riya - Chiisana Te no Hira · forum

JoJo

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JoJo 2011-07-12T16:20:49+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年12月4日 at 15:46:40

Artist: riya
Title: Chiisana Te no Hira
Source: CLANNAD ~After Story~
Tags: key nymph kanpakyin joshua lost
BPM: 99.96
Filesize: 8175kb
Play Time: 04:12
Difficulties Available:

Koubou (4.22 stars, 348 notes)
KPY no Kibou (3.6 stars, 272 notes)
Nymph no Yume (2.44 stars, 233 notes)

Download: riya - Chiisana Te no Hira
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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CLANNAD~

Nymph no Yume (Normal) by Nymph
KPY no Kibou (Hard) by kanpakyin

(Last full submission : Oct.9 1:51 GMT+8)

Last edited by JoJo 2011-12-04T07:46:59+00:00, edited 34 times in total.

JoJo

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JoJo 2011-07-12T16:21:21+00:00

Lyrics

~日本語~

遠くで遠くで　揺れてる稲穂の海
帆をあげ帆をあげ　目指した思い出へと

僕らは今日までの　悲しいこと全部
覚えてるか　忘れたか

小さな手にも　いつからか僕ら追い越してく強さ
熟れた葡萄の下　泣いてた日から歩いた
小さな手でも離れても　僕らはこの道行くんだ
いつか来る日は　一番の思い出をしまって

季節は移り　もう冷たい風が
包まれて眠れ　あの春の歌の中で

小さな手にも　いつからか僕ら追い越してく強さ
濡れた頬には　どれだけの笑顔が映った
小さな手でも離れても　僕らはこの道行くんだ
そして来る日は　僕らも思い出をしまった

小さな手でも　いつの日か僕ら追い越して行くん
やがて来る日は　新しい季節を開いた

~简体中文~

远远的远远的在那随风摇摆的稻穗之海
扬起风帆扬起风帆向着回忆的港湾起航

我们携手走过的人生那段布满荆棘的道路
是否依然记得抑或已经忘却

看似稚嫩的小手却蕴藏着超越我们的坚强
穿过长满熟透葡萄的长廊将昨日的阴霾抛在脑后
稚嫩的小手即使不再紧紧相握我们也将继续前行
在那一天来临之际将珍贵的回忆深深埋藏

光阴荏苒曾经肆虐的寒风
早已风光不再消散在了春天的歌声里

看似稚嫩的小手却蕴藏着超越我们的坚强
脸上虽仍残留着泪痕却再次绽放出会心的笑容
稚嫩的小手即使不再紧紧相握我们也将继续前行
在那一天来临之际我们将回忆埋藏在心底

看似稚嫩的小手有朝一日终将我们超越
当那一天来临等待我们的又将是崭新的天空

~Romaji~

tooku de tooku de yureteru inaho no umi
ho wo age ho wo age mezashita omoide he to
bokura ha kyou made no kanashii koto zenbu oboeteru ka, wasureta ka

chiisana te ni mo itsukara ka bokura oikoshiteku tsuyosa
ureta budou no shita naiteta hi kara aruita
chiisana te de mo hanarete mo bokura ha kono michi yukunda
itsuka kuru hi ha ichiban no omoide wo shimatte

kisetsu ha utsuri mou tsumetai kaze ga
tsutsumarete nemure ano haru no uta no naka de

chiisana te ni mo itsukara ka bokura oikoshiteku tsuyosa
nureta hoo ni ha dore dake no egao ga utsutta
chiisana te de mo hanarete mo bokura ha kono michi yukunda
soshite kuru hi ha bokura mo omoide wo shimatta

chiisana te mo itsu no hi ka bokura oikoshite yukunda
yagate kuru hi ha atarashii kisetsu wo hiraita

~English~

Far away, far away, the sea of rice plants wavers
Raising the rice, raising the rice, we aimed for the memory
Do we remember the sad things that have happened before today, or have we forgotten them?

Even in this tiny hand, there could someday be strength surpassing our own
From the day I cried beneath the ripe grapes, I started to walk
Even if my hand is small, even if we're separated, we'll walk this road
And on the day that will someday come, we'll store away our best memories

The seasons change; already the cold wind
Wraps around us and sleeps inside the song of that spring

Even in this tiny hand, there could someday be strength surpassing our own
Those wet cheeks reflected a number of smiles
Even if my hand is small, even if we're separated, we'll walk this road
And on the new day we too stored away our memories

Even this tiny hand will one day pass by us
And on the new day, a new season began

Last edited by JoJo 2011-09-24T08:07:33+00:00, edited 8 times in total.

KayeSara

KayeSara 2011-07-12T16:33:19+00:00

抢的真快，不过也是我第二

IRC mod~

~~~坑爹啊！！！！快-3KD了~~

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S o r d a

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S o r d a 2011-07-12T16:39:24+00:00

>A</

swish

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swish 2011-07-12T16:40:10+00:00

good song

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2011-07-12T17:04:05+00:00

Oh..
Some timing help

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Tenshi-nyan

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Tenshi-nyan 2011-07-12T17:07:10+00:00

DAT

DAT

DAT

/me dies

Oh and nice double star kanpakyin~

this seriously needs some intensive modding when it's done. Massive overmapping... too high difficulty settings... etc...

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Magicphoenix

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Magicphoenix 2011-07-12T17:10:52+00:00

Love the song, but please ,PLEASE!!! AR 7 ;www;

JoJo

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JoJo 2011-07-12T17:17:05+00:00

@KayeSara, @S o r d a, @swish, @Tenshi-nyan, @Magicphoenix
Star thanks guys~ >o<//
And Tenshi's kd star~ ^w^

@kanpakyin
Thanks for timing help ~
Nice double star ~ xD

@Magicphoenix
Yea..I'm not sure.. Maybe I will lower it later ~ Still WIP now ~ >~<

EDIT:
@Tenshi-nyan

SPOILER

Tenshi-nyan wrote:
this seriously needs some intensive modding when it's done. Massive overmapping... too high difficulty settings... etc...

Yah I see ... @_@ I make the most difficult diff so maybe I have overmapped some parts .. This song is so slow and cute so .. ><
I will try my best ~ ><

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Nymph

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Nymph 2011-07-12T17:37:06+00:00

...I am late

Tenshi-nyan

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Tenshi-nyan 2011-07-12T17:59:12+00:00

I shall keep an eye on this.

This song is my absolute favourite out of the Clannad album, and I wanted to map it as well, so you guys may have beat me to it.

I still may map my own version of this song... if I don't like what becomes of this map.
So many slow songs, not only Clannad, get overmapped to a degree that they don't fit the song. Which is not fun.
Don't make a map harder than absolutely necessary...

The rythm on Nymph's diff seems to fit the song pretty well... Any diff with more notes than this is overmapped D:

All I can say for now to this map is, work on it. I wanna see a masterpiece of map for this song. It deserves nothing else.

In order to counter overmapping, reduce a shitload of notes. 1/4 does not fit the song at all. Especially the part from 00:39:518 - to 01:37:130 - and 02:58:799 - 03:03:000 - has way too many notes in it.

Also, I recommend reducing the Difficulty settings to
HP: 4-5
AR: 6
OD:6-7

This song is very calm, so keep that in mind while mapping T_T

Argh I just had to clear out my mind a bit... I could kill someone if they were to talk badly about Clannad and this song >_<
I also know that people have different ideas of a good map than me, so... D:

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2011-07-12T18:03:54+00:00

I'm pretty should my diff didn't overmapped.However I'm not totally finish it..

JoJo

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JoJo 2011-07-12T18:10:37+00:00

@Tenshi-nyan

SPOILER

Tenshi-nyan wrote:
I shall keep an eye on this.

This song is my absolute favourite out of the Clannad album, and I wanted to map it as well, so you guys may have beat me to it.
My fav too.. ><

I still may map my own version of this song... if I don't like what becomes of this map.
So many slow songs, not only Clannad, get overmapped to a degree that they don't fit the song. Which is not fun.
Don't make a map harder than absolutely necessary... You are right.. I'm ready to remap some parts.@_@

The rythm on Nymph's diff seems to fit the song pretty well... Any diff with more notes than this is overmapped D:

All I can say for now to this map is, work on it. I wanna see a masterpiece of map for this song. It deserves nothing else.

In order to counter overmapping, reduce a shitload of notes. 1/4 does not fit the song at all. Especially the part from 00:39:518 - to 01:37:130 - and 02:58:799 - 03:03:000 - has way too many notes in it.

Also, I recommend reducing the Difficulty settings to
HP: 4-5
AR: 6
OD:6-7

This song is very calm, so keep that in mind while mapping T_T

Argh I just had to clear out my mind a bit... I could kill someone if they were to talk badly about Clannad and this song >_<
I also know that people have different ideas of a good map than me, so... D:

Thanks~ >< Kudos for useful suggestions~