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Wotamin - letter song

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kanpakyin

lkp wrote:

Relaxing
01:51:540 (6) - 這條slider節奏有點不符耶..試試(http://up.ppy.sh/files/332.jpg)? Fixed

KPY
00:06:064 (5) - 不如(http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/108095)這樣吧,我覺得不太舒服耶. Fixed
00:23:445 (3,4) - 或許在3,4之間加個note or Fixed
00:24:160 (5,1) - 在5,1之間加個note?
01:09:636 (x) - 這個(http://up.ppy.sh/files/45-2.jpg)如何...?X,現在的還好..
01:36:779 (7) - New combo? Fixed
01:43:921 (x) - 試試(http://up.ppy.sh/files/48-2.jpg)? X.
01:44:398 (8) - 如有^,new combo.?
01:51:540 (1,2,3,4,5) - del了(4)吧... X,再跟音樂..
Thanks for modding
Lesjuh
KPY
Remove the last 5 timing sections and resnap all notes. The only beat you have to move is the pink (1). Hold shift and move it just a little bit to the right on the timeline. It will look something like this.



That's the best way to it. There will be only a single unsnapped note in your map now, ignore that. Do the same thing with the oher difficulties.

03:21:660 (1) - Rearrange this spinner so it's on 2 white ticks.

Dis
Same thing with the timing sections at the end.
I suggest ending this difficulty with a spinner too (like in KPY) so you don't have timing issues.

Relaxing
Same thing with the timing sections at the end.
This difficulty has smaller circles than Dis. Make the circle sizes the same.

That's it!
Topic Starter
kanpakyin
>Lesjuh
All fixed!

Edit:
Changelog:
  1. Remove the last five Timing point.
  2. +1 Circle size on Dis diff!
  3. Upload Dis diff!It should be the lastest version!
Disoy
Krisom
God, this is a lovely skin/mapset!

General-
· To match the skin and prevent skin-conflicting issues, I'd suggest you to skin a spinner-spin, spinner-osu and spinner-clear set of elements with the same hue as the rest of the map.
· Also, please try to make the normal hit300 and hit100 different from the hit300k, hit300g and ht100k by adding another element in the skin. May it be a "!", some kind of light, or anything. This is not mandatory but it would really help.
· http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm9297817 says "「letter song」", we cannot reproduce the 「」s for now, but you'll have to resubmit as "letter song" with a lowercase "L" just to be sure. Don't forget to fullsubmit and avoid creating a duplicate!
· You should mention somewhere in the OP that you're using MoonFragrance's defaul lighthing.

KPY-
01:17:969 (2,3) - I thought this one was a tad too far away and didn't flow that great. Maybe you should consider something that's just a tad closer. That'd make it more safe.
01:53:445 (2,3,4,5) - I also found this to be a tad far away. It'd be safer if (3,4,5) wasn't a triple (since it catches you more off-guard) or of it was a tad closer. If you'd like to try smething new, I'd say put (3,4,5) near (1)'s end and reshape (5) to make it look like a rotated (1). It gives a lovely astethical effect.
That's all! KPY, this is an incredibly awesome diff!!

Dis-
01:19:160 (1,2) - May I suggest you to switch the new combo to (2) to match the music better?
Lovely!

Relaxing-
Found nothing really wrong. All looks clean and shiny.

All just minor stuff!
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

Krisom wrote:

God, this is a lovely skin/mapset! ^-^

General-
· To match the skin and prevent skin-conflicting issues, I'd suggest you to skin a spinner-spin, spinner-osu and spinner-clear set of elements with the same hue as the rest of the map. Leave to skin maker.
· Also, please try to make the normal hit300 and hit100 different from the hit300k, hit300g and ht100k by adding another element in the skin. May it be a "!", some kind of light, or anything. This is not mandatory but it would really help. ^ Same.
· http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm9297817 says "「letter song」", we cannot reproduce the 「」s for now, but you'll have to resubmit as "letter song" with a lowercase "L" just to be sure. Don't forget to fullsubmit and avoid creating a duplicate! Fixed
· You should mention somewhere in the OP that you're using MoonFragrance's defaul lighthing. Changed another one which it is someone make it for me.

KPY-
01:17:969 (2,3) - I thought this one was a tad too far away and didn't flow that great. Maybe you should consider something that's just a tad closer. That'd make it more safe. Sure.Fixed
01:53:445 (2,3,4,5) - I also found this to be a tad far away. It'd be safer if (3,4,5) wasn't a triple (since it catches you more off-guard) or of it was a tad closer. If you'd like to try smething new, I'd say put (3,4,5) near (1)'s end and reshape (5) to make it look like a rotated (1). It gives a lovely astethical effect. Fixed!

Dis-
01:19:160 (1,2) - May I suggest you to switch the new combo to (2) to match the music better? Leave to Disoy and let him decide to change or not. Have already asked Disoy and he allowed.So fixed!
Lovely!
Thanks for modding!
Colin Hou
this BG is for 「夕日坂」imo, well whatever
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

Colin Hou wrote:

this BG is for 「夕日坂」imo, well whatever
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b_eC5V11 ... re=related

Hum,I just follow this :<
Well,this song have a relationship with 「夕日坂」so I guess that's fine

Edit:
Skin upoloaded.
Kotone
yes

Download: skin.rar
Krisom
Lovely work with the new skin elements.
Rechecked, replayed, reloved~!
Bubbled!
Hyguys
Bubbled? Fish , i am late. But if you are acepting mod after bubbled , you can do my mod , if not , ignore it.
Relaxing
SPOILER
:arrow: Hitsounds!
...Are excelent. You really got some hitsounds skills~ I can't hear the hitsounds , So , can you just louder the volume a bit?
00:06:779 (4) - Whistle

:arrow: Difficulty!
...Is fine. I just feel like adding +1 to OD.

:arrow: Sliders!
...Are cool. Let's mod them
00:07:255 (1) - I don't like how this is laarrggee. What about this :

00:09:160 (3) - ^.
00:25:826 (2) - Move 1,80 Grids down? like this:

00:42:969 (2) - Can you uncurve this one a bit? ;I
00:46:302 (1) - Second control point* , 2 grid to right and 4ª control point 2 to left
01:00:112 (6) - Ctrl + H?
01:04:398 (1) - 4ª Control point , 1 grid up
01:14:874 (3) - Reverse arrow control point , 2 grids up
*Control point is this :


:arrow: New Combo!
...Are perfect. I can't find any issue.

:arrow: Others!
00:51:540 (3) - This reverse arrow is kinda offscreen

:arrow: Rating!
Hm...
Hitsound : 10
Difficulty : 10
Sliders : 8
New Combo : 10
Others : 10
Total : 10 (or 9.6)

Dis
SPOILER
:arrow: Hitsounds!
...Are excelent. You really got some hitsounds skills~

:arrow: Difficulty!
...Is perfect. I can't find any issue

:arrow: Sliders!
...Are fine. There are some fail ones but gogogog
00:08:207 (4) - Curve a bit more.
00:35:826 (3) - What's up with the reverse? I guess it's fine
00:52:017 (5) - Uncurve :3

:arrow: New Combo!
...Are cool. Just some too short D;
00:01:541 (1) ~to~ 00:12:969 (1) - New combo party.

:arrow: Others!
00:01:541 (1) ~to~ 00:12:969 (1) - Boring as hell.


:arrow: Rating!
Hm...
Hitsound : 10
Difficulty : 10
Sliders : 9
New Combo : 9
Others : 9
Total : 9 (or 9.4)

Kpy What the fuck is up with this name
SPOILER
Sorry but i don't mod higher diffs D: but nice diff :3

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Topic Starter
kanpakyin
>Hyguys
Sorry ,Seems all problem are minor,so I won't change it,thanks for checking though.
Garven
[Relaxing]
00:34:636 (1) - Kinda soon after a semi-short spinner for such a slow-paced difficulty.
01:17:731 (5) - I really don't recommend a slider like this for a difficulty of this caliber. It's gonna be confusing to the new players as to when it's going to end.
01:36:064 (1) - Kind of a combination of both comments before, heh
01:46:302 (1,2) - It'd be cool if you could line these up

02:24:874 (2) - Same as earlier
03:03:683 (3) - ^
03:19:755 (1) - This... doesn't feel right for this kind of difficulty. It's very fast compared to the slowing pace of the music and feels more like filler than anything else. Also weird that you end this 1/2 earlier than the other two difficulties.

[Dis]
01:35:350 (1) - To be honest, I was kind of surprised that a spinner was placed here. There's not much in the music to signify why it starts where it is starting; it'd be better to start it earlier if you want to keep it in here or remove it to give the map at least one break, which I would really recommend since it's a 3:00 difficulty.

Beautiful song/skin/map set. Good job, guys!
Feel free to apply any of the mods Hy-Guy suggested too.
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

Hyguys wrote:

Relaxing
SPOILER
:arrow: Hitsounds!
...Are excelent. You really got some hitsounds skills~ I can't hear the hitsounds , So , can you just louder the volume a bit?
00:06:779 (4) - Whistle Fixed!

:arrow: Difficulty!
...Is fine. I just feel like adding +1 to OD. X,OD +1 is much difficult for a easy diff.

:arrow: Sliders!
...Are cool. Let's mod them
00:07:255 (1) - I don't like how this is laarrggee. What about this :

00:09:160 (3) - ^. Both not.
00:25:826 (2) - Move 1,80 Grids down? like this:
lol,I was mapping this without grid.
00:42:969 (2) - Can you uncurve this one a bit? ;I Seems fine now.
00:46:302 (1) - Second control point* , 2 grid to right and 4ª control point 2 to left X.
01:00:112 (6) - Ctrl + H? X,what do you think?It will cause a spacing problem if I do it.
01:04:398 (1) - 4ª Control point , 1 grid up X
01:14:874 (3) - Reverse arrow control point , 2 grids up Fixed!
*Control point is this :


:arrow: New Combo!
...Are perfect. I can't find any issue.

:arrow: Others!
00:51:540 (3) - This reverse arrow is kinda offscreen
Not really
[spoilerbox]

Garven wrote:

[Relaxing]
00:34:636 (1) - Kinda soon after a semi-short spinner for such a slow-paced difficulty. lol really?I just follow the vocal.
01:17:731 (5) - I really don't recommend a slider like this for a difficulty of this caliber. It's gonna be confusing to the new players as to when it's going to end. Fixed!
01:36:064 (1) - Kind of a combination of both comments before, heh Fixed!
01:46:302 (1,2) - It'd be cool if you could line these up Fixed! Super Nazi desu lol

02:24:874 (2) - Same as earlier Fixed!
03:03:683 (3) - ^ Fixed!I make a 3-3 pattern,It should be fine now.
03:19:755 (1) - This... doesn't feel right for this kind of difficulty. It's very fast compared to the slowing pace of the music and feels more like filler than anything else. Also weird that you end this 1/2 earlier than the other two difficulties. How about I move this spinner to 03:19:636?

[Dis]
01:35:350 (1) - To be honest, I was kind of surprised that a spinner was placed here. There's not much in the music to signify why it starts where it is starting; it'd be better to start it earlier if you want to keep it in here or remove it to give the map at least one break, which I would really recommend since it's a 3:00 difficulty. Remove this spinner and add a note at 01:36:779- to fit the music!
Thanks for modding!
Garven
Did some minor IRC modding concerning the spinner in the Easy and a couple of consistency changes.

Since everything changed was fairly minor, I'm thinking this is good to go!

Ranked!
Topic Starter
kanpakyin
Thanks Garven!
Also IRC log if need.

Chat Log
hank19:19 *Garven is editing (Wotamin - letter song)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/31853]
19:20 <kanpakyin> : 0.0/
19:20 <Garven> : So about that note after the spinner in Relaxing...
19:20 <Garven> : I mostly worry since this is such a laid-back difficulty
19:20 <kanpakyin> : 00:34:636 - You mean this one?
19:20 <Garven> : The note after a kind-of short spinner is pretty soon
19:20 <Garven> : I generally imagine new players spinning wildly trying to get bonus points
19:21 <Garven> : And when the spinner is done, they have no idea where the hell their cursor went, haha
19:21 <kanpakyin> : lol
19:21 <Garven> : Takes them awhile to recover and figure out where they need to aim to get the next note
19:21 <Garven> : Anyway, that's my view on it
19:21 <Garven> : You still don't have to change it, but I'd prefer it if you did.
19:22 <Garven> : It'd be one less frustrating thing about the map for new players
19:22 <kanpakyin> : 00:34:636 - so how to put yhis note?I have no idea T_T since I just follow the music
19:22 <Garven> : Honestly, mapping through the spinner might be the only viable solution
19:22 <Garven> : There's no good place to end the spinner otherwise
19:23 <kanpakyin> : So how about remoc this? 00:34:636(1) -
19:23 <kanpakyin> : *remove
19:24 <Garven> : That could work too, but it feels kind of empty compared to how you mapped earlier
19:25 <kanpakyin> : It so hard to change it since the vocal is on the red tick QAQ
19:25 <Garven> : Yeah. It's kind of a tough spot.
19:26 <Garven> : And I guess you're dead-set on having that spinner there, right?
19:26 <kanpakyin> : hum..
19:26 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/3m9l
19:26 <Garven> : Even something like this would fit pretty well and keep the rhythm you use with the percussion
19:27 <kanpakyin> : so I guess remove that spinner is the best way,right? =w=
19:28 <Garven> : It's the only reasonable thing that I can see without compromising your rhythm.
19:28 <Garven> : Ack, i'll brb
19:30 <kanpakyin> : Ok,done that one.
19:34 <kanpakyin> : And upload,go to shower btw,AFK awhile >~<
19:42 <Garven> : You know, after your fix on the spinner at the end... I was wondering if you'd ponder this proposal: Make the
19:42 <Garven> : spinner rhythm like this on all three difficulties? http://puu.sh/3mac
19:43 <Garven> : It feels like it follows the emphasis parts of the musical phrases instead of just trying to go when the phrase
19:43 <Garven> : begins.
19:52 <Garven> : And in relaxing: 01:33:921 (1) - Extend this to 01:35:826 - ?
19:52 <Garven> : 03:06:302 (5) - New combo
20:00 <Garven> : Anyway, let me know what you think of these suggestions when you return
20:00 <Garven> : Everything else is looking good
20:05 <kanpakyin> : k.All fixed
20:05 <kanpakyin> : and uploaded.
20:05 <Garven> : What did you apply?
20:05 <kanpakyin> : Done everything you mention..looks better now
20:06 <Garven> : In Dis: 03:19:636 (1) - This is starting a little early if you wanted to line them all up amongst all difficulties
20:07 <Garven> : But I guess they aren't ending the same anyway, so eh
20:08 <kanpakyin> : hum,Dis diff is same as Relaxing diff.The spinner is starting from 03:19:636 -
20:09 <Garven> : Oops, KPY is the one with a difference
20:09 <kanpakyin> : I forgot to change my diff :p I fix it now..
20:11 <Garven> : Alrighty, one last check then
20:29 <Garven> : Gratz. :D
20:29 <kanpakyin> : :D/
20:29 *kanpakyin save log
swish
congrats! :)
JoJo
SPOILER

Graz~ =w=
chikshun2003
a little request to use hongkooong's versionxdd
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eQZOmBleHtI

Besides, is there any idea of adding taiko diff.?
KanaRin
Gratz.
NatsumeRin
恭喜~
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