wmfchris wrote:

[Yuki]
OD+1 since this is quite insane? ok...当时没怎么考虑
00:13:949 (3) - finish? sounds good
00:20:035 (3) - add a whislte here? 1和3开头都加了whistle
01:28:514 (x) - add a note? 再考虑一下
01:59:166 (3) - it looks better when the curvature is smaller, try this 果然舒服多了

184,304,119166,2,0,B|112:224|144:128,1,190,2|2

winber1 wrote:

Yuki YukI (why is the "I" capitalized the second time? is this on purpose?) i don't know why but i keep it now
00:13:296 (1,2) - i don't mind this sort of rhythm, since it follows the drums, but i would space combo 1 and 2 out more so that it's clearer (as in, I actually would like to be able to see the hitcircle of combo 2) fixed
00:34:166 (1,2) - ^ fixed
01:28:622 (4) - move 1/4 tick back. this doesn't sound right imo. as you say,it's better than before (this one 01:25:579 (2,3) - sounds fine tho imo)
02:04:546 (x) - idk if you want to or not, but i like the sound if there is a note here. 1/8...lol

Daigurenhyourinmaru wrote:

Yuki YukI
00:36:992 (5) - 这样怎么样 呃 我就是考虑到spacing才这样摆的
00:41:666 (10,1,2,3) - 为什么要做直呢,,,再来个圆弧吧 XD 我也想但是现在定型不好拉了 还是感谢
01:02:209 (4) - 为了和前面的clap呼应一下,这几个地方加clap [01:02:209] [01:02:427] [01:02:481] [01:02:535] fixed 本来是有的后来不知道怎么回事去掉了?lol
01:12:209 (3,1,4,4,3,5,3,4) - -这个地方 sliderslide的声音出来了不好听 没办法啊 这里用的是默认音效部分
01:34:818 (4) - 第一个hit 加 whistle 嘛其实无所谓了 不过还是加了
02:04:166 (4,5) - 说实话很不喜欢这个结尾 我感觉这是除了空放之外最好的了lol
kiai time 不和其他难度一样 fixed

yangzd88 wrote:

[Yuki萌mapper]
00:03:514 (1,2,3,4,5) - 摆好五边形...? 尽力了,天生图形感不行T_T
00:13:296 (1,2) - 这里用1/8有点操之过急. 好像是有点 deleted
00:20:035 (3,4) - [建议]3改成2折 4改成4折? 00:20:253这里还有一个whistle 改了就没那个音了
01:00:035 (1) - finish? fixed 用了60%的音量 否则根本听不出来
01:20:035 (1) - reverse? 感觉不合适
01:50:905 (4) - 用1/4? 感觉现在的更合适啊
01:56:557 (1,2,3) - spacing..用grid4拖一下 fixed

_Kiva wrote:

萌妹GOOD JOB

1. 01:23:514 - 这里右上的樱花是不是也该消失了（跟之前的人物一样的淡进淡出）或者你是想要月亮出现后，樱花下滑后到下一个露肩和服妹子的那种效果？如果是要这种效果，我觉得你月亮和下面妹子那些的距离太近了，下滑太快，有可能的话加上速度线效果更好
2. 02:05:253 - 卧槽这樱花飘落是掉水果么……我觉得用小片樱花然后用放大效果和渐隐出来效果在樱花附近喷出几片樱花就很不错了

Breeze wrote:

我只是来看看SB的
刚开始樱华月那3个字还真丑啊，不会是菲妹自己写的吧啊喂原MV自帶 我只是截下來用……

【SB】

1. 01:23:514 - 这里右上的樱花是不是也该消失了（跟之前的人物一样的淡进淡出）或者你是想要月亮出现后，樱花下滑后到下一个露肩和服妹子的那种效果？如果是要这种效果，我觉得你月亮和下面妹子那些的距离太近了，下滑太快，有可能的话加上速度线效果更好……沒看懂等你上線我再問好了orz
2. 02:05:253 - 卧槽这樱花飘落是掉水果么……我觉得用小片樱花然后用放大效果和渐隐出来效果在樱花附近喷出几片樱花就很不错了

……其實這個的本意是想應和最後那聲風鈴。而且曲子結束這櫻花也起到一個舒緩視覺(?)的效果(喂

都只是建议
nice map
咦，我不能打星

• 
  OD -1or2.

1. 01:09:601 (1) - Right 1 grid.
2. 01:26:992 (1,2) - Spacing is too wide.
3. 01:34:818 (3,4) - Too narrow. Up (4) 2 grid?
4. 01:35:253 (4) - Add whistle.
5. 01:36:122 (6,1) - Spacing error. Make them farther.

1. 00:17:862 (3) - Add clap.
2. 00:23:079 (4) - ^

• 
  OD +1.

1. 01:34:601 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This formation is actually good but looks like kinda random. Add new combo at (3,6)?

1. 00:26:992 (1) - 1/8 kick slider with 1.0x SV is better than current 1/4 one with 2.0x SV imo.
2. 01:00:905 (1,2,3,4) - ^
3. 01:18:949 (1,2,3,4) - Ifeel these notes don't follow music. Try to change pattern like this?
   
4. 01:33:949 (6) - New combo? Current one is too long.

• 
  Pretty nice mapset!
  There is one thing I can suggest.

1. 02:04:166 (4,5) - I feel something strange at the sound. Try to shorten (4) to 02:04:383, and move (5) to 02:04:492?
   

Suzully wrote:

[Daiguren's Hard]

• 
  OD +1.

1. 01:34:601 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This formation is actually good but looks like kinda random. Add new combo at (3,6)?

Suzully wrote:

Sorry for late mod

[Luka's Easy]

• 
  OD -1or2. Fixed

1. 01:09:601 (1) - Right 1 grid. Fixed
2. 01:26:992 (1,2) - Spacing is too wide. Fixed
3. 01:34:818 (3,4) - Too narrow. Up (4) 2 grid? Fixed
4. 01:35:253 (4) - Add whistle. Fixed,but clap added
5. 01:36:122 (6,1) - Spacing error. Make them farther. Fixed

sherrie__fay wrote:

qinche那個section-pass和section-fail我看不錯 但是中文對外國人來說理解太難了(?
如果你願意我可以把冬上加點白雪花/春上加點粉的櫻花發你 然後隨手改改SB再full sub(?

還有qinche 群裏那件事是我不對 是我說錯話 對不起……你能原諒我麼?o o.

誒?我也不能打星o,o
那這樣
★

Nymph_ wrote:

Daiguren's Hard:
00:13:296 (1) - 这里不是全四分之一拍 前面是六分之一 全用四分之一听起来有些违和 这个我考虑过,但是先1/6再1/4的放note的话实在很难,所以我觉得在难度上面考虑来说就只用的1/4
00:26:122 (1) - 同上
00:34:166 (1) - 同上
01:12:644 (4) - 这个作为过渡考虑下降低音量? 这个SLIDER尾的whistle完全没有必要.fixed
01:13:079 (5) - 这之后的音量70在我看来没必要 保持90就很好fixed
01:23:514 (4) - 这之后的一段要我看来应该有一个清脆的CLAP会更好 背景音的clap声不够大 选一个类似的在这里合一下会更好...（好吧 其实我真心不喜欢现在的CUSTOM CLAP. 我个人认为2个CLAP文件是不是另外一个用比较清脆的更好.开头加了clap
01:49:601 (1) - 背景音已经够乱了 还不如一个转盘转过去好了.. >_> refuse
挺喜欢这个难度的HITSOUND和排列

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from: Wcx19911123's mod queue.

Luka's Easy:
既然是最低难度 那再简单点? OD-2. 嗯还没更新。已经-2了
Nazi一下音效:
00:00:036 (1,2,3) - 开头递减音量第三个15的话我觉得有点太小了... 25我觉得更合适 有点响了。20好了=w=
00:06:992 (1) - 整个曲子开头第一个是50的话 这里试着40音量? 好的
其实我觉得多用C1的whistle或者default soft whistle会更好? 现在的音效我个人认为缺少那种清脆感 似乎有点闷.
改了一下._.


以上全是个人建议 仅供参考. 其实全部无视才是王道
无视才怪._.卖萌自重
☆~

pieguy1372 wrote:

Luka's Easy:

-Some hitsounds seem too quiet, perhaps try 80-100% for the louder parts? Sorry. I prefer to remain.

00:03:514 (5) - New combo? Fixed
00:10:470 (7) - ^ Fixed.
00:29:601 (3) - spacing here is huge o.o perhaps move it closer to (2)? Nope
00:31:992 (5) - spacing here is too close Yes. Moved
00:31:992 (5) - This slider might be a bit confusing for an easy, perhaps change it? Remained
00:44:818 (4) - New combo? Yes
01:15:253 (2) - Too close to (1) Fixed
01:37:427 - Kiai should start here Yes
01:40:905 (7) - New combo Nope
01:47:862 (8) - New combo Yes
01:48:731 (9) - This slider might be a bit confusing for an easy, perhaps change it? Nope
01:58:296 (5) - New combo? Yes

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Daiguren's Hard] ← 这谁 伤心
00:02:209 (1,2,3,4) - to hold the flow , let circles and slider on the same arc is much better ( http://puu.sh/4QjM )done
00:06:992 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/4Qk1 http://puu.sh/4Qk6 no
00:09:383 (6) - delete this note no
00:11:557 (2) - ^ no
00:34:166 (1) - parts of back arrow hidden by 00:33:514 (1) 故意的
01:19:057 (1) - change to circlesdone
01:23:514 - remove clapdone
01:24:818 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/4Qku done
01:26:340 (2,3) - ^ 没看懂
01:33:514 (9,1) - confusing spacing here no
01:43:949 (5) - change to circles no
01:57:427 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/4QkL no
02:00:688 (6) - delete no

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Luka神挂B] 你丫才是挂比
00:08:731 (4) - this is suddenly , newbies will think it is the same as 00:03:949 (2) 还是暂时先留着._.因为这个SV change比较明显而且两个都是距离不大的短slider._.
00:13:949 - 00:19:166 - this pattern should use 0.8x ds , cuz the music is not change at 00:19:166 这bug...Fixed
00:23:949 (5,6) - stack better Fixed
00:26:122 (1,1) - this is too far to paly , also the spinner is short 直接换成spinner了。
00:31:992 (5) - change to 2 sliders is better , like 还是保留原来的
00:46:992 (5) - try this ? 感觉现在这样节奏感更好
00:50:035 (4,1) - change to a repeat slider is better yes u r right
00:59:601 (1) - start at 00:59:383 , end at 01:02:644 Fixed
01:11:340 (4,5,6,7,8) - pentagon better plz Fixed
01:25:253 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^ I like this one in ☆
01:33:079 (5) - this suddenly slow down is confusing Remain. 因为后面的也是这个速度

1. approachcircle.png should be resized to 128x128
2. hitcircle.png, spinner-circle.png and spinner-metre.png are too transparent (also check other elements for opacity)
3. add a spinner-background.png (even if its the default one, but people who use different skins in options will see skins mixing up)
4. add default-1 to default-9 for the hitcircles (just use the numbers you got for the score)
5. please remove the blank part on the right side of score-comma.png, it looks weird in the score atm
6. score-dot.png got a tiny dot next to it (don't know if this was intended, I also don't know if this file is needed at all)
7. Is the go.png needed? The only diff with countdown enabled is [Yuki YukI], though I didn't see the countdown at all

1. remove animation1/1.psd
2. 01:07:862 - SB\mountain2.png and SB\tree.png on top left corner of the screen look a bit weird with the bottom parts cut like that
3. 01:23:514 - SB\story.jpg speeds up with its movement at some point, which doesn't seem intended
4. 01:40:905 - SB\girl.png moves weirdly at the beginning, seems like this was an accident too(I suppose this happened when you moved in the timebar at the bottom with your mouse)

Snowy Dream wrote:

Kiva you are the god.
Ranked!

1. 00:14:818 (2) - Don't stack this on (1).
2. 01:49:601 (3,4,5) - Maybe space these out instead.

1. 00:29:601 (2) - Space this closer to 1 (This is actually an error)
2. 00:43:514 (3) - Place this further from (1) so that they won't overlap
3. 00:53:949 (3) - I don't think linear sliders look very good in this map, Also I don't like how the end overlaps with 00:56:122 (2) -
   maybe change the shape of 00:17:862 (1) - and 00:24:818 (6) - as well

1. 00:35:253 (7) - This is a bit too close to (6)

1. 01:19:057 (1,2) - Place these closer to eachother (Distance snap 0.60?)
2. 01:34:601 (1) - This feels weird here because it's too close to the previous beat.
3. 01:46:122 (7,8,1) - Maybe get rid of the sudden and random jumps between the notes here.

1. 00:10:905 (1) - This slider is hidden by slider(6)
2. 00:26:992 (9) - Too far from (8) make the spacing consistent.
3. 01:28:079 (1,2,3,4) - Patterns like these are not recommended, I suggest you to use normal distance snap here. It's a bit confusing and flow-killing.
4. 01:34:818 (2) - Give this a new combo to make it easier to read as a speed up
5. 01:36:992 (9) - Same here

1. 01:09:818 (2) - This is spaced a bit too far from (1) and to (3)
2. 02:04:166 (4,5) - Can you remap this part? It feels a bit weird >_<