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Hatsune Miku - "Hetalia Nordic 5" Ban Ban Boo

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arien666
6,273 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[General]
Delete all 4 osb files. It's useless and crappy orz
Delete this code on all of osu files
Video,0,"Hetalia_Nordic_5_Ban_Ban_Boo.avi"

[Norway + Iceland]
Totally unsnapped ;_;
00:15:822 (1,2,3) - Random spacing ;_;
01:10:104 - Move this Kiai start into 01:10:676
01:21:651 (1) - You can make it with less dots :3
01:42:908 (1) - Delete 'new combo'

[Sweden + Finland [Normal+]]
Totally unsnapped ;_;
00:19:594 (4,5,6) - Spacing ;_;
00:27:822 (4) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid up and left?
01:14:451 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/43788 :3?
01:29:194 (5) - Make same as 01:27:822 (3)
01:33:651 (3,4,5) - Spacing ;_;

[Denmark]
Totally unsnapped ;_;
00:15:137 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing ;_;
00:33:308 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing ;_;
00:47:365 (5) - new combo
01:48:908 (1) - Move to 01:49:076

[Animelover's Nordic 5]
This map has different source from other diffs ;_;
00:32:444 (1,2,3) - Spacing ;_;
01:12:730 (4,5,6,7) - Err? ztrot-spacing or issue :3?



:3
Good luck orz

ps. No star yet sorry ;_;
Mint Bunny
273 posts
Joined December 2009
Mint Bunny

Aleks719 wrote:

Animelover's Nordic 5
01:10:676 - imho, kiai must start here yup
01:32:615 - ... and finish here um.. it already does?
01:27:130 (1,2,3) - 2 grid right, 1 grid up done
check your timing points, they are sometimes inaccurate fixed

arien666 wrote:

[Animelover's Nordic 5]
This map has different source from other diffs ;_; fixed
00:32:444 (1,2,3) - Spacing ;_; fixed
01:12:730 (4,5,6,7) - Err? ztrot-spacing or issue :3? 8-)
thanks for modding~

Download: Hatsune Miku - Ban Ban Boo (Celeste76) [Animelover's Nordic 5 [Insane]].osu
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
the.osb file is useless

Norway + Iceland

01:15:476(2) - move 1 grid right?(lv3)
01:16:162(1) - ^

Sweden + Finland [Normal+]

00:36:390(5) - spacing
00:43:590(2) - move 1 grid left(lv3)
00:43:933(3) - ^
00:44:276(1) - ^
01:06:391(5) - spacing
01:20:962(5) - move 1 grid left(lv3)
01:20:304(6) - ^
01:25:076(3) - make symmetric
01:34:333(5) - move 1 grid left(lv3)

Denmark

00:18:219(6) - spacing
00:59:362(6) - move 1 grid left(lv3)
01:20:276(6) - spacing

Animelover's Nordic 5
nothing

star
Mint Bunny
273 posts
Joined December 2009
Mint Bunny

H-boy wrote:

the.osb file is useless
MATs and BATS aren't going to care about that anymore. its useless, but an empty .osb is really small :P
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT

animelover1432 wrote:

H-boy wrote:

the.osb file is useless
MATs and BATS aren't going to care about that anymore. its useless, but an empty .osb is really small :P
It useless,so we need del it

but mostly it has just become a habit :P
Gonzvlo
osu! Alumni
2,896 posts
Joined January 2010
Gonzvlo

H-boy wrote:

It useless,so we need del it You don't need to delete it, It's just silly to make a full submission to remove less than 1kb.
===================================================================================

General
  1. Offset is different for Insane, fix this.
  2. Offset: try 732, It sounds better imo, I'm not an expert tho.
  3. You need to add the following files to avoid "skin mixing" : "approachcircle." , "scorebar-bg" and "scorebar-colour". (Remember that you can use the template skin elements).
  4. I suggest to make "Spinner-approachcircle" a bit darker so it's more visible.
Norway + Iceland
  1. 00:47:876 (4) - This slider is not following the correct rhythm, move it 1/2 earlier.
  2. 00:51:819 (X) - Place a spinner here like you did with the next pattern. (Spinner ends here: 00:53:876 - )
  3. 00:56:962 (1) - This spinner is kinda short for Easy, try finishing it here: 00:58:333.
  4. 01:01:076 (2,1) - It's so easy to avoid this overlap, try this.
Sweden + Finland
  1. 00:47:362 (4) - Add a circle here:00:47:362 - and Move the slider 1/2 later.Like this
  2. 00:48:562 (X) - Also I felt a missing note here.
  3. 01:05:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - Keep spacing consistent (!), Fix spacing for (4)~(5).
  4. 01:20:276 (3) - Mmm no, this circle is under the last 2 sliders, move it somewhere else.
  5. 01:27:133 (1,2) - The same problem with this 2 circle, the last slider is covering those circles, you need to move the slider or those circles.
  6. 01:37:419 (3,4) - Fix Spacing here, Why don't you add a repeat to (3) and delete (4) ?
Denmark
  1. 00:38:105 (1) - Random New Combo, remove it.
  2. 00:48:733 (5) - Definitely "Finish" please.
  3. 00:48:905 - This break is too short, and the song is short too, so placing this break is just silly, Plus Normal and Easy don't have this break, it's kinda illogical for Hard to have it. So continue mapping over this break.
  4. 00:54:390 - ^
  5. 00:59:362 (6) - Stack this correctly (!)
  6. 01:07:762 (X) - Shouldn't a circle be here?
  7. 01:43:590 (1) - Unstack this please, It looks ugly imo.
Animelover's Nordic 5 [Insane]
  1. I highly suggest to remove "[Insane]" from the diffs name, Because: it's too long and "Denmark" or "Norway" , etc. doesn't look like this: "Denmark [Hard]" , Oh also it's totally unnecessary.
  2. You should check the diff and consider removing some ugly "Color Stacking"
  3. Other than and some "New Combo" spam (Some of those doesn't fit imo) I don't have major complains with this diff.
Good Luck and have a star.
Mint Bunny
273 posts
Joined December 2009
Mint Bunny

Gonzvlo wrote:

Animelover's Nordic 5 [Insane]
  1. I highly suggest to remove "[Insane]" from the diffs name, Because: it's too long and "Denmark" or "Norway" , etc. doesn't look like this: "Denmark [Hard]" , Oh also it's totally unnecessary.
  2. You should check the diff and consider removing some ugly "Color Stacking"
  3. Other than and some "New Combo" spam (Some of those doesn't fit imo) I don't have major complains with this diff.
Good Luck and have a star.
k fixed somethingsDownload: Hatsune Miku - Ban Ban Boo (Celeste76) [Animelover's Nordic 5 [Insane]].osu
sorry for late reply >.<
ziin
2,632 posts
Joined January 2010
ziin
[images]
Anime1935.png - Aspect Ratio is more important to me than 1024x768. Make it 4:3 properly or don't do it at all.
combobursts - I guess I can do these for you. http://puu.sh/PyX
denmark_CD_character.png - seriously aspect ratio.
go.png - you could make one for this...
ready.png - ^
hit.png - please look through these on a black background and then a white background. Make sure there's nothing you missed (you did).
hit100.png - some people like to tell what they actually scored on the note, and the easiest way to do that is to have clear color differences. hit100 and hit300 are virtually the same. Please do with 100 what you did with 50 (but a different color, perhaps with some transparency).
hit300g.png - this is just annoying.
norway+iceland.png - save it as an 85-95 quality jpg. to reduce it down to ~1/4th its size right now.
pause-overlay.png - ^
scorebarki.png - these aren't on the same pixels.
spinner-approachcircle.png - please anti-alias the edges with either a fuzzy select/feather tool or an ellipse tool turned on.
spinner-background.png - unsure of how this works, but spinner-background.png in the template skin is 1023x692
spinner-circle.png - the inside isn't centered, and the blue edge has aliasing.

[denmark]
00:18:562 (1,1,1,etc...) - doesn't fit. You can make them sliders if you really want, but don't put a finish on the end.

[nordic 5]
00:14:444 (8) - I would HIGHLY recommend you put new combos on beat 1, like new combo here. They're all throughout this diff.
I liked everything else.
Mint Bunny
273 posts
Joined December 2009
Mint Bunny
did some major retouching
followed ziin's advice as well.Download: Hatsune Miku - Ban Ban Boo (Celeste76) [Animelover's Nordic 5 [Insane]].osu
Celeste76
63 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Celeste76

ziin wrote:

[images]
Anime1935.png - Aspect Ratio is more important to me than 1024x768. Make it 4:3 properly or don't do it at all.Um no, I like it the way it is.
combobursts - I guess I can do these for you. http://puu.sh/PyXSorry, I actually like that outline.
denmark_CD_character.png - seriously aspect ratio.Fine as is
go.png - you could make one for this...No thank you.
ready.png - ^^
hit.png - please look through these on a black background and then a white background. Make sure there's nothing you missed (you did).Done~
hit100.png - some people like to tell what they actually scored on the note, and the easiest way to do that is to have clear color differences. hit100 and hit300 are virtually the same. Please do with 100 what you did with 50 (but a different color, perhaps with some transparency).Done
hit300g.png - this is just annoying.Sorry, but I like it the way it is.
norway+iceland.png - save it as an 85-95 quality jpg. to reduce it down to ~1/4th its size right now.I like it the way it is.
pause-overlay.png - ^I like it the way it is
scorebarki.png - these aren't on the same pixels.Done
spinner-approachcircle.png - please anti-alias the edges with either a fuzzy select/feather tool or an ellipse tool turned on.Um, it looks just fine?
spinner-background.png - unsure of how this works, but spinner-background.png in the template skin is 1023x692I like it the way it is
spinner-circle.png - the inside isn't centered, and the blue edge has aliasing.This spinner isn't even mine, it was borrowed from a ranked map.

[denmark]
00:18:562 (1,1,1,etc...) - doesn't fit. You can make them sliders if you really want, but don't put a finish on the end.Done
narakucrimson
osu! Alumni
1,713 posts
Joined March 2010
narakucrimson
Woah I'm really late D: Sorry T_T


[Norway + Iceland]

35:705 (3) - Spacing (it's too short)
43:248 (1) - Same here. Remember to keep DS on.

You should map this till the end of the song :T


[Sweden + Finland [Normal+]] <-- What a long name owo

Woah too many spacing errors on AIMod

31:248 (5) - I kind of... don't like how this is stacked. Maybe you could Ctrl + R this slider and adjust it to it's new distance snapping (Ctrl + R is to Reverse the selected objects)
1:17:362 (2, 3) - Spacing again.
1:27:819 (3) - ^
1:39:133 (2) - Add a clap at the end of the slider.
1:40:162 (4) - ^

Again, maybe you should map it till the end n.n


[Denmark]

Idk, objects seem to be placed too randomly on the screen. That doesn't mean it can't be good, though :P

38:105 (1) - Spacing.

Better than the others


[Animelover's Nordic 5 [Insane]] <-- Woah, another huge name xD

arien666 wrote:

This map has different source from other diffs ;_;
I find it fun to play, but it is true that it's not consistent.

Also, it could be mapped till the end xD


That's all. I think I can star this :O
Good luck getting this ranked!
OzzyOzrock
5,185 posts
Joined August 2010
OzzyOzrock
[General]
I made a key which you'll use only once
S = Starting slider end
E = Ending slider end

[Norway + Iceland]
At the beginning, maybe the hitsounds should be
00:13:076 (1,2,3,4) - Finish, clap, finish, clap
00:15:819 (1,2,3) - SFinsh Efinish+clap, normal sound whistle, normal sound whistle
00:21:991 (4) - clap
00:22:676 (1,2) - Sclap Eclap, clap?

All a suggestion, it just sounds better to me.

eh, during the verses, don't overuse the finish orz

Also, a lot of your spacing is done in such a way that may conceive the player to think that it's coming earlier. Which is bad. Fix that.

[Sweden + Finland]
Eeeeh, it's alright, but you also have a few spacing errors. Just look for spacing that is... not the same as the rest.

[Denmark]
Mmm, it's alright.

I didn't like the stacking in 1/4 parts you had at all, but they're ok. Just a suggestion for one of them:
01:48:733 (7) - rather than stacking it, why not just continue the stream?

[Insane]
It's good (enough), but why is there a bookmark miles after the song ends? o.o

It's on the pause button.


whee
Celeste76
63 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Celeste76

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[General]
[Norway + Iceland]
At the beginning, maybe the hitsounds should be Done~
00:13:076 (1,2,3,4) - Finish, clap, finish, clap Done~
00:15:819 (1,2,3) - SFinsh Efinish+clap, normal sound whistle, normal sound whistle Done~
00:21:991 (4) - clap Done~
00:22:676 (1,2) - Sclap Eclap, clap? Done~

All a suggestion, it just sounds better to me.

eh, during the verses, don't overuse the finish orz I tried :)

Also, a lot of your spacing is done in such a way that may conceive the player to think that it's coming earlier. Which is bad. Fix that. I tried :)

[Sweden + Finland]
Eeeeh, it's alright, but you also have a few spacing errors. Just look for spacing that is... not the same as the rest. I tried :)

[Denmark]
Mmm, it's alright.

I didn't like the stacking in 1/4 parts you had at all, but they're ok. Just a suggestion for one of them:
01:48:733 (7) - rather than stacking it, why not just continue the stream? Done~
Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Crimmi
Modding, CrimmiStyle!!

Got ya PM Request ( Some polishing and nazing):

[Norway + Iceland]

00:15:819 (1) - align with (4).

[Sweden + Finland]

~ Nothing.

[Denmark]

00:45:990 (1) - Align with (3).

[Animelover's Nordic 5 [Insane]]

~ Nothing.

*Star*
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
[General]
Advice: use slidertick 2
[Norway+Iceland]
01:15:133 (x) - Add Hit Circle
01:19:247 (x) - ^
01:24:733 (x) - ^
01:30:219 (x) - ^
[Sweden+Finland]
01:17:362 (2) - Move to 01:17:190 (2) (1/2 Earlier)
01:17:533 (x) - Add 1/1 Slider ( end to 01:17:876 )
[Denmark]
00:25:591 (x,x,x) - Add 3 Hit Circle with 1/2 of distance in timeline that have Soft Whistle
00:26:276 (x) - Add Hit Circle + Hitsound Whistle
00:26:448 (3) - Make it 1/2 Longer, Normal Finish is better (start and end)

Star
Celeste76
63 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Celeste76

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Sweden+Finland]
01:17:362 (2) - Move to 01:17:190 (2) (1/2 Earlier)No.
01:17:533 (x) - Add 1/1 Slider ( end to 01:17:876 )No.
Everything else I did~
TheVileOne
osu! Alumni
8,431 posts
Joined March 2010
TheVileOne
General
nordic is in tags twice.
Remove Ban boo video from tags.

Norway

00:31:248 - Why no note?

01:01:076 (2) - This slider is going to invade the scoreboard in multiplayer. I would rather this be changed, because its annoying when notes do this.

01:23:019 (2) - This absolutely needs to be moved back to 01:22:847 - That's where the sound is.

You'll need to add a note here 01:23:362 - to complete the beat.

This plays perfect

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/66812

Sweden

00:41:876 (3,4,5,6) - This doesn't play right to me. I don't think the notes do the beat any good. Maybe if you adjusted the notes to use two repeat sliders like this.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/66815

Make sure you test it if you try to use it. I make mistakes too.

00:47:362 (4,5) - Stack?

01:37:419 (3,4) - This doesn't play right. I suggest removing 4 and adding a repeat to 3.

Denmark
I love this difficulty.

00:42:733 - Add note

Nordic 5

01:20:615 (9,10) - Ugh just add another repeat to the 9 and delete 10. Why have annoying things like this?




Absolutely amazing song and maps. Have a kudosu star.
Celeste76
63 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Celeste76

TheVileOne wrote:

General
nordic is in tags twice.
Remove Ban boo video from tags.

Norway

00:31:248 - Why no note? Done

01:01:076 (2) - This slider is going to invade the scoreboard in multiplayer. I would rather this be changed, because its annoying when notes do this. Done

01:23:019 (2) - This absolutely needs to be moved back to 01:22:847 - That's where the sound is. Done

You'll need to add a note here 01:23:362 - to complete the beat. Done

This plays perfect

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/66812 Done

Sweden

00:41:876 (3,4,5,6) - This doesn't play right to me. I don't think the notes do the beat any good. Maybe if you adjusted the notes to use two repeat sliders like this. Done

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/66815

Make sure you test it if you try to use it. I make mistakes too.

00:47:362 (4,5) - Stack? Done

01:37:419 (3,4) - This doesn't play right. I suggest removing 4 and adding a repeat to 3. Done

Denmark
I love this difficulty.

00:42:733 - Add note Done

Nordic 5

01:20:615 (9,10) - Ugh just add another repeat to the 9 and delete 10. Why have annoying things like this? Done




Absolutely amazing song and maps. Have a kudosu star.
Mint Bunny
273 posts
Joined December 2009
Mint Bunny

Celeste76 wrote:

TheVileOne wrote:


[b]Nordic 5

01:20:615 (9,10) - Ugh just add another repeat to the 9 and delete 10. Why have annoying things like this? Done
Why did you do my part? at least let me see if it fits first :P
Celeste76
63 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Celeste76

Mint Bunny wrote:

Why did you do my part? at least let me see if it fits first :P
I did your part because you don't seem really interested in this map anymore :(
Mint Bunny
273 posts
Joined December 2009
Mint Bunny

Celeste76 wrote:

I did your part because you don't seem really interested in this map anymore :(
um, how?

well, whatever.
Fixed some things and things and things.
Download: Hatsune Miku - Ban Ban Boo (Celeste76) [Animelover's Nordic 5 [Insane]].osu
Oh and please change animelover1432 background to a "Mint Bunny" one

And replace the tags with these: Hetalia Axis Powers Nordic Norway Iceland Sweden Denmark Finland 5 Video animelover1432 APH Mint Bunny

make sure all diffs have the same tags
Celeste76
63 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Celeste76

Mint Bunny wrote:

Celeste76 wrote:

I did your part because you don't seem really interested in this map anymore :(
um, how?

well, whatever.
Fixed some things and things and things.
[attachment=0:3a3a3]Hatsune Miku - Ban Ban Boo (Celeste76) [Animelover's Nordic 5 [Insane]].osu[/attachment:3a3a3]
Oh and please change animelover1432 background to a "Mint Bunny" one

And replace the tags with these: Hetalia Axis Powers Nordic Norway Iceland Sweden Denmark Finland 5 Video animelover1432 APH Mint Bunny

make sure all diffs have the same tags
lol sure. And btw, when will I be able to do the hard diff for your map? I've been practising my mapping when I can... I think I've gotten better, though I'm not totally sure :|
Mint Bunny
273 posts
Joined December 2009
Mint Bunny
Maybe, I'm still not done the normal and insane. I'll let you know.
val0108
1,430 posts
Joined January 2010
val0108
:) :) :)
Aleks719
osu! Alumni
2,436 posts
Joined May 2010
Aleks719
General
4 unused *.osb files. Please remove it + full submit

Guest diff is shorter then others, maybe make end of diff like in creator easy diff?
Two Insanes longer than Normal diffs or make all diffs with a same length...

Norway + Iceland
What about distance snap?
I made 2x100 here and didn't can understand why. But I opened editor I saw why xD
Please, make Easy diff with distance snapping.
Try to avoid this : prev 1.05x , next 0.65x , but usually you used 0.8x here.
SPOILER
I'll write about that I see momentarily, I suggest recheck all diff.
01:20:276 (4,5) - distance
01:23:362 (3,4) - ^
Other here is good for me.

Sweden + Finland
Hp drain here like in Denmark. Make it -1 maybe?
00:32:105 (x) - add note + whistle ?
00:42:562 (4) - add whistle to the end of slider
01:12:390 (5) - ^
01:16:162 (1) - add whistle to the start and add finish to the end
01:17:362 (2) - add whistle, remove clap
01:18:219 (3) - add finish, remove clap
01:25:076 (3) - add whistle to the reverse, remove clap from the reverse
01:38:790 (2) - remove clap from the reverse
01:39:476 (3) - remove clap from the start
01:40:162 (4) - remove claps from the start and reverse, add clap to the end
01:40:847 (1) - remove clap, add finish
01:41:190 (2) - add clap
01:41:533 (3) - remove clap
01:41:876 (4) - add clap
01:42:219 (5) - remove clap from the start, add finish to the start, add clap to the end
01:42:904 (6) - ^

And a bit nazi, minor suggestions :
01:38:104 (1,2,3,4) - this sliders is not parallel x)
01:40:162 (4,1) - little overlap here

Denmark
00:47:362 (1) - add whistle to the end
00:47:876 (2) - add whistle to the start and to the end, remove clap from the end
00:48:562 (4) - add whistle
01:20:276 (5) - add finish to the start
01:20:962 (7) - ^
01:21:304 (8) - ^
92648 [T] - your Kiai ends strange. Replace this point on to 01:32:447 (before spinner) or on to 01:33:990 (after spinner)
And so, CS:1 ... why? You don't have custom sounds in your map, fix it please.

Animelover's Nordic 5 [Insane]
00:26:444 (5) - remove finish from the start, add whistle to the start
00:36:730 (4,5) - stack this please or use distance.
01:04:844 (1) - 0.5x points inside slider, make it 0.5x fully oO"
01:07:072 (5,6,7,8) - 1/2 beats, but distance is different. Make new combo or keep distance
01:10:672 (1) - remove clap from the start, add whistle to the start
01:11:358 (4) - ^
01:20:615 (9) - add whistle to the end
01:23:015 (1) - remove clap from the start, add whistle to the start, add clap to the end
Celeste76
63 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Celeste76

Aleks719 wrote:

General
4 unused *.osb files. Please remove it + full submit

Guest diff is shorter then others, maybe make end of diff like in creator easy diff?
Two Insanes longer than Normal diffs or make all diffs with a same length...

Norway + Iceland
What about distance snap?
I made 2x100 here and didn't can understand why. But I opened editor I saw why xD
Please, make Easy diff with distance snapping.
Try to avoid this : prev 1.05x , next 0.65x , but usually you used 0.8x here.
SPOILER
I'll write about that I see momentarily, I suggest recheck all diff.
01:20:276 (4,5) - distance
01:23:362 (3,4) - ^
Other here is good for me.
For this whole suggestion, I had Mint Bunny go over it with me and stuff. We did fix a lot of spacing errors. I did some more, though just for the sake of this.

Sweden + Finland
Hp drain here like in Denmark. Make it -1 maybe? Done
00:32:105 (x) - add note + whistle ? Done
00:42:562 (4) - add whistle to the end of slider Done
01:12:390 (5) - ^ Done
01:16:162 (1) - add whistle to the start and add finish to the end Done
01:17:362 (2) - add whistle, remove clap Done
01:18:219 (3) - add finish, remove clap Done
01:25:076 (3) - add whistle to the reverse, remove clap from the reverse Done
01:38:790 (2) - remove clap from the reverse Done
01:39:476 (3) - remove clap from the start Done
01:40:162 (4) - remove claps from the start and reverse, add clap to the end Done
01:40:847 (1) - remove clap, add finish Done
01:41:190 (2) - add clap Done
01:41:533 (3) - remove clap Done
01:41:876 (4) - add clap Done
01:42:219 (5) - remove clap from the start, add finish to the start, add clap to the end Done
01:42:904 (6) - ^ Done

And a bit nazi, minor suggestions :
01:38:104 (1,2,3,4) - this sliders is not parallel x) Fixed
01:40:162 (4,1) - little overlap here Fixed

Denmark
00:47:362 (1) - add whistle to the end
00:47:876 (2) - add whistle to the start and to the end, remove clap from the end
00:48:562 (4) - add whistle
01:20:276 (5) - add finish to the start
01:20:962 (7) - ^
01:21:304 (8) - ^
92648 [T] - your Kiai ends strange. Replace this point on to 01:32:447 (before spinner) or on to 01:33:990 (after spinner)
And so, CS:1 ... why? You don't have custom sounds in your map, fix it please. Fixed
Did everything~
Mint Bunny
273 posts
Joined December 2009
Mint Bunny

Aleks719 wrote:

Guest diff is shorter then others, maybe make end of diff like in creator easy diff?

Animelover's Nordic 5 [Insane]
00:26:444 (5) - remove finish from the start, add whistle to the start added whistle to the finish, it makes a good effect, thank you~
00:36:730 (4,5) - stack this please or use distance. how did that even happen!? xD done
01:04:844 (1) - 0.5x points inside slider, make it 0.5x fully oO" what do you mean?
01:07:072 (5,6,7,8) - 1/2 beats, but distance is different. Make new combo or keep distance done
01:10:672 (1) - remove clap from the start, add whistle to the start added whislte but keps clap
01:11:358 (4) - ^ added whislte but keps clap
01:20:615 (9) - add whistle to the end done
01:23:015 (1) - remove clap from the start, add whistle to the start, add clap to the end done
Thank you! I'm improving on my hitsounds :D

Download: Hatsune Miku - Ban Ban Boo (Celeste76) [Animelover's Nordic 5 [Insane]].osu
Aleks719
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Aleks719

Mint Bunny wrote:

01:04:844 (1) - 0.5x points inside slider, make it 0.5x fully oO" what do you mean?
Your slider must be inside 0.5x area completely. Replace timing points a bit.
KiriNoMorii
110 posts
Joined August 2010
KiriNoMorii
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Aleks719
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Aleks719
Small suggestion without kd :
scorebar-ki
scorebar-kidanger
scorebar-kidanger2

Could you Cropped unused top of this skin elements ?
they are looking bad in-game now
Derekku
COOL DUDE
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Joined March 2009
Derekku
Denied kd for non-mod posts. Please only give kudosu to people that mod your map in some substantial way.
Celeste76
63 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Celeste76

Derekku wrote:

Denied kd for non-mod posts. Please only give kudosu to people that mod your map in some substantial way.
When did I not do that?
Celeste76
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Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Celeste76

Aleks719 wrote:

Small suggestion without kd :
scorebar-ki
scorebar-kidanger
scorebar-kidanger2

Could you Cropped unused top of this skin elements ?
they are looking bad in-game now
I can't do that. When I do, the scorebar elements will go up so high that the head is cut off
DerekMcD
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Joined February 2009
DerekMcD
Hello!!!!

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Blue: You must fix this.
Red: You better fix it!
Orange: Screenshot ahead.
Black: Just suggestions though.

Norway + Iceland

00:17:191 (2): Move two or three grids left.
01:24:390 (5): Add a new combo?
01:29:876 (4): ^

Sweden + Finland

Have nothing to say...

Denmark

00:17:191-00:18:733: Try this.
SPOILER

Animelover's Nordic 5 [Insane]

Nah... I'm good...

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That's it and here's your star. Because I like this song.
Thank you and good luck.
Celeste76
63 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Celeste76

kokoroanime wrote:

Hello!!!!
Done everything~! Thank you!
akrolsmir
606 posts
Joined November 2010
akrolsmir
Norway+Iceland:

01:05:876 (2) - 1 grid down for symmetry
01:10:676 (1) - Maybe make this symmetric with end and start on the same level?
01:13:419 (1,2,3) - 1 grid up to align to the circle before it
01:31:247 (1,2,3,4,5) - Consider spreading this out instead of stacking.

Sweden+Finland:
00:13:762 (3) - move center node 1 grid right
00:21:991 (1) - Endpoint 2 grids right
00:55:247 (4,5) - Looks kinda ugly, try a different shape or make these identical or something.
The two X-shapes starting from 00:59:705 (1) - These aren't quite perfect. For best results, I'd suggest starting with drawing one slider angled exactly at 45 degrees from the center (maybe use another grid level, like 2 or 1), then copy+paste+rotating three times. And repeat for the other X. Make sure to hitsound it again.
01:05:533 (2) - up 1 grid
01:06:219 (4,5) - spacing here is too close
01:23:704 (4,5,1,2) - Not symmetric, try making (1,2) a copy of (4,5).
01:28:504 (4) - Make this a copy of 3
01:38:104 (1,2,3,4) - These aren't parallel; pick one and copy paste for all others
01:42:904 (6) - Make this a copy of 5

Denmark:
Many of your short curved sliders here are not symmetric.

00:21:305 (3) - Move center up and left 1 grid
00:31:248 (6,7) - Make 6 a flipped copy of 5, and align 7 so the ends are in a line.
00:37:076 (6,7) - Move the center node of (6) up 1 grid, and make 7 a copy of 6.
00:55:590 (4) - Make more pointed, kinda like (1,2,3) before it.
00:56:276 (7) - Endpoint down 1 grid
00:58:676 (4,5) - Pick one and make the other a copy of it.
01:14:447 (6) - Right 1 grid
01:16:162 (1,2) - Pick one and make the other a copy of it.
01:17:533 (3) - Too sharp + not symmetric
01:20:962 (7) - too flat?
01:38:104- Practically every short curved slider after this is not symmetric, I'd suggest just checking each one.

Animelover's Nordic 5:
... Why are these sliders all Catmull sliders? That makes them kinda pointed and ugly. Open the .osu, and you'll see that sliders are marked with a C, while normal Bezier sliders such as those on other difficulties are marked with a B. Was this mapped before this was made impossible? Anyways, this is pretty important, fix this.

00:18:730 (1,4) - Not symmetric
00:39:301 (1) - Really jerky and awkward. I'm not sure this is rankable.
00:40:673 (1) - ^
01:07:072 (1,2,3,4) - Space this out, it otherwise it feels like it should be 1/4th notes.

As a general rule, when you want to shapes to mirror each other, it'd be faster and more pretty to copy and paste rather than draw a new one. That way the two shapes will be identical.

The placement of notes in time was pretty good but the patterns and shapes were not quite perfect; continue to work on those. Anyways, starred!
Mint Bunny
273 posts
Joined December 2009
Mint Bunny
nya nya nya!
Guest diff name change and....

akrolsmir wrote:

Animelover's Nordic 5:
... Why are these sliders all Catmull sliders? That makes them kinda pointed and ugly. Open the .osu, and you'll see that sliders are marked with a C, while normal Bezier sliders such as those on other difficulties are marked with a B. Was this mapped before this was made impossible? Anyways, this is pretty important, fix this. woah woah woah! thank for pointing that out!

00:18:730 (1,4) - Not symmetric fixed~
00:39:301 (1) - Really jerky and awkward. I'm not sure this is rankable. fixed~
00:40:673 (1) - ^ mhmm~
01:07:072 (1,2,3,4) - Space this out, it otherwise it feels like it should be 1/4th notes. i like that anti-jump ^w^
Download: Hatsune Miku - Ban Ban Boo (Celeste76) [Mint's Nordic 5 [Insane]].osu
Celeste76
63 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Celeste76

akrolsmir wrote:

Norway+Iceland:
Done everything here

Sweden+Finland:
Done everything here

Denmark:
Done everything here
Celeste76
63 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Celeste76

Mint Bunny wrote:

nya nya nya!
Guest diff name change and....

akrolsmir wrote:

Animelover's Nordic 5:
... Why are these sliders all Catmull sliders? That makes them kinda pointed and ugly. Open the .osu, and you'll see that sliders are marked with a C, while normal Bezier sliders such as those on other difficulties are marked with a B. Was this mapped before this was made impossible? Anyways, this is pretty important, fix this. woah woah woah! thank for pointing that out!

00:18:730 (1,4) - Not symmetric fixed~
00:39:301 (1) - Really jerky and awkward. I'm not sure this is rankable. fixed~
00:40:673 (1) - ^ mhmm~
01:07:072 (1,2,3,4) - Space this out, it otherwise it feels like it should be 1/4th notes. i like that anti-jump ^w^
I'm actually trying to figure out how I can make your name in your diff pulse or something. I wanna make you all spiffy
Mint Bunny
273 posts
Joined December 2009
Mint Bunny

Celeste76 wrote:

I'm actually trying to figure out how I can make your name in your diff pulse or something. I wanna make you all spiffy
that would mean you would have to get a background image without any writing on it, make a separate image with my name, and use The separate image to storyboard pulsing. Though I'm still trying to figure out how to make the separate image pulse in the first place...
Good luck :|
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