Hi there, from my queue.
* = Slightly more suggested than others.
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* = Slightly more suggested than others.
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Haha the background. Nice.
Nice combo colors, but I think 1 and 2 may look too similar compared too the other colors. Maybe change 1? Just a loose thought, you don't have to.
00:22:492 (3,4) Maybe this instead?
00:37:346 (2) Delete maybe?
* 00:11:083 (4,1,2,3,4) It might be better if you put it in like a flower or star shape. Maybe something like this? (Its not a perfect representation, but you should get the main picture.)
00:19:964 (1,2,3,4) and 00:22:492 (1,2,3,4) It might be better if these two were symmetrically rhythmic ( like in 00:25:020 (1,2,3,4) and 00:27:549 (1,2,3,4) )
* 01:02:945 (1,2,3) - I think it would be better if you followed the rhythm like the rest of the chorus. As is, this makes the drums sound weird.
* 01:10:530 (1,2,3) ^
01:20:643 (1) Maybe you should replace this with a spinner that starts here and ends at around 01:23:172 ?
01:47:507 (4) Why is the tick silenced?
OD -1?
00:44:773 (5,1) I feel that it would be better if you took the repeat off of 5, move 1 to where 5 usually ended, and add a circle (stacked on top of 2) where 1 usually ended. (But i don't know about the spacing for 5 and 1. Maybe you could keep it the same, idk.)
01:43:398 (1,2,3) If you can, I suggest that you stack 1 on top of 2 and 3, or stack 2 and 3 below 1.
01:59:042 (2,3) and 01:59:990 (5,6) Maybe you could follow the same structure as 01:58:568 (1) and 01:59:516 (4)
02:00:464 You could add a 2 beat spinner here (and just break 1 into a circle at the endpoint). Idk, just a thought.
02:19:269 (2) Kind of like what I was suggesting in the beginning of this difficulty, you could cut the repeat off of 2, move it a 1/2 beat over (so that it ends at the same place) and add a circle here.