use of colour/lighting is interesting though. The face certainly looks off, yes (the left eye is too big). Most of it looks good (particularly the top imo - that's a nice zipper) so I'm wondering what the story there is.
"Take into account that my anime face/anime in general drawing skills are lacking hugely..."
If that is the case I don't think you should try and conform to that style (it is not "the official style" or anything). I agree that you're "not really an artist" if you never leave your comfort zone and just stick to one style so it's important for growth that you try new things and this hopefully served as good practice. But I'm curious as to how you'd draw her if you were doing it some other way.
"Take into account that my anime face/anime in general drawing skills are lacking hugely..."
If that is the case I don't think you should try and conform to that style (it is not "the official style" or anything). I agree that you're "not really an artist" if you never leave your comfort zone and just stick to one style so it's important for growth that you try new things and this hopefully served as good practice. But I'm curious as to how you'd draw her if you were doing it some other way.