happy30 wrote:

I can't let such a nice song have a 128 kbs mp3 file, here use this one >< http://www.mediafire.com/?a26h4qcw7f6fwlk

Offset / Green sections / All ellements in time - 99ms
You might also want to increase the hitsound volume.

maybe include (Short ver.) in the title?

Well, I can't find anything in the maps.
Please fix the mp3 and maybe I can bubble

happy30 wrote:

oh, just a few things before i bubble:

- Fix the kiai time in Vikon so that it matches the other osu!-difficulties Fixed
- Fix spinner background, the center is not centered: hum,Fixed!
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/115512
- Two unsnapped notes in taiko Opps,fixed!

Rukarioman wrote:

Relaxing:
02:22:505 (2) - Short sliders with more than one repeat are confusing for new players. Really? o.o Fixed anyway~

Tsubasa:
01:21:791 (3) - Make that slider end on the next red tick. Sounds better.
01:56:077 (3) - ^ Both fixed and adjust some 1/4

Vikon:
00:23:220 - Add a note here maybe?
00:29:648 (4) - to actually recreate the rhythm you gotta move this note back to the previous blue tick.
01:51:077 - Either remove the kiai here (because kiais in a break is a nono) or map the small break. I'd suggest the second one.Leave to Vikon!

Rukarioman wrote:

Relaxing:
Vikon:
00:23:220 - Add a note here maybe? Fixed
00:29:648 (4) - to actually recreate the rhythm you gotta move this note back to the previous blue tick. Fixed
01:51:077 - Either remove the kiai here (because kiais in a break is a nono) or map the small break. I'd suggest the second one. Removed, and also removed the kiai before 02:06:077 (1), since I don't want a kiai be so long ,and in order to emphasis the 2nd kiai (02:06:077)

1. Add "ending" to the tags of all difficulties ?
2. The stack leniency is really low in all diffs...
3. Silencing the ticks sounds quite weird. You managed to make the bass rhythm quite clear, but some of its elements are missing when they could have been made by the ticks.
4. The "Thanks for playing~" is kinda hidden in the bottom-left corner. Move it right under the "Fin" ? something like this

1. 00:30:839 (1) - The first beat sounds really weird. It gives the impression you silenced it. Try making it a bit louder so that the normal finish is more clearly hearable ?
2. 01:07:029 (2) - I'm assuming the clap here is a mistake ? It sounds really off
3. 01:16:553 (1) - This slider comes too soon after the spinner. Remember new players don't spin well and need time to readjust their aim.
4. 01:21:553 (2) - This slidertick sounds awfully out of place D: also the last beat of the slider shouldn't be a clap to stay consistent with your clap pattern
5. 01:36:077 (1) - This slider comes too soon after the spinner. (same as above)
6. 01:43:220 (1,3) - Except for the first one, these finishes sound out of place to me
7. 01:50:839 (1) - This slider comes too soon after the spinner. (same as above)
8. 01:52:029 (2) - This slidertick sounds awfully out of place D: also the last beat of the slider shouldn't be a clap to stay consistent with your clap pattern
9. 01:53:220 (3) - This 3/4 rhythm sounds quite weird here. I was expecting a rhythm similar to the beginning of the first kiai.
10. 02:02:267 (3) - For consistency with your clap pattern, remove the clap on the last beat.
11. 02:06:553 (1) - This slider comes too soon after the spinner. (same as above)
12. 02:12:743 (2,4) - Except for the first one, these finishes sound really out of place to me.
13. 02:17:029 (5) - The first slidertick and the middle beat of the slider shouldn't be claps. It sounds really bad, breaks your clap patterns and breaks the soft feeling you had in the hitsounds so far.
14. 02:21:791 (1) - This note comes too soon after the spinner. (same as above)

1. This is way too hard for a Normal. There are way too many 1/4, sometimes in confusing patterns, sometimes in kick sliders, which is in my opinion out of place in a Normal. Now, assuming this is a Hard diff:
2. The clap placement sounds rather weird at times. I suggest you follow the same clap pattern as in the Relaxing diff - it will add more consistency between the diffs and sound better imo.
3. 00:29:648 (2) - This slider was completely hidden by a hitburst.

1. 00:56:791 (1,2) - This rhythm was quite confusing to me. I didn't expect the second repeat on (1) at all, and it made me miss all the timing after it.
2. Use the same kiai as the other diffs ? Yours is the only diff that has a different kiai time
3. 01:09:886 (3) - I find these claps to sound quite out of place. These sounds are usually expect one white ticks, and you placed them on a blue and a red one...
4. 01:33:696 (1) - I don't think this new combo is needed ? You've been doing two-notes combo so far
5. 01:52:743 - The part after this break until the kiai felt weird, because there are beatless gaps, which kills any flow the map was trying to set up and leaves a bad feeling of waiting.

• Not a big fan of all these jumps... But the diff seems fine.

• Nothing to point out

Odaril wrote:

General

1. Add "ending" to the tags of all difficulties ? X,This is not a TV size so I won't put a Ending to tag.
2. The stack leniency is really low in all diffs... However it should be fine during gameplay and rankable,right?
3. Silencing the ticks sounds quite weird. You managed to make the bass rhythm quite clear, but some of its elements are missing when they could have been made by the ticks. I'm not silent all the tick also I ask some of the player and they don't think it's weird.
4. The "Thanks for playing~" is kinda hidden in the bottom-left corner. Move it right under the "Fin" ? something like thisLeave to Jojo.

Relaxing

1. 00:30:839 (1) - The first beat sounds really weird. It gives the impression you silenced it. Try making it a bit louder so that the normal finish is more clearly hearable ? +10% volume.
2. 01:07:029 (2) - I'm assuming the clap here is a mistake ? It sounds really off X,Listen to the music please,it have a sound really like a clap sound.
3. 01:16:553 (1) - This slider comes too soon after the spinner. Remember new players don't spin well and need time to readjust their aim.Fixed this one.
4. 01:21:553 (2) - This slidertick sounds awfully out of place D: also the last beat of the slider shouldn't be a clap to stay consistent with your clap pattern Fixed!
5. 01:36:077 (1) - This slider comes too soon after the spinner. (same as above) Sorry I don't fix this,"Kiai" should be a high tide part of it,so I can make it more difficult of it.
6. 01:43:220 (1,3) - Except for the first one, these finishes sound out of place to me 01:44:172- use a whistle to instead of finish,however I won't change (3)- Since (3)- is a accent point,so a finish would be nice.
7. 01:50:839 (1) - This slider comes too soon after the spinner. (same as above) Fixed this one because new kiai is coming.
8. 01:52:029 (2) - This slidertick sounds awfully out of place D: also the last beat of the slider shouldn't be a clap to stay consistent with your clap pattern Fixed
9. 01:53:220 (3) - This 3/4 rhythm sounds quite weird here. I was expecting a rhythm similar to the beginning of the first kiai. I'm using a 3/4 slider to consistent my arrangement,also 3/4 is not really weird here.
10. 02:02:267 (3) - For consistency with your clap pattern, remove the clap on the last beat. Also use whistle instead of clap.
11. 02:06:553 (1) - This slider comes too soon after the spinner. (same as above) Think about the vocal,"a" sound is a accect beat so I guess some Finish at 02:06:077 - would be fine,It will sound weird if I increase or reduce the spinner!So keep this.
12. 02:12:743 (2,4) - Except for the first one, these finishes sound really out of place to me. Same as previous.
13. 02:17:029 (5) - The first slidertick and the middle beat of the slider shouldn't be claps. It sounds really bad, breaks your clap patterns and breaks the soft feeling you had in the hitsounds so far. Fixed!
14. 02:21:791 (1) - This note comes too soon after the spinner. (same as above) Fixed!

Tsubasa

1. This is way too hard for a Normal. There are way too many 1/4, sometimes in confusing patterns, sometimes in kick sliders, which is in my opinion out of place in a Normal. Now, assuming this is a Hard diff: X,I assuming Hard diff should have 1/4 click however this diff doesn't have it,so 1/4 slider is fair to normal!
2. The clap placement sounds rather weird at times. I suggest you follow the same clap pattern as in the Relaxing diff - it will add more consistency between the diffs and sound better imo. Since this is a guest diff so I respect guest's mapper hitsound taste.
3. 00:29:648 (2) - This slider was completely hidden by a hitburst. Fixed!

Popping the bubble for the hidden slider (and I wanted to pop for the wrong lighting dimensions again, but it appears it's not a problem). Make sure you contact me after the fixes for a rebubble. You can see what Sakura said.Alao I use this lighting many many times,I guess it's not a problem!