Charles445 wrote:

Teta
Nice one!

Charles445 wrote:

Ozzy's Portaikol
The insanely hard parts seem random and out of place.
You could use more finishes :O

Download: Jonathan Coulton & GLaDOS - Want You Gone (SapphireGhost) [Ozzy's Portaikol].osu

1. 00:45:940 (1,2,3,4,5) - Unsnapped~
2. 00:48:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Well, I don't understand to reason for which you made those sliders and note unsnapped in that way. Anyway, I tried to fix and seems that works pretty good if you place the 00:48:440 (1) on 00:48:490; the 00:48:840 (3) on 00:48:790; the end of this slider 00:49:240 (4) on 00:49:540; the start of this slider 00:50:240 (6) on 00:50:140 and the end 00:50:440.
3. 00:51:840 (5,6) - Please snap these notes so that they will be placed on the blue ticks.
4. 00:52:840 (1) - The slider lenght is erred
5. 00:56:840 (6) - Unsnapped~
6. 00:58:840 (2) - Erred slider lenght.
7. 00:59:440 (3) - ^
8. 00:59:440 (3,5) - ^
9. 01:36:940 (4,5) - This is a bit trippy in my opinion. The distance between the hitcircle (4) and the slider (5) let the player think that the pattern is following a 1/2 rhythm, but it's not so. Fix by crossing (4) and (5) like this.
10. 01:45:640 (?) - I think you should add a note here with finish-hitsound.
11. 01:54:640 (3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is weird and ugly. Please make it in a better way.
12. 02:11:440 (1,1) - I think that the jump between these notes ruin the map since it has a really relaxing rhythm and you all mapped this song by following it. So I think you should reduce that jump.

1. 00:56:440 (3) - Why don't you silence the end of this slider? It would be more catchy in my opinion.
2. 01:34:840 ~ 01:36:040 - I think you should map this part.
3. 01:37:690 (?) - Add a slider here and let it end on 01:37:990

1. This difficulty has a different preview time comparing to other difficulties' ones. Please fix it.
2. Overall Difficulty -1.
3. Circle Size : Large?
4. 00:18:940 (5) - Distance error ._.
5. 00:27:340 (5) - ^
6. 00:28:840 (1) - This is placed in a bad location in my opinion. Just move it some grids away from 00:27:340 (5).
7. 01:08:140 (5) - Distance error.

1. Circle Size : Large?
2. 00:45:940 (1) - Let it finish on 00:47:440. [If you do that you should pay attention on the distance with 00:48:340 (2)]

1. Tags: Remove 'Derekku' since he is not in the collab anymore. Free kudosu \o/
2. Preview Time is not the same for all the diffs. (Normal & Taiko)
3. The 2nd Combo Colour looks more like Pink than Orange, try this one: '248,184,52'
4. Taiko: The BG doesn't show the 'Map by OzzyOzrock' part while playing, is this intended?

1. 01:26:740 (1) - I would start this spinner 1/2 earlier, it fits better the music than the vocals.
2. Quite nice, my only complaint here is that the hitsounds were a bit iffy, sometimes it sounds too empty, sometimes the claps are not fitting, sometimes the whistles are placed too close to each other, well nothing too important.

1. 00:18:940 (5) - I find this circle too hard to hit and read for [Normal]. I strongly suggest to remove this circle and then add a repeat to this slider: 00:18:040 (4) -
2. 01:18:940 (1) - This jumps was too unexpected imo. Use distance snap like you did with the previous pattern like this one (00:38:140 (1)) the jump is too big for [Normal].
3. I didn't like the design of this diff much, most of the sliders could be improved a lot, same for the pattern design. Many of the sliders were overlapping each other, this could be easily avoided. Read this guide and see if you can improve some of the sliders included in your diff.

1. 00:38:140 (1,2,3) - Whoa... this spacing. It wasn't too bad while playing, but it's still a bit confusing. I'm almost sure that this wasn't intentional, you just forgot to flip (2) again. Also, (2) looks cramped, try something like this.
2. 01:26:740 (1) - Same as [Easy] I think this spinner fits more the music than the vocals, you should start it 1/2 earlier.
3. Awesome, I don't see any major problems here.

1. Perhaps, re-name it to 'Potato Collab'?
2. (Teta)--------00:33:040 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would remove (7) from this stream, it doesn't sound good, it feels kinda off.
3. (Animask)----00:47:440 (X) - I totally expected a circle here, it fits perfectly the vocals. I strongly suggest to add it.
4. (Animask)----00:52:240 (X) - Same here ^
5. (Animask)----00:57:040 (X) - Yeah, I'm still convinced that those circles would fit perfectly this part of the song.
6. (-Kevincela-)-01:21:340 (5) - You should make this slider end 1/2 earlier to match the other diffs, it sounds better too, so consider doing it.
7. (Lilac)---------01:34:840 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stream sounds a bit empty, you should add some hitsounds. Some soft whistles should be enough but alternating with the 'Normal Override' would make it sounds awesome.
8. (Behonkiss)--01:56:440 - Why the sudden change to 'Soft Override' the music didn't change, it's the same as 01:46:840 - where you used the 'Normal Override' you should use the same 'Hitsounds Override' if the music is the same, otherwise it doesn't make sense. 02:00:040 - This could be a great place to switch to the 'Soft Override'.
9. I was quite 'awesome and odd' at the same time to see those vocals/rhythms mapped in completely different way by every mapper in this Collab.

Gonzvlo wrote:

[Collab Potato]

1. (-Kevincela-)-01:21:340 (5) - You should make this slider end 1/2 earlier to match the other diffs, it sounds better too, so consider doing it. You're right,fixed

Gonzvlo wrote:

[Collab Potato][list]
[*](Teta)--------00:33:040 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would remove (7) from this stream, it doesn't sound good, it feels kinda off.
There is a beat there, remove (7) and listen at 50% speed. So yeah, not removing it~ ♪ •n•

animask wrote:

I wasn't mapping the vocals there or at any of those parts.

Not Changing.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

YOU CAN DO IT SAPPHY