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Saten
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Saten
Random mod~ :3

woahness.jpg is not used lol, and if you're going to use it later, you'll have to resize it to at least 1024x768 (currently 1081x767)
Sweet.png is not used as well, but I guess you'll use it later~
There's some BG's that's off by 1 pixel, but I don't think it matters~

Copter-kun's Lunatic
Lacks tags from people who's in the collab/guest diff
Remove Ten Desires from source

00:17:188 (1,2,3) - Stack with the end of the previous slider (3)
00:20:453 (1) - Stack with the start of the previous slider
00:38:208 (3) - place somewhere else?
00:46:576 (1) - Stack with the end of the previous slider or make a horizontal flip on the previous slider
00:59:229 (9) - stack properly (Distance snapping 0,0x and disable grid snapping)
01:08:412 (5,6) - ^
01:16:984 (2) - ^
01:16:984 (2) - ^
01:17:188 (3) - ^
01:17:392 (4) - ^
01:31:474 (1) - Unrankable spinner D:

Have my star~

Edit: I noticed that the Taiko BG is the preview BG D:
I suggest that you temporarily removes the taiko diff and submit, then re-add it and submit again (submit it on any other diff than the taiko diff)
Ayeen_old
316 posts
Joined October 2010
Ayeen_old
Ayeen's Mod:

LRJ diff:
Your pattern is fine, but use AR 3. Though I hate to hear those annoying normal whistle sound >.>

Pereira diff:
Wieird kiai time, I like LRJ kiai time better.
I dare to say, half mapped beatmap. Unless you got a good reasons to state why it half map as the mp3 is only about 3 min+
Not even trying jump pattern for hard? Note that "Hard" is not restricted by constant DS rules.
Even if the pattern is fine because there was no DS and fairly visible, but that create another issue: Boring. Unless you got something not too obvious repetitive here (Notes, notes, notes, slider, slider, slider and notes again just about the same pattern) , than this difficulty should be fun.
Add in pattern like circles make "star", "round" so it be less boring and not so obvious repetition

Necrofanatic:
Do you know that you can change SV? Usually Slider Velocity (SV) 1.4 is default for normal, but you can lower it or make it higher. Higher = more speed slider, and more spacious between notes and the reverse
Wierd Kiai time
Generally, this difficulty need more patterns than just same circles stream over and over again. That was so 2009 pattern
Half mapped too. Extend till end of song
00:12:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29) Split the combos
00:22:290 (2,3,4,5) Inconsistent spacing
00:23:106 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) ^ and you can make it one straight line by holding"shift" while placing the notes
00:36:984 (1,2,3,4,5) Did you use DS here? Pattern is nice. But antijump from (5) to (6,7) is not appropriate there
01:12:494 ( 1,2,3) Inconsistent spacing

Copter-Kun:
Unsnapped notes is unsnapped and that is not rankable.
Use DS more often, then just randomly put notes around the place
00:21:269 (1,2,3,4,5) Inconsistent spacing especially antijumps (2,3,4) is not good
00:26:167 (7,8) Inconsistent spacing
00:36:984 (1,2) ^
01:31:474 (spinner) extend untill 01:32:290
Although I post a few here, this difficulty still need some more improvement on consistency of DS.

LRJ difficulty have an exception to be map halve. But considering the other difficulty under the name hard,lunatic,etc. it is better to map untill end of song than just half way.

AND, when you finish map till end of song upload and move to pending or you gonna add some more skin element/SB etc to be in WIP
Ekoro
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Joined March 2010
Ekoro

Ayeen wrote:

But considering the other difficulty under the name hard,lunatic,etc. it is better to map untill end of song than just half way.
I think the song repeat twice , no?
Don't need to map until the end of song i guess ~ ><
Rikers
288 posts
Joined January 2011
Rikers
No one play my taiko map
It's a steaming piece of rubbish
Kyonko Hizara
2,855 posts
Joined August 2010
Kyonko Hizara
:)
Rikers
288 posts
Joined January 2011
Rikers
:3?
Druidianna
3 posts
Joined February 2011
Druidianna
Great beatmap Elly! Keep up the good work ;D
SHARiKiN
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Joined March 2011
SHARiKiN
cool.. give star
Raging Bull
2,809 posts
Joined June 2010
Raging Bull
Hi uh. You have way too many Insanes (I). Delete 2 insane and 1 Taiko insane and make an easy map and hard map.

SPOILER
<Raging_Bull> : Uh..Can a mapset have N I I I I I (two taiko insanes)
21:52 <Larto> : Then you still have three osu! insanes
21:52 <Larto> : I don't think that's a good idea, sir
21:53 <RandomJibberish> : Three osu! insanes is stupid
21:53 <RandomJibberish> : more than one Taiko insane is stupid
21:53 <RandomJibberish> : not having an easy or hard is stupid
21:53 <RandomJibberish> : so no
21:53 <RandomJibberish> : :D
21:53 <Larto> : RJ: is this all
21:53 <RandomJibberish> : Yus
21:53 <Raging_Bull> : So whats the suggested action? :s
21:53 <Raging_Bull> : or I'll link map if you want
21:54 <Raging_Bull> : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/29183
21:54 <RandomJibberish> : The suggested action is delete two osu insanes and one taiko insane, and make an easy and hard
Satoshi_old
5 posts
Joined November 2010
Satoshi_old
I like it. Looking forward to play the ranked version. Star
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined October 2010
Pereira006

Raging Bull wrote:

Hi uh. You have way too many Insanes (I). Delete 2 insane and 1 Taiko insane and make an easy map and hard map.

SPOILER
<Raging_Bull> : Uh..Can a mapset have N I I I I I (two taiko insanes)
21:52 <Larto> : Then you still have three osu! insanes
21:52 <Larto> : I don't think that's a good idea, sir
21:53 <RandomJibberish> : Three osu! insanes is stupid
21:53 <RandomJibberish> : more than one Taiko insane is stupid
21:53 <RandomJibberish> : not having an easy or hard is stupid
21:53 <RandomJibberish> : so no
21:53 <RandomJibberish> : :D
21:53 <Larto> : RJ: is this all
21:53 <RandomJibberish> : Yus
21:53 <Raging_Bull> : So whats the suggested action? :s
21:53 <Raging_Bull> : or I'll link map if you want
21:54 <Raging_Bull> : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/29183
21:54 <RandomJibberish> : The suggested action is delete two osu insanes and one taiko insane, and make an easy and hard
my diff is hard
Kite
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Kite
My "Insane" diff, hope you like it

Download: Kite's diff + hitsounds.rar
TheVileOne
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TheVileOne
Lots of IRCing for NecroFanatic and Easy.

Will work on the rest of the difficulties tomorrow.
rockleejkooo
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Joined June 2010
rockleejkooo
awesome :o
Elly-chan
969 posts
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Topic Starter
Elly-chan

rockleejkooo wrote:

awesome :o

Satoshi wrote:

I like it. Looking forward to play the ranked version. Star

KyonkoHizara wrote:

:)

Druidianna wrote:

Great beatmap Elly! Keep up the good work ;D

SHARiKiN wrote:

cool.. give star
Thank You All ;_;
Rikers
288 posts
Joined January 2011
Rikers

Pereira006 wrote:

my diff is hard
Uh it kinda isn't classified as hard though.
Also why didn't I star this already dammit D:<
al2e10
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Joined August 2008
al2e10
[Eternal Wandering]
00:37:596 (1) - Remove new combo
00:41:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A bit missy in here.
Where is the after...

[Necro Fanatic]
00:29:229 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:48:106 (1) - Follow with 8 like start in 00:47:290
01:06:984 (1) - Remove new combo
01:13:310 (1) - ^ (Useless)
01:20:045 (1) - ^
01:30:249 (1) - ^

[All]
If you didn't need the music after 01:32:290, you should ask some people to help you.
STAR
Elly-chan
969 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Elly-chan

KingsAL2 wrote:

[Eternal Wandering]
00:37:596 (1) - Remove new combo Done
00:41:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A bit missy in here.Sorry, I'm not gonna fix this. it looks fine.
Where is the after... :shock:

[Necro Fanatic]
00:29:229 (1) - Remove new combo? Done
00:48:106 (1) - Follow with 8 like start in 00:47:290What?
01:06:984 (1) - Remove new combo Done for all of them
01:13:310 (1) - ^ (Useless)
01:20:045 (1) - ^
01:30:249 (1) - ^

[All]
If you didn't need the music after 01:32:290, you should ask some people to help you. Yeah, we need someone to shorten MP3 Now >w<
STAR THANKS<3
p3n
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p3n
[General]
All Diffs are mapped up to ~1:35min but the song is 3:14min. Please shorten the mp3 to an acceptable timing point like 1:45min (5s fadeout)
Combo Color 1 is too dark. You can't see the approaching circles on some of the BGs. Pick something a lot brighter or get rid of this color (use just 3 overall)

[Easy]
00:06:327 (2,3) - spacing
00:10:582 (2) - ummm...whats up with this slider? looks strange...why not use a nicely curved one?
00:13:923 (1,2,3) - Try curving the middle part of these long sliders exactly around (2) as this will look much better. Something like this: http://puu.sh/2BTF
00:19:637 (1) - ugly. Curve better around (3), adjust spacing of following note afterwards
00:32:698 (5) - angle between the points is too small. Make it a bit softer and this slider will not look as if someone kicked it in the nuts.
00:35:963 (3) - curve exactly around (2)
00:56:371 (3,4) - better use a slider instead...
00:57:392 (5) - ...and turn this into 2 circles
01:02:086 (2) - again, don't move the grey sub-point after the starting point so far out. It makes the sliders look weird if it is <90°
01:20:045 (2) - is not straight down

[LRJ's Normal]
00:22:902 (4) - move ending point to 102/274 to fix the spreading gap between the two sliders AND curve (4) more exactly around (3)
Otherwise flawless :)

[Pereira's Hard]
00:26:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe seperate every stack by adding a new combo (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) to make it more visible
00:33:922 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
00:40:861 (3) - oddly placed slider. Better place and curve it in a way that makes the overall curve of (1,2,3) more even
00:42:902 (X) - why don't you map this? It plays weird and misplaced if you leave out this note...
00:45:351 (6) - move ending point to 291/72 to make a nice curve with the following combo
00:46:576 (4,5) - It fits the song much better if you delete (4) and let the slider start there (keep the endingpoint of this slider on the same red tick it is now)
00:53:718 (1) - can be curved better around (5) and keep starting point + ending point at the exact same level

[Necro Fanatic]
Could use some better object-placement in general. Come up with some interesting notefollow-patterns and try to close most of the huge gaps with sliders. Again: Combo color 1 is WAY too dark. Change it please.
00:18:514 (X,X) - definetely needs 2 more notes here. Place circles at the blue and red tick and form a nice spacing-consistent 5/4 stream. This will map the piano exactly. (3,4) just don't make any sense right now.
00:27:392 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - come on! This pattern is not very creative... Try a dead-end or something else that plays interesting.
00:40:045 (1,2,3) - feels extremely empty. Why don't you use sliders for those parts?
00:45:147 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - be creative!
00:48:106 (1) - start the spinner at 00:47:392 and end it at 00:48:616 to at least match the song
00:49:739 (4) - weird. Why the strange placement? It kinda stands out as it doesn't really fit to the rest of your map. I suggest keeping this in line
00:53:106 (7,8) - again, why don't you use a slider here instead? Those empty spaces kinda ruin it for me :o
00:56:371 (8,9) - ^
00:59:637 (4) - the "S" can be done much better:
282,309,59637,2,0,B|300:355|433:356|481:339|481:257|471:192|371:194|371:194|275:192|263:125|261:57|307:28|439:27|461:78,1,720,0|10
01:06:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - this is better than before but could still be more interesting

[Eternal Wandering]
I love you Kite! ;) ...fits like a glove. This is beautiful!


1~star for the good mapset, keep it up!
2~stars for the awesome [Eternal Wandering]
Pereira006
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Pereira006
hello

elly-chan next time who mod my diff just tell me pleasse :( that is important so anyawy


p3n wrote:

[General]

[Pereira's Hard]
00:26:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe seperate every stack by adding a new combo (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) to make it more visibleNO
00:33:922 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^NO
00:40:861 (3) - oddly placed slider. Better place and curve it in a way that makes the overall curve of (1,2,3) more evenNO
00:42:902 (X) - why don't you map this? It plays weird and misplaced if you leave out this note...YES
00:45:351 (6) - move ending point to 291/72 to make a nice curve with the following comboYES
00:46:576 (4,5) - It fits the song much better if you delete (4) and let the slider start there (keep the endingpoint of this slider on the same red tick it is now)NO
00:53:718 (1) - can be curved better around (5) and keep starting point + ending point at the exact same levelNO
thank looking my diff

Download: ZUN - Night Sakura Of Dead Spirits (Elly-chan) [Pereira's hard].osu

good luck
TheVileOne
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2010
TheVileOne
LRJ's Normal

00:29:841 (5) - Make part of the next combo? Also turn grid snap off and move left 1 grid 4 unit. (eh it wouldn't go with your patterns but still one grid unit left)

00:34:739 (4,5) - Nazi Spacing?

01:09:025 - Please add a note here. Maybe it can stay stacked with the addition.

01:10:861 (3,1) - Ugly stack. It's not stacking right.

Pereira's Hard

00:31:269 (2) - Gah I expected another repeat. Eh it may be fine. But shouldn't it follow the 3 repeat slider pattern from before?

00:45:963 (1) - This isn't lined up.

01:02:494 - 25% volume

01:03:106 (10) - How about deleteing this and respacing the notes? I think there should be a gap after a repeat slider like that.

Eternal Wandering

00:41:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Random spacing ???

00:45:351 (9,1) - This is a weird gap. Maybe make this a more average spacing.



Well I was conservative. This should be bubbled soon.
Ekoro
3,522 posts
Joined March 2010
Ekoro

TheVileOne wrote:

LRJ's Normal

00:29:841 (5) - Make part of the next combo? Also turn grid snap off and move left 1 grid 4 unit. (eh it wouldn't go with your patterns but still one grid unit left) I was sure that i have put New Combo there before... O_o Well , okay ~

00:34:739 (4,5) - Nazi Spacing? Moved 1 grid left.

01:09:025 - Please add a note here. Maybe it can stay stacked with the addition. Done , stacked with (1).

01:10:861 (3,1) - Ugly stack. It's not stacking right. It's me or it's correctly stacked?
Pereira006
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Joined October 2010
Pereira006

TheVileOne wrote:

Pereira's Hard

00:31:269 (2) - Gah I expected another repeat. Eh it may be fine. But shouldn't it follow the 3 repeat slider pattern from before? hmm i don't konw because i feeling rythm drum but i did change combo and fix i think


00:45:963 (1) - This isn't lined up.YES

01:02:494 - 25% volume YES

01:03:106 (10) - How about deleteing this and respacing the notes? I think there should be a gap after a repeat slider like that. NO
thank you looking my diff TVO -sama :)

Download: ZUN - Night Sakura Of Dead Spirits (Elly-chan) [Pereira's hard].osu

done
Kite
osu! Alumni
1,372 posts
Joined July 2009
Kite

TheVileOne wrote:

Eternal Wandering

00:41:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Random spacing ??? Jumps

00:45:351 (9,1) - This is a weird gap. Maybe make this a more average spacing. Increased spacing due to new combo
Rikers
288 posts
Joined January 2011
Rikers

Elly-chan wrote:

KingsAL2 wrote:

[All]
If you didn't need the music after 01:32:290, you should ask some people to help you. Yeah, we need someone to shorten MP3 Now >w<
STAR THANKS<3
The Taiko diff uses the whole .mp3 so no shortening kthnx.
Edit: -eats Elly for shortening the Taiko diff-
Lanttu
860 posts
Joined December 2008
Lanttu
You probably should cut your mp3?
Also, maybe resize all wallpapers to either 1024x768 or 800x600

[Eternal Wandering]
Rise hitsound volume during kiai-time to about 50%? Sounds bad when it's so quiet. ;u; Also, this is the only diff with two kiai times?
00:48:412 (7) - Add new combo and delete it from the next note?
01:19:025 (1,2,3) - Maybe move 1 and 2 like this?

[Necro Fanatic]
So quiet hitsounds, more volume to kiai-time at least?
00:23:106 (6) - New combo?
00:34:331 (5) - Sliderspeed-change spacing, blah, just move two grids to right.
00:40:045 (7) - New combo and finnish to beginning?
01:06:167 (1) - Claps starting from this note sound really bad, consider changing them to whistles maybe. >:
01:31:474 (1) - Just no, spinners this short are just horrible. Please do something else. ;_;

[Pereia's Hard]
00:30:657 (4) - New combo and delete it from the next note?
00:58:004 (1) - Horrible short spinner
01:01:678 (7) - Maybe new combo?

[Easy]
00:40:657 (1) - Maybe bit too fast after spinner? I'd just map something over the spinner since it's quite short anyways.
01:11:882 (1) - TAKE IT AWAY PLEASE.
01:31:474 (1) - ^

o/
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
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Joined October 2010
Pereira006

Lanttu wrote:

[Pereia's Hard]
00:30:657 (4) - New combo and delete it from the next note? NO
00:58:004 (1) - Horrible short spinnerNO
01:01:678 (7) - Maybe new combo? YES
o/
thank you :3

Download: ZUN - Night Sakura Of Dead Spirits (Elly-chan) [Pereira's hard].osu
Kite
osu! Alumni
1,372 posts
Joined July 2009
Kite

Lanttu wrote:

[Eternal Wandering]
Rise hitsound volume during kiai-time to about 50%? Sounds bad when it's so quiet. ;u; Also, this is the only diff with two kiai times? Hm, I guess it depends on the user settings in options... it sounds alright to me and a few other people I asked... I prefer to keep current volume; about the Kiai.. IMO it fits for that part but if it's needed I'll remove ~
00:48:412 (7) - Add new combo and delete it from the next note? Done, thanks!
01:19:025 (1,2,3) - Maybe move 1 and 2 like this? Done, thanks!
Raging Bull
2,809 posts
Joined June 2010
Raging Bull
Mods are only suggestions.

General:
Folder

Last Yu resolution is 1056x768. Change to 1024x768 <---Unrankable.
Taiko BG change resolution into 4:3 ratio. (800x600, 1024x768 etc)
All other BG are 1 pixel off ._. (1023x767) change it to 1024x768)
Yuyuuu - Is this BG used? I'm not sure. If it isn't used remove it from folder?
Shorten mp3 since map doesn't use whole mp3.

Easy:
Maybe +1 HP Drain?
01:31:474 (1) - Spinner might be too short for easy. Make spinner start at 01:31:065 instead? Or add note 01:31:065 then slider 01:31:474 to 01:32:290?

Normal:
Nothing bothered me really.

Hard:
Map beginning like other people?
00:38:412 - 00:39:841 Add break or map here. You can lose a lot of HP because of high HP drain. Maybe break because not much to map during this time.

Necro
Nothing bothered me much.
00:59:637 (4) - ._. Nice job.

Eternal:
+1 OD +1 HP?
Nothing bothered me much.

Star and good luck!
Pereira006
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Joined October 2010
Pereira006

Raging Bull wrote:

Mods are only suggestions.

Hard:
Map beginning like other people? oki
00:38:412 - 00:39:841 Add break or map here. You can lose a lot of HP because of high HP drain. Maybe break because not much to map during this time.hmmm i didn't add break but yes add note and slider thank you
thank you

Download: ZUN - Night Sakura Of Dead Spirits (Elly-chan) [Pereira's hard].osu
friendok
127 posts
Joined September 2010
friendok
star
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
mod time

[Necro Fanatic]
01:23:718(4) - move 3 down (grid 3)
01:23:922(5) - move 3 up (grid 3)


star
Elly-chan
969 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Elly-chan

Rikers wrote:

The Taiko diff uses the whole .mp3 so no shortening kthnx.
Edit: -eats Elly for shortening the Taiko diff-
No Witch For You Then QB. :O no I kid. I still have the full taiko and copter-kun's map lol, I'll eventually put them both in the description for download x3
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
hihi >w<

[General]
  1. your mp3 file is only 96 kbps , it is unrankble , make it 128-192 kbps plz
  2. BG size must be 1024x768 or 800x600
[Easy]
  1. 00:02:923 (2,1) - spacing
  2. 00:16:371 (2,1) - slider go around circle better plz
  3. 00:19:637 (1,2) - spacing
  4. 00:37:596 (4,5) - ^
    ok , I ignored spacing issues after this , plz check everywhere
  5. 00:40:657 (1) - make it in the middle of the screen plz
  6. 01:06:167 (1) - not horizontal ?
  7. 01:07:596 (2) - this is too short for an Easy , for newbie hard to tell when it end
  8. 01:29:841 (5) - not horizontal ? make it circle and spinner from 01:30:453 to 01:32:290 is better
[LRJ's Normal]
  1. 01:01:269 (2,3,4) - spacing ?
  2. 01:08:616 (4,5,1) - really confusing
Pereira's hard
  1. 00:05:476 (2) - make it look better plz
  2. 01:24:943 (9,10) - delete (10) , end (9) at 01:25:555 ?
[Necro Fanatic]
  1. 00:01:646 (2,3) - this spacing is really confusing
  2. 00:20:453 (5,6,7) - to slider
  3. 00:34:127 (4,5) - spacing 1.0x not 0.75x plz
  4. 00:45:555 (3,4,5,6,7) - make a pentagon ?
  5. 00:54:739 (1,2) - spacing
  6. 01:31:474 (1) - start at 01:30:555
[Eternal Wandering]
  1. fine
good song >w<
Ekoro
3,522 posts
Joined March 2010
Ekoro

wcx19911123 wrote:

[LRJ's Normal]
  1. 01:01:269 (2,3,4) - spacing ? Nope , it looks correct ~
  2. 01:08:616 (4,5,1) - really confusing >< Fixed
Thanks for mod ~

Download: ZUN - Night Sakura Of Dead Spirits (Elly-chan) [LRJ's Normal].osu
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined October 2010
Pereira006

wcx19911123 wrote:

hihi >w<


Pereira's hard
  1. 00:05:476 (2) - make it look better plz YES
  2. 01:24:943 (9,10) - delete (10) , end (9) at 01:25:555 ?NO
thank looking my diff :)

Download: ZUN - Night Sakura Of Dead Spirits (Elly-chan) [Pereira's hard].osu

done :3
Elly-chan
969 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Elly-chan

wcx19911123 wrote:

[General]
  1. your mp3 file is only 96 kbps , it is unrankble , make it 128-192 kbps plz
  2. BG size must be 1024x768 or 800x600[/color]
So I have to resize them all one pixel taller. *facepalm* Ill fix that with kbps

[Easy] All done~
  1. 00:02:923 (2,1) - spacing
  2. 00:16:371 (2,1) - slider go around circle better plz
  3. 00:19:637 (1,2) - spacing
  4. 00:37:596 (4,5) - ^
    ok , I ignored spacing issues after this , plz check everywhere
  5. 00:40:657 (1) - make it in the middle of the screen plz
  6. 01:06:167 (1) - not horizontal ?
  7. 01:07:596 (2) - this is too short for an Easy , for newbie hard to tell when it end
  8. 01:29:841 (5) - not horizontal ? make it circle and spinner from 01:30:453 to 01:32:290 is better
[Necro Fanatic]
  1. 00:01:646 (2,3) - this spacing is really confusing No fix :(
  2. 00:20:453 (5,6,7) - to slider No, sorry D:
  3. 00:34:127 (4,5) - spacing 1.0x not 0.75x plz Fixed
  4. 00:45:555 (3,4,5,6,7) - make a pentagon ? Doesn't look that good but ok
  5. 00:54:739 (1,2) - spacing mm done
  6. 01:31:474 (1) - start at 01:30:555 Done!!
Thanks for mod~
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
mod request in #modreqs

[General]

- mp3 bitrate is less then 128 ~ 192 kb/s which is unrankable
Yuyubacky.jpg image has wrong resoultion, if you want to get this mapset ranked you should keep resolution 4:3 [800 x 600; 1024 x 768]
Yours is 1002 x 768. Also Taiko background has wrong resolution too. If you want send me image via pm i'll make for you taiko background with my font style. Other backfround are 4:3 but has difference in 1 pixel. Well, it's not an issue, but better to keep same resolution 1024 x 768
- don't really like your choice of colors. Replace white color and better to add something else instead of different purple colors.
- remove mark from "Display storyboard in front of combo fire". You don't have SB.
- useless osb. file
- Set Audio lead-in 2000 (2 seconds) in ALL difficulties
- Timing in taiko difficulty is different from others
- use same duration and count of kiai mods in every difficulty (except Taiko)
- remove "Stage1 theme Copter-kun" from tags
- Taiko difficulty has different preview point then others.

[Easy]

Hitsounds are random.

00:13:095 (2,3,1) - keep consistency. Fix spacing between 3 and 1
00:44:739 (5,3,4,5) - ^
00:38:208 (5) - spacing
01:16:780 (4) - ^

Well what can i say, you used so many 1/2 notes, which is difficulty to read for newbie players. I'd highly suggest to use less1/2 notes. And try to adjust them to 1/1. Use sliders, different patterns etc.

[LRJ's Normal]

Suggesting to use tick rate 0.5 or 2, to avoid awkward sliderticks.
Suggesting to increase Approach rate by 1.

01:08:616 (4,5,1) - hard to read for middling players. and 01:09:025 (1,2) - switch new combos.
01:12:494 (1,1) - do not use such stucks please, 01:12:494 (1) - remove new combo.
01:19:025 (1,1) - ^
01:15:555 (4,1) - switch new combo's

Pereira's hard
HP -1
replace h --> H (Pereira's Hard instead of Pereira's hard)
00:01:008 (1) - make it better, more symmetrical. http://puu.sh/2J9N
48,84,1008,6,0,B|48:152|188:152|188:84|188:16|328:16|328:84,1,350
00:05:476 (2) - http://puu.sh/2Ja4
260,268,5476,2,0,B|256:332|317:359|382:354|401:293,1,210
00:07:816 (8) - suggesting to remove this note and add one more reapet to previous slider
00:13:923 (1,2,3,4,5) - anti spacing. Not sure, not sure.
00:18:820 (1) - make same shape as next 2 sliders.
00:58:004 (1) - ninja spinner, high suggesting to replace without something else.

[Necro Fanatic]
HP +1
OD -1
00:12:888 00:12:992 00:13:095 00:13:302 00:13:509 00:13:716 - these objects are not snapped. Resnap all notes.
Slider speed speed seems too fast for such calm piano song.
I have no idea why you name this difficulty "Necro Fanatic" it fits more with something related with Yukari Yakumo (Necrofantasia)
00:04:412 (8) - space it correctly or add new combo.
00:14:535 (9) - ^
00:20:759 (6) - spacing is bit too large
00:38:208 - starting from this point better to use some extra beats with main piano beats.
00:40:045 (1) - http://puu.sh/2Jb7
376,192,40045,6,0,B|464:188|496:272|464:356|376:352,1,270,4|0
Other stuff do by yourself, it's your map, not mine (i mean adjustements of sliders)
00:55:351 (3) , 00:55:963 (5) - keep consistency in spacing.
00:57:698 (1) - start 1/4 later.
00:59:637 (4) - well i understand good slider shape, but it makes hidden next notes 01:01:474 (1,2,3,4) . So change it please.
01:23:310 (2,3,4,5) - kinda hard to read and looks so odd. Better to make better pattern
01:31:474 (1) - ninja spinner. Better to start it from there 01:30:657

Eternal Wandering

- More then 3 unique slider velocities were used. I don't think that breaking this rule makes this difficulty more funny or better. This is just an unrankable error.
Volume of hitsounds are too low, suggesting to increase them by 20-30%
Better to use tick rate 1
Stacky spacing <_<
OD +1?
00:46:576 (1) - http://puu.sh/2JbX
01:30:521 (1) - start 1/3 later

That's all.
Staring this map.
Elly-chan
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Elly-chan

Louis Cyphre wrote:

mod request in #modreqs

[General]

- mp3 bitrate is less then 128 ~ 192 kb/s which is unrankable Ima get somebody to do this for me soon.
Yuyubacky.jpg image has wrong resoultion, if you want to get this mapset ranked you should keep resolution 4:3 [800 x 600; 1024 x 768]
Yours is 1002 x 768. Also Taiko background has wrong resolution too. If you want send me image via pm i'll make for you taiko background with my font style. Other backfround are 4:3 but has difference in 1 pixel. Well, it's not an issue, but better to keep same resolution 1024 x 768 Ill eventually fix them all when guest diffs are fixed by the person :)
- Timing in taiko difficulty is different from others *Looks at rikash*
- use same duration and count of kiai mods in every difficulty (except Taiko) Asks other mappers*
The Rest I Didn't list here were fixed.

[Easy]

Hitsounds are random. Fixed

00:13:095 (2,3,1) - keep consistency. Fix spacing between 3 and 1 Done
00:44:739 (5,3,4,5) - ^ ^
00:38:208 (5) - spacing ^
01:16:780 (4) - ^^

Well what can i say, you used so many 1/2 notes, which is difficulty to read for newbie players. I'd highly suggest to use less1/2 notes. And try to adjust them to 1/1. Use sliders, different patterns etc. If I get another complaint I might change some. honestly Id dont see how this is hard but ok.

[Necro Fanatic]
HP +1 Done
OD -1 Done
00:12:888 00:12:992 00:13:095 00:13:302 00:13:509 00:13:716 - these objects are not snapped. Resnap all notes. Donedone~
Slider speed speed seems too fast for such calm piano song. More Emotional IMO. If I get another complaint about this I will prolly change.
I have no idea why you name this difficulty "Necro Fanatic" it fits more with something related with Yukari Yakumo (Necrofantasia) Fixed to Secluded Child taken from Yuyuko's wiki page. So its now like She was never around (Hard+), then leads into insane (eternal wandering) because she's gone crazy from being alone so now shes wandering with no reason~ Idk xD but yeah. Thats new name, and I agree Necro Fanatic sounded more like Yukarin. o uo

00:04:412 (8) - space it correctly or add new combo. Added new combo because I didn't want to have to space the rest of my map again.
00:14:535 (9) - ^ New Combo Yet Again.
00:20:759 (6) - spacing is bit too large Changed to 0.9 for this part so that its more between the two notes.
00:38:208 - starting from this point better to use some extra beats with main piano beats. Done the ones that stood out the most.
00:40:045 (1) - http://puu.sh/2Jb7 Done
376,192,40045,6,0,B|464:188|496:272|464:356|376:352,1,270,4|0
(^)
Other stuff do by yourself, it's your map, not mine (i mean adjustements of sliders) Oki
00:55:351 (3) , 00:55:963 (5) - keep consistency in spacing. done herp?
00:57:698 (1) - start 1/4 later. Done~
00:59:637 (4) - well i understand good slider shape, but it makes hidden next notes 01:01:474 (1,2,3,4) . So change it please. Fixed 1,2, and 3, but it wasn't possible to fix 4 D:
01:23:310 (2,3,4,5) - kinda hard to read and looks so odd. Better to make better pattern no
01:31:474 (1) - ninja spinner. Better to start it from there 01:30:657 Done
Thank you so much for mod ;_;
Pereira006
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Louis Cyphre wrote:

mod request in #modreqs

Pereira's hard
HP -1YES
replace h --> H (Pereira's Hard instead of Pereira's hard) YES
00:01:008 (1) - make it better, more symmetrical. http://puu.sh/2J9N YES
48,84,1008,6,0,B|48:152|188:152|188:84|188:16|328:16|328:84,1,350
00:05:476 (2) - http://puu.sh/2Ja4 YES
260,268,5476,2,0,B|256:332|317:359|382:354|401:293,1,210
00:07:816 (8) - suggesting to remove this note and add one more reapet to previous slider YES
00:13:923 (1,2,3,4,5) - anti spacing. Not sure, not sure.[color=#FF0000]NO[/color]
00:18:820 (1) - make same shape as next 2 sliders.YES
00:58:004 (1) - ninja spinner, high suggesting to replace without something else.okay~~.face
thank looking my diff :)

Download: ZUN - Night Sakura Of Dead Spirits (Elly-chan) [Pereira's hard].osu

SORRY double download :o diownload 2 second pleasse


Download: ZUN - Night Sakura Of Dead Spirits (Elly-chan) [Pereira's hard].osu
Kite
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Kite

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Volume of hitsounds are too low, suggesting to increase them by 20-30% Increased a bit
Better to use tick rate 1 Need current tickrate for tick hitsounds
00:46:576 (1) - http://puu.sh/2JbX Ok
01:30:521 (1) - start 1/3 later Hm, ok I guess
Rikers
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Rikers

Elly-chan wrote:

Louis Cyphre wrote:

- Timing in taiko difficulty is different from others *Looks at rikash*
Yeah I thought it sounded better at first
but then after awhile, it sounded off xD
Makar
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Makar
Hello.

[Secluded Child]
00:15:759 (2,3,4) - Inconsistent Spacing... Maybe shift 3-8 like this http://i.imgur.com/1rqiQ.png ?
00:27:392 (2) - I think you should stack with 00:28:820 (3)
00:33:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - Weird/Inconsistent Spacing
00:37:596 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Looks like you are trying to do accelerated spacing... I think this should be more noticeable/exaggerated. or just make the spacing equal.


~Star~
Elly-chan
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Elly-chan

Makar8000 wrote:

Hello.

[Secluded Child]
00:15:759 (2,3,4) - Inconsistent Spacing... Maybe shift 3-8 like this http://i.imgur.com/1rqiQ.png ?
00:27:392 (2) - I think you should stack with 00:28:820 (3)
00:33:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - Weird/Inconsistent Spacing
00:37:596 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Looks like you are trying to do accelerated spacing... I think this should be more noticeable/exaggerated. or just make the spacing equal.


~Star~
Fixed some. Thanks~
Ekoro
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Ekoro

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[LRJ's Normal]

Suggesting to use tick rate 0.5 or 2, to avoid awkward sliderticks. Changed to 2
Suggesting to increase Approach rate by 1. Done + increased Overall Difficulty and HP Drain cause the settings is like a [Easy] diff ~

01:08:616 (4,5,1) - hard to read for middling players. Done and 01:09:025 (1,2) - switch new combos. Nope ~
01:12:494 (1,1) - do not use such stucks please Done, 01:12:494 (1) - remove new combo. Nope ~
01:19:025 (1,1) - ^ Done
01:15:555 (4,1) - switch new combo's Nope ~
Thanks for mod Louis :P

Download: ZUN - Night Sakura Of Dead Spirits (Elly-chan) [LRJ's Normal].osu
YTYuyu
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YTYuyu
Star because this song is awesome :D
Sakura
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Sakura
Alright i was asked to mod your map, but first things first,

You need a new mp3 because the quality of yours is blow 128 kbps which is the minimum quality required for ranking I've uploaded a new mp3 i found that was high quality enough.
There are 2 different ways you can install the new mp3 on your map, the first is to just rename it so it has the exact same name as your old one and paste it and overwrite the previous one, the second one is to delete the other one and paste this one in the song folder then change the audio filename on each osu! file:


All timing points with the new mp3 should have -354 ms, the easiest way to do this is to select all timing points and do -354 to them like this:

You should probably reset your preview point on all maps as well.

Now on to the maps themselves.
[General]
Would be nice if in your OP you said which diff is which, instead of using names totally different than the ones in the actual maps, going by SR i assume they are in order tho, so i'll mod based on that.
One of the things i love about this map is that it uses tick rate 2, good choice <3
Yuyuuu.jpg Yuyubacky.png yuyuko lol.jpg <-- unused image files in the folder, please remove them.
You dont need Elly-chan in tags, since you're already the beatmap creator.

[Taikers Oni]
00:12:072 (43) - Unsnapped!
00:12:497 (44) - Unsnapped!
00:12:989 (46) - Unsnapped!
00:13:095 (47) - Unsnapped!
00:13:308 (48) - Unsnapped!
00:13:521 (49) - Unsnapped!
00:13:734 (50) - Unsnapped!
01:10:861 (41) - Unsnapped slider end.

[Eternal Wandering]
White combo color tends to blend with the background, plus thanks to it i missed this slider >border< 00:56:984 (5)
00:53:106 (1,2) - I seriously recommend you change these slider shapes, since you're using symmetry spacing shouldnt be a problem try this?
Also dont apply normal hitsounds meant for hitcircles to sliderticks.

[Secluded Child]
Pretty awkward that this diff has a higher slider velocity than the Insane.
Try to not combine double stacks with singles in middle of a single stream.
00:49:841 (5) - Unintuitive slider i'd recommend you drop a repeat or change it somehow.
01:01:882 (4) - Slider doesnt fit the music.
You're pretty much mapping in a box mapping pattern, and i dont blame you because you're a new mapper and that's what new mappers tend to do, i would prefer if you would at least try to make some cool patterns that would make the map more fun to play.

[Pereira's Hard]
I'd say change the whole color set... all shades of purple are too similar with each other, and pure white hurts the eyes during kiai time.
01:06:167 (1,2) - These repeats are really unintuitive.
01:09:025 (7,8) - ^
I like what you did at 01:25:759 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) more than the previous 2 ones.

[LRJ's Normal]
Probably the best map in the mapset, just wanted to let you know, no errors found.

[Easy]
And here my heart breaks </3 tick rate 2 please D:

Nevertheless good mapset, deserves an SP star, however it still needs some more work before star icon.

After all changes are done since you're removing images from your song folder and adding a different mp3 dont forget to FULL SUBMIT
Pereira006
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Pereira006

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Pereira's Hard]
I'd say change the whole color set... all shades of purple are too similar with each other, and pure white hurts the eyes during kiai time.fix
01:06:167 (1,2) - These repeats are really unintuitive.fix
01:09:025 (7,8) - ^fix
I like what you did at 01:25:759 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) more than the previous 2 ones.ok
Download: ZUN - Night Sakura Of Dead Spirits (Elly-chan) [Pereira's hard].osu

Thank looking my diff
Elly-chan
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Elly-chan

Sakura Hana wrote:

Fixed MP3 and Preview Points

[General]
Would be nice if in your OP you said which diff is which, instead of using names totally different than the ones in the actual maps, going by SR i assume they are in order tho, so i'll mod based on that. Derp.. it says in the description which diffs are which lol
One of the things i love about this map is that it uses tick rate 2, good choice <3 <3
Yuyuuu.jpg Yuyubacky.png yuyuko lol.jpg <-- unused image files in the folder, please remove them. Done
You dont need Elly-chan in tags, since you're already the beatmap creator. Done

[Secluded Child]
Pretty awkward that this diff has a higher slider velocity than the Insane. im gonna fix that.
Try to not combine double stacks with singles in middle of a single stream. Fixed some streams so they are more flowy and no more double stacks
00:49:841 (5) - Unintuitive slider i'd recommend you drop a repeat or change it somehow. Made into a single slider
01:01:882 (4) - Slider doesnt fit the music. Made into two that do
You're pretty much mapping in a box mapping pattern, and i dont blame you because you're a new mapper and that's what new mappers tend to do, i would prefer if you would at least try to make some cool patterns that would make the map more fun to play. I tried to fix the boxes but oh well it is my first map I actually did complete . . . :3

[Easy]
And here my heart breaks </3 tick rate 2 please D: Done, I didnt notice it wasn't XD

Nevertheless good mapset, deserves an SP star, however it still needs some more work before star icon. Im even supprised you starred it thank you<3 ;-;
Thank you for looking at my map Sakura Hana (_ _)
net45291
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Elly's Moe girl <3
SPOILER
:Easy:

Seems good >w<b

:LRJ:

00:48:671 (3,1) - A new player just confuse with this slider , Suggest : Change it to normal note

01:17:038 (4) - New combo

:Pereira:

00:44:385 (5) - New combo

01:07:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Suggest : Change it to slider

:Secluded Child:

00:14:181 (1) - Delete new combo

00:55:813 (6) - New combo

00:57:038 (1) - Delete new combo

:Eternal Wandering:

Lovely

:Taiker Oni:

IDK O ~ o
Ekoro
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Ekoro

net45291 wrote:

:LRJ:

00:48:671 (3,1) - A new player just confuse with this slider , Suggest : Change it to normal note Nah , it looks goods
01:17:038 (4) - New combo Nope ~
Well i'll not fix your suggestions. Sorry ~
Anyway thanks for mod °°
Melan Blue
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winber1
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winber1
sorry for the late response

Eternal Wandering

--disable countdown

00:18:671 (x) - add note. it flows a lot better imo. or you can change 00:18:466 (9) - into a 1/2 tick slider
01:01:936 (1) - remove combo?


Secluded Child

00:14:181 (9) - new combo
00:17:446 (9) - ^?
00:22:752 (1) - remove combo?
00:23:977 (8) - new combo?
01:07:242 (1) - remove combo
01:07:446 (2) - new combo
01:20:303 (1) - remove combo
01:20:507 (2) - new combo
01:26:017 (1) - remove combo
01:26:222 (2) - new combo
01:26:834 (1) - remove combo
01:27:038 (2) - new combo

--lol sorry about all the combos, they are all suggestions, but i like it better like this. everything seems ok.

Pereira's

01:08:671 (1) - remove combo
01:09:079 (3) - new combo

LRJ's

00:51:936 (3) - new combo?
01:17:038 (4,5) - space out a little more?

Easy

00:40:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - having rhythm like this with all circles just feels like it could be hard for beginners if the solely have to pay attention to the spacing and AR
01:07:242 (2) - move 1/2 tick back and rearrange the spacing
01:19:691 (2) - why do you have a SV change? it doesn't make sense... you should delete the SV change imo..

Nice map! :3

i don't really have anything to say

Star~~
Elly-chan
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Elly-chan

winber1 wrote:

sorry for the late response Its fine <3

Secluded Child[/b]

00:14:181 (9) - new combo I had this previously and there has been a small debate about it being there so I'll fix it atm, I'll get another MAT/BAT to look at it and tell me if thats ok.
00:17:446 (9) - ^? done
00:22:752 (1) - remove combo? Done
00:23:977 (8) - new combo? ^
01:07:242 (1) - remove combo no
01:07:446 (2) - new combo no

All after ^ i didn't do. Soz<3

--lol sorry about all the combos, they are all suggestions, but i like it better like this. everything seems ok. k. personally I dont like this diff I made but yeah XD


[b]
Easy

00:40:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - having rhythm like this with all circles just feels like it could be hard for beginners if the solely have to pay attention to the spacing and AR No, soz
01:07:242 (2) - move 1/2 tick back and rearrange the spacing Done
01:19:691 (2) - why do you have a SV change? it doesn't make sense... you should delete the SV change imo.. Done, idunno why I did that anyway xD

Nice map! :3 Thank you ;~;
Edit: Easy and Hard+ Updated
Edit: Normal and Hard Updated
Last edited by Elly-chan , edited 1 time in total.
Ekoro
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Ekoro

winber1 wrote:

00:51:936 (3) - new combo? Nope ~
01:17:038 (4,5) - space out a little more? WTF is that , i'm sure that i haven't map like this.. Anyway , fixed >.>
Thanks for mod o/

Download: ZUN - Night Sakura Of Dead Spirits (Elly-chan) [LRJ's Normal].osu
TicClick
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TicClick
Okay, mod4mod.

Easy
00:46:222 (1) - how about to add whistle for slider's beginning?
00:54:385 (1) - looks like this one should be upright.
01:08:671 - not sure, but what if you add note with clap? If so, then remove clap from 01:09:079 (5) -
01:19:691 (2,3,4) - dunno, maybe you should re-do (3) and (4) by turning (2) on 120 degrees; it would look more symmetrical.
00:16:834 (1) - move central point to (220;144). Same with 00:13:569 (1) - move it to (308;352). Both will look nicer IMO.

Normal — haven't found anything confusing.

Hard
00:13:977 (2) - + 00:15:609 and so on — how about adding clap?
00:30:099 — I'd remove clap from that place (end of 00:29:691 (3) - )
00:30:711 — same as ^ (00:30:303 (4) - )
If you wanna keep this rhythm:
SPOILER
Remove clap from:
  • 00:33:364 (3) -
    00:33:977 (3) -
    00:34:589 (3) -
    00:37:242 (3) - (beginning of it)
Add clap to:
  • 00:33:568 (1) -
    00:34:385 (2) -
    00:36:017 (1) - (middle point of it, 00:36:222)
    00:36:630 (2) - (middle point of it, 00:36:834)
I hope I haven't been lost in these hitsounds ._.

One more rhythm to keep:
00:40:303 (2) - add whistle?
00:43:568 (4) - ^ for slider's beginning
00:46:222 (4) - ^
00:46:426 (5) - ^ for slider's end
00:49:487 (5) - ^
00:50:099 (7) - ^ for slider's beginning
00:52:752 (4) - ^
00:54:385 (2) - remove whistle from the whole slider and add it for beginning only
00:56:017 (1,3) - add whistle for slider's beginning

00:58:058 (1) - add clap
00:58:671 (4,2) - ^
00:59:283 (3) - dunno if needed.. Try to add whistle.

01:01:732 (2) - add clap
01:02:344 - add clap (3rd point of repeating slider)
01:02:548 - add whistle (5th point of ^)
01:03:160 (3) - try to add whistle
01:22:548 (3) - try to add clap

01:10:303 (1) - try to add whistle for end of this slider and for beginning of that > 01:11:528 (3) -
01:17:038 (4,5) - try to add whistle for beginning of these two
01:23:568 (8,9) - same thing as ^
01:30:099 (3) - add whistle for that slider
01:31:120 (4) - add whistle for beginning

Secluded child
00:18:466 (6) - add whistle?
00:20:711 (7) - I'd remove clap and add whistle
00:49:487 (5) - add whistle for end of that slider? (and so on, if this doesn't break rhythm you've made)
01:01:528 (4,5) - ^
You may also remove whistle from these and listen to how it will sound:
  • 01:05:813 (1,3,4,6,7,2,3,5,1) -
    01:09:283 (1) - (end of that slider) plus 01:10:099 (3) -
    01:12:752 (3,4) - plus beginning of 01:13:568 (6) - plus 01:14:589 (3) -
Hm. I think it's enough, hope I help you. Notes' placement is nice.

Starred.
Elly-chan
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Elly-chan

TicClick wrote:

Okay, mod4mod.

Easy
00:46:222 (1) - how about to add whistle for slider's beginning? Yes
00:54:385 (1) - looks like this one should be upright. ?
01:08:671 - not sure, but what if you add note with clap? If so, then remove clap from 01:09:079 (5) - Nope.
01:19:691 (2,3,4) - dunno, maybe you should re-do (3) and (4) by turning (2) on 120 degrees; it would look more symmetrical. Nah, it looks OK as it is now.
00:16:834 (1) - move central point to (220;144). Same with 00:13:569 (1) - move it to (308;352). Both will look nicer IMO. Code or nothin', I tried but couldn't get the point right there.

Normal — haven't found anything confusing. Pro LRJ

Secluded child
00:18:466 (6) - add whistle? Done
00:20:711 (7) - I'd remove clap and add whistle ^
00:49:487 (5) - add whistle for end of that slider? (and so on, if this doesn't break rhythm you've made) Ye.
01:01:528 (4,5) - ^ Nu.
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00:16:834 (1) - move central point to (220;144). Same with 00:13:569 (1) - move it to (308;352). Both will look nicer IMO. Code or nothin', I tried but couldn't get the point right there.
Code? Mkay. Here are my attempts:
1st: 161,348,13569,6,0,B|193:352|221:328|221:328|241:328|313:360|333:296|345:264|345:264|377:248|385:212,1,280,0|2
2nd: 363,152,16834,6,0,B|331:148|303:172|303:172|282:172|211:140|191:203|179:235|179:235|147:252|139:287,1,280,0|2
Fraolinch
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Mod4mod, here we go~ c:

Suggestion
Should fix it
Must fix it


[Taikers Oni]

In general, there are too much "void" in this diff, you're following the melody too much. You have to do what could be "overmapping" in Osu standard, just follow the drums, the rhythm, when there is no melody. Fill the void as much as possible.
Also, you must not put spinners right after 1/4's (same goes for sliders, just so you know) in Taiko, if I remember well. Confirmation required.

Otherwise, not bad.


[Easy]

Some sliders are ugly :< like 00:32:344 (5) - or 00:35:609 (3) - , try to fix them.
(This guide may help.)

- 01:08:262 (3,4,5) - Maybe something like this ? http://puu.sh/3HAr Could apply same rhythm method until 01:30:099 -


[LRJ's Normal]

Perfect~


[Pereira's Hard]

Looks good, I don't think there's anything that needs to be fix'd here.


[Secluded Child]

- 00:33:977 (5) - Was the slowdown really necessary ? It causes an ugly anti-jump, that even looks like a spacing error. Remove the slowdown and try something like this ? http://puu.sh/3HBl
- 01:01:528 (4,5,6,7) - Kinda ugly, try something like this : http://puu.sh/3HC7


[Eternal Wandering]

Nice diff, I see no problems.



Good mapset, have dat star~
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TicClick wrote:

Okay, mod4mod.

SPOILER
Hard
00:13:977 (2) - + 00:15:609 and so on — how about adding clap?
00:30:099 — I'd remove clap from that place (end of 00:29:691 (3) - )
00:30:711 — same as ^ (00:30:303 (4) - )
If you wanna keep this rhythm:
Remove clap from:
  • 00:33:364 (3) -
    00:33:977 (3) -
    00:34:589 (3) -
    00:37:242 (3) - (beginning of it)
Add clap to:
  • 00:33:568 (1) -
    00:34:385 (2) -
    00:36:017 (1) - (middle point of it, 00:36:222)
    00:36:630 (2) - (middle point of it, 00:36:834)
I hope I haven't been lost in these hitsounds ._.

One more rhythm to keep:
00:40:303 (2) - add whistle?
00:43:568 (4) - ^ for slider's beginning
00:46:222 (4) - ^
00:46:426 (5) - ^ for slider's end
00:49:487 (5) - ^
00:50:099 (7) - ^ for slider's beginning
00:52:752 (4) - ^
00:54:385 (2) - remove whistle from the whole slider and add it for beginning only
00:56:017 (1,3) - add whistle for slider's beginning

00:58:058 (1) - add clap
00:58:671 (4,2) - ^
00:59:283 (3) - dunno if needed.. Try to add whistle.

01:01:732 (2) - add clap
01:02:344 - add clap (3rd point of repeating slider)
01:02:548 - add whistle (5th point of ^)
01:03:160 (3) - try to add whistle
01:22:548 (3) - try to add clap

01:10:303 (1) - try to add whistle for end of this slider and for beginning of that > 01:11:528 (3) -
01:17:038 (4,5) - try to add whistle for beginning of these two
01:23:568 (8,9) - same thing as ^
01:30:099 (3) - add whistle for that slider
01:31:120 (4) - add whistle for beginning

all fix I hope hitsound is fine

Starred.
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Dagonpater wrote:

Mod4mod, here we go~ c:

Suggestion
Should fix it
Must fix it

[Easy]

Some sliders are ugly :< like 00:32:344 (5) - or 00:35:609 (3) - , try to fix them. Kinda fixed them, not much I can do since such a low SV.
(This guide may help.)

- 01:08:262 (3,4,5) - Maybe something like this ? http://puu.sh/3HAr Could apply same rhythm method until 01:30:099 - Did a slider and added a note, otherwise I think the rest didnt need fixing. Derp.


[Secluded Child]

- 00:33:977 (5) - Was the slowdown really necessary ? It causes an ugly anti-jump, that even looks like a spacing error. Remove the slowdown and try something like this ? http://puu.sh/3HBl Done :3
- 01:01:528 (4,5,6,7) - Kinda ugly, try something like this : http://puu.sh/3HC7 Did something different but fixed<3 :D

Good mapset, have dat star~
Thanksbroiloveyou<3
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~Eternal Wandering~
00:18:671 - Sounds good with a note here
01:02:396 - 11 and 1 could be lined up better
01:29:079 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I dunno, these just seem quite plain for an ending pattern on an insane, maybe something like this would be okay?
SPOILER

Other than that, I didn't find anything wrong with that or the other diffs, very nice map, best of luck to you with this.
Have a star~
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[Taikers Oni]
I dont agree with the ninja spinners even if it's a Taiko diff, i dont mind if you dont change them but i won't be bubbling this map with those in.

[Secluded Child]
00:13:569 (8,1) - This is a really bad anti-jump i must say, due to the main beat starting there i thought (1) was 1/1 away.
00:33:569 (3,4,5) - Spacing error
00:38:875 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:17:038 (5,1) - This and similar spots before and after this really feel empty in between, i suggest if possible dont use the NC here, instead just start following the drums in the background or the main beat to fill this gap with something because it's really awkward then you can add a note with a finish at where you would usually have the lonely note, if you dont want to do this, then just remove the NC from this note for consistence.


[Pereira's Hard]
Remove "stage" "1" "theme" "EllyTLS" "Copter-kun" from tags.
00:38:058 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm doesnt really fit the music imo.
I find quite plain that almost the whole map is 1/2 spam =/ specially since most patterns with those 1/2s are squares and circles ._.

[LRJ's Normal]
Nothing to complain about Good Job <3

[Easy]
01:05:813 - Clapping sounds really bad from here on since it doesnt seem to be following any particular rythm, i sugges you use claps on the 2nd and 4th beats (regular clap pattern) works really well with any song.
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Sakura Hana wrote:

[Taikers Oni]

[Pereira's Hard]
Remove "stage" "1" "theme" "EllyTLS" "Copter-kun" from tags.fix
00:38:058 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm doesnt really fit the music imo.Fix
I find quite plain that almost the whole map is 1/2 spam =/ specially since most patterns with those 1/2s are squares and circles ._.I can't understand this... I didn't lot remove spam 1/2 because I followed drums but only 01:05:813 at 01:10:099 is little change Sorry my poor english
All done

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hmm? oh dont worry, its just that i found it quite plain to be hitting 1/2 all the time, you dont need to change a thing there, that was my opinion
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Sakura Hana wrote:

[Secluded Child]
00:13:569 (8,1) - This is a really bad anti-jump i must say, due to the main beat starting there i thought (1) was 1/1 away. Edit: Fix'd
00:33:569 (3,4,5) - Spacing error Done
00:38:875 (1) - Remove new combo. Done
01:17:038 (5,1) - This and similar spots before and after this really feel empty in between, i suggest if possible dont use the NC here, instead just start following the drums in the background or the main beat to fill this gap with something because it's really awkward then you can add a note with a finish at where you would usually have the lonely note, if you dont want to do this, then just remove the NC from this note for consistence. Removed NC's instead.

[Easy]
01:05:813 - Clapping sounds really bad from here on since it doesnt seem to be following any particular rythm, i sugges you use claps on the 2nd and 4th beats (regular clap pattern) works really well with any song. Fixed.
Thank you for Star ;_;
Rikers
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Dagonpater wrote:

[Taikers Oni]

In general, there are too much "void" in this diff, you're following the melody too much. You have to do what could be "overmapping" in Osu standard, just follow the drums, the rhythm, when there is no melody. Fill the void as much as possible.
Also, you must not put spinners right after 1/4's (same goes for sliders, just so you know) in Taiko, if I remember well. Confirmation required.

Otherwise, not bad.
Okay I'll be fixing this thing up after I get home from work.
Definitely filled some of the empty spots and removed the spinners so far.

Edit: Wow so many guest diffs lol
Um wasnt there a new rule that stated that most of the diffs have to be yours?
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Rikers wrote:

Edit: Wow so many guest diffs lol
Um wasnt there a new rule that stated that most of the diffs have to be yours?
1, *points to other maps*Theres a new rule? and if there is, it looks like other mappers don't care for it either.
2, it's too late now lolol. I am definitely not going to make another diff. If BATs bitch I'll just let this graveyard and never let this be seen again<3

EDIT: What sakura said, I never read that new rule so idk xD
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Each mapper has 1 diff, Elly-chan has 2 diffs, fits perfectly within said rule/guideline
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Well...anyway, my diff's fixed
c:


I guess om nom nom



Also, I was thinking of changing the name of my diff to something else. Hmm..



That is all.

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Updated. C'mon, modders!! I want this to be ranked some day. So I need YOUR mods. ;D
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Ok, let's take a look at this.

[General]
  1. Discussed about the background on [Easy] via irc. Changed to that new one~ Also, corrected the misspelling on Saigyouji on the tags.
  2. About the difficulties' name: Having Easy, Normal and Hard, but then two difficulties with random names seems, well... random. And pointless. Perhaps you could try:
    1. Changing the name of "Secluded Child" to [Insane]
    2. Changing the name of "Eternal Wandering" to [Kite's Extreme]
    3. Also [Rikers' Taiko Oni] would work fine for the Taiko, I guess :P
    It's better that way.
  3. There are like 25 unmapped seconds in every difficulty. Consider either cutting the mp3, or mapping til the end?
  4. Everything else looks tidy :3
[Easy]
  1. 00:07:462 (4) - Why is this so close to (3)? Try respecting the distance snap, this should be placed further from (3). Not a big deal though, it plays nicely anyway.
  2. 00:44:385 (5) - (Nazi) move this one grid down so it's aligned with (3) and (4) :P
  3. 01:30:099 (6) - Use a finish instead of a clap, it sounds better.
[LRJ's Normal]
  1. Just fine~
[Pereira's Hard]
  1. Your combo colours are too similar. Consider making them more distinguishable :)
  2. 00:05:973 (3,5) - I don't think the claps at these are needed. Care to remove them?
  3. Nothing apart from that. It plays quiet nicely.
[Secluded Child]
  1. 00:18:037 (2,3,4,5,6) - Could you please move this like 2 grids up? that way, it will be easier to understand the pattern.
  2. 00:59:283 (4) - Nice!
[Eternal Wandering]
  1. Everything looks fine~
And nothing to say about the Taiko. Everything looks functional n.n
Elly-chan
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narakucrimson wrote:

Ok, let's take a look at this.

[General]
  1. Discussed about the background on [Easy] via irc. Changed to that new one~ Also, corrected the misspelling on Saigyouji on the tags. Yup, I fixed them before you posted the mod~
  2. About the difficulties' name: Having Easy, Normal and Hard, but then two difficulties with random names seems, well... random. And pointless. Perhaps you could try:
    1. Changing the name of "Secluded Child" to [Insane]
    2. Changing the name of "Eternal Wandering" to [Kite's Extreme]
    3. Also [Rikers' Taiko Oni] would work fine for the Taiko, I guess :P
    I Let The Guest Diff's mappers choose the difficulty's names, that's what they chose. I chose mine according to Kite's, and Secluded child and eternal wandering go with Yuyuko. ;P Mine is actually on her wiki page. xD Sakura didn't have a problem, but if another MAT/BAT does i'll fix mine at the least.
    It's better that way.
  3. There are like 25 unmapped seconds in every difficulty. Consider either cutting the mp3, or mapping til the end? Sakura made it like this on purpose. xD 25 seconds is truely not a big deal. XD But yet again, if MAT/BAT complains I'll get someone to cut it for me..
  4. Everything else looks tidy :3
Except for an extra taiko BG in the folder ;O *fixed*

[Easy]
  1. 00:07:462 (4) - Why is this so close to (3)? Try respecting the distance snap, this should be placed further from (3). Not a big deal though, it plays nicely anyway. Yay for defying distance snap for once!! This is prolly the only map I used anti-jumps on except for Secluded child XD
  2. 00:44:385 (5) - (Nazi) move this one grid down so it's aligned with (3) and (4) :P http://puu.sh/3Olj ; that's all I have to say on this subject.~
  3. 01:30:099 (6) - Use a finish instead of a clap, it sounds better. Did whistle instead of clap.


[Secluded Child]
  1. 00:18:037 (2,3,4,5,6) - Could you please move this like 2 grids up? that way, it will be easier to understand the pattern. Done
  2. 00:59:283 (4) - Nice! Thankies !!
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hello~~

all fix ;_;

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Now, one thing I have to scold you about is that "if a MAT/BAT complains, I'll change it".

The fact that a modder isn't a MAT doesn't mean that you don't do what they suggest, neither MATs nor BATs are magical dudes who see through everything. So for the future, keep that in mind: always evaluate a suggestion, and try it or imagine how things would be applying it, even if it doesn't come from a MAT/BAT.

Now get this ranked~

Oh and about that alignment I mentioned, it seems it was magically moved up xD If not I wouldn't have said anything
Elly-chan
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narakucrimson wrote:

The fact that a modder isn't a MAT doesn't mean that you don't do what they suggest, neither MATs nor BATs are magical dudes who see through everything. So for the future, keep that in mind: always evaluate a suggestion, and try it or imagine how things would be applying it, even if it doesn't come from a MAT/BAT.
Your right, but I only say that when I don't want to change it and I would only if they say it's essential. XP Cause I don't want this to not get ranked lol. I hope you understand that xD So it's basically just like me saying no..~

Mini Edit: Talked about this subject on IRC with Naraku, I will now be sure not to just let MATs and BATs complain about things if they do without defending my position as this mapper if it's about something i strongly don't wanna change x3.
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What narakucrimsom said is true, im not a goddess who catches everything, nor law who everything i say must be done, just because i'm a MAT doesnt mean that i'll catch absolutely everything although i try to, but in the end im a human, and human error may happen.

[Taikers Oni]
01:32:548 - What the... why does volume suddenly go 50%? if anything 70 or 80% but 50% is too low imo.

[Secluded Child]
01:15:201 (5,6) - Spacing error.

[LRJ's Normal]
01:00:915 (2,3,4) - Spacing error.

Fix and i'll bubble
Rikers
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narakucrimson wrote:

[Rikers' Taiko Oni] would work fine for the Taiko, I guess :P
It's better that way.
I want my taiko diffs to have sort of uniqueness in their names not some generic ones = w=
Taiko+Rikers=Taikers Oni

nomnomnom

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Taikers Oni]
01:32:548 - What the... why does volume suddenly go 50%? if anything 70 or 80% but 50% is too low imo.
-facepalms-
Just change it 70 I guess


whatever

Edit: Also, this.

Elly-chan wrote:

Your right
-looks to the right-


I....don't see anything to my right
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Sakura Hana wrote:

[Taikers Oni]
01:32:548 - What the... why does volume suddenly go 50%? if anything 70 or 80% but 50% is too low imo. Fixed

[Secluded Child]
01:15:201 (5,6) - Spacing error. Fixed

[LRJ's Normal]
01:00:915 (2,3,4) - Spacing error. Not fixed.. _LRJ_ didn't wanna.

Fix and i'll bubble
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Just a few thought:

YUYUUUUUBG.png is 1.6mb, change it to jpg so the file size will be reduced and full submit after that
Yuyuko~.jpg look stretched, making it look ugly, maybe you can fix this a little?

Your mp3 is way too long than the map. I've cut the mp3 shorter, click this link
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Equivalent wrote:

Your mp3 is way too long than the map. I've cut the mp3 shorter, click this link
I talked it with Gonzvlo since i was asking him to cut the mp3, the change it's not so big, since the problem is that Taiko maps a part of the second loop, hence leaving only 20 seconds out, and the change in filesize without a fade out would only reduce like 0,4 mb so it's not worth it.
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Done. I hope this gets ranked soon..~ ;~; gogogo forever Night Sakura~
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Wah? so it was intentional? spacing like this?

Look at the grid and the timeline

And the spacing info:


Also:
[Secluded Child] 01:15:201 (5,6) - Spacing is still longer than: 01:14:181 (1,2,3,4), is this intentional?
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Sakura Hana wrote:

Also:
[Secluded Child] 01:15:201 (5,6) - Spacing is still longer than: 01:14:181 (1,2,3,4), is this intentional? Fixed, forgot to set it on 0.8
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I was sure it's correctly spaced ._. Fixed , thanks you very much ~

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Great! congratulations on your first Bubble Elly-chan!
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Woo bubbled :3
And in only a few months too x3!

inb4rankedtakesthreeyears
I mean what
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Rikers wrote:

Woo bubbled :3
And in only a few months too x3!

inb4rankedtakesthreeyears
I mean what
Yayaya long live Night Sakura of Dead Spirits!

iknowrights
;~;
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P.S - I wanna marry Yuyuko ;_;
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ZUN :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
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Muya wrote:

ZUN :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Wow that's a lot of faces.
But seriously, congratulations on your bubble :)
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-From what I have seen the title should be "Night Sakura of Dead Spirits" not "Night Sakura Of Dead Spirits". Follow this thread so you don't make any mistakes when full submitting.
-Your offset seems kind of early while playing at the moment, I would say try +8 on all of them (don't forget to resnap all notes/timing sections)

Pereira's Hard:
00:10:228 (7,1) - space these out more

Secluded Child:
00:14:181 (9,1) - space these out more

Everything else looks good~
I would try and get someone to rebubble first as I wont be able to rank after a timing change but up to you
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Done

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Long Live Night Sakura of Dead Spirits.



And I now pronounce Pereira and Yuyuko Husband and Wife.
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The map is great, there's a lot of work in it, and I feel I should just give this map its likely final star to get a few more moderators on it. This deserves a star. Elly's a close friend, and she deserves to at least be known for Saigyouzi Yuyuko's theme.

EDIT: Some people spell Yuyuko's surname as "Saigyouzi". Please put that in the tags so that it gets noticed for both search queries.
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Oh no you don't.
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Alright then, all timing issues have been resolved since all 3 red lines have a different movement (i think it was -4 -2 -6 from James suggestion?), removed an extra red line on taiko, fixed the spacing James mentioned and snapped some green lines.

Time for Rebubble~

Expect a James check shortly
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Sakura Hana wrote:

Alright then, all timing issues have been resolved since all 3 red lines have a different movement (i think it was -4 -2 -6 from James suggestion?), removed an extra red line on taiko, fixed the spacing James mentioned and snapped some green lines.

Time for Rebubble~

Expect a James check shortly
-4 -7 -6
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Looks like everything has been fixed nicely, with help from everyone in #modhelp on timing :P

All sounds ok to me so
Ranked~

Congrats on first ranked map :D
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