Okay, I'll finally get around to modding this.
It looks like Ayeen already went through this with AIBat so it's good on that front.
General:
What's with the white/black strobe like at 00:35:210? I don't even have epilepsy and it gave me a headache.
In general, I'd say this is the most seizure-inducing beatmap I've ever seen... tone the SB down a notch?
Easy:
00:15:283 (4,5,1) - Move down a bit, or else (4) and (1) won't wrap properly thanks to stacking.
Also, as a sidenote, you could make the wrapping effect better with a curve that is more circular- play around with using 4 or 5 nodes instead of 3.
01:12:167 (2,3,4) - Align to (1) since it seems this section is supposed to be rectangular
01:53:109 (3,4,5,6,7) - Arrange into a regular pentagon or 5/6ths of a hexagon.
p3n's Normal:
00:06:225 (1) - 3/4 beat long repeat slider makes no sense, try it like this:
Or do this if you really want to hit the red tick (less recommended):
00:12:022 (1,1) - Spacing is kind of far for a normal (counting from center of the spinner)
00:33:036 (3) - There's no music beat on the red tick where the repeat is, so try this:
01:52:384 (1,2) - You've mostly been good about this for this map, but (1) isn't symmetric. After you fix that, rotate a copy to make (2).
01:57:094 (1,1) - This was apparently intentional but I still don't think the second (1) should be a new combo.
lidan69's Hard:
Overall, the patterns felt a little messy.
00:03:326 (5) - The hitsound used here is pretty noticeable. Which would be okay, but then you use it quite often so it detracts from the song. Try finding a less obtrusive one, or lowering the volume. Same goes for others of the same sound.
00:10:572 (6) - Shape looks pinched at the end, like that. 00:14:920 (6) - looks better, change to this?
00:17:094 (3) - ^
00:19:630 (1,2,3) - Either align or make the curve more pronounced
00:31:225 (2) - Even more pinched at the end
00:35:210 (4,5,6,7,8) - I don't like this stream, but if you want to keep it move the (1) after farther away (to 1.4x ds).
00:43:453 (5) - Feels out of place since most other beats were on white or red ticks, maybe follow music instead of vocals here as well.
00:54:051 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe make these spaced farther, and jumps instead?
01:18:688 (3,4,5) - Align these notes
01:20:500 (1,2,3) - I dislike how (1,2) are covered by previous notes. Also, make (3) a copy of (1) flipped across the y-axis.
01:37:891 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't fit lyrics, try this?: (or just go with white ticks)
02:23:543 (4,5,6) - Align
Hard:
Lots of short curved spinners that weren't symmetrical, but I don't feel like pointing them out right now. Also, wrapping around notes generally was somewhat unclean- try making those wraps with more than 3 nodes.
00:04:594 (1) - Space this twice as far away- though it says 1.18x, it's actually only half of that because of how spacing is calculated.
00:10:391 (1) - ^
00:22:167 (1) - ^
01:25:754 (6) - ^, also new combo to match the above.
01:31:551 (5) - Slow this to 1/2 the speed to match all of the above, also new combo.
Shael's Insane:
Patterns can get confusing especially given the speed of this map. The distracting SB doesn't help either.
00:07:674- put a note here?
00:35:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Especially confusing- right after a spinner (and the hitbursts from that) there are all sorts of overlapping hitbursts and streams. Kind of hard to read; perhaps make it so that it overlaps less?
01:05:464 (8) - perhaps place this somewhere other than right under (2)? So it would be seen easier, I miss this on every playthrough.
01:22:130 (5) - ^
01:39:159 (7) - It'd be better to move this to white ticks, but if you insist on using red ticks here, try this:
01:49:667 (13) - Again, repeats on red instead of white ticks sounds off. Here's another alternative:
02:00:899 (7) - See the two above about repeats on red.
02:04:341 (1,2,3) - Unstack? Else it feels like those ought to be 1/4 apart.
Overall, a lot of the diffs seemed patternless, though some were pretty fun to play regardless (like the Insane diff). Think about fixing the SB. And I've already starred 2x because I like the song and stuff, so good luck!