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MOON -kana- ~ Neko Punch [Osu|Taiko]

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Kurai
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mercredi 21 septembre 2011 at 18:07:24

Artist: MOON -kana-
Title: Neko Punch
BPM: 150
Filesize: 2852kb
Play Time: 02:14
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,96 stars, 397 notes)
  2. Normal (2,76 stars, 166 notes)
  3. Taiko Oni (4,78 stars, 635 notes)
Download: MOON -kana- - Neko Punch
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Warning : This music is kawaii ! Don't listen to it too much if you don't want to get an overdose of kawaiiness !

Credit to Sushi for the clap hitsound.

Neko Punch!
Cyclohexane
THIS MUSIC IS ANNOYING :U

Shitty mod go

Red text is unrankable.
Bold I heavily recommend changing.
Underlined I recommend changing.
Normal text is for suggestions and/or things I like.

[General]
Your mp3 is 320kbps, but I guess you knew that already since you actually told me it was :U
That background is BRIGHT. Like really. Thank god there isn't a storyboard or I could've had a seizure. Good choice on combo colors though.
That custom hitsound sexily fits the song, by all means keep it.

[Normal]
Your combos are really long for a Normal. Besides it seems like their presence depends on note placement when it actually needs to depend on the song. Other than that, map-wise, very good job. Except this copypasta doesn't taste so good.
00:13:480 (5) - New combo.
00:16:280 (1) - Delete new combo.
00:16:680 (2) - New combo.
00:18:280 (6) - ^
00:35:480 (5) - ^
00:45:080 (4) - ^
00:58:280 (5) - ^
01:01:080 (1) - Delete new combo.
01:01:480 (2) - New combo.
01:03:080 (6) - ^
01:07:880 (5) - ^
01:08:280 (1) - Delete new combo.
01:26:680 (5) - New combo.
01:36:280 (4) - ^
01:49:480 (5) - ^
01:52:280 (1) - Delete new combo.
01:52:680 (2) - New combo.
01:54:280 (6) - ^
02:14:880 (1) - Delete this, I don't think it fits well.

[Taiko Oni]
I'm not good at modding taiko maps, but I can still tell you some things about it.
First off, slider velocity = 1.40, according to the Taiko Mapping Guidelines.
Then, Delete every single inherit section. The slider changes are annoying, uncalled for, and are a cheap way to add difficulty into the map.
The map itself felt pretty nice to play, so good job on that.

[Hard]
copypasta copypasta copypasta copypasta copypasta copypasta etc. I really wish you didn't copypaste as much as you did.
00:35:180 (3) - Stack this note on the previous stack and put it 1/4 earlier. Sounds A LOT better and probably plays too.
00:44:780 (3) - ^
01:26:380 (3) - ^
01:35:980 (3) - ^
02:14:980 (1) - Delete this, I don't think it fits well.

So except for how much copypaste you put up in this map, I think overall you did a good job, the difficulties were fun to play even though the music annoyed the hell out of me. Here's a star for ya.
Ekoro
Hoi ~
Dat song >w<
Je modde pas la Taiko , je suis trop nul a ça D:

[Normal]

00:13:480 (5) - New Combo?00:16:280 (1) - Remove New Combo ~00:16:680 (2) - Then , New Combo'00:45:480 (5) - ^00:58:280 (5) - ^01:01:080 (1) - Remove New Combo' 01:01:480 (2) - then New Combo °°01:07:880 (5) - ^01:08:280 (1) - remove New Combo01:36:680 (5) - New Combo01:49:480 (5) - ^01:52:280 (1) - Remove New Combo01:52:680 (2) - New Combo

[Hard]

Fine ~ :3

Awesome , good job'.

'Star, and good luck. ~

EDIT : fuu , ninja'd by Mr Color D:
Topic Starter
Kurai

Mr Color wrote:

THIS MUSIC IS ANNOYING :U ww

Shitty mod go

[General]
Your mp3 is 320kbps, but I guess you knew that already since you actually told me it was :U I will fix it later
That background is BRIGHT. Like really. Thank god there isn't a storyboard or I could've had a seizure. Good choice on combo colors though.
That custom hitsound sexily fits the song, by all means keep it.

[Normal]
Your combos are really long for a Normal. Besides it seems like their presence depends on note placement when it actually needs to depend on the song. Other than that, map-wise, very good job. Except this copypasta doesn't taste so good.
00:13:480 (5) - New combo.
00:16:280 (1) - Delete new combo.
00:16:680 (2) - New combo.
00:18:280 (6) - ^
00:35:480 (5) - ^
00:45:080 (4) - ^
00:58:280 (5) - ^
01:01:080 (1) - Delete new combo.
01:01:480 (2) - New combo.
01:03:080 (6) - ^
01:07:880 (5) - ^
01:08:280 (1) - Delete new combo.
01:26:680 (5) - New combo.
01:36:280 (4) - ^
01:49:480 (5) - ^
01:52:280 (1) - Delete new combo.
01:52:680 (2) - New combo.
01:54:280 (6) - ^
Fixed the most of them

02:14:880 (1) - Delete this, I don't think it fits well. If someone else say it in the fuure, I will remove.

[Taiko Oni]
I'm not good at modding taiko maps, but I can still tell you some things about it.
First off, slider velocity = 1.40, according to the Taiko Mapping Guidelines.
Then, Delete every single inherit section. The slider changes are annoying, uncalled for, and are a cheap way to add difficulty into the map. Ok ;~;
The map itself felt pretty nice to play, so good job on that.

[Hard]
copypasta copypasta copypasta copypasta copypasta copypasta etc. I really wish you didn't copypaste as much as you did. I'm a lazy mapper ;~;
00:35:180 (3) - Stack this note on the previous stack and put it 1/4 earlier. Sounds A LOT better and probably plays too. Two consecutive triple doesn't fit here, I did something else.
00:44:780 (3) - ^
01:26:380 (3) - ^
01:35:980 (3) - ^
02:14:980 (1) - Delete this, I don't think it fits well. Same as normal

So except for how much copypaste you put up in this map, I think overall you did a good job, the difficulties were fun to play even though the music annoyed the hell out of me. Here's a star for ya. o/

_LRJ_ wrote:

[Normal]

00:13:480 (5) - New Combo?00:16:280 (1) - Remove New Combo ~00:16:680 (2) - Then , New Combo'00:45:480 (5) - ^00:58:280 (5) - ^01:01:080 (1) - Remove New Combo' 01:01:480 (2) - then New Combo °°01:07:880 (5) - ^01:08:280 (1) - remove New Combo01:36:680 (5) - New Combo01:49:480 (5) - ^01:52:280 (1) - Remove New Combo01:52:680 (2) - New Combo
Did the most ~



Awesome , good job'. :3

'Star, and good luck. ~

EDIT : fuu , ninja'd by Mr Color D:
Thanks you guys ~
Parler en anglais à des français wtf >.<
IceBeam
o/

Folder and map settings are fine,maybe except Aprroach Rate in Normal.It's a bit high,just because it's the easiest diff in this mapset,so I'd reduce by 1.

Audio Lead-In in Taiko Oni is set to 739.As all diffs start at the same point,maybe set it to 0 as well?
Ah,and combo colours are different too,fix it?

And the last thing is sliderborder colours. Looks a little weird with default skin :D Maybe set custom SliderTrackOverride colour too?

[Normal]
00:19:880 (8) - I hear cymbals here,maybe add finish hitsound for this note?
00:31:280 - Maybe add a note here? Unless 00:31:680 (1) feels a bit late for this rhytm :/ Maybe just because it starts from red tick.
00:49:580 (x) - Change hitsound sampleset to Soft for this section?
01:08:280 (1) - Move 1 grid (lvl3) to left?
01:17:480 - Finish?
01:22:480 - Again,I'd add a note here,it'll help to read 01:22:880 (1) better.
01:40:780 (x) - Change hitsound sampleset to Soft for this section?

[Taiko Oni]
Sorry,I can't mod taiko,but sounds catchy ;) Nothing wrong to me except those problems I've stated above.

[Hard]
00:19:880 (1) - Finish maybe?
00:24:680 (1) - I thought it'll be extended to 00:25:280 :o
00:34:880 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hm,that was a bit hard to read.Maybe delete 00:34:980 (2) and move 00:35:280 (3) to 00:35:080?
00:49:680 (1,2,3,4) - Again,maybe Soft sampleset,and..it was kinda hard to read :D Simple 1/2 notes doesn't fit,yeah,but these aren't pefect too.
01:11:080 (3) - Finish?
01:30:280 (1) - ^
01:40:880 (1,2,3,4) - Same about Soft hitsounds.
02:02:280 (4) - Finish?

This is sooooooooooooooooo kawaii
I love it! :D

Great map,starring~
Thite
:)
Topic Starter
Kurai

IceBeam wrote:

o/

Folder and map settings are fine,maybe except Aprroach Rate in Normal.It's a bit high,just because it's the easiest diff in this mapset,so I'd reduce by 1. Ok

Audio Lead-In in Taiko Oni is set to 739.As all diffs start at the same point,maybe set it to 0 as well?
Ah,and combo colours are different too,fix it? Fix'd

And the last thing is sliderborder colours. Looks a little weird with default skin :D Maybe set custom SliderTrackOverride colour too? I will consider it :3

[Normal]
00:19:880 (8) - I hear cymbals here,maybe add finish hitsound for this note?
00:31:280 - Maybe add a note here? Unless 00:31:680 (1) feels a bit late for this rhytm :/ Maybe just because it starts from red tick. Yeah you're right, but I wont make 1/2 stuffs in this difficulty, I changed the pattern, It looks better now ;)
00:49:580 (x) - Change hitsound sampleset to Soft for this section? Oh, nice idea
01:08:280 (1) - Move 1 grid (lvl3) to left?
Mhh, no, I don't like :/
01:17:480 - Finish? Sure
01:22:480 - Again,I'd add a note here,it'll help to read 01:22:880 (1) better. Changed to something else
01:40:780 (x) - Change hitsound sampleset to Soft for this section? Yeah

[Taiko Oni]
Sorry,I can't mod taiko,but sounds catchy ;) Nothing wrong to me except those problems I've stated above. Thanks ;)

[Hard]
00:19:880 (1) - Finish maybe? Ok
00:24:680 (1) - I thought it'll be extended to 00:25:280 :o It works well, fixed :)
00:34:880 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hm,that was a bit hard to read.Maybe delete 00:34:980 (2) and move 00:35:280 (3) to 00:35:080? Fixed in the previous mod ;)
00:49:680 (1,2,3,4) - Again,maybe Soft sampleset,and..it was kinda hard to read :D Simple 1/2 notes doesn't fit,yeah,but these aren't pefect too. Ok for the soft HS. 1/8 is the only solution for that ;~; Why does she is late here ;-;
01:11:080 (3) - Finish? yep
01:30:280 (1) - ^ ok
01:40:880 (1,2,3,4) - Same about Soft hitsounds. ok
02:02:280 (4) - Finish? ok

This is sooooooooooooooooo kawaii
I love it! :D \o/

Great map,starring~
Thank you (o ^.^)o and thaks Thite for the star~
Fight69
;)
Topic Starter
Kurai
Kudosed for IRC help
Noob Man
Oh my god cette chanson... >.<


Mod useless, go !!!

Normal :
00:29:480 (1) - Spacing ?
01:05:080 (2) - Ce slider m'a donné l'impression que la prochaine note allait être vers la gauche... Tu devrais peut-être l'orienter vers la droite ? (suggestion)
01:12:280 (2) - Spacing ?
01:20:680 (1) - Spacing ?
02:14:880 (1) - Ce spinner est-il utile ? =O

Hard :
Je dirais plutôt que c'est une Insane... M'enfin, chuis un noob. xD
02:14:980 (1) - - Ce spinner est-il utile ? =O
J'vois rien à dire ici, si ce n'est que c'est bô.


Star, j'aime tes maps.~
Topic Starter
Kurai
Fix'd quelque truc o/
Eirene
this BG ._.
100x MOEEE > random MOE ANIMU BG *.*
blabla
pas fan du clap :(
ça me parait un peu overmappé btw... w/e
Topic Starter
Kurai

Eirene wrote:

this BG ._.
100x MOEEE > random MOE ANIMU BG *.* *.*
blabla
pas fan du clap :( Je trouve qu'il suis bien la musique owo
ça me parait un peu overmappé btw... w/e Je sais mais si je fais pas mon propre rythme ca le fait pas ;~;
GabGab_old
J'aime bien le normal, même si c'est souvent le même schéma qui se répète.
Le Hard est super sinon ^^

*Star*
Kert
[Hard]
01:15:480 (3) - This break bothers me, maybe put a spinner here or something?

[Normal]
00:07:880 (1) - I really don't like when this combo starts
Also don't forget to fix new combo stuff here
00:27:080 (1) - Same
Slider 5 is placed where the spinner was
00:52:680 (1) - ^
And do something similar to the ones below
01:18:280 (1) - ^
01:43:880 (1) - ^
^ It feels reaaally awkward for me

Also the spinner on total silence is probably not needed - 02:14:880 (1) -

Well, this is all from me. If only not that huge amount of copypaste (It really gets boring) I would love this map
But I am giving you the star anyway, because this song is kinda kawaii still \:D/
Topic Starter
Kurai

CracK wrote:

[Hard]
01:15:480 (3) - This break bothers me, maybe put a spinner here or something? Added a reverse to the slider

[Normal]
00:07:880 (1) - I really don't like when this combo starts Done
Also don't forget to fix new combo stuff here
00:27:080 (1) - Same Done
Slider 5 is placed where the spinner was
00:52:680 (1) - ^ Nope for this one, A spinner sounds fine here
And do something similar to the ones below
01:18:280 (1) - ^ Done
01:43:880 (1) - ^ Nope
^ It feels reaaally awkward for me

Also the spinner on total silence is probably not needed - 02:14:880 (1) -

Well, this is all from me. If only not that huge amount of copypaste (It really gets boring) I would love this map
But I am giving you the star anyway, because this song is kinda kawaii still \:D/
Thank you (o ^.^)o Some parts in Normal are better now :3
Jinxy
[Normal]
00:18:280 (1) and other sliders - The extra bend after the linear bend really looks awkward. Wouldn't having them look like 02:02:280 (1) be better?
List of sliders like that:
01:03:080 (1) -
01:54:280 (5) -

[Hard]
Quite well done and smooth.
Topic Starter
Kurai

JInxyjem wrote:

[Normal]
00:18:280 (1) and other sliders - The extra bend after the linear bend really looks awkward. Wouldn't having them look like 02:02:280 (1) be better?
List of sliders like that:
01:03:080 (1) -
01:54:280 (5) -

[Hard]
Quite well done and smooth.
Sorry, but it's fine, but thanks for your mod \o/
Sushi
Moon Kana :D

[Hard]
00:49:680 (1,2,3,4) - As she is not singing regularly, I think that unless you know what is coming, the probability of misclicking is high. I suggest using sliders (at least for the first time)

[Normal]
Nekokoko Pawnchi

[Taiko]
00:08:680 (1) - This note at the end of this pattern, you could alternate between kat/don depending of the level of her voice. Because, while testing it, I found more intuitive to have a don here, and sometimes, a kat suits lovely with her loli voice


As expected, Pretty neat~.

Merci d'avoir mis cette chanson dans ma tete pour le reste de la nuit ;~;
Topic Starter
Kurai
All fixed, thanks :3
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