Wiinter wrote:

Animelover's Nordic 5 [Insane]
00:08:619 (8) - new combo yep
00:10:676 (14) - ^ nope
01:00:558 (6) - ^ nope

Video,0,"Hetalia_Nordic_5_Ban_Ban_Boo.avi"

Aleks719 wrote:

Animelover's Nordic 5
01:10:676 - imho, kiai must start here yup
01:32:615 - ... and finish here um.. it already does?
01:27:130 (1,2,3) - 2 grid right, 1 grid up done
check your timing points, they are sometimes inaccurate fixed

arien666 wrote:

[Animelover's Nordic 5]
This map has different source from other diffs ;_; fixed
00:32:444 (1,2,3) - Spacing ;_; fixed
01:12:730 (4,5,6,7) - Err? ztrot-spacing or issue :3?

H-boy wrote:

the.osb file is useless

animelover1432 wrote:

H-boy wrote:

the.osb file is useless

MATs and BATS aren't going to care about that anymore. its useless, but an empty .osb is really small

H-boy wrote:

It useless,so we need del it You don't need to delete it, It's just silly to make a full submission to remove less than 1kb.

1. Offset is different for Insane, fix this.
2. Offset: try 732, It sounds better imo, I'm not an expert tho.
3. You need to add the following files to avoid "skin mixing" : "approachcircle." , "scorebar-bg" and "scorebar-colour". (Remember that you can use the template skin elements).
4. I suggest to make "Spinner-approachcircle" a bit darker so it's more visible.

1. 00:47:876 (4) - This slider is not following the correct rhythm, move it 1/2 earlier.
2. 00:51:819 (X) - Place a spinner here like you did with the next pattern. (Spinner ends here: 00:53:876 - )
3. 00:56:962 (1) - This spinner is kinda short for Easy, try finishing it here: 00:58:333.
4. 01:01:076 (2,1) - It's so easy to avoid this overlap, try this.

1. 00:47:362 (4) - Add a circle here:00:47:362 - and Move the slider 1/2 later.Like this
2. 00:48:562 (X) - Also I felt a missing note here.
3. 01:05:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - Keep spacing consistent (!), Fix spacing for (4)~(5).
4. 01:20:276 (3) - Mmm no, this circle is under the last 2 sliders, move it somewhere else.
5. 01:27:133 (1,2) - The same problem with this 2 circle, the last slider is covering those circles, you need to move the slider or those circles.
6. 01:37:419 (3,4) - Fix Spacing here, Why don't you add a repeat to (3) and delete (4) ?

1. 00:38:105 (1) - Random New Combo, remove it.
2. 00:48:733 (5) - Definitely "Finish" please.
3. 00:48:905 - This break is too short, and the song is short too, so placing this break is just silly, Plus Normal and Easy don't have this break, it's kinda illogical for Hard to have it. So continue mapping over this break.
4. 00:54:390 - ^
5. 00:59:362 (6) - Stack this correctly (!)
6. 01:07:762 (X) - Shouldn't a circle be here?
7. 01:43:590 (1) - Unstack this please, It looks ugly imo.

1. I highly suggest to remove "[Insane]" from the diffs name, Because: it's too long and "Denmark" or "Norway" , etc. doesn't look like this: "Denmark [Hard]" , Oh also it's totally unnecessary.
2. You should check the diff and consider removing some ugly "Color Stacking"
3. Other than and some "New Combo" spam (Some of those doesn't fit imo) I don't have major complains with this diff.

Gonzvlo wrote:

Animelover's Nordic 5 [Insane]

1. I highly suggest to remove "[Insane]" from the diffs name, Because: it's too long and "Denmark" or "Norway" , etc. doesn't look like this: "Denmark [Hard]" , Oh also it's totally unnecessary.
2. You should check the diff and consider removing some ugly "Color Stacking"
3. Other than and some "New Combo" spam (Some of those doesn't fit imo) I don't have major complains with this diff.

Good Luck and have a star.

ziin wrote:

[images]
Anime1935.png - Aspect Ratio is more important to me than 1024x768. Make it 4:3 properly or don't do it at all.Um no, I like it the way it is.
combobursts - I guess I can do these for you. http://puu.sh/PyXSorry, I actually like that outline.
denmark_CD_character.png - seriously aspect ratio.Fine as is
go.png - you could make one for this...No thank you.
ready.png - ^^
hit.png - please look through these on a black background and then a white background. Make sure there's nothing you missed (you did).Done~
hit100.png - some people like to tell what they actually scored on the note, and the easiest way to do that is to have clear color differences. hit100 and hit300 are virtually the same. Please do with 100 what you did with 50 (but a different color, perhaps with some transparency).Done
hit300g.png - this is just annoying.Sorry, but I like it the way it is.
norway+iceland.png - save it as an 85-95 quality jpg. to reduce it down to ~1/4th its size right now.I like it the way it is.
pause-overlay.png - ^I like it the way it is
scorebarki.png - these aren't on the same pixels.Done
spinner-approachcircle.png - please anti-alias the edges with either a fuzzy select/feather tool or an ellipse tool turned on.Um, it looks just fine?
spinner-background.png - unsure of how this works, but spinner-background.png in the template skin is 1023x692I like it the way it is
spinner-circle.png - the inside isn't centered, and the blue edge has aliasing.This spinner isn't even mine, it was borrowed from a ranked map.

[denmark]
00:18:562 (1,1,1,etc...) - doesn't fit. You can make them sliders if you really want, but don't put a finish on the end.Done

arien666 wrote:

This map has different source from other diffs ;_;

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[General]
[Norway + Iceland]
At the beginning, maybe the hitsounds should be Done~
00:13:076 (1,2,3,4) - Finish, clap, finish, clap Done~
00:15:819 (1,2,3) - SFinsh Efinish+clap, normal sound whistle, normal sound whistle Done~
00:21:991 (4) - clap Done~
00:22:676 (1,2) - Sclap Eclap, clap? Done~

All a suggestion, it just sounds better to me.

eh, during the verses, don't overuse the finish orz I tried

Also, a lot of your spacing is done in such a way that may conceive the player to think that it's coming earlier. Which is bad. Fix that. I tried

[Sweden + Finland]
Eeeeh, it's alright, but you also have a few spacing errors. Just look for spacing that is... not the same as the rest. I tried

[Denmark]
Mmm, it's alright.

I didn't like the stacking in 1/4 parts you had at all, but they're ok. Just a suggestion for one of them:
01:48:733 (7) - rather than stacking it, why not just continue the stream? Done~

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Sweden+Finland]
01:17:362 (2) - Move to 01:17:190 (2) (1/2 Earlier)No.
01:17:533 (x) - Add 1/1 Slider ( end to 01:17:876 )No.
Everything else I did~

TheVileOne wrote:

General
nordic is in tags twice.
Remove Ban boo video from tags.

Norway

00:31:248 - Why no note? Done

01:01:076 (2) - This slider is going to invade the scoreboard in multiplayer. I would rather this be changed, because its annoying when notes do this. Done

01:23:019 (2) - This absolutely needs to be moved back to 01:22:847 - That's where the sound is. Done

You'll need to add a note here 01:23:362 - to complete the beat. Done

This plays perfect

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/66812 Done

Sweden

00:41:876 (3,4,5,6) - This doesn't play right to me. I don't think the notes do the beat any good. Maybe if you adjusted the notes to use two repeat sliders like this. Done

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/66815

Make sure you test it if you try to use it. I make mistakes too.

00:47:362 (4,5) - Stack? Done

01:37:419 (3,4) - This doesn't play right. I suggest removing 4 and adding a repeat to 3. Done

Denmark
I love this difficulty.

00:42:733 - Add note Done

Nordic 5

01:20:615 (9,10) - Ugh just add another repeat to the 9 and delete 10. Why have annoying things like this? Done




Absolutely amazing song and maps. Have a kudosu star.

Celeste76 wrote:

TheVileOne wrote:

[b]Nordic 5

01:20:615 (9,10) - Ugh just add another repeat to the 9 and delete 10. Why have annoying things like this? Done

Mint Bunny wrote:

Why did you do my part? at least let me see if it fits first

Celeste76 wrote:

I did your part because you don't seem really interested in this map anymore

Mint Bunny wrote:

Celeste76 wrote:

I did your part because you don't seem really interested in this map anymore

um, how?

well, whatever.
Fixed some things and things and things.
[attachment=0:3a3a3]Hatsune Miku - Ban Ban Boo (Celeste76) [Animelover's Nordic 5 [Insane]].osu[/attachment:3a3a3]
Oh and please change animelover1432 background to a "Mint Bunny" one

And replace the tags with these: Hetalia Axis Powers Nordic Norway Iceland Sweden Denmark Finland 5 Video animelover1432 APH Mint Bunny

make sure all diffs have the same tags

Aleks719 wrote:

General
4 unused *.osb files. Please remove it + full submit

Guest diff is shorter then others, maybe make end of diff like in creator easy diff?
Two Insanes longer than Normal diffs or make all diffs with a same length...

Norway + Iceland
What about distance snap?
I made 2x100 here and didn't can understand why. But I opened editor I saw why xD
Please, make Easy diff with distance snapping.
Try to avoid this : prev 1.05x , next 0.65x , but usually you used 0.8x here.

SPOILER

I'll write about that I see momentarily, I suggest recheck all diff.
01:20:276 (4,5) - distance
01:23:362 (3,4) - ^
Other here is good for me.
For this whole suggestion, I had Mint Bunny go over it with me and stuff. We did fix a lot of spacing errors. I did some more, though just for the sake of this.

Sweden + Finland
Hp drain here like in Denmark. Make it -1 maybe? Done
00:32:105 (x) - add note + whistle ? Done
00:42:562 (4) - add whistle to the end of slider Done
01:12:390 (5) - ^ Done
01:16:162 (1) - add whistle to the start and add finish to the end Done
01:17:362 (2) - add whistle, remove clap Done
01:18:219 (3) - add finish, remove clap Done
01:25:076 (3) - add whistle to the reverse, remove clap from the reverse Done
01:38:790 (2) - remove clap from the reverse Done
01:39:476 (3) - remove clap from the start Done
01:40:162 (4) - remove claps from the start and reverse, add clap to the end Done
01:40:847 (1) - remove clap, add finish Done
01:41:190 (2) - add clap Done
01:41:533 (3) - remove clap Done
01:41:876 (4) - add clap Done
01:42:219 (5) - remove clap from the start, add finish to the start, add clap to the end Done
01:42:904 (6) - ^ Done

And a bit nazi, minor suggestions :
01:38:104 (1,2,3,4) - this sliders is not parallel x) Fixed
01:40:162 (4,1) - little overlap here Fixed

Denmark
00:47:362 (1) - add whistle to the end
00:47:876 (2) - add whistle to the start and to the end, remove clap from the end
00:48:562 (4) - add whistle
01:20:276 (5) - add finish to the start
01:20:962 (7) - ^
01:21:304 (8) - ^
92648 [T] - your Kiai ends strange. Replace this point on to 01:32:447 (before spinner) or on to 01:33:990 (after spinner)
And so, CS:1 ... why? You don't have custom sounds in your map, fix it please. Fixed
Did everything~

Aleks719 wrote:

Guest diff is shorter then others, maybe make end of diff like in creator easy diff?

Animelover's Nordic 5 [Insane]
00:26:444 (5) - remove finish from the start, add whistle to the start added whistle to the finish, it makes a good effect, thank you~
00:36:730 (4,5) - stack this please or use distance. how did that even happen!? xD done
01:04:844 (1) - 0.5x points inside slider, make it 0.5x fully oO" what do you mean?
01:07:072 (5,6,7,8) - 1/2 beats, but distance is different. Make new combo or keep distance done
01:10:672 (1) - remove clap from the start, add whistle to the start added whislte but keps clap
01:11:358 (4) - ^ added whislte but keps clap
01:20:615 (9) - add whistle to the end done
01:23:015 (1) - remove clap from the start, add whistle to the start, add clap to the end done

Mint Bunny wrote:

01:04:844 (1) - 0.5x points inside slider, make it 0.5x fully oO" what do you mean?

Derekku wrote:

Denied kd for non-mod posts. Please only give kudosu to people that mod your map in some substantial way.

Aleks719 wrote:

Small suggestion without kd :
scorebar-ki
scorebar-kidanger
scorebar-kidanger2

Could you Cropped unused top of this skin elements ?
they are looking bad in-game now

kokoroanime wrote:

Hello!!!!

akrolsmir wrote:

Animelover's Nordic 5:
... Why are these sliders all Catmull sliders? That makes them kinda pointed and ugly. Open the .osu, and you'll see that sliders are marked with a C, while normal Bezier sliders such as those on other difficulties are marked with a B. Was this mapped before this was made impossible? Anyways, this is pretty important, fix this. woah woah woah! thank for pointing that out!

00:18:730 (1,4) - Not symmetric fixed~
00:39:301 (1) - Really jerky and awkward. I'm not sure this is rankable. fixed~
00:40:673 (1) - ^ mhmm~
01:07:072 (1,2,3,4) - Space this out, it otherwise it feels like it should be 1/4th notes. i like that anti-jump ^w^

akrolsmir wrote:

Norway+Iceland:
Done everything here

Sweden+Finland:
Done everything here

Denmark:
Done everything here

Mint Bunny wrote:

nya nya nya!
Guest diff name change and....

akrolsmir wrote:

Animelover's Nordic 5:
... Why are these sliders all Catmull sliders? That makes them kinda pointed and ugly. Open the .osu, and you'll see that sliders are marked with a C, while normal Bezier sliders such as those on other difficulties are marked with a B. Was this mapped before this was made impossible? Anyways, this is pretty important, fix this. woah woah woah! thank for pointing that out!

00:18:730 (1,4) - Not symmetric fixed~
00:39:301 (1) - Really jerky and awkward. I'm not sure this is rankable. fixed~
00:40:673 (1) - ^ mhmm~
01:07:072 (1,2,3,4) - Space this out, it otherwise it feels like it should be 1/4th notes. i like that anti-jump ^w^

Celeste76 wrote:

I'm actually trying to figure out how I can make your name in your diff pulse or something. I wanna make you all spiffy

rEdo wrote:

[Denmark]
0:57:990 (1,2,3) - are those notes following the music at all? i'd suggest leaving just the third circle, and extending the spinner by 1/2. Yes this is following the music. I like the way it is thanks.

MDuh wrote:

[Insane]

00:25:587 (1) - Far from center after spinner does that really matter? :< sorry, no.
01:49:244 (1) - Create Inherited points w/ Slowly decreasing volume here

MDuh wrote:

omg 10 months
anyways, here's the requested mod

[Norway + Iceland]
01:22:847 (2) - Move to 01:23:019? I like it that way.

p3n wrote:

good mapset!
~star

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~

General
I like you avatar *.* Thank you~
Disable count down on all diffs No thank you
Denmark
01:43:590 (1) - Change position No.

N+I
Rename to 'Easy'
OD-1 No.
HD-1 No.

00:32:105 (6) - Dont like this I do.
00:56:962 (1) - Short? Good the way it is.

Everything else looks cool.
Good luck~ star

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

Hi.. :3
i just can give some suggestion for you~

Norway+Iceland
- It is Easy or Normal? If it is EASY, This difficulty didn't feel easy enough...

00:59:705 (1,2,1,2) - IMO, These will confuse beginners... How?

Sweden+Finland

Denmark
-Overall Difficulty +1? No.

00:18:905 - why don't here put some note start from here o.O? It's supposed to match the music or something like that.
00:20:276 - ^ ^
01:31:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too more finish sound..A bit noisy~ I like it the way it is.
------
Nice Map
Hope you can get ranked
S-t-a-r!~!!!

winber1 wrote:

Denmark

Sweden + Finland

--Is this a normal diff?

00:59:705 (1,2,3,4,5) - If this is supposed to be a Normal difficulty, I wouldn't have this stack. It's just really hard for beginners to read, so I would space it out. If it's a hard difficulty, I guess it's fine.. i guess... It is a normal you know. And I like this pattern.

Norway + Iceland
00:32:105 (6) - move this note 1/2 tick later and fix spacing. This note doesn't really make any sense the in the curren spot it is in. I think it makes perfect sense there. Can't you hear it? It's going to the the soft whistle in the background.

Nice map! :3

Astom wrote:

o/
Some suggestions

[Skin]
-If you are gonna use template skin parts, then force it in all diff, because it's unnecesary copy them in your folder song (song setup->Storyboarding->Skinning->Default to force template skin) So do I just delete the copied elements afterwards?

[Norway + Iceland]
-00:31:591 (5,6,1,2), set a slider from 00:31:591 to 00:32:105 with one repeat, a circle in 00:32:962 and another one in 00:33:305, then a slider from 00:33:648 to 00:33:991 with one repeat and finally a slider from 00:34:676 to 00:35:019. No, sorry.

HellDawn wrote:

Norway-Iceland
00:33:991- This object is too cloose to the previous object. No it's not?
00:35:362- ^ Fixed
00:37:248- ^ ^
00:54:905-^ ^
00:47:019- far from the previous object ^

Sweden-Finland
00:41:705- Add a note Done
00:33:734-Concealed slider repeats I think it's just fine, but if someone else complains then I'll change it

00:55:591- ^ ^

Denmark
Hp Drain Rate -1 Done
Nice mapset!

352,216,70676,6,0,B|256:296|176:208,2,200,4|0|8

Zelos wrote:

Any mod is a suggestion and can be ignored


Sweden + Finland:
I like them that way
01:27:819 (3,5) - delete slider 5, copy slider 3 and paste it into slider 5s original position so it becomes stacked correctly again.
01:31:248 (1,1) - the 1/1 distance between this spinner and this note might be a bit hard for the Normal players to re-adjust there arms and hit in time. I think it's just fine...

352,216,70676,2,0,B|256:264|160:216,2,200,0|4|0

136,112,91248,5,4
72,160,91591,1,4
96,240,91934,1,4
176,240,92276,1,4
200,160,92619,1,4

280,72,87819,2,0,B|360:48|408:112,1,140,0|8
376,216,88505,2,0,B|296:240|248:176,1,140,0|8
280,72,89191,2,0,B|360:48|408:112,1,140,0|8

tutuhaha wrote:

Mint's Nordic 5 [Insane]
00:21:819 (2) - delete it and put there one circle and then move 3 and 4 on 00:21:991 and 00:22:334
and then add one ciecle on 00:22:676, listen better, right? What does that even mean? :<

tutuhaha wrote:

B....BL？！0口0.........
（¯﹃¯）b I like it, so nice~~~~~~~~APH APH lalalala~~~

Norway + Iceland
01:10:676 (3) - use this↓

352,216,70676,2,0,B|256:264|160:216,2,200,0|4|0

01:23:019 (2) - move 2 to there,too hard in easy No.
01:31:248 (1) - use this↓

136,112,91248,5,4
72,160,91591,1,4
96,240,91934,1,4
176,240,92276,1,4
200,160,92619,1,4

It's just fine.

Sweden + Finland
00:31:934 (7) - add one repeat(return) No.
00:55:248 (4) - .....Tail overlapping? I like it that way.
00:59:705 (1-5) - ....I really don't like this.....they look very crowded and ugly D:....... No.
01:02:448 (1-5) - ^^
01:17:362 (2) - change a slider end on 01:17:962 is best than this I think No.
01:27:819 (3) - use this ↓

280,72,87819,2,0,B|360:48|408:112,1,140,0|8
376,216,88505,2,0,B|296:240|248:176,1,140,0|8
280,72,89191,2,0,B|360:48|408:112,1,140,0|8

It's just fine.

Denmark
00:56:962 (1) - too short,change on slider or circle No.

Neptunus wrote:

Hey~
Denmark:
01:43:591 (1) - why suddenly put such interval ? I suggest long sliders in this area I like it the way I did it.
good luck on ranking~

eldnl wrote:

[General]

- I download the song with the video but this is not in the folder, please put the video in the folder and do a full submit. Also use the same video offset in all difficulties, in Denmark difficulty is different. There is no video...
- You use the same slider velocity in normal, hard and insane, you should fix it. Does it really matter?

[Denmark]

00:37:419 (7) I suggest to just add a repeat in (7) and delete (8), can't see the reason to make it harder. No.
00:56:962 - Really short spinner, also the next note is very close to the spinner, the player need recover the control of the cursor, more if is an unexpected short spin, strongly suggest to extend the spin to 00:59:362. Feels better. No.

[Sweden + Finland]

If this is the normal difficulty you should reduce the difficulty, I say:
OD-2 -1
00:55:934 (5,6) Add a repeat on (5) and delete (6), it's a little hard to read for beginners. It's just fine.
00:59:705 - Really hard pattern to be a normal difficulty, you should change it to something more readable for beginners. I like it that way.
01:32:962 (1) This note is very close to the spin, I suggest to delete this note. No.
01:42:905 (6,7) Just add a repeat in (6) and delete (7), don't try to make the easier difficulties more harder, make no sense. No.

[Norway + Iceland]
01:22:848 (2) Please don't put notes in the red ticks, it's hard to read for beginners, use a slider here, it's better. It's just fine.

That's all, star and good luck. (:

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

❤Hihi~! I was really shocked that u got soooooo many moddings..
❤anyways, start modding~! here we go~!

❤General

SPOILER

❤ actually the skin is good, but there are still some problems i think:
①http://puu.sh/8Qap this is to big. make it smaller or change it into something else.
②http://puu.sh/8QaG make these go up a little bit, since http://puu.sh/8Qb9,i think it is too low..
③http://puu.sh/8QbSthis is a llittle bit big compared to other maps. if this is what u want, nvm.
④add some decorations at the edgehttp://puu.sh/8QiB
❤For the diff names, i don't know if they are rankable or not since there's no indication of diff levels.

At the moment, I won't be able to fix anything about the skin since my photoshop stopped working. I might do it later though...

❤【Denmark】diff
00:45:991 (1,2,3,4) - move them to be more beautiful What do you mean about this one?
00:59:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same shape problem Doesn't really matter.
01:02:448 (1,2,3,4,5) - same shape problem This looks fine
01:27:133 (1,2) - how about put these two on the left top corner? It's fine.
01:28:505 (1,2) - if u did^, put this on the right bottom corner. ^
01:42:562 (3,4,5) - shape Looks fine to me
For all the shape problems, if u could make them all the same by copying, pasting and rotating the best shaped slider, i think u will get a better effect.

❤【Sweden + Finland】diff
btw, is it supposed to be a hard or a normal? It's a normal
if its a normal, OD -2, remove some notes if possible. if its a hard, u can HR+1or even +2 i think. I -1 on OD
00:55:248 (4,5) - shape and move the tails be on a same spot I tried.
❤【Norway + Iceland】diff
01:31:248 (1,2,3,4,5) - make the shape better like a star It's fine the way it is.
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Also for the hit sound,i think u should re-do it in some sections. be careful at some detailed parts such as the shape of a sliders. though they do not have big differences, it Does affect ur map. try to make them in same shapes if possible to see if it make u feel better.
Good Luck
Since I am a new modder, all the moddings are ONLY PERSONAL SUGGESTIONS.

wmfchris wrote:

Modding here:

[General]
- Your images are mainly in PNG form, and those like BG images can be in large size. Please change it into JPG to reduce the size a bit. I'll do that when I get on a different computer :3
- I think you will need about 1500/2000 audio lead in there. Is it all right if I ask what this means?
- If you maintain 3000 lead-in, switch on countdown for all diffs, otherwise close for all of them.

Well I don't get the meaning of difficulty names orz Oh, they're the names of the characters in the background xP

Mint Bunny wrote:

[attachment=0:a66e8]Hatsune Miku - Ban Ban Boo (Celeste76) [Mint's Nordic 5].osu[/attachment:a66e8]Sorry for the wait, did everything he suggested. Will change audio lead in when Celeste decides so it can be consistent.

wmfchris wrote:

Song setup -> audio -> music track - audio lead-in
osu! gameplay plays the song from 00:00:00. So if the music starts to early, players' reaction time for the first note may not be enough, then we need audio lead-in. If we hv 2000ms of audio lead-in, we have 2000ms of blank before music starts from 00:00:00. It's suggested that you should at least leave ~2-2.5 seconds before the first note comes.

Celeste76 wrote:

Mint Bunny wrote:

Sorry for the wait, did everything he suggested. Will change audio lead in when Celeste decides so it can be consistent.

I'm changing the audio lead in to 2000 :3