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riya - Chiisana Te no Hira

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JoJo
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年12月4日 at 15:46:40

Artist: riya
Title: Chiisana Te no Hira
Source: CLANNAD ~After Story~
Tags: key nymph kanpakyin joshua lost
BPM: 99.96
Filesize: 8175kb
Play Time: 04:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. Koubou (4.22 stars, 348 notes)
  2. KPY no Kibou (3.6 stars, 272 notes)
  3. Nymph no Yume (2.44 stars, 233 notes)
Download: riya - Chiisana Te no Hira
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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CLANNAD~

Nymph no Yume (Normal) by Nymph
KPY no Kibou (Hard) by kanpakyin

(Last full submission : Oct.9 1:51 GMT+8)
Topic Starter
JoJo

Lyrics
~日本語~

遠くで遠くで 揺れてる稲穂の海
帆をあげ帆をあげ 目指した思い出へと

僕らは今日までの 悲しいこと全部
覚えてるか 忘れたか

小さな手にも いつからか僕ら追い越してく強さ
熟れた葡萄の下 泣いてた日から歩いた
小さな手でも離れても 僕らはこの道行くんだ
いつか来る日は 一番の思い出をしまって

季節は移り もう冷たい風が
包まれて眠れ あの春の歌の中で

小さな手にも いつからか僕ら追い越してく強さ
濡れた頬には どれだけの笑顔が映った
小さな手でも離れても 僕らはこの道行くんだ
そして来る日は 僕らも思い出をしまった

小さな手でも いつの日か僕ら追い越して行くん
やがて来る日は 新しい季節を開いた

~简体中文~

远远的 远远的 在那随风摇摆的稻穗之海
扬起风帆 扬起风帆 向着回忆的港湾起航

我们携手走过的人生 那段布满荆棘的道路
是否依然记得 抑或已经忘却

看似稚嫩的小手 却蕴藏着超越我们的坚强
穿过长满熟透葡萄的长廊 将昨日的阴霾抛在脑后
稚嫩的小手即使不再紧紧相握 我们也将继续前行
在那一天来临之际 将珍贵的回忆深深埋藏

光阴荏苒 曾经肆虐的寒风
早已风光不再 消散在了春天的歌声里

看似稚嫩的小手 却蕴藏着超越我们的坚强
脸上虽仍残留着泪痕 却再次绽放出会心的笑容
稚嫩的小手即使不再紧紧相握 我们也将继续前行
在那一天来临之际 我们将回忆埋藏在心底

看似稚嫩的小手 有朝一日终将我们超越
当那一天来临 等待我们的又将是崭新的天空

~Romaji~

tooku de tooku de yureteru inaho no umi
ho wo age ho wo age mezashita omoide he to
bokura ha kyou made no kanashii koto zenbu oboeteru ka, wasureta ka

chiisana te ni mo itsukara ka bokura oikoshiteku tsuyosa
ureta budou no shita naiteta hi kara aruita
chiisana te de mo hanarete mo bokura ha kono michi yukunda
itsuka kuru hi ha ichiban no omoide wo shimatte

kisetsu ha utsuri mou tsumetai kaze ga
tsutsumarete nemure ano haru no uta no naka de

chiisana te ni mo itsukara ka bokura oikoshiteku tsuyosa
nureta hoo ni ha dore dake no egao ga utsutta
chiisana te de mo hanarete mo bokura ha kono michi yukunda
soshite kuru hi ha bokura mo omoide wo shimatta

chiisana te mo itsu no hi ka bokura oikoshite yukunda
yagate kuru hi ha atarashii kisetsu wo hiraita

~English~

Far away, far away, the sea of rice plants wavers
Raising the rice, raising the rice, we aimed for the memory
Do we remember the sad things that have happened before today, or have we forgotten them?

Even in this tiny hand, there could someday be strength surpassing our own
From the day I cried beneath the ripe grapes, I started to walk
Even if my hand is small, even if we're separated, we'll walk this road
And on the day that will someday come, we'll store away our best memories

The seasons change; already the cold wind
Wraps around us and sleeps inside the song of that spring

Even in this tiny hand, there could someday be strength surpassing our own
Those wet cheeks reflected a number of smiles
Even if my hand is small, even if we're separated, we'll walk this road
And on the new day we too stored away our memories

Even this tiny hand will one day pass by us
And on the new day, a new season began
KayeSara
抢的真快,不过也是我第二 :)

IRC mod~

~坑爹啊!!!!快-3KD了
S o r d a
>A</
swish
good song :oops:
kanpakyin
Oh..
Some timing help
Tenshi-nyan
DAT

DAT

DAT

/me dies

Oh and nice double star kanpakyin~


this seriously needs some intensive modding when it's done. Massive overmapping... too high difficulty settings... etc...
Magicphoenix
Love the song, but please ,PLEASE!!! AR 7 ;www;
Topic Starter
JoJo
@KayeSara, @S o r d a, @swish, @Tenshi-nyan, @Magicphoenix
Star thanks guys~ >o<//
And Tenshi's kd star~ ^w^

@kanpakyin
Thanks for timing help ~
Nice double star ~ xD

@Magicphoenix
Yea..I'm not sure.. Maybe I will lower it later ~ Still WIP now ~ >~<

EDIT:
@Tenshi-nyan
SPOILER

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

this seriously needs some intensive modding when it's done. Massive overmapping... too high difficulty settings... etc...
Yah I see ... @_@ I make the most difficult diff so maybe I have overmapped some parts .. This song is so slow and cute so .. ><
I will try my best ~ ><
Nymph
...I am late
Tenshi-nyan
I shall keep an eye on this.

This song is my absolute favourite out of the Clannad album, and I wanted to map it as well, so you guys may have beat me to it.

I still may map my own version of this song... if I don't like what becomes of this map.
So many slow songs, not only Clannad, get overmapped to a degree that they don't fit the song. Which is not fun.
Don't make a map harder than absolutely necessary...

The rythm on Nymph's diff seems to fit the song pretty well... Any diff with more notes than this is overmapped D:

All I can say for now to this map is, work on it. I wanna see a masterpiece of map for this song. It deserves nothing else.

In order to counter overmapping, reduce a shitload of notes. 1/4 does not fit the song at all. Especially the part from 00:39:518 - to 01:37:130 - and 02:58:799 - 03:03:000 - has way too many notes in it.

Also, I recommend reducing the Difficulty settings to
HP: 4-5
AR: 6
OD:6-7

This song is very calm, so keep that in mind while mapping T_T

Argh I just had to clear out my mind a bit... I could kill someone if they were to talk badly about Clannad and this song >_<
I also know that people have different ideas of a good map than me, so... D:
kanpakyin
I'm pretty should my diff didn't overmapped.However I'm not totally finish it..
Topic Starter
JoJo
@Tenshi-nyan
SPOILER

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

I shall keep an eye on this.

This song is my absolute favourite out of the Clannad album, and I wanted to map it as well, so you guys may have beat me to it.
My fav too.. ><

I still may map my own version of this song... if I don't like what becomes of this map.
So many slow songs, not only Clannad, get overmapped to a degree that they don't fit the song. Which is not fun.
Don't make a map harder than absolutely necessary... You are right.. I'm ready to remap some parts.@_@

The rythm on Nymph's diff seems to fit the song pretty well... Any diff with more notes than this is overmapped D:

All I can say for now to this map is, work on it. I wanna see a masterpiece of map for this song. It deserves nothing else.

In order to counter overmapping, reduce a shitload of notes. 1/4 does not fit the song at all. Especially the part from 00:39:518 - to 01:37:130 - and 02:58:799 - 03:03:000 - has way too many notes in it.

Also, I recommend reducing the Difficulty settings to
HP: 4-5
AR: 6
OD:6-7

This song is very calm, so keep that in mind while mapping T_T

Argh I just had to clear out my mind a bit... I could kill someone if they were to talk badly about Clannad and this song >_<
I also know that people have different ideas of a good map than me, so... D:
Thanks~ >< Kudos for useful suggestions~
Nymph
frost-b-spec
:)
subarasikibuta
这么多了……求一个rank的……
Topic Starter
JoJo
@frost-b-spec
★ arigatou ! >w</

@3kinnagi
SPOILER

3kinnagi wrote:

这么多了……求一个rank的……
谢谢星~目标rank无雾~ xD
SuzuMia Haruhi
8-) Noting to say
Suimya
>3<
loveFantasy
哈哈哈和柯林懶到不行

靠你了
Topic Starter
JoJo
@SuzuMia Haruhi, @-Sekai-
Star Thanks ! ^^

@loveFantasy
SPOILER

loveFantasy wrote:

哈哈哈和柯林懶到不行

靠你了
液~收到~虽然比懒没人能赢我~ ^o^//
(baka KPY深有体会~ 8-) )
谢谢星~ =w=
Sylfear
;)
_Kiva
;) fight
Topic Starter
JoJo
@Reflain, @_Kiva
Star Thanks ! >o<

@Sorda

KD star special thanks !! ^w^//
Rorry
  
Selee
Timing:

1st timeline:
BPM: 99.960
Offset: 39519

2nd timeline:
BPM: 99.960
Offset: 159586

3rd timeline:
BPM: 99.960
Offset: 197015

4th timeline:
BPM: 97.000
Offset: 248635

5th timeline:
BPM: 93.000
Offset: 249872

yea..I just adjust a little from kanpakyin's timing, hopefully it's getting better~

Star for the song/cute BG ;_;
wcx19911123
哈哈哈
之前的占位就是为了现在啊

[General]
mp3 is 124 kbps , make it 128-192 plz , pay attention to timing when done this

[俺の嫁]
00:55:125 - whistle
01:12:532 (2) - far to next spinner
01:13:132 (1) - not to voice down but use a silenced spinner hitsound , will be better when playing
01:37:142 (1) - ^
01:37:142 (1) - whistle
02:00:985 - delete this useless green line
02:17:358 (2) - repeat 1 time less , pay attention to next spacing
02:47:794 - delete this useless green line
02:49:189 (1,2) - vol=15%
02:57:396 - delete this useless green line
03:12:599 (1) - 236,136,192599,6,0,B|196:92|120:168|176:228|228:264|256:280|256:280|284:264|336:228|392:168|316:92|
03:18:076 - delete this useless green line
03:19:415 - vol=35
03:20:616 - ^
03:23:017 - ^
03:27:819 - vol=40 , add finish , remove clap
03:30:220 - vol=35
03:32:621 - ^ , ok I ignore this kind of suggestion from now on , I think 40% clap is too noisy
03:34:880 - delete this useless green line
03:37:423 - vol=40
03:47:027 - remove clap , add finish
03:56:484 - kaki end at 03:56:630 and delete this line
03:56:630 (1,2) - vol=25 , and add finish at 03:56:630
04:12:452 (1) - not to voice down but use a silenced spinner hitsound , and slience end
this is the most awesome Easy I had even seen 0.0

[KPY]
00:58:726 (1) - move third square to x:296 y:320
01:12:232 (4,5,6) - to slider
01:16:883 (1) - too short
01:35:941 (1,2,3,4,5) -make spacing smaller plz
01:55:149 (1) - this really ugly >_> make it fatter plz
02:02:052 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/43Gv , not to follow vocal just for adding clap at 02:02:352 is very odd imo
02:13:756 (5,1) - 5.9x jump is too huge to be in this diff
02:21:859 (1,2) - ._.
03:17:015 (1,2) - ._.
03:39:824 (5) - http://puu.sh/43Hb
04:12:452 (1) - end at 04:17:291
some anti-jump is too huge , fix this it will be a awesome Normal

[Jojo]
00:51:223 (4) - http://puu.sh/43Hw
00:52:724 (5,6,7,8,9) - to pentagon
02:01:751 (2,4) - stack better
02:34:164 (11) - ctrl+r
02:36:865 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/43I2
02:39:586 - break start here
02:59:994 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/43Ib
03:18:215 - clap is mess from now on , look how claps working in Easy
03:57:231 - remove finish
I suggest to remap the claps in the ending , then it will be a nice diff

awesome sb
awesome mapset
edit : 顺带说下,staff写进creator's words里
zsr123
啊 很喜欢这歌啊 :)

介意加我一个taiko diff吗?
Topic Starter
JoJo
@Rorry
Double Star Thanks ! >o<//

@犀利
谢谢~ 神Timing~ 8-)

@zsr123
:| 抱歉~不喜欢taiko.. 但是谢谢><
Topic Starter
JoJo
@wcx
SPOILER

wcx19911123 wrote:

哈哈哈
之前的占位就是为了现在啊

[General]
mp3 is 124 kbps , make it 128-192 plz , pay attention to timing when done this OK~I will fix the timing after all diff updated.

[Jojo]
00:51:223 (4) - http://puu.sh/43Hw OK~
00:52:724 (5,6,7,8,9) - to pentagon OK~
02:01:751 (2,4) - stack better Fixed~
02:34:164 (11) - ctrl+r OK~
02:36:865 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/43I2 Nice idea~
02:39:586 - break start here
02:59:994 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/43Ib OK~
03:18:215 - clap is mess from now on , look how claps working in Easy 0.0
03:57:231 - remove finish Removed finish of the end of the slider...This is my fault @_@
I suggest to remap the claps in the ending , then it will be a nice diff

edit : 顺带说下,staff写进creator's words里这个最后放上去~不然每次upload代码都会出错~
感谢神mod~~~(还有星星海~液~
Nymph

wcx19911123 wrote:

哈哈哈
之前的占位就是为了现在啊

[新人尼姆芙]
00:55:125 - whistle forgot...
01:12:532 (2) - far to next spinner don't bother me that much cause the spinner is long enough, but still fixed.
01:13:132 (1) - not to voice down but use a silenced spinner hitsound , will be better when playing what if other diffs want
their diffs with no silienced spinner.

01:37:142 (1) - ^
01:37:142 (1) - whistle this silence is on purpose
02:00:985 - delete this useless green line
02:17:358 (2) - repeat 1 time less , pay attention to next spacing good idea
02:47:794 - delete this useless green line K
02:49:189 (1,2) - vol=15% 15? 20 here
02:57:396 - delete this useless green line K
03:12:599 (1) - 236,136,192599,6,0,B|196:92|120:168|176:228|228:264|256:280|256:280|284:264|336:228|392:168|316:92| I like
mine pretty much..

03:18:076 - delete this useless green line
03:19:415 - vol=35
03:20:616 - ^
03:23:017 - ^ 30 seems good for me. 其实耳机有很大区别的..
03:27:819 - vol=40 , add finish , remove clap Actually clap is on purpose, but..whatever, finish seems good for me now. K


03:30:220 - vol=35 40 is better.
03:32:621 - ^ , ok I ignore this kind of suggestion from now on , I think 40% clap is too noisy
03:34:880 - delete this useless green line
03:37:423 - vol=40 40 is too low.
03:47:027 - remove clap , add finish K
03:56:484 - kaki end at 03:56:630 and delete this line Actually Kiai seems too bad for my eyes..I decided to deleted the Kiais.
03:56:630 (1,2) - vol=25 , and add finish at 03:56:630 15 too low? then 20. Finish is not necessary.
04:12:452 (1) - not to voice down but use a silenced spinner hitsound , and slience end
this is the most awesome Easy I had even seen 0.0
完毕

Download: riya - Chiisana Tenohira (Joshua Lost) [Nymph no Yume].osu
Topic Starter
JoJo
MP3 file exchanged. Redownload plz ~
Sorry for inconvenience ~ >A<

All diff Timing fixed.
Shiro
Shouldn't the title be "Chiisana Te no Hira" ?...

viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443 this is how to change the title without duplicating the map.
Topic Starter
JoJo

Odaril wrote:

Shouldn't the title be "Chiisana Te no Hira" ?...
Hmm.. I try to search online and finally consider that both title are okay so...
Anyway , Title is changed to 'Chiisana Te no Hira'.
And thank you ~

Sorry , trouble everyone to redownload again . >_<
kanpakyin

wcx19911123 wrote:

[KPY]
00:58:726 (1) - move third square to x:296 y:320 X
01:12:232 (4,5,6) - to slider What do you mean?
01:16:883 (1) - too short X,that's ok for a Hard.
01:35:941 (1,2,3,4,5) -make spacing smaller plz It is too hard to do that.
01:55:149 (1) - this really ugly >_> make it fatter plz Fixed something
02:02:052 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/43Gv , not to follow vocal just for adding clap at 02:02:352 is very odd imo X,not now.
02:13:756 (5,1) - 5.9x jump is too huge to be in this diff It's a Hard
02:21:859 (1,2) - ._. ^
03:17:015 (1,2) - ._. ^
03:39:824 (5) - http://puu.sh/43Hb Change a bit!
04:12:452 (1) - end at 04:17:291 Fixed due to new MP3 and New timing.
some anti-jump is too huge , fix this it will be a awesome Normal I would like to say this is a Hard diff D:
Thanks but just change a little bit.

Download: riya - Chiisana Te no Hira (Joshua Lost) [KPY no Kibou].osu
Nymph
Fix the heart shape slider for a little bit :P

Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.

Download: riya - Chiisana Te no Hira (Joshua Lost) [Nymph no Yume].osu
Kiddo-Kun
[General]
There are two .osb files. Delete one.
Tags aren't the same for all diffs. Please fix that.

[Nymph no Yume]
02:16:807 (1) - Remove new combo to match the vocals a little better.
02:19:208 (3) - Add new combo to match previous parts.
02:38:416 (3) - Add a whistle or a finish to this note.
02:39:636 - Remove this inheriting section. What ever you changed the timing point can be used.
02:44:437 (5) - Make this slider more symmetrical.
03:55:480 (5) - New combo.
03:56:680 (1) - Add a finish to the start of the slider.

[KPY no Kibou]
02:20:409 (5) - Add a finish to this note.
00:56:675 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:55:199 (1) - Move the tail of this slider up one tick (Grid Lvl 3)
03:18:265 (1) - Add a finish to the start of this slider like you did with 02:01:201 (1)
03:35:522 (1) - Add a finish to this spinner.
03:50:978 (5) - Add new combo.
03:53:079 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Koubou]
02:01:201 (1) - Add a finish to the start
02:19:208 (10) - Eh, I'm not sure about this slow down...But whatever.
02:33:614 (10) - New combo.
02:34:815 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:15:350 - Why not do something like this for the break?

03:31:470 (10) - New combo.
03:32:671 (1) - Remove new combo.

Everything else is fine. Sexy looking map. Plays fine.

STARED~
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