Jayel wrote:

Hello~ here is my mod~!

Notice: The text in blue is something that is optional.

[General]
This is the best time for your beatmap's kiai time. sorry, don't want to use kiai time.
00:48:303 ~ 01:05:758


[Easy]
First, it would be better if you lessen the slider tick rate into 1. nah

00:09:031(1) Finish sound at the beginning of the slidernah
00:18:849(2) Clap sound ok
00:25:394(4,5,6,7) I think it is a little hard for [Easy]. Try something else so that it can be easier. nah
00:33:031(3) Make it more symmetric: Move the slider 1 tick to right & move the curve point 1 tick to left fixed
00:39:031(5) Eliminate the clap sound ok
00:39:576(6) Eliminate the clap sound and add finish sound at the beginning of the slider eliminated clap sound but did not add finish
00:39:576(6,7) I think it would be better if you make 6,7 as one slider. Not slider and circle. changed to single slider
01:03:167(2) Nice try, but... I think it is bad for easy. Just set the beginning point at 01:03:576 and the ending point at 01:04:121 or you can make other try~ i think i will stick with this for now
01:04:667(3) Clap sound ok

Ok, great!


[Normal]
GOOD.


[Hard]
00:18:849(2,3) What are the meaning of these notes;;; you'd better get rid of note 3. i think it suits the music
01:33:303(5,6) Making these notes as one slider would be better i think they're ok


OK, sorry for being late

I think this song is great. It makes me relaxed

Yomeiro wrote:

Hi there~
From my riddle modding queue

SPOILER

General

Did you consider to add Kiai-Time at your diffs?
I would probably add Kiai from 00:26:485 - 00:39:577 and 01:23:213 - 01:36:303. don't really want to use kiai

Hard

These Hitsounds.... Oh....My....God....
Let's say... I would use the claps more at the parts where I would also use Kiai, and then throughout the song may some claps but most of the time whistles... finishes where needed apparently.
Since it's easier for me to show you what my ideas are, I'll just give you a file where I would feel like "this sounds ok." (no offense intended here~, Everyone has a different hearing and taste for hitsounds~ :3)
Note: If you use that file, make sure you make a backup of your own latest copy so you can replace it easily again.

00:17:212 (8,1) - Remove finish from 1 and add it on 8. i think it's ok
00:32:758 (10,11,1) - Add NC at 10 and remove it from 1.... ok
00:45:849 (3) - I would add a finish here~ ok
01:42:576 (3) - ^^
00:46:121 (1) - Add finish at the beginning of this slider.^
01:42:849 (4) - ^^
00:50:621 (3) - Slider doesn't fit in my opinion~, change it to a single note~ i don't think a single note fits either...
00:54:985 (3) - ^ ^
01:05:758 (1) - Combo starting from here on is too long... (15 notes x_x)... try to split it up~ ok
01:14:486 (1) - ^ ^
01:27:577 (8) - Add NC here. k
01:44:894 (6,7) - Add finish on 6 and 7. added finish on 7

I attach the file I mentioned as already said, use parts which you like of it. Otherwise, I would like to see if you changed at least the things I stated above for this diff.

Normal

Well, I guess if you take at the Hitsounds of the file I'll attach for your Hard diff, you probably see how I would use them here as well....

00:28:122 (1) - I see what you try to do here, but I would appreciate it if you could remove the NC here. Because of the claps from the "stream" before, I would add a finish on this. ok
00:30:304 (1) - ^ ^
00:36:577 (1) - Remove NC. ok
00:46:122 (1) - Add finish to the beginning~ ok
01:42:849 (1) - ^ ^
00:50:621 (3) - Same as in Hard, Slider doesn't really fit here.~, Since this is a Normal, could you change 00:50:077 (1,2,3) into a slider with repeat then? ok
00:59:349 (4) - ^ ^
01:01:394 (1) - No finish here like at 00:52:667 (1)? it is at 01:05:758 (1)

I guess that's all for Normal then.

Easy

Same with the Hitsounds as in Normal, you see how I would probably use them here as well when taking a look at the attached file.

01:01:394 (1) - No finish at the beginning like at 00:52:667 (1)? it is at 01:05:758 (1)
01:22:121 (1) - I would probably remove the NC from here~ ok

I guess that's all for Easy....

Well, other than what I could find I guess you did a pretty good job there.
Maps still need some work probably but other than that...^^
I hope you're going to map stuff like Rose of Sharon or Into the Arena too~ :3
Star for you~

IceBeam wrote:

Hello.

Remove Background Music Game from Tags.BGM is fine enough.

I should also mention that MP3's bitrate is below ranking criteria,it should be between 128-192 kbps.

So,use this link if you want to get a MP3 with a higher quality.
Thanks to Armin for sharing a link :> Thanks for sharing! I was looking for it.

[Easy]
Claps so sound disgusting,really..
Maybe you could change them with whistles?

00:09:031 (1) - Finish?
00:35:212 (1) - Finish and how about using plain slider shape? Cause this curve looks a little weird.And yeah,it's few grids out of Distance Snap,so fix it.
00:39:576 (6) - This slider almost overlaps with 00:38:485 (4) and it doesn't look so good.How about using this pattern?

SPOILER

00:41:212 - Add a note here to keep the rhytm on,or just start a spinner from here.
01:03:167 (2) - What is this? Start it from white tick (01:03:031).
01:40:667 - Finish fits really well.

[Normal]
Approach rate doesn't perfectly fit the map's speed,I would use AR4 for this one.

Also,remove all these short breaks.They're unrankable.

00:13:395 (1,2,3,4) - Make it symmetrical?
00:15:440 (5) - Uh..what can I say..I'd like you to use 00:15:303 note instead of 00:15:440.
00:28:122 (6) - Huh? A jump? No way,it's only Normal,fix distance,please.
00:30:303 (6) - ^
00:30:849 (7) - New combo.
00:40:940 (1) - Again.Don't jump,please.
00:43:940 (1,2,1,2) - These are acceptable to me,but still..
00:47:213 (2,1,3) - Just HOW?



00:50:076 (3) - Anyway,use new combo and it shouldn't be snapped on blue tick.Use white/red.
00:54:440 (2) - ^
00:55:667 (3) - Oh come on -_- What does it follow?
00:58:804 (2,3) - Distance isn't correct and these blue ticks are hard to read.
01:03:167 (2) - And once again..
01:31:940 (1) - Finish?
01:36:304 (6) - Nice attempt at slider design,but shape isn't perfect and 01:37:940 (2) is covered by the slider
01:46:804 (1,2) - Remove this and just extend 01:44:758 (1) slider up to this point.

[Hard]
Same for breaks.

00:16:394 (3,4,5,6,7) - It's covered by 00:15:440 (5,6),place this pattern somewhere instead?
00:50:690 (3) - Is it snapped on 1/8? Are you serious?
00:54:440 (1,2,3) - ^ Same,it's not acceptable..
00:55:735 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing isn't correct,(2) should be 2x closer to (1).

Well..
Easy was fine,but Normal and especially Hard are unacceptable.
You can't randomly snap your notes on blue(yellow) ticks. Cause it's unreadable.
I know it will be hard,but you should re-arrenge your maps using white/red ticks,mostly following main rhytm.
Unless you won't make your map ranked..

Anyway,good luck to you,I'll leave my star.

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Normal

00:15:031 (3,4,5) - Big jump in distance here. fixed.
00:26:212 (9) - Whistle hitsound. ok
00:57:030 (3,4,1) - Too close together.fixed

Hard

00:28:121 (5) - ctrl+h. why?
00:30:302 (5) - Make this overlap the previous 2. ^
00:51:166 (3) - Move forward by 1 tick on 1/4 BSD. k
00:55:121 (1,2,3) - Move forward by 1 tick on 1/4 BSD.k
01:27:576 (7) - Too close to the HP bar. moved

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Easy]
01:03:576 (2) - Why does this end there? extended

Rest is good.
[Normal]
Also good! Some random claps though...
[Hard]
Mmm, good, just some ugly sliders...changed some slider shapes

star~thank you!

Hyuguys wrote:

Normalzzz
00:34:939 (6) - No I think the sliders are ok
00:37:122 (6) - No^
01:19:122 (1,5,6) - No^
01:48:030 (2) - +Whistleok

Hard
00:29:211 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ctrl + Hit's suppose to be in a different direction...


Godamnit , very nice map <3thank you

darck360 wrote:

Hi ;D

[Easy]
00:25:939 (4,5,6,7) : I would say it is very difficult for this easy. i think it's ok since it's the only difficult part
00:28:666 : One grid up. fixed overall spacing
00:30:848 : ^ ^
00:36:848 : One grid down. ^
00:39:576 : One grid left. ^
00:44:485 : Finish ok
00:57:576 : One grid down. fixed overall spacing
01:01:939 : One grid up. ^
01:19:394 : ^ ^
01:47:757 : Finishok

[Normal]
Nice ~

[Hard]
00:54:985 : Distancefixed
01:02:076 : Try to fix it this way. fixed

~

justnobody wrote:

[Normal]
00:26:485(x) - put a whistle here and remove whistle on 00:26:212 (9)? do you mean i should add a note and put the hitsound on that? I think it's fine
01:34:122 (5,6) - (nazi) move (6) 1grid down...? or is this intentional... ok

[Hard]
00:15:985 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - wth this kills me. i'll keep it for now
sry i've been crazy on this.
well i found this part at least playable...but when i first play this i do shouted on this.
00:37:939 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - new combo at (7)? ok
00:53:212 (8,1,2,3) - new combo at 00:53:212 not 00:54:985?k
01:03:712 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - sounds bad...not really sure what you mean
i guess this song should use beat snap divisor 1/3 or 1/6 (for this part?) but i'm not sure.

ehhh....star.

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Easy]
00:37:394 (x) - Add a Hit Circle with a Finish! added hit circle, no finish
00:41:757 (x) - Add a Hit Circle ( Keys ) k
00:42:030 (x) - ^k^

[Normal]
00:50:485 (1) - Do this for drums or this for keys(a bit difficultier...) i used this because someone previously said i shouldnt use blue ticks for normal (still have 2 though)
00:54:848 (2) - Do this for drums and to follow music better
00:59:212 (2) - Do http://puu.sh/2JBe for drums and to follow music better
01:03:576 (2) - (arleady said some solutions...)

[Hard]
00:57:303 (x) - Add Hit Circle ok
01:11:212 (3) - Do this what? anyway, changed.

p3n wrote:

The old Payon in the BG made me miss the good old RO times

[Easy]
Seem OK. The 1/2 stacks may throw beginners off, but it is well made and not unreadable imo.

[Normal]
01:15:031 (1,2) - This transition is very confusing imo. Delete (2) and add 2x repeats to (1) ok
01:16:666 (4) - Use a short slider instead that starts 1/4 earlier (on the blue tick) and ends right here. Matching what you actually hear would make it much easier to read why (6) suddenly starts on the blue tick. I'm gonna keep this for now because i don't think the slider is hard to read
01:19:122 (1) - Reduce to 1x repeat to match the actual songi think it's ok
01:25:122 (4) - Reduce to 1x repeat, add stacked circle on the red tick @01:25:666 to make it match the song and less confusing ok

[Hard]
00:16:121 (6,1,2,3) - Some very weird spacing decisions. Personally I wouldn't go for a triple-jump with inconsistent spacing here. Rhythm pattern itself is already hard to read if you don't know the music by heart so I would keep the spacing simple here. made the spacing consistant
00:27:030 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it would be much better (playble) to reduce the spacing inside this first jump-pattern a bit. Select all 5 notes and use "Scale by..." -> 0,6x with "Playfield Centre" i already reduced the spacing i'm not gonna edit this for now
00:37:121 (6) - Reduce to 1x repeat, move to 464/192 (ending point to 476/256) and add a circle on the red tick (where the slider ending used to be) @440/76. This way you'll fix the spacing error and match the actual song: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/102328 i think i'll use this for now since it matches the previous combo. I'll look out for it though.
01:30:030 (X) - I wouldn't leave out this beat here. i'll skip this since the next little bit is a bit weird
01:30:303 (1,2,3) - Maybe use a 1x repeat slider instead of three circles here. This rhythm is hard to predict. it's the same thing as the previous one so i think it should be ok


Pretty good so far. Keep it up!
~star

OnosakiHito wrote:

Taiko guest diff. finished~
Please add my name into all TAG's and use this Taiko_BG I made(click to toggel). ^^

Leorda wrote:

Hello, sorry for taking so long

Easy
00:13:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think 7 combos is too long for easy diff. Maximum combo for easy diff is 6 i'm gonna keep it
00:22:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
00:25:939 (4,5,6,7,1) - You stack these too much and it's confusing for noobs. Please change this i think it's ok
00:35:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same issue as 00:13:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) keep
00:53:212 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
01:42:848 (4) - Move 1 grid up (Nazi)what? why?

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Normal
* Increase the Approach Rate by +1 pretty sure it was this originally but ar 4 was suggested. I'll keep it for now.

00:22:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 8 combos is too long for normal diff k started new combo from 6
00:27:031 (1,2,3,4,5) - These claps are awful, try arrange something else?yeah changed to fit other difficulties
00:29:212 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^^
00:33:303 (5) - Don't use repeating slider too much, or it'll be hard to tell for average player changed
01:08:894 (7) - Please put this in red or white tick. Player could be hard to read if this place in blue tick leave these for now
01:12:166 (5) - ^ ^
01:13:666 (3) - Same issue as 00:33:303 (5) changed
01:15:031 (1) - ^ changed
01:17:621 (5) - Please put this in red or white tick. Player could be hard to read if this place in blue tick
01:19:122 (1) - Same issue as 00:33:303 (5)keeping these for now
01:21:576 (5,6) - ^ ^
01:36:848 (6) - New combo for this slider, since it's slow slider

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cya~

spboxer3 wrote:

[Easy]
00:25:939 (4,5,6,7) - It's more diffcult for Easy I think changed to slider
01:32:485 (1,2,3,4) - It's not pretty... look↓ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/104910 edited

[Normal]
Unn...VR It's so high to Normal [IMO]
00:10:667 (3,4) - Why don't copy (3) for (4) ((but I think (4) is pretty then (3) XDD ok
00:53:212 (1) - It's look not soft but...not big problem
00:57:576 (1) - ^
00:59:212 (2) - you need 4 point to help you make slider perfect Don't lazy lol k
01:19:122 (1) - Strange beat on here
01:21:576 (5,6) - ^
01:47:212 (1) - finish at 01:47:621 - k

[hard]
00:19:393 (2,3) - Also Strange beat on here
00:53:212 (1) - lol same as Normal
00:57:576 (9) - ^
01:01:940 (3) - ^
01:13:122 (1) - spacing fixed
01:48:030 (2) - remove clap ok

I'm gonna leave the taiko alone. I'll ask Ono.
[Ono's Taiko]
VR=1.4
00:24:303 (1) - it's more strange in here
00:30:576 (2) - ^
00:33:439 (2,1) - (2,1) move next 1/4 beat snap?
00:56:348 (5) - Unn... I don't like this D:
and your combo color it not red & bule you can change this


Final:I suggest you need have more expsive mapper to help you. it can give more suggest for you

star~

xykbear wrote:

thx for the request~

[Hard]
00:21:576 (8) - add new comboi think it's ok
00:22:121 (12) - finish ^
00:35:757 (1) - finishok
00:37:939 (1) - finishok
00:42:304 (5,6,7) - space between this three note is not in samefixed
00:51:166 (3) - this slider not fit the music track well.You'd better follow the beats these notethis is probably the closest
00:53:212 (1) - finishok
00:57:576 (9) - finish and add new combo ^
//too much blank at last.make it completely?

[Normal]
01:17:621 (6) - space k
01:29:485 (8) - one grid leftk

[Easy]
00:57:576 (1) - finish at startok
01:01:939 (1) - ^^
01:45:030 (6) - remove finish ^
01:45:576 (1) - finish,cancel whistle ^

//already delete same issues with SP3's mod

Raging Bull wrote:

Hi.

General:
Map to the end like Taiko please.

Easy:
00:40:121 (7) - NC ok
00:41:485 (8,9,10) - Unstack? ok
00:56:485 (5,6,7) - ^nah
01:05:212 (3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:21:576 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^

Sorry. I don't like stacks on easy. It could be confusing.

Normal:
Big gap in slider velocity from easy to normal. Maybe reduce it to 1.50?
01:21:576 (5,6) - Short slider with many repeat arrows could confuse beginners. Maybe remap this part?i think it's ok
01:36:848 (1) - I don't recommend changing slider velocity in a normal. Can you just put it to 1x speed?^
it's a slightly harder normal so...
Hard:
00:51:166 (3) - I find this off beat. Maybe remove slider and add a note at 00:51:303? It doesn't match there either


Pretty good map.

SiU_LeAf wrote:

star!
mod from wmf's Queue

[easy]
00:10:666 (2,3,4,5) - I think it is not good, try this? http://puu.sh/36hJ changed
00:19:394 (2,3,4,5) - ^^
00:17:212 (6) - add whistle?nah
00:22:666 (1,2) - remove (1) NC and Add (2) NC?^
00:25:939 (4) - add whistle on ending of slider?^
01:24:303 (2) - left 2 lv4 grid k

[normal]
00:26:485 (x) - add a note and add clap? ok, whistle instead of clap
00:32:485 (2) - remove clap? nah
00:33:031 (4) - add clap? clap on 00:34:666 (3) instead
00:25:939 (4) - slider end add clap? nah
00:42:303 (4) - add finish? ok
00:59:212 (2) - first fixed point of slider down 2 grid lv4？down 1
01:25:122 (4,5) - don't stack if possible leaving it for now
01:39:031 (4) - don't stack on (2) nah
01:43:394 (1,2) - make them symmetrical horizontallyk
01:47:212 (1) - remove finish and add whistle on ending of slider?k

Why same SV with Hard

[Hard]
00:15:575 (4) - right two lv4 gridmoved
00:34:940 (6) - ends at 00:35:212

BounceBabe wrote:

General

Tags: RPG RO BGM Game?

Easy

HP Drain: 3 k
AR: 3-4 ^
OD: 3-4 ^
Slider Tick Rate: 1^

A bit boring :s but everything seems fine :(

Normal

Circle Size: 4

Make the sliders looking more friendlier ._.

00:12:576 - add a circle? k
00:41:485 (1,2,3,4) - 10 Grids down moved down a bit
00:48:849 (1) - The spinner is useless here i thinki'll keep it for now
01:10:121 - Add a circle nah
01:19:122 (1) - Make this slider with 1/8 Divisor :s seems prettier till 01:19:394 - nah
01:19:939 (2) - this note 01:19:803 - here? nah
01:47:212 (1,2) - Remove those notes D: ok

Hard

Make the sliders looking more friendlier ._.

HP Drain: 5
OD: 4

00:21:576 (8) - New combo nah
00:35:757 (1) - Move it somewhere else but not over the last circle ok
00:37:939 (1) - ^ ok
00:48:849 (1) - Spinner <.<
00:50:894 (2) - 7 Grids up and 4 leftwhy?
00:56:212 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make sliders instead ..nah
01:10:667 (1) - Move it somewhere else but not over the last slider k
01:47:348 (1,2) - Remove them >.< ok

Dont like the mapping style so much... it's a bit messy
Try to make it prettier please D:

But you'll get a star from me

Dark_Ai wrote:

[Genarel]
Offset can be 848

[Easy]
00:37:393 (2,3) - 1 grid to right fixed
00:54:848 (2,3) - spacing^

[Normal]
00:50:485 (1) - Makes the slider so sounding better http://puu.sh/3fxK uhh...added a whistle
00:59:212 (2) - ^^

[Hard]
Look well :>


Get a Star~!! ;>

P.S. Sorry for little mod

Shiki wrote:

Hi~ Let's go!

[Easy]
00:41:485 (2,4) - Add whistle?
01:21:848 (2) - Add whistle?
It seems fine (:

[Normal]
00:13:940 (1) - Add whistle?
00:16:666 (2) - ^
00:25:940 (3) - ^
00:27:576 (3) - ^
00:29:757 (3) - ^
00:36:303 (3) - ^
00:38:485 (2) - ^
00:41:758 (2) - ^
00:54:848 (2) - Add whistle at its end.
00:55:939 (3) - ^
01:03:576 (2) - ^
01:38:758 (3) - Use whistle to replace the finish.

[Hard]
Spacing is too large imo. And there should be more sliders
Hitsound suggestions see Normal.
00:11:758 (5) - Whistle?
00:32:211 (6,7) - Replace them with a slider?
01:06:849 (3,4) - ^
01:10:667 (1,2) - ^
01:16:121 (6,7) - ^

Star~