Hey galvenize!
Here's some stuff. Opinions and suggestions will be in green, and you can just ignore them if you don't care.
[Insane]:
Good luck.~ :3
Here's some stuff. Opinions and suggestions will be in green, and you can just ignore them if you don't care.
[Insane]:
- Difficulty: OD-1. Streamy maps with OD8 are just ridiculous if you ask me. Don't think people will SS this, apart from the usual 2-3 ones.
- 00:59:522 (4) - This note brings out lots of hatred from me. Even with 300s turned off it was really hard to notice. I like your patterns but if you can, please fix this so it's atleast a little visible, a 1-2 grid4 move just so you can see a glimpse of it would be really nice.
- 01:50:372 (5) - Clap at the start of the slider?
- 02:39:872 (1,2,3,4) - These notes are silenced. That's unrankable. Please make them hearable.
- 02:41:147 - Add a timing section here which removes the kiai. Afaik, unclosed kiai isn't allowed. Or, if your intention was to end it on the previous timing section (which I assume so, looking at the other diffs), just end it on the previous section without adding this one, but don't forget to enable it on the timing section @spinner before.
- Slightly hard for a hard, looks more like a standard insane diff. Looking how Insane is harder, I guess that's fine. ,_,
- 00:56:672 (7) - Add a clap at the end of the slider?
- 01:49:472 (1,2,3,4) - Fix the spacing in the combo, 2 looks unsnapped in a weird way.
- 02:08:972 (1) - Don't think you really need a new combo for this. I see you have many new combos which could be removed but they make sense more or less, this one doesn't that much.
- 00:42:872 (3) - Maybe remove this note? It kinda feels odd because there isn't one @00:41:672.
- While the background's dimensions are alright, the picture feels like it was widescreen and then it just got compressed to 4:3 ratio. Such slim Kyouka doesn't look that good. If possible try to find a better background for this mapset, just a suggestion (I couldn't find one ;_;).
Good luck.~ :3