Hello.
Offset seems to be more or less correct,but map sounds really bad with normal sampleset.
So I really suggest you to ask someone to check timing one more time,and if it's alright,then maybe lower volume(although it's low already) or find custom normal-hit?
SB is just an awesome work,really.
And it's even more awesome,because all 78 files obey size rules.
Everything else is fine too.
[Tochika]The main problem is Slider Velocity.It's too high.
It's okay,if it's supposed to be Normal,but for the easiest difficulty..well.
At least,reduce HP Drain and OD by 1-2 both.
00:34:632 (1,2,3,4) - Is it supposed to be like this? Cause it's not symmetrical at all.
00:39:942 (3,4) - Rhytm isn't obvious,why not to use just 1/1 notes here?
00:51:357 (x) - It's not recomended to use different velocity/spacing in the easiest difficulties,beginners may not get it.
00:51:623 (1) - It obeys distance snap,but it doesn't obey the rules.Remember that we're still playing 1x up to this slider,so manually space it with 1x distance.
00:59:189 (4) - Why it starts from blue tick? It's just so cruel and doesn't have any sense,cause there's no beat or lyrics,so start this slider from 00:59:057.
01:00:517 (1) - Too close to previous object,fix distance.
02:21:179 (1) - It plays better without this note.
03:55:161 (3,4) - Unstack these objects? It may cause some problems with reading for beginners.
03:56:223 - Also,plays better with this note.
[Tsubaki]00:17:641 (1,2,3,4) - Why it looks soooo weird? Seriosuly,you didn't even show to a mapper a rhytm and what spacing do you use,and you just making so weird jump from the 2-nd note? Please,fix it.
00:59:322 (5) - Why do you use 1/8 to end this slider? A beat is perfectly heared at 01:00:782,so extend it to the next blue tick.
01:01:247 (6) - Same as above,move to 01:01:313.
01:01:844 (1) - Not sure about this...it's unreadable,yes.
01:25:692 (1,2,3,4,5) - Using such pentagon-shaped jumps would be better:
02:39:498 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Ahh,all these stacks are so confusing,because spacing makes no sense here.Could you make something better?
02:43:214 (1) - Too close to previous object,fix distance.
[Yue]00:21:888 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pentagon shape isn't perfect,you could make it better.
00:24:012 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:30:384 (1,2,3,4,5) - Looks silly
I suggest you to change (2) with (3) and then stack (4) with (1).
00:32:508 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:34:984 (4) - Start new combo here instead of 01:35:250 (1) to point out this jump?
01:35:250 (1) - Slider shape is just horrible,sorry
02:41:091 (3,4,5) - Unstack these notes,these notes aren't that obvious to read.
03:03:259 (7) - Delete this note.
Nice,creative mapset.
Star~
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