Evil_Twilight wrote:

[Timing]
offset : 384 (試試看吧，我不太會聽)

[Easy]
我個人覺得這對新手有點太難
可以的話在改簡單一點

00:14:963 (3) - 間距拉小
00:43:561 (2) - ^
01:15:524 (1) - 間距拉大
01:30:664 (3,4,5) - 間距拉小

[Normal]
00:45:804 (2,3,4) - 間距拉近

[SuKi SuKI]
間距的問題蠻大的，似乎沒有很固定
建議重新排一下

00:08:795 (10) - 這邊的節奏改這樣如何？

00:41:879 (1) - 取消new combo
01:05:711 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這裡的間距感覺不太好
01:41:318 (1) - 從 01:41:038 開始，結束的位置不變
01:52:533 (1,2) - 間距
02:31:225 (9,10,11) - 間距
02:32:346 (1) - 取消new combo
02:32:907 (1) - 增加new combo
03:19:729 (2) - 間距加大，不然很容易把後面的也當成1/2按
03:24:496 (1) - 忘了加kiai time嗎

LKs wrote:

整体不错
但最高难度难度没有上去
再变化一点就好
[attachment=0:4d112]Wakaba - Ashita Boku wa Kimi ni Ainiiku (Full Ver.) (Megurine Luka) [X].osu[/attachment:4d112]
大概这种感觉

Lisa wrote:

:( Star~另外建議最高難度別用AR9..這個bpm不適合那麼高的ar..

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

00:17:066
00:17:206
^mb put them x:432 y:136 fixed

try to add this notes
00:26:598 added
00:31:365 added
00:31:505 added

01:21:131 remove it, sounds weird remained
try to add
01:20:851 note added
01:21:131 short slider remained
01:21:692 short slider ^
01:22:253 note added
01:22:673 note remained

01:28:141 note added
01:54:496 note added

01:54:776 to 01:57:580 dont like this part sorry, dk how to change it

1. BPM: 107.000 Offset: 352
2. BPM: 107.000 Offset: 186503
3. BPM: 107.000 Offset 202221

Selee wrote:

In fact the timing is fine, but the guitar is earlier than the heavy beat for a little; thus, the timing sounds off...

so just an option here...

1. BPM: 107.000 Offset: 352
2. BPM: 107.000 Offset: 186503
3. BPM: 107.000 Offset 202221

winber1 wrote:

Daisuki

--I don't have any problems reading the map, but it just has random streams everywhere. Many times it doesn't really follow the music that well. (e.g. 03:17:415 (4,5,6,7,8) -)
Even it does not follow, I hope u guys think it fits
I will see others' opinions to decide whether I should change it.(cuz it is really a huge change if I do)
Thank u all the same :>

00:28:389 (3,4,5) - I would just make a stream to follow the original pattern Sorry I can not catch the original pattern. If u dont mind could u place it and puush it for me :>
00:30:211 (4) - remove clap, sounds a lot better imo removed
00:39:323 (7,1) - although i read this correctly, it just doesn't fit imo. i wouldn't use such spacing Originally there was no slider in between. Is it better to remove the slider?
01:06:239 (2,3) - ^ Fixed
01:09:604 (1) - remove combo and add one to the next note. Fixed
01:12:127 (1) - doesn't really fit imo. it's better off with the regular SV imo. I kinda like having a note at 01:12:408 Fixed
01:15:211 (x) - add note nope
01:54:744 (2) - stack perfectly Yes fixed.
02:28:109 (x) - add note Added
02:28:249 (x) - ^ That sounds better, thx
02:32:875 (1) - move note 1/2 tick back and add a note at 02:33:155 ^
02:45:352 (1) - i like it better if this was not silenced, and u add a finish to it Fixed.
03:28:942 (1) - add two notes 1/4 tick apart before this slider? Fixed
03:33:428 (1) - ^ Fixed

Suki Suki

--why so loud at the beginning? Sorry it's my mistake. Fixed.
--I would it like better if the spacing was more even... I'm not talking about the jumps, which I'm fine with. Yep cuz it was originally an insane diff. I've already decrease the spacing actually :> BPM is low so I hope I can remain this.

00:02:594 (5) - his also really doesn't fit the music, at least with the current hitsoudns that it has. uh.. wut about now?
00:03:716 (7) - new combo Fixed
00:04:837 (1) - add finish Fixed
00:36:239 (1) - remove one repeat ^
00:50:538 (4) - space out a little more ^
02:00:912 (1,2) - move 1/4 tick back? Fixed
02:05:959 (1,2,3) - nice shape, but so random >_>. This really isn't a place that fits very well for this >_> TAT I hope I can remain this one.
02:18:296 (1) - not the best place to put this note imo... Fixed
02:18:857 (2,3,4) - pointless jump imo. switch combo 3 and 4? Fixed
02:21:100 (3,4) - ^ Fixed
02:23:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - space more evenly Remain
02:30:352 (8,9,10,11) - space normally Fixed
02:45:352 (1) - add finish Fixed
03:07:080 (2,3) - i would space this regularly uh.. I actually I open DS when making this one
03:10:445 (8) - the overlap is weird imo. Fixed
03:12:120 (2) - just stack it? Fixed
03:13:349 (5,8) - delete these blue tick notes and rearrange notes Fixed
03:15:452 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - i would space these evenly. Remained
03:26:707 (7,8) - anti-spacing doesn't fit with music at all Fixed

Normal

--try using more uniform spacing... although spacing doesn't jump to an insane amount, you have random small spacing increases and decreases. lol, I open DS when I do this..

00:03:436 (6) - i would unstack Fixed
00:10:445 (3,4,5) - space evenly Fixed
00:16:894 (5,6) - spacing Fixed
00:33:996 (3,4,1) - and etc. - why are you increasing spacing now? Actually not. It's due to SV change, the uniform spacing changed
00:40:165 (1) - i would just change this into 1 note and rearrange the spacing Fixed
00:45:772 (2,3,4) - 1) you really should NOT use something like this in a normal 2) it doesn't even follow the music >_> Fixed
00:49:697 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - why the spacing increase? Sorry, my mistakes lol
00:54:183 (1) - i wouldn't use this, but it's still up to you Fixed
01:02:034 (6) - no jumps plz Fixed
01:03:155 (1) - don't silence Fixed
01:19:978 (4) - unstack? Nope
01:23:342 (1) - i would move it closer to the previous note Fixed
01:30:632 (2,3) - move closer to each other Fixed
02:38:762 (4,5,6) - asdfasdf. i wouldn't put streams like this in a normal, even if the song is slow and it's a triplet Fixed

--you should really finish mapping to the end... It's a Full ver. NM and already 347C so...


i did not mod easy since it is above my time limit for my queue. but nothing really seems that wrong with it so ok.

Megurine Luka wrote:

winber1 wrote:

--try using more uniform spacing... although spacing doesn't jump to an insane amount, you have random small spacing increases and decreases. lol, I open DS when I do this..

Well then, you probably changed the Distance Snapping every once in a while by like .1 without or something.

Just a few examples:
00:05:398 (2,3,4) - is spaced a tiny bit smaller than 00:07:641 (6,7,8) - if you use Distance Snapping 1.0x, combo 2 3 and 4 are fine, but if used on combo 7, it is forced to come closer to combo 6

00:11:566 (4,5) - using DS 1.0x, combo 4 stays where it is fine, but combo 5 is forced to come back a little

00:16:894 (5,6) - this is just a jump. all your past red tick notes touch the edges of each other

00:33:436 (2,3) - the same thing with that DS 1.0x
00:36:239 (1,2,3) - before, your 1/2 tick notes were touching each other, now suddenly they don't and here 00:42:408 (4,5,6) - they start touching the edges of each other again

00:56:426 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the edges start touching again.

etc. this goes on a lot throughout the song. Although i doubt they make that much of a difference in reading the notes, it just makes the map look more neat imo.

winber1 wrote:

Well then, you probably changed the Distance Snapping every once in a while by like .1 without or something.

Just a few examples:
00:05:398 (2,3,4) - is spaced a tiny bit smaller than 00:07:641 (6,7,8) - if you use Distance Snapping 1.0x, combo 2 3 and 4 are fine, but if used on combo 7, it is forced to come closer to combo 6

00:11:566 (4,5) - using DS 1.0x, combo 4 stays where it is fine, but combo 5 is forced to come back a little

00:16:894 (5,6) - this is just a jump. all your past red tick notes touch the edges of each other

00:33:436 (2,3) - the same thing with that DS 1.0x
00:36:239 (1,2,3) - before, your 1/2 tick notes were touching each other, now suddenly they don't and here 00:42:408 (4,5,6) - they start touching the edges of each other again

00:56:426 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the edges start touching again.

etc. this goes on a lot throughout the song. Although i doubt they make that much of a difference in reading the notes, it just makes the map look more neat imo.

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO Hi~hi~<3

Easy
* Stacked circle under tail slider are not recommended for easy diff, because it's hard to discern the rhythm of the song. Example 01:59:230 (3,4), 02:11:006 (2), and etc
Thanks for reminding me. I just know this when H30 pointed it out for my Easy GD in another map. XD

00:22:785 (1) - This spinner are too short for easy diff, replace this into slider or extend this spinner. Otherwise, newbies don't have time to complete the spinner Replaced with a circle
00:38:486 (7) - New combo? Fixed
00:55:870 (4,5) - I recommended to unstack this, it's hard to discern the rhythm of the song Remained
01:00:916 (1) - Same issue as 00:22:785 (1) Extended. But I wonder the gap between spinner and the next note._.
01:04:842 (4) - Clap hitsound in repeating slider is kinda weird for me, remove it? Removed. That is a mistake
01:11:010 (3) - Short repeating sliders are not recommended for this diff, because newbies are tough to tell when it's going to end Fixed
01:11:010 (3,1) - About this, I already ask Garven about this stuff, and he said it's not recommended to easy diff. So you should unstack this Fixed
01:24:468 (1,2) - Spacing? Fixed
01:28:113 (4) - Same issue as 01:11:010 (3) Fixed
01:34:561 (1) - Too much repeating slider is tough to tell when it's going to end Fixed
01:41:290 (4) - ^ Fixed
02:23:903 (7) - New combo Fixed
02:25:585 (1) - Remove new combo Fixed

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Normal
00:22:781 (1) - Unstack this? I think average player is confusing while gameplay (just opinion) Fixed
00:46:333 (3) - Stack this with 00:45:211 (1)? To make it clean? (Nazi) Fixed
00:50:819 (4) - Please remove the 3rd sliderpoint (right-click) to stop thinking about this slider has a bug in gameplay Fixed
01:25:585 (1,2,3) - I'm afraid that this part is might be confusing for average player, since the 3 tail slider is stack together. But, it's up to you, then Remained
02:27:267 (7) - Ummm, I recommended to change this stuff. Because it's tough to look (nuff said )Fixed

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Suki SuKI
00:15:492 (4) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider (Nazi)
00:28:669 (2) - Spacing error, please fix this to make it not confuse Remained
00:55:305 (4) - ^ Remained
01:39:043 (2) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider (Nazi)
02:46:753 ~ 03:05:398 (B) - I think this breaks is too long Remained
03:06:520 (T) - Unnecessary Timing points
03:12:120 (T) - Unnecessary Timing points
03:12:649 (T) - Unnecessary Timing points
03:16:293 (4,5) - Make this distance is same as 03:16:574 (5,6)
03:17:454 (T) - Unnecessary Timing points
03:23:342 (5) - I think this slider is kinda weird, but I don't think it's a burai slider. Perhaps, change this something? DK how to fix QAQ

Fixed rest

About the timing part. Maybe you can try del all these red lines and you will find it's off.
It's because the music itself is off.. QAQ
so...

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Daisuki Fixed
00:07:641 (1) - End at 00:07:922 for following vocal
01:54:744 (2) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider (Nazi)
02:46:753 ~ 03:05:398 (B) - I think this breaks is too long
03:06:520 (T) - Unnecessary Timing points
03:07:068 (T) - Unnecessary Timing points
03:11:832 (T) - Unnecessary Timing points
03:12:120 (T) - Unnecessary Timing points
03:12:649 (T) - Unnecessary Timing points
03:22:214 (T) - Unnecessary Timing points

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Needs more work, but sorry for long mods

1. Why the Easy and the Normal diff end at 02:46:333 and the other two at 03:42:407? °-°
   I suggest you to end your maps at the same points in all diffs.
2. In many parts there are differents hitsounds between a difficult and the other one.. Fix it with the same hitsounds/volume in all diffs?
3. Break times are different, and I don't like it 'cause there isn't a "map's consistency"...
4. It was your intention to call the diff "SuKi SuKI" and not "SuKi SuKi"? xD If not fix it

1. 00:04:837 (1) - Finish
2. 00:09:323 (1) - ^
3. 00:13:809 (1) - ^
4. 00:18:295 (1) - ^
5. 00:22:781 (7) - New combo (There is NC in the normal diff)
6. 00:32:314 (2) - 1 grid right
7. 00:33:996 (5) - New combo
8. 00:49:697 (1) - Finish
9. 00:56:430 (5) - ^
10. 01:12:131 (4) - ^
11. 01:12:692 (1) - No nc
12. 01:18:860 (3) - Move the last waypoint at x:376 y:312
13. 01:25:589 (1) - Add finish at the beginning
14. 01:30:075 (1) - Finish
15. 01:34:561 (1) - ^
16. 01:36:800 (3) - New combo
17. 01:59:230 (3) - ^?
18. 02:01:473 (1) - Finish?
19. 02:03:716 (3) - New combo
20. 02:28:389 (1) - Finish
21. 02:32:874 (1) - ^
22. 02:37:360 (1) - ^

1. 00:02:594 (5) - New combo
2. 00:04:837 (1) - Finish
3. 00:09:323 (1) - ^
4. 00:13:809 (1) - ^
5. 00:18:295 (1) - ^
6. 00:49:697 (1) - ^
7. 00:54:183 (1) - Second waypoint 1 grid left
8. 01:11:847 (6) - New combo
9. 01:12:968 (1) - No new combo
10. 01:25:585 (1) - Finish
11. 01:30:071 (1) - ^
12. 01:34:557 (1) - ^
13. 01:42:408 (1) - End it at 01:44:090?
14. 01:52:501 (1) - Finish
15. 02:01:473 (1) - ^
16. 02:05:959 (5) - New combo
17. 02:28:389 (1) - Finish
18. 02:32:875 (1) - ^
19. 02:37:361 (1) - ^
20. 02:41:847 (2) - ^

1. Timing Slider Tick Rate 1! 0.5 is unrankable!
2. 00:09:323 (2) - Finish
3. 00:13:809 (1) - ^
4. 00:18:295 (1) - ^
5. 00:23:342 to 00:31:753 add break as other difficult? ç_ç
6. 00:31:753 (1) - Finish
7. 00:40:725 (1) - ^
8. 00:49:697 (1) - ^
9. 00:58:669 (1) - ^
10. 01:07:641 No break please, make something as the previous diffs
11. 01:25:585 (1) - Finish
12. 01:30:071 (1) - ^
13. 01:34:557 (1) - ^
14. 01:52:501 (1) - ^
15. 02:28:389 (1) - ^
16. 02:32:875 (1) - ^
17. 02:37:361 (1) - ^

1. Tick rate 1!
2. 00:04:837 (1) - Finish..
3. 00:09:323 (1) - ^
4. 00:13:809 (1) - ^
5. 00:23:342 the same thing I wrote on the previous diff ^
6. 00:31:753 (1) - Finish
7. 00:40:725 (1) - ^
8. 00:49:697 (1) - ^
9. 00:58:669 (1) - ^
10. 01:25:585 (1) - Finish
11. 01:30:071 (1) - ^
12. 01:34:557 (1) - ^
13. 01:43:529 (6) - New combo
14. 01:52:501 (1) - ^
15. 02:09:884 No break please >w<
16. 02:28:389 (1) - ^
17. 02:32:875 (1) - ^
18. 02:37:361 (1) - ^

328,40,53342,2,0,B|288:96,1,47.5

• Blue: You must fix this.
  Red: You better fix it!
  Orange: Screenshot ahead.
  Black: Just suggestions though.
  
  ~Easy~

1. 00:32:174 (1): One grid left?
   
   ~Normal~
   
2. 01:57:548 (2): Move this to x:334 y:58
3. 02:15:772 (1): Move this to x: 784 y:272
   
   ~Kuki SuKI~
   
   Uppercase I?
   
4. 00:06:520 (4): That could be better if you move this one grid right!
5. 00:41:847 (4): Move one grid down...
   
   ~Dausuki~
   
   Looks good...

Chewin wrote:

Hi, they are just suggestions, you will decide if you want to follow them or not (:

General:

1. Why the Easy and the Normal diff end at 02:46:333 and the other two at 03:42:407? °-°
   I suggest you to end your maps at the same points in all diffs. hmmm I hope I can remain because I want to control the combo number
2. In many parts there are differents hitsounds between a difficult and the other one.. Fix it with the same hitsounds/volume in all diffs? Fixed
3. Break times are different, and I don't like it 'cause there isn't a "map's consistency"...
4. It was your intention to call the diff "SuKi SuKI" and not "SuKi SuKi"? xD If not fix it

Easy:

1. 00:04:837 (1) - Finish Fixed
2. 00:09:323 (1) - ^ Fixed
3. 00:13:809 (1) - ^ nope
4. 00:18:295 (1) - ^ nope
5. 00:22:781 (7) - New combo (There is NC in the normal diff) Fixed, NC problem all fixed
6. 00:32:314 (2) - 1 grid right Fixed, spacing problem all fixed
7. 00:33:996 (5) - New combo
8. 00:49:697 (1) - Finish Fixed
9. 00:56:430 (5) - ^nope
10. 01:12:131 (4) - ^ Fixed
11. 01:12:692 (1) - No nc
12. 01:18:860 (3) - Move the last waypoint at x:376 y:312 Fixed
13. 01:25:589 (1) - Add finish at the beginning Fixed
14. 01:30:075 (1) - Finish nope
15. 01:34:561 (1) - ^ ^
16. 01:36:800 (3) - New combo
17. 01:59:230 (3) - ^?
18. 02:01:473 (1) - Finish? Fixed
19. 02:03:716 (3) - New combo
20. 02:28:389 (1) - Finish Fixed
21. 02:32:874 (1) - ^ nope
22. 02:37:360 (1) - ^ nope

Normal:

1. 00:02:594 (5) - New combo
2. 00:04:837 (1) - Finish
3. 00:09:323 (1) - ^
4. 00:13:809 (1) - ^
5. 00:18:295 (1) - ^
6. 00:49:697 (1) - ^
7. 00:54:183 (1) - Second waypoint 1 grid left Fixed
8. 01:11:847 (6) - New combo
9. 01:12:968 (1) - No new combo
10. 01:25:585 (1) - Finish
11. 01:30:071 (1) - ^
12. 01:34:557 (1) - ^
13. 01:42:408 (1) - End it at 01:44:090? no, since the EZ diff does not have spinner and end at current point:D
14. 01:52:501 (1) - Finish
15. 02:01:473 (1) - ^
16. 02:05:959 (5) - New combo
17. 02:28:389 (1) - Finish
18. 02:32:875 (1) - ^
19. 02:37:361 (1) - ^
20. 02:41:847 (2) - ^

Suki SuKI:

• 
  

1. Timing Slider Tick Rate 1! 0.5 is unrankable! Fixed
2. 00:09:323 (2) - Finish
3. 00:13:809 (1) - ^
4. 00:18:295 (1) - ^
5. 00:23:342 to 00:31:753 add break as other difficult? ç_ç Fixed other diff's break
6. 00:31:753 (1) - Finish
7. 00:40:725 (1) - ^
8. 00:49:697 (1) - ^
9. 00:58:669 (1) - ^
10. 01:07:641 No break please, make something as the previous diffs Fixed
11. 01:25:585 (1) - Finish
12. 01:30:071 (1) - ^
13. 01:34:557 (1) - ^
14. 01:52:501 (1) - ^
15. 02:28:389 (1) - ^
16. 02:32:875 (1) - ^
17. 02:37:361 (1) - ^

I stop here for this diff, or I'll go against my queue rules sorry xD

Daisuki:

1. Tick rate 1!
2. 00:04:837 (1) - Finish..
3. 00:09:323 (1) - ^
4. 00:13:809 (1) - ^
5. 00:23:342 the same thing I wrote on the previous diff ^
6. 00:31:753 (1) - Finish
7. 00:40:725 (1) - ^
8. 00:49:697 (1) - ^
9. 00:58:669 (1) - ^
10. 01:25:585 (1) - Finish
11. 01:30:071 (1) - ^
12. 01:34:557 (1) - ^
13. 01:43:529 (6) - New combo
14. 01:52:501 (1) - ^
15. 02:09:884 No break please >w<
16. 02:28:389 (1) - ^
17. 02:32:875 (1) - ^
18. 02:37:361 (1) - ^

Ow then, good luck o/

wmfchris wrote:

Please set a unique preview time fixed
seems the countdown is useless so remove it? fixed

(around 3:11 why there're some red lines adjusting ~2ms which is almost the error given by a vocal lol) hmmm....听上去会很不好，我试过去掉红线。

[Daisuki]
00:08:903 (4) - right 1 grid Fixed
00:12:888 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacing ._. Fixed
00:30:211 (4) - left 1 grid to fit with (2,3) Fixed
00:53:342 (3) - minor slider shape fix

328,40,53342,2,0,B|288:96,1,47.5

感谢w
01:05:959 (1,2,3) - a sudden jump compared with (1,2) ._. Fixed
01:26:006 (3) - left 1 grid Fixed
01:32:875 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這不對稱啊orz 噗，fixed
01:59:210 (2,3,4) - ._. Fixed
02:09:604 (2) - right 2 grid Fixed

Suki Suki
00:03:996 (2) - left 1 grid Fixed
01:33:716 (5) - right 1 grid Fixed
02:10:445 (1) - this is 1/4 while the rest is 1/2 绿线问题。fixed~

我只是單純地照顧了一下spacing~ 其實Hard和insane的spacing也頗不穩定 感覺就像打了一百次還是會打錯那種~
至於0.5 tick rate我個人覺得沒問題的，只是被人ban了 ._.

加油~

kokoroanime wrote:

Hello.

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24043

• Blue: You must fix this.
  Red: You better fix it!
  Orange: Screenshot ahead.
  Black: Just suggestions though.
  
  ~Easy~

1. 00:32:174 (1): One grid left?
   
   ~Normal~
   
2. 01:57:548 (2): Move this to x:334 y:58
3. 02:15:772 (1): Move this to x: 784 y:272
   
   ~Kuki SuKI~
   
   Uppercase I?
   
4. 00:06:520 (4): That could be better if you move this one grid right!
5. 00:41:847 (4): Move one grid down...
   
   ~Dausuki~
   
   Looks good...

I like the song!!!!
Thank you and good luck.