Third mod for this mapHardcore00:02:245 (5) - Remove whistle from start, add whistle(remove clap) to repeat and and remove whistle from end and add finish
00:03:198 (1) - remove finish, add clap
00:08:277 (2,3,4) -
Maybe a suggestion but maybe you should break these sliders into notes and make mini streams. I don't now actually the sliders may work as is. I suggest you space them to 1.2 snap. It plays more naturally.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/102509The hitsounds I suggest you tweak to them slightly.
00:08:277 (2) - The start of this would be whistle. Remove all finishes from this slider/note stream sequence. add a clap to the end.
00:08:912 (3,4) -
At this point I think the hitsounds can stay like this with the finishes. I think it compliments the previous hitsound rhythms that use finishes.
00:08:912 (3) - This. Move the finish to the end.The end will have both finish an clapEdit:
IRC mod text
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/102522http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/102524IRC screenshots
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/102519http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/102520Edit Changes.
00:20:658 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:20:817 - Remove the note here from my suggestion. And add one here 00:21:134 -
Hitsounds
00:20:658 (1) - clap if there isn't one already
00:20:975 (2) - clap + finish (helps recognize the beat)
00:21:134 (3) - finish
00:21:293 (4) - clap
00:21:610 (5) - clap whistle clap if it isn't already I think it was
00:22:245 (6) - only clap at the end if it isn't like that already
00:22:880 (7) - clap
How does that sound?
00:23:833 (3) - Add clap with the finish?
00:24:467 (5) - Add whistle to end?
00:25:102 (6) - Add whistle to end?
00:25:102 (6,1,2,3,4) - How about making this cleaner? Turn the 1.5 snap on and try to add some symmetry.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10253100:26:690 (4,5) - Also perhaps place note 5 according to 1.5 snap on the place where note 3 is. i'm not sure if it looks the best though. Also make sure the other notes in the combo are spaced to 1.5. Also for consistency maybe you should make 00:28:277 (1) - part of the previous combo with 1.5 snap with both the previous note and the note after it.
00:29:229 (3,4) - This isn't lined up. Fix this?
00:28:594 (1) - Replace finish with clap??
00:30:499 (6) - clap
00:32:007 - Move this inherited here 00:32:404 -
00:32:087 (2,3) - I think you should move these back half a beat.
If you do this then add a clap to the end of this 00:31:134 (1) - and make sure there is still a finish here 00:32:245 (3) - . It sounds better IMO.
00:33:356 (5,6) - Move 1/2th beat back.
00:33:516 (6) - Replace whistle with finish
If you move them back half a beat for both segments I think you might want to just fill the gap and make it a four note stream.
00:34:309 (8,9,10,11) - spacing is different.
00:35:896 (11) - Move half a beat back. Move the 0.75x inherited accordingly and adjust for the spacing difference. Also I think the start of that vocal fits the finish better.
00:40:023 (3,4,5,1) - Please make this straighter. It's sort of ugly as is.
00:42:166 - Move this inherited here 00:42:404 - I think you need the custom for that finish at the end.
Resume custom hitsounds here 00:42:721 -
00:42:563 (3) - add finish (should be the default soft hit finish)
00:43:515 (6) - add finish to end (should be default soft hit finish)
00:46:055 (12) - add finish to end (should be soft default hit finish)
00:44:785 (8,9,10,11,12) - Could you use a little more symmetry in this. I suggest you shift some of the notes around until the pattern looks more even.
00:47:642 (4,5) - If you unstack and space out you could probably make a nice looking shape if you tried. I don't think it matters if its stacked or not.
00:50:182 (5) - Maybe remove ending finish and add clap instead? Maybe want to do something else other than a repeat slider here.
Kiai should start here 00:51:134 -
52:404 Duplicate inherited. Delete one of them.
52:404 Use Normal Default like previous section. It sounds weird alternating between soft custom and Normal default at least for right hereI'll need to reevaluate this. Don't do it unless I'm sure.
00:51:610 - I think the beat really plays best if the slider was here and a note was added here 00:52:087 -
00:52:880 - Same pattern here. Slider first then a ending note.
If you do this add a clap to this 00:52:087 (5) - and 00:53:356 (5) - Eh nvrm your pattern will work.
01:02:563 (5) - I don't think this repeater fits the beat or anything very well
I think this would be the real beat.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10255201:03:833 (8) - This would be part of the next combo.
By making that part of the next combo. You have an opportunity to move these 01:04:150 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a little more to the right. If you move them more to the right then you can avoid any overlapping with the scoreboard.
01:04:150 (2) - Add whistle?
01:04:467 (4) - Add whistle?
01:04:944 (6) - Remove clap and add whistle?
01:05:102 (7) - Add whistle?
01:06:055 - Why isn't there a note here?
01:06:372 (1,2,3,4,5) - Turn grid snap off and make spacings equal
01:08:118 (8) - Add clap to start?
01:08:436 (9) - Add clap to end?
01:08:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Shouldn't this beat follow suit with all your other patterns? I think you should delete the note in the middle and respace as two triples. I think it plays much more intuitively and sounds better too.
01:12:404 (4,5) - Add claps to these
01:13:039 (6) - Whistle?
01:13:356 (7,8) - claps
01:13:991 (1) - Add clap to end instead
01:14:626 (2) - Add clap to end
01:18:742 - Move this inherited here 01:18:753 -
01:18:436 (6,1) - Spacing is a bit more than it should be. Make it closer to the proper spacing please.
01:19:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - If you could figure out how to center this I would be happy.
01:19:071 (1) - Remove finish, add whistle
01:19:388 (2) - Remove finish, add clap
01:19:706 (3) - Add clap
01:20:023 (4) - Remove finish, add whistle
01:20:340 (5) - Add clap
01:21:928 (1) - I suggest you move this half a beat back and add a repeat so it ends here 01:22:087 -
After you do that you can add a note here 01:22:245 -
01:26:690 (1,2,3,4,5) - Shouldn't 3,4,5 be a mirrored version of 1,2,3?
01:30:817 (7) - I suggest you turn this into a half note repeat slider. It would repeat here 01:30:975 -. If you do this you can place it more naturally at the end of the stream instead of weirdly to the side of it. Make sure you adjust the spacing of the note after it accordingly.
01:31:452 (1) - please these sounds so unnatural and contrary to the beat. Why not just follow the vocals into the break? If you do that make it part of the previous combo. I suggest adding a single note at the start and a 1/1 beat slider here 01:31:769 - If you want to keep it I'll need to think of a better way to make it sound.
01:44:150 (4) - Add clap?
01:45:420 (8) - I suggest you move this slider a full beat forward. Remove the old note 9. After that add a new note where it once started.
01:48:277 (2,3,4,5,6) - spacing
01:49:547 (6) - Highly suggest you reduce this by a full beat. that way you can add a normal normal note where it ended and you can change the combo on that note.
01:50:499 (2,3,4,5) - This is placed wrongly in the timeline.
Unsure actually. Only do it if it makes sense.Look at the timeline.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10256802:09:864 (3) - Normal default finishes don't do much for the beat. perhaps add soft custom clap to the end
02:10:658 - Maybe add note. I'm not sure.
02:10:817 (5) - Add clap
02:11:134 (6) - New combo?
02:13:991 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't like the gap before this. I really suggest that you break this into a half note stream, add a note here 02:13:833 - and reposition accordingly. Make the stream part of the previous combo. Or you could start the combo here 02:13:833 (1) -
02:20:817 (8) - Empty note. I suggest you remove this.
02:20:340 (5,6) - Remove finishes
02:20:975 (8) - Remove finish
02:23:515 (5,1) - Not lined up??
02:24:229 (6,7,8,1) - Why 1.0 after the stream if it was 0.8 before it? Not an issue with me just curious.
02:24:785 (8,1,2,3,4) - Make this spacing consistent. Make it all flat 1.0
02:28:912 (1) - Remove finish from start and add clap.