This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on zaterdag 9 mei 2009 at 17:04:50

Artist: Yuka Tujiyoko
Title: Ghost Gulping
Source: Paper Mario
BPM: 115,94
Filesize: 3108kb
Play Time: 01:10
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1,44 stars, 71 notes)
2. Hard (4,44 stars, 190 notes)
3. Invincible (5 stars, 192 notes)
4. Normal (2,74 stars, 74 notes)

Download: Yuka Tujiyoko - Ghost Gulping
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I think this is the first map of the Paper Mario Project, Tubba Blubba's battle theme: Ghost Gulping
I take any criticism in consideration yadda yadda yak yak...
Thanks to: MisterVercetti, Lybydose, Zerostarry, nooodl, al2e10, Skyripper, Metroid, Alace, Soaprman, minyeob, Lardo YellowYoshi1, vytalibus, Hara, Ekaru, Starrodkirby86, eee, antony11, DeathxShinigami, An64fan, Symbolic, Behonkiss, Jeffro, Lardo once more, jInxyjem, awp, Lokamp, vytalibus again, Cyclone, and PDoogan and DagmarNEO on deviantart for the BGs.

EDITS:
Overflow!!

Vercetti time!

[Easy]

0:48:532 (1,2) - Not aligned properly

[Normal]

0:17:842 (1) - Optional: maybe find a cleaner way to design this slider?
0:29:902 (1) - Was this intentional? If not, do you have Catmull-Rom curves turned on? If so, try switching to Bezier for smoother results.
0:31:713 - I like the idea you've got going here; just make sure that you insert a background image that can support the effect.
0:52:672 (1) - See first suggestion.
0:56:812 (1) - ^

[Hard]

0:24:727 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing; do it like the notes before it. It's hella confusing the way it currently is.
0:41:287 (3) - Having a slider this short seems pointless. I'd suggest splitting it into two separate hit markers instead.
0:42:322 (5-8) - Some alignment issues.
1:27:863 (2) - This slider is hella cool. But the combo should start here instead of the note before.

[Invincible]

0:09:664 (3) - Note not properly placed on timeline.
0:12:243 (6,7) - These notes should really be stacked like the rest for consistency.
0:17:842 (2) - Combo should start here instead of the preceding note.
0:44:823 (3) - See first issue.
1:11:303 (1) - I'm confused as to why this difficulty ends this early, considering how Hard went on for the entire duration of the song. Is this difficulty unfinished?

Overall, some very solid maps with a few little kinks. Fix 'em and this should be well on the road to ranking!

Offset is a bit off. Try around 900ms and re-snap.

Add hit sounds. I only tested the hard difficulty, but there were no hit sounds in it at all.

Needs a background image. A picture of Tubba Blubba would be nice if you can find one large enough that it doesn't get stretched too much. Otherwise, you can probably find a large generic Paper Mario themed image.

The issue you seem to be having is that some of your beats are placed with a 1/6 divisor and some are placed with a 1/4 divisor based on your current BPM. This is causing strange issues regardless of what you set the offset to. The BPM may very well be double what you have it set to (this would cause all your notes to sync at 1/4), but you may want to check in with someone more experienced with timing.

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Great hitsounds
Background plz!
Very, very, very clean!

[Easy]
00:06:07 (3) - a little too far, move a few grids up to match spacing on 1,2, looks like it may have got unsnapped at some point
01:04:55 (4) - Maybe move this down a little bit? The slider overlapping it is a little eh.

[Normal]
00:02:97 (4) - IMO, move over left a few grids to line up with combo before it... (if you do this adjust everything accordingly)
00:12:28 (6) - up a grid or so (I'm using most precise grid settings btw)
00:17:46 (1) - OMG amazing sliders here.. GREAT job!
01:05:58 (2) - move the tail of this a grid to the right to match spacing
those stuttered breaks are pretty neat

[Hard]
00:24:70 (11) - remove new combo
01:27:84 (1) - remove the whistle on the actual slider portion of this and TRY to extend it to the next white (01:31:98).. aka where it goes to in Invincible

[Invincible]
00:57:82 (4) - Move this with grid and distance snapping off so the end lines up with the 2 perfectly

I really enjoyed playing this, so have a star!

Those breaks in normal are too short.

[Hard]
00:57:30 (3) - Spacing.
01:16:45 (2,3) - Clusterfuck.

General:
Your patterns could use work. They are repetitive and boring :/ The combo colors are a bit dull. Also, use less claps, and more whistles, claps dont fit well with the song.

Starred x2

[Invincible]
00:10:60 (8) - I think there needs to be a note in front of this one. (maybe make it a slider?)
00:12:67 (8) - Same
00:32:85 (4,5,6,7,8) - Make sure these are all the same distance from each other
00:34:02 (1,1,etc.) - A little too easy for an insane
00:49:93 (6) - Replace this one to have better beatspacing
01:27:84 (1) - I'd make these 2 seperate sliders.

Easy, Normal, and Hard seem to be pretty fine (other than what others mentioned) and I'd keep the short breaks in Normal!

1 - Get a BG...

Easy
00:36:09 (1) - it's out of spacing to 5 slider beforehand.
00:38:160(4) - New combo
00:42:30 (4) - New combo

Normal
00:38:678(5,6) - Your spacing should have the sliders not touching like that.
00:42:30 (5,6) - Same as above^.
00:46:95 (5,6) - Same as above^.
01:01:448(2) - it shouldn't be touching 1 but be right next to the end of 1.
01:05:588(2) - same as above.
01:06:106(3) - This is too far from 2 by your spacing..

Hard
00:20:824(13,14) - They shouldn't be touching.
00:21:60 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as above^
00:24:96 (12) - Same as above^
00:32:468 - You have no whistle on the starting of the slider, It would sound better if you add it.
00:33:503 - Add a beat here please?
00:43:853 - Put it on the white tick please.
00:44:370 - Can you please stack this under 5 slider?
BTW, Nice slider to beats you got with 1/6 divisor.
01:08:693 - Add a beat here please?

Invincible
You have beats that aren't Snapped to any divisor, It's not allowed...
Please note this through the map.
00:33:50 - Add a beat here?
01:08:693 - Add a beat here?

Metroid wrote:

00:33:503 - Add a beat here please?
01:08:693 - Add a beat here please?
00:33:50 - Add a beat here?
01:08:693 - Add a beat here?

I listened on 25% speed, but there are only five notes there. On hard, you have to take the slider end as one, BTW.
I noticed the little snare on the white tick, but I'm not really mapping to drums.
Fixed everything otherwise. If the Background doesn't upload, I'd just change it so there are four of the same BG's.
Hey wait, you forgot to star Come back here =P

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Easy, Normal, and Hard seem fine to me.

Invincible
00:54:720 (5,6,7): Lengthen these sliders to be like 1,2,3,4
01:26:418 (4): move forward 1/4 beat

Also fix the spacing stuff Alace pointed out.

Starred!

Only [Hard] has some issues.

[Hard]
20:826(13,14)-> Inconsistent spacing.

36:091(1,2)-> Move to right a bit.(1 grid)
1:08:695(Break)-> Too early. (Delete-> Insert a break time again)
1:16:888(3)-> 1/4 beat forward

Have a star.

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Holy geebus this is good.

I can't really find anything to mod here, your beats and rhythms are spot on, spacing is good, and your funky shaped sliders have won my heart.

The only thing I would say is that in Hard at 00:06:036 (and the following rhythms that are the same pattern) that hitbeat 5 doesn't sound quite right. I can't really tell if it's early or late, but it sounds off somehow. Although the song has pretty odd timing so it may just be the note itself rather than your mapping.

Seriously, have a star, you deserve it.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

vytalibus wrote:

A lot of sliders and hitcircles here end in 1/8

They actually end in 1/6, but that's all the same. Here's hoping for new bubbles!

Sounds like Aladdin music, crazy shit.


[Invincible]
00:15:907 (3) - Make the start angle of this better towards (2) by moving first control point slightly up/up-right without grid-snap/distance-snap (GS/DS).
00:16:942 (1) - DS this or move it 1.5 grids to the right without GS.
00:29:880 (1) - Move 2 grids up. (Grid level 3)
00:30:656 (4,5,6) - Move these 2 grids down? Looks weird compared to (3) where they are now.
00:31:950 (1) - Move 2 grids up.
00:46:440 (1) - Move 2 grids down.
01:20:596 (5) - ^
01:21:890 (2) - Move 1 grid up.
Next two is because that part looks messy with current spacing.
01:22:407 (4) - Move this 2 grids left and 1 grid up.
01:22:666 (5) - Move this 2 grids left and 2 grids up. This also puts it's start at the end of next combo's (1) slider which looks neat.
01:25:771 (1) - Move 2 grids to the right.

[Hard]
00:00:900 (1,3) - Move these 1 grid to the right so the distance to (2) is the same for both.
00:05:040 (x) - The spacing in this combo and the combo that looks almost like this has a little weird spacing that changes from the first 3 notes to the last 5 (or 6), not sure if it was intentional and it feels kinda okay, just checking with you.
00:37:125 (3) - Move 2 grids up.
01:23:701 (1,2) - Looks awkward, make it more straight/symmetrical.
01:27:841 (1) - Move the last control point 2 grid steps down, looks weird when the slider speeds up at the very end. Move 01:27:324 (1) to new end.

[Normal]
Nothing to remark really.

[Easy]
00:16:425 (3) - Move 1 grid up and 1 grid right.
00:36:090 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Any chance you could make these two pairs into two triangles shapes or something, at least more symmetrical shapes, looks funky in a easy currently.
00:50:580 (1,2,3,4) - Weird symmetry, FIX!!

All good, except...

Hard:

A BAT might get you on that one part where you have hit circles hidden under sliders over and over again.

Just a warning. Nice map, have a star.

Man, this battle was awesome...I totally forgot all about the Heart thing.

[Easy]:
00:01:93 (3) - Whistle?
00:16:42 (3) - Move 1 down and 1 (Or 2?) to the right on Grid Level 3.
00:37:12 (3) - If you did what's above, then whistle this too. And vice versa.
00:41:26 (3) - Replace clip with Whistle (Consistency) If you keep the clap (Or have the clap and whistle together), then add in more claps throughout the song.
00:42:30 (1) - Whistle~ (For consistency)
00:43:33 (3) - Whistle. (For consistency)

[Normal]:
00:21:60 (1) - This slider overlap is ugly, unfortunately.
00:51:61 (7) - Move 1 to the right on Grid Level 3.
01:06:10 (3) - Move 1 up on Grid Level 3. (I never said this in a long time, it was always to the left or to the right o_o)

[Hard]:
00:51:35 (5) - Eh, I don't know...I don't like how close this circle is.
01:22:14 (2) - Align this evenly with (1) and (3).
01:26:54 (5) - Cluster concern (As mentioned earlier).

[Invincible]:
00:34:02 (8) - New combo? May make co-op concerns though.

Take these as suggestions and not commands, haha. If you like what you see, then awesome. Anyway...It was a great map.

Paper Mario support go~

Star!

[Easy]
I suggest using slider tick rate of 2, some sliders sound empty in between
[Normal]
same, probably slider tick rate of 2
00:14:35 (2) - I </3 the overlap, move 2 level 3 grids right
[Hard]
00:19:27 (7) - too close, kinda overlaps
[Invincible]
00:49:54 (2) - stack to beginning of (1)

I don't know, this is well polished, it's very difficult for me to mod a map that has already been bubbled, I can't even nazi mod this, just, take it, take the star D:

hard:
00:58:86 (7) - move upper
00:59:89 (9) - move lower


no any other problem i can find
strared...