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Weez
General
- change the audio lead in to 2, 3 is way too long and feel like forever to start

Easy
00:26:608 (1) - Change this to a normal hitsound like the rest.
00:27:808 (3) - Remove the clap on The end of the slider (So only keep a clap on the repeat)
00:28:708 (4) - Remove clap
00:42:208 (3) - Remove clap
00:43:408 - 00:50:008 This whole lowering the volume doesn't really fit the song. Also doing something like that is a bit difficult for newer players to get. Try making the whole section one volume (70% works good) keeping the section on soft notes and remove whistles and add claps to all the new combos.
00:50:608 Highly suggest you map this part. Unfitting break.
00:54:208 (1,1) - Not much recovery time for new players especially with this fast pace song. Try something like this: http://puu.sh/3rZC

Pereira's Normal
00:50:833 (2,3) - Should be 1/3 notes, plays weird on 1/4.
00:52:033 (2,3) - ^same
00:53:233 (2,3) - ^same
00:53:608 (4) - This slider should be like 00:52:408 (4)

eldnL's Hard
~Me like~

Insane
00:44:458 (5) - Hold alt and center this, breaking spacing for something like this is ok.
01:02:608 (6) - Repeat arrow is blocked on this which is unrankable.... http://puu.sh/3s2a
01:18:208 (6) - ^same thing

More Nichijou \o/
Topic Starter
Makar

Weezy wrote:

General
- change the audio lead in to 2, 3 is way too long and feel like forever to start Done

Easy
00:26:608 (1) - Change this to a normal hitsound like the rest.Done
00:27:808 (3) - Remove the clap on The end of the slider (So only keep a clap on the repeat) Done
00:28:708 (4) - Remove clap Done
00:42:208 (3) - Remove clap Done
00:43:408 - 00:50:008 This whole lowering the volume doesn't really fit the song. Also doing something like that is a bit difficult for newer players to get. Try making the whole section one volume (70% works good) keeping the section on soft notes and remove whistles and add claps to all the new combos. I really like this part, so I'll keep it the way it is
00:50:608 Highly suggest you map this part. Unfitting break. Even though this is TV Size, it is an easy difficulty and I think it needs at least one break. I'll keep this for now
00:54:208 (1,1) - Not much recovery time for new players especially with this fast pace song. Try something like this: http://puu.sh/3rZC Done

Pereira's Normal
00:50:833 (2,3) - Should be 1/3 notes, plays weird on 1/4. I forgot to fix this when I resnaped. My bad :s

Insane
00:44:458 (5) - Hold alt and center this, breaking spacing for something like this is ok. Done
01:02:608 (6) - Repeat arrow is blocked on this which is unrankable.... http://puu.sh/3s2a Done
01:18:208 (6) - ^same thing Done

More Nichijou \o/
Thanks for the mod :D. Normal also updated
OzzyOzrock
Will update this post with how much is done, as I had an error where the sliders screwed up and I don't want that again.

80% or something
Download: Hyadain - Hyadain no Joujou Yuujou (TV Size) (Makar8000) [Ozzy's Extra].osu
Topic Starter
Makar

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Will update this post with how much is done, as I had an error where the sliders screwed up and I don't want that again.

[attachment=0:7d3d2]Hyadain - Hyadain no Joujou Yuujou (TV Size) (Makar8000) [Ozzy's Extra].osu[/attachment:7d3d2]
:D
wmfchris
maybe move this to WIP while you're waiting the diff.

[Insane]
duplicated timeline 74608
00:20:608 (1~6) - stack properly
00:05:608 (1,1) - I just don't see why you have to put 0.5x here, The spacing of 00:05:608 (1,2) - is wrong.
00:13:708 (2,3) - left 1 grid
00:15:208 (3,3) - 0.5x slider is odd for me.
00:42:508 (3) - delete (3), add one more reverse on (2)
00:44:308 (4,5,1) - confusing and unstable spacing

try to make sliders in better shape and stacks properly :3, it also needs a bit more hitsound~

[Hard] -> make it unique -> slider tick 1?
00:05:083 (x) - the horn sound is actually here, so I don't prefer to put notes at the white tick...
00:35:608 (5) - remove clap, clap on the 1st and 3rd tick of next (1)
nice!!

[Normal]
OD + 1
the whole diff is fine for me, though it's a bit hard as a normal considering this is quite fast and the 2/3 streams.

[Easy]
00:59:008 (6) - clap here since you clap on next (2)

[Taiko]
00:12:058 - k d
00:13:558 - d d k k---d---k
00:16:858 - k d
00:33:808 - I don't prefer this one as the yellow bar covers the don until the 00:33:5, almost half of the normal reactino time for other notes, so this cause confusion. You can slow down the part gradually, like 0.9x in 0:33, 0.8x in 0:36, etc.
00:43:408 - D
00:45:808 - ^
00:48:208 - ^
00:54:208 - no background drumsound, I prefer spinner
01:14:608 - broken slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/115942 , it is supposed to give 7 hits, but when you switch on Auto there's only 6 hits.
01:25:558 - Try pattern with D to emphasize the progression of melody: D D K D K K K (spinner~)

overall: [Insane] need more mods, others are quite fine...

quite good; 8/10.
Topic Starter
Makar

wmfchris wrote:

maybe move this to WIP while you're waiting the diff. Okay

[Insane]
duplicated timeline 74608 Deleted
00:20:608 (1~6) - stack properly I'm confused because there is no stacking here
00:05:608 (1,1) - I just don't see why you have to put 0.5x here, The spacing of 00:05:608 (1,2) - is wrong. I fixed the spacing.
00:13:708 (2,3) - left 1 grid Ignored
00:15:208 (3,3) - 0.5x slider is odd for me. I like it, so ignored.
00:42:508 (3) - delete (3), add one more reverse on (2) Ignored
00:44:308 (4,5,1) - confusing and unstable spacing I agree with you, but Weezy just told me to change this in the last mod. I will change it back, but I'm interested to know what other modders think as well.

try to make sliders in better shape and stacks properly :3, it also needs a bit more hitsound~

[Easy]
00:59:008 (6) - clap here since you clap on next (2) Added on the repeat

overall: [Insane] need more mods, others are quite fine...

quite good; 8/10.
Thanks for the mod. There other difficulties will be looked at later.
EDIT: Normal, Hard, and Taiko updated
Kyonko Hizara
:)
eldnl

wmfchris wrote:

[Hard] -> make it unique -> slider tick 1?
00:05:083 (x) - the horn sound is actually here, so I don't prefer to put notes at the white tick... Sounds better in the white tick.
00:35:608 (5) - remove clap, clap on the 1st and 3rd tick of next (1) I Add the clap in (1)
nice!!
Thanks ~

Download: Hyadain - Hyadain no Joujou Yuujou (TV Size) (Makar8000) [eldnL's Hard].osu
OzzyOzrock

wmfchris wrote:

[Taiko]
00:12:058 - k d done I think
00:13:558 - d d k k---d---k eh..
00:16:858 - k d sadf
00:33:808 - I don't prefer this one as the yellow bar covers the don until the 00:33:5, almost half of the normal reactino time for other notes, so this cause confusion. You can slow down the part gradually, like 0.9x in 0:33, 0.8x in 0:36, etc. Shortened the slider
00:43:408 - D Nah
00:45:808 - ^ nah
00:48:208 - ^ naaah
00:54:208 - no background drumsound, I prefer spinner but but there's drum sound
01:14:608 - broken slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/115942 , it is supposed to give 7 hits, but when you switch on Auto there's only 6 hits. ah, never noticed that
01:25:558 - Try pattern with D to emphasize the progression of melody: D D K D K K K (spinner~) changed it

overall: [Insane] need more mods, others are quite fine...

quite good; 8/10.
thanks \o/

Download: Hyadain - Hyadain no Joujou Yuujou (TV Size) (Makar8000) [Ozzy's Taiko].osu
DaxMasterix
Good song :o
Kawayi Rika
STAR :)
OzzyOzrock
Download: Hyadain - Hyadain no Joujou Yuujou (TV Size) (Makar8000) [Ozzy's Extra].osu
COMPLETION

Hitsounds are either good or bad.
SpacemanSpiff
Lot of fun. Definitely was tricky to pass the first time, which I definitely like in a map. Patterns were just as weird as the song. Starred.
OzzyOzrock
eldnl
wow ozzy's extra is really fun, but maybe this slider is very fast I think :\ 01:19:408
Other is fine to me, I can pass it :D

Kudos Star ~
Topic Starter
Makar

eldnl wrote:

wow ozzy's extra is really fun, but maybe this slider is very fast I think :\ 01:19:408
Other is fine to me, I can pass it :D

Kudos Star ~
Changed to 1.7, its possible in CTB now lol

Thanks for the Kudosu Star ^^
thiefer
star~
Keyboard_old
Not much to say for this map.

Insane:
00:05:458 and 00:14:308 - A circle can be added
00:43:108 - a circle can be added with a 'finish' as well but not important

Extra:

01:26:495 (1) - Spinner can use a finish

P.s. 01:14:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) was crazy, I did not expect that o.O

Star-ed.
Topic Starter
Makar

Keyboard wrote:

Not much to say for this map.

Insane:
00:05:458 and 00:14:308 - A circle can be added It doesn't make sense to put one at 00:05:458 but I did add one at 00:14:308
00:43:108 - a circle can be added with a 'finish' as well but not important Done

Extra:

01:26:495 (1) - Spinner can use a finish Asking Ozzy about it atm... EDIT: Added soft finish

P.s. 01:14:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) was crazy, I did not expect that o.O orly?

Star-ed.
Thanks for the mod
Mithos
From my Modding Queue

Easy Diff:
Felt a little "stiff", but the hitsounds made it fun to play along to. Should be perfect for an easy map.

Medium:
Loved the clapping in the song. Fit the feel of the song well, and knowing that a clap was always coming up helped with the sight read. Good work. Easy to sightread, but still fun as heck to play.

Taiko:
I love taiko for maps like this. My QW (don) OP (kat) set up made this so much fun from the beginning of the map. I suggest this set up for this map because it was a lot of fun to tap out the intro.

Insane:
Holy snap fast slider speeds. This is nothing bad though, It's just I couldn't play it (I can't play insanes at full speed yet). However, when putting it on auto I followed with my mouse to the best of my ability and found the map to be fun. It felt like most insane ranked maps, and would definitely should be ranked as one.

This should be ranked soon. It's a great map that has grown out of it's potential. Reccomending the QWOP method of taiko for this song.
hitmefast
as the reply i just check insane and extra ;3

insane

check the tags pls
bpm is 200.04
also offset is 210

extra

tags + bpm + offset

00:48:208 correct this slider
00:50:008 ^

ahhh 75% sound its too hard make it lower so i can hear the music
maybe 10% lower to all points? idk :O

-nice song

star~ :3
Sallad4ever
Hi Makar8000 :D
Wall of text FTW~

SPOILER
[General]
- Could you find another BG with better quality? The quality on the current one is kinda low, it looks blurry
- Ozzy's Extra has an audio lead in of 3 seconds while the others have 2 seconds

[Easy]
00:02:608 (1) - The repeat sounds weird. Maybe something like this ?
00:22:408 (3) - For this slider I suggest to make it into a single slider then move it back 1/1 beat to 00:22:108. You might have to lengthen it to 00:22:858 too
00:30:658 (1,2) - Make these 2 into a single slider so it's easier to hit
00:32:008 (3) - Maybe shorten this by 1/2 beat?
00:33:808 (1) - ^ (maybe a little harder though)
00:42:808 (x) - This place is screaming for a circle
00:43:408 (1) - Change the whistle to finish?
00:45:808 (1) - ^
00:48:208 (1) - ^
01:05:008 (6) - Try moving this to 01:04:708 then lengthen it by 1/1 beat
01:14:608 (4) - add finish at the end

[Pereira's Normal]

00:09:808 (1) - It sounds better if you lengthen this too 00:12:208. Change the clap to finish too
00:32:308 (2) - How about remove the repeat so it follow the vocal
00:32:908 (3) - and move this to 00:33:508
00:43:408 (x) - add a circle here?
00:50:608 (1,2,3) - I suggest to make these 1/3 notes to sliders or slider repeat. It'll be much easier to hit
00:51:808 (1,2,3) - ^
00:53:008 (1,2,3) - ^
00:54:208 (1) - Maybe add circle on each of 1/1 beat after this slider?
01:24:208 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest this rhythm to follow the music
01:25:408 (5) - This slider repeats should start at 01:25:558 and remove 1 repeat from it

[eldnL's Hard]

00:03:658 - add circles or slider repeat to cover the "nananana" ?
00:07:858 (1) - A very unexpected 1/2 beat. Plays better if you just remove this
00:10:108 (1) - Why spinner? Can you just use sliders and circles for this part?
00:26:158 (4) - Make this into a repeat slider?
00:44:758 (3) - starting this slider on 1/2 sounds quite awkward. Maybe start it at 00:45:058? You might have to shorten it if you do this
01:19:408 (6) - The part after this slider is better to add circle according to the "wasshoi"

[Ozzy's Taiko]
00:14:608 (1) - sounds better if you use K
00:30:508 (4) - k?
01:26:458 (1) - extend to 01:27:958 to give more spinner sound?

[Insane]
00:03:808 (6) - Kinda overmapped cause if you're following the music there should be nothing here
00:05:008 (x) - add circle?
00:32:308 (8) - map the part after this slider?
00:50:608 (1) - the slider repeat is covered by the hit burst from 00:50:008 (3) this is absolutely not allowed. Mirroring this slider should fix this
01:09:508 (x) - add circle?
01:25:408 (6) - same as 00:03:808 (6)

[Ozzy's Extra]
00:03:808 (3) - same as 00:03:808 (6) on Insane diff
00:41:008 (1,2) - no whistle on these?
01:06:208 (1) - Change the clap at the start to finish
01:14:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Taiko?
01:19:408 (1) - lol I suggest to make it into curve slider so it'll be more forgiving or might as well remove the 1.70 timing section cause there are more than 3 unique slider speed here
01:25:408 (3) - ditto

Whew, that's all from me. I like the 1st opening better :3
Good luck and ~star
OzzyOzrock

Sallad4ever wrote:

[Ozzy's Taiko]
00:14:608 (1) - sounds better if you use K But it doesn't feel good.
00:30:508 (4) - k? k.
01:26:458 (1) - extend to 01:27:958 to give more spinner sound? no

[Ozzy's Extra]
00:03:808 (3) - same as 00:03:808 (6) on Insane diff you're insane if you think a note is overmapping
00:41:008 (1,2) - no whistle on these? ooooh
01:06:208 (1) - Change the clap at the start to finish uhh no, ruins consitnency
01:14:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Taiko? what the hell are you saying
01:19:408 (1) - lol I suggest to make it into curve slider so it'll be more forgiving or might as well remove the 1.70 timing section cause there are more than 3 unique slider speed here who cares if there are 3, that isn't even supposed to apply to inherits and if they fit
01:25:408 (3) - ditto what are you dittoing[/spoilerbox]
Download: Hyadain - Hyadain no Joujou Yuujou (TV Size) (Makar8000) [Ozzy's Taiko].osu
Download: Hyadain - Hyadain no Joujou Yuujou (TV Size) (Makar8000) [Ozzy's Extra].osu
Topic Starter
Makar

Mithost wrote:

From my Modding Queue

Easy Diff:
Felt a little "stiff", but the hitsounds made it fun to play along to. Should be perfect for an easy map.

Medium:
Loved the clapping in the song. Fit the feel of the song well, and knowing that a clap was always coming up helped with the sight read. Good work. Easy to sightread, but still fun as heck to play.

Taiko:
I love taiko for maps like this. My QW (don) OP (kat) set up made this so much fun from the beginning of the map. I suggest this set up for this map because it was a lot of fun to tap out the intro.

Insane:
Holy snap fast slider speeds. This is nothing bad though, It's just I couldn't play it (I can't play insanes at full speed yet). However, when putting it on auto I followed with my mouse to the best of my ability and found the map to be fun. It felt like most insane ranked maps, and would definitely should be ranked as one.

This should be ranked soon. It's a great map that has grown out of it's potential. Reccomending the QWOP method of taiko for this song.
Thanks for the comments!

hitmefast wrote:

as the reply i just check insane and extra ;3

insane

check the tags pls What's wrong with them?
bpm is 200.04 That's just... How did you even get that?
also offset is 210 I'll keep it at 208

-nice song Thanks :3

star~ :3
No changes, but thanks anyway for the star ^^

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi Makar8000 :D Hi :D
Wall of text FTW~

SPOILER
[General]
- Could you find another BG with better quality? The quality on the current one is kinda low, it looks blurry I got it directly from the OP...
- Ozzy's Extra has an audio lead in of 3 seconds while the others have 2 seconds Oops

[Easy]
00:02:608 (1) - The repeat sounds weird. Maybe something like this ? Done
00:22:408 (3) - For this slider I suggest to make it into a single slider then move it back 1/1 beat to 00:22:108. You might have to lengthen it to 00:22:858 too Ignored
00:30:658 (1,2) - Make these 2 into a single slider so it's easier to hit Ignored
00:32:008 (3) - Maybe shorten this by 1/2 beat? Ignored
00:33:808 (1) - ^ (maybe a little harder though) Ignored
00:42:808 (x) - This place is screaming for a circle Nope
00:43:408 (1) - Change the whistle to finish? Done
00:45:808 (1) - ^ Done
00:48:208 (1) - ^ Done
01:05:008 (6) - Try moving this to 01:04:708 then lengthen it by 1/1 beat Ignored
01:14:608 (4) - add finish at the end Done

[Insane]
00:03:808 (6) - Kinda overmapped cause if you're following the music there should be nothing here Keeping it for now
00:05:008 (x) - add circle? No, I think the player needs a break after the tornado
00:32:308 (8) - map the part after this slider? The only thing that really fits there imo is a stream which I think is better as an Extra-only thing
00:50:608 (1) - the slider repeat is covered by the hit burst from 00:50:008 (3) this is absolutely not allowed. Mirroring this slider should fix this Fixed
01:09:508 (x) - add circle? No for now
01:25:408 (6) - same as 00:03:808 (6) Keeping it for now

Whew, that's all from me. I like the 1st opening better :3 I disagree D:
Good luck and ~star
Thanks for the mod!
Taiko, Extra and Normal also updated. Hard will be looked at later.
eldnl

Sallad4ever wrote:


[eldnL's Hard]

00:03:658 - add circles or slider repeat to cover the "nananana" ? No
00:07:858 (1) - A very unexpected 1/2 beat. Plays better if you just remove this No
00:10:108 (1) - Why spinner? Can you just use sliders and circles for this part? No
00:26:158 (4) - Make this into a repeat slider? No
00:44:758 (3) - starting this slider on 1/2 sounds quite awkward. Maybe start it at 00:45:058? You might have to shorten it if you do this You're right, fixed
01:19:408 (6) - The part after this slider is better to add circle according to the "wasshoi" Ok I change the last part.
Thanks ~

Download: Hyadain - Hyadain no Joujou Yuujou (TV Size) (Makar8000) [eldnL's Hard].osu
hitmefast

Makar8000 wrote:

hitmefast wrote:

as the reply i just check insane and extra ;3

insane
check the tags pls What's wrong with them?
bpm is 200.04 That's just... How did you even get that?
also offset is 210 I'll keep it at 208

-nice song Thanks :3

star~ :3
?? if you don't like my mod then go home i cheked 6 times 3 manually 3 with programs. the bpm is 200.04
(in one of the programs was 100.02 then i just duplicate)but whatever ir ur life, think what u want

pls don't blame it with me, i just cheked its ur choise ;3
Topic Starter
Makar

hitmefast wrote:

?? if you don't like my mod then go home i cheked 6 times 3 manually 3 with programs. the bpm is 200.04
(in one of the programs was 100.02 then i just duplicate)but whatever ir ur life, think what u want

pls don't blame it with me, i just cheked its ur choise ;3
Sorry if it seemed like I offended you, I didn't mean it that way. The way it is now sounds perfectly fine as I listened to the whole song in 25% speed using the current BPM/Offset and there doesn't seem to be any problems. The change would be so small it's not worth the time. I think a change as small as 3ms (which from start to end when comparing doesn't even make a 3ms difference as far as I can tell) when the current offset seems fine by most people can be ignored especially since I have asked some other people to check the timing before I switched from 200ms to 208ms.
OzzyOzrock

hitmefast wrote:

?? if you don't like my mod then go home i cheked 6 times 3 manually 3 with programs. the bpm is 200.04
(in one of the programs was 100.02 then i just duplicate)but whatever ir ur life, think what u want

pls don't blame it with me, i just cheked its ur choise ;3
Sabes que la probilidad de que el BPM de una cancion hecha con una computadora tenga un BPM tan raro como 200.4? 0 a 897134645755671

Es 200. Seria estupido que exista una cancion con .4 mas que 200. Yo no se que estas haciendo mal con esos programas, pero no.
hitmefast

Makar8000 wrote:

hitmefast wrote:

?? if you don't like my mod then go home i cheked 6 times 3 manually 3 with programs. the bpm is 200.04
(in one of the programs was 100.02 then i just duplicate)but whatever ir ur life, think what u want

pls don't blame it with me, i just cheked its ur choise ;3
Sorry if it seemed like I offended you, I didn't mean it that way. The way it is now sounds perfectly fine as I listened to the whole song in 25% speed using the current BPM/Offset and there doesn't seem to be any problems. The change would be so small it's not worth the time. I think a change as small as 3ms (which from start to end when comparing doesn't even make a 3ms difference as far as I can tell) when the current offset seems fine by most people can be ignored especially since I have asked some other people to check the timing before I switched from 200ms to 208ms.
oky ;3
[Shalon]
as your request :
Normal
00:08:008 (3) - repeat it more one time?

Cool map. Small hard for normal, but all notes are fit with song sweetly :D

Hard
00:56:608 (2) - make it more circular than start note and and note can form symmetry.

It's small hard for 'hard' diff imo.. patterns seems like insane.

Insane
00:38:008 (7) - move it more righter, or use CTRL + H this. 00:37:408 (5)
00:39:508 (1,2,3,4) - how about move these left 2grid?
00:57:808 - add note

Extra
00:06:958 (7) - new combo
00:43:408 (1) - make it more prettier. then this slider's right side can form symmetry with right side.
00:48:208 (7) - new combo
01:26:495 (1) - How about use finish with low volume?

Cool.

Taiko
00:02:308 (1) - K
00:13:558 (1) - D
00:16:858 (1,1) - D K K ?
01:05:158 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - How about change it with k k k kkkkk k



Good luck.
OzzyOzrock

[Shalon] wrote:

Extra
00:06:958 (7) - new combo I guess...
00:43:408 (1) - make it more prettier. then this slider's right side can form symmetry with right side. you're kidding me right?
00:48:208 (7) - new combo alright
01:26:495 (1) - How about use finish with low volume? That's what it was before, and it sounds weird unfitting and annoying IMO. Maybe if someone else likes it that way I'll do it. I mean, it doesn't really matter much.

Taiko
00:02:308 (1) - K no
00:13:558 (1) - D sound doesn't fit and it implies the third note should be don too
00:16:858 (1,1) - D K K ? no
01:05:158 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - How about change it with k k k kkkkk k how about no wwwww
Mak would you mind applying the new combos? AND MAYBE SNEAKING IN THE FINISH SOUND ASFDASASno.
wcx19911123
from my que

[General]
fine

[Easy]
00:32:008 (3) - end at 00:32:458

[Pereira's Normal]
this is Normal+
01:26:608 (1) - too short

[eldnL's Hard]
00:38:308 (1) - confusing slider
00:43:408 (2) - end at 00:44:458
too many finish in the ending , sound noisy

[Insane]
00:19:108 (8,1) - not overlap

[Ozzy's Extra]
00:52:208 (3,1) - ;_;
01:19:408 (1) - 1.7x ;_;
what the crazy diff ;_;

;_;
Topic Starter
Makar

[Shalon] wrote:

as your request :
Insane
00:38:008 (7) - move it more righter, or use CTRL + H this. 00:37:408 (5) Fixed
00:39:508 (1,2,3,4) - how about move these left 2grid? Umm.... Okay
00:57:808 - add note Nah

Cool.

Good luck.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Shalon] wrote:

Extra
00:06:958 (7) - new combo I guess... Done
00:48:208 (7) - new combo alright Done
Mak would you mind applying the new combos? AND MAYBE SNEAKING IN THE FINISH SOUND ASFDASASno. Ooo I have a nickname now www.

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my que

[General]
fine

[Easy]
00:32:008 (3) - end at 00:32:458 Done

[Insane]
00:19:108 (8,1) - not overlap Okay fixed

[Ozzy's Extra]
01:19:408 (1) - 1.7x ;_; It used to be 2.0x but CTB was impossible lol.
All done.. Thanks for the mods. Hard and Normal will be looked at later
EDIT: Normal ignored
Nymph
Hi Nymph here and request from: wcx19911123's mod queue.

So here is my suggestions:

General:
BG is png. Try to change to jpg to save some space, so people can download this map faster~So try this:



Easy:
00:29:008 (5) - nazi spacing: up 1 grid.
00:41:908 (2,3) - nazi spacing: 3 right 1 grid.
othes all fine for me~

Pereira's Normal:
00:20:458 (5) - I think this slider ends at 00:20:908 sounds better, and then add a note at 00:21:208. Just suggestion.
others fine~

eldnL's Hard:
00:38:308 (1) - confused me a little... not sure if this is ok.

Insane:
fine~

Ozzy's Extra:
Damn this is difficult....But still fine~ kind of enjoy this.

I think this probably ready to find MAT to have a look at it? So don't hesitate, just move on 8-)
Topic Starter
Makar

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from: wcx19911123's mod queue.

So here is my suggestions:

General:
BG is png. Try to change to jpg to save some space, so people can download this map faster~So try this: Done

Easy:
00:29:008 (5) - nazi spacing: up 1 grid. Done
00:41:908 (2,3) - nazi spacing: 3 right 1 grid. Done
othes all fine for me~

Insane:
fine~ ^^

I think this probably ready to find MAT to have a look at it? So don't hesitate, just move on 8-)
Thanks for the mod, other difficulties will be looked at later
EDIT: Normal Updated
eg91022a71w
8-)

---My Pending Map---
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/31780 - Wolf & Spice - Shippo to Dance
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/30882 - ULTRA-PRISM with Shiratama Soft Tennis Club - Rule Book wo Wasurechae

---Pending Guest Map---
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/33154 - Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu - My Pace de Ikimashou (TV size) [by biwako]
Xakyrie
Loving the map Makar!
Keep up the good work ~ :D
eldnl
Then ... I change just the confusing slider.

Download: Hyadain - Hyadain no Joujou Yuujou (TV Size) (Makar8000) [eldnL's Hard].osu
KGFA
Good MAP :)
Kogure
Hellz, i cant stop playing this map, its so cool! :)
Support! And keep it up :3
Leorda
Hello

Easy
00:54:208 (1) - I think this spinner is short for easy diff

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Pereira's Normal
00:17:908 (3) - Finish hitsound here are make no sense
00:27:658 (1,2) - Stack with tail slider? To make average player is easy to play?

------------------------------------------------------------------------

eldnL's Hard
00:07:708 (x) - Add note here. Otherwise, some player hit 00:07:858 (1) earlier
00:47:158 (x) - Add note here?
00:57:358 (3) - This repeating slider are pointless for me.....
01:05:158 (5) - Move 1/2 earlier?

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Insane
00:03:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think this pattern is make no sense for me (Nazi)
00:44:458 (5) - Move 2 grid right (Nazi)
01:25:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same issue as 00:03:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Ozzy's Extra
00:32:758 (8) - New combo
00:39:358 (2) - This object is touch the HP Bar
00:40:558 (2) - This object is almost offscreen
01:03:808 (3) - This object is touch the HP Bar
01:04:108 (4) - This object is almost offscreen

------------------------------------------------------------------------

cya
Topic Starter
Makar

Leorda wrote:

Hello

Easy
00:54:208 (1) - I think this spinner is short for easy diff Fixed

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Insane
00:03:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think this pattern is make no sense for me (Nazi) It's a triangular tornado. See This
00:44:458 (5) - Move 2 grid right (Nazi) Nope, I've had to change this many times and I like it this way.
01:25:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same issue as 00:03:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) See above


------------------------------------------------------------------------

cya
Thanks for the mod, other diffs will be looked at later as always
OzzyOzrock
Didn't move anything in but I changed combo stuff

Download: Hyadain - Hyadain no Joujou Yuujou (TV Size) (Makar8000) [Ozzy's Extra].osu
Pereira006

Leorda wrote:

Hello

Leooooooordaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!♥_♥
------------------------------------------------------------------------

Pereira's Normal
00:17:908 (3) - Finish hitsound here are make no sensefix
00:27:658 (1,2) - Stack with tail slider? To make average player is easy to play?fix

-----------------------------------------------------------------------
cya
NO I WANNA WITH YOU ♥
Zelos
You are my first mod in like a month.
Folder:
All fine and dandeh here.

General:
You should have one set slider tick rate for all the difficulties.

Easy:
00:29:008 (5) - make this more curvier and symmetrical?

Pereiras's Normal:
00:17:308 (1,2,3) - this looks a little un-even. like there is a little more space between 2 and 3.
00:36:208 (1,4) - either move slider 1 down 1 grid point or slider 4 up 1 grid point.
00:37:108 (2) - move to the left 1 grid point.
00:38:608 (1,2) - center this among the y-axis
01:24:208 (1) - move this to the right 2 grid points and up 2 grid points.

eldnL's Hard:
This is by far one of the prettiest maps I've seen in a while.

Insane:
Ummm, I saw nothing wrong here but the map itself kinda doesn't make sense. its sort of confusing.

Ozz's Extra:
00:32:758 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - you should use soft hitwhistles on this stream. it would sound a lot nicer.
01:03:808 (3) - this is touching the HP bar. possibly change this?
01:14:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - okay this is complete spam right here ozzy.
01:26:495 (1) - you should at least start this at the next 1/4th. not 1/8th. it makes it much easier to spin.

Star.
Topic Starter
Makar

Zelos wrote:

You are my first mod in like a month.
Folder:
All fine and dandeh here.

General:
You should have one set slider tick rate for all the difficulties. I don't think this is needed especially since the ones that are different are guest diffs. I will ask others and see what they think

Easy:
00:29:008 (5) - make this more curvier and symmetrical? It wasn't meant to be symmetrical though, I wanted it to be waterfall-looking

Insane:
Ummm, I saw nothing wrong here but the map itself kinda doesn't make sense. its sort of confusing. Random patterns.... for a random anime :s

Star.
Thanks for the mod ^^
Normal updated
OzzyOzrock

Zelos wrote:

Ozz's Extra:
00:32:758 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - you should use soft hitwhistles on this stream. it would sound a lot nicer. Hmm, maybe for the whole part too
01:03:808 (3) - this is touching the HP bar. possibly change this? I, for one, don't think that notes slightly touching the HP bar is really that big of a deal.
01:14:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - okay this is complete spam right here ozzy. Perfectly good deathstream, spaced close enough to not only need to zxzxzxzxzx :3
01:26:495 (1) - you should at least start this at the next 1/4th. not 1/8th. it makes it much easier to spin. Eh, then it feels weird. I wanna make it feel like they start the same ;_;

Star.
♥ or something

Download: Hyadain - Hyadain no Joujou Yuujou (TV Size) (Makar8000) [Ozzy's Extra].osu
HeatKai
Haha.
I fall in love with OzzyOzrock.
hahaha <3
Extra so cool :3
L_P
aww i played eldnl's hard first but awwww

the rhythm seem to fit the song pretty pretty much but i think it is hard to play it smoothly
(since player's 1st impression is very important - by L_P)
whatever, it is not your diff. so i wont say anything on it. sounds contradiction haha.

[Insane]

01,408 consider make those five note upside down?
13,258 tricky tricky i have to play three times to get it right but its ok
13,558 change position to note 2
14,008 change position to note3
44,308 change those notes to slider? cause the spacing is odd
105,008 add 1 note? the next note is on sidebeat
109,058 delete note? "make similar rhythm" - by L_P's piano teacher
ps the slider velocity is insane T.T
125,558 make the spacing like 03,958

nice diff

Easy

03,958 although it fit the song, but quite tricky for newbie. like i said - player's 1st impression is very important
19,408 make the shape sharper?
30,658 move to 30,808?
33,808 make the sliders one after one ( tail to head ) thus, dont need the return or...you can change the rhythm a bit
(cause no notes between the sliders is weird,like 39,508 sounds better)

101,108 add return? or note?
114,608 slider move to center is more pleasant ,good looking
118,208 delete note 119,208 add note
123,908 add return?



Yeah STAR
Topic Starter
Makar

L_P wrote:

aww i played eldnl's hard first but awwww

the rhythm seem to fit the song pretty pretty much but i think it is hard to play it smoothly
(since player's 1st impression is very important - by L_P)
whatever, it is not your diff. so i wont say anything on it. sounds contradiction haha.

[Insane]

01,408 consider make those five note upside down? No thanks
13,258 tricky tricky i have to play three times to get it right but its ok I sorta agree. I'll change if another person has problems with it
13,558 change position to note 2 Sorry but I don't understand your english here..
14,008 change position to note3 Same as above...
44,308 change those notes to slider? cause the spacing is odd Slider wouldn't work out very well... Unless you have a pattern suggestion?
105,008 add 1 note? the next note is on sidebeat Doesn't fit...
109,058 delete note? "make similar rhythm" - by L_P's piano teacher No because I'm switching parts here instead of staying with the background bass.
ps the slider velocity is insane T.T
125,558 make the spacing like 03,958 It already is.

nice diff

Easy

03,958 although it fit the song, but quite tricky for newbie. like i said - player's 1st impression is very important I didn't want to do this on the downbeat simply because it's boring only using whit ticks. I really don't think its hard for beginners.
19,408 make the shape sharper? No. I would use red points but I wasn't able to use it and make it look good. If you have suggestions feel free to show me.
30,658 move to 30,808? No for now but I do agree it might be hard for new players. I may change if another person suggests
33,808 make the sliders one after one ( tail to head ) thus, dont need the return or...you can change the rhythm a bit
(cause no notes between the sliders is weird,like 39,508 sounds better) I think it's better and easier the way it is.
101,108 add return? or note? Hm..... Okay
114,608 slider move to center is more pleasant ,good looking Ignored
118,208 delete note 119,208 add note I'm not sure where you want to add the note because 01:19:208 is not on the timeline. Even if it was I want to keep the note at 01:18:208 so no change.
123,908 add return? Ignored



Yeah STAR
Thanks for looking at my map.

You said STAR but you never actually stared ._.
NINE1328_old
nice song ~
Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.
Megurine Luka
Hi. Mod time

[General]
3I is not rankable. decrease one diff's difficulty

[Easy]
AR-1
00:48:208 (1) - it's better not to hide note in Easy. But I think it's ok. Just make a mention

[Normal]
00:05:308 (1) - make it into a slider from 00:05:008(or add a note at this point)
00:20:458 (5) - 1 grid up
the whistles sound strange in the beginning of kiai time. (why did it sudden end at the following part? if you want to add, then add it in a certain pattern. if not, then del them all)

[Hard]
00:07:858 (1) - del circle
00:29:008 (1) - it's better not to use too much same kind of slider. make more changes
01:05:158 (5) - start at 01:05:008
01:24:208 (1) - make this slider's volume increase gradually

[Insane]
00:21:358 (4) - spacing, move far away from last note
00:44:458 (5) - mislead spacing. it's will be confused for 1 pc player
00:57:958 (3) - spacing, move a little bit far away
01:03:508 (x) - add note
01:09:508 (x) - ^

[Extra]
00:36:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacing
00:56:008 (1,2,3,4) - ^


Star. Good luck
Topic Starter
Makar

Megurine Luka wrote:

Hi. Mod time

[General]
3I is not rankable. decrease one diff's difficulty Yes but Hard is not Insane-level difficulty. See http://puu.sh/3ZXr and http://puu.sh/3ZXt as examples

[Easy]
AR-1 No
00:48:208 (1) - it's better not to hide note in Easy. But I think it's ok. Just make a mention I think it's okay

[Insane]
00:21:358 (4) - spacing, move far away from last note ... x1 spacing already
00:44:458 (5) - mislead spacing. it's will be confused for 1 pc player Alright, I have gotten many compaints about this note and whether or not it should be in the middle or consistent with the notes immediately before and after it. I asked in #modhelp and 2 MATs said to move it to the middle so I will do so.
00:57:958 (3) - spacing, move a little bit far away The spacing is fine..
01:03:508 (x) - add note Ignored
01:09:508 (x) - ^ Ignored

Star. Good luck
Thanks for the mod
Pereira006

Megurine Luka wrote:

Hi. Mod time

[General]
3I is not rankable. decrease one diff's difficulty they are guest diff so will be fine

[Normal]
00:05:308 (1) - make it into a slider from 00:05:008(or add a note at this point) no
00:20:458 (5) - 1 grid up yes
the whistles sound strange in the beginning of kiai time. (why did it sudden end at the following part? if you want to add, then add it in a certain pattern. if not, then del them all) NO I like this whistles on kiai time this is my style not change all sorry
thank looking my diff
OzzyOzrock

Megurine Luka wrote:

[Extra]
00:36:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacing Supposed to be like that =w=
00:56:008 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^


Star. Good luck
Megurine Luka

Makar8000 wrote:

Yes but Hard is not Insane-level difficulty. See http://puu.sh/3ZXr and http://puu.sh/3ZXt as examples

Peppy: A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels"). That is, a map set can have no more than two "Insane" difficulties, etc.

See viewtopic.php?f=6&t=439
third point
:)

It is ok if you still insist to keep three I difficulty. But I think it will cause difficulties in ranking it. Because the criterion is based on the system not the difficult name
It's up to you.
Although I also think "3I is unrankable" is really ...uh...
OzzyOzrock
Keep up, now it's allowed as long as a spread already exists, Easy, Normal, Hard, etc.

DAMN YOU STAR RATING
Topic Starter
Makar

Megurine Luka wrote:

Makar8000 wrote:

Yes but Hard is not Insane-level difficulty. See http://puu.sh/3ZXr and http://puu.sh/3ZXt as examples

Peppy: A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels"). That is, a map set can have no more than two "Insane" difficulties, etc.

See viewtopic.php?f=6&t=439
third point
:)

It is ok if you still insist to keep three I difficulty. But I think it will cause difficulties in ranking it. Because the criterion is based on the system not the difficult name
It's up to you.
Although I also think "3I is unrankable" is really ...uh...
I will say this again. Hard is marked as an Insane but really it feels and plays like a Hard difficulty

peppy wrote:

A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels").
Megurine Luka
Hi. I just wanna say.
About the 3I. You're right and I was wrong.
Good for you to keep it. And I'm sorry.
My College papers are driving me crazy so I'm not in these days. Apologize again.

Good luck in ranking though.
L_P
did I?! sorry i forgot!!!!!!
what i meant is change note 4's position , to note 2's position....ok?
STAR again
bun_bun_bun_bun_bun
afsdaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaavyfgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggutgyugyuiguyguyihiyuhuyighyughyuhyuhuyhuihuiohoiyuhuyhgytgtfvrtyvrtfvbyu
Topic Starter
Makar

L_P wrote:

did I?! sorry i forgot!!!!!!
what i meant is change note 4's position , to note 2's position....ok?
STAR again
Oh... Well I did it that way because of the way the crow moves at that part in the video, so no change.
eldnl

Megurine Luka wrote:

[Hard]
00:07:858 (1) - del circle This note is for the spacing, also follow good the rhythm.
00:29:008 (1) - it's better not to use too much same kind of slider. make more changes More notes, more hard.
01:05:158 (5) - start at 01:05:008 I follow the "nanananana"
01:24:208 (1) - make this slider's volume increase gradually wut?
Thanks but not changes :P
BrokenArrow
Mod by request~

Ozzy's Taiko

00:36:658 (3) - Move it to 00:36:808?
00:37:408 (7) - Delete?
00:37:708 (7) - Move it to 00:37:558?
01:19:408 (1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,1) - Maybe use less big don's/kat's at this part?
01:25:408 (5) - k?


Found nothing else, great taiko diff!
You're still my favourite taiko mapper, Ozzy
have a star~
OzzyOzrock
No changes, sorry.

I'm so hard on my fans :3

SPOILER
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Sander-Don
Mod for Ozzy's Taiko requested by Makar8000

lol, couldn't find anything that needed changing~
I could suggest some pattern changing, but it's what you mapped so it would be stupid to change that, it wouldn't be your map anymore.

Nice map :3 star~
OzzyOzrock
THAT'S NOT A BAD THING, HAVE YOU SEEN HOW I MOD BACKFIRE MAPS?
tutuhaha
HI~

Easy
00:13:408 (x) - add circle?
00:30:508 - 00:30:808 I think add one slider to replace 00:30:658 circle is better
00:50:608 - 00:53:008 Spinner and then you can add some note
01:19:408 (1) - straight line

Pereira's Normal
00:27:658 (1) - don't overlapped
00:28:858 (X) - you can add one circle
00:52:408 (2) - ugly I think...
01:06:808 (2) - straight line please?
I like 00:33:808 - 00:43:108 's hitsounds >v<~Nice~~

eldnL's Hard
View - Grid level - 3 right?
00:07:858 (1) - you don't need this circle I think....delete
00:20:008 (X) - add whistle
00:21:058 (X) - add whistle
00:35:758 (X) - add circle?
00:47:158 (X) - add circle?
01:05:158 (5) - move 5 to 01:05:008 I think is better than this
01:18:958 (X) - add circle?
01:25:558 (2) - new combo?

Insane
00:03:958 - 00:04:858 I don't like this it is too overlapped, Maybe you can change this
or make the new combo can help use to read this?
00:07:708 (X) - add circle?
00:07:858 (X) - add circle?
00:09:358 - 00:09:808 distance snap is good enough do not change spacing
00:44:158 (X) - add circle
00:44:308 (4) - delete
00:44:608 (1) - move to 00:44:758
00:44:908 (2) - move to 00:45:058
00:45:208 (3) - move to 00:45:358
If you want to change this I belive you know how to change 00:45:808 - 00:49:408 ^ ^
00:48:058 (5) - delete
00:49:258 (1) - on there
00:49:558 - 00:49:858 (234)
00:50:158 - 00:50:458 (567)
Do you understand >v<?///

Ozzy's Extra
00:29:608 (9) - delete repeat and add one circle on 00:30:058
So Cool map~
Star~~~~~
Pereira006

tutuhaha wrote:

HI~

Pereira's Normal
00:27:658 (1) - don't overlapped NO because i use mod's Leorda :3
00:28:858 (X) - you can add one circle I try this but i put 25% song slow but nothing drum soft so i think is overmapped so no sorry
00:52:408 (2) - ugly I think... that why is 1/3 :/
01:06:808 (2) - straight line please? Lucky yes lol
I like 00:33:808 - 00:43:108 's hitsounds >v<~Nice~~ Ya thank lot by Theowest troll
Download: Hyadain - Hyadain no Joujou Yuujou (TV Size) (Makar8000) [Pereira's Normal].osu

thank you looking my diff :D
OzzyOzrock
:D

D:

=w=

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eldnl

tutuhaha wrote:

eldnL's Hard
View - Grid level - 3 right? yes
00:07:858 (1) - you don't need this circle I think....delete You are the second saying it. Deleted.
00:20:008 (X) - add whistle Ok
00:21:058 (X) - add whistle Ok
00:35:758 (X) - add circle? No
00:47:158 (X) - add circle? No
01:05:158 (5) - move 5 to 01:05:008 I think is better than this I follow the voice.
01:18:958 (X) - add circle? Nop
01:25:558 (2) - new combo? nop
Thanks :d

Download: Hyadain - Hyadain no Joujou Yuujou (TV Size) (Makar8000) [eldnL's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Makar

tutuhaha wrote:

HI~ Hey ^^

Easy
00:13:408 (x) - add circle? Eh... No thanks. I don't think it fits
00:30:508 - 00:30:808 I think add one slider to replace 00:30:658 circle is better I agree. Fixed
00:50:608 - 00:53:008 Spinner and then you can add some note Fixed
01:19:408 (1) - straight line I did this one purpose because of the angel the notes after go at

Insane
00:03:958 - 00:04:858 I don't like this it is too overlapped, Maybe you can change this
or make the new combo can help use to read this? Ignored
00:07:708 (X) - add circle? Ignored
00:07:858 (X) - add circle? Ignored
00:09:358 - 00:09:808 distance snap is good enough do not change spacing Uhhh... I will ignore for now.
00:44:158 (X) - add circle Ignored. It doesn't follow the background
00:44:308 (4) - delete Ignored because of above
00:44:608 (1) - move to 00:44:758 ^
00:44:908 (2) - move to 00:45:058 ^
00:45:208 (3) - move to 00:45:358 ^
If you want to change this I belive you know how to change 00:45:808 - 00:49:408 ^ ^ ^
00:48:058 (5) - delete ^
00:49:258 (1) - on there Don't like this... :s
00:49:558 - 00:49:858 (234) ^
00:50:158 - 00:50:458 (567) ^
Do you understand >v<?///

So Cool map~
Star~~~~~
Thanks for the mod!
Kuma-san
*_*
Awesome map,song and anime
Star and add in favorites
PS:My message is too short.I do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.
Deif
General:
  1. In the folder there's a "bg.jpg" and a "bg.png". Please, remove one of them.
  2. .osb file is not needed as well (remember to full submit after those changes).
Easy:
  1. 00:01:408 (3) - Add a repetition.
  2. 00:42:508 (x) - Add a note.
  3. 00:42:808 (x) - ^ (or just add a slider in 00:42:508 which ends here).
Pereira's Normal:
  1. 00:43:108 (5,1) - The map's too short to have a break in. Consider mapping that part?
  2. 00:54:208 (1) - The next note is really near this slider, but I suggest converting it into a spinner.
eldnL's Hard: Me encantan tus sliders :3
  1. 00:55:408 (1) - Too much repetitions IMO. Separate it into 2 sliders at least.
  2. 00:57:358 (3) - ^
  3. 01:02:158 (2) - ^
Insane:
  1. 00:04:858 (7) - This should be a slider.
  2. 00:07:408 (1) - ^
  3. 00:32:308 (8,1) - You should map the mini-break between those notes (stream, slider w/repetitions, spin,... whatever).
  4. 00:37:408 (5) - New Combo.
  5. 00:44:308 (4,5,1) - Please make the distance between 5 and 1 be the same as 4-5.
  6. 00:54:283 (1) - Make this spin a bit shorter and add a note at 0:56:608.
  7. 00:57:808 (x) - Add a note.
  8. 01:06:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part is a bit boring compared to the rest of the map.
  9. 01:09:208 (6,7) - You should add some notes/slider between those 2.
Ozzy's Extra: Quite fun to play but...
  1. 01:19:408 (1) - Almost ALL CtB players would hate you because of this slider ;___;
Ozzy's Taiko: Really nice job <3

Well... some of the diffs are pretty solid, but which concerns me most is Insane, because it's not consistent enough. Anyway have a star~
OzzyOzrock
That slider was designed to be possible to hit in CTB lolloollolololololololollolool
Deif

OzzyOzrock wrote:

That slider was designed to be possible to hit in CTB lolloollolololololololollolool
It cannot be compared to the 2 consecutive sliders in Banned Forever, but anyway wwwwww
Topic Starter
Makar

Deif wrote:

General:
  1. In the folder there's a "bg.jpg" and a "bg.png". Please, remove one of them. It's probably in your folder because you didn't delete the map before redownloading. I just deleted + redownloaded to check this and bg.png is not there.
  2. .osb file is not needed as well (remember to full submit after those changes). Not really needed. This file is tiny.
Easy:
  1. 00:01:408 (3) - Add a repetition. Ignored
  2. 00:42:508 (x) - Add a note. Ignored
  3. 00:42:808 (x) - ^ (or just add a slider in 00:42:508 which ends here). Ignored
Insane:
  1. 00:04:858 (7) - This should be a slider. Ignored. Don't see how a slider would be appropriate here.
  2. 00:07:408 (1) - ^ Same as above
  3. 00:32:308 (8,1) - You should map the mini-break between those notes (stream, slider w/repetitions, spin,... whatever). Ignored
  4. 00:37:408 (5) - New Combo. Okay
  5. 00:44:308 (4,5,1) - Please make the distance between 5 and 1 be the same as 4-5. I got a MATs opinion on this and I will keep it how it is now.
  6. 00:54:283 (1) - Make this spin a bit shorter and add a note at 0:56:608. Done
  7. 00:57:808 (x) - Add a note. Ignored
  8. 01:06:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part is a bit boring compared to the rest of the map. Here I changed what to follow + increased spacing by 2x to follow the bass. I think it's fine
  9. 01:09:208 (6,7) - You should add some notes/slider between those 2. Done
Well... some of the diffs are pretty solid, but which concerns me most is Insane, because it's not consistent enough. Anyway have a star~
Thanks for the mod. Normal and Hard all ignored.
eldnl

Deif wrote:

eldnL's Hard: Me encantan tus sliders :3
  1. 00:55:408 (1) - Too much repetitions IMO. Separate it into 2 sliders at least.
  2. 00:57:358 (3) - ^
  3. 01:02:158 (2) - ^


Gracias deif pero creo que esta bien asi, ya no sabria como cambiarlo por dos sliders xD

Also, maybe makar you need remove the .osb not because you don't use it, because maybe there is something wrong, and it is better to delete it, then appears again. :P
Breeze
Wow, this map has so many stars

[General]
  1. [Pireira's Normal]StackLeniency is 0.6, but other diff.s are 0.7, you'd better use same one
[Pireira's Normal]
  1. 00:27:658 (1) - Stack here maybe misread to a 1 beat note, maybe put a spacing like 00:29:908 (2,3) would be better
[Insane]
  1. 00:24:208 (1) - Make this note cloaser to previou note would be better IMO, maybe just for me, it's hard to read to a jump
  2. 00:44:308 (4) - New combo here and 00:44:908, then remove new combo of 00:44:608 made this stream much easier to read IMO
[Ozzy's Extra]
  1. 00:49:408 (3,4) - They are not paralleled, maybe you put them like this on pupurse?
  2. 01:19:408 - Sudden 1.7xBPM, I think you need a SB warnning like "SPEED UP"
Others are fine
star
Topic Starter
Makar

Breeze wrote:

Wow, this map has so many stars

[Insane]
  1. 00:24:208 (1) - Make this note cloaser to previou note would be better IMO, maybe just for me, it's hard to read to a jump Ignored
  2. 00:44:308 (4) - New combo here and 00:44:908, then remove new combo of 00:44:608 made this stream much easier to read IMO Uh..... Ignored for now but I might change later to a different way.
Others are fine
star
Thanks for looking at my beatmap
eldnl

Breeze wrote:

[General]
  1. [Pireira's Normal]StackLeniency is 0.6, but other diff.s are 0.7, you'd better use same one
Stack leaniency can be different in all difficulties, because this is for change the form of stacking of the notes, wich varies with the difficulty that you use.
Topic Starter
Makar

Breeze wrote:

[General]
  1. [Pireira's Normal]StackLeniency is 0.6, but other diff.s are 0.7, you'd better use same one
Changed by request of Pereira. Thanks
Breeze

eldnl wrote:

Breeze wrote:

[General]
  1. [Pireira's Normal]StackLeniency is 0.6, but other diff.s are 0.7, you'd better use same one
Stack leaniency can be different in all difficulties, because this is for change the form of stacking of the notes, wich varies with the difficulty that you use.
yea, that's not necessary, just a suggestion
Kotone
ok 8-) and 'Due to stars being useless, they are currently being phased on. More details will follow soon. 'lol
arien666
[Easy]
<3

[Pereira's Normal]
<3

[eldnL's Hard]
<3

[Insane]
01:11:008 (1,4,1,4) - End point is not snapped well orz

[Ozzy's Extra]
01:19:408 (1) - lol at this slider orz

[Ozzy's Taiko]
00:02:308 (1) - Big kat
00:14:308 (5) - Add finish
00:16:858 (1,1) - ka don?
01:21:508 (2) - Big kat?



<3 <3 <3



Due to stars being useless, they are currently being phased on. More details will follow soon.
FFFFFF
OzzyOzrock

arien666 wrote:

[Ozzy's Extra]
01:19:408 (1) - lol at this slider orz :3

[Ozzy's Taiko]
00:02:308 (1) - Big kat I'd agree, but I feel don more initiative
00:14:308 (5) - Add finish Wow, I've always thought of doing that, but never did, and now that I did, I like it.
00:16:858 (1,1) - ka don? Wow, you're right. Nice catch
01:21:508 (2) - Big kat? It is, just not colored right
Download: Hyadain - Hyadain no Joujou Yuujou (TV Size) (Makar8000) [Ozzy's Taiko].osu
moe!
Topic Starter
Makar

arien666 wrote:

[Insane]
01:11:008 (1,4,1,4) - End point is not snapped well orz O.O oops

[Ozzy's Extra]
01:19:408 (1) - lol at this slider orz Sorry Ozzy I had to fix this because 1.7 actually is impossible in CtB. Updated with 1.65
Fixed and Taiko updated. Thanks ^^

100% CtB Screenshot:
Pereira006

Makar8000 wrote:

arien666 wrote:

[Insane]
01:11:008 (1,4,1,4) - End point is not snapped well orz O.O oops

[Ozzy's Extra]
01:19:408 (1) - lol at this slider orz Sorry Ozzy I had to fix this because 1.7 actually is impossible in CtB. Updated with 1.65
Fixed and Taiko updated. Thanks ^^

100% CtB Screenshot:

pro ctb
Bakario
<3 :oops:

star someday~

Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question. -.-
Weez
since this is the same mp3 as my version, offset is 200 not 208
*Weezy disappears
HakuNoKaemi
[Easy]
00:05:608 (1,2) - Make (1) blanket (2) and position (2) under the Blue(2) slider end like this
00:06:808 (2,3,4) - Make it like a triangle
00:09:208 (5) - Even if you don't follow the last suggestion, stack this under 00:07:408 (3) -
00:09:208 (5,1) - Blanket (5) with (1) like this
00:11:608 (2,3,4) - Just stack (2) uner pink(5) and make the trangle a bit more better
00:26:608 (1) - Stack under 00:24:808 (2) -
00:27:808 (3,4,5) - Nazi, move them 1 grid 3 left to make a better triangle with 00:26:608 (1,2,3) -
00:31:708 (x) - Add a Note ( to Jan-Jan ! )
00:36:208 (1,2) - Copy Paste 00:33:808 (1,2) -, Ctrl+J it, Rotate by 20° Clockwise and make sure 00:37:408 (2) start is stacked under 00:35:008 (2) start
00:56:608 (1,2,3) - make it more an equilateral triangle like this
00:57:808 (3,4,5) - Nazi,Make it more equilateral by moving (5) 1 grid 3 down and 1 grid 3 left

[Pereira's Normal]
00:00:508 (2,3) - As you're here make (3) blanket (2) like this
00:22:408 (3,4) - As you're here make (3) blanket (4) like this
00:27:658 (1,2) - Manually stack them as they seem to go right-upward like this and not under the slider
00:31:408 (1,2) - As you're here make (1) blanket (2) start likethis
00:58:408 (5) - Remove Whistle at the Start and add it in 00:59:308 (6) - start, to follow the femal voice with whistles
01:05:008 (4) - Move to 01:05:158 (4) ( don't change the repeat number) to follow the nanananana fully
Why from 01:08:008 (5) - to 01:18:508 (4) - the placement become boxy? with nonexistant curves and diagonal placement. I liked how you placed the hits in the rest of the map... so why don't you do like the rest of the map?

[eLdnL's Hard]
Maybe a bit on the Very Hard side, but good diff

[Insane]
I can't goodly mod Insanes or more but i cansay graphic part here is a bit bad, some example:
00:03:808 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - pretty confusive, a jumpstar could be better!
00:05:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - move them like this, Stacks are 00:06:058 (2,4), 00:06:358 (3,7) -, 00:06:958 (5,1) -,00:07:108 (6) -
00:18:658 (6,1) - Don't like this overlap
00:28:258 (5,7) - Do like this ?
00:55:708 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Like Pool Balls :3
01:25:408 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Arleady said, Just mirror 00:03:808 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

[Ozzy's Extra]
00:05:458 (2) - Maybe a full overlap is better ( like this )
OzzyOzrock
Make it liek dat makar


make it liek a barssws

FINE

Download: Hyadain - Hyadain no Joujou Yuujou (TV Size) (Makar8000) [Ozzy's Extra].osu
Topic Starter
Makar

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Easy]
00:05:608 (1,2) - Make (1) blanket (2) and position (2) under the Blue(2) slider end like this Done
00:06:808 (2,3,4) - Make it like a triangle Done
00:09:208 (5) - Even if you don't follow the last suggestion, stack this under 00:07:408 (3) - Done
00:09:208 (5,1) - Blanket (5) with (1) like this Done
00:11:608 (2,3,4) - Just stack (2) uner pink(5) and make the trangle a bit more better Done
00:26:608 (1) - Stack under 00:24:808 (2) - Done
00:27:808 (3,4,5) - Nazi, move them 1 grid 3 left to make a better triangle with 00:26:608 (1,2,3) - Ignored
00:31:708 (x) - Add a Note ( to Jan-Jan ! ) Ignored
00:36:208 (1,2) - Copy Paste 00:33:808 (1,2) -, Ctrl+J it, Rotate by 20° Clockwise and make sure 00:37:408 (2) start is stacked under 00:35:008 (2) start Done + moved left for better symmetry
00:56:608 (1,2,3) - make it more an equilateral triangle like this Done
00:57:808 (3,4,5) - Nazi,Make it more equilateral by moving (5) 1 grid 3 down and 1 grid 3 left Did something different

[Insane]
I can't goodly mod Insanes or more but i cansay graphic part here is a bit bad, some example:
00:03:808 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - pretty confusive, a jumpstar could be better! Not sure if like.. x.x Ignored
00:05:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - move them like this, Stacks are 00:06:058 (2,4), 00:06:358 (3,7) -, 00:06:958 (5,1) -,00:07:108 (6) - Done
00:18:658 (6,1) - Don't like this overlap Ignored
00:28:258 (5,7) - Do like this ? Ignored
00:55:708 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Like Pool Balls :3 I like this o.o thanks
01:25:408 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Arleady said, Just mirror 00:03:808 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Ignored like above

Thanks for the mod. Everything updated
F e r l e y
Nice map, pretty fun :)

Liked the timing and sliders shape, broad open to most players skill level I think
nimi
Hiya :)

[Pereira's Normal]
(gonna make this in portuguese since he's from portugual, blablabla)
00:08:008 (3,4,5) - hmm.. isso soa um pouco estranho imo D: não sei se tu vai concordar, maaas eu acho que soaria melhor se tu fizesse assim http://puu.sh/4tWd - aka tirar a repeat do (3), e deixar o 4 e 5 uma tick antes.

[eldnL's Hard]
01:05:158 (5) - not really sure about this.. but maybe start it 1/2 earlier? starting it at the "hey" sounds better imo~

[Insane]
00:05:008 (x) - ehh.. this is kinda evil, but anyways. add a note there? (and make a jump on it)
00:38:308 (1) - add a clap on the end of it, since all the other sliders like this one have one
01:03:808 (1) - i predict slider breaks >_< unexpected speed up
01:09:808 (2) - ^ -same goes for all the sliders in this section -
01:11:308 (2,3) - stack correctly
01:11:908 (5,6) - ^
01:12:208 (1) - remove new combo? >_<
01:12:508 (2) - stack correctly
01:13:108 (5,6) - ^
01:20:908 (2) - ^

[Ozzy's Extra]
Only thing is that I think -1 on AR would be better, but well, people normally like fast AR x-x

And that's all. Hope it's useful~
Pereira006

Wiinter wrote:

Hiya :)

[Pereira's Normal]
(gonna make this in portuguese since he's from portugual, blablabla)
00:08:008 (3,4,5) - hmm.. isso soa um pouco estranho imo D: não sei se tu vai concordar, maaas eu acho que soaria melhor se tu fizesse assim http://puu.sh/4tWd - aka tirar a repeat do (3), e deixar o 4 e 5 uma tick antes.Corrigido
obrigada
vivere
Hi there :>

[Easy]:
  1. 00:59:008 (6) - Start a new combo here. Then, remove this new combo: 01:00:208 (1).
  2. 01:01:408 (4) - Add a new combo (Only if you did the previous suggestion), after that, 01:02:608 (1) - Remove new combo, and then, 01:03:808 (6) - New combo. It's kinda better the change of new combos in this way.
[eldnL's Hard]:
  1. 00:02:608 - End this spinner at 00:03:508, and then, 00:03:808 (x) - Add a circle just in the center of the screen.
  2. 00:13:558 (6) - New combo, Looks good without a "long" combo.
  3. 00:59:458 (6) - Add a clap, and then, 00:59:608 (7) - Remove this clap.
  4. 00:59:908 (1) - Add a clap just in the beginning.
  5. 01:06:658 (2) - Clap?
[Insane]:
  1. 00:56:908 (1,2) - Add a clap?... If you'll do this, add a clap too at the end of this slider: 00:57:508 (1).
  2. 00:59:008 (4) - Finish?
  3. 00:59:308 (5) - Add a clap in the beginning and in the repeat.
  4. 00:59:908 (2) - Clap?
  5. 01:01:108 (5) - ^
  6. 01:01:408 (1) - The same as in the first point... Add a clap in the beginning, repeat and at the end of this slider: 01:01:858 (2).
  7. 01:02:158 (3,5) - Clap
  8. 01:02:608 (6) - Add a clap in the first repeat?
  9. 01:03:208 (7) - Clap?
  10. 01:03:808 (1) - Add a clap in the repeat?
  11. 01:04:708 (2) - Finish. Sounds better than without hitsound... imo lol
  12. 01:06:208 (1) - ^
  13. 01:08:308 (1,2) - Clap?
  14. 01:09:058 (5,6) - ^
_________________

Pereira's diff is well made, so... Good luck with the other difficulties :>
Verdisphena
Good luck with this :3
SHORT MESSAGESHORT MESSAGESHORT MESSAGESHORT MESSAGESHORT MESSAGESHORT MESSAGESHORT MESSAGESHORT MESSAGESHORT MESSAGESHORT MESSAGE
Topic Starter
Makar

Wiinter wrote:

Hiya :)
[Insane]
00:05:008 (x) - ehh.. this is kinda evil, but anyways. add a note there? (and make a jump on it) Too evil D:
00:38:308 (1) - add a clap on the end of it, since all the other sliders like this one have one No because that's not how the music goes
01:03:808 (1) - i predict slider breaks >_< unexpected speed up I agree. Fixed
01:09:808 (2) - ^ -same goes for all the sliders in this section - Eh I like these though D:
01:11:308 (2,3) - stack correctly Because of stack leniency these are stacked while playing
01:11:908 (5,6) - ^ Same ^
01:12:208 (1) - remove new combo? >_< Nah I think it fits
01:12:508 (2) - stack correctly Same as before
01:13:108 (5,6) - ^ Same ^
01:20:908 (2) - ^ Same ^

[Ozzy's Extra]
Only thing is that I think -1 on AR would be better, but well, people normally like fast AR x-x Ignored

And that's all. Hope it's useful~

vivere wrote:

Hi there :>

[Easy]:
  1. 00:59:008 (6) - Start a new combo here. Then, remove this new combo: 01:00:208 (1).
  2. 01:01:408 (4) - Add a new combo (Only if you did the previous suggestion), after that, 01:02:608 (1) - Remove new combo, and then, 01:03:808 (6) - New combo. It's kinda better the change of new combos in this way.
All done

[Insane]:
  1. 00:56:908 (1,2) - Add a clap?... If you'll do this, add a clap too at the end of this slider: 00:57:508 (1).
  2. 00:59:008 (4) - Finish?
  3. 00:59:308 (5) - Add a clap in the beginning and in the repeat.
  4. 00:59:908 (2) - Clap?
  5. 01:01:108 (5) - ^
  6. 01:01:408 (1) - The same as in the first point... Add a clap in the beginning, repeat and at the end of this slider: 01:01:858 (2).
  7. 01:02:158 (3,5) - Clap
  8. 01:02:608 (6) - Add a clap in the first repeat?
  9. 01:03:208 (7) - Clap?
  10. 01:03:808 (1) - Add a clap in the repeat?
  11. 01:04:708 (2) - Finish. Sounds better than without hitsound... imo lol
  12. 01:06:208 (1) - ^
  13. 01:08:308 (1,2) - Clap?
  14. 01:09:058 (5,6) - ^
Some hitsounds fixed. Thanks
_________________

Pereira's diff is well made, so... Good luck with the other difficulties :>
Thanks for the mods

Weezy wrote:

since this is the same mp3 as my version, offset is 200 not 208
*Weezy disappears
I've had some more people check and 208 sounds better :s
HakuNoKaemi

Pereira006 wrote:

Wiinter wrote:

Hiya :)

[Pereira's Normal]
(gonna make this in portuguese since he's from portugual, blablabla)
00:08:008 (3,4,5) - hmm.. isso soa um pouco estranho imo D: não sei se tu vai concordar, maaas eu acho que soaria melhor se tu fizesse assim http://puu.sh/4tWd - aka tirar a repeat do (3), e deixar o 4 e 5 uma tick antes.Corrigido
obrigada
there is something in my mod too for you ... :3

EDIT: Makar, you like sexy or funny comboburst?
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