1. Hard (4.47 stars, 528 notes)
2. Normal (2.4 stars, 270 notes)

Lybydose wrote:

BPM//Offset

95.00//1229
93.00//277860
86.00//278505
88.50//278853
85.50//281232
82.00//282635

Past 04:44:890 is untimable. Well it is, but there's no point since every note would have different timing and no one would be able to hit it very well.

Also delete the three sections at 04:15:511. If you really want to map the notes like at 04:15:511 (3), you need to double the BPM for every timing section and then use 1/6 snap like this: http://puu.sh/2vY7

Broetchen8441 wrote:

So, that's what i found out and what i suggest you to do 'bout your map - i'll take another look later, but i guess that's what i have for you for now

Add KIAI-time (both diffs):
03:25:071 - 03:41:492
03:45:353 - 04:03:597
04:06:439 - 04:21:353
04:24:036 - 04:28:221
sorry , I dont like KIAI at this map
KIAI-time 04:06:281 - 04:44:830 added

Noboru:
Increase the approach rate by one (5 -> 6) - You don't have to do that, since it's my own opinion.done
03:25:071 (5) + 03:25:228 (6) - Guess you could add a note here (at the end of the slider), just needs the right hitsounds done , soft hitsound with 80% volume
04:05:018 (5) - Good idea for that one, thumbs up
04:15:439 (5) - I like the idea of that slider, but i guess most people won't like 1/8-reversesliders in normal-diffs :/ maybe,I'll ask some friends about this

Mikako:
Maybe decrease overall difficulty by one (7 -> 6) - Again this is my opinion, since i think it's better to keep the overall diff below the approach rate. I think 7 is fine , sorry ><
00:34:071 (3) - Enlarge this one to the next 1/4-step, looks/sounds better, give it a finish-sound (you could use the custom one of the kirby-skin for that, sounds nice for me) Also,I think this is fine for me , sorry
00:36:124 (6) - Give this one a finish sound
00:39:124 (5) - Give that one a finish sound (+ maybe a whistle, but i'm not sure 'bout that)
00:41:018 (7) - Finish
00:41:650 (9) - Finish
00:45:439 (4) - Finish
00:46:703 (1) - Add finish to the whistle
00:49:229 (5) - ^
00:50:492 (8) - ^
00:51:124 (1) - Finish
00:53:650 (5) - ^
01:01:860 (3) - ^
01:05:018 (1) - ^
I tried to add finish to some notes when I was mapping this map and I think it sounds not good. sorry

01:56:176 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - You'd better make a reverse-slider or a stacked stream out of it, but no pure circlestacking; most people don't like 1/8- and 1/6-mapping, so you should think 'bout removing/changing this if there are more people pointing at that. ok, change to slider.

Selee wrote:

还是lyby靠谱吧

加油咯

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Noboru]
01:26:176 (3) - 部分被slider挡住 不美观0.0 稍微改了下 应该行了..
03:25:860 (1) - spacing.fixed
03:44:492 (4) - spacing.fixed
03:44:492 (4) - 不要用这么多的回转 多用几个slider代替 怕会太难了= =...有更多人建议的话 我就改下吧..



[Mikako]
00:34:071 (3) - slider的结尾应该在蓝线上。。 0 0. fixed
00:39:124 (5) - spacing. fixed
00:54:755 (x) - 这里加个note试试看 done
00:55:860 (4) - 声音太响 降低10%
01:35:965 (9) - spacing!! fixed
01:56:176 (3) - 切成2个sliders 不太想这样= =.. 先保留吧 如果有更多人建议这样再改吧...
03:10:071 (2,3,1,2,3) - 这里的左边和右边(绿色的3和蓝色的3)不对称 你可以按下ctrl+1 (左边的) 格子变小了再放notes fixed
03:34:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这样放真的没问题么..会让人感觉节奏突然变得超快 一般来说1/8放放slider还可以 应该还好吧.. 之前叫了几个朋友试打 没有特别指出这里, 如果有更多人指出 我就改下吧..
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音效很不错0.0
还是有待改进啦
star~☆

MoodyRPG wrote:

General

- More hitsounds?

[Noboru]

00:29:018 (3) - Move to center
01:11:965 (5) - New combo
01:17:018 (5) - ^
02:12:597 (7) - ^
02:40:386 (7) - ^
03:12:597 (4) - More symetrical with (2)
03:13:228 (5) - More symetrical with (3)

[Mikako]

01:11:334 (3) - More symetrical with (1)
01:23:965 (7) - New combo
02:05:018 (5) - ^
03:05:018 (7) - More symetrical with (5)
03:19:702 (8) - Maybe new combo?
04:25:229 (10) - ^
04:27:913 (3) - More symetrical with (1)
04:41:933 (6) - New combo

Star~

kurohacker wrote:

Hi there~
Really sorry for the late mod, I'm still not feeling so well right now... hope you will recover soon
But a promise is a promise, and here you go:

[Noboru]
There are some small discrepancies in spacing distances in this map, most probably because of the use of grid level 3 while mapping.
Not really a problem for me, but maybe for the others. I will only mention those that are more noticable.

1'13''229 - Start new combo here, to follow the combo rhythm pattern from before.done
1'16''702 - Spacing issue between [2] and [3],[4],[5] stack. Small, but still noticable IMO.fixed
2'01''860 - Spacing issue between [3] and [4].fixed
2'06''913 - Spacing issue with [4].fixed
2'51''439 - Spacing issue with [3].fixed
3'13''860 - Maybe stack this with [2] at 3'11''334?done
4'15''439 - It's kinda hard to know when the slider's going to end here. But you're following the drums, so I can't think of any other slider styles that can go with the drums.
4'22''386 - Spacing issue with [1].fixed
4'39''191 - How about letting the spinner end at 4'44'830? no,sorry > < drum end at 44''674,but I'll change this if more people suggest that

[Mikako]
0'34''939 - You need to move this at 0'35''018.done
0'41''018 - Spacing issue with [7].fixed
0'58''071 - Add a whistle to the beginning.done
3'46''071 - I really think the beginning could use a finish.done
4'03''755 - Start new combo here.done

There is still some room for improvements here, but it's a good start, and I like the fact that the timing sections towards the end of the song really fit that part. So a star for you~

All the best!

spboxer3 wrote:

[Noboru]
00:21:438 (1,2,3,4) - 恩...有歪掉 但沒什麼大礙
01:29:334 (5,6) - 聽起來有些彆扭看看要怎麼改改吧 把5删掉了..
01:34:702 (4,5,6,7) - 這類的排列我不建議 不過並沒有違反

[Mikako]
00:21:439 (1,2,3,4) - 同[Noboru]有歪掉 但沒什麼大礙
00:31:229 (7) - 右一格grid(size 4) done
00:38:808 (4) - ^ done
01:03:124 (6) - 右上各一格grid(size 4) 往右移了2格...
01:30:597 (7) - 右下各一格grid(size 4) done
01:47:334 (2) - slider拉好一點[nazi] > <...不是很擅长弄slider的形状 , 而且为了上面不要出框太多 = =
02:49:860 (8) - 左一格grid(size3) done
04:09:439 (6) - 右一格grid(size 4) done

[Taiko]
SV = 1.4 done
聲音用50%~65% 50%
01:56:176 (248) - 不可以這樣放 結尾放到01:57:439 - 结尾是在那地方呀= = 不会是你调了SV 忘记自己改了这里了吧= =
直接把spin 放到02:35:965 - 吧 那兩個note就不要放了!! 這樣打起來會很奇怪的 done
03:08:176 (88) - 我認為這邊其實可以不用大的 好吧..
03:14:650 (110) - 記得有一條規則!!"大note不可以放在1/4連拍上"你有很多都放到了...需要修改 eh...这个不太清楚了= =不过我打taiko 有些图 也有这种情况.. 待会问问朋友确定下好了..
04:05:018 (288) - 同01:56:176 (248) - 同上><
不要突然加速!!!
最後面kiai的部份可以用X1.2倍速 好..
第１次做taiko难度> <

最後!!我討厭這該死的highhit阿(怒
它讓我好難聽懂你放的voice

star~