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They actually end in 1/6, but that's all the same. Here's hoping for new bubbles!vytalibus wrote:
A lot of sliders and hitcircles here end in 1/8
Sounds like Aladdin music, crazy shit.
[Invincible]
00:15:907 (3) - Make the start angle of this better towards (2) by moving first control point slightly up/up-right without grid-snap/distance-snap (GS/DS).
00:16:942 (1) - DS this or move it 1.5 grids to the right without GS.
00:29:880 (1) - Move 2 grids up. (Grid level 3)
00:30:656 (4,5,6) - Move these 2 grids down? Looks weird compared to (3) where they are now.
00:31:950 (1) - Move 2 grids up.
00:46:440 (1) - Move 2 grids down.
01:20:596 (5) - ^
01:21:890 (2) - Move 1 grid up.
Next two is because that part looks messy with current spacing.
01:22:407 (4) - Move this 2 grids left and 1 grid up.
01:22:666 (5) - Move this 2 grids left and 2 grids up. This also puts it's start at the end of next combo's (1) slider which looks neat.
01:25:771 (1) - Move 2 grids to the right.
[Hard]
00:00:900 (1,3) - Move these 1 grid to the right so the distance to (2) is the same for both.
00:05:040 (x) - The spacing in this combo and the combo that looks almost like this has a little weird spacing that changes from the first 3 notes to the last 5 (or 6), not sure if it was intentional and it feels kinda okay, just checking with you.
00:37:125 (3) - Move 2 grids up.
01:23:701 (1,2) - Looks awkward, make it more straight/symmetrical.
01:27:841 (1) - Move the last control point 2 grid steps down, looks weird when the slider speeds up at the very end. Move 01:27:324 (1) to new end.
[Normal]
Nothing to remark really.
[Easy]
00:16:425 (3) - Move 1 grid up and 1 grid right.
00:36:090 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Any chance you could make these two pairs into two triangles shapes or something, at least more symmetrical shapes, looks funky in a easy currently.
00:50:580 (1,2,3,4) - Weird symmetry, FIX!!
[Invincible]
00:15:907 (3) - Make the start angle of this better towards (2) by moving first control point slightly up/up-right without grid-snap/distance-snap (GS/DS).
00:16:942 (1) - DS this or move it 1.5 grids to the right without GS.
00:29:880 (1) - Move 2 grids up. (Grid level 3)
00:30:656 (4,5,6) - Move these 2 grids down? Looks weird compared to (3) where they are now.
00:31:950 (1) - Move 2 grids up.
00:46:440 (1) - Move 2 grids down.
01:20:596 (5) - ^
01:21:890 (2) - Move 1 grid up.
Next two is because that part looks messy with current spacing.
01:22:407 (4) - Move this 2 grids left and 1 grid up.
01:22:666 (5) - Move this 2 grids left and 2 grids up. This also puts it's start at the end of next combo's (1) slider which looks neat.
01:25:771 (1) - Move 2 grids to the right.
[Hard]
00:00:900 (1,3) - Move these 1 grid to the right so the distance to (2) is the same for both.
00:05:040 (x) - The spacing in this combo and the combo that looks almost like this has a little weird spacing that changes from the first 3 notes to the last 5 (or 6), not sure if it was intentional and it feels kinda okay, just checking with you.
00:37:125 (3) - Move 2 grids up.
01:23:701 (1,2) - Looks awkward, make it more straight/symmetrical.
01:27:841 (1) - Move the last control point 2 grid steps down, looks weird when the slider speeds up at the very end. Move 01:27:324 (1) to new end.
[Normal]
Nothing to remark really.
[Easy]
00:16:425 (3) - Move 1 grid up and 1 grid right.
00:36:090 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Any chance you could make these two pairs into two triangles shapes or something, at least more symmetrical shapes, looks funky in a easy currently.
00:50:580 (1,2,3,4) - Weird symmetry, FIX!!
All good, except...
Hard:
A BAT might get you on that one part where you have hit circles hidden under sliders over and over again.
Just a warning. Nice map, have a star.
Hard:
A BAT might get you on that one part where you have hit circles hidden under sliders over and over again.
Just a warning. Nice map, have a star.
Man, this battle was awesome...I totally forgot all about the Heart thing.
[Easy]:
00:01:93 (3) - Whistle?
00:16:42 (3) - Move 1 down and 1 (Or 2?) to the right on Grid Level 3.
00:37:12 (3) - If you did what's above, then whistle this too. And vice versa.
00:41:26 (3) - Replace clip with Whistle (Consistency) If you keep the clap (Or have the clap and whistle together), then add in more claps throughout the song.
00:42:30 (1) - Whistle~ (For consistency)
00:43:33 (3) - Whistle. (For consistency)
[Normal]:
00:21:60 (1) - This slider overlap is ugly, unfortunately.
00:51:61 (7) - Move 1 to the right on Grid Level 3.
01:06:10 (3) - Move 1 up on Grid Level 3. (I never said this in a long time, it was always to the left or to the right o_o)
[Hard]:
00:51:35 (5) - Eh, I don't know...I don't like how close this circle is.
01:22:14 (2) - Align this evenly with (1) and (3).
01:26:54 (5) - Cluster concern (As mentioned earlier).
[Invincible]:
00:34:02 (8) - New combo? May make co-op concerns though.
Take these as suggestions and not commands, haha. If you like what you see, then awesome. Anyway...It was a great map.
Paper Mario support go~
Star!
[Easy]:
00:01:93 (3) - Whistle?
00:16:42 (3) - Move 1 down and 1 (Or 2?) to the right on Grid Level 3.
00:37:12 (3) - If you did what's above, then whistle this too. And vice versa.
00:41:26 (3) - Replace clip with Whistle (Consistency) If you keep the clap (Or have the clap and whistle together), then add in more claps throughout the song.
00:42:30 (1) - Whistle~ (For consistency)
00:43:33 (3) - Whistle. (For consistency)
[Normal]:
00:21:60 (1) - This slider overlap is ugly, unfortunately.
00:51:61 (7) - Move 1 to the right on Grid Level 3.
01:06:10 (3) - Move 1 up on Grid Level 3. (I never said this in a long time, it was always to the left or to the right o_o)
[Hard]:
00:51:35 (5) - Eh, I don't know...I don't like how close this circle is.
01:22:14 (2) - Align this evenly with (1) and (3).
01:26:54 (5) - Cluster concern (As mentioned earlier).
[Invincible]:
00:34:02 (8) - New combo? May make co-op concerns though.
Take these as suggestions and not commands, haha. If you like what you see, then awesome. Anyway...It was a great map.
Paper Mario support go~
Star!
[Easy]
I suggest using slider tick rate of 2, some sliders sound empty in between
[Normal]
same, probably slider tick rate of 2
00:14:35 (2) - I </3 the overlap, move 2 level 3 grids right
[Hard]
00:19:27 (7) - too close, kinda overlaps
[Invincible]
00:49:54 (2) - stack to beginning of (1)
I don't know, this is well polished, it's very difficult for me to mod a map that has already been bubbled, I can't even nazi mod this, just, take it, take the star D:
I suggest using slider tick rate of 2, some sliders sound empty in between
[Normal]
same, probably slider tick rate of 2
00:14:35 (2) - I </3 the overlap, move 2 level 3 grids right
[Hard]
00:19:27 (7) - too close, kinda overlaps
[Invincible]
00:49:54 (2) - stack to beginning of (1)
I don't know, this is well polished, it's very difficult for me to mod a map that has already been bubbled, I can't even nazi mod this, just, take it, take the star D:
hard:
00:58:86 (7) - move upper
00:59:89 (9) - move lower
no any other problem i can find
strared...
00:58:86 (7) - move upper
00:59:89 (9) - move lower
no any other problem i can find
strared...
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Easy
00:52:65 (1) - Length sounds weird. Lenthening it to a 4-beat repeating sounds better (that's an extra 1/4 beat each way btw). You'll need to adjust the placement of 2 afterwards.
00:58:86 (1) - The end of this seems rather far from the next slider.
01:03:00 (3,4,1) - Space 4 so that it's more even between 3 and 1.
~1:09:7-1:11:3 - Although I think a spinner could work well here, I won't bug about it, as what you have now works out nicely anyways.
Normal
00:17:46 (1,1) - The whole 4-beat repeating thing here, although I know it wouldn't work quite so well here. However, I do think that you should be able to figure something out here that sounds a bit better? I mean, it kinda works, but just take a look and see what you think.
00:52:65 (1,1) - These get the same mention.
Hard
~1:08 - Fix this break.
Hm... I dunno, maybe a quieter section just at the end? Just a thought.
Invincible
Same thing about the volume at the end as with Hard.
I see quite a bit more potential for this with fitting "Invincible" in mind. Of course, I won't bother you too much over it. It looks quite nice besides the fact.
Overall... Really good. Star for now.
Also, I'm a huge PM fan. You probably should have been specific as to what you wanted me to mod.
Even though I probably could have mentioned I'm a fan.
00:52:65 (1) - Length sounds weird. Lenthening it to a 4-beat repeating sounds better (that's an extra 1/4 beat each way btw). You'll need to adjust the placement of 2 afterwards.
00:58:86 (1) - The end of this seems rather far from the next slider.
01:03:00 (3,4,1) - Space 4 so that it's more even between 3 and 1.
~1:09:7-1:11:3 - Although I think a spinner could work well here, I won't bug about it, as what you have now works out nicely anyways.
Normal
00:17:46 (1,1) - The whole 4-beat repeating thing here, although I know it wouldn't work quite so well here. However, I do think that you should be able to figure something out here that sounds a bit better? I mean, it kinda works, but just take a look and see what you think.
00:52:65 (1,1) - These get the same mention.
Hard
~1:08 - Fix this break.
Hm... I dunno, maybe a quieter section just at the end? Just a thought.
Invincible
Same thing about the volume at the end as with Hard.
I see quite a bit more potential for this with fitting "Invincible" in mind. Of course, I won't bother you too much over it. It looks quite nice besides the fact.
Overall... Really good. Star for now.
Also, I'm a huge PM fan. You probably should have been specific as to what you wanted me to mod.
Even though I probably could have mentioned I'm a fan.
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Noooo! Stanley! He ate Stanley!
Starred.
Download: Huang Er , Yin Pin Guai Wu - Zui Xian Ge (Megurine Luka) [Ing].osu
Starred.
Download: Huang Er , Yin Pin Guai Wu - Zui Xian Ge (Megurine Luka) [Ing].osu
Topic Starter
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I dont see any BG...
[Easy]
00:41:26 (3) - not snapped properly, use snap 2 and move it down by 1 block.
00:49:54 (3) - not in a diagonal line with 2
[Normal]
Nothing.
[Hard]
00:08:14 (9) - Nazi but is this supposed to be at the peak of osu?
00:51:27 (4,5) - Stack these?
01:26:46 (4,5) - Stack these?
[Invincible]
Nothing.
Star.
[Easy]
00:41:26 (3) - not snapped properly, use snap 2 and move it down by 1 block.
00:49:54 (3) - not in a diagonal line with 2
[Normal]
Nothing.
[Hard]
00:08:14 (9) - Nazi but is this supposed to be at the peak of osu?
00:51:27 (4,5) - Stack these?
01:26:46 (4,5) - Stack these?
[Invincible]
Nothing.
Star.
Spleeeeeendid mostly splendid.
I kept clicking like 30ms late but that's because I suck. I think, however, the offset is around 904 (vs original 900).
[Normal]
00:56:79 (1,1,2,3) - I can sightread this just fine, but the slider overlap here is just kinda sloppy.
[Invincible]
There's no background.
poppy poppy for now blaaaaaagh
I kept clicking like 30ms late but that's because I suck. I think, however, the offset is around 904 (vs original 900).
[Normal]
00:56:79 (1,1,2,3) - I can sightread this just fine, but the slider overlap here is just kinda sloppy.
[Invincible]
There's no background.
poppy poppy for now blaaaaaagh
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Topic Starter
Lokamp wrote:
Easy
[00:23:662] for the 4th slider, it could be great to alternate normal and clap sounds! Fixed with Normal-Whistle-Normal-Finish. Claps don't go well
Normal
[00:25:744] clap on the next 3 simple beats; it might make the song more "musically correct"! See Easy for my opinion on claps. ( which is a BAT's opinion aswell ;P)
[01:00:895] same thing, only with the final slider's end of the next 3 series
[01:11:875] Finally, a beat around here can end the song Note placing is final, unless a BAT tells me otherwise.
Hard
[00:25:744] the next 3 sliders can be ended with a clap
[01:00:901] same thing
[01:32:504] a little spinner here, and this map can be finally complete! No spinners on this map. I didn't read in the FAQ that they're a must, so I'm keeping 'em out.
Insane
[00:25:744] you already know the chorus: a clap for ending the next 3 sliders!
[01:00:890] same thing...
[01:09:747] this slider can be heart-shaped, can't it? Fixed, great idea!
[01:31:967] in my humble opinion, the final beat can be swiched with a spinner...No spinners on this map. I didn't read in the FAQ that they're a must, so I'm keeping 'em out.
By the way, where have you found the background pictures? They're fantastic!
Topic Starter
What?! Is that all? That's wonderful!! Thank you forever!vytalibus wrote:
Rebubbled.
1 combo color change in easy, and an offset change. As this is (practically) reverting the offset back to where it was over awp's offset, i won't rank it. I'll leave that to somebody else.
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Looks fine to me. ☆ for you
Looks good and dandy to me.
Wojjan, excellent work. This is how Insane maps are made.