Megurine Luka wrote:

Hi. Mod time

[General]
3I is not rankable. decrease one diff's difficulty Yes but Hard is not Insane-level difficulty. See http://puu.sh/3ZXr and http://puu.sh/3ZXt as examples

[Easy]
AR-1 No
00:48:208 (1) - it's better not to hide note in Easy. But I think it's ok. Just make a mention I think it's okay

[Insane]
00:21:358 (4) - spacing, move far away from last note ... x1 spacing already
00:44:458 (5) - mislead spacing. it's will be confused for 1 pc player Alright, I have gotten many compaints about this note and whether or not it should be in the middle or consistent with the notes immediately before and after it. I asked in #modhelp and 2 MATs said to move it to the middle so I will do so.
00:57:958 (3) - spacing, move a little bit far away The spacing is fine..
01:03:508 (x) - add note Ignored
01:09:508 (x) - ^ Ignored

Star. Good luck

Megurine Luka wrote:

Hi. Mod time

[General]
3I is not rankable. decrease one diff's difficulty they are guest diff so will be fine

[Normal]
00:05:308 (1) - make it into a slider from 00:05:008(or add a note at this point) no
00:20:458 (5) - 1 grid up yes
the whistles sound strange in the beginning of kiai time. (why did it sudden end at the following part? if you want to add, then add it in a certain pattern. if not, then del them all) NO I like this whistles on kiai time this is my style not change all sorry

Megurine Luka wrote:

[Extra]
00:36:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacing Supposed to be like that =w=
00:56:008 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^


Star. Good luck

Makar8000 wrote:

Yes but Hard is not Insane-level difficulty. See http://puu.sh/3ZXr and http://puu.sh/3ZXt as examples

Megurine Luka wrote:

Makar8000 wrote:

Yes but Hard is not Insane-level difficulty. See http://puu.sh/3ZXr and http://puu.sh/3ZXt as examples

Peppy: A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels"). That is, a map set can have no more than two "Insane" difficulties, etc.

See viewtopic.php?f=6&t=439
third point


It is ok if you still insist to keep three I difficulty. But I think it will cause difficulties in ranking it. Because the criterion is based on the system not the difficult name
It's up to you.
Although I also think "3I is unrankable" is really ...uh...

peppy wrote:

A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels").

L_P wrote:

did I?! sorry i forgot!!!!!!
what i meant is change note 4's position , to note 2's position....ok?
STAR again

Megurine Luka wrote:

[Hard]
00:07:858 (1) - del circle This note is for the spacing, also follow good the rhythm.
00:29:008 (1) - it's better not to use too much same kind of slider. make more changes More notes, more hard.
01:05:158 (5) - start at 01:05:008 I follow the "nanananana"
01:24:208 (1) - make this slider's volume increase gradually wut?

tutuhaha wrote:

HI~

Pereira's Normal
00:27:658 (1) - don't overlapped NO because i use mod's Leorda :3
00:28:858 (X) - you can add one circle I try this but i put 25% song slow but nothing drum soft so i think is overmapped so no sorry
00:52:408 (2) - ugly I think... that why is 1/3 :/
01:06:808 (2) - straight line please? Lucky yes lol
I like 00:33:808 - 00:43:108 's hitsounds >v<~Nice~~ Ya thank lot by Theowest troll

tutuhaha wrote:

eldnL's Hard
View - Grid level - 3 right？ yes
00:07:858 (1) - you don't need this circle I think....delete You are the second saying it. Deleted.
00:20:008 (X) - add whistle Ok
00:21:058 (X) - add whistle Ok
00:35:758 (X) - add circle? No
00:47:158 (X) - add circle? No
01:05:158 (5) - move 5 to 01:05:008 I think is better than this I follow the voice.
01:18:958 (X) - add circle? Nop
01:25:558 (2) - new combo? nop

tutuhaha wrote:

HI~ Hey ^^

Easy
00:13:408 (x) - add circle? Eh... No thanks. I don't think it fits
00:30:508 - 00:30:808 I think add one slider to replace 00:30:658 circle is better I agree. Fixed
00:50:608 - 00:53:008 Spinner and then you can add some note Fixed
01:19:408 (1) - straight line I did this one purpose because of the angel the notes after go at

Insane
00:03:958 - 00:04:858 I don't like this it is too overlapped, Maybe you can change this
or make the new combo can help use to read this? Ignored
00:07:708 (X) - add circle? Ignored
00:07:858 (X) - add circle? Ignored
00:09:358 - 00:09:808 distance snap is good enough do not change spacing Uhhh... I will ignore for now.
00:44:158 (X) - add circle Ignored. It doesn't follow the background
00:44:308 (4) - delete Ignored because of above
00:44:608 (1) - move to 00:44:758 ^
00:44:908 (2) - move to 00:45:058 ^
00:45:208 (3) - move to 00:45:358 ^
If you want to change this I belive you know how to change 00:45:808 - 00:49:408 ^ ^ ^
00:48:058 (5) - delete ^
00:49:258 (1) - on there Don't like this... :s
00:49:558 - 00:49:858 (234) ^
00:50:158 - 00:50:458 (567) ^
Do you understand >v<？///

So Cool map~
Star~~~~~

1. In the folder there's a "bg.jpg" and a "bg.png". Please, remove one of them.
2. .osb file is not needed as well (remember to full submit after those changes).

1. 00:01:408 (3) - Add a repetition.
2. 00:42:508 (x) - Add a note.
3. 00:42:808 (x) - ^ (or just add a slider in 00:42:508 which ends here).

1. 00:43:108 (5,1) - The map's too short to have a break in. Consider mapping that part?
2. 00:54:208 (1) - The next note is really near this slider, but I suggest converting it into a spinner.

1. 00:55:408 (1) - Too much repetitions IMO. Separate it into 2 sliders at least.
2. 00:57:358 (3) - ^
3. 01:02:158 (2) - ^

1. 00:04:858 (7) - This should be a slider.
2. 00:07:408 (1) - ^
3. 00:32:308 (8,1) - You should map the mini-break between those notes (stream, slider w/repetitions, spin,... whatever).
4. 00:37:408 (5) - New Combo.
5. 00:44:308 (4,5,1) - Please make the distance between 5 and 1 be the same as 4-5.
6. 00:54:283 (1) - Make this spin a bit shorter and add a note at 0:56:608.
7. 00:57:808 (x) - Add a note.
8. 01:06:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part is a bit boring compared to the rest of the map.
9. 01:09:208 (6,7) - You should add some notes/slider between those 2.

1. 01:19:408 (1) - Almost ALL CtB players would hate you because of this slider ;___;

OzzyOzrock wrote:

That slider was designed to be possible to hit in CTB lolloollolololololololollolool

Deif wrote:

General:

1. In the folder there's a "bg.jpg" and a "bg.png". Please, remove one of them. It's probably in your folder because you didn't delete the map before redownloading. I just deleted + redownloaded to check this and bg.png is not there.
2. .osb file is not needed as well (remember to full submit after those changes). Not really needed. This file is tiny.

Easy:

1. 00:01:408 (3) - Add a repetition. Ignored
2. 00:42:508 (x) - Add a note. Ignored
3. 00:42:808 (x) - ^ (or just add a slider in 00:42:508 which ends here). Ignored

Insane:

1. 00:04:858 (7) - This should be a slider. Ignored. Don't see how a slider would be appropriate here.
2. 00:07:408 (1) - ^ Same as above
3. 00:32:308 (8,1) - You should map the mini-break between those notes (stream, slider w/repetitions, spin,... whatever). Ignored
4. 00:37:408 (5) - New Combo. Okay
5. 00:44:308 (4,5,1) - Please make the distance between 5 and 1 be the same as 4-5. I got a MATs opinion on this and I will keep it how it is now.
6. 00:54:283 (1) - Make this spin a bit shorter and add a note at 0:56:608. Done
7. 00:57:808 (x) - Add a note. Ignored
8. 01:06:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part is a bit boring compared to the rest of the map. Here I changed what to follow + increased spacing by 2x to follow the bass. I think it's fine
9. 01:09:208 (6,7) - You should add some notes/slider between those 2. Done

Well... some of the diffs are pretty solid, but which concerns me most is Insane, because it's not consistent enough. Anyway have a star~

Deif wrote:

eldnL's Hard: Me encantan tus sliders :3

1. 00:55:408 (1) - Too much repetitions IMO. Separate it into 2 sliders at least.
2. 00:57:358 (3) - ^
3. 01:02:158 (2) - ^

1. [Pireira's Normal]StackLeniency is 0.6, but other diff.s are 0.7, you'd better use same one

1. 00:27:658 (1) - Stack here maybe misread to a 1 beat note, maybe put a spacing like 00:29:908 (2,3) would be better

1. 00:24:208 (1) - Make this note cloaser to previou note would be better IMO, maybe just for me, it's hard to read to a jump
2. 00:44:308 (4) - New combo here and 00:44:908, then remove new combo of 00:44:608 made this stream much easier to read IMO

1. 00:49:408 (3,4) - They are not paralleled, maybe you put them like this on pupurse?
2. 01:19:408 - Sudden 1.7xBPM, I think you need a SB warnning like "SPEED UP"

Breeze wrote:

Wow, this map has so many stars

[Insane]

1. 00:24:208 (1) - Make this note cloaser to previou note would be better IMO, maybe just for me, it's hard to read to a jump Ignored
2. 00:44:308 (4) - New combo here and 00:44:908, then remove new combo of 00:44:608 made this stream much easier to read IMO Uh..... Ignored for now but I might change later to a different way.

Others are fine
star

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. [Pireira's Normal]StackLeniency is 0.6, but other diff.s are 0.7, you'd better use same one

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. [Pireira's Normal]StackLeniency is 0.6, but other diff.s are 0.7, you'd better use same one

eldnl wrote:

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. [Pireira's Normal]StackLeniency is 0.6, but other diff.s are 0.7, you'd better use same one

Stack leaniency can be different in all difficulties, because this is for change the form of stacking of the notes, wich varies with the difficulty that you use.

arien666 wrote:

[Ozzy's Extra]
01:19:408 (1) - lol at this slider orz :3

[Ozzy's Taiko]
00:02:308 (1) - Big kat I'd agree, but I feel don more initiative
00:14:308 (5) - Add finish Wow, I've always thought of doing that, but never did, and now that I did, I like it.
00:16:858 (1,1) - ka don? Wow, you're right. Nice catch
01:21:508 (2) - Big kat? It is, just not colored right

Download: Hyadain - Hyadain no Joujou Yuujou (TV Size) (Makar8000) [Ozzy's Taiko].osu

arien666 wrote:

[Insane]
01:11:008 (1,4,1,4) - End point is not snapped well orz O.O oops

[Ozzy's Extra]
01:19:408 (1) - lol at this slider orz Sorry Ozzy I had to fix this because 1.7 actually is impossible in CtB. Updated with 1.65

SPOILER

Makar8000 wrote:

arien666 wrote:

[Insane]
01:11:008 (1,4,1,4) - End point is not snapped well orz O.O oops

[Ozzy's Extra]
01:19:408 (1) - lol at this slider orz Sorry Ozzy I had to fix this because 1.7 actually is impossible in CtB. Updated with 1.65

Fixed and Taiko updated. Thanks ^^

100% CtB Screenshot:

SPOILER

SPOILER

Download: Hyadain - Hyadain no Joujou Yuujou (TV Size) (Makar8000) [Ozzy's Extra].osu

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Easy]
00:05:608 (1,2) - Make (1) blanket (2) and position (2) under the Blue(2) slider end like this Done
00:06:808 (2,3,4) - Make it like a triangle Done
00:09:208 (5) - Even if you don't follow the last suggestion, stack this under 00:07:408 (3) - Done
00:09:208 (5,1) - Blanket (5) with (1) like this Done
00:11:608 (2,3,4) - Just stack (2) uner pink(5) and make the trangle a bit more better Done
00:26:608 (1) - Stack under 00:24:808 (2) - Done
00:27:808 (3,4,5) - Nazi, move them 1 grid 3 left to make a better triangle with 00:26:608 (1,2,3) - Ignored
00:31:708 (x) - Add a Note ( to Jan-Jan ! ) Ignored
00:36:208 (1,2) - Copy Paste 00:33:808 (1,2) -, Ctrl+J it, Rotate by 20° Clockwise and make sure 00:37:408 (2) start is stacked under 00:35:008 (2) start Done + moved left for better symmetry
00:56:608 (1,2,3) - make it more an equilateral triangle like this Done
00:57:808 (3,4,5) - Nazi,Make it more equilateral by moving (5) 1 grid 3 down and 1 grid 3 left Did something different

[Insane]
I can't goodly mod Insanes or more but i cansay graphic part here is a bit bad, some example:
00:03:808 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - pretty confusive, a jumpstar could be better! Not sure if like.. x.x Ignored
00:05:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - move them like this, Stacks are 00:06:058 (2,4), 00:06:358 (3,7) -, 00:06:958 (5,1) -,00:07:108 (6) - Done
00:18:658 (6,1) - Don't like this overlap Ignored
00:28:258 (5,7) - Do like this ? Ignored
00:55:708 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Like Pool Balls :3 I like this o.o thanks
01:25:408 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Arleady said, Just mirror 00:03:808 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Ignored like above

Wiinter wrote:

Hiya

[Pereira's Normal]
(gonna make this in portuguese since he's from portugual, blablabla)
00:08:008 (3,4,5) - hmm.. isso soa um pouco estranho imo D: não sei se tu vai concordar, maaas eu acho que soaria melhor se tu fizesse assim http://puu.sh/4tWd - aka tirar a repeat do (3), e deixar o 4 e 5 uma tick antes.Corrigido

1. 00:59:008 (6) - Start a new combo here. Then, remove this new combo: 01:00:208 (1).
2. 01:01:408 (4) - Add a new combo (Only if you did the previous suggestion), after that, 01:02:608 (1) - Remove new combo, and then, 01:03:808 (6) - New combo. It's kinda better the change of new combos in this way.

1. 00:02:608 - End this spinner at 00:03:508, and then, 00:03:808 (x) - Add a circle just in the center of the screen.
2. 00:13:558 (6) - New combo, Looks good without a "long" combo.
3. 00:59:458 (6) - Add a clap, and then, 00:59:608 (7) - Remove this clap.
4. 00:59:908 (1) - Add a clap just in the beginning.
5. 01:06:658 (2) - Clap?

1. 00:56:908 (1,2) - Add a clap?... If you'll do this, add a clap too at the end of this slider: 00:57:508 (1).
2. 00:59:008 (4) - Finish?
3. 00:59:308 (5) - Add a clap in the beginning and in the repeat.
4. 00:59:908 (2) - Clap?
5. 01:01:108 (5) - ^
6. 01:01:408 (1) - The same as in the first point... Add a clap in the beginning, repeat and at the end of this slider: 01:01:858 (2).
7. 01:02:158 (3,5) - Clap
8. 01:02:608 (6) - Add a clap in the first repeat?
9. 01:03:208 (7) - Clap?
10. 01:03:808 (1) - Add a clap in the repeat?
11. 01:04:708 (2) - Finish. Sounds better than without hitsound... imo lol
12. 01:06:208 (1) - ^
13. 01:08:308 (1,2) - Clap?
14. 01:09:058 (5,6) - ^

Wiinter wrote:

Hiya
[Insane]
00:05:008 (x) - ehh.. this is kinda evil, but anyways. add a note there? (and make a jump on it) Too evil D:
00:38:308 (1) - add a clap on the end of it, since all the other sliders like this one have one No because that's not how the music goes
01:03:808 (1) - i predict slider breaks >_< unexpected speed up I agree. Fixed
01:09:808 (2) - ^ -same goes for all the sliders in this section - Eh I like these though D:
01:11:308 (2,3) - stack correctly Because of stack leniency these are stacked while playing
01:11:908 (5,6) - ^ Same ^
01:12:208 (1) - remove new combo? >_< Nah I think it fits
01:12:508 (2) - stack correctly Same as before
01:13:108 (5,6) - ^ Same ^
01:20:908 (2) - ^ Same ^

[Ozzy's Extra]
Only thing is that I think -1 on AR would be better, but well, people normally like fast AR x-x Ignored

And that's all. Hope it's useful~

vivere wrote:

Hi there :>

[Easy]:

1. 00:59:008 (6) - Start a new combo here. Then, remove this new combo: 01:00:208 (1).
2. 01:01:408 (4) - Add a new combo (Only if you did the previous suggestion), after that, 01:02:608 (1) - Remove new combo, and then, 01:03:808 (6) - New combo. It's kinda better the change of new combos in this way.

All done

[Insane]:

1. 00:56:908 (1,2) - Add a clap?... If you'll do this, add a clap too at the end of this slider: 00:57:508 (1).
2. 00:59:008 (4) - Finish?
3. 00:59:308 (5) - Add a clap in the beginning and in the repeat.
4. 00:59:908 (2) - Clap?
5. 01:01:108 (5) - ^
6. 01:01:408 (1) - The same as in the first point... Add a clap in the beginning, repeat and at the end of this slider: 01:01:858 (2).
7. 01:02:158 (3,5) - Clap
8. 01:02:608 (6) - Add a clap in the first repeat?
9. 01:03:208 (7) - Clap?
10. 01:03:808 (1) - Add a clap in the repeat?
11. 01:04:708 (2) - Finish. Sounds better than without hitsound... imo lol
12. 01:06:208 (1) - ^
13. 01:08:308 (1,2) - Clap?
14. 01:09:058 (5,6) - ^

Some hitsounds fixed. Thanks
_________________

Pereira's diff is well made, so... Good luck with the other difficulties :>

Weezy wrote:

since this is the same mp3 as my version, offset is 200 not 208
*Weezy disappears

Pereira006 wrote:

Wiinter wrote:

Hiya

[Pereira's Normal]
(gonna make this in portuguese since he's from portugual, blablabla)
00:08:008 (3,4,5) - hmm.. isso soa um pouco estranho imo D: não sei se tu vai concordar, maaas eu acho que soaria melhor se tu fizesse assim http://puu.sh/4tWd - aka tirar a repeat do (3), e deixar o 4 e 5 uma tick antes.Corrigido

obrigada

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

EDIT: Makar, you like sexy or funny comboburst?

Wiinter wrote:

[eldnL's Hard]
01:05:158 (5) - not really sure about this.. but maybe start it 1/2 earlier? starting it at the "hey" sounds better imo~ Well, changed.

vivere wrote:

[eldnL's Hard]:

1. 00:02:608 - End this spinner at 00:03:508, and then, 00:03:808 (x) - Add a circle just in the center of the screen. Nope
2. 00:13:558 (6) - New combo, Looks good without a "long" combo. Ok
3. 00:59:458 (6) - Add a clap, and the, 00:59:608 (7) - Remove this clap. Naah sounds weird.
4. 00:59:908 (1) - Add a clap just in the beginning. Ok
5. 01:06:658 (2) - Clap? Sounds bad

Makar8000 wrote:

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

EDIT: Makar, you like sexy or funny comboburst?

o.o I use a custom combo burst that I think is sexy ;3

Thanks for the kudosu star btw

Pereira006 wrote:

sexy comboburst !? where o.o

arien666 wrote:

[Pereira's Normal]
00:12:808 - Need of break? Updated

[Ozzy's Extra]
:3
(01:19:408 (1) - Acutally, whatever orz) Ozzy really wants to keep this

Boo <3

arien666 wrote:

ps. Can I make CtB full set(6 diffs) for this song XD?

Makar8000 wrote:

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

EDIT: Makar, you like sexy or funny comboburst?

o.o I use a custom combo burst that I think is sexy ;3

Thanks for the kudosu star btw

Raging Bull wrote:

If your bubble ever gets popped, I recommend moving your insane spinner to 01:26:495 (1) and extend it to where it ends on the big white tick. Change timing section to 5% and remove finish.

http://puu.sh/4zi7

I would say the other diff too, but those are guest diffs.

Damnit ozzy, your own is right but doesn't end on white tick grrrrrr.

Raging Bull wrote:

If your bubble ever gets popped, I recommend moving your insane spinner to 01:26:495 (1) and extend it to where it ends on the big white tick. Change timing section to 5% and remove finish.

http://puu.sh/4zi7

I would say the other diff too, but those are guest diffs.

Damnit ozzy, your own is right but doesn't end on white tick grrrrrr.

Your message is too short.

arien666 wrote:

Your message is too short.

No Your Mom orz

arien666 wrote:

Your message is too short.

No Your Mom orz

Download: Hyadain - Hyadain no Joujou Yuujou (TV Size) (Makar8000) [Ozzy's Extra].osu

Shiirn wrote:

Sorry to crash the party. D'aw it's okay :3

Easy
00:19:408 (1) - this is unreadable with mmsliders, and it looks as ugly as sin anyway. I think it's fine. I even asked random new players to test play this difficulty and they all followed the slider nicely (though one did have a slider break but he/she broke pretty much all the sliders so I guess he/she didn't know how to do them)
00:43:408 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - make this from 100/80/60/40 please, 25 is very soft. Done
01:05:008 (3) - your blanket needs work O.o I think you be trollin'

Insane
00:24:208 (1) - much nicer with a continued pattern rather than randomly off-somewhere-in-the-distance. Agreed... Changed
00:33:358 - notes here plz Eh... No thanks
00:36:208 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,yougetwherei'mgoing) - I'm a fan of linear sliders and all, but can you be a bit more creative? I changed the last 2 sliders. If I think of something that I like later I will pop later if it's worth it (assuming I get another bubble orz).
WHERE ARE THE KIAI HITSOUNDS ;_____; orz added
01:05:158 (3,4,5) - randomly using 0.5x makes me sad I like it :s

Makar8000 wrote:

Shiirn wrote:

Sorry to crash the party. D'aw it's okay :3

Easy
00:19:408 (1) - this is unreadable with mmsliders, and it looks as ugly as sin anyway. I think it's fine. I even asked random new players to test play this difficulty and they all followed the slider nicely (though one did have a slider break but he/she broke pretty much all the sliders so I guess he/she didn't know how to do them)
00:43:408 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - make this from 100/80/60/40 please, 25 is very soft. Done
01:05:008 (3) - your blanket needs work O.o I think you be trollin'

Insane
00:24:208 (1) - much nicer with a continued pattern rather than randomly off-somewhere-in-the-distance. Agreed... Changed
00:33:358 - notes here plz Eh... No thanks
00:36:208 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,yougetwherei'mgoing) - I'm a fan of linear sliders and all, but can you be a bit more creative? I changed the last 2 sliders. If I think of something that I like later I will pop later if it's worth it (assuming I get another bubble orz).
WHERE ARE THE KIAI HITSOUNDS ;_____; orz added
01:05:158 (3,4,5) - randomly using 0.5x makes me sad I like it :s

Thanks for modding. I will update once eldnl gives me an updated osu file. Pereira fixed everything in normal.

Shiirn wrote:

Hard
you use tick rate 2. okay.
00:01:408 (3,4,5) - this is unreadable and ugly, especially with (2)'s hitburst mucking up (5)'s approach circle. Consider reversing 4, switching the time of 4 and 5, or some other magical thing. Pattern changed
00:24:208 (1,1,1,2) - you're not very imaginative here Yes
between spinner and kiai - what the heck are you following?The music maybe?
I dislike how you have identical movement patterns in the kiai, you might call it your "style", but it's boring, unproductive, and not fun to play, even if it seems sort of neat. Well = ='
01:09:358 (1,2,3) - this very sudden increase in spacing combined with the fact that these are offbeat sliders make the difficulty spike very very high here (unnecessarily). Consider switching it around a bit. Hard? you just have to keep the pointer at the beginning of the slider.
01:12:058 (6,7,8) - ^. [/color]Also, consider throwing a new combo on (6). New combo added

Kytoxid wrote:

[Normal]

00:03:058 (1,2) - I felt that these landed in weird places. No I play i feeling this fine
00:09:508 - Adding a note here sounds better, though I agree it might be a bit hard for Normal. Your call.I didn't add note i just change spinner start here
00:09:808 (1) - End this 1/2 earlier? yes
00:27:658 (1) - I'd recommend not stacking this, since having it spaced gives more cues for how soon the next slider will come. No I like better stack
00:38:608 (1,2,3) - 2 and 3 should be switched, to form slider-note-slider instead of slider-slider-note, follows the music better, imo. No I like slider-slider-note is fine
00:41:008 (2,3,4) - Same for 3 and 4 here.No ^
00:52:408 (2) - I recommend changing all the sliders to the 1-repeat variety, just because of how awkward that tick placement is.No I Guess this is follow lyrics 1/3
00:56:608 (1) - Starting here, I lose track of your combo scheme; please explain it to me because I'm dumb~huh i don't understand so no
00:58:408 (5,6) - Doesn't follow the music that well.Are you sure ? I try put 50% slow song and i listen 5 time i think is fine
01:05:158 (1) - Add a note on the major white tick before this? Starting a pattern 1/2 after a major white tick is a bit rough on Normal.No is too hard play
01:14:308 (4) - Here's something you could do here; use a custom section where the slider whistle sound is silenced. Start the section right on the 4, but end it and go back to normal at the repeat. Then if you add a whistle to this slider body, it'll become audible after the repeat, and sound cool along with the slider whistles that are after this.yes
01:21:808 (1,2,3) - I recommend swapping 2 and 3 again. This just puts the slider head on the major white tick, which is musically better.No I like this more

Pereira006 wrote:

00:56:608 (1) - Starting here, I lose track of your combo scheme; please explain it to me because I'm dumb~huh i don't understand so no]

Blue Dragon wrote:

Pereira006 wrote:

00:56:608 (1) - Starting here, I lose track of your combo scheme; please explain it to me because I'm dumb~huh i don't understand so no]

Ele quis dizer que não entendeu o jeito que você colocou os new combos e quer que você explique.

Kytoxid wrote:

Since arken is slacking off~

(this is totally going to bleed into my own style when I map my own Easy/Normal/Hard, you just watch)

[Easy]
This should be on slider tick rate 2, since some of your sliders land on places that sound awkward with slider tick rate 1, such as 00:03:958 (2). (it also looks nicer in terms of symmetry) Done

00:42:208 (3) - How about replacing this with a 1-repeat 1/1 slider, like you had earlier? I don't really like it because of the silence
00:43:408 (1) - Really cool effect. Thanks, some people don't like though
00:50:608 (1,2) - Whether you use tick rate 1 or 2, this part still sounds awkward... The slider start and ends follow the timpani in the background (you could also think of it as just doing the downbeat instead of triplets). It sounds weird in tick rate 2 because the tick is on the upbeat instead of on a triplet beat. It sounds fine to me with tick rate 1 though. I will still keep the change from tick rate 1 to 2

[Normal]
Updated

[Insane]
Some parts of this are hard to read with the video.

00:03:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Concerned about how messy this combo is; it's quite cluttered together. I could read it on my first try, but it didn't look very good. It seems cluttered because its in the corner like that. I could move things around but I still like this pattern.
00:38:608 (2) - These claps are a bit weird. It follows the background claps
00:43:408 (1) - Doesn't follow the music, and that one 1/2 triplet is hard to read. Why is this all 1/1s? I did it like this simply because that is how I feel when this part is playing. I can't really explain it but I can tell you that I did NOT do this because I was lazy and couldn't think of what to do.
00:50:608 (1) - Using the slider to introduce the 3/4 section is definitely good. -thumbs up-
00:57:808 - The lack of a note on this major white tick is very hard to expect since the notes occur in separate places, so it could be easily mistaken as a jump. Fixed
01:02:608 (6) - I don't recommend having these even-number repeat sliders with a note after, which you have a lot of, because it would make just as much sense to have an extra repeat on the slider, so it's hard to predict the note. I agree. Fixed
01:14:608 (1) - Too pointy, make them a bit rounder? I think this is fine
01:25:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as before about this pattern. As said before, I like this pattern and just seems cluttered because of where it is.

Okay, to be honest, I think this needs more modding, so I'm removing the popped bubble icon.

Dangaard wrote:

Sorry to pop in, but the huge stream at the end of [Extra] was much better before imo. Now it's slightly confusing to read since there is sudden spacing change between some combos. Together with the fast slider this stream is my fav part of the map, so it would be nice if you could change it back.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Well, you see, I love you Dangaard, so it will be done.

YEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

Kytoxid wrote:

[Hard]

00:03:958 - This space is a bit awkward. Some changes in this part.
00:05:308 - Add a note here? This gap is hard to read since it's stacked. Ok
00:27:358 (2) - Lands in a weird place, the lyric doesn't start until 1/2 after. It's fine.
00:38:308 (1) - Add a note where this is, start it 1/1 later, so that it lands on the big white tick. Plays better. Ok
00:40:708 (1) - Weird place for a slider end and a gap; I'd put notes on the two white ticks after this too; it's a Hard anyways, sounds much better. Nope, I prefer to leave it.
00:43:408 (2) - Slider ends in a weird place. Ironically it's a big white tick, but nothing happens on this big white tick. Reduce 1/2 the slider.
00:45:808 - Something does happen on this one though, which is missed... that's sounds good for me.
00:46:408 (4) - Nothing happens on this white tick. The voice lol
00:48:508 (7) - This is good. No problems with this slider here.
00:55:408 (1) - Don't understand this kiai combo scheme either. The note placement is fine though.? x_x
01:24:208 (1) - Really hard to predict when this one ends, so 2 is a frequent miss. lulz I move (4) due hidden repeat.

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~

General
Make your slider tick rate the same on all difficulties. Changed is most diffs, waiting on Ozzy's approval
Make combo colour 4 a little bit lighter. It's fine
01:17:008 - end Kiai here? Changed in most diffs, waiting on Ozzy's approval


Insane
OD in this difficulty is higher than in Extra. Changed to OD 6
00:42:508 (3,4,5) - make spacing even Moved (4) one grid to the left)

Normal
Normal all ignored

Good luck~

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Kiiwa wrote:

Hard
This difficulty is good
00:03:958 (1) - shorten by 1 reverse arrow then 00:05:008 - add note stacked on 00:05:308 (2) - It's fine...

Nyquill wrote:

[Easy]
I woud like to spend more time on the insane diff, but I took a quick look through this. Looks good ^^ Thanks

[Peireira's Normal]
00:33:808 - Have the inheriting section that starts here start at 00:33:508 Pereira says ignore

[Insane]
00:02:608 (1,2,3,4,6) - Delete (2,4,6) and make (1,3) reverse sliders. Done
00:05:608 (1) - Reverse slider? Fixed the pattern here
00:08:008 (2) - ^? I'll keep it the way it is
00:09:358 (6,7,8,9) Would be nicer if you made it like 00:06:958 (5,6,7,1)
00:10:108 (2,3) - Do something similar to this? Uhh changed something else

SPOILER

00:15:358 (3) - Make this a reverse slider? No thanks
00:17:608 (3) - ^ Same ^
00:25:108 (3) - ^ (As an explaination, the jump is completely achievable and makes it sound better) Same ^
00:32:308 (8) - Flip this slider horizontally and place it back. Because of all the circular slider movement patterns I have after this I want to keep this how it is.
00:37:708 (2,3,1) - Swap (2) and (3) and make (1) 2 quarter beats earlier and make it a reverse slider? o.o good idea
00:44:458 (5) - You had a note here, makes sense to have a note at 00:46:858 too. Doesn't fit the background (which is why this note is here in the first place)
00:57:358 (1,2) - Delete (2) and make (1) a reverse slider. Nah it used to be like this but others suggested a change because of the large number of repeat sliders in Kiai
01:05:158 - Try this ^^ Seems a little confusing imo :s

SPOILER

01:22:708 (3,4) - Yeah, I am loving reverse sliders today. Changed so it matched the beginning
01:24:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Changed so it matched the beginning

[Ozzy's Extra]
This is just amazing.
00:33:808 (1) - Remove NC? Its literally just one note. http://puu.sh/54Rk
01:19:408 (1) - Sole reason why I failed this diff LOL

Saten-san wrote:

just checking~♪
Ozzy's Extra
01:19:408 (1) - and yeah, so many repeats lol

ziin wrote:

[normal]
00:08:008 (3,4,5) - you mapped this on the 1/2, but you mapped the notes before on 1/1. Pick 1 and map to that. fix
00:09:508 - felt like a note was needed here. Maybe extend 5 out 1/2? Spinner will start here 00:09:508
00:09:658 (1) - end 1/2 earlier ^
00:28:258 (2) - extend 1/2fix
00:50:608 (1) - actually decreasing volume helps the awkward slider ticks here too. But I would still recommend not using sliders or change the BPM.Sorry no change

ziin wrote:

[eldnl]
00:01:408 (3) - I don't like repeating sliders like this (and through the rest of the song). You can't tell when they are going to end, and you could map it just as well by using circles and sliders. Please avoid them in the future, and change them if it's not too much trouble. Fixed, I try to avoid them in the future
00:47:458 (6) - move the 2nd and 2nd to last nodes in 1 grid and it will be a little bit more symmetrical Ok

ziin wrote:

I feel bad being so picky on a map with 100 stars . Make sure you really like my suggestion(s) before you apply it. I'm more pointing out strange parts/inconsistencies in the maps.

[easy]
00:05:608 (1,4) - these were awkward because it sounds like they should end on beat 4.5 (red tick before long white tick) Done
00:19:408 (1) - you did it here, which sounds good. Woo
00:22:408 (3) - you didn't here. Fixed
00:25:408 (3,4,5) - again awkward because of bass this time on 1/2 tick. It sounds like they should be 1/2 earlier. Done
00:43:408 (1,2,3,4) - wtf are you doing with the volume? Making it softer to fit the background? ._.
00:50:608 (1,2) - slider ticks don't match here. You can either change the BPM (Unsure of rankability, you'll want to change BPM to 133.33 or exactly 450 ms/beat in the osu file) or don't use sliders in this section. Why can't editor allow use to change tick rate and use 1/3 orz. I'll ask around about rankability before changing this.

[insane]
00:05:008 (8) - make this and similar ones after this a new combo and 1/1 slider? Done
01:19:408 (1) - LAZY LAZY LAZY. Put in a jumpstream or something. But I like this orz

Makar8000 wrote:

Updates:

SPOILER

From newest to oldest

Sept 4th - ziin's Mod
Sept 1st - Nyquill's Mod
Aug 29th - Kiiwa's Mod
Aug 21st - Kytoxid's Mod
Aug 21st - Shiirn's Mod
Aug 19th - Raging Bull's mod
Aug 17th - vivere's Mod
Aug 17th - Wiinter's Mod
Aug 17th - HakuNoKaemi's Mod
Aug 17th - arien666's Mod
Aug 12th - Deif's Mod
Aug 9th - tutuhaha's Mod
Aug 4th - Megurine Luka's Mod
Aug 4th - L_P's Mod
Jul 27th - Zelos's Mod
Jul 26th - Leorda's Mod
Jul 25th - Nymph_'s Mod
Jul 25th - Updated BG
Jul 24th - wcx19911123's Mod
Jul 24th - [Shalon]'s Mod
Jul 22nd - Sallad4ever's Mod
Jul 21st - Keyboard's Mod
Jul 21st - Fixed CTB possibility in Extra
Jul 21st - Added Ozzy's Extra
Jul 19th - wmfchris's Mod
Jul 18th - Weezy's Mod
Jul 18th - Moved to pending
Jul 17th - lovhin456's Mod
Jul 17th - _Gezo_'s Mod
Jul 16th - theowest's Mod
Jul 15th - Keilara's Mod
Jul 15th - Magical Pokie's Mod
Jul 15th - Ekaru's Mod
Jul 14th - EnPassant's Mod
Jul 14th - eldnL's in-game Mod
Jul 14th - Daigurenhyourinmaru's Mod
Jul 14th - Raging Bull's Mod
Jul 14th - spboxer3's Mod
Jul 13th - Added Ozzy's Taiko
Jul 13th - Added eldnL's Hard
Jul 13th - Changed Hard to Insane
Jul 13th - TheSeth's Mod
Jul 12th - eldnl's Mod
Jul 12th - gina91189's Mod
Jul 12th - Broetchen8441's Mod
Jul 12th - winber1's Mod
Jul 11th - rEdo's Mod
Jul 10th - Updated BG
Jul 10th - senaya's Mod
Jul 10th - BounceBabe's Mod
Jul 9th - Finished Easy
Jul 9th - Added Pereira's Normal
Jul 9th - Submitted Beatmap with Hard completed

Nyquill wrote:

Makar8000 wrote:

Updates:

SPOILER

From newest to oldest

Sept 4th - ziin's Mod
Sept 1st - Nyquill's Mod
Aug 29th - Kiiwa's Mod
Aug 21st - Kytoxid's Mod
Aug 21st - Shiirn's Mod
Aug 19th - Raging Bull's mod
Aug 17th - vivere's Mod
Aug 17th - Wiinter's Mod
Aug 17th - HakuNoKaemi's Mod
Aug 17th - arien666's Mod
Aug 12th - Deif's Mod
Aug 9th - tutuhaha's Mod
Aug 4th - Megurine Luka's Mod
Aug 4th - L_P's Mod
Jul 27th - Zelos's Mod
Jul 26th - Leorda's Mod
Jul 25th - Nymph_'s Mod
Jul 25th - Updated BG
Jul 24th - wcx19911123's Mod
Jul 24th - [Shalon]'s Mod
Jul 22nd - Sallad4ever's Mod
Jul 21st - Keyboard's Mod
Jul 21st - Fixed CTB possibility in Extra
Jul 21st - Added Ozzy's Extra
Jul 19th - wmfchris's Mod
Jul 18th - Weezy's Mod
Jul 18th - Moved to pending
Jul 17th - lovhin456's Mod
Jul 17th - _Gezo_'s Mod
Jul 16th - theowest's Mod
Jul 15th - Keilara's Mod
Jul 15th - Magical Pokie's Mod
Jul 15th - Ekaru's Mod
Jul 14th - EnPassant's Mod
Jul 14th - eldnL's in-game Mod
Jul 14th - Daigurenhyourinmaru's Mod
Jul 14th - Raging Bull's Mod
Jul 14th - spboxer3's Mod
Jul 13th - Added Ozzy's Taiko
Jul 13th - Added eldnL's Hard
Jul 13th - Changed Hard to Insane
Jul 13th - TheSeth's Mod
Jul 12th - eldnl's Mod
Jul 12th - gina91189's Mod
Jul 12th - Broetchen8441's Mod
Jul 12th - winber1's Mod
Jul 11th - rEdo's Mod
Jul 10th - Updated BG
Jul 10th - senaya's Mod
Jul 10th - BounceBabe's Mod
Jul 9th - Finished Easy
Jul 9th - Added Pereira's Normal
Jul 9th - Submitted Beatmap with Hard completed

You should really spoilerbox your updates xD.

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