Lilac wrote:

[Jojo's Nagi]
00:31:474 (7) - Unrankable slider.FIXed

Lilac wrote:

Please DO NOT give kudosu.

[General]
Why does Hard mostly have Normal Custom 1 hitsound claps but the rest of the difficulties use the Soft Custom 1 hitsound Whistle?
Change a lot. Thx

D:

Sakura Hana wrote:

Title needs a space between "ne!" and "(TV Size)" Fix
No kudosu.

Odaril will recheck this map soon
Thx for you helping

1. Normal is the only diff that has a lead-in. Make all diffs have a 1000 ms lead-in. 2000 is too much and 0 is not enough.
2. 60% volume is still too low. Even 100% is sometimes hard to hear. At this point, I think you should just make your mp3 less loud... I can do it for you if you want, just ask me.

1. 00:27:274 (1,2,3,4) - This is just a suggestion, but use finishes with the whistles ? The trumpet is very loud compared to the rest of the song, I think finishes would fit since they would translate this sudden loudness to the hitsounds.
2. 00:29:674 (1) - Because the song goes for a short break after the trumpet, I find the first beat of this slider not to fit. Replace the slider with a single circle at 00:30:074 - ?
3. 00:32:874 (5) - This slider breaks your combo pattern, making its combo too long. Replace it with two circles, the second having a new combo ?
4. 00:32:074 (4) - Make this whole slider a finish ? (same idea as 00:27:274 - for the trumpet)
5. 00:35:274 (8) - Same ?
6. 00:38:074 (3) - Add a whistle on the second beat for consistency.
7. 00:41:274 (1) - This is just a suggestion, but change this slider so that the beginning is a bit closer to the center of the screen ? It will be easier to catch and maybe less confusing, as some players use the distance from the center of the screen to judge the timing.
8. 00:55:474 (1) - Same, except I strongly recommend it for this slider since it appears sooner after the spinner.
9. For the kiai, the alternance of the custom whistle and clap sounds weird. The custom clap looks weirdly placed (that is... not the usual clap pattern), and the custom whistle sounds like a clap (it's often use as, actually).
10. 01:17:274 (2) - (very nazi suggestion) Tilt it a bit less to avoid the overlap with (3) ?
11. 01:22:874 (1) - For consistency with Hard, remove this new combo.

1. The clap placement is weird. It doesn't seem to follow any given pattern (?) and differs from the usual clap pattern, which is rather bad for a clap (unless it has another purpose).
2. 00:06:674 (1,2) - Remove the new combo on (1) and add a new combo on (2) (becomes (5) after removing the new combo) for consistency with the pattern right before.
3. 00:08:474 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - I don't really understand the comboing here. I suggest to remove the new combo at 00:10:874 - and add new combos on 00:10:074 (6,10) - ?
4. 00:16:474 (1) - For consistency with the comboing after this, remove this new combo and add it on 00:17:074 (3) - (becomes (7) after removing the new combo).
5. 00:19:274 (1) - Remove this new combo, as it doesn't follow anything in the song.
6. 00:20:274 (4,1) - Swap new comboes (becomes 00:20:274 (9,1) - if ^ is fixed)
7. 00:27:474 (5,6,7) - Replace the claps with whistles ? It's the same trumpet idea as in Easy.
8. 00:31:474 (1,2) - Remove the new combo as it doesn't follow anything in the song. Also, the fact that (2) is a slider makes comboing here quite awkward: I suggest to replace (2) with three circles, then add a new combo on the second, and adding finishes on the second circle, third, and on 00:32:274 (3,4) - . This way, there will be a new combo for the instrument switch (from vocals to trumpet).
9. 00:32:874 (1,2) - For consistency, swap the new comboes.
10. 00:34:874 (5) - This slider makes the comboing awkward too. Replace it with two circles (on the white and red tick), add a new combo on the second one, and finishes on it and 00:35:274 (6,7) - (I also suggest to replace (6) with two circles or a 1/2 slider to fit the song more). The idea is the same as before.
11. 00:42:074 (3) - Add a new combo to mark the fact that the vocals go for a new sentence ?
12. 00:56:474 (3,5) - For consistency with Normal, add new combos.
13. 00:59:674 (3,5) - Same.
14. 01:10:274 (4) - Same.
15. 01:13:474 (3) - Same. Also add a note 1/2 before for consistency ?
16. 01:16:074 (3) - New combo for consistency.
17. 01:26:274 (3) - For consistency with Normal, add a new combo.

• Is fine. I'm not a big fan of the combo colours and the added 1/4, but...

• This spacing... It's just... jumps for the sake of it. They aren't even regular nor match anything in the song. The whole diff leaves a feeling of... "I want to be difficult" and of inconsistency. :/

• Same comment as previously...

Odaril wrote:

Rechecking. Waitting for a long time, and again, thx for you modding XD

General

1. Normal is the only diff that has a lead-in. Make all diffs have a 1000 ms lead-in. 2000 is too much and 0 is not enough.Fix
2. 60% volume is still too low. Even 100% is sometimes hard to hear. At this point, I think you should just make your mp3 less loud... I can do it for you if you want, just ask me.Cutting some useless sound effects myself.

Normal

1. 00:27:274 (1,2,3,4) - This is just a suggestion, but use finishes with the whistles ? The trumpet is very loud compared to the rest of the song, I think finishes would fit since they would translate this sudden loudness to the hitsounds.Change it, makes better
2. 00:29:674 (1) - Because the song goes for a short break after the trumpet, I find the first beat of this slider not to fit. Replace the slider with a single circle at 00:30:074 - ?Change it, But I feel a little lag, anyway, just for a break
3. 00:32:874 (5) - This slider breaks your combo pattern, making its combo too long. Replace it with two circles, the second having a new combo ?Fix, a little strange, so I also changed 00:34:074 - 00:34:874
4. 00:32:074 (4) - Make this whole slider a finish ? (same idea as 00:27:274 - for the trumpet)Stay in my style
5. 00:35:274 (8) - Same ?Stay in my style
6. 00:38:074 (3) - Add a whistle on the second beat for consistency.Fix
7. 00:41:274 (1) - This is just a suggestion, but change this slider so that the beginning is a bit closer to the center of the screen ? It will be easier to catch and maybe less confusing, as some players use the distance from the center of the screen to judge the timing.Fix, not in the center, just near the center
8. 00:55:474 (1) - Same, except I strongly recommend it for this slider since it appears sooner after the spinner.Fix
9. For the kiai, the alternance of the custom whistle and clap sounds weird. The custom clap looks weirdly placed (that is... not the usual clap pattern), and the custom whistle sounds like a clap (it's often use as, actually).It's fine? And I can't find any other good way TAT
10. 01:17:274 (2) - (very nazi suggestion) Tilt it a bit less to avoid the overlap with (3) ?Fix
11. 01:22:874 (1) - For consistency with Hard, remove this new combo.Fix

Hard

1. The clap placement is weird. It doesn't seem to follow any given pattern (?) and differs from the usual clap pattern, which is rather bad for a clap (unless it has another purpose).It seems useless. Delete the clap.
2. 00:06:674 (1,2) - Remove the new combo on (1) and add a new combo on (2) (becomes (5) after removing the new combo) for consistency with the pattern right before.Fix
3. 00:08:474 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - I don't really understand the comboing here. I suggest to remove the new combo at 00:10:874 - and add new combos on 00:10:074 (6,10) - ?Fix
4. 00:16:474 (1) - For consistency with the comboing after this, remove this new combo and add it on 00:17:074 (3) - (becomes (7) after removing the new combo). remove this new combo 00:16:474 (1) add new combo on 00:16:874
5. 00:19:274 (1) - Remove this new combo, as it doesn't follow anything in the song.Fix
6. 00:20:274 (4,1) - Swap new comboes (becomes 00:20:274 (9,1) - if ^ is fixed)Changed in a new way
7. 00:27:474 (5,6,7) - Replace the claps with whistles ? It's the same trumpet idea as in Easy.Fix
8. 00:31:474 (1,2) - Remove the new combo as it doesn't follow anything in the song. Also, the fact that (2) is a slider makes comboing here quite awkward: I suggest to replace (2) with three circles, then add a new combo on the second, and adding finishes on the second circle, third, and on 00:32:274 (3,4) - . This way, there will be a new combo for the instrument switch (from vocals to trumpetFix
   
9. 00:32:874 (1,2) - For consistency, swap the new comboes.Fix
10. 00:34:874 (5) - This slider makes the comboing awkward too. Replace it with two circles (on the white and red tick), add a new combo on the second one, and finishes on it and 00:35:274 (6,7) - (I also suggest to replace (6) with two circles or a 1/2 slider to fit the song more). The idea is the same as before.Fix something.
11. 00:42:074 (3) - Add a new combo to mark the fact that the vocals go for a new sentence ?Fix
12. 00:56:474 (3,5) - For consistency with Normal, add new combos.Fix
13. 00:59:674 (3,5) - Same.Fix
14. 01:10:274 (4) - Same.Fix
15. 01:13:474 (3) - Same. Also add a note 1/2 before for consistency ?Fix
16. 01:16:074 (3) - New combo for consistency.Fix
17. 01:26:274 (3) - For consistency with Normal, add a new combo.Fix

Taiko Oni

• Same comment as previously...I can't don anything for it, that's my style, anyway, if it unrankable, I will detete it.

They are mostly suggestions, but consider them, as they mght improve the mapset. Oh, was Hard made by someone elseBy myself ? If so, rename it like a guest diff and add the mapper's name to the tags. Also:
MOVE THIS TO PENDING. D:

Odaril wrote:

Since you went offline without warning ~.~

<Odaril> : add 1000ms audio lead-in on all diffs
<Odaril> : only Normal has it, it doesn't make sense since they all start at the same point
<Odaril> : 00:29:674 (1) - this note seriously confused me o.o I didn't expect anything here, and the spacing makes it look like it's on the red tick
<Odaril> : 00:56:474 (3,5) - for consistency with the other diffs, add new combos
<Odaril> : 01:00:674 (3) - same
<Odaril> : 01:10:074 (1,2) - for consistency with the other diffs, swap the new combos
<Odaril> : And that's about it

Odaril wrote:

Few more fixes in Normal and Hard (comboing and hitsounds).

And... Here's your bubble back.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[General]

You're missing the file "spinner-approachcircle.png" into your folder. Please make sure to add it and do a full submission after that.

[Normal]

Audio Lead-In on this difficulty is different compared to the others. Please make it 1000.

Disable the unused Countdown.

Add Display storyboard in front of combo fire like you did on the other difficulties.

[Taiko Oni]

Center the difficulty settings.

Just some general fixes, difficulties are all fine, fix everything and I'll probably rank

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