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supercell - Hoshi ga Matataku Konna Yoru ni

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Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Revived.
- Suima -
- Suima -
I thought :
before the spinner which at 0:17:030 , BPM can be 0.5x and no change. Because the music is slow.

On the whole , it's great. :)
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Hijiri Tezuka
Hello!

---
General:
You need a map at or under 3 stars
--
[Crescent Moon]
00:13:930 (1) - Use a whisle instead of the clap, or find a replacement for the clap sound
00:15:530 (1) - ^
00:24:037 (4) - Use a finish instead (?)
00:28:323 (4) - Use a whistle instead
00:44:142 (4) - Use whistle or remove hitsound
00:46:784 (4) - Just use the finishes on 2 beats here, pick whichever
01:01:450 - Add a break here

The spacing seems odd to me, but I guess because it sounds so much like an Easy diff yet has the spacing of a Normal+
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[Half Moon]
Nice~
--
[Full Moon]
Not much to say about this map except it seems like it's being forced to be a Lunatic diff.
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All in all, this is a nice mapset and you should feel good about yourself (~STAR)
stiss
69 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
stiss
kevin840310
Star thx. and mod thx!
I will change it.
I will change the pointed.
stiss
69 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
stiss
Hijiri Tezuka
star and mod thx!

Making is in detail and there is a light.
It devotes oneself.
I advance it in the　baby step.
las7h0p3
6 posts
Joined May 2009
las7h0p3
nice difficulties, good luck with the whole map :)
stiss
69 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
stiss
las7h0p
star thx!!
Suzully
osu! Alumni
2,446 posts
Joined July 2010
Suzully
Modリクエストどうもです～ ;)

[General]

  • タグが統一されていないので統一してください。
    オフセットも統一してください。
    KIAI TIMEも統一してください。
    01:35:573か01:38:210で1つ目のKIAI TIMEを終えたほうが自然だと思います。
    譜面の終わりも統一してください。(終わるタイミング、finishの有無など)

    緑線がきちんと移動されていません。
    New Moon以外のdiffで、オブジェクトがスナップされていないので必ずスナップしてください。
[New Moon]

  • Slider Tick Rateを1にしてください。
    Difficultyの設定がそれぞれ高すぎます。
    せめてHP4、OD4まで落としましょう。
    もう少しAメロとBメロのヒットサウンドを増やしたほうが良いと思います。
    Bメロでスペーシングが空きすぎです。この難易度ではもう少し狭くしましょう。
  1. 01:17:786 (x) - ここからの1小節ちょいは空けずにノートを置きましょう。
  2. 01:19:746 (1,2,3,4) - (2,3,4)でいきなりスペーシングが空いているのは非常に良くないです。Hard以上なら許されますが・・・。
  3. 01:22:384 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - スペーシングが空きすぎです。
  4. 01:23:703 (3,4,5,6) - この2連発×2は初心者にとって非常に難しいのでパターンを変えましょう。
[Crescent Moon]

  • HP、AR、OD、それぞれ+1くらい。
  1. 00:28:323 (4) - new comboを入れるなりした方が親切だと思います。
  2. 00:29:642 (1,1) - この難易度なら1つにまとめてしまった方が良いのではないでしょうか。
  3. 00:53:378 (1) - スピナーが短すぎます。
[Half Moon]
  1. 00:07:130 (3) - whistle
  2. 00:08:330 (6) - ^ スライダーの終端に
  3. 00:58:155 (x) - ノートを追加した方が良いと思います。
  4. 00:59:309 (3) - スライダーの終端にwhistle。
  5. 01:00:628 (3) - ^
  6. 01:02:276 (2) - whistle
  7. 01:02:935 (4) - 折り返してみてはどうでしょう。
  8. 01:03:924 (x) - ノート追加？
  9. 01:11:836 (1) - スライダーの終端にwhistle。
  10. 01:12:496 (3) - whistle
  11. 01:12:825 (4) - ^
  12. 01:13:490 (7) - ^
[Full Moon]

  • 他のdiffと同じ場所から始めた方が良いと思います :3
    まだヒットサウンドはつけていない状態でしょうか？
  1. 00:38:375 (4,5) - 間隔が狭いです。
  2. 01:17:111 (2,3,4) - ボーカルに合わせるのならこういうリズムはどうでしょう？
  3. 01:22:232 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - リズムが取りづらいです。01:22:232 (1,2,3,4)が赤線に置いてあるのに対して01:23:715 (1,2,3,4)が白線に置かれてしまっているので、かなり戸惑うと思います。01:22:232 (1,2,3,4)を1つ後ろの白線に移動させてはどうでしょうか？
  4. 01:32:946 (8) - new combo
  5. 01:35:737 (1) - スピナーを01:38:210まで延ばしてみては。
  6. 01:50:078 (x) - これくらいならBreak Timeは不要です。加えてノートを置いたほうが良いと思います。
  7. 01:55:683 (1) - Beat Snap Divisorを1/8にして01:55:353 (5)の直後に置いてみてはどうでしょう？
  8. 02:23:045 (1) - スピナーを02:24:694まで延ばしてみては。
  9. 02:48:100 (5) - 急にスライダーの速さが変わるのでnew comboを入れたほうが親切だと思います。
音取りは非常に綺麗にできているので、配置とヒットサウンドを磨いていけばますます良くなると思います！
頑張ってくださいー！ :)


Kitsuneko
709 posts
Joined June 2010
Kitsuneko
as your request ;)
advices again

suzullyさんが丁寧なmoddingしていただけてるようなので
僕の気づいた部分とアドバイスを。

[General]
全体的にHitsoundがランダムになってしまってるので
同じリズムを取るときは同じ様に音をつけることを意識すると良くなると思います
特にHalfのサビまでHitsoundすらついてない部分も見受けられるので

[Full Moon]
00:15:530 (1) - add whistle to head
00:24:368 (3) - sry, ugly slider
00:34:419 (10) - rotate by 20°?
00:44:144 (7) - ah...ugly slider again. okay one advice
　このスライダーなど90°近く曲がるスライダー等は点を増やして分割するのがいいです
　結構な数のスライダーが3点のみで無理やり曲げた格好になってますので点を4つにする等して直した方が見栄えします
01:24:374 (3) - new combo
01:40:847 (5) - ^
02:43:485 (5) - remove whistle, add clap

[Half Moon]
00:42:496 - add finish
01:21:567 (5) - 頭に余計な点? 直線なら直線に
02:48:759 (1) - 終点は02:49:419？とFinish音がやたら大きいのでsoftにするか音量を下げる

hmm,他のDiffはこれで完成なのかな？
MATやBATの中にはプレイタイム、ブレイクタイム揃えてないのを嫌う方が居るのでDiff共通が好ましいです


いろいろなRanked譜面を覗いてみていろいろな配置が出来るようになるといいかも！
疾走感あるので綺麗に配置できればきっと素敵な譜面が作れると思います

簡単なmoddingになりましたがFighting~ :)
KeNNzy
39 posts
Joined May 2009
KeNNzy
I'm Done.

Download: supercell - Hoshi ga Matataku Konna Yoru ni (stiss) [Heavest Moon].osu
stiss
69 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
stiss
ｔｈｘ
＞Jap-kenji
otaru-soad
50 posts
Joined August 2009
otaru-soad
good map ^^


STAR ~~~
se-sukeEila
114 posts
Joined May 2010
se-sukeEila
modしました :)

SPOILER
[New Moon]
audioを全体的に65%くらいにしたらどうですか?

[Crescent Moon]
01:14:155 (n) - Add note?
01:23:717 (3) - clapをwhistleにしてみてはどうですか？


[Half Moon]
前半から中盤にかけてラインから外れてるnoteが結構あったのでResnapお願いします

[Heavest Moon]
00:02:346 (4,8) - clapを追加してみるのはどうですか?
00:05:146 (3,7) - ^
00:07:546 (1) - softのwhistleにしてみるのはどうですか?
00:17:146 (1) - finishにしてみるのはどうですか?
01:03:853~01:08:962 - audioをsoftの40%にしてみるのはどうですか?
01:13:166 (1) - softのfinishにしてはどうですか?
01:23:552 (1) - ここにnoteは置かない方がいいと思います
01:31:465 (4) - clapを追加してみてはどうですか?
02:17:697~02:22:806 - audioをsoftの40%にしてみるのはどうですか?

[Full Moon]
01:36:987 (T) - KIAIをここまでにしてみるのはどうですか?
01:48:764 (n) - Add note?
01:50:907 (9,10) -
02:45:303 (5) - New comboを追加したらどうですか?
02:45:632 (6,7) - 6と7のタイミングを入れ替えてみたらどうでしょう?
02:48:764 (3) - 最後Softのfinishで終わったらどうでしょうか?
　　　　　　　　スライダーの中の鈴のhit soundを下げてみるのもどうでしょう?

Resnapされていないところがちらほら目に入ったので確認お願いします

はじめてmodをしたのでいろいろめちゃくちゃなところあると思いますが・・・
役に立てればうれしいです＞＜
とても楽しい譜面でした(＾▽＾)/
fight!! ;)

star~(^_-)-☆
Hushu_old
207 posts
Joined October 2010
Hushu_old
Star! ;)
loli_milk
423 posts
Joined May 2010
loli_milk
love this :)
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
vivere
Hello o./

[General]:
  1. Resnap all notes in all diffs (to do it go to "Timing > Resnap All Notes"), except in "Heavest Moon"
[New Moon]:
  1. This diff is really hard to be an easy, consider reducing the difficulty, then...
    •HP Drain Rate: -1 or -2
    •Approach Rate: -2
    •Overall Difficulty: -1
  2. 00:23:724 (3)- two grids down.
  3. 00:25:042 (5)- ^
  4. 00:26:361 (7)- Move this slider one grid up, because it is too close from (6)
  5. 00:52:051 (6)- Move 1 grid to left, because it is close to (5)
  6. 00:52:710 (7,8,9)- Select it all and move 2 grids to left, the same, because it is too close to (6)
  7. 00:26:361 (7)- Move this slider one grid up, because it is too close from (6)
  8. 01:09:210- Start this spinner in 01:09:045 and finish it at 01:11:847
  9. 01:14:484 (1)- Add finish.
  10. 01:16:135 (1)- Remove this New combo, then, add new combo here: 01:17:124.
  11. 01:17:124- Add finish at the beginning.
  12. 01:22:399 (1)- Add finish.
  13. 01:23:058 (2)- ^
  14. 01:25:036 (1)- Add finish at the beginning.
  15. 01:27:673- Add a new combo.
[Crescent Moon]:
  1. Follow these "tips" about hitsound, because this will make the map sounds really good...
  2. 00:04:746 (2)- May you can put a finish here.
  3. 00:08:346 (2,3) Add whistle?
  4. 00:09:146 (4)- could you add a whistle in the second repeat.
  5. 00:11:546 (3)- Put whistle in the beiginning and in the repeat then, at th end remove it
  6. 00:12:746 (1,2)- Remove new combo and then, Add a whistle.
  7. 00:22:421 (2)- Add whistle.
  8. 00:22:075 (2)- Put finish in the beginning and in the repeat.
  9. 00:23:394 (3)- Put a finish right here
  10. 00:26:031 (3)- Add clap at the end of the slider.
  11. 00:26:361 (4)- Add a clap in the repeat.
  12. 00:28:339 (1)- At the end, remove finish and replace by one clap.
  13. 00:36:251 (4)- Add clap.
  14. 00:36:581 (5)- Remove this clap, and then, put a clap here: 00:36:910 (6)
  15. 00:50:756 (4)- Add clap in the repeat.
  16. 00:53:370 (8)- Add a finish... sounds much better... imo
  17. 00:58:660 (1)- Remove this new combo.
  18. 01:06:572 (2)-Add clap at the end, and here: 01:07:891 (3)- Remove this clap.
  19. 01:14:155 (7)- Remove this finish and put it at 01:14:484 (1)
[Half Moon]:
  1. Perhaps you could put notes at 01:23:882 ~ 01:24:212, maybe like this:
  2. If you will do it add claps in: 01:23:717 ~ 01:23:882 and 01:24:377.
  3. 01:25:036 (1)- Add clap in the beginning
  4. 01:42:179 (6)- Add clap?
  5. 01:51:401 (1,1,1)- Maybe you could add whistle at the end of the sliders
[Heavest Moon]:
  1. 00:02:746 (5)- Add new combo.
  2. 00:05:946 (5)- ^
  3. 00:15:546 (5)- ^
  4. 01:16:629 (1)- Remove this new combo and start it here: 01:17:124
  5. 01:18:278 (1)- Here too, remove new combo and strat it here: 01:18:443
  6. 01:21:080 (6)- New combo, here: 01:22:234 (1) remove this new combo, and here: 01:22:399 New combo again.
  7. 02:03:269 (5)- New combo.
[Full Moon]:
  1. 00:13:746 (4)- May you put new combo here?
  2. 00:24:053 (1)- Remve this new combo and then, start it at 00:24:383.
  3. 00:25:372 (1)- Remove new combo. And start here 00:25:702 the new combo.
  4. 01:12:830 (3)- Put here a new combo.
  5. 01:16:629 (1)- Remove this new combo, then, start it here:
  6. 01:18:113 (1)- here too, remove this new combo and then, start this here 01:18:443.
  7. 01:21:080 (5)- New combo?
  8. 01:56:676 (6)- Put a new combo, it is too long x_x
  9. 02:30:962 (6)- New combo.
  10. 02:34:918 (6)- ^
  11. 02:37:555 (4)- ^
  12. 02:41:511 (7)- Put a new combo and remove this new combo: 02:42:665.
_________________
Ok, that's all :>

Good luck with this :3

Star ^.~/
stiss
69 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
stiss

vivere wrote:

Hello o./

[General]:
  1. Resnap all notes in all diffs (to do it go to "Timing > Resnap All Notes"), except in "Heavest Moon"
[New Moon]:
  1. This diff is really hard to be an easy, consider reducing the difficulty, then...
    •HP Drain Rate: -1 or -2
    •Approach Rate: -2
    •Overall Difficulty: -1
  2. 00:23:724 (3)- two grids down.
  3. 00:25:042 (5)- ^
  4. 00:26:361 (7)- Move this slider one grid up, because it is too close from (6)
  5. 00:52:051 (6)- Move 1 grid to left, because it is close to (5)
  6. 00:52:710 (7,8,9)- Select it all and move 2 grids to left, the same, because it is too close to (6)
  7. 00:26:361 (7)- Move this slider one grid up, because it is too close from (6)
  8. 01:09:210- Start this spinner in 01:09:045 and finish it at 01:11:847
  9. 01:14:484 (1)- Add finish.
  10. 01:16:135 (1)- Remove this New combo, then, add new combo here: 01:17:124.
  11. 01:17:124- Add finish at the beginning.
  12. 01:22:399 (1)- Add finish.
  13. 01:23:058 (2)- ^
  14. 01:25:036 (1)- Add finish at the beginning.
  15. 01:27:673- Add a new combo.
[Crescent Moon]:
  1. Follow these "tips" about hitsound, because this will make the map sounds really good...
  2. 00:04:746 (2)- May you can put a finish here.
  3. 00:08:346 (2,3) Add whistle?
  4. 00:09:146 (4)- could you add a whistle in the second repeat.
  5. 00:11:546 (3)- Put whistle in the beiginning and in the repeat then, at th end remove it
  6. 00:12:746 (1,2)- Remove new combo and then, Add a whistle.
  7. 00:22:421 (2)- Add whistle.
  8. 00:22:075 (2)- Put finish in the beginning and in the repeat.
  9. 00:23:394 (3)- Put a finish right here
  10. 00:26:031 (3)- Add clap at the end of the slider.
  11. 00:26:361 (4)- Add a clap in the repeat.
  12. 00:28:339 (1)- At the end, remove finish and replace by one clap.
  13. 00:36:251 (4)- Add clap.
  14. 00:36:581 (5)- Remove this clap, and then, put a clap here: 00:36:910 (6)
  15. 00:50:756 (4)- Add clap in the repeat.
  16. 00:53:370 (8)- Add a finish... sounds much better... imo
  17. 00:58:660 (1)- Remove this new combo.
  18. 01:06:572 (2)-Add clap at the end, and here: 01:07:891 (3)- Remove this clap.
  19. 01:14:155 (7)- Remove this finish and put it at 01:14:484 (1)
[Half Moon]:
  1. Perhaps you could put notes at 01:23:882 ~ 01:24:212, maybe like this:
  2. If you will do it add claps in: 01:23:717 ~ 01:23:882 and 01:24:377.
  3. 01:25:036 (1)- Add clap in the beginning
  4. 01:42:179 (6)- Add clap?
  5. 01:51:401 (1,1,1)- Maybe you could add whistle at the end of the sliders
[Heavest Moon]:
  1. 00:02:746 (5)- Add new combo.
  2. 00:05:946 (5)- ^
  3. 00:15:546 (5)- ^
  4. 01:16:629 (1)- Remove this new combo and start it here: 01:17:124
  5. 01:18:278 (1)- Here too, remove new combo and strat it here: 01:18:443
  6. 01:21:080 (6)- New combo, here: 01:22:234 (1) remove this new combo, and here: 01:22:399 New combo again.
  7. 02:03:269 (5)- New combo.
[Full Moon]:
  1. 00:13:746 (4)- May you put new combo here?
  2. 00:24:053 (1)- Remve this new combo and then, start it at 00:24:383.
  3. 00:25:372 (1)- Remove new combo. And start here 00:25:702 the new combo.
  4. 01:12:830 (3)- Put here a new combo.
  5. 01:16:629 (1)- Remove this new combo, then, start it here:
  6. 01:18:113 (1)- here too, remove this new combo and then, start this here 01:18:443.
  7. 01:21:080 (5)- New combo?
  8. 01:56:676 (6)- Put a new combo, it is too long x_x
  9. 02:30:962 (6)- New combo.
  10. 02:34:918 (6)- ^
  11. 02:37:555 (4)- ^
  12. 02:41:511 (7)- Put a new combo and remove this new combo: 02:42:665.
_________________
Ok, that's all :>

Good luck with this :3

Star ^.~/
Nice　Mat　thx
Everything is not used.
However, it served as a reference.
Neko_Ray
181 posts
Joined July 2010
Neko_Ray

stiss wrote:

Nice　Mat　thx
Everything is not used.
However, it served as a reference.
LOL!
awww dear vivere~
--------------------------------------------------------------
Well, i want mod it :3~

[!]: Do it!
[?]: If you want

New Moon:

00:04:346 (1): So far to be easy, close it [!]
00:17:146 - 00:21:746 (1): Is too close to be easy :(, extends 00:17:146 that spinner to 00:21:746 and delete slider [?]
00:32:295 (1): Add Finish [!]
00:36:910 (7): Delete Clap [!]
00:37:570 (8): Add clap to begins [!]
00:44:163 (2): Delete Clap [!]
00:44:822 (3): Clap to ends [!]
00:46:141 (4): Delete Clap [!]
00:48:119 (1): Add clap to begins and delete Clap in the end [!]
00:49:438 (2): Add Clap [!], and maybe delete Whistle [?]
00:50:756 (4): Clap [!]
00:51:392 (5): Delete Clap [!]
00:52:051 (6): Clap to begins [!]
01:06:572 (1): New combo [?]

Crescent Moon:

00:32:954 (2): Delete Clap to the ends [!]

00:32:295 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6): OK! Pay attention on these (W: Whistle - F: Finish - C: Clap) :

If that don't sounds good, kill me
00:42:844 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5):

If that don't sounds good, kill me x2
And everything is okey~

I dont want mod long song :/ sorry

Pd: Tell me what you used pls
stiss
69 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
stiss

Neko_Ray wrote:

stiss wrote:

Nice　Mat　thx
Everything is not used.
However, it served as a reference.
LOL!
awww dear vivere~
--------------------------------------------------------------
Well, i want mod it :3~

[!]: Do it!
[?]: If you want

New Moon:

00:04:346 (1): So far to be easy, close it [!]
00:17:146 - 00:21:746 (1): Is too close to be easy :(, extends 00:17:146 that spinner to 00:21:746 and delete slider [?]
00:32:295 (1): Add Finish [!]
00:36:910 (7): Delete Clap [!]
00:37:570 (8): Add clap to begins [!]
00:44:163 (2): Delete Clap [!]
00:44:822 (3): Clap to ends [!]
00:46:141 (4): Delete Clap [!]
00:48:119 (1): Add clap to begins and delete Clap in the end [!]
00:49:438 (2): Add Clap [!], and maybe delete Whistle [?]
00:50:756 (4): Clap [!]
00:51:392 (5): Delete Clap [!]
00:52:051 (6): Clap to begins [!]
01:06:572 (1): New combo [?]

Crescent Moon:

00:32:954 (2): Delete Clap to the ends [!]

00:32:295 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6): OK! Pay attention on these (W: Whistle - F: Finish - C: Clap) :

If that don't sounds good, kill me
00:42:844 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5):

If that don't sounds good, kill me x2
And everything is okey~

I dont want mod long song :/ sorry

Pd: Tell me what you used pls
Alloky thx mod:D
chocomint
Former osu! Champion: #3
202 posts
Joined June 2009
chocomint
:D
Ch1ka
340 posts
Joined May 2010
Ch1ka
STAR!
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
- General
AP can be lower to 7 And OD can be 7 also.

- Full Moon
00:45:647 (1) - Remove new combo
00:45:976 (3) - New combo
00:46:636 (7) - New combo
00:50:592 (12) - New combo and remove 00:50:756 (1) -
00:51:416 (4,3) - Not the best cover. Plaese fix it.
00:57:830 (4) - New combo
01:21:739 (6) - ^
01:23:882 (2) - Add Finish and 01:24:541 (4) also. IT sound better.
01:28:992 (7) - New combo and remove 01:30:146 (1).
01:31:300 (5) - New combo
01:38:717 (6) - ^
02:02:116 (1) - Remove new combo
02:14:647 (7,8) - Spacing

[All]
Nice song. Nice map.
STAR.
stiss
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KingsAL2 wrote:

- General
AP can be lower to 7 And OD can be 7 also.

- Full Moon
00:45:647 (1) - Remove new combo
00:45:976 (3) - New combo
00:46:636 (7) - New combo
00:50:592 (12) - New combo and remove 00:50:756 (1) -
00:51:416 (4,3) - Not the best cover. Plaese fix it.
00:57:830 (4) - New combo
01:21:739 (6) - ^
01:23:882 (2) - Add Finish and 01:24:541 (4) also. IT sound better.
01:28:992 (7) - New combo and remove 01:30:146 (1).
01:31:300 (5) - New combo
01:38:717 (6) - ^
02:02:116 (1) - Remove new combo
02:14:647 (7,8) - Spacing

[All]
Nice song. Nice map.
STAR.
General doesn't use it though Mod serves as a reference.
thx mod:D
Raging Bull
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Most are suggestions. You don't have to follow them if you don't want to.

General:
Folder seems okay.

Please make sure all inherited and uninherited timing sections are at the same spot in every map.

New Moon:
01:38:223 (1) - Extend spinner to here. Spinner too short.
02:28:168 - Timing section off. Move it to 02:28:333

Crescent Moon:
00:28:339 (1) - I don't recommend changing slider velocity unless it fits the song. Delete the inherited section and make repeat slider instead? I think it really fits into the music.
00:39:877 (1) - Same. Slow slider doesn't seem to fit. Find another way.
00:45:152 (5) - Slider looks weird. I guess you can try to remake slider so it doesn't look like it's leaning on one side too much
01:53:717 (1,2) - Not properly spaced. This one is way to close compared to other 1/1 beats.
02:15:145 (6) - One grid up?

Half Moon:
+1 OD +1 AR
00:04:346 (1) - Still don't think changing velocity is a good choice here yet.
00:05:946 (2) - Uhh. Maybe you should try making more than one point if you want to make an arc.
00:32:295 (1,2) - ^ :3
01:07:561 - Add note here?
01:08:880 - ^
02:01:291 (5) - Turn on level grid 4 and then move one grid down one grid right.

Jap-Keiji:
Lol BG
AR wayyyy too high for a slow(ish) song. -1AR.
I think you should put soft hitsounds in the beginning until the first break.
01:13:495 Remove break. No point if it's really really short.

Full Moon:
-1 AR also
02:23:054 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I think this jump is way harder than Keiji's own. Can you reduce is a bit more? (Maybe same distance as Keiji's?)

Star. Good luck.
yurai3103
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好きな曲なのでRankedできるように祈ってます ;)
stiss
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ありがとう！
Norn_NNN
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wa- :)
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Norn_NNN wrote:

wa- :)
star thx!
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oh good
Shigupoon
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good
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kimtyx wrote:

oh good
star thx!
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Shigupoon wrote:

good
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Mikarunoel131_DELETED
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Difficulty :Crescent Moon

One of your notes isn`t snapped at 02:33:609 ^,^ please fix that .

spacing is incorrect, you use 0.80 , but there is 1.52 at 02:28:333
litle changes like 0,82 or 0,78 aren`t that bad . =)

It is sometimes incorrect please check spacing .

please kudosu if I helped you . ~(^-^)~
star ^.^
stiss
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Mod　thx!
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AngelNote wrote:

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Raihusu wrote:

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みちる～☆ありがとう！
loser101_old
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New Moon:
1) It might just be me but you might want to add a whistle 00:23:064 - 00:25:702
nothing else for New Moon.

Crescent Moon:
00:37:899- I don't think a spinner can be that short.

Half moon:
Check your spacing.

Jap-kenji's Moon:
... Nothing

Full Moon:
Again Check your spacing. Never have jumps.
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