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Hi:) here's my mod;))
Fernando:
I've found nothing:)
Roberto:
Hmm,, need to work more on hitsounds?? use the same normal custom clap as in Fernando?:)) and maybe try to keep the pattern what I wrote here?? It's taking time to write all claps places so I hope You'll understand what I mean
00:33:424 (3) add clap?
00:34:030 (4) add finish?
00:34:637 (5) add clap?
00:38:273 (3) ^
00:39:485 (1) ^
00:40:697 (4) ^
00:41:909 (1) ^
00:43:121 (4) ^
I think in chorus would be nice this pattern:
01:13:121 (2) add clap on beginning and on the end of slider?
01:14:333 (5,1) add clap?
01:16:758 (4,5) ^
01:17:970 (2) add clap on beginning and on the end of slider?
01:19:182 (5) ^
01:21:606 (3,4) add clap on note (3) and add a clap on the beginning of slider (4)?
01:22:818 (5) add clap on the beginning and in the middle of slider?
01:24:030 (2,3) add clap?
01:26:455 (1,2) ^
01:27:667 (4,5) ^
01:28:879 (7) ^
01:31:303 (10,11) add a clap on note (10) and add clap on the beginning of slider (11)?
01:36:455 (1) and from this notes would be ok the first pattern? clap?
01:37:061 (2) add a clap on the end of slider?
01:38:879 (4) ^
01:40:091 add clap?
01:41:303 ^
01:41:909 (1) add clap on the end?
01:43:121 (2) ^
01:44:940 (3) add clap in the middle of slider?
01:46:152 (1) add clap on the beginning of slider?
01:47:364 (2) add clap on the end?
01:48:576 (4) ^
01:49:788 add clap?
01:51:000 ^
Try to keep the first patten in next verse and the second pattern in chorus???
00:44:940 too much distance between (3) and (4)00:45:546?
00:47:061 too low distance between (3) and (1)00:47:970?
00:55:243 (4,1,2,3) too low distance?
00:58:879 (1,2,3,4 ,5) take them together 1 grid down?
01:37:061 (2) 1 grid right?
01:38:273 (4,5,6) 1 grid right?
01:43:121 (2,3) too low distance between them?
01:51:303 add here a note?
02:01:909 (3,4) too much distance between them?
02:14:637 (5,6,1) too low distance?
02:47:970 (1,2,3,4,5) too low distance?
02:49:182 (5,1) low distance?
02:56:758 (1,2) ^
03:03:728 (3,4) too much distance?
03:34:637 (5) 1 grid left?
03:35:849 (2,3) too much distance?
03:44:940 (7,8) too low distance?
Alejandro:
01:41:606 - 01:51:000maybe map this part better?
hmmm.. I don't understand the jumps here
but, I'm not so good at osu! standard yet to play an Insane so I won't tell anything about jumps )
The best pattern hitsounds thought is on Fernando diff
Here's a star!
And remember, it's just my suggetsions!:))
Good luck!:)
Fernando:
I've found nothing:)
Roberto:
Hmm,, need to work more on hitsounds?? use the same normal custom clap as in Fernando?:)) and maybe try to keep the pattern what I wrote here?? It's taking time to write all claps places so I hope You'll understand what I mean
00:33:424 (3) add clap?
00:34:030 (4) add finish?
00:34:637 (5) add clap?
00:38:273 (3) ^
00:39:485 (1) ^
00:40:697 (4) ^
00:41:909 (1) ^
00:43:121 (4) ^
I think in chorus would be nice this pattern:
01:13:121 (2) add clap on beginning and on the end of slider?
01:14:333 (5,1) add clap?
01:16:758 (4,5) ^
01:17:970 (2) add clap on beginning and on the end of slider?
01:19:182 (5) ^
01:21:606 (3,4) add clap on note (3) and add a clap on the beginning of slider (4)?
01:22:818 (5) add clap on the beginning and in the middle of slider?
01:24:030 (2,3) add clap?
01:26:455 (1,2) ^
01:27:667 (4,5) ^
01:28:879 (7) ^
01:31:303 (10,11) add a clap on note (10) and add clap on the beginning of slider (11)?
01:36:455 (1) and from this notes would be ok the first pattern? clap?
01:37:061 (2) add a clap on the end of slider?
01:38:879 (4) ^
01:40:091 add clap?
01:41:303 ^
01:41:909 (1) add clap on the end?
01:43:121 (2) ^
01:44:940 (3) add clap in the middle of slider?
01:46:152 (1) add clap on the beginning of slider?
01:47:364 (2) add clap on the end?
01:48:576 (4) ^
01:49:788 add clap?
01:51:000 ^
Try to keep the first patten in next verse and the second pattern in chorus???
00:44:940 too much distance between (3) and (4)00:45:546?
00:47:061 too low distance between (3) and (1)00:47:970?
00:55:243 (4,1,2,3) too low distance?
00:58:879 (1,2,3,4 ,5) take them together 1 grid down?
01:37:061 (2) 1 grid right?
01:38:273 (4,5,6) 1 grid right?
01:43:121 (2,3) too low distance between them?
01:51:303 add here a note?
02:01:909 (3,4) too much distance between them?
02:14:637 (5,6,1) too low distance?
02:47:970 (1,2,3,4,5) too low distance?
02:49:182 (5,1) low distance?
02:56:758 (1,2) ^
03:03:728 (3,4) too much distance?
03:34:637 (5) 1 grid left?
03:35:849 (2,3) too much distance?
03:44:940 (7,8) too low distance?
Alejandro:
01:41:606 - 01:51:000maybe map this part better?
hmmm.. I don't understand the jumps here
but, I'm not so good at osu! standard yet to play an Insane so I won't tell anything about jumps )The best pattern hitsounds thought is on Fernando diff
Here's a star!
And remember, it's just my suggetsions!:))
Good luck!:)
Hi ~
Here is my taiko mod ~
Mod request by HellDawn
Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only
[Taikojandro]
The BPM change in 02:20:697 is quite misleading and players are likely to miss. Change the x0.75 timing line from 140697 to 141000 ?
The map is OK overall ~
Rating : 8/10
Star and good luck ~
No need to kds this post ~
Here is my taiko mod ~
Mod request by HellDawn
Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only
[Taikojandro]
The BPM change in 02:20:697 is quite misleading and players are likely to miss. Change the x0.75 timing line from 140697 to 141000 ?
Suggested patterns
Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~
00:47:970 - ( 21 ~ 24 ) Change to o o o o o ? ( Add the last note also )
00:59:182 - ( 35 ) Red note ?
01:52:818 - ( 6 ) ^
02:06:152 - ( 25 ) ^
02:07:364 - ( 30 ) ^
03:14:940 - ( 25 ~ 26 ) Change to o o ?
03:23:121 - ( 61 ~ 62 ) Change to o o ?
00:47:970 - ( 21 ~ 24 ) Change to o o o o o ? ( Add the last note also )
00:59:182 - ( 35 ) Red note ?
01:52:818 - ( 6 ) ^
02:06:152 - ( 25 ) ^
02:07:364 - ( 30 ) ^
03:14:940 - ( 25 ~ 26 ) Change to o o ?
03:23:121 - ( 61 ~ 62 ) Change to o o ?
The map is OK overall ~
Rating : 8/10
Star and good luck ~
No need to kds this post ~
Fixed:
- BPM at 02:20:697
- 00:59:182 - ( 35 ) Red note ?
- 01:52:818 - ( 6 ) ^
- 02:06:152 - ( 25 ) ^
- 02:07:364 - ( 30 ) ^
thank you aabc for you mod
Download: Lady GaGa - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Taikojandro].osu
- BPM at 02:20:697
- 00:59:182 - ( 35 ) Red note ?
- 01:52:818 - ( 6 ) ^
- 02:06:152 - ( 25 ) ^
- 02:07:364 - ( 30 ) ^
thank you aabc for you mod
Download: Lady GaGa - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Taikojandro].osu
Gott, nenn es doch einfach ,,Dunskin's Taiko Oni". Man weis gar nicht was das für ein Schwirigkeitsgrad ist.
Belated 6th request from mod queue.
[General]
- (Very minor issue) System asks for save after resnapping all notes.
- Some nice whistle pattern during kiai time would be nice. Currently they're only used sparingly.
[Fernando]
- 00:51:606 - Felt like missing something here, no?
- 01:37:061 (1,2,3,4) and similar beat patterns, particularly repeating slider (1) and (3) - Don't think this is a suitable pattern for a Easy, two repeating sliders with different repeating beats. Not really against it if it's a Normal though.
[Roberto]
- Why this difficulty ends much earlier compared to others? D:
- 00:56:455 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nice shape, but timing wise....hmm. If you insist of keeping that shape, try adding a beat at 00:57:364?
- 01:41:909 (1,2) - Will be nice to tweak this pair of sliders, they're the same slider but currently doesn't look that nice beside each other.
- 02:31:000 (3) - Looks nice if it's designed to half-blanket 02:30:697 (2) instead of tilting one way?
[Alejandro]
- Interesting slider velocity, 1.23x?
- 01:15:186/01:16:398/01:16:398/01:20:034/01:32:212 and 03:59:940/04:00:243 - Unused timing section?
- 00:39:182 (3,4,5) and 00:40:394 (2,3,4) - Weird spacing here IMO, it spoils the flow. Either do stacked triplets or spreaded triplet streams?
- 01:06:455 (7,8,9) - Same thing as above. Unless you intend to do jumps on the 3rd beats for all these...
- 02:31:303 (4,5,6) - Slightly larger jumps compared to the rest. Just saying.
- 03:41:909 (1,2,3,4) - The hitsound pattern confused me!...Just my own complain. XD
- Don't quite get the transition of spacing during the second kiai time, 1.5x spacing mixed with slower 1.0x lesser spacings. At least keep the second part's spacing consistent?(I know this one's a collab difficulty, but still eh)
Been a while since I've last modded maps. Hope I don't miss anything major. Good luck~
[General]
- (Very minor issue) System asks for save after resnapping all notes.
- Some nice whistle pattern during kiai time would be nice. Currently they're only used sparingly.
[Fernando]
- 00:51:606 - Felt like missing something here, no?
- 01:37:061 (1,2,3,4) and similar beat patterns, particularly repeating slider (1) and (3) - Don't think this is a suitable pattern for a Easy, two repeating sliders with different repeating beats. Not really against it if it's a Normal though.
[Roberto]
- Why this difficulty ends much earlier compared to others? D:
- 00:56:455 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nice shape, but timing wise....hmm. If you insist of keeping that shape, try adding a beat at 00:57:364?
- 01:41:909 (1,2) - Will be nice to tweak this pair of sliders, they're the same slider but currently doesn't look that nice beside each other.
- 02:31:000 (3) - Looks nice if it's designed to half-blanket 02:30:697 (2) instead of tilting one way?
[Alejandro]
- Interesting slider velocity, 1.23x?
- 01:15:186/01:16:398/01:16:398/01:20:034/01:32:212 and 03:59:940/04:00:243 - Unused timing section?
- 00:39:182 (3,4,5) and 00:40:394 (2,3,4) - Weird spacing here IMO, it spoils the flow. Either do stacked triplets or spreaded triplet streams?
- 01:06:455 (7,8,9) - Same thing as above. Unless you intend to do jumps on the 3rd beats for all these...
- 02:31:303 (4,5,6) - Slightly larger jumps compared to the rest. Just saying.
- 03:41:909 (1,2,3,4) - The hitsound pattern confused me!...Just my own complain. XD
- Don't quite get the transition of spacing during the second kiai time, 1.5x spacing mixed with slower 1.0x lesser spacings. At least keep the second part's spacing consistent?(I know this one's a collab difficulty, but still eh)
Been a while since I've last modded maps. Hope I don't miss anything major. Good luck~
Changed some hitsounds in my collab part.
I've tried 1.0x, but 1.5x is definitely a LOT better and easier to map (:
Download: Lady GaGa - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Alejandro].osu
I've tried 1.0x, but 1.5x is definitely a LOT better and easier to map (:
Download: Lady GaGa - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Alejandro].osu
Hey Helldawn
I changed my mind about my diffs name, because many people are complaining that they can't see how hard my diff is.
Could you please rename it to "Dunskin's Taiko Oni"?
I changed my mind about my diffs name, because many people are complaining that they can't see how hard my diff is.
Could you please rename it to "Dunskin's Taiko Oni"?
Topic Starter
Sure.DarkDunskin wrote:
Hey Helldawn
I changed my mind about my diffs name, because many people are complaining that they can't see how hard my diff is.
Could you please rename it to "Dunskin's Taiko Oni"?
hello~~
Some Suggestions
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[Fernado]
1/6 Why?
OD -1 ? most better play but this just my IMO
00:34:940 (1) - Remove new combo and 00:35:243 (1) - New combo?
00:43:121 (1) - New combo?
00:45:546 (4) - New combo and 00:45:849 (2) - Remove new combo?
00:48:576 (2) - Remove new combo
00:51:000 (6) - Remove new combo and 00:51:606 (1) - put new combo? Note:if you fix this so put new combo at 00:53:424 (1) and end remove new combo at 00:53:727 (2)
00:55:243 (5) - New combo and 00:56:455 (2) - remove new combo and 00:57:061 (1) - new combo
00:59:182 (2,4) - Weird stack with 01:01:303 (1) - the start slider try better stack or unstack and make curve slider (IMO)
01:03:121 (6) - Remove new combo and 01:03:727 (7) - New combo?
01:29:788 (1) - New combo?
02:12:212 (1) - New combo and 02:12:818 (3) - Remove new combo
02:37:061 (5) - the end slider are weird stack with 02:38:273 (7) - the start slider
lot patterns combo weird look this http://osu.ppy.sh/images/beatspacing.jpg
That sometime people or me i play this so weird patterns i get forever 100x so pleasse fix but you can sayd "no" and why? xD
but slider and notes is aswome better ryhthm
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[Alenjadro]
01:02:515 (4) - Remove new combo and 01:03:121 (1) - new combo?
01:06:152 (5,6,7,8) - Grid 1 Dowm make better stack
01:29:788 (8) - ugly slider is not my fan lol you wanna this http://puu.sh/3fYq ? if yes so fix spacing or New combo if you wanna jump at 01:31:606 (9)
02:08:424 (4) - Nice arc
this is really fine for me but sometime weird patterns well this is hard lol
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that all and STAR !
Some Suggestions
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[Fernado]
1/6 Why?
OD -1 ? most better play but this just my IMO
00:34:940 (1) - Remove new combo and 00:35:243 (1) - New combo?
00:43:121 (1) - New combo?
00:45:546 (4) - New combo and 00:45:849 (2) - Remove new combo?
00:48:576 (2) - Remove new combo
00:51:000 (6) - Remove new combo and 00:51:606 (1) - put new combo? Note:if you fix this so put new combo at 00:53:424 (1) and end remove new combo at 00:53:727 (2)
00:55:243 (5) - New combo and 00:56:455 (2) - remove new combo and 00:57:061 (1) - new combo
00:59:182 (2,4) - Weird stack with 01:01:303 (1) - the start slider try better stack or unstack and make curve slider (IMO)
01:03:121 (6) - Remove new combo and 01:03:727 (7) - New combo?
01:29:788 (1) - New combo?
02:12:212 (1) - New combo and 02:12:818 (3) - Remove new combo
02:37:061 (5) - the end slider are weird stack with 02:38:273 (7) - the start slider
lot patterns combo weird look this http://osu.ppy.sh/images/beatspacing.jpg
That sometime people or me i play this so weird patterns i get forever 100x so pleasse fix but you can sayd "no" and why? xD
but slider and notes is aswome better ryhthm
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Alenjadro]
01:02:515 (4) - Remove new combo and 01:03:121 (1) - new combo?
01:06:152 (5,6,7,8) - Grid 1 Dowm make better stack
01:29:788 (8) - ugly slider is not my fan lol you wanna this http://puu.sh/3fYq ? if yes so fix spacing or New combo if you wanna jump at 01:31:606 (9)
02:08:424 (4) - Nice arc
this is really fine for me but sometime weird patterns well this is hard lol
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that all and STAR !
General
probably needs an easier diff, 4 star is too high for the easiest, and slider velocity is kinda high as well in Fernando
Fernando
great diff, but not great for an easiest diff
03:47:970 - maybe end the map right here, right now it sounds a bit bland, like a sudden/random stop
Roberto
i'm no taiko expert, but some of the 1/4 stacks sound a bit off, i don't know
Alejandro
perfect :3
probably needs an easier diff, 4 star is too high for the easiest, and slider velocity is kinda high as well in Fernando
Fernando
great diff, but not great for an easiest diff
03:47:970 - maybe end the map right here, right now it sounds a bit bland, like a sudden/random stop
Roberto
i'm no taiko expert, but some of the 1/4 stacks sound a bit off, i don't know
Alejandro
perfect :3
Topic Starter
All fixedPereira006 wrote:
hello~~
Some Suggestions
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[Fernado]
1/6 Why?
OD -1 ? most better play but this just my IMO
00:34:940 (1) - Remove new combo and 00:35:243 (1) - New combo?
00:43:121 (1) - New combo?
00:45:546 (4) - New combo and 00:45:849 (2) - Remove new combo?
00:48:576 (2) - Remove new combo
00:51:000 (6) - Remove new combo and 00:51:606 (1) - put new combo? Note:if you fix this so put new combo at 00:53:424 (1) and end remove new combo at 00:53:727 (2)
00:55:243 (5) - New combo and 00:56:455 (2) - remove new combo and 00:57:061 (1) - new combo
00:59:182 (2,4) - Weird stack with 01:01:303 (1) - the start slider try better stack or unstack and make curve slider (IMO)
01:03:121 (6) - Remove new combo and 01:03:727 (7) - New combo?
01:29:788 (1) - New combo?
02:12:212 (1) - New combo and 02:12:818 (3) - Remove new combo
02:37:061 (5) - the end slider are weird stack with 02:38:273 (7) - the start slider
lot patterns combo weird look this http://osu.ppy.sh/images/beatspacing.jpg
That sometime people or me i play this so weird patterns i get forever 100x so pleasse fix but you can sayd "no" and why? xD
but slider and notes is aswome better ryhthm
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Alenjadro]
01:02:515 (4) - Remove new combo and 01:03:121 (1) - new combo?
01:06:152 (5,6,7,8) - Grid 1 Dowm make better stack
01:29:788 (8) - ugly slider is not my fan lol you wanna this http://puu.sh/3fYq ? if yes so fix spacing or New combo if you wanna jump at 01:31:606 (9)
02:08:424 (4) - Nice arc
this is really fine for me but sometime weird patterns well this is hard lol
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that all and STAR !
General:
You definitely do need at least 1 more easier difficulty.
The correct capitalisation is Lady Gaga, not GaGa. If you don't believe me, do a quick google search for her.
Tick rate 2 should ideally be used across the difficulties, as the song is 1/2.
It's a bit weird to force default hitbursts and cursor for no apparent reason, as the player can use them anyway if they wish. Just seems to be taking up unnecessary space and time.
Alejandro:
00:36:455 (8) - New combo?
00:39:485 (5) - This spacing is very confusing, as 1/2 is spaced (basically) the same as 1/1 here. You may just want to move this with the previous stack to make a triple.
00:40:697 (4) - ^
00:50:394 (7) - New combo?
01:06:758 (8) - Less confusing as the spacing is more clearly different here, but still could be a stack.
01:11:000 (1) - I recommend you soften the end up by using a inherited section with 'soft' sampleset.
01:29:788 (8) - Confusing spacing again. You could just horizontally flip this.
01:41:909 onwards - It feels so odd to undermap so much in a chorus.
01:51:606 - Drag the start of the word 'break' to here?
02:23:121 (1) - Perhaps reverse (ctrl+r) so it fits in with the rest of the pattern more.
02:31:455 (5,6) - Yeah, this increased spacing is just too cruel and unfitting.
02:43:121 (5) - I wouldn't stack 1/1 under slider ends, since you've already used 1/2 stacks on them and it can be very confusing. I recommend spacing this away from the slider.
03:02:212 (1) - The whistle on the start of this slider feels a bit out of place. Either use more whistles or remove this one.
03:09:485 - Drag 'break' to here.
03:41:152 (3) - I can't hear anything this 1/4 repeat follows, and I honestly think it just feels a bit awkward.
03:59:940 (6) - Tiny, tiny nitpick, but you could move this further away from the bottom of the screen.
Roberto:
Please indicate this is a Taiko difficulty in the title
Fernando:
00:38:576 (4) - Move a grid left? I know, right.
01:16:758 (4) - Again, this could easily be read as 1/2 because of the stacking on slider ends, which you can avoid with spacing it away.
01:32:212 (1) - I'm not sure about these or their rankability. They look strange on MMsliders.
01:51:606 - Drag break to here?
02:01:303 (2) - Arguably confusing spacing.
02:20:697 - Drag break to here? Or 02:19:485 if that's too extreme.
02:36:152 (2,3,4) - I think these could be done more creatively than just back and forth beats. Oh well.
02:43:121 (1) - Kind of an unexpected jump, as it seems it would be reversed in the context of the combo.
03:43:727 (4) - New combo?
Please map that last chorus, there's no reason for you not to.
Keep tryin', I'll happily remod this fully if you add easier difficulties.
You definitely do need at least 1 more easier difficulty.
The correct capitalisation is Lady Gaga, not GaGa. If you don't believe me, do a quick google search for her.
Tick rate 2 should ideally be used across the difficulties, as the song is 1/2.
It's a bit weird to force default hitbursts and cursor for no apparent reason, as the player can use them anyway if they wish. Just seems to be taking up unnecessary space and time.
Alejandro:
00:36:455 (8) - New combo?
00:39:485 (5) - This spacing is very confusing, as 1/2 is spaced (basically) the same as 1/1 here. You may just want to move this with the previous stack to make a triple.
00:40:697 (4) - ^
00:50:394 (7) - New combo?
01:06:758 (8) - Less confusing as the spacing is more clearly different here, but still could be a stack.
01:11:000 (1) - I recommend you soften the end up by using a inherited section with 'soft' sampleset.
01:29:788 (8) - Confusing spacing again. You could just horizontally flip this.
01:41:909 onwards - It feels so odd to undermap so much in a chorus.
01:51:606 - Drag the start of the word 'break' to here?
02:23:121 (1) - Perhaps reverse (ctrl+r) so it fits in with the rest of the pattern more.
02:31:455 (5,6) - Yeah, this increased spacing is just too cruel and unfitting.
02:43:121 (5) - I wouldn't stack 1/1 under slider ends, since you've already used 1/2 stacks on them and it can be very confusing. I recommend spacing this away from the slider.
03:02:212 (1) - The whistle on the start of this slider feels a bit out of place. Either use more whistles or remove this one.
03:09:485 - Drag 'break' to here.
03:41:152 (3) - I can't hear anything this 1/4 repeat follows, and I honestly think it just feels a bit awkward.
03:59:940 (6) - Tiny, tiny nitpick, but you could move this further away from the bottom of the screen.
Roberto:
Please indicate this is a Taiko difficulty in the title
Fernando:
00:38:576 (4) - Move a grid left? I know, right.
01:16:758 (4) - Again, this could easily be read as 1/2 because of the stacking on slider ends, which you can avoid with spacing it away.
01:32:212 (1) - I'm not sure about these or their rankability. They look strange on MMsliders.
01:51:606 - Drag break to here?
02:01:303 (2) - Arguably confusing spacing.
02:20:697 - Drag break to here? Or 02:19:485 if that's too extreme.
02:36:152 (2,3,4) - I think these could be done more creatively than just back and forth beats. Oh well.
02:43:121 (1) - Kind of an unexpected jump, as it seems it would be reversed in the context of the combo.
03:43:727 (4) - New combo?
Please map that last chorus, there's no reason for you not to.
Keep tryin', I'll happily remod this fully if you add easier difficulties.
http://www.mediafire.com/?mc1vqecfwedc3a9
I'm not satisfied enough, though ):
Maybe i'll tweak some skin elements later xD
EDIT : Fixed spinner-background and sliderfollow circle
To NotShinta : I fixed everything in my part except for that 1/4 because I can't get a good pattern ><
Late, but thx for modding~
I'm not satisfied enough, though ):
Maybe i'll tweak some skin elements later xD
EDIT : Fixed spinner-background and sliderfollow circle
To NotShinta : I fixed everything in my part except for that 1/4 because I can't get a good pattern ><
Late, but thx for modding~
Fixed Timing Issues and Name blah blah.
Download: Lady GaGa - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Dunskin's Taiko Oni].osu
Download: Lady GaGa - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Dunskin's Taiko Oni].osu
Hi
Here as requested, now my Normal diff~
I hope you will like it and accept it.. I think i made it good for you <3
Lady Gaga~
+Star
Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Hanyuu's Normal].osu
Here as requested, now my Normal diff~
I hope you will like it and accept it.. I think i made it good for you <3
Lady Gaga~
+Star
Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Hanyuu's Normal].osu
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
YAY
Accepted 2 diff
Thanx
Accepted 2 diff
Thanx
[Hard]
*00:39:485 - Add "Clap"
*01:19:182 - Add "Clap"
*01:19:485 - Add "Clap"
[Collab]
*01:02:818 - Add a note
*01:30:394 - Add "Clap"
*02:24:182 - Put the note 3 In this time
Good Luck ♥
*00:39:485 - Add "Clap"
*01:19:182 - Add "Clap"
*01:19:485 - Add "Clap"
[Collab]
*01:02:818 - Add a note
*01:30:394 - Add "Clap"
*02:24:182 - Put the note 3 In this time
Good Luck
♥
Topic Starter
GraciasMikumiku97 wrote:
[Hard]
*00:39:485 - Add "Clap" Fix'd
*01:19:182 - Add "Clap" Fix'd
*01:19:485 - Add "Clap" Fix'd
[Collab]
*01:02:818 - Add a note Fix'd
*01:30:394 - Add "Clap" Fix'd
*02:24:182 - Put the note 3 In this time Fix'd
Good Luck
Requested Mod:
Dark's Taiko:
00:35:546(7) - d
00:35:849(8) - k
00:48:727(x) - d > because it feels empty
00:48:424(24) - k
01:06:379(14) - move to 01:06:530
01:20:621(x) - d
01:25:748(78) - Need to move to 01:25:849
01:40:091(48) - k > clap is hearable
01:40:318(49) - d
01:49:788(104) - k > clap is hearable
02:12:818(17) - k > I know, d because of burn but it dosen't fit this well.
02:18:879(49) - k
02:43:323(78) - Need to move to 02:43:424
02:57:667(48) - k
03:03:727(83) - funny, here you have took k
03:07:364(104) - k
03:08:879(111,112) - d k
03:13:727(20,21) - ^
03:19:788(46,47) - ^
03:23:424(62,63) - ^
03:27:364(x) - Maybe k?
03:41:505(76) - Need to move to 03:41:606
03:55:849(48) - k and also similiar parts.
04:20:294(81) - Need to move to 04:20:394
04:21:758(x) - Maybe k?
04:24:258(x) - d
Osu! diff's seams to be fine for me.
Collab is cool.
Well good luck with your project, here you get a star from me.~
Dark's Taiko:
00:35:546(7) - d
00:35:849(8) - k
00:48:727(x) - d > because it feels empty
00:48:424(24) - k
01:06:379(14) - move to 01:06:530
01:20:621(x) - d
01:25:748(78) - Need to move to 01:25:849
01:40:091(48) - k > clap is hearable
01:40:318(49) - d
01:49:788(104) - k > clap is hearable
02:12:818(17) - k > I know, d because of burn but it dosen't fit this well.
02:18:879(49) - k
02:43:323(78) - Need to move to 02:43:424
02:57:667(48) - k
03:03:727(83) - funny, here you have took k
03:07:364(104) - k
03:08:879(111,112) - d k
03:13:727(20,21) - ^
03:19:788(46,47) - ^
03:23:424(62,63) - ^
03:27:364(x) - Maybe k?
03:41:505(76) - Need to move to 03:41:606
03:55:849(48) - k and also similiar parts.
04:20:294(81) - Need to move to 04:20:394
04:21:758(x) - Maybe k?
04:24:258(x) - d
Osu! diff's seams to be fine for me.
Collab is cool.
Well good luck with your project, here you get a star from me.~
Thank you very much Ono~
Here's my update:
Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Dunskin's Taiko Oni].osu
Here's my update:
Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Dunskin's Taiko Oni].osu
Changelog
OnosakiHito wrote:
Requested Mod:
Dark's Taiko:
00:35:546(7) - d
00:35:849(8) - k
00:48:424(24) - k
01:06:379(14) - moved to 01:06:530
01:20:621(x) - d
01:25:748(78) - moved to 01:25:849
01:40:091(48) - k
01:40:318(49) - d
01:49:788(104) - k
02:18:879(49) - k
02:43:323(78) - moved to 02:43:424
03:07:364(104) - k
03:08:879(111,112) - d k
03:13:727(20,21) - ^
03:19:788(46,47) - ^
03:23:424(62,63) - ^
03:41:505(76) - moved to 03:41:606
03:55:849(48) - k and also similiar parts.
04:20:294(81) - moved to 04:20:394
hi~
[General]
Tag add CDFA
[CDFA]
01:07:364 (4) - add clap?
03:52:818 (1) - ^
[Hard]
00:43:727 (2) - add finish
02:01:303 ~ 03:08:576 add clap?
[Collab]
01:48:879 (x) - add note
01:49:788 (x) - add note
nice map.
[General]
Tag add CDFA
[CDFA]
01:07:364 (4) - add clap?
03:52:818 (1) - ^
[Hard]
00:43:727 (2) - add finish
02:01:303 ~ 03:08:576 add clap?
[Collab]
01:48:879 (x) - add note
01:49:788 (x) - add note
nice map.
Topic Starter
Thanx for starBeren wrote:
hi~
[General]
Tag add CDFA already added -.-
[CDFA]
01:07:364 (4) - add clap?
03:52:818 (1) - ^
[Hard]
00:43:727 (2) - add finish Fix'd
02:01:303 ~ 03:08:576 add clap? Fix'd
[Collab]
01:48:879 (x) - add note nah
01:49:788 (x) - add note nah
nice map.
[General]
- Even though there are guest mappers, it would be nice to have the kiai end at 04:26:758 on all difficulties.
- If you're going to have a custom followcircle, you're going to need a custom sliderball too.
- Set offset as 91, it makes the main menu thing work better.
- Use Tick Rate 2 on all difficulties, maybe even Tick Rate 4.
[CDFAlejandro]
01:20:091 (3,1) - The overlap here is ugly, sir.
02:37:667 (3,1) - I think I've been here before. I think I've run into you
[Hard]
00:56:455 (2,1,2) - Spacing is odd here.
01:51:606 - Break drag to here.
03:09:182 - And also to here.
[Collab]
03:42:515 (3,4,5) - Spacing here is a bit tough compared to the rest of this section, but readable.
04:00:394 (1,1,1) - I was confused by this spacing but it's late and I'm tired.
Star.
- Even though there are guest mappers, it would be nice to have the kiai end at 04:26:758 on all difficulties.
- If you're going to have a custom followcircle, you're going to need a custom sliderball too.
- Set offset as 91, it makes the main menu thing work better.
- Use Tick Rate 2 on all difficulties, maybe even Tick Rate 4.
[CDFAlejandro]
01:20:091 (3,1) - The overlap here is ugly, sir.
02:37:667 (3,1) - I think I've been here before. I think I've run into you
[Hard]
00:56:455 (2,1,2) - Spacing is odd here.
01:51:606 - Break drag to here.
03:09:182 - And also to here.
[Collab]
03:42:515 (3,4,5) - Spacing here is a bit tough compared to the rest of this section, but readable.
04:00:394 (1,1,1) - I was confused by this spacing but it's late and I'm tired.
Topic Starter
Thanx a lotSapphireGhost wrote:
[General]
- Even though there are guest mappers, it would be nice to have the kiai end at 04:26:758 on all difficulties. Fix'd
- If you're going to have a custom followcircle, you're going to need a custom sliderball too. K
- Set offset as 91, it makes the main menu thing work better. Fix'd <3
- Use Tick Rate 2 on all difficulties, maybe even Tick Rate 4. Fix'd (2)
[CDFAlejandro]
01:20:091 (3,1) - The overlap here is ugly, sir.
02:37:667 (3,1) - I think I've been here before. I think I've run into you
[Hard]
00:56:455 (2,1,2) - Spacing is odd here. Fix'd
01:51:606 - Break drag to here. Fix'd
03:09:182 - And also to here. Fix'd
[Collab]
03:42:515 (3,4,5) - Spacing here is a bit tough compared to the rest of this section, but readable.
04:00:394 (1,1,1) - I was confused by this spacing but it's late and I'm tired.Star.
Didn't change anything in my collab part (those new combos are already intuitive imo), but fixed collab SB as requested by HellDawn. Thanks for check though ~
DO NOT KUDOSU THIS POST!
Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Collab].osu
DO NOT KUDOSU THIS POST!
Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Collab].osu
M4M ^_~
General
maybe make hitcircle more transperent?
Suggesting some sounds and other stuff ^^
CDFA's easy
00:53:424 (3) - remove the red tick
01:46:757 - add a whistle to spinner
02:06:151 (1) - o.O' maybe flip it horizontall and place 1 small tick down
02:08:727 (2) - place it at x:336 y:244
02:49:787 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - add finish
03:04:333 - add a whistle to spinner
03:52:818 (1) - http://puu.sh/4uUq and remove finish from (2)
03:57:666 (1) - add finish
04:02:515 (1) - add finish at the beginning of slider and at the end
04:07:363 (1) - add finish
04:12:212 (1,2,1,1) - ^
Hard
02:00:090 (1) - make something like this? - http://puu.sh/4uVe
um.. maybe add more claps like in easy diff?
02:49:787 (1) - add finish
02:54:030 (6) - http://puu.sh/4uVz
02:57:060 (2) - http://puu.sh/4uVG
02:58:575 (3,4) - if you agree with previous suggestion, then move these two 5 ticks up.
02:59:484 (5) - add finish, start a new combo and delete it on the next (1)
03:28:575 'till 03:46:757 -..no claps? ..really? ;;
03:47:969 (1) - add finish
03:57:666 (1) - ^
04:06:151 (1) - remove new combo and add it on (3)
I don't understand taiko, so im passing it :3
Collab
HP +1?
00:33:424 (4) - add clap
02:32:818 - nice one xD
02:37:666 and this too^^ and the other too xD you know
Nivalis' part is so awesome o.o
Thats all x3 good luck~ (yeah, i love long mods x'D)
General
maybe make hitcircle more transperent?
Suggesting some sounds and other stuff ^^
CDFA's easy
00:53:424 (3) - remove the red tick
01:46:757 - add a whistle to spinner
02:06:151 (1) - o.O' maybe flip it horizontall and place 1 small tick down
02:08:727 (2) - place it at x:336 y:244
02:49:787 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - add finish
03:04:333 - add a whistle to spinner
03:52:818 (1) - http://puu.sh/4uUq and remove finish from (2)
03:57:666 (1) - add finish
04:02:515 (1) - add finish at the beginning of slider and at the end
04:07:363 (1) - add finish
04:12:212 (1,2,1,1) - ^
Hard
02:00:090 (1) - make something like this? - http://puu.sh/4uVe
um.. maybe add more claps like in easy diff?
02:49:787 (1) - add finish
02:54:030 (6) - http://puu.sh/4uVz
02:57:060 (2) - http://puu.sh/4uVG
02:58:575 (3,4) - if you agree with previous suggestion, then move these two 5 ticks up.
02:59:484 (5) - add finish, start a new combo and delete it on the next (1)
03:28:575 'till 03:46:757 -..no claps? ..really? ;;
03:47:969 (1) - add finish
03:57:666 (1) - ^
04:06:151 (1) - remove new combo and add it on (3)
I don't understand taiko, so im passing it :3
Collab
HP +1?
00:33:424 (4) - add clap
02:32:818 - nice one xD
02:37:666 and this too^^ and the other too xD you know
Nivalis' part is so awesome o.o
Thats all x3 good luck~ (yeah, i love long mods x'D)
Topic Starter
Leyko wrote:
M4M ^_~
General
maybe make hitcircle more transperent? No its good :3
Suggesting some sounds and other stuff ^^
Hard
02:00:090 (1) - make something like this? - http://puu.sh/4uVe Nah
um.. maybe add more claps like in easy diff?
02:49:787 (1) - add finish
02:54:030 (6) - http://puu.sh/4uVz Fix'd
02:57:060 (2) - http://puu.sh/4uVG Nah
02:58:575 (3,4) - if you agree with previous suggestion, then move these two 5 ticks up. Fix'd
02:59:484 (5) - add finish, start a new combo and delete it on the next (1) Fix'd
03:28:575 'till 03:46:757 -..no claps? ..really? ;; u.u
03:47:969 (1) - add finish Fix'd
03:57:666 (1) - ^ Fix'd
04:06:151 (1) - remove new combo and add it on (3) Fix'd
I don't understand taiko, so im passing it :3
Collab
HP +1? Fix'd
00:33:424 (4) - add clap Fix'd
02:32:818 - nice one xD Debbiee part <3
02:37:666 and this too^^ and the other too xD you know
Nivalis' part is so awesome o.o Nivalis <3
Thats all x3 good luck~ Thanx a lot(yeah, i love long mods x'D)
Sorry that it's took so long for me to mod this. I'm going through your mapset properly now. I quite like it.
I'll edit this with an actual modpost, but I want you to know that I haven't just ditched you after receiving a mod!
By the way, I don't want to sound like a curmudgeon--I'm just rigorous and picky with my observations. Furthermore, I'm very tired and I've probably put far more effort into this than I should have.
Jarby and I think that you should map a Normal difficulty. The difficulty difference between [CDFA's Easy] and [Hard] is 3.25 stars. Sure, CDFA could've made a more challenging Easy map, but it doesn't look good to have a baby mode and then two moderately challenging modes.
Make the difficulty yourself, as you'd have two maps and a few sections to your name. This would definitely look good, as you're the one submitting the mapset.
[Collab]
[00:29:181] (9) Make this a new combo, as it occurs at the beginning of a new phrase. Also, I don't like the closeness of (9) and (1) after it. I definitely think that (9) should be much lower on the screen than (1).
[00:31:000] (4) Stack a circle 1/4 before this? That way, you'll be covering the melody as well as the beat.
[00:33:424] (4) As your map is saved with distance spacing 0.9, I'd assumed that it'd be possible to drag this higher, while respecting the distance spacing. However, it appears that this is mapped with 0.8. Even so, move it up a bit. I feel like this circle's trying to hide behind the sliders.
[00:47:060] (4) I feel like I should point out that I like what you've done here, as this slider's kinks fit the vocal bit. Sweet!
[01:11:000] (1) I don't feel like this spinner fits too well with anything. Either map circles over the bass or end the spinner with a normal finish/clap at 01:11:606. Move the spinner back if you do this, so that it isn't uncomfortably short.
[01:15:242] (1) I hate to be a Nazi, but I really think that this slider should get some attention. Try to even it out, as it'd look even prettier than it is. Something like this:
[01:23:121] (2) Clap. Everything else in this section has a clap on the second beat. Again, sorry to be be a Nazi.
[02:01:303] (3) Again, try to even this out a bit. You're on your own for this, but just drag some points until it looks reasonably even.
[02:28:575] (1) Same as [01:11:000]. Just don't have anything happening during a musical break!
[03:41:909] (1,2,3,4) Visually appealing, but the leaps here are a bit too stark for my liking. Try to change this so that the (1) and (2) occur on the left and then mirror them for (3) and (4). Anything to reduce the spacing.
[Hard]
For future reference, it'd be nice to see a bit of congruence between difficulties.
Try to hitsound this some more, because large sections of the map sound a bit monotonous.
[00:59:484] (3,4,5) These jumps can be reduced considerably by flipping (4) horizontally. Try aligning it vertically with (2), so that a nice kite pattern is formed. Reversing (5) might be nice as well, as the sliders would descend with the melody. Here's my effort:
[01:10:090] You know that time when I'd criticised your spinner placement at this point in the collab? Change it so that it's more like this. This spinner ends with the music.
[01:17:363] (6);(1) The slight jump here feels slightly awkward and could probably be improved considerably, if you turn the stacking around this point into some sort of pattern. Alternatively, move the (5,6) stack closer to (1). I hope that this makes sense to you.
[04:18:878] (1,2,3,4,5) :-)
Tee hee; accidental faces!
[CDFA's Easy]
[02:06:151] (1) Reverse this slider. Why create such a needless jump in an Easy map? You silly sausage.
I'll edit this with an actual modpost, but I want you to know that I haven't just ditched you after receiving a mod!
By the way, I don't want to sound like a curmudgeon--I'm just rigorous and picky with my observations. Furthermore, I'm very tired and I've probably put far more effort into this than I should have.
Jarby and I think that you should map a Normal difficulty. The difficulty difference between [CDFA's Easy] and [Hard] is 3.25 stars. Sure, CDFA could've made a more challenging Easy map, but it doesn't look good to have a baby mode and then two moderately challenging modes.
Make the difficulty yourself, as you'd have two maps and a few sections to your name. This would definitely look good, as you're the one submitting the mapset.
[Collab]
[00:29:181] (9) Make this a new combo, as it occurs at the beginning of a new phrase. Also, I don't like the closeness of (9) and (1) after it. I definitely think that (9) should be much lower on the screen than (1).
[00:31:000] (4) Stack a circle 1/4 before this? That way, you'll be covering the melody as well as the beat.
[00:33:424] (4) As your map is saved with distance spacing 0.9, I'd assumed that it'd be possible to drag this higher, while respecting the distance spacing. However, it appears that this is mapped with 0.8. Even so, move it up a bit. I feel like this circle's trying to hide behind the sliders.
[00:47:060] (4) I feel like I should point out that I like what you've done here, as this slider's kinks fit the vocal bit. Sweet!
[01:11:000] (1) I don't feel like this spinner fits too well with anything. Either map circles over the bass or end the spinner with a normal finish/clap at 01:11:606. Move the spinner back if you do this, so that it isn't uncomfortably short.
[01:15:242] (1) I hate to be a Nazi, but I really think that this slider should get some attention. Try to even it out, as it'd look even prettier than it is. Something like this:
[01:23:121] (2) Clap. Everything else in this section has a clap on the second beat. Again, sorry to be be a Nazi.
[02:01:303] (3) Again, try to even this out a bit. You're on your own for this, but just drag some points until it looks reasonably even.
[02:28:575] (1) Same as [01:11:000]. Just don't have anything happening during a musical break!
[03:41:909] (1,2,3,4) Visually appealing, but the leaps here are a bit too stark for my liking. Try to change this so that the (1) and (2) occur on the left and then mirror them for (3) and (4). Anything to reduce the spacing.
[Hard]
For future reference, it'd be nice to see a bit of congruence between difficulties.
Try to hitsound this some more, because large sections of the map sound a bit monotonous.
[00:59:484] (3,4,5) These jumps can be reduced considerably by flipping (4) horizontally. Try aligning it vertically with (2), so that a nice kite pattern is formed. Reversing (5) might be nice as well, as the sliders would descend with the melody. Here's my effort:
[01:10:090] You know that time when I'd criticised your spinner placement at this point in the collab? Change it so that it's more like this. This spinner ends with the music.
[01:17:363] (6);(1) The slight jump here feels slightly awkward and could probably be improved considerably, if you turn the stacking around this point into some sort of pattern. Alternatively, move the (5,6) stack closer to (1). I hope that this makes sense to you.
[04:18:878] (1,2,3,4,5) :-)
Tee hee; accidental faces!
[CDFA's Easy]
[02:06:151] (1) Reverse this slider. Why create such a needless jump in an Easy map? You silly sausage.
Normal
IRC modded.
My message is fucking short.
IRC modded.
My message is fucking short.
Shohei Ohtani
Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [CDFA's Easy].osu
So HellDawn just kinda go "FINALLY" and /nped the map, so I guess I have to update it or something.
and I still like the name CDFAlejandro ;~;.
So HellDawn just kinda go "FINALLY" and /nped the map, so I guess I have to update it or something.
and I still like the name CDFAlejandro ;~;.
[General]
Needs an approach circle to complete the set.
Countdown doesn't fit that well, since it's pretty loud, and the start of your map's pretty soft.
[Easy]
00:53:424 (3) - Doesn't look too good. When you use a red point on a slider, the two points on both sides of it needs to form a straight line, or it doesn't look smooth. Dunno if I'm saying something you already know.
03:52:818 (1,2) - These two sliders could be made to look neater.
04:21:909 (1) - Repeat's placed in a kinda-weird spot.
[Normal]
00:29:788 (2) - The claps here are quite jarring; they're a lot louder than the normal hitsounds.
00:41:909 (2) - A grid right to lineup with the end of 1?
00:43:727 (1,2) - Your spacing in this diff changes a lot. From 00:41:303 (1,2), which is 0.6x, to 00:36:455 (1,2), which is 0.75-0.8x, and this, which is 1.0x. I think it would be best to go through the diff and make these more consistent, since now some touch, some don't, and that's confusing for Normal. Your lowest is nearly half your highest, and it's the same musical section.
00:48:576 (1) - Change this to not be linear and instead to blanket the 6? http://puu.sh/4An6 (except yours should look nicer than mine, since I took like, 5 seconds for that)
01:16:455 (1,2,3) - A reminder for consistent spacing.
02:11:606 (3,5) - Maybe switch these notes, so that the 3 doesn't end up under the slider?
02:21:909 (2) - Moving the last point a few grids right can line this up with the 3,4.
02:30:697 (2,3) - Hard to read the spacing for, since it's more intuitive to read the head2-3 spacing than the tail2-3 spacing.
02:52:212 (5,6,7) - Line all 3 up, not just the 6,7.
02:57:061 (5) - Curve this a bit more so that 4,5 line up.
02:59:485 (1,2) - 5-point sliders can help you make a better circle here.
03:29:182 (5,6) - More spacing inconsistency.
03:42:212 (1) - Hard pattern to read for Normal.
03:56:758 (6) - Still haven't decided whether 1/2 should touch or not.
[Hard]
00:43:727 (2,1,2) - On all your maps, there's a lot of places where you seem to want to line something up, and then miss by a grid or two. I think you should look over them all and tighten them up; my Normal mod looked a lot longer than it should be because of that (and because of inconsistent spacing), so I'll stop mentioning them everywhere now.
00:58:879 (1,2,3) - This map kinda also suffers from the same inconsistent spacing (anywhere from 0.6 to 1.0) issue, but as a Hard, it's not as noticeable. Should still look over that though, won't keep mentioning it either. Oh, but this 3-4 jump should be marked with a new combo.
01:17:061 (5) - Ignore what I said before, this is really noticeable, and I don't know why spacing suddenly shrinks here.
02:42:818 (8,1) - This blanket could be tightened up too.
03:50:091 (4,5) - I'd recommend not stacking these two notes; stacking breaks your symmetry.
04:24:940 (7) - Stack these two ticks here.
CDFA's sliders were really good, you should ask him to show you how to make awesome sliders; some of these sliders are a bit off from symmetrical, or a bit off from looking "right".
[Taiko]
Needs a resnap.
[Collab]
Drain is too high, you don't have the notes at the beginning to sustain 7 drain. (I was dropping down to 60-80% bar at times when I was SSing, so those 100s will hurt.)
Some parts look/sound better with 4 tick rate, some don't.
HellDawn:
00:43:424 (3) - Concealed slider repeat.
00:50:697 (2) - ^
Pereira006:
01:33:424 (1) - Shorten by 1/4, like the previous one, and add a note?
HellDawn #2:
Hitsounds seem really sparse.
Debbiee:
02:32:818 (1) - Really dangerous with no warning, since the other mappers didn't do this. If you don't, you might as well delete the two timing sections after the first fast slider and before the second one, since it's not like you have any 1.0x sliders in between anyways.
Nivalis:
This one section is significantly harder than everything else. Dunno if this was intentional, but this doesn't usually happen in a collab.
02:49:030 (1) - Caught me offguard; didn't expect this to continue at 1.5x.
03:41:909 (1,2,3,4) - And this jump is brutal. Liveable though.
03:52:667 (1,2,3) - These jumps don't fit the music; they land on points that don't really make sense to have a jump on; in fact they all land on blue ticks. I can clear it on my second try, but it was really surprising on my first.
Poor CDFA, left out of the collab. T_T
Overall, this set needs more modding, imo.
Needs an approach circle to complete the set.
Countdown doesn't fit that well, since it's pretty loud, and the start of your map's pretty soft.
[Easy]
00:53:424 (3) - Doesn't look too good. When you use a red point on a slider, the two points on both sides of it needs to form a straight line, or it doesn't look smooth. Dunno if I'm saying something you already know.
03:52:818 (1,2) - These two sliders could be made to look neater.
04:21:909 (1) - Repeat's placed in a kinda-weird spot.
[Normal]
00:29:788 (2) - The claps here are quite jarring; they're a lot louder than the normal hitsounds.
00:41:909 (2) - A grid right to lineup with the end of 1?
00:43:727 (1,2) - Your spacing in this diff changes a lot. From 00:41:303 (1,2), which is 0.6x, to 00:36:455 (1,2), which is 0.75-0.8x, and this, which is 1.0x. I think it would be best to go through the diff and make these more consistent, since now some touch, some don't, and that's confusing for Normal. Your lowest is nearly half your highest, and it's the same musical section.
00:48:576 (1) - Change this to not be linear and instead to blanket the 6? http://puu.sh/4An6 (except yours should look nicer than mine, since I took like, 5 seconds for that)
01:16:455 (1,2,3) - A reminder for consistent spacing.
02:11:606 (3,5) - Maybe switch these notes, so that the 3 doesn't end up under the slider?
02:21:909 (2) - Moving the last point a few grids right can line this up with the 3,4.
02:30:697 (2,3) - Hard to read the spacing for, since it's more intuitive to read the head2-3 spacing than the tail2-3 spacing.
02:52:212 (5,6,7) - Line all 3 up, not just the 6,7.
02:57:061 (5) - Curve this a bit more so that 4,5 line up.
02:59:485 (1,2) - 5-point sliders can help you make a better circle here.
03:29:182 (5,6) - More spacing inconsistency.
03:42:212 (1) - Hard pattern to read for Normal.
03:56:758 (6) - Still haven't decided whether 1/2 should touch or not.
[Hard]
00:43:727 (2,1,2) - On all your maps, there's a lot of places where you seem to want to line something up, and then miss by a grid or two. I think you should look over them all and tighten them up; my Normal mod looked a lot longer than it should be because of that (and because of inconsistent spacing), so I'll stop mentioning them everywhere now.
00:58:879 (1,2,3) - This map kinda also suffers from the same inconsistent spacing (anywhere from 0.6 to 1.0) issue, but as a Hard, it's not as noticeable. Should still look over that though, won't keep mentioning it either. Oh, but this 3-4 jump should be marked with a new combo.
01:17:061 (5) - Ignore what I said before, this is really noticeable, and I don't know why spacing suddenly shrinks here.
02:42:818 (8,1) - This blanket could be tightened up too.
03:50:091 (4,5) - I'd recommend not stacking these two notes; stacking breaks your symmetry.
04:24:940 (7) - Stack these two ticks here.
CDFA's sliders were really good, you should ask him to show you how to make awesome sliders; some of these sliders are a bit off from symmetrical, or a bit off from looking "right".
[Taiko]
Needs a resnap.
[Collab]
Drain is too high, you don't have the notes at the beginning to sustain 7 drain. (I was dropping down to 60-80% bar at times when I was SSing, so those 100s will hurt.)
Some parts look/sound better with 4 tick rate, some don't.
HellDawn:
00:43:424 (3) - Concealed slider repeat.
00:50:697 (2) - ^
Pereira006:
01:33:424 (1) - Shorten by 1/4, like the previous one, and add a note?
HellDawn #2:
Hitsounds seem really sparse.
Debbiee:
02:32:818 (1) - Really dangerous with no warning, since the other mappers didn't do this. If you don't, you might as well delete the two timing sections after the first fast slider and before the second one, since it's not like you have any 1.0x sliders in between anyways.
Nivalis:
This one section is significantly harder than everything else. Dunno if this was intentional, but this doesn't usually happen in a collab.
02:49:030 (1) - Caught me offguard; didn't expect this to continue at 1.5x.
03:41:909 (1,2,3,4) - And this jump is brutal. Liveable though.
03:52:667 (1,2,3) - These jumps don't fit the music; they land on points that don't really make sense to have a jump on; in fact they all land on blue ticks. I can clear it on my second try, but it was really surprising on my first.
Poor CDFA, left out of the collab. T_T
Overall, this set needs more modding, imo.
Pereira006:
01:33:424 (1) - Shorten by 1/4, like the previous one, and add a note? Change slide 1/4 and add note
Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Collab].osu
01:33:424 (1) - Shorten by 1/4, like the previous one, and add a note? Change slide 1/4 and add note
Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Collab].osu
Reduced jump's distance, thx ~
message is too short
Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Collab].osu
message is too short
Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Collab].osu
Topic Starter
Kytoxid wrote:
[General]
Needs an approach circle to complete the set. Fix'd
Countdown doesn't fit that well, since it's pretty loud, and the start of your map's pretty soft. Fix'd
[Normal]
00:29:788 (2) - The claps here are quite jarring; they're a lot louder than the normal hitsounds. Fix'd
00:41:909 (2) - A grid right to lineup with the end of 1? Fix'd
00:43:727 (1,2) - Your spacing in this diff changes a lot. From 00:41:303 (1,2), which is 0.6x, to 00:36:455 (1,2), which is 0.75-0.8x, and this, which is 1.0x. I think it would be best to go through the diff and make these more consistent, since now some touch, some don't, and that's confusing for Normal. Your lowest is nearly half your highest, and it's the same musical section. Again I did spacing
00:48:576 (1) - Change this to not be linear and instead to blanket the 6? http://puu.sh/4An6 (except yours should look nicer than mine, since I took like, 5 seconds for that) Fix'd
01:16:455 (1,2,3) - A reminder for consistent spacing. Fix'd
02:11:606 (3,5) - Maybe switch these notes, so that the 3 doesn't end up under the slider? Fix'd
02:21:909 (2) - Moving the last point a few grids right can line this up with the 3,4. Fix'd
02:30:697 (2,3) - Hard to read the spacing for, since it's more intuitive to read the head2-3 spacing than the tail2-3 spacing. Fix'd
02:52:212 (5,6,7) - Line all 3 up, not just the 6,7. Fix'd
02:57:061 (5) - Curve this a bit more so that 4,5 line up. Fix'd
02:59:485 (1,2) - 5-point sliders can help you make a better circle here. Fix'd
03:29:182 (5,6) - More spacing inconsistency. Fix'd
03:42:212 (1) - Hard pattern to read for Normal. Fix'd
03:56:758 (6) - Still haven't decided whether 1/2 should touch or not. Fix'd
[Hard]
00:43:727 (2,1,2) - On all your maps, there's a lot of places where you seem to want to line something up, and then miss by a grid or two. I think you should look over them all and tighten them up; my Normal mod looked a lot longer than it should be because of that (and because of inconsistent spacing), so I'll stop mentioning them everywhere now. Fix'd
00:58:879 (1,2,3) - This map kinda also suffers from the same inconsistent spacing (anywhere from 0.6 to 1.0) issue, but as a Hard, it's not as noticeable. Should still look over that though, won't keep mentioning it either. Oh, but this 3-4 jump should be marked with a new combo. Fix'd
01:17:061 (5) - Ignore what I said before, this is really noticeable, and I don't know why spacing suddenly shrinks here. Fix'd
02:42:818 (8,1) - This blanket could be tightened up too. Fix'd
03:50:091 (4,5) - I'd recommend not stacking these two notes; stacking breaks your symmetry. Fix'd
04:24:940 (7) - Stack these two ticks here. Fix'dCDFA's sliders were really good, you should ask him to show you how to make awesome sliders; some of these sliders are a bit off from symmetrical, or a bit off from looking "right".
[Collab]
Drain is too high, you don't have the notes at the beginning to sustain 7 drain. (I was dropping down to 60-80% bar at times when I was SSing, so those 100s will hurt.) Fix'dSome parts look/sound better with 4 tick rate, some don't.
HellDawn:
00:43:424 (3) - Concealed slider repeat. Fix'd
00:50:697 (2) - ^ Fix'd
HellDawn #2:
Hitsounds seem really sparse. Fix'dPoor CDFA, left out of the collab. T_T
Overall, this set needs more modding, imo.
seems haven't fixed yet.Kytoxid wrote:
[Collab]
HellDawn:
00:43:424 (3) - Concealed slider repeat.
00:50:697 (2) - ^
and 02:19:485 (1) - too.
01:03:121 (1,2,3,4) -
I supposed it is placed like that..
01:13:121 (2) - move it to(456,320) so that the spacing could be same with 01:13:424 (3,4) -
01:21:606 (2,3) - for me if you want to place a jump it'd better have similar part at other phase(such as01:22:818 (1,2) - ) so it might be a bad jump.
02:13:727 (4) - so.. it doesn't a big issuse but move it up to (256,128) looks better.
part from 02:31:000 (7) - to 02:46:758 - should it have claps in centain notes such as 02:31:000 (7) - & 02:34:637 (2) - ?
03:41:152 (3,4) - finally I think it'd better change.. blue tick note doesn't fits here
Taiko:
it neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed resnap really.
hard:
00:55:243 (1,2) - spacing?
02:02:212 (4,1) - as a jump it seems not so easy catch...
02:46:455 (3) - should it be 1 grid up...?
normal:
that should be many notes you haven't add clap...
03:32:212 (1,7) - error here~