Aleks719 wrote:

NoHItter wrote:

Aleks' Easy

01:39:990 (2,1) - Perhaps add one repeat here then move the spinner 1/2 forward <= fixed
to form a Post-Spinner Note instead? <= nopeThank you, updated~

updated~

IceBeam wrote:

Per Aleks' request.

[Aleks's Easy]
00:59:315 (4) - Вот как-то мне не очень нравится,может развернешь его как-нибудь так:

SPOILER

Няшка!

[Normal]
Custom claps fit better I suppose.Why not to use them from first section?
00:00:788 (1) - Finish?
00:06:309 (1) - ^
00:44:591 (1) - ^
00:50:481 (2) - ^
00:56:370 (1) - ^
00:59:315 (1) - ^
01:11:094 (3) - ^
01:16:984 (3) - ^

I don't see any problems with gameplay,good job!

[Hard]
Soft claps sound disgusting
Fine to me,though some sliders could look better.

[Insane]
Soft claps again..don't use them please :<
00:35:757 (4) - Cymbals are clearly heard in the song,add finish?
00:44:591 (1) - ^
00:47:536 (1) - ^
00:50:481 (2) - ^
00:52:045 (7) - Remove this note,it's off!
01:01:524 (1,2,3) - Spacing doesn't help to read blue tick on (2)-nd note.I think you need to place (1) much closer to 01:01:156 (8).
01:22:873 (3) - New combo? Finish,btw.
01:28:763 (4) - Finish.
01:34:653 (4) - ^
01:41:646 - Use lower volume/soft section for this note.

Nice,star~

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

[Aleks' Easy]:
Heeey! Nice clean, sleek work you got here. Hitsound usage is nice. My only gripe though is how inaudible those timing sections at 30%. They're really difficult to hear; though fortunately it's only a minor area and I understand where you were going with that.

[Normal]:
Maaan. That's nice to see, a Normal that acts like a Normal. Kudos to you. The beginning's soft-hitnormal sound is a little bit gentle for my tastes, but really, overall it's a nice package. Keep up the good work there.

[Hard]:
Really smooth, clean. No complaints here.

[Insane]:
Niiice. It reminds me a little of MoonFragrance's maps in how I can fly through the song without fighting it. Interestingly, this pattern at first caught me in a tangle -- 01:39:438 (1,2,3,4,5) - The (1) and (2) felt too close to each other. But after another try, I was able to get it quickly. I suppose my cursor was just flying around too much -- and my sightread sort of failed me.

With that, I'm bubbling this. If you'd like to make a change, please, please, please don't hesitate! It's not like this bubble is some sacred relic that you will never get again. If you make a change, just forum PM me or something and let me know. Otherwise, let's have fun.

Night_Side wrote:

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

[Aleks' Easy]:
Heeey! Nice clean, sleek work you got here. Hitsound usage is nice. My only gripe though is how inaudible those timing sections at 30%. They're really difficult to hear; though fortunately it's only a minor area and I understand where you were going with that.

Thank you

i love kirby~~~>.< Me too :3

Garven wrote:

Didn't mod, but the artist should be Itou Kanako.

If you need help updating the artist without duplicating the map there is a thread in the wip/help forum. Im on my phone so its a pain to copy paste the link. Ill edit it in when I get a chance if you hadn't already done it by the time I get to it.

Garven wrote:

Well, time to do a real mod then.

[Aleks' Easy]
00:33:180 (1) - I really recommend against things like this in an easy difficulty since it's so short that new players won't know when it stops. Ok, fixed
00:43:119 (4) - Can you make the end of this more audible kind of like 00:54:898 (4) - whistle added, volume changed a bit
01:07:045 (1,2,3) - This kind of cutting-across motion isn't very newbie friendly. ok, fixed
I'm kind of iffy on all those short sliders too, but they're not too bad.

Garven wrote:

Well, time to do a real mod then.

[Aleks' Easy]
00:33:180 (1) - I really recommend against things like this in an easy difficulty since it's so short that new players won't know when it stops.
00:43:119 (4) - Can you make the end of this more audible kind of like 00:54:898 (4) -
01:07:045 (1,2,3) - This kind of cutting-across motion isn't very newbie friendly.
I'm kind of iffy on all those short sliders too, but they're not too bad.

[Normal]
Snap your kiai start（i think it np,01:11:094 is right）

[Hard]
Snap your kiai start（np）
00:03:364 (1) - This is rather cruel for a hard difficulty.
00:54:714 (6) - I find stacking this with the 7 slider plays much more naturally.(changed~)

[Insane]
Snap your kiai start（changed）
01:22:505 (1) - Remove new combo（done）
Strange that you finish this difficulty with a soft finish instead of a normal finish like the other ones...
The Insane was... kind of bland rhythmically. It felt like almost a constant stream of 1/2 1/2 1/2 for the entire map. Perhaps consider trying to go for a more rhythmically diverse map next time.

Garven wrote:

Um, so were changes done then? I've been waiting for a reply from you in this thread or via PM, but nothing came of it. I can revive this if you want and get this map rolling again. Let me know.

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Can't help but notice this, hehe.

Revived! Best of luck! Go go Night_Side

Garven wrote:

[Normal]
01:24:162 (1) - Odd having this as it's own combo here...（done

[Hard]
00:03:364 (1) - I still this this is rather cruel. Shape is to that it's closer to the center at least, so it's easier to hit. This is more of an Insane difficulty technique.（changed）
Check through this difficulty and make sure that the custom hit sounding is used how you like it. Felt like there were holes in it and the soft claps ended up being used a lot where I'm sure you intended for the custom sounds.

[Insane]
00:26:923 (3) - This repeat is kind of covered by the hit burst from 00:25:818 (6) - I don't have much problem with it, but I know someone else will probably have a fit, and it's easy to mitigate.（something changed
00:35:573 (12,13) - At least make this so that the end of 11 is stacked with the 12.（done
00:42:751 (5) - Some of these slider speed changes don't really make much sense to me, and there's not much structurally (mapping-wise) or musically significant to justify it to me. Care to explain?（something changed
01:18:456 (2,3) - May as well scoot these a little further apart so that they are not overlapping each other（done
01:37:966 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This seems like quite a difficult pattern for a cool down section of the song.（changed

Garven wrote:

Did a little more IRC modding concerning some hitsound volume and the last hitsound in Insane and some slider snapping in Hard. Since this was such a long time ago and quite a few fixes, I want to have this checked at least once more before we get this ranked, sooo

Rebubbled!

:U

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

I feel this is a tick-rate 2 map, and I definitely recommend it on Normal and above, because you start using red ticks for slider heads, which results in awkwardly-placed ticks, or red ticks for slider ends, which results in asymmetrical slider ticks. I don't want to change my tickrate. Don't know about Night_Side

The green approach circle kinda blends into the background image character's clothes at times. Oh, green custom approach means custom hitcircle, overlay... I think it's not necessary

[Easy]
00:29:868 (1) - Not really sure why the volume drops down to just-above-inaudible levels here. Made it specially, finish with 70% sounds terrible.
00:43:119 (4) - The music jumps out so much here that I recommend a new combo on this note. oh, okay... -, -
00:53:794 (3) - I'd break this into a note and a 1/1 slider, because there's another word on where the tick is. Noooope, my reason :
Aleks' Easy (2.34 stars, 120 notes)
Normal (3.19 stars, 140 notes). My diff is not very easier than Normal. Don't see a reasons for making it harder and increasing max score.
00:54:898 (4) - Another new combo here? Same reason as before. Don't like it, but okay
00:59:315 (4) - New combo for consistency. Okaay~

I felt a bit uncomfortable with the combo scheme here, as well as when you choose to change from one pattern to another, which really is the same issue. I'm going to walk through this map in sections to explain what I mean, looking specifically at your combos/patterns. This'll look really long, but it's just me being quite picky.

From the opening to the first break is okay. You have new combos on every measure, and in a musical section like this, it's fine. My one comment is that the pattern started by 00:08:518 (1) starts in an awkward place; the new combo is expected on the tail of the slider, not the head. I would recommend shifting this entire combo 2/1 back (it's just a 2/1 pattern anyways, so it'll fit the music regardless), and adding a single circle where the slider head used to be. Then 00:12:199 (1) can be removed and just swapped for a few more repeats on the 3 before it. This also has the advantage of "grouping" the two stubby sliders before the break into their own combo. Understand nothing. Try to explain easier ;~; Atm without changes

00:21:033 (1) - Starting here, your combos begin to follow the vocals. Good idea. okay
00:33:180 (4) - With a new combo here, you would start with a new combo with the new lyrical line, and break up this 7-note combo, which is longer than all combos before it. As well, it isolates the three notes before it, which is fine because they're a bit separate musically anyways (which you recognized and put a finish on the 3, so you could "finish" the combo there, heh). okay
00:43:119 (4) - Like I said before, this really jumps out, so it could use a new combo. If you want to stick strictly to the vocals though, no new combo is also okay. fixed already
00:49:745 (1,2,3) - This is the first "conflict", in my opinion. For consistency, the 1 should have been with the previous combo, since you did that for 00:44:591 (1,2,3,4). But since you chose to start a new pattern here, you were forced to put a new combo here. Not too bad, but removing the 2 and putting the combo on the 3 would solve this problem, and continue your pattern of new combos on the large white ticks in this section. Replaced nc on 2, didn't remove note. 2/1 here is really ugly.
00:54:898 (4) - As before. fixed already
00:59:315 (4) - New combo for new lyric, as before. okay
01:02:996 (2) - I might put a new combo on this note, because this section is similar to 00:37:966 (1,2,3,1,2,3), except with more emphasis. Since it's one pattern though, no new combo works too. meh, okay, without changes
01:08:150 (3) - I would have put the new combo on this note instead, because you choose to deviate from the vocals here (because the vocal part starts on the red tick), so that you have your combos following your patterns, rather than your combos following vocals but your patterns following the beat. I'm not a fan of (1,2) combos. So, nope here
01:18:456 (1) - Up to here is good. This is another conflict, I guess. The previous combos had a note in this same position with no new combo, but because you put a slider here, you can't put the new combo mid-slider, so you were forced to put it before where it felt natural. If you're following vocals here, it feels a bit sudden. Not too bad though. None of these are THAT bad, but they could be better, is what I'm saying. Emmm, leave as is
01:29:499 (2) - Same as 01:02:996 (2), maybe new combo here, maybe not. The rest is good. ok, without changes

...and that was probably enough text to read for an entire map, about something that didn't actually matter too much. Sorry about that.
Okaay... Really, if I had a problems with HP drain... But in Easy... Oh, something fixed anyways.