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Cascada - Dangerous (Nightcore Mix)
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Great map and cool Song.
Topic Starter
Done & Thank youdeadbeat wrote:
Hard
AR down 1 or 2?
00:30:188 (3) - new combo?
00:34:326 (1) - extend by 1/8 so its on the white tick
00:41:608 (7) - ^ and start it 1/2 earlier
00:47:733 (8) - extend 1/8 again
00:50:876 (x) - note here?
00:52:864 (7) - extend by 1/8 so its on the white tick
00:56:008 (x) - note here?
00:58:160 (2,6) - extend by 1/8 so its on the white tick(i'm just gonna say 1/8 again from now on ><)
01:07:760 (4) - 1/8 again
01:11:071 (2) - extend by 1/2 to the white tick
01:12:726 (2,5,3) - 1/8 again (the 3 is in the next combo)
gonna stop with the slider ending 1/8 early...what u should do is go through the map and look really carefully to make sure the ends of sliders are on either a red or white tick. making the beat snap disvisor 1/2 will help
01:27:456 (8) - extend by 1/2
01:49:139 (x) - note here?
Dangerous
also has sliders ending 1/8 early
00:35:980 (x) - note here?
00:36:147 (2,3,4,5) - down a grid(level with the 1)
00:41:438 (5) - ^
00:43:760 (6) - extend 1/2?
00:45:416 (4) - left 1 grid
00:50:533 (3,5) - move so under the 1
01:06:601 (x) - note here?
01:23:981 (3) - new combo?
01:26:629 (3) - ^
02:16:450 (6) - ^
02:18:601 (1) - remove new combo
02:19:264 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - make it one combo
not bad for a first mapgood luck
Da bitteschön
Topic Starter
du ich kann es mir nicht donwloaden o.O
Nochmal 
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Topic Starter
immer noch nicht -_____-
Topic Starter
ich hab es mehrmal versuch... aber es lässt sich einfach nicht donwloaden .__.
Jo, ich auch...MoonShade wrote:
Also ich kanns problemlos downloaden o.O
naja jz hat sie es ja
Topic Starter
Jaa ich hab's begriffen
danke mausal1994
danke mausal1994
nice map!
star~ヾ(ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ゛
star~ヾ(ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ゛
Topic Starter
Thank you
Hier bekommst du auch von mir
Viel Glück
Viel Glück
Nice map ^.^
please make more map.. its cool..
Hey~
[Generall]
Die bitrate deiner audiodatei ist 256 verkleinere sie auf 128~192
Alle diff's sollten an der gleichen stelle enden..
[Jagang's Safety]
00:09:828 (3) - Mach doch ein stilles ende des sliders... hört sich meiner meinung nach besser an
00:24:394 (1) - Keinen neuen combo hier... combo spam is nich erlaubt <.<
00:38:297 (1) - ^
00:40:945 (1,1,1,1) - Vier mal hintereinander der gleiche slider... beim spielen bissl langweilig..
00:42:270 (1) - Neuer combo weg
00:44:918 (1) - ^
00:48:559 (6) - Neuer combo?
00:50:214 (1) - Neuer combo weg
01:00:476 (1) - Combo spam >.< Ich weiß es passt...aber kann man ja nix machen
01:30:601 (3,4,5) - Die überlappung is öde.. könntest ja gleich machen wie bei 01:32:587 (2,3,4,5) - ?
01:37:221 (7) - Add Finish?
01:37:552 - Schon vorbei? ._.
Gute arbeit~
[MoonShade's normal]
00:08:008 (x) - Add note?
00:08:504 (4) - Wenn du wie oben geschrieben dort ne note hin machst lösch die hier
00:10:821 (5) - Evtl. länger machen?
Nice ich mag dein stil :3
[BounceBabe's Normal+]
Wirklich öde überlappungen hier...
Neulinge haben's hier echt schwer.. manchmal muss man hier wirklich schnell "klicken" sag ich jetzt mal damit man alles trifft.. versuch das zu ändern..
00:04:201 (5) - Passt nicht zur stimme/melodie what ever
00:06:518 (4) - Der circle wird vom "300/100/50" dingens da so gut wie unsichtbar gemacht für anfänger..
00:07:842 (4,5) - ^
00:10:490 (5,6) - ^
00:15:125 (4,5,6) - Blöd überlappt.. ziemlich schwer für neu einsteiger so was zu machen..
00:16:780 (2) - Der circle wird vom "300/100/50" dingens da so gut wie unsichtbar gemacht für anfänger..
00:27:042 (3,4,5,6,7) - Geht ja mal gar nicht
00:34:987 (1) - Clap passt hier nicht
00:37:635 (6) - ^
00:47:235 (3,4,5,6) - :/
01:12:063 (1) - Passt weder zum text, melodie bla bla du weißt ja..
01:13:387 (2,3,4,5,6) - Schon wieder so was ekelhaftes ._.
01:38:545 (1,1) - Combo spam..
Ziemlich viele "unsichtbare" circle hier.. die von 300/100/50er überdeckt werden.. mach die map ein wenig einfach.. ja ich weiß normal "+" aber dennoch sollte sie einfacher sein..
Aaaaaber... mir gefallen deine muster
[Hard]
Ehhh... distanc snap? ._.
Fix mal alle spacing fehler.. nutze den distanc snap (rechts unten im editor modus)
[Dangerous]
Das selbe wie oben..
00:03:208 - Jede map startet hier... warum auch nicht die?
( 00:27:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - OLOLOLO! Stream <3 ... ignorier das xD
Jou~
Aber für deine erste map ganz gut
[Generall]
Die bitrate deiner audiodatei ist 256 verkleinere sie auf 128~192
Alle diff's sollten an der gleichen stelle enden..
[Jagang's Safety]
00:09:828 (3) - Mach doch ein stilles ende des sliders... hört sich meiner meinung nach besser an
00:24:394 (1) - Keinen neuen combo hier... combo spam is nich erlaubt <.<
00:38:297 (1) - ^
00:40:945 (1,1,1,1) - Vier mal hintereinander der gleiche slider... beim spielen bissl langweilig..
00:42:270 (1) - Neuer combo weg
00:44:918 (1) - ^
00:48:559 (6) - Neuer combo?
00:50:214 (1) - Neuer combo weg
01:00:476 (1) - Combo spam >.< Ich weiß es passt...aber kann man ja nix machen
01:30:601 (3,4,5) - Die überlappung is öde.. könntest ja gleich machen wie bei 01:32:587 (2,3,4,5) - ?
01:37:221 (7) - Add Finish?
01:37:552 - Schon vorbei? ._.
Gute arbeit~
[MoonShade's normal]
00:08:008 (x) - Add note?
00:08:504 (4) - Wenn du wie oben geschrieben dort ne note hin machst lösch die hier
00:10:821 (5) - Evtl. länger machen?
Nice ich mag dein stil :3
[BounceBabe's Normal+]
Wirklich öde überlappungen hier...
Neulinge haben's hier echt schwer.. manchmal muss man hier wirklich schnell "klicken" sag ich jetzt mal damit man alles trifft.. versuch das zu ändern..
00:04:201 (5) - Passt nicht zur stimme/melodie what ever
00:06:518 (4) - Der circle wird vom "300/100/50" dingens da so gut wie unsichtbar gemacht für anfänger..
00:07:842 (4,5) - ^
00:10:490 (5,6) - ^
00:15:125 (4,5,6) - Blöd überlappt.. ziemlich schwer für neu einsteiger so was zu machen..
00:16:780 (2) - Der circle wird vom "300/100/50" dingens da so gut wie unsichtbar gemacht für anfänger..
00:27:042 (3,4,5,6,7) - Geht ja mal gar nicht
00:34:987 (1) - Clap passt hier nicht
00:37:635 (6) - ^
00:47:235 (3,4,5,6) - :/
01:12:063 (1) - Passt weder zum text, melodie bla bla du weißt ja..
01:13:387 (2,3,4,5,6) - Schon wieder so was ekelhaftes ._.
01:38:545 (1,1) - Combo spam..
Ziemlich viele "unsichtbare" circle hier.. die von 300/100/50er überdeckt werden.. mach die map ein wenig einfach.. ja ich weiß normal "+" aber dennoch sollte sie einfacher sein..
Aaaaaber... mir gefallen deine muster
[Hard]
Ehhh... distanc snap? ._.
Fix mal alle spacing fehler.. nutze den distanc snap (rechts unten im editor modus)
[Dangerous]
Das selbe wie oben..
00:03:208 - Jede map startet hier... warum auch nicht die?
( 00:27:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - OLOLOLO! Stream <3 ... ignorier das xD
Jou~
Aber für deine erste map ganz gut
Topic Starter
Gut hab Anfang und ende mal beachtet...
und zum Distance snap hab bisschen was geändert aber nicht alles
und zum Distance snap hab bisschen was geändert aber nicht alles
lennox989 wrote:
[Generall]
Die bitrate deiner audiodatei ist 256 verkleinere sie auf 128~192
Alle diff's sollten an der gleichen stelle enden..
Das auch beachtet?
fixed some sliders for you. don't kudo
Download: Cascada - Dangerous (Nightcore Mix) (Dark_Ai) [Hard].osu
Download: Cascada - Dangerous (Nightcore Mix) (Dark_Ai) [Hard].osu
Ist ganz schön geworden
♫Ein Stern, der meinen Namen trägt, geb ich dir für die Map...♫
♫Ein Stern, der meinen Namen trägt, geb ich dir für die Map...♫
Topic Starter
lennox: Mach ich nich x'D
deadbeat: Thank you very much :3
und danke Athy
boah wenn ich das höre wie du singst . . . xDD
deadbeat: Thank you very much :3
und danke Athy
boah wenn ich das höre wie du singst . . . xDD
Dark_Ai wrote:
lennox: Mach ich nich x'D
deadbeat: Thank you very much :3
und danke Athy
boah wenn ich das höre wie du singst . . . xDD
Die Bitrate MUSS 128 oder 192 betragen sonst ist es unrankable... scheint so als musst du es doch machen
I don't know if it matters or not but the epilepsy warning hides the first note on [Dangerous].
Nice map
Nice map
nice map, i like it
may i have a taiko diff
star~
may i have a taiko diff
star~
So verspätet aber da
Gute map^^
Gute map^^
Dark_Ai, füg am besten in allen Diffs noch ne Lead-In Zeit ein (Song-Setup -> Audio) damit die Epilepsy Warnung nicht die ersten Noten verdeckt.Xafnia wrote:
I don't know if it matters or not but the epilepsy warning hides the first note on [Dangerous].
Nice map
Download: Cascada - Dangerous (Nightcore Mix) (Dark_Ai) [Jagang's Safety].osulennox989 wrote:
[Jagang's Safety]
00:09:828 (3) - Mach doch ein stilles ende des sliders... hört sich meiner meinung nach besser an geschmackssache,habs mal übernommen
00:24:394 (1) - Keinen neuen combo hier... combo spam is nich erlaubt <.< korrigier mich wenn ich falsch liege aber das ist noch kein spam O_o
00:38:297 (1) - ^ nein
00:40:945 (1,1,1,1) - Vier mal hintereinander der gleiche slider... beim spielen bissl langweilig.. finde ich nicht,vorallem da es easy ist
00:42:270 (1) - Neuer combo weg nein
00:44:918 (1) - ^ nein
00:48:559 (6) - Neuer combo? nein
00:50:214 (1) - Neuer combo weg nein
01:00:476 (1) - Combo spam >.< Ich weiß es passt...aber kann man ja nix machen wenn es passt ist combospam erlaubt
01:30:601 (3,4,5) - Die überlappung is öde.. könntest ja gleich machen wie bei 01:32:587 (2,3,4,5) - ? bleibt so
01:37:221 (7) - Add Finish? fixed
01:37:552 - Schon vorbei? ._. ja
Gute arbeit~
zu den combos möchte ich erst noch andere rückmeldungen bekommen
Update fürs .osb, damit es auch in der Lead-In Zeit schwarz ist.Download: Cascada - Dangerous (Nightcore Mix) (Dark_Ai).osb
Mooow!
Include it if there is some Space
Hope you like it :3
Download: Cascada - Dangerous (Nightcore Mix) (Dark_Ai) [Aqua's D-D-Dangerous].osu
Include it if there is some Space
Hope you like it :3
Download: Cascada - Dangerous (Nightcore Mix) (Dark_Ai) [Aqua's D-D-Dangerous].osu
your weclome.Dark_Ai wrote:
deadbeat: Thank you very much :3
however more bad news. ranking only allows a maximum of 6 diffs :<
you need to remove one of the diffs
[BounceBabe's Normal+]
Wirklich öde überlappungen hier...
Neulinge haben's hier echt schwer.. manchmal muss man hier wirklich schnell "klicken" sag ich jetzt mal damit man alles trifft.. versuch das zu ändern..
00:04:201 (5) - Passt nicht zur stimme/melodie what ever Findest du? Also ich mach das als Akzent damit es nich so langweilig is
00:06:518 (4) - Der circle wird vom "300/100/50" dingens da so gut wie unsichtbar gemacht für anfänger.. Es is ja nicht für Anfänger *-*
00:07:842 (4,5) - ^
00:10:490 (5,6) - ^
00:15:125 (4,5,6) - Blöd überlappt.. ziemlich schwer für neu einsteiger so was zu machen..
00:16:780 (2) - Der circle wird vom "300/100/50" dingens da so gut wie unsichtbar gemacht für anfänger..
00:27:042 (3,4,5,6,7) - Geht ja mal gar nicht
00:34:987 (1) - Clap passt hier nicht
00:37:635 (6) - ^
00:47:235 (3,4,5,6) - :/
01:12:063 (1) - Passt weder zum text, melodie bla bla du weißt ja..
01:13:387 (2,3,4,5,6) - Schon wieder so was ekelhaftes ._.
01:38:545 (1,1) - Combo spam.. Akzent für die 2 HitSounds
Ziemlich viele "unsichtbare" circle hier.. die von 300/100/50er überdeckt werden.. mach die map ein wenig einfach.. ja ich weiß normal "+" aber dennoch sollte sie einfacher sein..
Aaaaaber... mir gefallen deine muster
Wirklich öde überlappungen hier...
Neulinge haben's hier echt schwer.. manchmal muss man hier wirklich schnell "klicken" sag ich jetzt mal damit man alles trifft.. versuch das zu ändern..
00:04:201 (5) - Passt nicht zur stimme/melodie what ever Findest du? Also ich mach das als Akzent damit es nich so langweilig is
00:06:518 (4) - Der circle wird vom "300/100/50" dingens da so gut wie unsichtbar gemacht für anfänger.. Es is ja nicht für Anfänger *-*
00:07:842 (4,5) - ^
00:10:490 (5,6) - ^
00:15:125 (4,5,6) - Blöd überlappt.. ziemlich schwer für neu einsteiger so was zu machen..
00:16:780 (2) - Der circle wird vom "300/100/50" dingens da so gut wie unsichtbar gemacht für anfänger..
00:27:042 (3,4,5,6,7) - Geht ja mal gar nicht
00:34:987 (1) - Clap passt hier nicht
00:37:635 (6) - ^
00:47:235 (3,4,5,6) - :/
01:12:063 (1) - Passt weder zum text, melodie bla bla du weißt ja..
01:13:387 (2,3,4,5,6) - Schon wieder so was ekelhaftes ._.
01:38:545 (1,1) - Combo spam.. Akzent für die 2 HitSounds
Ziemlich viele "unsichtbare" circle hier.. die von 300/100/50er überdeckt werden.. mach die map ein wenig einfach.. ja ich weiß normal "+" aber dennoch sollte sie einfacher sein..
Aaaaaber... mir gefallen deine muster
Hier~
Noch'n paar Änderungen gemacht
Noch'n paar Änderungen gemacht
Hi ;D
Du darfst nicht mehr wie5 6 Diffs haben :/
komischerweise hat ich in osu auch nur 5 ._.
naja wenn du nurnoch5 6 Diffs hast mod ichs dir nochmal ;D
Du darfst nicht mehr wie
komischerweise hat ich in osu auch nur 5 ._.
naja wenn du nurnoch
Topic Starter
okay...
ein Diff weniger
ein Diff weniger
Jagang BounceBabe and Firce777 into tags (don't kudo)
Topic Starter
I have they tags inside o.O
http://puu.sh/Svu
http://puu.sh/Svu
are the tags in all the diffs?Dark_Ai wrote:
Tags: Techno MoonShade
Topic Starter
So all in the Tags ^^
muh
Taiko diff is nich dabei beim download?
[Jagang's Safety]
Gut, vlt zuende mappen oder das restliche storyboard bei der diff rausnehmen damit mans nich wegdrücken muss ^^
[MoonShade's Normal]
00:07:180 (2) - ders komisch
00:08:173 (3,4) - Slider von (3) zu (4) machen?
01:22:987 - Circle dazu
[BounceBabe's Normal+]
is ok, allerdings mag ich den mapping stil nich so
[Hard]
00:46:408 (5) - Neuer Combo
00:58:822 (3,4,5,6) - 1 Grid nach oben
01:09:746 (1) - ders komisch
01:49:636 (5) - Neuer Combo
02:16:614 (5) - ^
is doch schon einige besser geworden ^^
[Insane]
00:11:483 (8) - der passt nich wirklich
00:21:593 (7) - letzte slider-punkt 1 grid nach links
01:41:857 (6) - auf der timeline auf den vorderen roten strich verschieben
an sich gut, aber deine anordnung gefällt mir nicht ^.^
Gute map, bekommst nen Stern~
Taiko diff is nich dabei beim download?
[Jagang's Safety]
Gut, vlt zuende mappen oder das restliche storyboard bei der diff rausnehmen damit mans nich wegdrücken muss ^^
[MoonShade's Normal]
00:07:180 (2) - ders komisch
00:08:173 (3,4) - Slider von (3) zu (4) machen?
01:22:987 - Circle dazu
[BounceBabe's Normal+]
is ok, allerdings mag ich den mapping stil nich so
[Hard]
00:46:408 (5) - Neuer Combo
00:58:822 (3,4,5,6) - 1 Grid nach oben
01:09:746 (1) - ders komisch
01:49:636 (5) - Neuer Combo
02:16:614 (5) - ^
is doch schon einige besser geworden ^^
[Insane]
00:11:483 (8) - der passt nich wirklich
00:21:593 (7) - letzte slider-punkt 1 grid nach links
01:41:857 (6) - auf der timeline auf den vorderen roten strich verschieben
an sich gut, aber deine anordnung gefällt mir nicht ^.^
Gute map, bekommst nen Stern~
Download: Cascada - Dangerous (Nightcore Mix) (Dark_Ai) [MoonShade's Normal].osuKillerRind wrote:
[MoonShade's Normal]
00:07:180 (2) - ders komisch ~nein o.o
00:08:173 (3,4) - Slider von (3) zu (4) machen? ~ich finds gut so wies ist
01:22:987 - Circle dazu ~ok
Sorry for the big delay
[Overall]
There are 4 files .osb into the folder. Please remove the 3 unused files and do a full submission.
Mp3 bitrate is unrankable. Please re-encode the mp3 to 192kbps or less.
[Difficulties]
[Jagang's Safety]
01:21:166 (1) - Start this spinner here -> 01:21:001, like you did on the other part.
01:38:876 (x) - Add a note here with a finish, so there is a good end for this difficulty.
[BounceBabe's Normal+]
Tags on this difficulty are different from the others, please make sure to add the same.
00:09:828 (2,3,4,5,6) - This spacing is absolutely wrong and confusing as hell, please change it.
00:27:042 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ You can't be serious...
01:13:387 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Same here...
01:24:642 (4) - Slider repeat is completely hidden.
01:38:876 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:42:518 (7) - This doesn't follow anything D:
[Hard]
00:20:753 (3) - Reduce this slider by 1/4.
00:41:608 (7) - This slider should end at 00:41:939.
00:46:408 (5) - This slider just sounds wrong, extend it correctly with using 1/4. Also, add a new combo on it.
00:48:560 (1) - End this spinner 1/1 back, much better.
01:06:601 (6,1) - Even if there is a new combo, this is really unexpected...
01:09:746 (1) - Extend it a bit more and let it end at 01:10:739.
01:35:898 (1,2,3) - I don't like how they sounds, they doesn't seems to follow anything T_T Replace them with something else, please.
01:48:476 (x) - You should totally add a note here.
01:53:111 (6,7) - Stack them correctly under (5).
01:55:264 (4) - New combo.
01:58:076 (5) - There are some extra repeats that aren't needed at all, let this slider end at 01:58:408.
02:01:056 (x) - Add a note here for the same reason as 01:48:476.
02:04:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Sudden spacing change is not so good D:
02:05:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing of this pattern is really confusing and unintuitive, also stack the notes on a better way please.
02:11:649 (5) - Better to remove this slider and just add a circle at 02:11:649.
02:14:794 (x) - Add a note here for the same reason as 01:48:476.
02:16:449 (x) - ^
02:17:608 (1) - Same as 00:48:560.
[Dangerous]
89 unsnapped notes, make sure to resnap them all with going on "Timing -> Resnap All Notes".
00:08:835 (1,2) - Wrong spacing.
00:15:792 (7,8) - ^
00:49:057 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:15:374 (2,3) - Wrong spacing here too, they are too close.
01:24:643 (6,7) - ^
01:27:291 (6,7) - ^
01:35:898 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as Hard.
01:41:526 (5,6) - Wrong spacing, I guess you know why now.
01:57:995 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:58:325 (x) - Add a note here.
01:58:408 (x) - ^
01:58:574 (1,2) - Remove both.
01:59:733 (3) - New combo.
02:04:036 (5) - New combo due to spacing change.
02:04:533 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:08:340 (5,6) - Wrong spacing.
02:13:140 (4) - Remove this note.
02:19:595 (1) - Remove new combo.
Yeah, that's it I think... You still need a lot of work on these 3 difficulties I pointed out mostly, can't star yet until this will improve
Keep up the good work, let me know when you've fixed everything.
[Overall]
There are 4 files .osb into the folder. Please remove the 3 unused files and do a full submission.
Mp3 bitrate is unrankable. Please re-encode the mp3 to 192kbps or less.
[Difficulties]
[Jagang's Safety]
01:21:166 (1) - Start this spinner here -> 01:21:001, like you did on the other part.
01:38:876 (x) - Add a note here with a finish, so there is a good end for this difficulty.
[BounceBabe's Normal+]
Tags on this difficulty are different from the others, please make sure to add the same.
00:09:828 (2,3,4,5,6) - This spacing is absolutely wrong and confusing as hell, please change it.
00:27:042 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ You can't be serious...
01:13:387 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Same here...
01:24:642 (4) - Slider repeat is completely hidden.
01:38:876 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:42:518 (7) - This doesn't follow anything D:
[Hard]
00:20:753 (3) - Reduce this slider by 1/4.
00:41:608 (7) - This slider should end at 00:41:939.
00:46:408 (5) - This slider just sounds wrong, extend it correctly with using 1/4. Also, add a new combo on it.
00:48:560 (1) - End this spinner 1/1 back, much better.
01:06:601 (6,1) - Even if there is a new combo, this is really unexpected...
01:09:746 (1) - Extend it a bit more and let it end at 01:10:739.
01:35:898 (1,2,3) - I don't like how they sounds, they doesn't seems to follow anything T_T Replace them with something else, please.
01:48:476 (x) - You should totally add a note here.
01:53:111 (6,7) - Stack them correctly under (5).
01:55:264 (4) - New combo.
01:58:076 (5) - There are some extra repeats that aren't needed at all, let this slider end at 01:58:408.
02:01:056 (x) - Add a note here for the same reason as 01:48:476.
02:04:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Sudden spacing change is not so good D:
02:05:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing of this pattern is really confusing and unintuitive, also stack the notes on a better way please.
02:11:649 (5) - Better to remove this slider and just add a circle at 02:11:649.
02:14:794 (x) - Add a note here for the same reason as 01:48:476.
02:16:449 (x) - ^
02:17:608 (1) - Same as 00:48:560.
[Dangerous]
89 unsnapped notes, make sure to resnap them all with going on "Timing -> Resnap All Notes".
00:08:835 (1,2) - Wrong spacing.
00:15:792 (7,8) - ^
00:49:057 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:15:374 (2,3) - Wrong spacing here too, they are too close.
01:24:643 (6,7) - ^
01:27:291 (6,7) - ^
01:35:898 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as Hard.
01:41:526 (5,6) - Wrong spacing, I guess you know why now.
01:57:995 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:58:325 (x) - Add a note here.
01:58:408 (x) - ^
01:58:574 (1,2) - Remove both.
01:59:733 (3) - New combo.
02:04:036 (5) - New combo due to spacing change.
02:04:533 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:08:340 (5,6) - Wrong spacing.
02:13:140 (4) - Remove this note.
02:19:595 (1) - Remove new combo.
Yeah, that's it I think... You still need a lot of work on these 3 difficulties I pointed out mostly, can't star yet until this will improve
Keep up the good work, let me know when you've fixed everything.[BounceBabe's Normal+]
Tags on this difficulty are different from the others, please make sure to add the same.
00:09:828 (2,3,4,5,6) - This spacing is absolutely wrong and confusing as hell, please change it.
00:27:042 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ You can't be serious... I am serious...
01:13:387 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Same here... yeah
01:24:642 (4) - Slider repeat is completely hidden. Fixed
01:38:876 (1) - Remove new combo. Fixed
01:42:518 (7) - This doesn't follow anything D:[/color] What do you mean?
Tags on this difficulty are different from the others, please make sure to add the same.
00:09:828 (2,3,4,5,6) - This spacing is absolutely wrong and confusing as hell, please change it.
00:27:042 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ You can't be serious... I am serious...
01:13:387 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Same here... yeah
01:24:642 (4) - Slider repeat is completely hidden. Fixed
01:38:876 (1) - Remove new combo. Fixed
01:42:518 (7) - This doesn't follow anything D:[/color] What do you mean?
So hier nochmal
Topic Starter
osuplayer111 wrote:
[Overall]
There are 4 files .osb into the folder. Please remove the 3 unused files and do a full submission.
Mp3 bitrate is unrankable. Please re-encode the mp3 to 192kbps or less.
[Hard]
00:20:753 (3) - Reduce this slider by 1/4.
00:41:608 (7) - This slider should end at 00:41:939.
00:46:408 (5) - This slider just sounds wrong, extend it correctly with using 1/4. Also, add a new combo on it.
00:48:560 (1) - End this spinner 1/1 back, much better.
01:06:601 (6,1) - Even if there is a new combo, this is really unexpected...
01:09:746 (1) - Extend it a bit more and let it end at 01:10:739.
01:35:898 (1,2,3) - I don't like how they sounds, they doesn't seems to follow anything T_T Replace them with something else, please.
01:48:476 (x) - You should totally add a note here.
01:53:111 (6,7) - Stack them correctly under (5).
01:55:264 (4) - New combo.
01:58:076 (5) - There are some extra repeats that aren't needed at all, let this slider end at 01:58:408.
02:01:056 (x) - Add a note here for the same reason as 01:48:476.
02:04:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Sudden spacing change is not so good D:
02:05:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing of this pattern is really confusing and unintuitive, also stack the notes on a better way please.
02:11:649 (5) - Better to remove this slider and just add a circle at 02:11:649.
02:14:794 (x) - Add a note here for the same reason as 01:48:476.
02:16:449 (x) - ^
02:17:608 (1) - Same as 00:48:560.
[Dangerous]
89 unsnapped notes, make sure to resnap them all with going on "Timing -> Resnap All Notes".
00:08:835 (1,2) - Wrong spacing.
00:15:792 (7,8) - ^
00:49:057 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:15:374 (2,3) - Wrong spacing here too, they are too close.
01:24:643 (6,7) - ^
01:27:291 (6,7) - ^
01:35:898 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as Hard.
01:41:526 (5,6) - Wrong spacing, I guess you know why now.
01:57:995 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:58:325 (x) - Add a note here.
01:58:408 (x) - ^
01:58:574 (1,2) - Remove both.
01:59:733 (3) - New combo.
02:04:036 (5) - New combo due to spacing change.
02:04:533 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:08:340 (5,6) - Wrong spacing.
02:13:140 (4) - Remove this note.
02:19:595 (1) - Remove new combo.
Done!
star▲¯
Topic Starter
Oh Thank you
It's good. You've got one more star
Hol die map ausser Mülltonne raus, polier sie n bissl auf und kriegse ranked... man, was ne Verschwendung die im graveyard verroten zu lassen.
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan wrote:
Hol die map ausser Mülltonne raus, polier sie n bissl auf und kriegse ranked... man, was ne Verschwendung die im graveyard verroten zu lassen.
Aufpolier, na was soll man da denn machen? :O
Revived.
Topic Starter
Have many thanks <3
*likes this map* and another star :3
Topic Starter
Thank you very much
aber naturlich !!! XDD
Topic Starter
Danke
Dark_Ai wrote:
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Dienstag, 5. April 2011 at 20:09:48
Artist: Cascada
Title: Dangerous (Nightcore Mix)
Tags: Techno MoonShade
BPM: 181,25
Filesize: 3159kb
Play Time: 02:18
Difficulties Available:Download: Cascada - Dangerous (Nightcore Mix)
- BounceBabe's Normal+ (4,13 stars, 254 notes)
- Dangerous (4,97 stars, 404 notes)
- Firce777's Taiko (4,83 stars, 1053 notes)
- Hard (4,51 stars, 303 notes)
- Jagang's Safety (2,64 stars, 112 notes)
- MoonShade's Normal (3,49 stars, 202 notes)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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So my first Beatmap :3 I hope you like it
Easy by Jagang
Normal by MoonShade
Normal + by BounceBabe
Taiko by Firce777
Hard &
Insane by Me
Thank you MoonShade for making the storyboard. <33
And Thank you all for the guest Diff's
Hey Ai,
ich gib dir mal nen Star
ich gib dir mal nen Star
Topic Starter
Gamer: DANKE
Gute Map
~Star~
~Star~
Finally getting to this from my mod queue.
Moonshade's normal:
00:07:180 (2) - Something about this bothers me. Shorten one repeat?
00:19:594 (5) - Sounds better 1/2 beat back
00:22:242 (4) - ^
Bouncebabe's normal+:
Some of the sliders that repeat once have their repeats placed somewhere without a beat, and then have a clap added. For instance, 00:34:987 (1,6). This just seems unnatural.
00:27:042 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Very unintuitive because of different timing for the same location, and stacking obscures it more.
01:13:387 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
Hard:
00:30:188 (4) - Kinda close to previous note.
00:46:408 (5) - Shorten a half beat
01:16:862 (5) - Delete, or move forward a half beat and position accordingly
01:24:312 (5) - 1 Grid down?
01:50:297 (5) - Might as well stack this under (4)
01:52:118 (4) - Too far from (5)
01:55:759 (2) - Jump here is random and very unexpected.
02:10:987 (1,2,3,4,5) - Asymmetrical
Dangerous:
00:24:725 (7,8) - Too close together.
00:39:787 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move forward 1/2 beat
00:40:614- Add a circle
00:41:608- ^
00:41:939- ^
00:44:918 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move forward 1/2 beat
01:20:670 (8) - make this parallel to (7)
01:41:194 (3,4,5,6) - Inconsistent spacing, try fixing in grid level 4
01:43:180 (1,2,3,4) - ^
I really enjoyed the SB, but I thought some of the timings were confusing based on the song.
Starred!
Moonshade's normal:
00:07:180 (2) - Something about this bothers me. Shorten one repeat?
00:19:594 (5) - Sounds better 1/2 beat back
00:22:242 (4) - ^
Bouncebabe's normal+:
Some of the sliders that repeat once have their repeats placed somewhere without a beat, and then have a clap added. For instance, 00:34:987 (1,6). This just seems unnatural.
00:27:042 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Very unintuitive because of different timing for the same location, and stacking obscures it more.
01:13:387 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
Hard:
00:30:188 (4) - Kinda close to previous note.
00:46:408 (5) - Shorten a half beat
01:16:862 (5) - Delete, or move forward a half beat and position accordingly
01:24:312 (5) - 1 Grid down?
01:50:297 (5) - Might as well stack this under (4)
01:52:118 (4) - Too far from (5)
01:55:759 (2) - Jump here is random and very unexpected.
02:10:987 (1,2,3,4,5) - Asymmetrical
Dangerous:
00:24:725 (7,8) - Too close together.
00:39:787 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move forward 1/2 beat
00:40:614- Add a circle
00:41:608- ^
00:41:939- ^
00:44:918 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move forward 1/2 beat
01:20:670 (8) - make this parallel to (7)
01:41:194 (3,4,5,6) - Inconsistent spacing, try fixing in grid level 4
01:43:180 (1,2,3,4) - ^
I really enjoyed the SB, but I thought some of the timings were confusing based on the song.
Starred!
Time to update 
Topic Starter
Update =)
Hi
[storyboard]
remove pulse.jpg and black.jpg, they can be replaced by other pictures or sb scripts.
and use this .osb file (I didn't change the effects)
If you have any problem about it, just PM me
BONUS 80000!
Download: Cascada - Dangerous (Nightcore Mix) (Dark_Ai).osb
[storyboard]
remove pulse.jpg and black.jpg, they can be replaced by other pictures or sb scripts.
and use this .osb file
(I didn't change the effects)If you have any problem about it, just PM me
BONUS 80000!
Download: Cascada - Dangerous (Nightcore Mix) (Dark_Ai).osb
star~
very nice map o.O
hope this gets ranked
Topic Starter
I hope it too :>Neko_Lover wrote:
hope this gets ranked
lol hab dir kein stern gegeben -.-
Topic Starter
jetzt schon ^.^ danke ^-^
Topic Starter
Sekai \>w</ <3
all just ideas, not the best at modding sorry but hopefully some of it helps
general
the kiai time in danergous is different to the others and the normal is missing a kiai time at the end. please make them all the same
bouncebabe and jagang are missing tags
easy
00:12:145 (1,1,2) - not sure sure this is a good idea, newer players might have trouble hitting them.
00:50:214 (1,1) - i'd consider making into one long slider
00:50:214 (1,1) - ^
01:21:166 (1,1) - same as 00:12:145 (1,1,2)
01:35:897 (3,4,5,6,7) - imo, i'd turn into a slider
normal
00:07:180 (2,3) - make 2 a 1/2 slider, put a 1/1 slider at 00:07:676 ending at 00:08:008 e.g http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/106630
00:09:828 (2,3) - thinking might be nicer as a slider, 00:10:821 (5) - unsure about tis one
00:43:428 (4) - move forward 1/2 end at same place?
00:48:559 (1) - personally i tend to avoid 1/4 anything in normals, maybe make it 1/2 repeat instead?
01:06:104 (2) - love this slider, diff needs more like it
01:41:690 (4) - move forward 1/2 end at same place?
01:57:414 (1) - maybe make it 1/2 repeat instead?
02:13:470 (4) - move forward 1/2 end at same place?
02:18:601 (1) - maybe make is 1/2 repeat instead?
hard
00:15:456 - note here?
00:27:373 (4,5,6) - you could possibly change this into a 1/4 repeat slider
01:25:966 (2,4) - line up
01:27:290 (6,8) - ^
01:27:952 (8,10) - ^
01:31:925 (5) - new combo
01:37:883- i'd say either map the "gimmie a" or remove 01:38:545 (1)
01:49:139 (1) - i dunno, this just feels out of place D: doesn't need changing, but its up to you
01:58:408 (1) - remove and put break in there?
02:10:326 (1,2,3,4) - this is just random sorry, seems really out of place when you look at the rest of the map
Insane
00:50:876 (5) - new combo
00:51:207 (1) - remove new combo
01:35:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this doesn't sound right, maybe remove it all and put spinner at 01:35:732 ending at 01:37:221. or triplets. that could work too
01:39:207 (1) - line up under the 4,5
01:44:835 - note here?
01:48:476 - ^
01:50:297 (1) - remove new combo
01:51:125 (2) - new combo
01:52:118 (6,7,8) - line up with the 5
map is looking good also have no idea about tiako sorry
general
the kiai time in danergous is different to the others and the normal is missing a kiai time at the end. please make them all the same
bouncebabe and jagang are missing tags
easy
00:12:145 (1,1,2) - not sure sure this is a good idea, newer players might have trouble hitting them.
00:50:214 (1,1) - i'd consider making into one long slider
00:50:214 (1,1) - ^
01:21:166 (1,1) - same as 00:12:145 (1,1,2)
01:35:897 (3,4,5,6,7) - imo, i'd turn into a slider
normal
00:07:180 (2,3) - make 2 a 1/2 slider, put a 1/1 slider at 00:07:676 ending at 00:08:008 e.g http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/106630
00:09:828 (2,3) - thinking might be nicer as a slider, 00:10:821 (5) - unsure about tis one
00:43:428 (4) - move forward 1/2 end at same place?
00:48:559 (1) - personally i tend to avoid 1/4 anything in normals, maybe make it 1/2 repeat instead?
01:06:104 (2) - love this slider, diff needs more like it
01:41:690 (4) - move forward 1/2 end at same place?
01:57:414 (1) - maybe make it 1/2 repeat instead?
02:13:470 (4) - move forward 1/2 end at same place?
02:18:601 (1) - maybe make is 1/2 repeat instead?
hard
00:15:456 - note here?
00:27:373 (4,5,6) - you could possibly change this into a 1/4 repeat slider
01:25:966 (2,4) - line up
01:27:290 (6,8) - ^
01:27:952 (8,10) - ^
01:31:925 (5) - new combo
01:37:883- i'd say either map the "gimmie a" or remove 01:38:545 (1)
01:49:139 (1) - i dunno, this just feels out of place D: doesn't need changing, but its up to you
01:58:408 (1) - remove and put break in there?
02:10:326 (1,2,3,4) - this is just random sorry, seems really out of place when you look at the rest of the map
Insane
00:50:876 (5) - new combo
00:51:207 (1) - remove new combo
01:35:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this doesn't sound right, maybe remove it all and put spinner at 01:35:732 ending at 01:37:221. or triplets. that could work too
01:39:207 (1) - line up under the 4,5
01:44:835 - note here?
01:48:476 - ^
01:50:297 (1) - remove new combo
01:51:125 (2) - new combo
01:52:118 (6,7,8) - line up with the 5
map is looking good also have no idea about tiako sorry
Update
Topic Starter
Update Babe's and mine. Wait Jagang and Moonshade ;P
00:07:180 (2,3) - make 2 a 1/2 slider, put a 1/1 slider at 00:07:676 ending at 00:08:008 e.g http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/106630 ~ don't think this has to be doneThx for your mod :3
00:09:828 (2,3) - thinking might be nicer as a slider, 00:10:821 (5) - unsure about tis one ~ no
00:43:428 (4) - move forward 1/2 end at same place? ~ I'm following the vocals here, so no ^^
00:48:559 (1) - personally i tend to avoid 1/4 anything in normals, maybe make it 1/2 repeat instead? ~ I think this way, it's more fun to play, also I think this 1/4 is as easy to catch as possible here, with a long slider before and a gap after it, so it shouldn't be a problem
01:06:104 (2) - love this slider, diff needs more like it ~ sorry? This is a normal half-round slider, there are plenty of them in my diff, but thx I guess
*fixed*deadbeat wrote:
easy
00:12:145 (1,1,2) - not sure sure this is a good idea, newer players might have trouble hitting them. not sure about it,left for the moment
00:50:214 (1,1) - i'd consider making into one long slider changed
00:50:214 (1,1) - ^ same time as befor? think you mean befor the break but in my opinion its ok there
01:21:166 (1,1) - same as 00:12:145 (1,1,2) same as befor
01:35:897 (3,4,5,6,7) - imo, i'd turn into a slider changed
Download: Cascada - Dangerous (Nightcore Mix) (Dark_Ai) [Jagang's Safety].osu
Topic Starter
Updated :3
[Jagang's Safety]
00:14:132 (1) - A note after spinner is strongly not suggested for an easier difficulty.
00:49:883 (7) - Remove this note, doesn't follow anything.
01:22:987 (1) - Same as 00:14:132.
[MoonShade's Normal]
01:22:987 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is a bit inconsistent here, please fix it.
[BounceBabe's Hard]
01:13:387 (2,3,4,5) - Make the spacing consistent here, looks weird how it is now.
01:37:883 (1,2) - These notes are way too close. Also, add a New combo on (2).
[Firce777's Taiko]
The offset on this difficulty is different from the others. Please make sure to change it and to resnap all notes after that.
[Dangerous]
Adjust the Audio Lead-In to 1500.
00:09:166 (2,3) - This sudden spacing change might be confusing.
00:50:876 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing.
00:54:518 (3,4,5) - ^
01:10:739 (13,1) - Spacing. They are way too close.
01:39:539 (5,6) - Another sudden spacing change that I really don't like.
01:41:194 (3,4,5,6) - Another inconsistent spacing here, too.
01:44:173 (x) - Add a note here, would be much better if you do.
01:52:449 (1) - Move this slider some squares down, so the spacing is consistent with the other notes.
Map still need some improvements, but it's way better than before. Not gonna give a star yet until you fix these, though ><
00:14:132 (1) - A note after spinner is strongly not suggested for an easier difficulty.
00:49:883 (7) - Remove this note, doesn't follow anything.
01:22:987 (1) - Same as 00:14:132.
[MoonShade's Normal]
01:22:987 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is a bit inconsistent here, please fix it.
[BounceBabe's Hard]
01:13:387 (2,3,4,5) - Make the spacing consistent here, looks weird how it is now.
01:37:883 (1,2) - These notes are way too close. Also, add a New combo on (2).
[Firce777's Taiko]
The offset on this difficulty is different from the others. Please make sure to change it and to resnap all notes after that.
[Dangerous]
Adjust the Audio Lead-In to 1500.
00:09:166 (2,3) - This sudden spacing change might be confusing.
00:50:876 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing.
00:54:518 (3,4,5) - ^
01:10:739 (13,1) - Spacing. They are way too close.
01:39:539 (5,6) - Another sudden spacing change that I really don't like.
01:41:194 (3,4,5,6) - Another inconsistent spacing here, too.
01:44:173 (x) - Add a note here, would be much better if you do.
01:52:449 (1) - Move this slider some squares down, so the spacing is consistent with the other notes.
Map still need some improvements, but it's way better than before. Not gonna give a star yet until you fix these, though ><
:s
Download: Cascada - Dangerous (Nightcore Mix) (Dark_Ai) [Jagang's Safety].osuosuplayer111 wrote:
[Jagang's Safety]
00:14:132 (1) - A note after spinner is strongly not suggested for an easier difficulty. *fixed*
00:49:883 (7) - Remove this note, doesn't follow anything. it follows the echo of the lyrics
01:22:987 (1) - Same as 00:14:132. *fixed*
Hab die Map schon ewig und dir noch keinen star gegeben
Naja jetzt hast du ihn für all die Mühe :3
Naja jetzt hast du ihn für all die Mühe :3
Topic Starter
Update :3
Danke Broken
Danke Broken
finally, diff broken fixed~ \:D/
really hope this map get ranked
Download: Cascada - Dangerous (Nightcore Mix) (Dark_Ai) [Firce777's Taiko].osu
really hope this map get ranked
Download: Cascada - Dangerous (Nightcore Mix) (Dark_Ai) [Firce777's Taiko].osu
Topic Starter
Update :3
I hope it too x_x need more modds D:
I hope it too x_x need more modds D:
[Firce777's Taiko]
There are 10 unsnapped notes on this difficulty. Please make sure to resnap them all correctly.
[Dangerous]
00:19:594 (1) - The endpoint of this slider is on the wrong time.
01:48:476 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Why don't you make a perfect square here? These notes looks weird spaced like that.
Much better, you can have my star now :3
Also yeah, try to get some more mods and I might be able to bubble this ^.^
The mapset as far as I can see still needs to be improved, but not as much as before.
There are 10 unsnapped notes on this difficulty. Please make sure to resnap them all correctly.
[Dangerous]
00:19:594 (1) - The endpoint of this slider is on the wrong time.
01:48:476 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Why don't you make a perfect square here? These notes looks weird spaced like that.
Much better, you can have my star now :3
Also yeah, try to get some more mods and I might be able to bubble this ^.^
The mapset as far as I can see still needs to be improved, but not as much as before.
Topic Starter
change and update :3
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[General]
- Offset : 1884 (Based on your offset. Taiko diff has a spinner before offset. Setting offset after note isn't recommended.)
- Make same audio lead-in in every diff. 500ms is enough to prevent sudden changing BG from black. 1500ms is too long!
[Dangerous]
OD+1
00:06:518 (2) - end point is on next white tick
00:19:594 (1) - Hmm 0.75x instead of 0.5x ?
01:52:449 (8) - ^
[BounceBabe's Hard]
- OD 3 is ridiculous for Hard diff. Increase it to 6.
- Change tick rate from 0.5 to 1. 1 really fits well.
00:24:394 (4) - It pokes HP bar too much. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/126212
[MoonShade's Normal]
- Change tick rate from 0.5 to 1. 1 really fits well.
00:29:690 - Start kiai from here
00:39:621 (1) - Repeat one more or separate from next note.
01:22:987 (1) - It's too far from center. I think it is not good for normal diff.
[Jangang's Safety]
01:21:166 (1) - Start from next white tick.
...
Half mapped in 2 minutes song? D:
I recommend full mapping.
Not bad stuffs, but it still needs more improvement I think...
Anyway star
- Offset : 1884 (Based on your offset. Taiko diff has a spinner before offset. Setting offset after note isn't recommended.)
- Make same audio lead-in in every diff. 500ms is enough to prevent sudden changing BG from black. 1500ms is too long!
[Dangerous]
OD+1
00:06:518 (2) - end point is on next white tick
00:19:594 (1) - Hmm 0.75x instead of 0.5x ?
01:52:449 (8) - ^
[BounceBabe's Hard]
- OD 3 is ridiculous for Hard diff. Increase it to 6.
- Change tick rate from 0.5 to 1. 1 really fits well.
00:24:394 (4) - It pokes HP bar too much. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/126212
[MoonShade's Normal]
- Change tick rate from 0.5 to 1. 1 really fits well.
00:29:690 - Start kiai from here
00:39:621 (1) - Repeat one more or separate from next note.
01:22:987 (1) - It's too far from center. I think it is not good for normal diff.
[Jangang's Safety]
01:21:166 (1) - Start from next white tick.
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Half mapped in 2 minutes song? D:
I recommend full mapping.
Not bad stuffs, but it still needs more improvement I think...
Anyway star