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James2250

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James2250 2010-03-13T04:42:37+00:00

delete osb file in folder
you don't need commander gwonam in tags and you don't need punch out so many times
kiai time needs to be the same on all difficulties so either remove it on hard or add it on the other 2

Bogus:
looks fine

Super:
00:33:702 (5) -new combo
00:34:382 (1) - remove new combo

Macho:
not sure if the start of this is rankable
00:17:553 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - whistle spam doesn't sound good
00:28:262 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
00:47:613 (1) - remove new combo

*star*

Shohei Ohtani

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Shohei Ohtani 2010-03-13T15:16:25+00:00

So hot ~.

But but am I the only one who likes the beginning of Macho mode? ;-;.

Real1

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Real1 2010-03-14T11:36:14+00:00

Crazy map

[Bogus]
00:36:422 (1) - This spinner is a bit short for a spinner in an Easy map.

[Macho]
Idk man, this map felt difficult for the sake of difficulty instead of fun. It may just be me, though. You should probably gather some more opinions. Either way, this diff is way harder than [Super]. Maybe you should add another diff, slightly more difficult than Super?

A star

Shohei Ohtani

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Shohei Ohtani 2010-03-14T16:07:42+00:00

;-;

Thanks for the modding ~.

RandomJibberish

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RandomJibberish 2010-03-15T06:53:14+00:00

O_o

General:
BG's pretty ugly, I made a slightly better one:

SPOILER

Bogus:
00:10:583 (1) - Doesn't really fit with the music.
00:46:672 (1) - Move slighlty to the right so it doesn't touch the previous slider.

Super:
00:06:503 (1,2) - Doesn't fit the music
00:24:182 (1) - Even out the curve slightly

Macho:
O_O
00:17:553 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Make into a circle.

Nice map, star~

iDwarf

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iDwarf 2010-03-15T10:54:09+00:00

~Overall~

Main Section: BPM: 176 | Offset: 3770
There is no storyboard pic. And storyboard it self is very odd here. Remove it. (.osb file)

Sorry, but it's very hard to mod with wrong timing. Resnap all notes and then request a mod again

Star~

Shohei Ohtani

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Shohei Ohtani 2010-03-15T23:31:20+00:00

Ok modding taken. ~

Also, RandomJibberish, you said star, but I see no star ;-;. Ty for the background by the way.

I didn't take Midget's BPM/Offset suggestion, but I did change the BPM a bit.

Gens

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Gens 2010-03-16T03:20:58+00:00

[General]

Tags must be the same on all difficulties... even if it looks like it, "Tyronadussassis" is not in the same way on all difficulties.
You haven't uploaded the jpg background (if you're going to upload it anyway), and the .osb file is still there. Did you full submit?

[Macho]

Streams... everywhere... this doesn't look very fun, to be honest. What I'd recommend here is:
1. Don't use so many streams.
2. Use more sliders.
3. Create more intuitive or good-looking patterns, instead of just placing beats following a "road".
That's all. I don't want to proto-bubble it in its current state, sorry.

~ ~ ~

That's all I have... useless mod is useless. Feel free to not give me kudosu (though I won't stop you if you feel generous).

Shohei Ohtani

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Shohei Ohtani 2010-03-16T04:54:12+00:00

ok ok ok I full submitted <3~

Also I crappily re-made machoi mode with more patterns and stuff ~. Also fixed the BPM just a tiny bit.

I'm not going to have the .jpg background, only the png~.

iDwarf

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iDwarf 2010-03-16T08:57:30+00:00

You basicly can't have .png background. It'll be reformated by osu! to .jpg

(So just put .jpg)

RandomJibberish

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RandomJibberish 2010-03-16T16:53:55+00:00

CDFA wrote:
RandomJibberish, you said star, but I see no star ;-;.

Crap, sorry, musta forgotten to tick the box. Done now~

Shohei Ohtani

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Shohei Ohtani 2010-03-18T02:03:43+00:00

So yeah I just figured out I can't add video because the site I use to obtain downloads of videos decided to screw me over by forcing me to "log in", when there's no way to do that.

Mashley

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Mashley 2010-03-19T16:43:50+00:00

Streams on [Macho] are a joke. Someone else can pubble this.

Shohei Ohtani

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Shohei Ohtani 2010-03-19T23:08:57+00:00

Agent Spin Here wrote:
Streams on [Macho] are a joke. Someone else can pubble this.

~.

But but but ASH I fixed it from before ;-;.

DeathxShinigami

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DeathxShinigami 2010-03-20T05:57:09+00:00

CDFA, remap [Macho] O.o So at least it would stay consistent, due to the song length there really isn't anything for me to pick on anything. Hope you can deal with it.

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-03-20T07:35:00+00:00

General:
Delete .osb file from Song Folder and Full Submit.
Tags in [Macho] are different from the rest. Make them all the same throughout all difficulties.

Bogus:

Combo Mod~
00:06:502 (3) - New Combo.

00:10:587 (1) - No New Combo.
00:13:310 (1) - ^
00:16:033 (1) - ^
00:21:479 (1) - ^
00:46:672 (1) - ^
00:49:496 (1) - ^
00:50:555 (1) - ^

Super:

Combo Mod~
00:10:587 (1) - No New Combo.
00:16:033 (1) - ^
00:21:479 (1) - ^
00:24:202 (1) - ^
00:46:672 (1) - ^

Nazi Mod~
00:25:904 (2,3,4) - Move (3) 1 Grid down + 2 Grids left to align with (2,4)

Macho:
Increase Circle Size by 1.

Your streams... they're hard to see coming, not to mention they're super linear (esp. at the beginning).
Try to make them more "~" or "o" and etc. you know? Makes it look prettier

Hikato

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Hikato 2010-03-20T10:53:54+00:00

[General]
Delete the .osb if it isn't used.

[Bogus]
00:45:261 (1) - Curve this slider more so it looks neater.

[Super]
00:31:095 (1) - I think it sounds better on the white tick.
00:33:052 (4) - Picky mod: move it 1 grid up and left.

[Macho]
Firstly, I hate small circles. I don't think it fits for any map so I suggest changing it to 3 instead. Of course it's up to you so do as you wish.
00:03:779 (1) - I don't like this stream at all. It feels off when playing it and the positioning of it like 00:07:779 (12,1) feels awkward to play.
This difficulty is very confusing and very hard to fc or even pass on first try.
00:19:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Confusing to play.
00:31:520 (3,4) - I don't know why but this feels weird when playing. Probably just me.
00:15:012 (3) - Spacing
(00:15:182 (4) - Spacing)
00:19:607 (8) - Spacing; 2x speed made the spacing inconsistent.

Alot of it feels confusing. The circle size could by why in some places, but other parts are confusing either way.

Bogus and Super are good but I don't like Macho.

Kecco

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Kecco 2010-03-20T14:32:37+00:00

Sorry but this map it's very crazy... Anyway, it's ok.
I don't like the map, sorry.

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2010-03-21T04:04:59+00:00

OK I REMADE MACHO MODE AGAIN ;-;.

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2010-03-23T16:25:30+00:00

Ok ok ok re-made again even though the star diff says it's harded I even lowered the HP drain to god knows how low and I lowered the OD to 7 (because 6 felt slow ~).

THE STREAM IS NOW GONE FREAKING IT"S SLIDERS NOW. ;-;

Lokamp

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Lokamp 2010-03-23T19:24:33+00:00

Bogey
Sounds fine.

Super
00:18:756 (3) - move this a square up
00:22:160 (4) - ^

Macho
00:07:523 (4,5,6) - move these beats 5 squares up and 1-2 squares left (move the 6th 3 squares up, instead.)
00:23:521 (3) - move it a square up

Maybe try to find a less louder mp3 of the song: it covers TOO much the beats's hitsounds...
Except this, this curious way to map merits a star, indeed.

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2010-03-23T23:28:41+00:00

Yay finally someone didn't complain about Macho mode ~.

Thanks for the modding ~.

FishHook

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FishHook 2010-03-24T01:09:27+00:00

[Bogus]
0:09:225 (1)(2) Move 1 unit up for better spacing.
0:31:691 (2) Move the end anchor up 2 units

[Super]
Solid

[Macho]
0:18:586 (1)-(8) Looks kinda ugly. Maybe re-work the pattern and placement?
0:21:437 (1)-(9) I got world of warcraft playing in the background, so it might be minute lag, but this sounds slightly off. Try moving it back 1/8 a beat, starting at a yellow ticker and see if it sounds better.

Interesting map nonetheless haha. If you were a pro at Photoshop or something, I'd ask that you change the wording on this speedo to say 'Bogus' and 'Macho' according to the difficulty.

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2010-03-24T01:47:51+00:00

Thanks for the modding :3~. I also made a little adjustments since I had 1/8 open at the time and it sounds better.

Also toying with hitsound volume ~.

James2250

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James2250 2010-03-24T02:13:34+00:00

you don't need commander gwonam in tags as its the artist
I would say you only need PunchOut once in tags, you don't need all the different ways of putting it
delete osb file in folder
turn audio up on notes, they are too quiet compared to the song

Bogus:
00:34:414 (2) - might want to redo this so it doesn't go off grid

Super:
increase hp drain by 2 or 3 ticks as this is a normal and its very low atm
00:22:160 (4) - stack this on start of 2
(for alignment reasons)
00:29:648 (3) - 1 tiny grid down
00:30:329 (4) - 1 tiny grid right
00:31:095 (1) - 1 tiny grid left
00:33:052 (4) - 1 tiny grid up

Macho:
00:13:310 (11) - straighten this out?
00:19:607 (8) - you might need a 2x bpm warning for this..not sure
00:23:308 (2,3) - align

call me back after fixes and I will pubble

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2010-03-24T03:03:39+00:00

Ok ~

Eww Macho mode is 5 stars

.

James2250

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James2250 2010-03-24T03:20:12+00:00

will leave it up to BAT's if that slider needs a 2x bpm warning or not but everything else seems fine

Pubbled!!

rust45

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rust45 2010-03-24T03:49:51+00:00

[Macho]
00:11:948 (1,2,3) - I'm sorry, but do you really think people will be able to read that?
00:20:288 (3) - This is pratcily completely hidden by the 300s or (in my case) misses of the last combo.

I won't pop it, but I will give a star.

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2010-03-24T04:03:43+00:00

Ok all done ~.

Gens

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Gens 2010-03-24T21:38:10+00:00

[Macho] is much better now.

Timing looks fishy... 176.272 for the first timing point. Are you sure that's OK? I can't check if it's good since I have no earphones now and I can't time that way.

Anyway... kudosu star.

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2010-03-26T08:13:46+00:00

Hello~~

General

Decrease music sound?

Bogus

00:21:146 (4) Whistle (instead clap)

Super

00:20:805 (2) Whistle in slider
00:31:106 (1) Move to 00:31:021, and De-Finish

Macho

@.@

Star

maal

maal 2010-03-26T09:19:55+00:00

Okay wtf at this song xD

~[Bogus]~

Fine.

~[Super]~

00:07:866(1): End this at: 00:08:547?
00:19:784(x): Add a note?

Nice.

~[Macho]~

Wow, 1/8 Beat Snap Divisor o.o.

Fine.

Yeah, nice map.

DJPop

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DJPop 2010-03-26T13:32:58+00:00

CDFA wrote:
I'll add the video when I add the video ~

WHAT

~Bogus~
Fine.

~Super~
00:31:106 (1) - misplaced

~Macho~
00:13:314 (11) - new combo
00:17:570 (2,3,4) - make them more linear
00:19:443 (7,8) - jump!? , should add new combo
00:28:467 (2,3) - wrong spacing
00:38:342 (2) - new combo

+Star

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2010-03-26T17:22:23+00:00

Took sonnyc's and DJPop's modding. :3~.

For emaal, the first one makes it a bit more like a hard, and the second one I don't really like ;~;. Sorry .-.

abalee

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abalee 2010-03-27T04:19:32+00:00

does it really need 1/8? I think it is unnecessary.

Shohei Ohtani

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Shohei Ohtani 2010-03-27T05:23:12+00:00

abalee wrote:
does it really need 1/8? I think it is unnecessary.

It's pretty neccesary, as there's a section where the music falls a tiny bit behind (but it's not an offset mistake, as it goes back to 1/4 later on ~.)

Mostly just the fact that this was made by Sony Vegas, so it's not really perfect :3~. (Also this was part of youtube soccer, where YTPers make YTPMVs pretty fast, so I'm not sure if ComGwo had time to really check it :3~.)

~

Guy-kun

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Guy-kun 2010-03-28T17:33:26+00:00

and are all very good ^^
Just one part on [Macho]
00:12 - the way the 2,3,4 beats go clockwise is kinda offputting, I think it'd be better them being in the reverse order (5,6,7 - 8,9,10 being adjusted to be reversed therefore too)

Star though ;3

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2010-03-28T18:05:56+00:00

Ok, changed :3~

Also made a little 1/8 change ~.

Neo Adonis

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Neo Adonis 2010-03-28T19:37:58+00:00

Well. I don't have much to mod, but...

[Super]
00:24:211 (3) - Why don't you try to center this slider. Let's say: 2 grids up and right.
00:25:232 (4) - If you do this you'll have to move this object where 00:23:870 (2) is.

Crazy song and crazy map!! Star!!

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2010-03-28T21:29:51+00:00

Hi Neo

~.

Also took the modding, and changed a hitsound in [Super]

ty

~.

abalee

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abalee 2010-03-29T01:27:35+00:00

All right.