This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年7月15日 at 20:04:03

Artist: Wotamin
Title: letter song
Source: doriko
Tags: vocaloid disoy hatsune miku karenying KiritanP
BPM: 126
Filesize: 5740kb
Play Time: 03:21
Difficulties Available:

1. Dis (3.29 stars, 234 notes)
2. KPY (4.84 stars, 447 notes)
3. Relaxing (1.61 stars, 170 notes)

Download: Wotamin - letter song
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Wotamin - letter song
10年後の私へ 今は幸せでしょうか？

no
- 2024 updated

Special thanks to karenying for Storyboard and Disoy for Dis difficulty.

Mapset:
Relaxing - Done
Dis - Done
KPY - Done
Storyboard - Done
Skin - Done

>~</

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nya 先star了 skin和sb待會給

全部取代就ok了
Download: SKIN&SB.rar

求Taiko

add KiritanP (きりたんP是Doriko的P名

[KPY]

开头钢琴段我觉得既然你80%都跟了钢琴为什么有些地方又要滑掉?

00:03:445 (5) - 减掉一个折返
00:04:160 (6) - add a note
00:09:636 (2) - 改成1/2slider
00:12:017 (3,4) - 这两个都后移1/2
00:12:969 (1) - 改成1/2slider或者折返或者slider+note
00:16:779 (2) - 减掉折返 换成两个note或者1个都随便你
00:18:683 (7) - ^
00:52:255 (4) - 还是补个note比较好不然很空

00:59:398 (x) - add note
00:59:874 (x) - ^
01:00:350 (x) - ^
01:00:826 (x) - ^
01:01:064 (x) - 往后移1/2
01:02:017 (x)- add note

01:10:826 (4) - 增加1/2长度 并且如果是我这里会用0.5x
01:14:636 (7) - ^
01:15:350 (2) - a明显在红线 我觉得没道理这样带过去 改成1/2slider+note吧
01:21:064 (4) - 整个都是跟随vocal走可是为什么要在这里反而带掉?跟前面的方法类似就不多说了
01:27:255 (1,2,3,4) - 这边加的很违和 想加2连这样的也不是这么加的 改成这样
01:33:207 (8) - 结束的地方后移1/2 spin随着改
01:45:469 (9) - 后移1/4或者删掉 加在这里违和感
01:47:731 (4) - 这边开始的节奏是轻快 而钢琴是长重音 感觉整个反掉了 大概这样加比较贴

02:13:683 (8) - 增加1/2长度 同前面一样
其他都跟前面一样 不多说了

02:24:993 (7,8,9) - 这边也是违和感 7带掉了红线的重音和wo的起音 8带掉了钢琴的音
02:42:255 (2,3,4,5,6) - 同前面一样 我搞不懂你这么下的原因

02:58:440 (1) - i是轻的ma是重且长音 为什么要带掉

[Dis]
00:38:683 (2) - spacing



其他没什么了

goodbye wrote:

add KiritanP (きりたんP是Doriko的P名

[KPY]

开头钢琴段我觉得既然你80%都跟了钢琴为什么有些地方又要滑掉?

00:03:445 (5) - 减掉一个折返
00:04:160 (6) - add a note
00:09:636 (2) - 改成1/2slider
00:12:017 (3,4) - 这两个都后移1/2
00:12:969 (1) - 改成1/2slider或者折返或者slider+note make it on purpose
00:16:779 (2) - 减掉折返 换成两个note或者1个都随便你
00:18:683 (7) - ^ 這個加了折返感覺會自然一點
00:52:255 (4) - 还是补个note比较好不然很空

00:59:398 (x) - add note 不行啦..這裏人聲off掉了,打起來會對不上vocal.
00:59:874 (x) - ^Same.
01:00:350 (x) - ^..
01:00:826 (x) - ^..
01:01:064 (x) - 往后移1/2
01:02:017 (x)- add note

01:10:826 (4) - 增加1/2长度 并且如果是我这里会用0.5x I'm follow the vocal here.
01:14:636 (7) - ^^
01:15:350 (2) - a明显在红线 我觉得没道理这样带过去 改成1/2slider+note吧
01:21:064 (4) - 整个都是跟随vocal走可是为什么要在这里反而带掉?跟前面的方法类似就不多说了
01:27:255 (1,2,3,4) - 这边加的很违和 想加2连这样的也不是这么加的 改成这样

SPOILER

01:33:207 (8) - 结束的地方后移1/2 spin随着改
01:45:469 (9) - 后移1/4或者删掉 加在这里违和感
01:47:731 (4) - 这边开始的节奏是轻快 而钢琴是长重音 感觉整个反掉了 大概这样加比较贴

SPOILER

02:13:683 (8) - 增加1/2长度 同前面一样 這裏我跟vocal.
其他都跟前面一样 不多说了

02:24:993 (7,8,9) - 这边也是违和感 7带掉了红线的重音和wo的起音 8带掉了钢琴的音 Fixed in another way.
02:42:255 (2,3,4,5,6) - 同前面一样 我搞不懂你这么下的原因

02:58:440 (1) - i是轻的ma是重且长音 为什么要带掉

Thanks.all fixed without red word.Dis diff will be fixed by Disoy

fix~^ ^
加油~XDD

Download: Wotamin - Letter song (kanpakyin) [Dis].osu

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[general]
Tag vocaloid? :3 It can't be searched via "vocaloid"
close countdown in [Dis]
Why naming the diff [KPY] in your own map? xD

[SB]
display SB in front of combo fire?

[timing]
02:53 - You moved the beat 4 ms backward with a red line... try to move all notes before 02:53 4 ms backward and delete that red timing line?
More uncertainty about the later red line, try to find some timing expert for it?

[KPY]
00:20:584 (1) - remove finish here...?
00:33:917 (1) - + finish...?
00:48:914 (4) - [Nazi] up a bit
00:50:584 (5,6,7) - a (o~o)oo (slider-triplet) rhythm fits with (2,3) better than triplet-slider?
00:52:965 (3) - it should be louder than usual? ._.
01:06:298 (4) - finish as you have done in next next combo?
01:37:727 (8) - +whistle also to fit the melody
01:41:536 (8) - ^
01:48:917 (7,9) - +whistle?
02:00:584 (6,7) - why only 3 ticks for (6) and 5 ticks for (7) 0.0
02:21:298 (4) - remove finish, put a whistle there?
02:46:156 (4,5,6) - try triplet-slider? and (7,8,9) still feels a bit odd to me orz

[Dis] <- this diff ends at differernt time with [KPY] and [Relaxing], try to fix this?
no problem with it, just try to put more whistle in the beginning part? ._.

[Relaxing]
no problem for me.

nice music and SB~ :3 the girl is so lonely ;w;
BTW can the girl image in spinner overlap with the BG?

hi

[Relaxing]
00:36:779 (3) - voice down ?
01:33:921 (1,1) - too far

[Dis]
02:56:059 (4,1,2) -

[KPY]
fine

sorry , can't find anything more ;_;
nice map >w<

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
Tag vocaloid? :3 It can't be searched via "vocaloid" Fixed
close countdown in [Dis] Fixed
Why naming the diff [KPY] in your own map? xD Because disoy use dis as his diff's name,so I use kpy to comsistent.

[timing]
02:53 - You moved the beat 4 ms backward with a red line... try to move all notes before 02:53 4 ms backward and delete that red timing line?
More uncertainty about the later red line, try to find some timing expert for it? woll be checked by other one.

[KPY]
00:20:584 (1) - remove finish here...? Fixed
00:33:917 (1) - + finish...? Seem bad if I add it.
00:48:914 (4) - [Nazi] up a bit Fixed
00:50:584 (5,6,7) - a (o~o)oo (slider-triplet) rhythm fits with (2,3) better than triplet-slider? X.It's fine now.
00:52:965 (3) - it should be louder than usual? ._. Fixed
01:06:298 (4) - finish as you have done in next next combo? Fixed
01:37:727 (8) - +whistle also to fit the melody X,a clap is more appropriate
01:41:536 (8) - ^ ^
01:48:917 (7,9) - +whistle? Fixed
02:00:584 (6,7) - why only 3 ticks for (6) and 5 ticks for (7) 0.0 X.add a new combo may better.
02:21:298 (4) - remove finish, put a whistle there? Fixed
02:46:156 (4,5,6) - try triplet-slider? and (7,8,9) still feels a bit odd to me orz X.It's fine.

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Relaxing]
00:36:779 (3) - voice down ? Fixed
01:33:921 (1,1) - too far Fixed

Thanks for modded guys.

偷懒了XD

Download: skin.rar

....无需多说

>w</

對了 最高難度的最後一個spinner好像沒對好時間軸喔...D:

Hi KPY~
Sorry to late.

[General]

1. Creator's Words
   10年後の私へ 今は幸せでしょか？
   ↓
   10年後の私へ 今は幸せでしょうか？
   
2. Tags
   Add "KiritanP" to Dis's one.

[Relaxing]

1. 00:14:874 (2) - How about changing it like this?
   
2. 02:24:874 (4) - ^

[Dis]

1. 00:15:826 (4,5) - I know you put them following chorus. However I think that players can't hear the chorus while playing so I recommend you to put it following piano.
   
2. 00:52:017 (5) - Add whistle at start of slider?
3. 00:59:636 (1) - Remove whistle?

[KPY]

1. 00:05:112 (x) - Add a note.
2. 01:21:064 (4) - How about this pattern to follow vocal?
   
3. 01:35:945 (x) - Add a note and stack (3) and it with 01:36:064 (4)?
   
4. 01:51:540 (6) - New combo?
5. 03:19:714 (6) - lol variable BPM? It's hard to hit but it's playable imo

How sweet mapset <3
And moving SB
I'm looking forward to this beatmap will be ranked~!

Suzully wrote:

[General]

1. Creator's Words
   10年後の私へ 今は幸せでしょか？
   ↓
   10年後の私へ 今は幸せでしょうか？ Fixed
   
2. Tags
   Add "KiritanP" to Dis's one. Fixed

[Relaxing]

1. 00:14:874 (2) - How about changing it like this?
   Fixed
2. 02:24:874 (4) - ^ X.not here sorry.

[KPY]

1. 00:05:112 (x) - Add a note. Fixed
2. 01:21:064 (4) - How about this pattern to follow vocal? X.I think it's okey here.
   [attachment=2:26ffc]screenshot133.jpg[/attachment:26ffc]
3. 01:35:945 (x) - Add a note and stack (3) and it with 01:36:064 (4)? X,orz..no.
   [attachment=1:26ffc]screenshot134.jpg[/attachment:26ffc]
4. 01:51:540 (6) - New combo? Fixed
5. 03:19:714 (6) - lol variable BPM? It's hard to hit but it's playable imo I have to do that due to offset changed T_T

Thanks for modding.

QAQ letter song

By KPY's mod4mod

[Relaxing]
00:08:683 (2) - 有點跑掉0.0? 往右上各1個grid試試看(size 4)

[Dis]
All good

[KPY]
AR=7比較剛好
00:03:445 (5) - 要斜的還是直的0.0? 因為只差一格grid(size 4)
00:18:683 (6) - lol奇怪圖形阿...其實我是覺得有點不適合啦
01:00:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這邊做成正方形會更漂亮
02:40:112 (4,5,6) - 這個沒有做的很好看 問題應該是出在(5)上
03:21:694 - 可以放些note到03:23:645 -再放些轉盤...結尾改到03:25:523 -這樣比較比較合適[IMO]


結論:該死~你做的map質量那麼高 我怎麼忍心挑你毛病阿>"<

spboxer3 wrote:

[Relaxing]
00:08:683 (2) - 有點跑掉0.0? 往右上各1個grid試試看(size 4) X,一直都沒開grid排..

[KPY]
AR=7比較剛好 Fixed.
00:03:445 (5) - 要斜的還是直的0.0? 因為只差一格grid(size 4) X,和直的沒差.
00:18:683 (6) - lol奇怪圖形阿...其實我是覺得有點不適合啦 換了.
01:00:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這邊做成正方形會更漂亮 X,1.2.3.5是正方形阿..
02:40:112 (4,5,6) - 這個沒有做的很好看 問題應該是出在(5)上 其實也沒差啊..
03:21:694 - 可以放些note到03:23:645 -再放些轉盤...結尾改到03:25:523 -這樣比較比較合適[IMO] X,因為Timing不確定,所以不map是比較好..

Thanks for modding.

fix!~XD

Download: Wotamin - Letter song (kanpakyin) [Dis].osu

嘛～你是群里的本来就不用来queue啊！
我只是随意看看

皮肤文件缺少hit300g.png和spinner-metre.png
spinner-circle.png没有对准中心。我调了半天就是差那半个像素。最好重新做下吧～

[KPY]
00:22:493 (1) - remove finish here ?
00:33:921 (1) - finish
00:38:683 (5) - 把finish改到开头的圈上
01:02:017 (6) - remove finish
01:40:588 (4) - finish at start
//结尾那堆红线略感莫名其妙

others are all fine

Great song,KD star~

EDIT:这是我的第200贴呢～mark个

xykbear wrote:

皮肤文件缺少hit300g.png和spinner-metre.png
spinner-circle.png没有对准中心。我调了半天就是差那半个像素。最好重新做下吧～

hit300g.png 在附件spinner-metre.png 我應該給了 沒的話in-game找我
至於spinner-circle.png 一般都不會有人在意的 大丈夫萌大奶
ok

star ~

xykbear wrote:

[KPY]
00:22:493 (1) - remove finish here ? Fixed
00:33:921 (1) - finish X.
00:38:683 (5) - 把finish改到开头的圈上 X.
01:02:017 (6) - remove finish Fixed
01:40:588 (4) - finish at start X
//结尾那堆红线略感莫名其妙 你移走他看看,timing會有差.

Thanks for modding.

Oh yeah, I think you should skin the reverse arrow. The one I'm using is almost invisible, especially during kiai time. Obviously it depends on the skin, but you never know what skin someone will be using :/

if not, you can always just add the template ones lol. it'll look kinda bad tho i guess.

KPY

00:51:540 (2) - sounds better if you end this slider at 00:51:779 imo
01:20:826 (3,4) - switch these two notes around so combo 4 starts at 01:20:826 and combo 3 starts at 01:21:540?
01:42:493 (1,2,3) - perhaps follow the piano?
03:13:678 (1) - move combo 1 up so it isn't stacked on top of combo 2?

Dis

00:35:826 (3) - erm... i'm not sure if you should use it so much in the song.. oh well. Sometimes it fits really well, but other times, not really imo. D:
02:06:302 (2) - i don't think it should be this quiet. It's basically silenced as it stands right now.
02:53:917 (1) - from and on, lower the volume a bit?
03:19:714 (1,2) - switch combo 1 and 2 around to follow vocals more?
03:21:382 (x) - add note?

Relaxing

00:34:636 (1,2,3) - Combo two sounds really weird imo right now. Try something like this?:
00:55:826 (x) - sounds better if you add a note imo
01:17:255 (7) - idk if you should use this in the easiest diff. i guess it's ok.
01:51:064 (5) - use normal hitsound with only finish?

Awesome map! :3

Edit:

kanpakyin wrote:

01:20:826 (3,4) - switch these two notes around so combo 4 starts at 01:20:826 and combo 3 starts at 01:21:540? X,totally not agree.

I'm not exactly sure if you understood what I was trying to say. The way I was trying to make follows the vocals more. It just baffles me because you "totally" don't agree. If you just said I don't agree, I would not be questioning if you understood what I was trying to say. hmm... cuz I didn't say anything completely random... I'm just wondering why you "totally" disagree.

Edit 2: I was trying to say something like this. Do you completely disagree with this? Well if you do, then ok. I'm just wondering. Sorry to bother you D:

winber1 wrote:

Oh yeah, I think you should skin the reverse arrow. The one I'm using is almost invisible, especially during kiai time. Obviously it depends on the skin, but you never know what skin someone will be using :/

if not, you can always just add the template ones lol. it'll look kinda bad tho i guess. Leave to karenying,however player can removed the skin by themselves,so I thin k it's not a problem.

KPY

00:51:540 (2) - sounds better if you end this slider at 00:51:779 imo X.
01:20:826 (3,4) - switch these two notes around so combo 4 starts at 01:20:826 and combo 3 starts at 01:21:540? X,totally not agree.
01:42:493 (1,2,3) - perhaps follow the piano? X,nah.
03:13:678 (1) - move combo 1 up so it isn't stacked on top of combo 2? X,It's follow the lyric.

Relaxing

00:34:636 (1,2,3) - Combo two sounds really weird imo right now. Try something like this?:

SPOILER

[attachment=0:221d6]screenshot068.jpg[/attachment:221d6]

X.It quite good now i think.
00:55:826 (x) - sounds better if you add a note imo Fixed
01:17:255 (7) - idk if you should use this in the easiest diff. i guess it's ok. X,it's fine.
01:51:064 (5) - use normal hitsound with only finish? Finxed in another way~

Thanks for modding

Edit:Well,fixed.