beatmapsets/1953685#osu/4047707
if you guys prefer to talk on disc add me: Suix#4395
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beatmapsets/1940038#osu/4011788
tried varying sv in chorus, dms are preferred
tried varying sv in chorus, dms are preferred
Gsun
beatmapsets/1944438#osu/4023204 I would like to understand how to do object placement in the map better. Please also post feedback in DM in my osu! profile.
beatmapsets/1956744#osu/4053576
It was J-Core
I'm not sure if my placement and bpm are good already
discussion page or osu direct message would be great!
TY
It was J-Core
I'm not sure if my placement and bpm are good already
discussion page or osu direct message would be great!
TY
hello! im a new mapper at heart.
beatmapsets/1949325#osu/4035581
notes:
hmmm. well too be honest i didnt really know what i wanted to accomplish in the beginning, other than to make it feel good or 'comfy' to play. for starters, i'd like feedback on the rhythm (esp. in kiai sections)
...uhhh dm me if you'd rather talk on discord
beatmapsets/1949325#osu/4035581
notes:
hmmm. well too be honest i didnt really know what i wanted to accomplish in the beginning, other than to make it feel good or 'comfy' to play. for starters, i'd like feedback on the rhythm (esp. in kiai sections)
...uhhh dm me if you'd rather talk on discord
beatmapsets/1956830#osu/4053755
feedback appreciated
feedback appreciated
beatmapsets/1955245#osu/4049620
Was kinda inspired how Down makes wiggle streams, so there's some of them
Looking for general feedback since I don't really receive any
(im open for osu/discord dms)
Was kinda inspired how Down makes wiggle streams, so there's some of them
Looking for general feedback since I don't really receive any
(im open for osu/discord dms)
Name: Kanzen Shouri*Esper Girl
artist: *namirin
BPM: 195 BPM
Genre: JPOP
Length: 3min 22 sec
diff: esper girl (6.09*)
Any feedback is appreciated ^^
beatmapsets/1943101#osu/4019351
artist: *namirin
BPM: 195 BPM
Genre: JPOP
Length: 3min 22 sec
diff: esper girl (6.09*)
Any feedback is appreciated ^^
beatmapsets/1943101#osu/4019351
beatmapsets/1961032#osu/4064123
Them Changes (Sped up Tiktok Remix)
Length: 1:39
Would love any feedback on any of the two (4.12* / 5.15*) difficulties.
Thanks!
Them Changes (Sped up Tiktok Remix)
Length: 1:39
Would love any feedback on any of the two (4.12* / 5.15*) difficulties.
Thanks!
beatmapsets/1945734#osu/4057774
first beatmap i made to go rank you can mod any way you want ( I just wanna make the last diff at least 9*)
ty
first beatmap i made to go rank you can mod any way you want ( I just wanna make the last diff at least 9*)
ty
beatmapsets/1950404#osu/4038276
Trying to make some experience on pushing map into ranked, so im collecting mods for now. Will be thankful to any advice witch you can gave me
Trying to make some experience on pushing map into ranked, so im collecting mods for now. Will be thankful to any advice witch you can gave me
beatmapsets/1960001#osu/4061726
just trying to push a map to ranked, would like if you posted feedback on the map's discussion
advice about making it rankable with patterns, spacing etc
used hitsounds from pishifat's map
just trying to push a map to ranked, would like if you posted feedback on the map's discussion
advice about making it rankable with patterns, spacing etc
used hitsounds from pishifat's map
beatmapsets/1946268#osu/4026691
I feel like my patterning is a bit random(?), I'd like it to make some more sense, and my main goal is to just make a playable map, so feedback on the whole map whether it somehow connects would be welcome
Dc, text or vc:Rami#0003
I feel like my patterning is a bit random(?), I'd like it to make some more sense, and my main goal is to just make a playable map, so feedback on the whole map whether it somehow connects would be welcome
Dc, text or vc:Rami#0003
my map (:
If I'm honest I have no idea what im doing (bad map xd), dming through discord or osu would be preferred (I can send my discord in osu pms) so I can explain my thought process and ask for some specific tips on stuff I wasnt too sure about (:
If I'm honest I have no idea what im doing (bad map xd), dming through discord or osu would be preferred (I can send my discord in osu pms) so I can explain my thought process and ask for some specific tips on stuff I wasnt too sure about (:
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beatmapsets/1969134#osu/4084599 nm tks <3
beatmapsets/1969301#osu/4084926
Not trying to copy someone style, just enjoy overmapping. Wanna become ranked mapper. Not scared of criticism, be honest but informative.
Direct messages in osu or discussion page where u want.
Not trying to copy someone style, just enjoy overmapping. Wanna become ranked mapper. Not scared of criticism, be honest but informative.
Direct messages in osu or discussion page where u want.
Map Link: beatmapsets/1969365#osu/4091789
Oh, this thread exactly what I wanted to find. I'm making maps right now with the only intention - "to learn how to make good maps" and when I learn it, I'm going to rank songs which I like.
Problems which I know I have:
Thank you in advance!
Oh, this thread exactly what I wanted to find. I'm making maps right now with the only intention - "to learn how to make good maps" and when I learn it, I'm going to rank songs which I like.
Problems which I know I have:
- Patterns - I understand them, but struggle to use or create my own. It's also hard to change my patterns so they want be just copy-pasted all the time.
- Emphasizing - I think I'm way better with that right now, but still have some issues
- Slider Shapes - It's my biggest issue in most cases, I just can't understand which slider shape to use and how. In my last maps I was using like only 1 Curved slider (yea, the same one slider everywhere), or 1 Straight and just repeating them and changing angles. In this map though, I did oposite, I experimented for a bit with slider shapes, and wasn't so strict to use only simple shapes.
- Flow - Sometimes, in some parts of the map my hand feel awkward when playing. It's probably the problem with flow/movement. For example I know that maps mostly are Circular movement, so I need to change it in balance (clockwise, anti-clockwise), so I think problem with HOW I do this change of movement direction.
Thank you in advance!
beatmapsets/1975146#osu/4099246
Artist: kinema106
Title: Kyoui Sakiku Sakura
BPM: 188
The map is mapped as standard NM1 style, and inspirations are mainly taken from juubaku.
Looking for general feedback but mainly:
Thank you!
Artist: kinema106
Title: Kyoui Sakiku Sakura
BPM: 188
The map is mapped as standard NM1 style, and inspirations are mainly taken from juubaku.
Looking for general feedback but mainly:
- Rhythm: sometimes I feel like my rhythm choice is odd but I am not sure how to fix it.
- Pattern: I am struggling to create interesting patterns and a lot of patterns in my map feels repetitive.
Thank you!
beatmapsets/1878133#osu/4028535
Noah - Celestial stinger
BPM: 269
Video Game/Metal
mainly looking for feedback on the top and low diffs.
prefer feedback on map page
ty!
Noah - Celestial stinger
BPM: 269
Video Game/Metal
mainly looking for feedback on the top and low diffs.
prefer feedback on map page
ty!
beatmapsets/1975598#osu/4100338
Artist: Aviators
Title: Fading Light
BPM: 144
I'm not trying to copy anyone, I tried looking at maps with a similar BPM to the one in my map.
Things I need the most help with
Artist: Aviators
Title: Fading Light
BPM: 144
I'm not trying to copy anyone, I tried looking at maps with a similar BPM to the one in my map.
Things I need the most help with
- Rhythm - I feel I am bad at this. I have a general understanding of what not to do but I am struggling to hear everything and put it down (My hearing it fine, I'm just bad at mapping what I hear).
Title: Si Te La Encuentras Por Ahi
Artist: feid
Genre: pop
Length: 2:26
Link: beatmapsets/1974282#osu/4097274
:skull:
Artist: feid
Genre: pop
Length: 2:26
Link: beatmapsets/1974282#osu/4097274
:skull:
Not my first map but this one I'm confident sharing.
beatmapsets/1972820#osu/4093653
My major problem I think i have in my map is flow so can you give feedback on it. Thanks!
beatmapsets/1972820#osu/4093653
My major problem I think i have in my map is flow so can you give feedback on it. Thanks!
beatmapsets/1977094#osu/4104270
Title: Reconciliation (Relaxing Cover)
Artist: Hecate Music
Genre: Piano
Length: 1:29
BPM: 85
This is my 2nd uploaded beatmap, and the first I am somewhat satisfied with as a complete product. It's designed around a spacial gimmick where the position of every hitobject forms a heart shape in negative space. Currently only the top diff is complete, as I'm looking for initial feedback.
Things I need the most help with:
Title: Reconciliation (Relaxing Cover)
Artist: Hecate Music
Genre: Piano
Length: 1:29
BPM: 85
This is my 2nd uploaded beatmap, and the first I am somewhat satisfied with as a complete product. It's designed around a spacial gimmick where the position of every hitobject forms a heart shape in negative space. Currently only the top diff is complete, as I'm looking for initial feedback.
Things I need the most help with:
- Logic and flow of patterns, and making sure they play well while following the music
- Emphasizing strong and weak parts of the music via patterns and spacing
- Slider shapes that are clean, aesthetically pleasing, and make sense in the context of the song
- Hitsounding in an effective way
- General feedback and suggestions for improvement
beatmapsets/1977996#osu/4106189
Tried to do something simple instead of going haywire with the difficulty.
Modding discussion or osu chat.
Tried to do something simple instead of going haywire with the difficulty.
Modding discussion or osu chat.
Beatmap link: beatmapsets/1972250#osu/4092420
Artist: Yunosuke
Title: Kakuriyo ni Mae
Genre: Electronic
Length 3:02 (drain is 2:48).
BPM: 128
This is my first time actually mapping for the duration of a song. There are still many things im unsure of how to do properly and want any and all advice available. Strict advice is whole-heartily welcomed, don't hold back for anything and give it to me 100% honest.
I don't know how to hitsound, but would love to learn. Slider shapes could still use some work and in general.
Please msg via osuDM or discord (Kamoonrahha#5293) discord is preferred, but either works.
Thank you for the help in advance!
Artist: Yunosuke
Title: Kakuriyo ni Mae
Genre: Electronic
Length 3:02 (drain is 2:48).
BPM: 128
This is my first time actually mapping for the duration of a song. There are still many things im unsure of how to do properly and want any and all advice available. Strict advice is whole-heartily welcomed, don't hold back for anything and give it to me 100% honest.
I don't know how to hitsound, but would love to learn. Slider shapes could still use some work and in general.
Please msg via osuDM or discord (Kamoonrahha#5293) discord is preferred, but either works.
Thank you for the help in advance!
Name: Mimi - Lapis Lazuli
BPM: 190
Genre: pop
Length: 3:43
Diff: Expert
Link: beatmapsets/1461968#osu/3003499
BPM: 190
Genre: pop
Length: 3:43
Diff: Expert
Link: beatmapsets/1461968#osu/3003499
beatmapsets/1913013/discussion/-/generalAll/pending all difs are roughly completed, looking for feedback and criticism 
still very new to mapping, looking to get help and insight that'll make me better! modding page or discussion page works just fine.
still very new to mapping, looking to get help and insight that'll make me better! modding page or discussion page works just fine.beatmapsets/1975709#osu/4103550
siinamota - young girl A
my first ever map! there are 'triple bursts' gimmicks in the main chorus, i'd like to know your thoughts about those as well. thank you for ur time!! <3
siinamota - young girl A
my first ever map! there are 'triple bursts' gimmicks in the main chorus, i'd like to know your thoughts about those as well. thank you for ur time!! <3
beatmapsets/1980577#osu/4112607
Paramore - Still Into You
BPM: 136
Pop
looking for feedback on how to improve in general, including hitsounds
feedback through modding discussion or osu chat works
thank you :3
Paramore - Still Into You
BPM: 136
Pop
looking for feedback on how to improve in general, including hitsounds
feedback through modding discussion or osu chat works
thank you :3
beatmapsets/1980373#osu/4112216
Title: Sign wa B (TV Size)
Artist: B-Komachi Ai (CV: Rie Takahashi)
looking for some patterning feedback!
please msg through osu dm, thankyou! :>
Title: Sign wa B (TV Size)
Artist: B-Komachi Ai (CV: Rie Takahashi)
looking for some patterning feedback!
please msg through osu dm, thankyou! :>
Artist: Utsu-P
Title: MiKUSABBATH
Genre: J-Metal
BPM: 190
Length: 3:50
Diffs: 1
Hi! I can probably use any help! But i think my consistency in patterning is a big weakness of mine.
Feedback through modding discussion or osu chat is preferred.
Thank you very much for your time in advance!
Title: MiKUSABBATH
Genre: J-Metal
BPM: 190
Length: 3:50
Diffs: 1
Hi! I can probably use any help! But i think my consistency in patterning is a big weakness of mine.
Feedback through modding discussion or osu chat is preferred.
Thank you very much for your time in advance!
Link: beatmapsets/1979252#osu/4109130
Artist: BiSH
Title: Innocent Arrogance
Length: 1:27
BPM: 170
(Don't mind the insane diff)
First map ever so don't expect much. I'm open to any critiques whatsoever, but preferably patterning and/or spacing, (too repetitive, or inconsistent etc.) and maybe hitsounding too since i have literally -0 ideas on how to begin with that
Also dms on osu is preferred as well
:]
Artist: BiSH
Title: Innocent Arrogance
Length: 1:27
BPM: 170
(Don't mind the insane diff)
First map ever so don't expect much. I'm open to any critiques whatsoever, but preferably patterning and/or spacing, (too repetitive, or inconsistent etc.) and maybe hitsounding too since i have literally -0 ideas on how to begin with that
Also dms on osu is preferred as well
:]
Hello! I'd really appreciate it if you looked over my map and gave me some feedback. I think it's currently my best one! Ty! (Also my first time using a modding queue)
beatmapsets/1953366#osu/4045191
beatmapsets/1953366#osu/4045191
Artist: millennium parade x Sheena Ringo
Title: WORK (TV Size)
Genre: Anime, Japanese Rock/Rap (you'll understand if you listen)
Source: TVアニメ地獄楽HELL'S PARADISE
Length: 1:28
BPM: 105 (With 1/8s)
Map: beatmapsets/1968181#osu/4082281
Title: WORK (TV Size)
Genre: Anime, Japanese Rock/Rap (you'll understand if you listen)
Source: TVアニメ地獄楽HELL'S PARADISE
Length: 1:28
BPM: 105 (With 1/8s)
Map: beatmapsets/1968181#osu/4082281
I mostly map for fun at this point because I can never finish a set before I move on to the next.
But I would still like some feedback
SPECECO - Push
one diff 5.7 stars
164 bpm
beatmapsets/1976592#osu/4102917
But I would still like some feedback
SPECECO - Push
one diff 5.7 stars
164 bpm
beatmapsets/1976592#osu/4102917
beatmapsets/1983906
Tried an awkward style, thank you!
Tried an awkward style, thank you!
beatmapsets/1984352#osu/4125233
first beatmapset, sort of just tried to put in a bit of everything from beatmaps i've enjoyed playing. specifically, finding it difficult to map lower difficulties (fitting all ranking criteria whilst not being boring). feedback in discussion page is fine. thanks!
first beatmapset, sort of just tried to put in a bit of everything from beatmaps i've enjoyed playing. specifically, finding it difficult to map lower difficulties (fitting all ranking criteria whilst not being boring). feedback in discussion page is fine. thanks!
beatmapsets/1986301#osu/4125953 i'd like my discussion in the discussion tab
beatmapsets/1672414#osu/3415952
Its the WIP diff which i need help with.
I've spoken to others and cant tell which parts need changing, specifically on how id improve the flow overall of my maps and angles the patterns follow.
Someone also said some parts of the map seemed over mapped. Bcoz im still a noob i dont really aim for rankable mapping styles just playability.
pls give feedback <3
Its the WIP diff which i need help with.
I've spoken to others and cant tell which parts need changing, specifically on how id improve the flow overall of my maps and angles the patterns follow.
Someone also said some parts of the map seemed over mapped. Bcoz im still a noob i dont really aim for rankable mapping styles just playability.
pls give feedback <3
beatmapsets/1985325#osu/4123740
I'd like focus on patterning/consistency, since I think that is the part I struggle with the most
osu dms are preferred
I'd like focus on patterning/consistency, since I think that is the part I struggle with the most
osu dms are preferred
beatmapsets/1980925#osu/4113347
beatmapsets/1989158#osu/4132346
aiming for something along the lines of R3m's maps with these
beatmapsets/1989158#osu/4132346
aiming for something along the lines of R3m's maps with these
Mega Terra Zero - Charles (Sharuru)
145 BPM 3 Minute Map 5.25 Star map
Had been mapping for quite a while but still far from being good at it.
Would like to hear and learn from you. Thanks in advance!
Any method of feedback would be okay, whichever that is most convenient for you is fine by me
beatmapsets/1976398#osu/4102181
145 BPM 3 Minute Map 5.25 Star map
Had been mapping for quite a while but still far from being good at it.
Would like to hear and learn from you. Thanks in advance!
Any method of feedback would be okay, whichever that is most convenient for you is fine by me
beatmapsets/1976398#osu/4102181
beatmapsets/1953762#osu/4046145
very linear mapping (most of it is grid mapped). No hitsounding, but has hitsound volume done. Most concerned about mapping at 02:55:639 and alike sections.
modding discussion page preferred
very linear mapping (most of it is grid mapped). No hitsounding, but has hitsound volume done. Most concerned about mapping at 02:55:639 and alike sections.
modding discussion page preferred
Venjent - Create Machines
Song Genre: Drum and Bass
Map Length: 2:45
Beatmap Link: beatmapsets/1988697
would like to get feedback on it. modding discussion page is fine
Song Genre: Drum and Bass
Map Length: 2:45
Beatmap Link: beatmapsets/1988697
would like to get feedback on it. modding discussion page is fine