osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

There are 4 files .osb into the folder. Please remove the 3 unused files and do a full submission.

Mp3 bitrate is unrankable. Please re-encode the mp3 to 192kbps or less.

[Hard]

00:20:753 (3) - Reduce this slider by 1/4.
00:41:608 (7) - This slider should end at 00:41:939.
00:46:408 (5) - This slider just sounds wrong, extend it correctly with using 1/4. Also, add a new combo on it.
00:48:560 (1) - End this spinner 1/1 back, much better.
01:06:601 (6,1) - Even if there is a new combo, this is really unexpected...
01:09:746 (1) - Extend it a bit more and let it end at 01:10:739.
01:35:898 (1,2,3) - I don't like how they sounds, they doesn't seems to follow anything T_T Replace them with something else, please.
01:48:476 (x) - You should totally add a note here.
01:53:111 (6,7) - Stack them correctly under (5).
01:55:264 (4) - New combo.
01:58:076 (5) - There are some extra repeats that aren't needed at all, let this slider end at 01:58:408.
02:01:056 (x) - Add a note here for the same reason as 01:48:476.
02:04:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Sudden spacing change is not so good D:
02:05:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing of this pattern is really confusing and unintuitive, also stack the notes on a better way please.
02:11:649 (5) - Better to remove this slider and just add a circle at 02:11:649.
02:14:794 (x) - Add a note here for the same reason as 01:48:476.
02:16:449 (x) - ^
02:17:608 (1) - Same as 00:48:560.

[Dangerous]

89 unsnapped notes, make sure to resnap them all with going on "Timing -> Resnap All Notes".

00:08:835 (1,2) - Wrong spacing.
00:15:792 (7,8) - ^
00:49:057 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:15:374 (2,3) - Wrong spacing here too, they are too close.
01:24:643 (6,7) - ^
01:27:291 (6,7) - ^
01:35:898 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as Hard.
01:41:526 (5,6) - Wrong spacing, I guess you know why now.
01:57:995 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:58:325 (x) - Add a note here.
01:58:408 (x) - ^
01:58:574 (1,2) - Remove both.
01:59:733 (3) - New combo.
02:04:036 (5) - New combo due to spacing change.
02:04:533 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:08:340 (5,6) - Wrong spacing.
02:13:140 (4) - Remove this note.
02:19:595 (1) - Remove new combo.

Done!

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Hol die map ausser Mülltonne raus, polier sie n bissl auf und kriegse ranked... man, was ne Verschwendung die im graveyard verroten zu lassen.

Dark_Ai wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Dienstag, 5. April 2011 at 20:09:48

Artist: Cascada
Title: Dangerous (Nightcore Mix)
Tags: Techno MoonShade
BPM: 181,25
Filesize: 3159kb
Play Time: 02:18
Difficulties Available:

1. BounceBabe's Normal+ (4,13 stars, 254 notes)
2. Dangerous (4,97 stars, 404 notes)
3. Firce777's Taiko (4,83 stars, 1053 notes)
4. Hard (4,51 stars, 303 notes)
5. Jagang's Safety (2,64 stars, 112 notes)
6. MoonShade's Normal (3,49 stars, 202 notes)

Download: Cascada - Dangerous (Nightcore Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
So my first Beatmap :3 I hope you like it

Easy by Jagang
Normal by MoonShade
Normal + by BounceBabe
Taiko by Firce777
Hard &
Insane by Me

Thank you MoonShade for making the storyboard. <33
And Thank you all for the guest Diff's

Neko_Lover wrote:

hope this gets ranked

00:07:180 (2,3) - make 2 a 1/2 slider, put a 1/1 slider at 00:07:676 ending at 00:08:008 e.g http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/106630 ~ don't think this has to be done
00:09:828 (2,3) - thinking might be nicer as a slider, 00:10:821 (5) - unsure about tis one ~ no
00:43:428 (4) - move forward 1/2 end at same place? ~ I'm following the vocals here, so no ^^
00:48:559 (1) - personally i tend to avoid 1/4 anything in normals, maybe make it 1/2 repeat instead? ~ I think this way, it's more fun to play, also I think this 1/4 is as easy to catch as possible here, with a long slider before and a gap after it, so it shouldn't be a problem
01:06:104 (2) - love this slider, diff needs more like it ~ sorry? This is a normal half-round slider, there are plenty of them in my diff, but thx I guess

deadbeat wrote:

easy

00:12:145 (1,1,2) - not sure sure this is a good idea, newer players might have trouble hitting them. not sure about it,left for the moment
00:50:214 (1,1) - i'd consider making into one long slider changed
00:50:214 (1,1) - ^ same time as befor? think you mean befor the break but in my opinion its ok there
01:21:166 (1,1) - same as 00:12:145 (1,1,2) same as befor
01:35:897 (3,4,5,6,7) - imo, i'd turn into a slider changed

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Jagang's Safety]

00:14:132 (1) - A note after spinner is strongly not suggested for an easier difficulty. *fixed*
00:49:883 (7) - Remove this note, doesn't follow anything. it follows the echo of the lyrics
01:22:987 (1) - Same as 00:14:132. *fixed*

Dark_Ai wrote:

Update

And removed Jagang's Diff. He's agree with it

00:39:621 (1) - Hier vielleicht noch ein Repeat dazu? ~ wieso, es folgt doch so schön den lyrics
00:42:601 (2,3) - Ich seh keinen grund die zwei notes zu stacken. Gut ich find auch keinen sie nicht zu stacken wär aber trotzdem schöner. ~ ok o.o
00:44:918 (1) - Hier vielleicht noch ein Repeat dazu? ~ nö
01:40:863 (2,3) - *Füge hier den Vortrag über das stacken ein* ~ ok
01:43:180 (1) - Hier vielleicht noch ein Repeat dazu? ~ nö
01:53:773 (1) - ^ ~ nö

1. Nothing wrong here

Jacob wrote:

• black.jpg and pulse.jpg are unused files. Delete them. No
• Make the kiai times the same on all difficulties. I have to?


Unsnapped timing sections in Hard at 00:29:795, 00:59:640, and 01:00:613. Done
Unsnapped timing sections in Dangerous at 00:32:772 and 01:38:804. Done
Unsnapped timing sections in Normal at 00:59:640 and 01:00:613. Done

gooooo

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko checking here -w-

SB problem:
The same SB is not applicable to taiko diff. You should copy .osb to each of the solo diff .osu under [Event]. Then delete the original .osb and full submit.

[Taiko]
00:26:711 - long vocal note, slider does not fit well, use spinner or single note with empty period instead
01:20:339 - dddkd does not fit with the vocal that only appearing on white tick. ddkdk / ddddk is better
01:35:566 - same as 0:26

streamy stuffs fits with nightcore \o/, but 01:12:394 - 01:35:566 should be far more less streamy because it's the soft part in the song and you should make it significantly less streamy than the kiai part.

osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Nightcore__Dangerous.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 29028
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 46408,46904
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Dangerous (Nightcore Mix)
Artist:Cascada
Creator:Dark_Ai
Version:BounceBabe's Hard
Source:
Tags:MoonShade BounceBabe Firce777

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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0,0,"background.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,61670,71163
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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  F,1,0,300,1,0
  S,1,0,300,0.625,0.672
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  F,1,0,300,1,0
  S,1,0,300,0.625,0.672
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Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\white.jpg",320,240
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  F,0,0,83,0.4,0
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  F,0,0,83,0.4,0
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1884,331.034482758621,4,2,0,60,1,0
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26711,-200,4,1,0,80,0,0
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29690,-100,4,1,0,80,0,1
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129084,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
130325,-100,4,1,0,80,0,1
139594,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0


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Combo2 : 33,172,184
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 240,5,5

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256,192,136283,1,8
184,128,136615,1,0
112,192,136946,1,8
184,264,137277,1,0
256,192,137608,5,8
256,192,138270,1,8
256,288,138601,2,0,B|256:312,12,25,0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|4

1. the files "black.jpg" and "pulse.jpg" aren't used in the SB, delete these files?
2. Make kiai time consistent throughout the diffs
3. Remove AudioLeadIn in MoonShade's Normal
4. Change the tags in BounceBabe's Hard to "MoonShade Firce777 BounceBabe"

happy30 wrote:

[General]

1. the files "black.jpg" and "pulse.jpg" aren't used in the SB, delete these files? ok
2. Make kiai time consistent throughout the diffs meeh~ D:
3. Remove AudioLeadIn in MoonShade's Normal done
4. Change the tags in BounceBabe's Hard to "MoonShade Firce777 BounceBabe" done

Kawayi Rika wrote:

01:05:773 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make star imo,like this. Can you send me the code, maybe?


01:52:283 (7,8) - Spacing error. I don't see that is wrong ...