Thanks for modding.Suzully wrote:
[General][Relaxing]
- Creator's Words
10年後の私へ 今は幸せでしょか？
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10年後の私へ 今は幸せでしょうか？Fixed
- Tags
Add "KiritanP" to Dis's one. Fixed[KPY]
- 00:14:874 (2) - How about changing it like this?
Fixed
- 02:24:874 (4) - ^ X.not here sorry.
- 00:05:112 (x) - Add a note. Fixed
- 01:21:064 (4) - How about this pattern to follow vocal? X.I think it's okey here.
[attachment=2:26ffc]screenshot133.jpg[/attachment:26ffc]- 01:35:945 (x) - Add a note and stack (3) and it with 01:36:064 (4)? X,orz..no.
[attachment=1:26ffc]screenshot134.jpg[/attachment:26ffc]- 01:51:540 (6) - New combo? Fixed
- 03:19:714 (6) - lol variable BPM? It's hard to hit but it's playable imo
I have to do that due to offset changed T_T
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Wotamin - letter song
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Topic Starter
By KPY's mod4mod
[Relaxing]
00:08:683 (2) - 有點跑掉0.0? 往右上各1個grid試試看(size 4)
[Dis]
All good
[KPY]
AR=7比較剛好
00:03:445 (5) - 要斜的還是直的0.0? 因為只差一格grid(size 4)
00:18:683 (6) - lol奇怪圖形阿...其實我是覺得有點不適合啦
01:00:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這邊做成正方形會更漂亮
02:40:112 (4,5,6) - 這個沒有做的很好看 問題應該是出在(5)上
03:21:694 - 可以放些note到03:23:645 -再放些轉盤...結尾改到03:25:523 -這樣比較比較合適[IMO]
結論:該死~你做的map質量那麼高 我怎麼忍心挑你毛病阿>"<
[Relaxing]
00:08:683 (2) - 有點跑掉0.0? 往右上各1個grid試試看(size 4)
[Dis]
All good
[KPY]
AR=7比較剛好
00:03:445 (5) - 要斜的還是直的0.0? 因為只差一格grid(size 4)
00:18:683 (6) - lol奇怪圖形阿...其實我是覺得有點不適合啦
01:00:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這邊做成正方形會更漂亮
02:40:112 (4,5,6) - 這個沒有做的很好看 問題應該是出在(5)上
03:21:694 - 可以放些note到03:23:645 -再放些轉盤...結尾改到03:25:523 -這樣比較比較合適[IMO]
結論:
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding.spboxer3 wrote:
[Relaxing]
00:08:683 (2) - 有點跑掉0.0? 往右上各1個grid試試看(size 4) X,一直都沒開grid排..
[KPY]
AR=7比較剛好 Fixed.
00:03:445 (5) - 要斜的還是直的0.0? 因為只差一格grid(size 4) X,和直的沒差.
00:18:683 (6) - lol奇怪圖形阿...其實我是覺得有點不適合啦 換了.
01:00:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這邊做成正方形會更漂亮 X,1.2.3.5是正方形阿..
02:40:112 (4,5,6) - 這個沒有做的很好看 問題應該是出在(5)上 其實也沒差啊..
03:21:694 - 可以放些note到03:23:645 -再放些轉盤...結尾改到03:25:523 -這樣比較比較合適[IMO] X,因為Timing不確定,所以不map是比較好..
我只是随意看看
皮肤文件缺少hit300g.png和spinner-metre.png
spinner-circle.png没有对准中心。我调了半天就是差那半个像素。最好重新做下吧～
[KPY]
00:22:493 (1) - remove finish here ?
00:33:921 (1) - finish
00:38:683 (5) - 把finish改到开头的圈上
01:02:017 (6) - remove finish
01:40:588 (4) - finish at start
//结尾那堆红线略感莫名其妙
others are all fine
Great song,KD star~
EDIT:这是我的第200贴呢～mark个
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding.xykbear wrote:
[KPY]
00:22:493 (1) - remove finish here ? Fixed
00:33:921 (1) - finish X.
00:38:683 (5) - 把finish改到开头的圈上 X.
01:02:017 (6) - remove finish Fixed
01:40:588 (4) - finish at start X
//结尾那堆红线略感莫名其妙 你移走他看看,timing會有差.
Oh yeah, I think you should skin the reverse arrow. The one I'm using is almost invisible, especially during kiai time. Obviously it depends on the skin, but you never know what skin someone will be using :/
if not, you can always just add the template ones lol. it'll look kinda bad tho i guess.
KPY
00:51:540 (2) - sounds better if you end this slider at 00:51:779 imo
01:20:826 (3,4) - switch these two notes around so combo 4 starts at 01:20:826 and combo 3 starts at 01:21:540?
01:42:493 (1,2,3) - perhaps follow the piano?
03:13:678 (1) - move combo 1 up so it isn't stacked on top of combo 2?
Dis
00:35:826 (3) - erm... i'm not sure if you should use it so much in the song.. oh well. Sometimes it fits really well, but other times, not really imo. D:
02:06:302 (2) - i don't think it should be this quiet. It's basically silenced as it stands right now.
02:53:917 (1) - from and on, lower the volume a bit?
03:19:714 (1,2) - switch combo 1 and 2 around to follow vocals more?
03:21:382 (x) - add note?
Relaxing
00:34:636 (1,2,3) - Combo two sounds really weird imo right now. Try something like this?:
00:55:826 (x) - sounds better if you add a note imo
01:17:255 (7) - idk if you should use this in the easiest diff. i guess it's ok.
01:51:064 (5) - use normal hitsound with only finish?
Awesome map! :3
Edit:
Edit 2: I was trying to say something like this. Do you completely disagree with this? Well if you do, then ok. I'm just wondering. Sorry to bother you D:
if not, you can always just add the template ones lol. it'll look kinda bad tho i guess.
KPY
00:51:540 (2) - sounds better if you end this slider at 00:51:779 imo
01:20:826 (3,4) - switch these two notes around so combo 4 starts at 01:20:826 and combo 3 starts at 01:21:540?
01:42:493 (1,2,3) - perhaps follow the piano?
03:13:678 (1) - move combo 1 up so it isn't stacked on top of combo 2?
Dis
00:35:826 (3) - erm... i'm not sure if you should use it so much in the song.. oh well. Sometimes it fits really well, but other times, not really imo. D:
02:06:302 (2) - i don't think it should be this quiet. It's basically silenced as it stands right now.
02:53:917 (1) - from and on, lower the volume a bit?
03:19:714 (1,2) - switch combo 1 and 2 around to follow vocals more?
03:21:382 (x) - add note?
Relaxing
00:34:636 (1,2,3) - Combo two sounds really weird imo right now. Try something like this?:
00:55:826 (x) - sounds better if you add a note imo
01:17:255 (7) - idk if you should use this in the easiest diff. i guess it's ok.
01:51:064 (5) - use normal hitsound with only finish?
Awesome map! :3
Edit:
I'm not exactly sure if you understood what I was trying to say. The way I was trying to make follows the vocals more. It just baffles me because you "totally" don't agree. If you just said I don't agree, I would not be questioning if you understood what I was trying to say. hmm... cuz I didn't say anything completely random... I'm just wondering why you "totally" disagree.kanpakyin wrote:
01:20:826 (3,4) - switch these two notes around so combo 4 starts at 01:20:826 and combo 3 starts at 01:21:540? X,totally not agree.
Edit 2: I was trying to say something like this. Do you completely disagree with this? Well if you do, then ok. I'm just wondering. Sorry to bother you D:
Topic Starter
Thanks for moddingwinber1 wrote:
Oh yeah, I think you should skin the reverse arrow. The one I'm using is almost invisible, especially during kiai time. Obviously it depends on the skin, but you never know what skin someone will be using :/
if not, you can always just add the template ones lol. it'll look kinda bad tho i guess. Leave to karenying,however player can removed the skin by themselves,so I thin k it's not a problem.
KPY
00:51:540 (2) - sounds better if you end this slider at 00:51:779 imo X.
01:20:826 (3,4) - switch these two notes around so combo 4 starts at 01:20:826 and combo 3 starts at 01:21:540? X,totally not agree.
01:42:493 (1,2,3) - perhaps follow the piano? X,nah.
03:13:678 (1) - move combo 1 up so it isn't stacked on top of combo 2? X,It's follow the lyric.
Relaxing
00:34:636 (1,2,3) - Combo two sounds really weird imo right now. Try something like this?:SPOILERX.It quite good now i think.[attachment=0:221d6]screenshot068.jpg[/attachment:221d6]
00:55:826 (x) - sounds better if you add a note imo Fixed
01:17:255 (7) - idk if you should use this in the easiest diff. i guess it's ok. X,it's fine.
01:51:064 (5) - use normal hitsound with only finish? Finxed in another way~
Edit:Well,fixed.
都是建议啊:
[General]
开头那一段的Clap有点断断续续的（虽然没什么影响
另外把KiaiTime的绿线对齐到白线
[General]
spinner-circle.png中间那个黑圈位置不在最中心 稍微调一下
三分多钟的歌加个Break Time吧
00:01:541 (1): 开头+Finish
00:16:779 (4): New Combo
00:48:207 (2): 开头+Clap
01:15:826 (6): 这里+Whistle
01:17:255 (7): 建议重复+1 然后把Finish移到最后
02:14:874 (4): 这里的Whistle换成Finish
02:22:493 (3): New Combo
开头那一段的Clap有点断断续续的（虽然没什么影响
另外把KiaiTime的绿线对齐到白线
00:31:064 (1): 这里感觉用Normal的Finish音效更好点
01:42:255 (3): 这里+Whistle
01:49:160 (2): 这里+Clap
02:34:874 (2): ^
02:06:302 (2): 其实这里降音反而感觉有点奇怪
02:51:540 (3): 这里也不推荐降音
00:01:541 (1): 开头+Finish
02:00:588 (1): 重复+1 后面的②重复减一往后拖1/4拍
01:47:255 (2): 这里+Clap
01:54:874 (6): 拖到⑧的位置
02:07:017 (6): New Combo 后面的①去掉New Combo
02:18:207 (1): 这里+Whistle
02:25:350 (8): 这里+Clap
03:13:678 (1): 还是最好不要与②重叠了
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding.impossiblexu wrote:
[General][Relaxing]
spinner-circle.png中间那个黑圈位置不在最中心 稍微调一下Leave to karenying
三分多钟的歌加个Break Time吧 Easy加了,KPY難度就算了..Dis他自己決定[KPY]
00:01:541 (1): 开头+Finish Fixed
00:16:779 (4): New Combo Fixed
00:48:207 (2): 开头+Clap X
01:15:826 (6): 这里+Whistle Fixed
01:17:255 (7): 建议重复+1 然后把Finish移到最后 Fixed
02:14:874 (4): 这里的Whistle换成Finish Fixed
02:22:493 (3): New Combo Fixed
00:01:541 (1): 开头+Finish Fixed
02:00:588 (1): 重复+1 后面的②重复减一往后拖1/4拍 X故意的..
01:47:255 (2): 这里+Clap Fixed
01:54:874 (6): 拖到⑧的位置 X,這樣跳會很怪..
02:07:017 (6): New Combo 后面的①去掉New Combo Fixed
02:18:207 (1): 这里+Whistle Fixed
02:25:350 (8): 这里+Clap Fixed
03:13:678 (1): 还是最好不要与②重叠了 Fixed
Hi~
[SB]
Try to make karenying take a look on his .osb file next time D:
Download: Wotamin - Letter song (kanpakyin).osb
Any problem with this file tell me please
[Skin]
-Actually use a white spinner background is a bad idea, and if you add the soft colour of your circles and kiai... well looks bad, is pretty hard of see at playing, some suggestions of circle colour
102,142,238
247,87,91
253,248,153
233,197,112
-spinner-circle is not perfectly centered, is that on purpose? (btw the center is 333x333).
-I suggest force default skin to fill missing elements.
[KPY]
-I wonder why there are so many jumps... most of them haven't support in the song.
-00:46:302 (8) - pretty bad shape.
~
[SB]
Try to make karenying take a look on his .osb file next time D:
Download: Wotamin - Letter song (kanpakyin).osb
Any problem with this file tell me please
[Skin]
-Actually use a white spinner background is a bad idea, and if you add the soft colour of your circles and kiai... well looks bad, is pretty hard of see at playing, some suggestions of circle colour
102,142,238
247,87,91
253,248,153
233,197,112
-spinner-circle is not perfectly centered, is that on purpose? (btw the center is 333x333).
-I suggest force default skin to fill missing elements.
[KPY]
-I wonder why there are so many jumps... most of them haven't support in the song.
-00:46:302 (8) - pretty bad shape.
~
Wotamin<3
Topic Starter
Astom wrote:
Hi~
[SB]
Try to make karenying take a look on his .osb file next time D:
[attachment=0:16df3]Wotamin - Letter song (kanpakyin).osb[/attachment:16df3]
Any problem with this file tell me please
[Skin]
-Actually use a white spinner background is a bad idea, and if you add the soft colour of your circles and kiai... well looks bad, is pretty hard of see at playing, some suggestions of circle colour
102,142,238
247,87,91
253,248,153
233,197,112 Fixed
-spinner-circle is not perfectly centered, is that on purpose (btw the center is 333x333). Already fixed.
-I suggest force default skin to fill missing elements.
[KPY]
-I wonder why there are so many jumps... most of them haven't support in the song. Most of the jump I was putting on accent point,they are fair enough for the most difficult diff.
-00:46:302 (8) - pretty bad shape. Fixed.
As per your request.
Gotta mod this 神 song.
Btw~
Color Help:
Red -> You must change it.
Blue -> Change it as well.
Black -> Suggestion only.
Let's go.
[Relaxing]
00:06:779 (4) - Hmm~ I guess the whistle should be here.
00:07:255 (1) - Remove the whistle.
00:45:350 (5) - Huh.. Remove finish here?
01:10:112 (1) - Finish here? sounds better.
01:13:921 (4) - ^
02:09:160 (5) - New combo?
02:11:064 (1) - Remove New combo.
02:12:969 (5) - New combo.
02:15:350 (1) - Remove New combo.
02:24:874 (2) - Don't suggest 1/2 here. I suggestion : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105283
[Dis]
00:14:874 (3) - Umm~ I guess here should be new combo?
02:06:302 (2) - I don't suggest off volume here><
02:16:779 (4) - New combo?
02:17:731 (2,1,2) - Really, I think it has a bit too hard to read for new players.. Maybe change it as well.
Overall that's nice
[Insane]
00:48:683 (1,2,3) -
Don't jump here?... Just use slider / small spacing.
00:52:493 (1,2,3) - ^
01:06:302 (4) - New combo / Ctrl + H follow the spacing.
02:20:826 (2,3,4) - Jump is fine.. But make them easily?
02:27:731 (6) - New combo?
Good job
Kd star x1
Good luck.
Gotta mod this 神 song.
Btw~
Color Help:
Red -> You must change it.
Blue -> Change it as well.
Black -> Suggestion only.
Let's go.
[Relaxing]
00:06:779 (4) - Hmm~ I guess the whistle should be here.
00:07:255 (1) - Remove the whistle.
00:45:350 (5) - Huh.. Remove finish here?
01:10:112 (1) - Finish here? sounds better.
01:13:921 (4) - ^
02:09:160 (5) - New combo?
02:11:064 (1) - Remove New combo.
02:12:969 (5) - New combo.
02:15:350 (1) - Remove New combo.
02:24:874 (2) - Don't suggest 1/2 here. I suggestion : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105283
[Dis]
00:14:874 (3) - Umm~ I guess here should be new combo?
02:06:302 (2) - I don't suggest off volume here><
02:16:779 (4) - New combo?
02:17:731 (2,1,2) - Really, I think it has a bit too hard to read for new players.. Maybe change it as well.
Overall that's nice
[Insane]
00:48:683 (1,2,3) -
Don't jump here?... Just use slider / small spacing.00:52:493 (1,2,3) - ^
01:06:302 (4) - New combo / Ctrl + H follow the spacing.
02:20:826 (2,3,4) - Jump is fine.. But make them easily?
02:27:731 (6) - New combo?
Good job
Kd star x1
Good luck.
Topic Starter
Thanks for moddingKanaRin wrote:
[Relaxing]
00:06:779 (4) - Hmm~ I guess the whistle should be here. Add a clap instead of.
00:07:255 (1) - Remove the whistle. Fixed
00:45:350 (5) - Huh.. Remove finish here? Fixed
01:10:112 (1) - Finish here? sounds better. X.
01:13:921 (4) - ^ Fixed
02:09:160 (5) - New combo? X
02:11:064 (1) - Remove New combo. X
02:12:969 (5) - New combo. X
02:15:350 (1) - Remove New combo. X
02:24:874 (2) - Don't suggest 1/2 here. I suggestion : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105283 X.
[Insane]
00:48:683 (1,2,3) -
00:52:493 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:06:302 (4) - New combo / Ctrl + H follow the spacing.Fixed
02:20:826 (2,3,4) - Jump is fine.. But make them easily ^
02:27:731 (6) - New combo? ^
Don't forget scorebarki, kidanger, and kidanger2.png
Also strange that you do the sliderfollowcircle but no slider ball.
Also strange that you do the sliderfollowcircle but no slider ball.
Hi! Here's my mod ~
General;
- Disable letterboxing on all diffs.
Skin;
- You're missing the spinner-spin, spinner-osu and spinner-clear
- When having Shader Effects the spinner is blinding >w< That's like wow, amazing at least for me ~
- It would be great if you made hit100 and hit100k a little more different, the same with hit300, hit300g and hit300k
- I agree with Garven, is a little weird that you don't have a custom slider ball ;~;
- You're missing scorebar-ki, scorebar-kidanger and scorebar-kidanger2
Relaxing;
- 00:33:921 >> Remove whistle and add finish ?
- 00:51:540 >> Move the red slider point to the center ?
- 00:59:874 >> Add a note ?
- 02:48:683 >> Shorten to 02:49:160 with finish at end
- 03:06:297 >> Move red slider point to the center ?
Dis;
- 00:01:541 >> Remove whistle and add finish at start
- 00:02:255 >> Add a note ?
- 00:28:445 >> ^
- 01:19:636 >> Start the new combo here instead ?
- 03:01:297 >> Start (3) here but end at the same place ?
- 03:18:435 >> Add a note ?
KPY;
- Good
* Star ~
General;
- Disable letterboxing on all diffs.
Skin;
- You're missing the spinner-spin, spinner-osu and spinner-clear
- When having Shader Effects the spinner is blinding >w< That's like wow, amazing at least for me ~
- It would be great if you made hit100 and hit100k a little more different, the same with hit300, hit300g and hit300k
- I agree with Garven, is a little weird that you don't have a custom slider ball ;~;
- You're missing scorebar-ki, scorebar-kidanger and scorebar-kidanger2
Relaxing;
- 00:33:921 >> Remove whistle and add finish ?
- 00:51:540 >> Move the red slider point to the center ?
- 00:59:874 >> Add a note ?
- 02:48:683 >> Shorten to 02:49:160 with finish at end
- 03:06:297 >> Move red slider point to the center ?
Dis;
- 00:01:541 >> Remove whistle and add finish at start
- 00:02:255 >> Add a note ?
- 00:28:445 >> ^
- 01:19:636 >> Start the new combo here instead ?
- 03:01:297 >> Start (3) here but end at the same place ?
- 03:18:435 >> Add a note ?
KPY;
- Good
* Star ~
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding.lovhin456 wrote:
Hi! Here's my mod ~
General;
- Disable letterboxing on all diffs. Fixed
Relaxing;
- 00:33:921 >> Remove whistle and add finish ? X.I think a whistle is more appropriate
- 00:51:540 >> Move the red slider point to the center ? Fixed
- 00:59:874 >> Add a note ? X.I'm against put 1/2 notes in a easy difficulty,so no.
- 02:48:683 >> Shorten to 02:49:160 with finish at end Fixed in other ways
- 03:06:297 >> Move red slider point to the center ? Fixed
KPY;
- Good Thanks
* Star ~
I can't find much here :<
[Relaxing]
I really like the clapping in the background, so why not putting them, for example:
00:01:541 (1) - end of slider
00:09:160 (3) - repeat
etc...?
Some hitsound should occur on sliderticks, but since it's impossible to use more than 3 slidertick hitsounds (including default), I suggest avoid long sliders during those parts, for example:
00:13:445 (1) - clap
00:52:107 - clap on first slidertick
01:06:779 (3) - ^
01:11:540 (2) - finish
etc...
01:13:921 (1) - remove finish?
01:14:398 (2) - remove whistle?
01:17:255 (4) - ok this is unexpected for the easiest diff, use a longer slider (with/without repeats) instead
02:24:874 (2) - ^
[Dis]
Maybe use some more claps/finishes for the first 30 seconds?
00:48:207 (4) - clap at start?
00:57:731 (2) - ^ instead?
01:44:398 (1) - delay this spinner a bit to place a note here with finish hitsound? And I suggest end spinner at 01:47:255
03:19:717 (1,2) - ? doesn't sound fit
03:21:385 (3) - actually...try put it here 03:21:504...
03:24:452 (3) - slow this slider down
[KPY]
How you placed rhythm in this diff caused some hitsound patterns to be intermittent, e.g. the claps.
Other than that... very good diff
=================================
One thing though: if you have not consulted pro timing help, I suggest so, as the last part is very tricky.
Star!
[Relaxing]
I really like the clapping in the background, so why not putting them, for example:
00:01:541 (1) - end of slider
00:09:160 (3) - repeat
etc...?
Some hitsound should occur on sliderticks, but since it's impossible to use more than 3 slidertick hitsounds (including default), I suggest avoid long sliders during those parts, for example:
00:13:445 (1) - clap
00:52:107 - clap on first slidertick
01:06:779 (3) - ^
01:11:540 (2) - finish
etc...
01:13:921 (1) - remove finish?
01:14:398 (2) - remove whistle?
01:17:255 (4) - ok this is unexpected for the easiest diff, use a longer slider (with/without repeats) instead
02:24:874 (2) - ^
[Dis]
Maybe use some more claps/finishes for the first 30 seconds?
00:48:207 (4) - clap at start?
00:57:731 (2) - ^ instead?
01:44:398 (1) - delay this spinner a bit to place a note here with finish hitsound? And I suggest end spinner at 01:47:255
03:19:717 (1,2) - ? doesn't sound fit
03:21:385 (3) - actually...try put it here 03:21:504...
03:24:452 (3) - slow this slider down
[KPY]
How you placed rhythm in this diff caused some hitsound patterns to be intermittent, e.g. the claps.
Other than that... very good diff
=================================
One thing though: if you have not consulted pro timing help, I suggest so, as the last part is very tricky.
Star!
[General]:
SB好阿!!有點想吐槽的就是日文裡不用問號的吧?か就是問號了吧?
[Relaxing]:
我好喜歡的你低難度阿
[Dis]:
00:31:064 (T) - 綠線插在note前面
00:34:398 (T) - ^
00:58:683 (4) - 加whistle在頭?
02:06:302 (T) - 綠線插在note前面
02:07:255 (T) - ^
02:52:969 (T) - ^
03:09:869 (1) - new combo?
[KPY]:
03:08:678 (5) - 折返?
Top diff:Relaxing
KPY也很不錯:D
star!
SB好阿!!有點想吐槽的就是日文裡不用問號的吧?か就是問號了吧?
[Relaxing]:
我好喜歡的你低難度阿
[Dis]:
00:31:064 (T) - 綠線插在note前面
00:34:398 (T) - ^
00:58:683 (4) - 加whistle在頭?
02:06:302 (T) - 綠線插在note前面
02:07:255 (T) - ^
02:52:969 (T) - ^
03:09:869 (1) - new combo?
[KPY]:
03:08:678 (5) - 折返?
Top diff:Relaxing
KPY也很不錯:D
star!
Wotamin <3
Love this map and song!
Love this map and song!
[General]
后面timing没去确认，懒。前面应该没什么问题。
soft-hitclap有点弱。。。加点音量？
KPY的tag有个莫名其妙的空格。。。以及lead-in的1996变2000这一点我还是剥夺了后面可能的骗kud帝吧……
[Relaxing]
00:07:255 (1) - 头加个whistle?
00:34:874 (1,2) - 后移1/2？（2可以减少1/2）因为后面的节奏很四平八稳，只有这里开始时踩红线似乎不伦不类。3也可以考虑换个音或者后面采取近似的布置。
01:08:204 - 有加音的感觉
01:17:255 (4) - 不建议。相对其他很多一拍两拍的空拍，这个太密了。而且这样去合vocal未免太仓促。。。
01:29:160 (4) - 不要clap
01:52:969 (1,2) - ……我建议这种很一样的音在最低难还是不要出花样了
02:43:445 (3) - 考虑结尾也给个finish吗（低音量一点）
[Dis]
00:35:826 (3) - 虽然是slider但是一个Normal会频繁出现vocal和鼓都没有的3/4还是会让我感觉吐血。后面不提。
01:18:683 (4,1) - 有点奇怪的spacing。从美观角度上这样放会不会好些？不过后面就有点不协调了。现在感觉是3的slider有点撞上1的样子，而后面又有点密所以不好看
01:39:636 (1,2,3,1) - 这里给我的感觉是123一直在向内绕，然后下个1应该可以继续这样绕，vocal起时，2走一个反方向向外面出去。例子：
03:01:541 (3,4) - 从感觉上，3应该是折返slider，4就相应晚一拍起，因为现在4打在空处，反而是几下折返音比较充实
[KPY]
00:36:779 (6) - 虽然看到clap但是觉得这个音位置真心疼（和前面的00:35:112 (2,3) 协调很差）。建议把00:37:255 (1) 挪前1/2或许好一些？然后6的whistle消掉
00:53:445 (6,1) - 这一段的whislte频率，我觉得是该在6尾和1头补
01:03:683 - ……只感叹一句这歌难得一个给你放连打的地方
01:26:660 - 有加音的感觉，不过目前的排版好像确实不好加
01:36:183 & 01:36:302 - 不加上这个三连多么亏待自己，尤其后面马上会有一个1拍slider把节奏松下来，还要等什么
01:58:564 (10) - 觉得这音不该有
SB真不错。
后面timing没去确认，懒。前面应该没什么问题。
soft-hitclap有点弱。。。加点音量？
KPY的tag有个莫名其妙的空格。。。以及lead-in的1996变2000这一点我还是剥夺了后面可能的骗kud帝吧……
[Relaxing]
00:07:255 (1) - 头加个whistle?
00:34:874 (1,2) - 后移1/2？（2可以减少1/2）因为后面的节奏很四平八稳，只有这里开始时踩红线似乎不伦不类。3也可以考虑换个音或者后面采取近似的布置。
01:08:204 - 有加音的感觉
01:17:255 (4) - 不建议。相对其他很多一拍两拍的空拍，这个太密了。而且这样去合vocal未免太仓促。。。
01:29:160 (4) - 不要clap
01:52:969 (1,2) - ……我建议这种很一样的音在最低难还是不要出花样了
02:43:445 (3) - 考虑结尾也给个finish吗（低音量一点）
[Dis]
00:35:826 (3) - 虽然是slider但是一个Normal会频繁出现vocal和鼓都没有的3/4还是会让我感觉吐血。后面不提。
01:18:683 (4,1) - 有点奇怪的spacing。从美观角度上这样放会不会好些？不过后面就有点不协调了。现在感觉是3的slider有点撞上1的样子，而后面又有点密所以不好看
01:39:636 (1,2,3,1) - 这里给我的感觉是123一直在向内绕，然后下个1应该可以继续这样绕，vocal起时，2走一个反方向向外面出去。例子：
03:01:541 (3,4) - 从感觉上，3应该是折返slider，4就相应晚一拍起，因为现在4打在空处，反而是几下折返音比较充实
[KPY]
00:36:779 (6) - 虽然看到clap但是觉得这个音位置真心疼（和前面的00:35:112 (2,3) 协调很差）。建议把00:37:255 (1) 挪前1/2或许好一些？然后6的whistle消掉
00:53:445 (6,1) - 这一段的whislte频率，我觉得是该在6尾和1头补
01:03:683 - ……只感叹一句这歌难得一个给你放连打的地方
01:26:660 - 有加音的感觉，不过目前的排版好像确实不好加
01:36:183 & 01:36:302 - 不加上这个三连多么亏待自己，尤其后面马上会有一个1拍slider把节奏松下来，还要等什么
01:58:564 (10) - 觉得这音不该有
SB真不错。
你好~
timing for the end:
timing for the end:
- offset 197721 /// BPM 125,900
offset 199170 /// BPM 105,500
offset 201694 /// BPM 123,000
offset 204452 /// BPM 116,000
Topic Starter
謝~NatsumeRin wrote:
[General]
后面timing没去确认，懒。前面应该没什么问题。 ...
soft-hitclap有点弱。。。加点音量？X,這樣的歌其實就好了..
KPY的tag有个莫名其妙的空格。。。以及lead-in的1996变2000这一点我还是剥夺了后面可能的骗kud帝吧…… Fixed
[Relaxing]
00:07:255 (1) - 头加个whistle? Fixed in other way.
00:34:874 (1,2) - 后移1/2？（2可以减少1/2）因为后面的节奏很四平八稳，只有这里开始时踩红线似乎不伦不类。3也可以考虑换个音或者后面采取近似的布置。Fixed in other way
01:08:204 - 有加音的感觉 X,Easy裏還 是不要加1/2..我還是繼續打拍子好了..
01:17:255 (4) - 不建议。相对其他很多一拍两拍的空拍，这个太密了。而且这样去合vocal未免太仓促。。。 Fixed
01:29:160 (4) - 不要clap Fixed
01:52:969 (1,2) - ……我建议这种很一样的音在最低难还是不要出花样了 Fixed
02:43:445 (3) - 考虑结尾也给个finish吗（低音量一点）Fixed
[KPY]
00:36:779 (6) - 虽然看到clap但是觉得这个音位置真心疼（和前面的00:35:112 (2,3) 协调很差）。建议把00:37:255 (1) 挪前1/2或许好一些？然后6的whistle消掉 X.這裏踩紅線停更奇怪.
00:53:445 (6,1) - 这一段的whislte频率，我觉得是该在6尾和1头补 Fixed
01:03:683 - ……只感叹一句这歌难得一个给你放连打的地方 Fixed
01:26:660 - 有加音的感觉，不过目前的排版好像确实不好加 所以還是不加了..
01:36:183 & 01:36:302 - 不加上这个三连多么亏待自己，尤其后面马上会有一个1拍slider把节奏松下来，还要等什么 Fixed
01:58:564 (10) - 觉得这音不该有 Fixed
nicely constructed and deserve a star
來了~
Relaxing
01:51:540 (6) - 這條slider節奏有點不符耶..試試(http://up.ppy.sh/files/332.jpg)?
沒了,好啊.
Dis
01:05:350 (3) - 拉得再美一些?
01:23:445 (6) - New Combo and
01:24:398 (1) - Remove it?
03:00:112 (x) - 試試(http://up.ppy.sh/files/344.jpg)?
03:08:683 (2) - 向右移一個1/2再在這裡加一個note?
沒了
KPY
00:06:064 (5) - 不如(http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/108095)這樣吧,我覺得不太舒服耶.
00:23:445 (3,4) - 或許在3,4之間加個note or
00:24:160 (5,1) - 在5,1之間加個note?
01:09:636 (x) - 這個(http://up.ppy.sh/files/45-2.jpg)如何...?
01:36:779 (7) - New combo?
01:43:921 (x) - 試試(http://up.ppy.sh/files/48-2.jpg)?
01:44:398 (8) - 如有^,new combo.?
01:51:540 (1,2,3,4,5) - del了(4)吧...
沒有了
很好x999
star~lol
Relaxing
01:51:540 (6) - 這條slider節奏有點不符耶..試試(http://up.ppy.sh/files/332.jpg)?
沒了,好啊.
Dis
01:05:350 (3) - 拉得再美一些?
01:23:445 (6) - New Combo and
01:24:398 (1) - Remove it?
03:00:112 (x) - 試試(http://up.ppy.sh/files/344.jpg)?
03:08:683 (2) - 向右移一個1/2再在這裡加一個note?
沒了
KPY
00:06:064 (5) - 不如(http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/108095)這樣吧,我覺得不太舒服耶.
00:23:445 (3,4) - 或許在3,4之間加個note or
00:24:160 (5,1) - 在5,1之間加個note?
01:09:636 (x) - 這個(http://up.ppy.sh/files/45-2.jpg)如何...?
01:36:779 (7) - New combo?
01:43:921 (x) - 試試(http://up.ppy.sh/files/48-2.jpg)?
01:44:398 (8) - 如有^,new combo.?
01:51:540 (1,2,3,4,5) - del了(4)吧...
沒有了
很好x999
star~lol
Topic Starter
Thanks for moddinglkp wrote:
Relaxing
01:51:540 (6) - 這條slider節奏有點不符耶..試試(http://up.ppy.sh/files/332.jpg)? Fixed
KPY
00:06:064 (5) - 不如(http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/108095)這樣吧,我覺得不太舒服耶. Fixed
00:23:445 (3,4) - 或許在3,4之間加個note or Fixed
00:24:160 (5,1) - 在5,1之間加個note?
01:09:636 (x) - 這個(http://up.ppy.sh/files/45-2.jpg)如何...?X,現在的還好..
01:36:779 (7) - New combo? Fixed
01:43:921 (x) - 試試(http://up.ppy.sh/files/48-2.jpg)? X.
01:44:398 (8) - 如有^,new combo.?
01:51:540 (1,2,3,4,5) - del了(4)吧... X,再跟音樂..