1oigZ (code below since i got 1.00 spacing with 00:32:736 (1) -
68,204,31187,6,0,P|148:204,1,80
256,280,31574,2,0,P|176:280,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
232,204,31961,2,0,P|312:204,1,80
416,280,32348,2,0,P|336:280,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
Hell Yes! Fixed!
00:48:994 (4,1,2) - maybe NC should be (1,2,1) or (1,2,3) ? I decided to add NC at 00:49:768 instead and remove combo at 00:49:187. I think it fits better imo.
01:03:703
(1) - same as Normal and Easy No thanks!
Thanks for the mod! It's really good! I will try to mod your map the same quality as this one! :D
HakuNoKaemi
This is the map you wanted to be modded, right?
(So I can start now)

EDIT: Starred anyway
Topic Starter
BeatofIke

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

This is the map you wanted to be modded, right?
(So I can start now)

EDIT: Starred anyway
Yes, and thanks for your star!
Also, your map maps has a lot of difficulties so it may take a while for me to finish modding.
HakuNoKaemi
I'm not so good in Taiko modding, as you'll see.

[Timing]
  1. The last offset were a bit off, so investigating lead to this

    Remember to check "Omit first bar line" in the 76 BPM section
[Video Offset]
  1. Video Offset is 25.
    Video,25,"Touhou Video.avi"
[Easy]
  1. You can actually map the part after 00:09:510 (1) end, as this is as long as a tv size
  2. 00:54:413 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Look better with less squares. Example
  3. 01:09:897 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
[Normal]
  1. You can actually map the part after 00:09:510 (1) end, as this is as long as a tv size
  2. 00:03:316 (1,2,3) - 00:04:865 (1,2,3) - You may do like this (watch the timeline and the two slider (you can just copypaste for symmetry for the other two)
  3. 00:36:800 (x) - You can add a 1/1 Slider here

  4. 00:41:252 (4) - Move this note to 00:41:058 (4) ? It'll follow heavier beats. I can suggest a symmetric pattern for this, though it's more than a little part
  5. 00:47:445 (5) - It'll be better as a single slider (slightly curve (3) too, for 00:48:219 (1,2,3) - you should just Ctrl+H it)
  6. 00:59:445 (4,5,6,7) - Move them as they're less linear
  7. 01:00:607 (1,2) - Use a curvier pattern
  8. 01:02:155 (1,2) - ^
[jom's Taiko Muzukashii]
  1. 01:29:034 (x) - Add k?
[Hard]
  1. Use slider tick 2 since most of the song have 1/2 notes
  2. You can actually map the part after 00:09:510 (1) end, as this is as long as a tv size
  3. 00:30:413 (4,5) - Change to this pattern?

    SPOILER

    211,35,30026,2,0,P|176:44|148:76,1,80
    256,112,30413,1,0,0:0:0
    324,164,30607,2,0,P|256:200|188:164,1,160
  4. 00:31:187 (1,2,1,2) - As applying ^ would result in overlap
    SPOILER

    112,192,31187,6,0,P|140:232|172:252,1,80
    216,348,31574,2,0,P|188:320|148:304,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    296,348,31961,6,0,P|324:320|360:304,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    400,192,32348,2,0,P|372:232|346:249,1,80
  5. 00:32:736 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can curve this
  6. 00:53:639 (4) - uhm, try to curve it differently (to
[jom's Taiko Oni]
  1. 00:02:542 (9) - You could try moving this to 00:02:349 ? It feels somehow better with the rhythm you used at the start
  2. 00:11:445 (40) - D, will make it more epic
  3. 01:28:284 (180) - k? You used it with that cadence before
[Lunatic]
  1. Use slider tick 2 since most of the song have 1/2 notes
  2. 00:12:607 (1) - In fact, the stream should start after the end of this slider and the guitar end at 00:13:768 (2). So I suggest you to add a note at 00:13:671 (x) or make this slider end at 00:13:768
  3. 00:21:510 (4,1,2,3,4) - You can do this, as it should stay better. (It follow the guitar
  4. 00:34:284 (x) - Since you were following voice, this is the "i" of th "koi"
  5. 00:34:478 (1,2,3) - It should follow the voice better like this
  6. 01:25:284 (3) - Use a 1/1 slider? (shaped like 01:26:284 (1), maybe )
Topic Starter
BeatofIke
Thanks for your mod. I owe you!
HakuNoKaemi
I finished
EDIT: if you need the codes of some part/want me to suggest how to change(I said it in a certain part in the mod), just contact me
Topic Starter
BeatofIke

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Timing]
  1. The last offset were a bit off, so investigating lead to this

    Remember to check "Omit first bar line" in the 76 BPM section
Fixed!

[Video Offset]
  1. Video Offset is 25. Fixed!
    Video,25,"Touhou Video.avi"
[Easy]
  1. You can actually map the part after 00:09:510 (1) end, as this is as long as a tv size My guess mapper suggested that I do this. I might consider.
  2. 00:54:413 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Look better with less squares. Example This pattern was intentional. XD
  3. 01:09:897 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Same as above :<
[Normal]
  1. You can actually map the part after 00:09:510 (1) end, as this is as long as a tv size Like Easy, I might consider.
  2. 00:03:316 (1,2,3) - 00:04:865 (1,2,3) - You may do like this (watch the timeline and the two slider (you can just copypaste for symmetry for the other two)
    SPOILER
    Nah, I prefer this way for now!
  3. 00:36:800 (x) - You can add a 1/1 Slider here Nah. It sounds inconsistent with the vocals. Maybe I should just remap this part to make it better?

  4. 00:41:252 (4) - Move this note to 00:41:058 (4) ? It'll follow heavier beats. I can suggest a symmetric pattern for this, though it's more than a little part Ah yes! Fixed!
  5. 00:47:445 (5) - It'll be better as a single slider (slightly curve (3) too, for 00:48:219 (1,2,3) - you should just Ctrl+H it) Fixed!
  6. 00:59:445 (4,5,6,7) - Move them as they're less linear Nah! I prefer this pattern better.
  7. 01:00:607 (1,2) - Use a curvier pattern Your suggestion isn't bad, but I still l prefer mine XD
  8. 01:02:155 (1,2) - ^ ^
[Hard]
  1. Use slider tick 2 since most of the song have 1/2 notes Hmm.. Maybe ._.
  2. You can actually map the part after 00:09:510 (1) end, as this is as long as a tv size Might Consider!
  3. 00:30:413 (4,5) - Change to this pattern? Fixed

    SPOILER

    211,35,30026,2,0,P|176:44|148:76,1,80
    256,112,30413,1,0,0:0:0
    324,164,30607,2,0,P|256:200|188:164,1,160
  4. 00:31:187 (1,2,1,2) - As applying ^ would result in overlap Fixed
    SPOILER

    112,192,31187,6,0,P|140:232|172:252,1,80
    216,348,31574,2,0,P|188:320|148:304,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    296,348,31961,6,0,P|324:320|360:304,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    400,192,32348,2,0,P|372:232|346:249,1,80
  5. 00:32:736 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can curve this Fixed
  6. 00:53:639 (4) - uhm, try to curve it differently (to Nah
Fixed some stuff! Updated! Waiting for the GD's to update.
jonathanlfj

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

I'm not so good in Taiko modding, as you'll see.

[Timing]
  1. The last offset were a bit off, so investigating lead to this

    Remember to check "Omit first bar line" in the 76 BPM section nice timing, fixed
[Video Offset]
  1. Video Offset is 25.
    Video,25,"Touhou Video.avi"
    fixed
[Lunatic]
  1. Use slider tick 2 since most of the song have 1/2 notes ok~
  2. 00:12:607 (1) - In fact, the stream should start after the end of this slider and the guitar end at 00:13:768 (2). So I suggest you to add a note at 00:13:671 (x) or make this slider end at 00:13:768 the missing note was intentional to give enough time for the player to "jump" to the stream as well as providing a transition from the soft sample/slower sv to normal sample/faster sv
  3. 00:21:510 (4,1,2,3,4) - You can do this, as it should stay better. (It follow the guitar
    done
  4. 00:34:284 (x) - Since you were following voice, this is the "i" of th "koi" alrite added note
  5. 00:34:478 (1,2,3) - It should follow the voice better like this
    i actually mapped this part following the piano
  6. 01:25:284 (3) - Use a 1/1 slider? (shaped like 01:26:284 (1), maybe )
    again, this one i was trying to follow the piano, but yeah i fixed up the spacing a bit for the sliders
Thanks for the mod ^_^ updated: http://puu.sh/1sAi9
btw BeatofIke you should check your red timing sections, the last one is supposed to be 01:32:693
Topic Starter
BeatofIke
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