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Yumeko Yuki

Megurine Luka wrote:

[Yuki YukI]
combo color的紫色换一下吧XD。作为只有两个combo color 来说选这个有点深了[?]~我喜欢桃红色~桃红色~【轰】 combo color和maximum统一了
Gumi神图._.什么都不想动
ps.我记得新ranking规定里kiai time不能超过1min。[是不是有这一条?只是提一下打个酱油吐个槽] 我的也没超过1min吧 :o :o
01:52:209 [3] 这个slider感觉还是从上往下好._. 转了下后面那个
改了一些小东东 :)
还有kiai time我感觉原来的那个好点啊= =(我这个没改

Download: AKITO - Sakura Kagetsu (_Kiva) [Yuki YukI].osu
Lan wings
star :)

顺便求问怎么补tags
Daiguren

Lan wings wrote:

star :)

顺便求问怎么补tags
Song setup - general - tags
然后加你要加的东西
Megurine Luka

Yumeko Yuki wrote:

改了一些小东东 :)
还有kiai time我感觉原来的那个好点啊= =(我这个没改
Gumi抱大腿~> <
阿啦关于Kiai time我只是吐槽一下而已._.噗啦啦~>3<
Lan wings

Daigurenhyourinmaru wrote:

Lan wings wrote:

star :)

顺便求问怎么补tags
Song setup - general - tags
然后加你要加的东西

原来是我只弄了一个难度的tag``怪不得传上去不行``谢谢了
wmfchris
[general]
... the preview time is different in [Taiko] and [Yuki].

Tag:
Megurine Luka Daigurenhyourinmaru Snowy Dream Yumeko Yuki Alace
two spaces between "Dream" and "Yumeko", this is not a problem but fix this if you've got time :3~

[Pangpang's Taiko]

Key -
d = don = red = no hitsound
k = kat = blue = whistle / clap
D/K = big notes = finish

00:08:296 - d [becoz the melody's got lower?]
[Maybe you can slow down the intro part?]
01:50:470 - k ddk d k?
02:05:253 - D?

No problem for me, just some thoughts for section 0:13 ~ 0:27, there're quite a number of dk dk / kd kd, imo kd dk might suits the music as well. Just have a try?

[Maximum]
00:04:166 (2) - down 1 lv4 grid
00:13:079 (4) - this finish might be a bit loud and scared me >///<
00:27:862 (2) - finish here?
00:46:775 (5) - down + right 1 lv4 grid -> symmetrical with (3)
01:03:514 (5,6) - try stacking ending of (5) and beginning of (6)? BTW it looks better if (5) does not overlap with (4)~
01:11:340 (11) - soft finish?
01:17:209 (1) - remove NC like before?
01:50:305 (8,9) - make them symmetrical along the central y-axis
02:00:035 (5) - NC like the arrangement at the beginning?

lol green wall~

[Yuki]
OD+1 since this is quite insane?
00:13:949 (3) - finish?
00:20:035 (3) - add a whislte here?
01:28:514 (x) - add a note?
01:59:166 (3) - it looks better when the curvature is smaller, try this
184,304,119166,2,0,B|112:224|144:128,1,190,2|2

I like the way you put sounding in 1/8s lol

[Hard]
(make it unique with other diffs, try slider tick 1?)
00:04:818 (5) - up 1 grid so that it forms a triangle?
00:08:296 (3) - 5% this one as you've done in 0:01~
00:08:949 (4) - NC here?
00:13:294 (1) - 1 grid right+down so that (1,2,3,4) form a rhombus?
00:32:209 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - this overlaps too much with each other which is quite confusing to me.
01:03:949 (2) - left 1 grid fits better with (1,3)~
01:52:644 (1,2) - remove whistle~
02:03:079 (3,4) - (3) down 1 grid, (4) left 1 grid so that (1,2,3,4) forms a square, fix the coming spacing as well

[Snowy Dream]
OD+2? ._.
delete the duplicated timeline 48622
00:25:253 (3) - NC?
01:11:340 (3) - whistle/ finish
01:52:970 (x) - the ending part can be softer

a completely different hitsounding style from the previous diff, but it's nice~

[Luka's Easy]
duplicated time lines 59601, 74166
D: .... The difficulty settings in [Easy] is harder than [Normal]... fix it plz.

00:00:905 (3) - right 1 grid?
00:06:992 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing~
00:33:079 (5) - put a different sounding at the end?
00:48:731 (1,2,3) - spacing
01:13:079 (8) - left 1 grid
01:40:035 (5,6,7) - spacing
01:40:905 (7,8) - this sudden jump is not considered in easy.

- try to complete the whole song?
- Make sure you check with AI mod for some obvious spacing problem
- overall not very easy www
- for a 0.5x 1/2 reversed slider, the reverse arrow overlaps too much with the original circle, and it does not look good to me. Change it back to 1.0x or use other pattern?

~ (exhausted)

star
Daiguren

wmfchris wrote:

[Hard]
(make it unique with other diffs, try slider tick 1?) fixed
00:04:818 (5) - up 1 grid so that it forms a triangle? fixed
00:08:296 (3) - 5% this one as you've done in 0:01~ fixed
00:08:949 (4) - NC here? NO
00:13:294 (1) - 1 grid right+down so that (1,2,3,4) form a rhombus? fixed
00:32:209 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - this overlaps too much with each other which is quite confusing to me.
01:03:949 (2) - left 1 grid fits better with (1,3)~ fixed
01:52:644 (1,2) - remove whistle~ fixed
02:03:079 (3,4) - (3) down 1 grid, (4) left 1 grid so that (1,2,3,4) forms a square, fix the coming spacing as well fixed

star
thx for mod

Download: AKITO - Sakura Kagetsu (_Kiva) [Daiguren's Hard].osu
Snowy Dream
我感觉这个easy比我normal还难._.

[Snowy]
kiva乃帮我改下 这里
02:00:905 (3) - 这个回转的箭头给我消音了._.


[Daiguren's Hard]
其实这就是个insane....
AR+1
00:13:296 (1) - 不觉得这个转的更快点好嘛 >.> 把时间线改成0.75x
00:33:514 (1,2,3) - 这3个点跳的突然太大 缩小距离
00:40:035 (1) - 速度太慢...改为0.75x
00:52:862 (1) - spacing
00:54:818 (x) - 加note?
01:07:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - stress! (我试过打了2次才FC...这真的是hard?骗人的吧?._.)
01:47:862 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 再缩小些距离 ...

[Yuki YukI]
跳过
太神了..

[Maximum]
00:00:470 (2) - 乃的节操呢._. 上来就坑爹的spacing
00:01:340 (5) - ^
以上随便改不改..
00:21:340 (1) - 的确有些看不见~~根据新的ranking rule请更换颜色
00:26:122 (5) - newcombo
00:26:231 (1) - delete newcombo
00:26:992 (1) - 这太快了 慢点好么._. (呆古人太慢你太快...)
00:43:079 (8) - 根据新的ranking rule 看不见
00:49:383 (6,7,8) - 根据新的ranking rule 完全看不见
01:00:905 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 鬼畜mapper乃就不能改0.75x的速度嘛。。
01:14:383 (9) - .-.这个该怎么说呢
01:23:949 (3) - spacing
后面很好嗯嗯嗯
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神map~ 神mappers
Star~☆
我记得我star过了
Daiguren

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Daiguren's Hard]
其实这就是个insane.... 真心做的是hard =.=
AR+1
00:13:296 (1) - 不觉得这个转的更快点好嘛 >.> 把时间线改成0.75x 1.0x
00:33:514 (1,2,3) - 这3个点跳的突然太大 缩小距离 fixed
00:40:035 (1) - 速度太慢...改为0.75xfixed
00:52:862 (1) - spacing no spacing mistake here =,=
00:54:818 (x) - 加note? no
01:07:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - stress! (我试过打了2次才FC...这真的是hard?骗人的吧?._.) 我能1pc FC的图一定不是insane以上的
01:47:862 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 再缩小些距离 ... fixed
thx for mod

Download: AKITO - Sakura Kagetsu (_Kiva) [Daiguren's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
_Kiva
applied.
辛苦了.
winber1
General

--kiai times aren't all the same

Maximum

00:00:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - to be honest, I don't think it fits. (i also messed up when i first played it lol >_> i wasn't expecting it. It's obvious after the first try though)
00:09:601 (6,7) - you could lower stack leniency a bit so that this doesn't stack.. this looks weir when stacked imo.
00:52:209 (5,6) - i didn't expect this actually.
01:00:905 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - holy... this was EXTREMELY unexpected for me ._. The above issues i mentioned I don't totally disagee with, but this, I seriously completely disagree with. sorry :(
01:02:318 (x) - add a note here to continue the stream. The drums are still playing the stream, so i would conitnue it until it stops
01:12:644 (5,6) - not perfectly stacked

Yuki YukI (why is the "I" capitalized the second time? is this on purpose?)

00:13:296 (1,2) - i don't mind this sort of rhythm, since it follows the drums, but i would space combo 1 and 2 out more so that it's clearer (as in, I actually would like to be able to see the hitcircle of combo 2)
00:34:166 (1,2) - ^
01:28:622 (4) - move 1/4 tick back. this doesn't sound right imo. (this one 01:25:579 (2,3) - sounds fine tho imo)
02:04:546 (x) - idk if you want to or not, but i like the sound if there is a note here.

Daiguren

00:34:709 (x) - add a note?
01:07:427 (2,3,4,5,6) - omg... could you make a better star? D:
01:37:209 (x) - add note.
01:49:601 (1) - what's the point of decreasing slider velocity? why not just keep it the same o_o this just looks weird imo. unless it was 1/8 long reverse3 slider..
01:51:775 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - make symmetrical about hte y-axis

Snowy


00:17:862 (3) - add clap
00:23:079 (4) - add note with clap (it seems like you did this on purpose, but it sounds weird imo)
00:24:818 (3) - ^
00:25:688 (4) - add clap
00:37:862 (2) - add clap
00:49:166 (2,3) - unstack?

fine other that :3


Luka


00:20:035 (4,5) - i wouldn't increase spacing here. if you want to increase spacing. you can at 00:20:905 (1) - since it's the same phrase before. Still, since it's an easy diff, I am still against this spacing increase.
00:23:949 (5,6) - spacing.
00:29:166 (2,3) - you really shouldn't incrase spacing..
00:30:905 (4,5) - space this alittle furthr away from combo 4?
00:38:296 (4,5) - move closer together
00:42:644 (2) - This SV change is a little random imo, and can mess up beginners.
00:45:253 (5,6) - yeah i know this is probably readable, but i still want the spacing to be constant lol >_>
00:46:992 (8) - these SV changes are fine in hard or insane, but i realyl don't like using them in an easy.
00:48:731 (1,2,3) - this looks kinda weird since they aren't spaced evenly..
00:50:035 (4,1) - don't use this SV...
00:51:775 (4,2,3) - ^
01:14:166 (1,2) - spacing
01:16:122 (x) - add note?
01:16:992 (x) - ^
01:33:079 (5) - >_> don't use this SV change plz.
01:36:122 (6,1) - spacing
01:37:427 (1,2) - why did you use another spacing increase lol
01:40:905 (7,8) - don't use this huge jump for easy....
01:44:383 (1) - what happened here? did you use some sort of combo transformation? ._. remove the combo and then add it again so that the combos colors aren't exactly the same

My only problem is with the Easy difficulty, but it shouldn't be hard fix.

Nice map! :3

and star~~
Daiguren

winber1 wrote:

Daiguren

00:34:709 (x) - add a note? NO
01:07:427 (2,3,4,5,6) - omg... could you make a better star? D: fixed about huge spacing
01:37:209 (x) - add note. done
01:49:601 (1) - what's the point of decreasing slider velocity? why not just keep it the same o_o this just looks weird imo. unless it was 1/8 long reverse3 slider.. fixed
01:51:775 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - make symmetrical about hte y-xisfixed

thx for mod

Download: AKITO - Sakura Kagetsu (_Kiva) [Daiguren's Hard].osu
Megurine Luka
Fixed some of them

如果觉得真的太难的话我就剪掉一部分SV变化好了。但是那些我真的不是很想做改动。毕竟本身这首歌的slider velocity和BPM就不是很高因此以新手的反应0.5和1.0不会相差太大._.【何况我现在所见到的新手都是三四星起跳..打EASY的大多也是加Mod的...情何以堪

:cry: 我也只是想给新手们稍稍加一点难度而已._. :o 本来还加了几个连续的slider都被我切掉了的说

spacing的难度方面我刚才又看了一遍基本已经差不多了._.如果还有遗漏的麻烦再次指证

其实私心真的觉得Normal有点简单了。如果不拿我的Easy做比较单就Normal和hard讲我觉得这个难度跨度有点微大了些._.就我个人而言两次打Normal都是SS而Hard经常会路人断...

Download: AKITO - Sakura Kagetsu (_Kiva) [Luka's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
_Kiva
fixing in progress and have a discussion about some changes.
@Luka:
我是比較贊同你的觀點的 所以我也會和SNOWY說關於增加一點難度的問題
嘛 我還會和別人再討論一下哪些地方改了會更好的.

Thanks for mod.
EDIT 1:
FIXED KIAI FOR ALL DIFF
Daiguren
嘛~闲来无事,赶来mod =,=

Luka's Easy
首先呢,我不建议EZ上用slider变速,这样新手会不知所措 0.0
00:03:079 (5) - 提前1/2拍会比较好点
00:06:992 (1) - 声音太大 40%就好
00:13:949 (1,2) - EZ不建议有slider加circle的遮盖
00:31:992 (5) - 去掉slider上whistle的声音
00:44:818 (4) - 声音太大.用55%或者50%
00:34:818 (1) - 要么去掉第一个hit的 whistle ,要么用SC2
01:14:166 (1,2) - 这是EZ = =
01:17:427 (4,5) - ^
01:19:166 (1,2) - ^ 嘛 这个最严重了
01:24:818 (3) - 距离
01:37:427 (1) - kiai从这里开始

还有结束时间和其他难度不一样,,,有的B/Mat很忌讳,,,所以以防万一,,,把后面那段做了

Snowy
开始时间不一样,,,原因和EZ一样,,

00:17:862 (3) - clap
00:20:905 (1) - 第一个hit 加finish
00:25:253 (3) - 最后一个hit加clap

整体感觉不错 : D

Yuki YukI
00:36:992 (5) - 这样怎么样
00:41:666 (10,1,2,3) - 为什么要做直呢,,,再来个圆弧吧 XD
01:02:209 (4) - 为了和前面的clap呼应一下,这几个地方加clap [01:02:209] [01:02:427] [01:02:481] [01:02:535]
01:12:209 (3,1,4,4,3,5,3,4) - -这个地方 sliderslide的声音出来了不好听
01:34:818 (4) - 第一个hit 加 whistle
02:04:166 (4,5) - 说实话很不喜欢这个结尾

kiai time 不和其他难度一样

Maximum
00:11:340 (2) - 第一个hit加 SC2-W
00:20:470 (10) - 何不再来一发finish
01:02:209 (11,12,1) - 距离最好做开一点..不然容易抢拍
01:08:296 (9) - 这样怎么样 ↓ (只是节奏)
不同的距离用得太多,整体看起来有点乱,,,


恩,,差不多这些了
Alace

wmfchris wrote:

[Pangpang's Taiko]

Key -
d = don = red = no hitsound
k = kat = blue = whistle / clap
D/K = big notes = finish

00:08:296 - d [becoz the melody's got lower?]
[Maybe you can slow down the intro part?]
01:50:470 - k ddk d k?
02:05:253 - D?

No problem for me, just some thoughts for section 0:13 ~ 0:27, there're quite a number of dk dk / kd kd, imo kd dk might suits the music as well. Just have a try?
checked your mod post, i will keep all my stuffs
Curisu
mod
[Luka]
00:02:644 - finish?
00:09:601 (5) - ^
00:42:644 (2) - 延后1/2?
00:46:992 (8) - 不要1/2速..
01:26:992 (8,1) - 交换new combo
01:31:340 (2) - spacing

[雪梦]
00:17:862 (3) - clap,no fin.
00:29:166 (1,2) - 节奏用ooo o o吧(留意BGM
00:37:862 - clap
00:47:862 - finish?
01:15:905 - [建议]clap?
01:19:601 - finish突然了 可以vol-15.
01:33:514 (6) - 真的能rank吗...(叹一口气

[呆古人]
你的combo color....
00:11:775 (3) -
00:55:253 (1,2,3,4,5) - 无grid微曲线摆列?这排列蛋疼..
00:56:992 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:01:122 (1) - 提前并延长1/4
01:30:470 (6,1) - 交换new combo
01:35:688 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这里用渐大音量N-normal铺垫一下
01:50:470~01:51:340 - 用1/8
02:00:688 (6) - del?
02:03:296 (4) - ^

[鬼畜始祖的太鼓]
00:00:036 (1) - d?
00:03:514 (10) - ^
00:06:992 (21) - ^
00:10:470 (31) - ^
00:18:079 (62,63,64,65,66) - oxoxo?
01:15:470 (29,30,31) - xxo?
01:50:035 (45,46,47,48) - xxxo?

[Yuki萌mapper]
00:03:514 (1,2,3,4,5) - 摆好五边形...?
00:13:296 (1,2) - 这里用1/8有点操之过急.
00:20:035 (3,4) - [建议]3改成2折 4改成4折?
01:00:035 (1) - finish?
01:20:035 (1) - reverse?
01:50:905 (4) - 用1/4?
01:56:557 (1,2,3) - spacing..用grid4拖一下

[MX]
00:13:296 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 用N-normal明显分层啊
01:00:905 (5,6,7,8,9) - eggpain!渐增sv啊![stress]
01:09:057 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同理 N-normal
01:37:970 - +circle? 后面缺失部分同
01:47:427 (7) - 误导人民群众的spacing
01:50:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 不降一下spacing..

lol
Daiguren

yangzd88 wrote:

[呆古人]
你的combo color.... fixed
00:11:775 (3) - ATTACH[1.jpg]fixed
00:55:253 (1,2,3,4,5) - 无grid微曲线摆列?这排列蛋疼..这是放在grid上的 LV3 ,距离是0.5x
00:56:992 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:01:122 (1) - 提前并延长1/4 fixed
01:30:470 (6,1) - 交换new combofixed
01:35:688 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这里用渐大音量N-normal铺垫一下NO
01:50:470~01:51:340 - 用1/8NO
02:00:688 (6) - del?这里突然中断回很奇怪
02:03:296 (4) - ^
thx for mod

Download: AKITO - Sakura Kagetsu (_Kiva) [Daiguren's Hard].osu
Megurine Luka
Fixed All :)
spacing那里感谢._.我recheck的时候疏忽了TAT。

Download: AKITO - Sakura Kagetsu (_Kiva) [Luka's Easy].osu
Yumeko Yuki
最近有点忙诶= =
都堆这么多了啊 :o

blue=accept
red=refuse

wmfchris wrote:

[Yuki]
OD+1 since this is quite insane? ok...当时没怎么考虑
00:13:949 (3) - finish? sounds good
00:20:035 (3) - add a whislte here? 1和3开头都加了whistle
01:28:514 (x) - add a note? 再考虑一下
01:59:166 (3) - it looks better when the curvature is smaller, try this 果然舒服多了
184,304,119166,2,0,B|112:224|144:128,1,190,2|2

winber1 wrote:

Yuki YukI (why is the "I" capitalized the second time? is this on purpose?) i don't know why but i keep it now
00:13:296 (1,2) - i don't mind this sort of rhythm, since it follows the drums, but i would space combo 1 and 2 out more so that it's clearer (as in, I actually would like to be able to see the hitcircle of combo 2) fixed
00:34:166 (1,2) - ^ fixed
01:28:622 (4) - move 1/4 tick back. this doesn't sound right imo. as you say,it's better than before (this one 01:25:579 (2,3) - sounds fine tho imo)
02:04:546 (x) - idk if you want to or not, but i like the sound if there is a note here. 1/8...lol

Daigurenhyourinmaru wrote:

Yuki YukI
00:36:992 (5) - 这样怎么样 呃 我就是考虑到spacing才这样摆的 :o
00:41:666 (10,1,2,3) - 为什么要做直呢,,,再来个圆弧吧 XD 我也想但是现在定型不好拉了 还是感谢 :)
01:02:209 (4) - 为了和前面的clap呼应一下,这几个地方加clap [01:02:209] [01:02:427] [01:02:481] [01:02:535] fixed 本来是有的后来不知道怎么回事去掉了?lol
01:12:209 (3,1,4,4,3,5,3,4) - -这个地方 sliderslide的声音出来了不好听 没办法啊 :o 这里用的是默认音效部分
01:34:818 (4) - 第一个hit 加 whistle 嘛其实无所谓了 不过还是加了
02:04:166 (4,5) - 说实话很不喜欢这个结尾 我感觉这是除了空放之外最好的了lol
kiai time 不和其他难度一样 fixed

yangzd88 wrote:

[Yuki萌mapper]
00:03:514 (1,2,3,4,5) - 摆好五边形...? 尽力了,天生图形感不行T_T
00:13:296 (1,2) - 这里用1/8有点操之过急. 好像是有点 deleted
00:20:035 (3,4) - [建议]3改成2折 4改成4折? 00:20:253这里还有一个whistle 改了就没那个音了
01:00:035 (1) - finish? fixed 用了60%的音量 否则根本听不出来
01:20:035 (1) - reverse? 感觉不合适
01:50:905 (4) - 用1/4? 感觉现在的更合适啊
01:56:557 (1,2,3) - spacing..用grid4拖一下 fixed
thx for your mod <3

Download: AKITO - Sakura Kagetsu (_Kiva) [Yuki YukI].osu
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_Kiva
萌妹GOOD JOB
Curisu

_Kiva wrote:

萌妹GOOD JOB
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Megurine Luka
重新看的时候发现SV被改掉了

重新fix了下

Download: AKITO - Sakura Kagetsu (_Kiva) [Luka's Easy].osu
Nymph
:|
NatsumeRin
[hahaha]
Takos
sounds good :)
Suzully
:)
Daiguren
我改了几个slider的样子 =,=


Download: AKITO - Sakura Kagetsu (_Kiva) [Daiguren's Hard].osu

where is SB?
Cyril Scarlet
:oops:
Hexagram Matrix
:)
YaMaO04
:) :) :)       
            
      
Ashinie
:) :) :)
噗!message短了T T
咦怎么还是短了
到底要打多长T T
iceey-o-
支持我家露卡卡卡ovo! 星星一个星星.....kira(<ゝω·)☆
Megurine Luka
菲姐神SB :)


nandaoyouyaoshaozishu?
Breeze
我只是来看看SB的
刚开始樱华月那3个字还真丑啊,不会是菲妹自己写的吧啊喂

【SB】
  1. 01:23:514 - 这里右上的樱花是不是也该消失了(跟之前的人物一样的淡进淡出)或者你是想要月亮出现后,樱花下滑后到下一个露肩和服妹子的那种效果?如果是要这种效果,我觉得你月亮和下面妹子那些的距离太近了,下滑太快,有可能的话加上速度线效果更好
  2. 02:05:253 - 卧槽这樱花飘落是掉水果么……我觉得用小片樱花然后用放大效果和渐隐出来效果在樱花附近喷出几片樱花就很不错了
都只是建议
nice map
咦,我不能打星
qinche
随便翻map的时候想起来……我自己用的section-pass和fail应该很合这张图……



Sandpig
音效选的都没有问题,两个微调:

http://puu.sh/4rVK

soft-hitfinish2感觉在有的地方有些吵,尤其是和原曲里相似音效重叠的地方,因为原曲的音效是偏后的,你用的是偏前的,叠加在一起感觉特别满。这个可以改wav文件音量也可以在图里改。(图里面改好一点)

主要看了下Yuki Yuki和Maximum的音效

Yuki Yuki

前12秒的前奏部分,音量可以低一点,而且个人认为whistle太多,显吵。finish音量降低,做出一点若有若无的感觉,不要刻意去强调。

00:25:253 (3) - finish有点吵我感觉可以加到1上
00:26:992 这个串,我感觉1/8的往返slider只要一个就好了,从00:27:427到00:27:862,前边都改成1/4
00:34:166 (1) - 音量减到30%
00:34:818 (1) - 减音量

00:40:035 (3) - 这个不是音效问题我感觉这个slider减速太突然了,影响流畅性。

00:41:883 (1,2,3) - 长串收在白线上好一点,如果这里要用白线开始的三连可以试试换成slider

00:48:731 这里开始的一段中的finish音量太大了(在原曲已经有类似音效的地方下音效减小音量效果比较好)
01:12:644 同上这里也是音量显大其它地方自己看着改改吧

01:12:209 去掉whistle

01:16:122 这个原曲里就有两个类似finish音效的地方,可以试试一个加一个不加,或者两个位置调出很大的音量差别,有时候会有奇效\:D/
01:30:035 同上

01:22:862 (1) - 音量40%

01:25:905 - 加whistle

01:49:601 1/8太多,按照前面的方法只在最后用一个长一些的1/8,其它改成1/4(可以把前几个换成1/4slider,或者整个串里穿插着用一点slider进去)

最后一段和一开始一样减少一点whistle,音量适当减小。


Maximum

00:38:296 (1) - 感觉不自然的减速

00:17:862 (4,5,6,7,8) - 我感觉whistle这种音效作为点缀,应该下得均匀一下,突然有一段没有感觉音效一下就弱下去了。

00:48:731 后面加finish的地方音量有点大。

其它可以参考下yuki里说的……感觉这个diff的音效和Yuki Yuki有差距,尤其是whistle的运用。clap在有些地方也感觉时有时无(好像是串里没有,其实没必要刻意去掉),所以音效总体显飘,不太稳。


总体不错,star
sherrie__fay

Breeze wrote:

我只是来看看SB的
刚开始樱华月那3个字还真丑啊,不会是菲妹自己写的吧啊喂原MV自帶 我只是截下來用……

【SB】
  1. 01:23:514 - 这里右上的樱花是不是也该消失了(跟之前的人物一样的淡进淡出)或者你是想要月亮出现后,樱花下滑后到下一个露肩和服妹子的那种效果?如果是要这种效果,我觉得你月亮和下面妹子那些的距离太近了,下滑太快,有可能的话加上速度线效果更好……沒看懂等你上線我再問好了orz
  2. 02:05:253 - 卧槽这樱花飘落是掉水果么……我觉得用小片樱花然后用放大效果和渐隐出来效果在樱花附近喷出几片樱花就很不错了
……其實這個的本意是想應和最後那聲風鈴。而且曲子結束這櫻花也起到一個舒緩視覺(?)的效果(喂

都只是建议
nice map
咦,我不能打星
--
qinche那個section-pass和section-fail我看不錯 但是中文對外國人來說理解太難了(?
如果你願意我可以把冬上加點白雪花/春上加點粉的櫻花發你 然後隨手改改SB再full sub(?

還有qinche 群裏那件事是我不對 是我說錯話 對不起……你能原諒我麼?o o.

誒?我也不能打星o,o
那這樣
Megurine Luka
OAO

whistle音换掉了还是怎么的._.突然感觉我的diff whistle音好奇怪
Sandpig
whistle有两个地方用用法还不一样, 我调了调觉得怎么也不爽,音高不能两全。要不你就用回以前的
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