eee wrote:

[Gonzvlo's World]
While there are no big problems, I just want know why all the kai triggers are slightly late.
Mp3 change :P Everything done~

Kitsunemimi wrote:

[Gonzvlo's World]:

00:28:464 (2) - Confusing stack. Would make more sense to unstack it, but the spacing is a bit tricky, so try putting it off to the side a bit.
This diff is really nice, although a bit tricky. See if you can find some places to make a little easier?
Done, Oh! and tweaked some patterns to make them easier~

1. Big World-->World-->No World-->Huge World Hum... make the diffs names more logic? Why "No world" is between Big and Huge lol. Also fix the file's name http://puu.sh/1OYw
2. Preview time is different on Gonz'
3. Wow there's a real problem with your diff settings...
   HP Drain: 1 - 5 - 7 - 8... On easy even with hard rock mod the hp bar doesn't move at all D: make it +2 or +1?
   OD: 0 - 5 - 8 - 8... This one is totally messed up... I suggest 2 - 4 - 6 - 7 or 3 - 5 - 7 - 8
   AR: 1 - 5 - 7 - 7... Same here, totally messed up :/ I suggest 4 - 5 - 7 - 8 (I've chosen a high AR on the easy because there's 1/2 stacks on it. Because of those, it should be AR3~5, but if you remove them and makes sliders instead or just avoid to make 1/2, AR2~3 should be okay.)
4. In my opinion the slider velocity should be a bit faster on No world like 1,6~1,8 But it's not really important I think.
5. You should use Gonz' custom hitsound on your diffs (or try to make something like DC's but good luck lol). Sounds way better than the soft clap.Also you should add whistles on the soft parts, only normal and claps isn't really nice. If you don't wanna use custom hitsound then lower the sound of the soft parts please, the clap is really too loud.
6. Anyway hitsounds are often really loud imo, especially the spinners. That's not because the album's name is "Loud" that you should do this lol Sorry my sound settings where wrong orz
7. Unsnapped notes are unsnapped.

1. 00:18:822 (3,1) - Spacing error here.
2. 00:22:393 (1,2) - Like I said in [General], sliders would be better for 1/2 instead of circles in an Easy.
3. 01:05:965 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/1P1k <--This
4. 03:13:822 (1,2,3) - Hell no, don't forget that it's supposed to be an easy diff. Make a slider with a repeat or something else but not this D:
5. 03:21:441 (2,3,4) - ^
6. 03:29:298 (1,2,3) - ^
7. 03:34:536 (1,2,3) - ^
8. 03:41:668 - Remove this break time...

1. 00:16:430 (6) - Add a new combo here?
2. 00:40:001 (6) - ^
3. 02:19:763 (6) - Add a new combo? I know that you like this nice one colored pattern but it makes your combo too long.

1. Spacing looks really messed up, try to recheck all of your map. (Yeah, I know I'm too lazy to check all of it for you )
2. 02:59:294 (1) - Make it finish at 03:00:716 -

1. Holy shit dude, how long did it take you to make the hitsounds on your diff? D: So pro. Nothing to say except that I'd prefer AR8 for this like I said in [General] and that it's so hard to have a good acc on it orz (but this one is my problem not yours D: )

1. Just Resnap All Notes on all diffs since if I do it the system asks me if I want to save the changes.

1. Please Resnap All Notes.
2. 00:48:811 (8) - New combo here?
3. 00:56:430 (8) - Same here.
4. 00:58:811 (?) - I can feel the strong lack of a note here. Please add a hitcircle here. Feel free to use an appropriate hitsound, or maybe just not add it.
5. 01:03:335 (9) - New combo?
6. 01:07:144 (9) - Same here.
7. 01:10:954 (9) - Same.
8. 01:29:287 (?) - Here's the same of 00:58:811 (?). Why didn't you place a hitcircle in this certain moment of the song? I can't understand.
9. 02:05:001 (8) - New combo?
10. 02:08:335 (6) - Same here.
11. 02:12:620 (8) - ^
12. 02:15:001 (?) - Here we go again. Same of other ones.
13. 02:20:240 (8) - New combo?
14. 02:24:049 (8) - ^
15. 02:27:620 (7) - ^
16. 02:30:239 (?) - You know what I'm talking about.
17. 02:31:668 (6,7,8) - Well, they are really awful. Especially for the fact that they are preceding the break and, even if it wasn't so, I wouldn't place a notes-triplet for that precise moment of that song. Please, consider about modifying it.
18. 02:48:097 (2,3,4,5) - Well, this is pretty confusing. The notes are really close to each other, so they seem they are part of a 1/2 pattern, but then you find out that they are two 1/4 double-notes. Please, consider about changing the pattern.
19. 02:50:001 (7) - New combo.
20. 02:51:906 (2,3,4,5) - Same of 02:48:097 (2,3,4,5)
21. 02:53:811 (7) - New combo.
22. 02:57:620 (7) - ^
23. 02:59:525 (2,3,4,5) - Same of 02:51:906 (2,3,4,5)
24. 03:17:859 (?) - Another strong lack of a note.
25. 03:22:859 (7) - New combo?
26. 03:26:668 (7) - ^
27. 03:30:716 (7) - ^

1. Please Resnap All Notes.
2. 00:36:430 (6) - New combo here.
3. 00:40:239 (7) - ^
4. 00:45:954 (BREAK) - WHAT?!?!? Are you joking? Why didn't you map this part? It's the most beautiful in my opinion. Please map it!!!
5. 01:04:049 (8) - Move this so that it will be placed on the previous blue tick (01:03:930)
6. 01:04:287 (?) - Add a note here with new combo.
7. 01:07:859 (8) - Same of 01:04:049 (8). I think the note will be sound better on the blue tick.
8. 01:08:097 (?) - Add a note here with new combo.
9. 01:11:430 (?) - Add a not here.
10. 01:27:620 (1) - Move this spinner on the following blue tick and add a hitcircle on 01:27:620.
11. 01:36:906 (6) - New combo?
12. 01:52:621 (6) - ^
13. 02:00:954 (BREAK) - Another time? Please noooo! Map this, it would be a big mistake if you don't!
14. 02:48:335 (2,5) - Clap?
15. 02:52:144 (2,4) - ^
16. Please keep on with the same rhythm of hitsounds that I gave right above for this period of the song (02:47:859 ~ 03:03:097)
17. 02:58:097 (10) - New combo?
18. 03:16:192 (1) - Same of 01:27:620 (1)
19. 03:19:763 (1,2,3) - Yach... I don't like this. Please consider to modify it, especially the slider which starts on a really bad place.
20. 03:29:049 (?) - Add a note here with new combo. If you do it, remove combo on 03:29:287 (1) - .
21. 03:30:478 (?) - Add a note here too.
22. 03:37:859 (?) - Add a note here with whistle.

1. About renaming this diff : Well, I think it should be Gonz's World... and I'd also prefer to rename this to Gonz's Growing World... So the names will be Small ~ Growing ~ Big ~ Huge World.
2. This diff has a different preview point compared to other ones. Please fix this.
3. Please Resnap All Notes.
4. 00:45:954 (1) - I want you to add a note here (with finish) to introduce the break. I'd want you also to map this, but it's not a big shame since it's a normal difficulty.
5. 01:10:478 (3,5) - Not perfectly symmetric.
6. 01:13:811 (1) - I'd like this to start on 01:14:287
7. 02:28:811 (1) - I'd prefer a hitcircle on this right moment but it's up to you.
8. 02:39:525 (?) - I'd add a note here... More catchy :3

1. Please Resnap All Notes.
2. Why this diff have different volumes when •Big World• has clearly a 75% volume for all the song? I don't care for guests diffs, just for your diffs. In my opinion guests can use the volume they want, but you should fix your volumes in your two difficulties.
3. 00:42:144 (1) - Whistle instead of finish and then do this ↓
4. 00:45:954 (1) - I want you to add a note here (with finish) to introduce the break.

Kecco wrote:

00:45:954 (1) - I want you to add a note here (with finish) to introduce the break. I'd want you also to map this, but it's not a big shame since it's a normal difficulty. I think I'll stick with rhythmical breaks. About mapping that part, I know... but I wanted to keep the consistency with misja's diffs.

1. Add "DC" to the tags of all difficulties ?
2. If you have a custom hitcircle, you need to add custom approach circle and hitcircle overlay as well.

1. I don't think using linear sliders is a good idea here. Almost all your sliders are smoothly curved, so sharp shapes contrast in a bad way with them. Also, the song is very smooth as well and linear sliders just don't fit imo.
2. 00:32:144 (3) - Make it blanket (1) ? Right now it kind of overlaps it and it looks weird.
3. 00:45:954 (1) - I don't get why there is a note here. It would have been simpler to just make the spinner end here...
4. 01:10:239 (1,2,3) - That's nazi of me, but make them symmetrical (which implies (2) should be centered on the vertical axis) ?
5. 01:42:620 (2) - Is this sliderwhislte a mistake ?
6. 01:48:335 (3) - Make this blanket (2) ?
7. 02:02:144 (1) - Here again, it would be simpler to extend the spinner until here and delete this note ?
8. 02:51:192 (1,2,3,4,5) - Link (2,3) and (4,5) together using sliders (iit would make sense to the song: they're the same note) ?
9. 03:35:478 (1) - The repeat sounds weird... It matches nothing in the song (that I could hear).

1. The difficulty settings are rather high for a Normal imo.
2. 01:02:382 (2,2,2,6) - I wouldn't recommend stacking notes under sliderends because it generally looks bad due to stacking (the stack becomes a huge ugly overlap) and the rhythm is unclear.
3. 01:55:478 (3,4) - Although you did pay attention to the stacking effect, I think it's better to just unstack them. You won't have to cheat on the position to get good blankets, and it will look a lot better and be less confusing =p
4. 02:21:668 (10) - I tihnk such weirdly shaped sliders are confusing for a Normal. They're shorter than what they should and it makes the timing after them rather confusing.
5. 02:26:192 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Just for consistency, I'd like this to be evenly spaced. :/
6. 03:16:192 (6,1) - That's way too confusing for a Normal... The spacing looks exactly the same as 1/2 before, but it's 1/1. I understand why you did that, but I really think it's too confusing... The new combo wouldn't help imo: few new players automatically thinks new comboes reset spacing and would judge the timing according to the spacing.
7. 03:21:192 (1,2) - This stack moves (2) away, breaking its central symmetry, and consequently the symmetry of the whole pattern (since the rest would appear "too much on the left")

1. SS'd first try ! \o/
2. Raise the OD by 1 ? It doesn't feel right to have the same OD for Normal and Hard.
3. 02:32:620 (1) - This slider's repeat is hidden by the hitburst from the spinner.

1. Huge spacing D: anyway, the diff is fine

Odaril wrote:

Gonz' Growing World

1. The difficulty settings are rather high for a Normal imo. I use that setup for most of my normals and nobody complained about that until now. Also, anything less wouldn't fit the diff imo
2. 01:02:382 (2,2,2,6) - I wouldn't recommend stacking notes under sliderends because it generally looks bad due to stacking (the stack becomes a huge ugly overlap) and the rhythm is unclear. Since the same pattern is repeated 3 times and the next objects are 1/1 apart, I think it's not really necessary to unstack the object.
3. 01:55:478 (3,4) - Although you did pay attention to the stacking effect, I think it's better to just unstack them. You won't have to cheat on the position to get good blankets, and it will look a lot better and be less confusing =p I'm not cheating ;_; Well, unstacked.
4. 02:21:668 (10) - I tihnk such weirdly shaped sliders are confusing for a Normal. They're shorter than what they should and it makes the timing after them rather confusing. I think it's clearly visible that the slider has something in the middle, this technique is not new so I don't think it would be confusing. I will change it if somebody else agrees with you tho.
   Also, I've tried to make this diff using consistent spacing all the time so I'm pretty sure that the next object will be readable.
5. 02:26:192 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Just for consistency, I'd like this to be evenly spaced. :/ As you wish \o/
6. 03:16:192 (6,1) - That's way too confusing for a Normal... The spacing looks exactly the same as 1/2 before, but it's 1/1. I understand why you did that, but I really think it's too confusing... The new combo wouldn't help imo: few new players automatically thinks new comboes reset spacing and would judge the timing according to the spacing. Oops, this is a mistake. I think that slider was supposed to be placed 1/2 before. However, I re-arranged the pattern.
7. 03:21:192 (1,2) - This stack moves (2) away, breaking its central symmetry, and consequently the symmetry of the whole pattern (since the rest would appear "too much on the left") You're right, unstacked.

Katsuri wrote:

General

Your kiai Times are not consistent, because you start them 1/4 beat before the kiai note, please make it consistent.

How your Kiai is now:

How your Kiai have to be:


And the same thing for all kiai ends.
Make the kiai times consistent for all diffs.
Love this song. - Only for easy :3

1st Diff

01:27:501 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:27:620 and finish it at 01:30:239 with mute sound could be nice. I have it this way.
03:35:239 (1) - NICE but doesn't fit with this part because the end point Is out of any drum beat or vocals.mm.. you'll see
03:39:287 (1) - Why this red point?Fuck it! nazi! ;p
03:47:382 (1) - This time the spinner have to star 1/4 beat later of the note. Nope Because of the 200000.

2nd diff

01:51:668 (2) - Simmetry gonz?

3rd diff

Nothing to point but disliked this diff.

4th diff

iNiS <3~