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So, that's what i found out and what i suggest you to do 'bout your map - i'll take another look later, but i guess that's what i have for you for now 
Add KIAI-time (both diffs):
03:25:071 - 03:41:492
03:45:353 - 04:03:597
04:06:439 - 04:21:353
04:24:036 - 04:28:221
Noboru:
Increase the approach rate by one (5 -> 6) - You don't have to do that, since it's my own opinion.
03:25:071 (5) + 03:25:228 (6) - Guess you could add a note here (at the end of the slider), just needs the right hitsounds
04:05:018 (5) - Good idea for that one, thumbs up
04:15:439 (5) - I like the idea of that slider, but i guess most people won't like 1/8-reversesliders in normal-diffs :/
Mikako:
Maybe decrease overall difficulty by one (7 -> 6) - Again this is my opinion, since i think it's better to keep the overall diff below the approach rate.
00:34:071 (3) - Enlarge this one to the next 1/4-step, looks/sounds better, give it a finish-sound (you could use the custom one of the kirby-skin for that, sounds nice for me)
00:36:124 (6) - Give this one a finish sound
00:39:124 (5) - Give that one a finish sound (+ maybe a whistle, but i'm not sure 'bout that)
00:41:018 (7) - Finish
00:41:650 (9) - Finish
00:45:439 (4) - Finish
00:46:703 (1) - Add finish to the whistle
00:49:229 (5) - ^
00:50:492 (8) - ^
00:51:124 (1) - Finish
00:53:650 (5) - ^
01:01:860 (3) - ^
01:05:018 (1) - ^
01:56:176 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - You'd better make a reverse-slider or a stacked stream out of it, but no pure circlestacking; most people don't like 1/8- and 1/6-mapping, so you should think 'bout removing/changing this if there are more people pointing at that.
Add KIAI-time (both diffs):
03:25:071 - 03:41:492
03:45:353 - 04:03:597
04:06:439 - 04:21:353
04:24:036 - 04:28:221
Noboru:
Increase the approach rate by one (5 -> 6) - You don't have to do that, since it's my own opinion.
03:25:071 (5) + 03:25:228 (6) - Guess you could add a note here (at the end of the slider), just needs the right hitsounds
04:05:018 (5) - Good idea for that one, thumbs up
04:15:439 (5) - I like the idea of that slider, but i guess most people won't like 1/8-reversesliders in normal-diffs :/
Mikako:
Maybe decrease overall difficulty by one (7 -> 6) - Again this is my opinion, since i think it's better to keep the overall diff below the approach rate.
00:34:071 (3) - Enlarge this one to the next 1/4-step, looks/sounds better, give it a finish-sound (you could use the custom one of the kirby-skin for that, sounds nice for me)
00:36:124 (6) - Give this one a finish sound
00:39:124 (5) - Give that one a finish sound (+ maybe a whistle, but i'm not sure 'bout that)
00:41:018 (7) - Finish
00:41:650 (9) - Finish
00:45:439 (4) - Finish
00:46:703 (1) - Add finish to the whistle
00:49:229 (5) - ^
00:50:492 (8) - ^
00:51:124 (1) - Finish
00:53:650 (5) - ^
01:01:860 (3) - ^
01:05:018 (1) - ^
01:56:176 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - You'd better make a reverse-slider or a stacked stream out of it, but no pure circlestacking; most people don't like 1/8- and 1/6-mapping, so you should think 'bout removing/changing this if there are more people pointing at that.
Topic Starter
thank youBroetchen8441 wrote:
So, that's what i found out and what i suggest you to do 'bout your map - i'll take another look later, but i guess that's what i have for you for now
Add KIAI-time (both diffs):
03:25:071 - 03:41:492
03:45:353 - 04:03:597
04:06:439 - 04:21:353
04:24:036 - 04:28:221sorry , I dont like KIAI at this map
KIAI-time 04:06:281 - 04:44:830 added
Noboru:
Increase the approach rate by one (5 -> 6) - You don't have to do that, since it's my own opinion.done
03:25:071 (5) + 03:25:228 (6) - Guess you could add a note here (at the end of the slider), just needs the right hitsounds done , soft hitsound with 80% volume
04:05:018 (5) - Good idea for that one, thumbs up
04:15:439 (5) - I like the idea of that slider, but i guess most people won't like 1/8-reversesliders in normal-diffs :/ maybe,I'll ask some friends about this
Mikako:
Maybe decrease overall difficulty by one (7 -> 6) - Again this is my opinion, since i think it's better to keep the overall diff below the approach rate. I think 7 is fine , sorry ><
00:34:071 (3) - Enlarge this one to the next 1/4-step, looks/sounds better, give it a finish-sound (you could use the custom one of the kirby-skin for that, sounds nice for me) Also,I think this is fine for me , sorry
00:36:124 (6) - Give this one a finish sound
00:39:124 (5) - Give that one a finish sound (+ maybe a whistle, but i'm not sure 'bout that)
00:41:018 (7) - Finish
00:41:650 (9) - Finish
00:45:439 (4) - Finish
00:46:703 (1) - Add finish to the whistle
00:49:229 (5) - ^
00:50:492 (8) - ^
00:51:124 (1) - Finish
00:53:650 (5) - ^
01:01:860 (3) - ^
01:05:018 (1) - ^
I tried to add finish to some notes when I was mapping this map and I think it sounds not good. sorry
01:56:176 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - You'd better make a reverse-slider or a stacked stream out of it, but no pure circlestacking; most people don't like 1/8- and 1/6-mapping, so you should think 'bout removing/changing this if there are more people pointing at that. ok, change to slider.
还是lyby靠谱吧 
加油咯
加油咯
[Noboru]
01:26:176 (3) - 部分被slider挡住 不美观0.0
03:25:860 (1) - spacing.
03:44:492 (4) - spacing.
03:44:492 (4) - 不要用这么多的回转 多用几个slider代替
[Mikako]
00:34:071 (3) - slider的结尾应该在蓝线上。。
00:39:124 (5) - spacing.
00:54:755 (x) - 这里加个note试试看
00:55:860 (4) - 声音太响
01:35:965 (9) - spacing!!
01:56:176 (3) - 切成2个sliders
03:10:071 (2,3,1,2,3) - 这里的左边和右边(绿色的3和蓝色的3)不对称 你可以按下ctrl+1 (左边的) 格子变小了再放notes
03:34:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这样放真的没问题么..会让人感觉节奏突然变得超快 一般来说1/8放放slider还可以
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音效很不错0.0
还是有待改进啦
star~☆
01:26:176 (3) - 部分被slider挡住 不美观0.0
03:25:860 (1) - spacing.
03:44:492 (4) - spacing.
03:44:492 (4) - 不要用这么多的回转 多用几个slider代替
[Mikako]
00:34:071 (3) - slider的结尾应该在蓝线上。。
00:39:124 (5) - spacing.
00:54:755 (x) - 这里加个note试试看
00:55:860 (4) - 声音太响
01:35:965 (9) - spacing!!
01:56:176 (3) - 切成2个sliders
03:10:071 (2,3,1,2,3) - 这里的左边和右边(绿色的3和蓝色的3)不对称 你可以按下ctrl+1 (左边的) 格子变小了再放notes
03:34:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这样放真的没问题么..会让人感觉节奏突然变得超快 一般来说1/8放放slider还可以
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音效很不错0.0
还是有待改进啦
star~☆
Topic Starter
谢谢Snowy Dream wrote:
[Noboru]
01:26:176 (3) - 部分被slider挡住 不美观0.0 稍微改了下 应该行了..
03:25:860 (1) - spacing.fixed
03:44:492 (4) - spacing.fixed
03:44:492 (4) - 不要用这么多的回转 多用几个slider代替 怕会太难了= =...有更多人建议的话 我就改下吧..
[Mikako]
00:34:071 (3) - slider的结尾应该在蓝线上。。 0 0. fixed
00:39:124 (5) - spacing. fixed
00:54:755 (x) - 这里加个note试试看 done
00:55:860 (4) - 声音太响 降低10%
01:35:965 (9) - spacing!! fixed
01:56:176 (3) - 切成2个sliders 不太想这样= =.. 先保留吧 如果有更多人建议这样再改吧...
03:10:071 (2,3,1,2,3) - 这里的左边和右边(绿色的3和蓝色的3)不对称 你可以按下ctrl+1 (左边的) 格子变小了再放notes fixed
03:34:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这样放真的没问题么..会让人感觉节奏突然变得超快 一般来说1/8放放slider还可以 应该还好吧.. 之前叫了几个朋友试打 没有特别指出这里, 如果有更多人指出 我就改下吧..
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音效很不错0.0
还是有待改进啦
star~☆
General
- More hitsounds?
[Noboru]
00:29:018 (3) - Move to center
01:11:965 (5) - New combo
01:17:018 (5) - ^
02:12:597 (7) - ^
02:40:386 (7) - ^
03:12:597 (4) - More symetrical with (2)
03:13:228 (5) - More symetrical with (3)
[Mikako]
01:11:334 (3) - More symetrical with (1)
01:23:965 (7) - New combo
02:05:018 (5) - ^
03:05:018 (7) - More symetrical with (5)
03:19:702 (8) - Maybe new combo?
04:25:229 (10) - ^
04:27:913 (3) - More symetrical with (1)
04:41:933 (6) - New combo
Star~
- More hitsounds?
[Noboru]
00:29:018 (3) - Move to center
01:11:965 (5) - New combo
01:17:018 (5) - ^
02:12:597 (7) - ^
02:40:386 (7) - ^
03:12:597 (4) - More symetrical with (2)
03:13:228 (5) - More symetrical with (3)
[Mikako]
01:11:334 (3) - More symetrical with (1)
01:23:965 (7) - New combo
02:05:018 (5) - ^
03:05:018 (7) - More symetrical with (5)
03:19:702 (8) - Maybe new combo?
04:25:229 (10) - ^
04:27:913 (3) - More symetrical with (1)
04:41:933 (6) - New combo
Star~
Topic Starter
thank youMoodyRPG wrote:
General
- More hitsounds?
[Noboru]
00:29:018 (3) - Move to center
01:11:965 (5) - New combo
01:17:018 (5) - ^
02:12:597 (7) - ^
02:40:386 (7) - ^
03:12:597 (4) - More symetrical with (2)
03:13:228 (5) - More symetrical with (3)
[Mikako]
01:11:334 (3) - More symetrical with (1)
01:23:965 (7) - New combo
02:05:018 (5) - ^
03:05:018 (7) - More symetrical with (5)
03:19:702 (8) - Maybe new combo?
04:25:229 (10) - ^
04:27:913 (3) - More symetrical with (1)
04:41:933 (6) - New combo
Star~
Hi there~
Really sorry for the late mod, I'm still not feeling so well right now...
But a promise is a promise, and here you go:
[Noboru]
There are some small discrepancies in spacing distances in this map, most probably because of the use of grid level 3 while mapping.
Not really a problem for me, but maybe for the others. I will only mention those that are more noticable.
1'13''229 - Start new combo here, to follow the combo rhythm pattern from before.
1'16''702 - Spacing issue between [2] and [3],[4],[5] stack. Small, but still noticable IMO.
2'01''860 - Spacing issue between [3] and [4].
2'06''913 - Spacing issue with [4].
2'51''439 - Spacing issue with [3].
3'13''860 - Maybe stack this with [2] at 3'11''334?
4'15''439 - It's kinda hard to know when the slider's going to end here. But you're following the drums, so I can't think of any other slider styles that can go with the drums.
4'22''386 - Spacing issue with [1].
4'39''191 - How about letting the spinner end at 4'44'830?
[Mikako]
0'34''939 - You need to move this at 0'35''018.
0'41''018 - Spacing issue with [7].
0'58''071 - Add a whistle to the beginning.
3'46''071 - I really think the beginning could use a finish.
4'03''755 - Start new combo here.
There is still some room for improvements here, but it's a good start, and I like the fact that the timing sections towards the end of the song really fit that part. So a star for you~
All the best!
Really sorry for the late mod, I'm still not feeling so well right now...
But a promise is a promise, and here you go:
[Noboru]
There are some small discrepancies in spacing distances in this map, most probably because of the use of grid level 3 while mapping.
Not really a problem for me, but maybe for the others. I will only mention those that are more noticable.
1'13''229 - Start new combo here, to follow the combo rhythm pattern from before.
1'16''702 - Spacing issue between [2] and [3],[4],[5] stack. Small, but still noticable IMO.
2'01''860 - Spacing issue between [3] and [4].
2'06''913 - Spacing issue with [4].
2'51''439 - Spacing issue with [3].
3'13''860 - Maybe stack this with [2] at 3'11''334?
4'15''439 - It's kinda hard to know when the slider's going to end here. But you're following the drums, so I can't think of any other slider styles that can go with the drums.
4'22''386 - Spacing issue with [1].
4'39''191 - How about letting the spinner end at 4'44'830?
[Mikako]
0'34''939 - You need to move this at 0'35''018.
0'41''018 - Spacing issue with [7].
0'58''071 - Add a whistle to the beginning.
3'46''071 - I really think the beginning could use a finish.
4'03''755 - Start new combo here.
There is still some room for improvements here, but it's a good start, and I like the fact that the timing sections towards the end of the song really fit that part. So a star for you~
All the best!
Topic Starter
thank youkurohacker wrote:
Hi there~
Really sorry for the late mod, I'm still not feeling so well right now... hope you will recover soon
But a promise is a promise, and here you go:
[Noboru]
There are some small discrepancies in spacing distances in this map, most probably because of the use of grid level 3 while mapping.
Not really a problem for me, but maybe for the others. I will only mention those that are more noticable.
1'13''229 - Start new combo here, to follow the combo rhythm pattern from before.done
1'16''702 - Spacing issue between [2] and [3],[4],[5] stack. Small, but still noticable IMO.fixed
2'01''860 - Spacing issue between [3] and [4].fixed
2'06''913 - Spacing issue with [4].fixed
2'51''439 - Spacing issue with [3].fixed
3'13''860 - Maybe stack this with [2] at 3'11''334?done
4'15''439 - It's kinda hard to know when the slider's going to end here. But you're following the drums, so I can't think of any other slider styles that can go with the drums.
4'22''386 - Spacing issue with [1].fixed
4'39''191 - How about letting the spinner end at 4'44'830? no,sorry > < drum end at 44''674,but I'll change this if more people suggest that
[Mikako]
0'34''939 - You need to move this at 0'35''018.done
0'41''018 - Spacing issue with [7].fixed
0'58''071 - Add a whistle to the beginning.done
3'46''071 - I really think the beginning could use a finish.done
4'03''755 - Start new combo here.done
There is still some room for improvements here, but it's a good start, and I like the fact that the timing sections towards the end of the song really fit that part. So a star for you~
All the best!
[Noboru]
00:21:438 (1,2,3,4) - 恩...有歪掉 但沒什麼大礙
01:29:334 (5,6) - 聽起來有些彆扭看看要怎麼改改吧
01:34:702 (4,5,6,7) - 這類的排列我不建議 不過並沒有違反
[Mikako]
00:21:439 (1,2,3,4) - 同[Noboru]有歪掉 但沒什麼大礙
00:31:229 (7) - 右一格grid(size 4)
00:38:808 (4) - ^
01:03:124 (6) - 右上各一格grid(size 4)
01:30:597 (7) - 右下各一格grid(size 4)
01:47:334 (2) - slider拉好一點[nazi]
02:49:860 (8) - 左一格grid(size3)
04:09:439 (6) - 右一格grid(size 4)
[Taiko]
SV = 1.4
聲音用50%~65%
01:56:176 (248) - 不可以這樣放 結尾放到01:57:439 -
直接把spin 放到02:35:965 - 吧 那兩個note就不要放了!! 這樣打起來會很奇怪的
03:08:176 (88) - 我認為這邊其實可以不用大的
03:14:650 (110) - 記得有一條規則!!"大note不可以放在1/4連拍上"你有很多都放到了...需要修改
04:05:018 (288) - 同01:56:176 (248) -
不要突然加速!!!
最後面kiai的部份可以用X1.2倍速
最後!!我討厭這該死的highhit阿(怒
它讓我好難聽懂你放的voice
star~
00:21:438 (1,2,3,4) - 恩...有歪掉 但沒什麼大礙
01:29:334 (5,6) - 聽起來有些彆扭看看要怎麼改改吧
01:34:702 (4,5,6,7) - 這類的排列我不建議 不過並沒有違反
[Mikako]
00:21:439 (1,2,3,4) - 同[Noboru]有歪掉 但沒什麼大礙
00:31:229 (7) - 右一格grid(size 4)
00:38:808 (4) - ^
01:03:124 (6) - 右上各一格grid(size 4)
01:30:597 (7) - 右下各一格grid(size 4)
01:47:334 (2) - slider拉好一點[nazi]
02:49:860 (8) - 左一格grid(size3)
04:09:439 (6) - 右一格grid(size 4)
[Taiko]
SV = 1.4
聲音用50%~65%
01:56:176 (248) - 不可以這樣放 結尾放到01:57:439 -
直接把spin 放到02:35:965 - 吧 那兩個note就不要放了!! 這樣打起來會很奇怪的
03:08:176 (88) - 我認為這邊其實可以不用大的
03:14:650 (110) - 記得有一條規則!!"大note不可以放在1/4連拍上"你有很多都放到了...需要修改
04:05:018 (288) - 同01:56:176 (248) -
不要突然加速!!!
最後面kiai的部份可以用X1.2倍速
最後!!我討厭這
它讓我好難聽懂你放的voice
star~
Topic Starter
谢谢spboxer3 wrote:
[Noboru]
00:21:438 (1,2,3,4) - 恩...有歪掉 但沒什麼大礙
01:29:334 (5,6) - 聽起來有些彆扭看看要怎麼改改吧 把5删掉了..
01:34:702 (4,5,6,7) - 這類的排列我不建議 不過並沒有違反
[Mikako]
00:21:439 (1,2,3,4) - 同[Noboru]有歪掉 但沒什麼大礙
00:31:229 (7) - 右一格grid(size 4) done
00:38:808 (4) - ^ done
01:03:124 (6) - 右上各一格grid(size 4) 往右移了2格...
01:30:597 (7) - 右下各一格grid(size 4) done
01:47:334 (2) - slider拉好一點[nazi] > <...不是很擅长弄slider的形状 , 而且为了上面不要出框太多 = =
02:49:860 (8) - 左一格grid(size3) done
04:09:439 (6) - 右一格grid(size 4) done
[Taiko]
SV = 1.4 done
聲音用50%~65% 50%
01:56:176 (248) - 不可以這樣放 結尾放到01:57:439 - 结尾是在那地方呀= = 不会是你调了SV 忘记自己改了这里了吧= =
直接把spin 放到02:35:965 - 吧 那兩個note就不要放了!! 這樣打起來會很奇怪的 done
03:08:176 (88) - 我認為這邊其實可以不用大的 好吧..
03:14:650 (110) - 記得有一條規則!!"大note不可以放在1/4連拍上"你有很多都放到了...需要修改 eh...这个不太清楚了= =不过我打taiko 有些图 也有这种情况.. 待会问问朋友确定下好了..
04:05:018 (288) - 同01:56:176 (248) - 同上><
不要突然加速!!!
最後面kiai的部份可以用X1.2倍速 好..
第１次做taiko难度> <
最後!!我討厭這該死的highhit阿(怒
它讓我好難聽懂你放的voice
star~
刚才把星之声看掉了，很感人的作品啊～
最好把滑条都重新拉一下，形状不太整齐啊。其他方面都还不错，参照SP3的mod吧～
另外最好设定下自定义颜色
no kd
最好把滑条都重新拉一下，形状不太整齐啊。其他方面都还不错，参照SP3的mod吧～
另外最好设定下自定义颜色
no kd
Topic Starter
好吧... 待会全部整理下...xykbear wrote:
刚才把星之声看掉了，很感人的作品啊～
最好把滑条都重新拉一下，形状不太整齐啊。其他方面都还不错，参照SP3的mod吧～
另外最好设定下自定义颜色
no kd
slider苦手啊 > <
谢谢
不好意思呢~由于太喜欢这首歌 所以我来吐下槽~
General:
2个难度SV都偏高
Noboru:
我猜想你想把这个难度弄成3星左右？但是也不应该就因为这样子就把难度参数调这么高...有点不伦不类了 而且加个HR之后打2个100就半血了..
建议3个参数都-2.
SV的话我觉得1.2 1.3就可以了
00:34:545 (4) - 蓝线太奇怪了 EASY难度 不要这样子吧
00:46:702 (1) - FINISH也许更好？
00:55:860 (3) - 不知道你感觉怎么样 但是在我这里这音量有点太大了 建议弄成30
01:02:808 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里特别适合做一个音量变化 你的2是音量25 那么3可以音量35 4音量45 然后在5这里减低到30音量 6开头加FINISH 试试效果如何
01:11:808 (4) - 这种难度不建议用3连打
01:26:176 (3,4,5) - 这里背景音已经这么高了 应该降低音量才对啊....
01:27:124 (1) - 不明白这个回转的短滑条的用意是什么 个人认为单个长滑条更适合
01:34:702 (4,5,6,7) - 这里用转盘更好吧...用几个SLIDER又复杂又没看出过渡效果...
01:37:229 (2) - 头FINISH
01:46:229 (3,4) - 不应该属于这个难度的东西
01:56:176 (3) - 同上
02:11:176 (3,4) - 一起挪动到02:11:018开始 然后分别加一个转折？这样更符合鼓
02:13:860 (8) - 02:13:544开始吧？也是更符合鼓
03:25:071 (5,6) - 这不符合难度呢。。
03:25:860 (1) - 头FINISH呀
03:44:492 (4) - 这个结尾FINISH 这种地方放FINISH都很好听
03:54:597 (1) - 前面不用转盘 怎么这里想起来用了 T T
04:15:439 (5) - 吐槽不能...
04:32:333 (3) - 这个时间不对吧..我也没弄明白这个怎么放合适
话说我不觉得这歌适合这样用鼓声跟原歌曲的鼓声 用点默认的SOFT-WHISTLE可能更适合？这鼓声给我一种异样的胸闷感 T T
Mikako:
大部分还是想说的音量啊 FINISH 还有SV太高的问题
01:22:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这里前面距离递增 后面再递减一下呗 现在的似乎不太好玩
哎 不行了 肚子饿了 后面不看啦T T
加油吧星之声~ GOGO~
General:
2个难度SV都偏高
Noboru:
我猜想你想把这个难度弄成3星左右？但是也不应该就因为这样子就把难度参数调这么高...有点不伦不类了 而且加个HR之后打2个100就半血了..
建议3个参数都-2.
SV的话我觉得1.2 1.3就可以了
00:34:545 (4) - 蓝线太奇怪了 EASY难度 不要这样子吧
00:46:702 (1) - FINISH也许更好？
00:55:860 (3) - 不知道你感觉怎么样 但是在我这里这音量有点太大了 建议弄成30
01:02:808 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里特别适合做一个音量变化 你的2是音量25 那么3可以音量35 4音量45 然后在5这里减低到30音量 6开头加FINISH 试试效果如何
01:11:808 (4) - 这种难度不建议用3连打
01:26:176 (3,4,5) - 这里背景音已经这么高了 应该降低音量才对啊....
01:27:124 (1) - 不明白这个回转的短滑条的用意是什么 个人认为单个长滑条更适合
01:34:702 (4,5,6,7) - 这里用转盘更好吧...用几个SLIDER又复杂又没看出过渡效果...
01:37:229 (2) - 头FINISH
01:46:229 (3,4) - 不应该属于这个难度的东西
01:56:176 (3) - 同上
02:11:176 (3,4) - 一起挪动到02:11:018开始 然后分别加一个转折？这样更符合鼓
02:13:860 (8) - 02:13:544开始吧？也是更符合鼓
03:25:071 (5,6) - 这不符合难度呢。。
03:25:860 (1) - 头FINISH呀
03:44:492 (4) - 这个结尾FINISH 这种地方放FINISH都很好听
03:54:597 (1) - 前面不用转盘 怎么这里想起来用了 T T
04:15:439 (5) - 吐槽不能...
04:32:333 (3) - 这个时间不对吧..我也没弄明白这个怎么放合适
话说我不觉得这歌适合这样用鼓声跟原歌曲的鼓声 用点默认的SOFT-WHISTLE可能更适合？这鼓声给我一种异样的胸闷感 T T
Mikako:
大部分还是想说的音量啊 FINISH 还有SV太高的问题
01:22:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这里前面距离递增 后面再递减一下呗 现在的似乎不太好玩
哎 不行了 肚子饿了 后面不看啦T T
加油吧星之声~ GOGO~
Topic Starter
谢谢Nymph_ wrote:
不好意思呢~由于太喜欢这首歌 所以我来吐下槽~
General:
2个难度SV都偏高
Noboru:
我猜想你想把这个难度弄成3星左右？但是也不应该就因为这样子就把难度参数调这么高...
有点不伦不类了 而且加个HR之后打2个100就半血了.. 建议3个参数都-2. done
SV的话我觉得1.2 1.3就可以了 个人不是很喜欢太慢的SV ,目前我感觉还不错....
00:34:545 (4) - 蓝线太奇怪了 EASY难度 不要这样子吧 跟bass呀= = (其实我一直把这个难度当normal做的...)
00:46:702 (1) - FINISH也许更好？前面这段很平静的说.. 突然来个finish感觉很奇怪...
00:55:860 (3) - 不知道你感觉怎么样 但是在我这里这音量有点太大了 建议弄成30 恩,,这个难度的忘记改了,不过感觉40更好
01:02:808 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里特别适合做一个音量变化 你的2是音量25 那么3可以音量35 4音量45 然后在5这里减低到30音量 6开头加FINISH 试试效果如何 done
01:11:808 (4) - 这种难度不建议用3连打 感觉还行的呀 > <.. 按照normal来说...
01:26:176 (3,4,5) - 这里背景音已经这么高了 应该降低音量才对啊.... @ @
01:27:124 (1) - 不明白这个回转的短滑条的用意是什么 个人认为单个长滑条更适合
01:34:702 (4,5,6,7) - 这里用转盘更好吧...用几个SLIDER又复杂又没看出过渡效果... done
01:37:229 (2) - 头FINISH done
01:46:229 (3,4) - 不应该属于这个难度的东西 fixed
01:56:176 (3) - 同上 这个够无脑啊 一直按着就行= =... 我也找不到什么好的方法代替这个地方..
02:11:176 (3,4) - 一起挪动到02:11:018开始 然后分别加一个转折？这样更符合鼓 done
02:13:860 (8) - 02:13:544开始吧？也是更符合鼓 done
03:25:071 (5,6) - 这不符合难度呢。。fixed
03:25:860 (1) - 头FINISH呀 不喜欢= =
03:44:492 (4) - 这个结尾FINISH 这种地方放FINISH都很好听 done
03:54:597 (1) - 前面不用转盘 怎么这里想起来用了 T T > <... 这里也硬跟音乐 就太难了...
04:15:439 (5) - 吐槽不能...> <
04:32:333 (3) - 这个时间不对吧..我也没弄明白这个怎么放合适 的确..加根红线好了..
话说我不觉得这歌适合这样用鼓声跟原歌曲的鼓声 用点默认的SOFT-WHISTLE可能更适合？这鼓声给我一种异样的胸闷感 T T
Mikako:
大部分还是想说的音量啊 FINISH 还有SV太高的问题
01:22:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这里前面距离递增 后面再递减一下呗 现在的似乎不太好玩
哎 不行了 肚子饿了 后面不看啦T T
加油吧星之声~ GOGO~[/color]
遊戲裏MOD^
Hi,New Combo=NC^
（NC可以不採納）
Noboru
32：492 這裡 NC
47：650 NC
1.06.913 nc
1.11.650 這裡很壓力……
總體來說，1/8有幾個。。沒有滑鼠技巧的新手，會斷掉&……
（NC可以不採納）
Noboru
32：492 這裡 NC
47：650 NC
1.06.913 nc
1.11.650 這裡很壓力……
總體來說，1/8有幾個。。沒有滑鼠技巧的新手，會斷掉&……
As per your request.
Here's some suggestion for you.
[Taiko]
That's some things you need to know in my modding.
- KAT = Blue note ( Big KAT = Big notes , same of DON)
- DON = Red note
00:40:702 (26) - Remove Kat , Don here.
00:41:650 (29) - Kat?
01:32:176 (171) - 1/4 (Stream) can't use big notes! Remember that in the next time
02:07:544 (282) - ^
02:12:597 (298) - ^ and change to Kat here.
03:14:650 (110) - Can't use big note and change to Kat here
03:15:755 (114) - ^
03:20:807 (135) - ^
03:24:281 (148,149,150,151) - just remove big notes here.
03:46:071 (224) - remove finsh too
04:18:913 (325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340,341) - Don't suggest Stream here, try to change it.& Remove 1/4 finsih too.
04:23:965 (349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365) - ^
And I think the last red lines (timing change) have a bit too hard to read.
I suggest that let the map ended in 04:26:492 (365) - .
Well. In fact , That's a really nice first map.
But some rules you need to know XD
Remember do not use big notes in 1/4.
My Rating: 8 / 10.
Star~ Good luck.
Here's some suggestion for you.
[Taiko]
That's some things you need to know in my modding.
- KAT = Blue note ( Big KAT = Big notes , same of DON)
- DON = Red note
00:40:702 (26) - Remove Kat , Don here.
00:41:650 (29) - Kat?
01:32:176 (171) - 1/4 (Stream) can't use big notes! Remember that in the next time
02:07:544 (282) - ^
02:12:597 (298) - ^ and change to Kat here.
03:14:650 (110) - Can't use big note and change to Kat here
03:15:755 (114) - ^
03:20:807 (135) - ^
03:24:281 (148,149,150,151) - just remove big notes here.
03:46:071 (224) - remove finsh too
04:18:913 (325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340,341) - Don't suggest Stream here, try to change it.& Remove 1/4 finsih too.
04:23:965 (349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365) - ^
And I think the last red lines (timing change) have a bit too hard to read.
I suggest that let the map ended in 04:26:492 (365) - .
Well. In fact , That's a really nice first map.
But some rules you need to know XD
Remember do not use big notes in 1/4.
My Rating: 8 / 10.
Star~ Good luck.
Topic Starter
thank you very muchKanaRin wrote:
As per your request.
Here's some suggestion for you.
[Taiko]
That's some things you need to know in my modding.
- KAT = Blue note ( Big KAT = Big notes , same of DON)
- DON = Red note
00:40:702 (26) - Remove Kat , Don here.done
00:41:650 (29) - Kat?done
01:32:176 (171) - 1/4 (Stream) can't use big notes! Remember that in the next time
02:07:544 (282) - ^ fixed
02:12:597 (298) - ^ and change to Kat here.fixed
03:14:650 (110) - Can't use big note and change to Kat heredone
03:15:755 (114) - ^fixed
03:20:807 (135) - ^fixed
03:24:281 (148,149,150,151) - just remove big notes here.fixed
03:46:071 (224) - remove finsh too fixed
04:18:913 (325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340,341) - Don't suggest Stream here, try to change it.& Remove 1/4 finsih too.fixed, can't find something else better instead this @ @ , still kat,don,kat,don would be boring IMO..> <
04:23:965 (349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365) - ^ fixed
And I think the last red lines (timing change) have a bit too hard to read.
I suggest that let the map ended in 04:26:492 (365) - .ok
Well. In fact , That's a really nice first map.
But some rules you need to know XD
Remember do not use big notes in 1/4.
My Rating: 8 / 10.
Star~ Good luck.
[Noburu]
不建议最简单难度用到circle的4分音三连，会对完全的新手难度过高。rank时也可能在难度问题上被刁难。但决定权仍然是你的
01:50:808 (3) - 如果横过来或者斜开一点，折返点不和4有重叠部分，会不会更好看。这里主要提个思路，因为我感觉相对于音效你的排版明显提升空间比较大……
03:43:860 (2) - 感觉这个音是whistle？
04:04:071 (2,3,4) - 可以转的再圆滑一点
04:10:386 - 有加音的感觉
04:33:280 (4) - 没snap好
[Mikako]
00:54:755 (6,1) - 建议用叠，或者任何的小spacing，6的感觉很轻不用也和平时做一样大的移动。而后面123不用摆那么直，只是参考：
01:03:124 (6) - 头少个whistle？
01:05:966 (3,4,5) - 这里音量大，不妨摆的开一些，或者小跳，或者距离渐远，这样的手法试一试。后面new combo似乎该在现在的6上，这个时候spacing再缩回来。
01:22:071 (1,2,3) - 这一串给我的感觉是你开始想两排直线出去结果发现右边顶到屏幕了不得不缩，这样试试又如何呢：
01:26:492 (3) - 往下放，转的圆一点
01:31:387 (4,5) - slider的位置会让手感不太好。建议4往后放1/4，5删，空的位置补circle，就是4circle-slider-circle
01:34:386 (3,4,5) - 小间距建议
01:36:597 (1,2,3) - 比较明显的不等间距
后面没什么更多类型的具体问题好讲，整体来看，间距有些小了（因为BPM太低，这样总有些缩手缩脚），摆的太直了（尤其体现在三连五连）
音效很好，把排版弄好了相信你很有前途的……加油~
edit:
[Taiko]
如果大部分还是按架子鼓的思路，就没必要单做taiko了……这是我的看法。
整体节奏密度有点低了。
不建议最简单难度用到circle的4分音三连，会对完全的新手难度过高。rank时也可能在难度问题上被刁难。但决定权仍然是你的
01:50:808 (3) - 如果横过来或者斜开一点，折返点不和4有重叠部分，会不会更好看。这里主要提个思路，因为我感觉相对于音效你的排版明显提升空间比较大……
03:43:860 (2) - 感觉这个音是whistle？
04:04:071 (2,3,4) - 可以转的再圆滑一点
04:10:386 - 有加音的感觉
04:33:280 (4) - 没snap好
[Mikako]
00:54:755 (6,1) - 建议用叠，或者任何的小spacing，6的感觉很轻不用也和平时做一样大的移动。而后面123不用摆那么直，只是参考：
01:03:124 (6) - 头少个whistle？
01:05:966 (3,4,5) - 这里音量大，不妨摆的开一些，或者小跳，或者距离渐远，这样的手法试一试。后面new combo似乎该在现在的6上，这个时候spacing再缩回来。
01:22:071 (1,2,3) - 这一串给我的感觉是你开始想两排直线出去结果发现右边顶到屏幕了不得不缩，这样试试又如何呢：
01:26:492 (3) - 往下放，转的圆一点
01:31:387 (4,5) - slider的位置会让手感不太好。建议4往后放1/4，5删，空的位置补circle，就是4circle-slider-circle
01:34:386 (3,4,5) - 小间距建议
01:36:597 (1,2,3) - 比较明显的不等间距
后面没什么更多类型的具体问题好讲，整体来看，间距有些小了（因为BPM太低，这样总有些缩手缩脚），摆的太直了（尤其体现在三连五连）
音效很好，把排版弄好了相信你很有前途的……加油~
edit:
[Taiko]
如果大部分还是按架子鼓的思路，就没必要单做taiko了……这是我的看法。
整体节奏密度有点低了。
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin wrote:
[Noburu]
不建议最简单难度用到circle的4分音三连，会对完全的新手难度过高。rank时也可能在难度问题上被刁难。但决定权仍然是你的
01:50:808 (3) - 如果横过来或者斜开一点，折返点不和4有重叠部分，会不会更好看。这里主要提个思路，因为我感觉相对于音效你的排版明显提升空间比较大…… done
03:43:860 (2) - 感觉这个音是whistle？不是> <
04:04:071 (2,3,4) - 可以转的再圆滑一点 好.
04:10:386 - 有加音的感觉
04:33:280 (4) - 没snap好fixed
[Mikako]
00:54:755 (6,1) - 建议用叠，或者任何的小spacing，6的感觉很轻不用也和平时做一样大的移动。而后面123不用摆那么直，只是参考：
[attachment=2:77104]87.png[/attachment:77104] done
01:03:124 (6) - 头少个whistle？没有= =
01:05:966 (3,4,5) - 这里音量大，不妨摆的开一些，或者小跳，或者距离渐远，这样的手法试一试。后面new combo似乎该在现在的6上，这个时候spacing再缩回来。 done
01:22:071 (1,2,3) - 这一串给我的感觉是你开始想两排直线出去结果发现右边顶到屏幕了不得不缩，这样试试又如何呢：SPOILERdone[attachment=1:77104]88.png[/attachment:77104]
[attachment=0:77104]89.png[/attachment:77104]
01:26:492 (3) - 往下放，转的圆一点 换了另一种摆法
01:31:387 (4,5) - slider的位置会让手感不太好。建议4往后放1/4，5删，空的位置补circle，就是4circle-slider-circle done
01:34:386 (3,4,5) - 小间距建议 好
01:36:597 (1,2,3) - 比较明显的不等间距 fixed
后面没什么更多类型的具体问题好讲，整体来看，间距有些小了（因为BPM太低，这样总有些缩手缩脚），摆的太直了（尤其体现在三连五连）
音效很好，把排版弄好了相信你很有前途的……加油~
edit:
[Taiko]
如果大部分还是按架子鼓的思路，就没必要单做taiko了……这是我的看法。
整体节奏密度有点低了。
谢谢
Here >w<
Download: LOW - Through The Years Far Away (zsr123) [Ozzy's Taiko].osu
Timing might be old ;_; but maybe not if you did not change it...
Download: LOW - Through The Years Far Away (zsr123) [Ozzy's Taiko].osu
Timing might be old ;_; but maybe not if you did not change it...
^^
just suggestions
[Mikako]
00:39:123(5)-(5)拉到00:39:755,把(6)去掉,加个和(5)一样的silder 调整间距
01:24:913(10,11)-和(7,8)在一个高度上比较好看？
nice map >w< no kds~
just suggestions
[Mikako]
00:39:123(5)-(5)拉到00:39:755,把(6)去掉,加个和(5)一样的silder 调整间距
01:24:913(10,11)-和(7,8)在一个高度上比较好看？
nice map >w< no kds~
Topic Starter
谢谢BakaHuang wrote:
^^
just suggestions
[Mikako]
00:39:123(5)-(5)拉到00:39:755,把(6)去掉,加个和(5)一样的silder 调整间距
01:24:913(10,11)-和(7,8)在一个高度上比较好看？ 好
nice map >w< no kds~
ah,,, 习惯点 give kudos 那个键了 虽然之前就看到你后面写了> , <
Sorry for the delay,but here's my mod
[Noboru]
[Noboru]
- Well,there are many parts that can be too hard for a Easy/Normal,but i guess it's fine,since the BPM is slow
- 03:25:228 - I would add a note here
- 00:49:229 (5) - Spacing
- 01:11:334 (3) - ^
- 03:28:703 (3) - 1 grid right
- 03:34:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make this stream in 1/4
- 04:07:545 (3) - 4 grids left
Topic Starter
thanks for your modding.-kevincela- wrote:
Sorry for the delay,but here's my mod
[Noboru][Mikako]
- Well,there are many parts that can be too hard for a Easy/Normal,but i guess it's fine,since the BPM is slow
- 03:25:228 - I would add a note here done
Good map,keep up the good job!
- 00:49:229 (5) - Spacing should be fixed
- 01:11:334 (3) - ^ ^
- 03:28:703 (3) - 1 grid right done
- 03:34:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make this stream in 1/4
- 04:07:545 (3) - 4 grids left
hello~~
Thank mod request from my user page
Some Suggestions
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[Noboru]
AR +1?(IMO)
OD +1?(IMO)
00:46:703 (1) -Remove New combo and 00:47:650 (2) - New combo?
00:52:387 (1) - New combo?
01:10:703 (2,3) - I not like litter overlap try sometime like this http://puu.sh/3viv carefully if you fix this you need fix spacing at 01:13:229 (1)
02:05:018 (2) - weird slider wave maybe this http://puu.sh/3viP (more symentrical) ? (note carefully spacing at 02:05:966 (3,4,5,6) )
02:40:387 (7,8) - http://puu.sh/3vja this (7) the start slider i can't see this arrow with (8) so this is unrank try someting place other
02:57:439 (3) - ugly slider arc maybe this http://puu.sh/3vkf ? (better symentrical) If yes here code
03:11:334 (2,3,4,5,6) - Bad symentrical (IMO) maybe this http://puu.sh/3vjt ? most better symentrical
04:01:228 (6) - ^ same above at 02:05:018 (2)
04:22:070 (6) - put new combo and at 04:22:386 (1) - Remove new combo
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[Mikako]
HP -1
AR+1
00:30:913 (1) - New combo?
00:35:650 (1) - New combo?
00:40:703 (1) - New combo?
00:54:755 (6) - New combo and at 00:54:913 (1) - Remove new combo
01:22:703 (3,4) - I see this is jump 01:23:018 (4) - new combobecause jump but this just my IMO
01:32:807 (1) - put new combo and at 01:33:439 (2) - Remove new combo
01:47:334 (2) - weird slider maybe this http://puu.sh/3vlo ? (note if you fix this carefully spacing at 01:48:281 (3,4) )
02:03:124 (2) - remove curve slider and put slider parellal (IMO)
02:41:334 (5) - put new combo and at 02:41:650 (1) - Remove new combo
02:45:124 (1) - put new combo and at 02:45:439 (1) - Remove new combo
03:34:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - this just my imo i think this stream is very hard play i think put slider repeat but this just my imo
03:53:650 (7) - weird slider wave try symentrical
03:56:176 (9) - ^ same above 03:53:650 (7)
04:06:913 (2,3) - the end sliders are weird stack try better stack
04:11:018 (9) - Put new combo and 04:11:334 (3) - Remove new combo
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That all i think sorry my poor english
Star! and good luck song
Thank mod request from my user page
Some Suggestions
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Noboru]
AR +1?(IMO)
OD +1?(IMO)
00:46:703 (1) -Remove New combo and 00:47:650 (2) - New combo?
00:52:387 (1) - New combo?
01:10:703 (2,3) - I not like litter overlap try sometime like this http://puu.sh/3viv carefully if you fix this you need fix spacing at 01:13:229 (1)
02:05:018 (2) - weird slider wave maybe this http://puu.sh/3viP (more symentrical) ? (note carefully spacing at 02:05:966 (3,4,5,6) )
02:40:387 (7,8) - http://puu.sh/3vja this (7) the start slider i can't see this arrow with (8) so this is unrank try someting place other
02:57:439 (3) - ugly slider arc maybe this http://puu.sh/3vkf ? (better symentrical) If yes here code
SPOILER
372,244,177439,2,8,B|441:132|245:9|175:121,1,340
03:11:334 (2,3,4,5,6) - Bad symentrical (IMO) maybe this http://puu.sh/3vjt ? most better symentrical
04:01:228 (6) - ^ same above at 02:05:018 (2)
04:22:070 (6) - put new combo and at 04:22:386 (1) - Remove new combo
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[Mikako]
HP -1
AR+1
00:30:913 (1) - New combo?
00:35:650 (1) - New combo?
00:40:703 (1) - New combo?
00:54:755 (6) - New combo and at 00:54:913 (1) - Remove new combo
01:22:703 (3,4) - I see this is jump 01:23:018 (4) - new combobecause jump but this just my IMO
01:32:807 (1) - put new combo and at 01:33:439 (2) - Remove new combo
01:47:334 (2) - weird slider maybe this http://puu.sh/3vlo ? (note if you fix this carefully spacing at 01:48:281 (3,4) )
02:03:124 (2) - remove curve slider and put slider parellal (IMO)
02:41:334 (5) - put new combo and at 02:41:650 (1) - Remove new combo
02:45:124 (1) - put new combo and at 02:45:439 (1) - Remove new combo
03:34:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - this just my imo i think this stream is very hard play i think put slider repeat but this just my imo
03:53:650 (7) - weird slider wave try symentrical
03:56:176 (9) - ^ same above 03:53:650 (7)
04:06:913 (2,3) - the end sliders are weird stack try better stack
04:11:018 (9) - Put new combo and 04:11:334 (3) - Remove new combo
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That all i think sorry my poor english
Star! and good luck song
Topic Starter
thank you ..Pereira006 wrote:
hello~~
Thank mod request from my user page
Some Suggestions
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[Noboru]
AR +1?(IMO)
OD +1?(IMO)
done, and HP +1
00:46:703 (1) -Remove New combo and 00:47:650 (2) - New combo? no, sorry..
00:52:387 (1) - New combo?done
01:10:703 (2,3) - I not like litter overlap try sometime like this http://puu.sh/3viv carefully if you fix this you need fix spacing at 01:13:229 (1) uh..picture too small , but tried to fix overlap..
02:05:018 (2) - weird slider wave maybe this http://puu.sh/3viP (more symentrical) ? (note carefully spacing at 02:05:966 (3,4,5,6) )done
02:40:387 (7,8) - http://puu.sh/3vja this (7) the start slider i can't see this arrow with (8) so this is unrank try someting place other it's visible > <
02:57:439 (3) - ugly slider arc maybe this http://puu.sh/3vkf ? (better symentrical) If yes here codeSPOILERdone372,244,177439,2,8,B|441:132|245:9|175:121,1,340
03:11:334 (2,3,4,5,6) - Bad symentrical (IMO) maybe this http://puu.sh/3vjt ? most better symentrical done
04:01:228 (6) - ^ same above at 02:05:018 (2) done
04:22:070 (6) - put new combo and at 04:22:386 (1) - Remove new combo done
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[Mikako]
HP -1
AR+1
done
00:30:913 (1) - New combo? no,sorry
00:35:650 (1) - New combo? no,sorry
00:40:703 (1) - New combo? no,sorry
00:54:755 (6) - New combo and at 00:54:913 (1) - Remove new combo done
01:22:703 (3,4) - I see this is jump 01:23:018 (4) - new combobecause jump but this just my IMO no,sorry
01:32:807 (1) - put new combo and at 01:33:439 (2) - Remove new combo done
01:47:334 (2) - weird slider maybe this http://puu.sh/3vlo ? (note if you fix this carefully spacing at 01:48:281 (3,4) ) done
02:03:124 (2) - remove curve slider and put slider parellal (IMO) done
02:41:334 (5) - put new combo and at 02:41:650 (1) - Remove new combo done
02:45:124 (1) - put new combo and at 02:45:439 (1) - Remove new combo done
03:34:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - this just my imo i think this stream is very hard play i think put slider repeat but this just my imo wont be too hard since the bpm is slow, but well.. DONE..
03:53:650 (7) - weird slider wave try symentrical should be better now i guess..
03:56:176 (9) - ^ same above 03:53:650 (7) ^
04:06:913 (2,3) - the end sliders are weird stack try better stack I wasnt thinking make them stack..
04:11:018 (9) - Put new combo and 04:11:334 (3) - Remove new combo done
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That all i think sorry my poor english
Star! and good luck song
it's ok, my english also poor
都是建议:
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[General]
最简单的难度还是太难了点
所以还是建议做一个更简单的难度 不用1/4 note 另外Slider速度也弄小点 圈弄到最大
后面那段Kiai Time建议在04:26:492结束
01:05:018 (3,4,5): 这里音量上升的有点突然
01:17:018 (5): 这个长Slider还是分成几个Slider或者Slider和Circle吧
01:36:597 (1): 离转盘有点近
01:50:808 (3) , 02:05:966(3): 这种重复好几次的1/4 Slider对于新手来说会有点难
02:13:544 (8): 建议分解成两个Slider
02:58:071 (3) , 03:20:176 (4) : 这里不如静音算了（其实把Slider Tick Rate改成0.5就好了
03:25:228 (5): 这个位置可能会让人误解 建议往左下拖一拖
03:54:597 (1): 这个转盘放在这里感觉不大合适
04:13:860 (4,5): 因为⑤你用了2X Slider速度所以间距也变成2X了（2X Slider速度貌似也没什么必要
04:39:191 (1): 去掉Finish吧
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01:42:281 (8): 感觉这个Slider有点太直了
02:17:334 (9): 总看着有点别扭…改成左右方向试试（从右往左
02:58:071 (3): 静音吧
04:15:124 (2,3): 这里是2倍间距
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