KingsAL2 wrote:

I'm late to check my queue.

[Hard]
00:07:640 (6) - Wire simi jump
00:22:640 (6) - ^
01:02:015 (6) - ^
01:17:015 (6) - ^
...Almost copy and paste... lol - it is copy-paste, and its suposed to be like that and you can play it very well

Hikato wrote:

[Normal]

00:08:811 (3) - Move this 1/4 forward and shorten it to end on the red tick. Same for all other parts the same as this. - looks fine to me since this is a normal, i did it like this in hard afaik.
00:23:811 (3) - ^ - ^
01:03:186 (3) - ^ - ^
01:18:186 (3) - ^ - ^
02:35:061 (3) - ^ - ^
02:50:061 (3) - ^ - ^

[Hard]
Ah man.

00:08:929 (4,5) - Sounds weird. I think this sounds better with the 4 removed and the slider moved back and shortened to end on the red tick. - sounds good to me
00:10:686 (3) - Replace with a circle at 00:10:804 ? - nah
00:13:030 (1) - End on the blue tick? - k
00:16:311 (4) - Replace with a circle at 00:16:429 ? - nah
00:23:929 (4,5) - Sounds weird. I think this sounds better with the 4 removed and the slider moved back and shortened to end on the red tick. - sounds good to me
00:31:311 (4) - Replace with a circle at 00:31:429 ? - nah
00:32:952 (3) - End on the blue tick? - no, since it sounds better because it ends on a beat.
00:44:085 (1,2,3,4,5) - This sounds really bad. - sounds good to me
00:50:765 (6) - End on the blue tick? - no, since it sounds better because it ends on a beat.
01:12:327 (3) - End on the blue tick? - no, since it sounds better because it ends on a beat.
01:13:968 (5) - End on the red tick, it currently sounds out of time. - k
01:18:304 (4,5) - Sounds weird. I think this sounds better with the 4 removed and the slider moved back and shortened to end on the red tick. - sounds good to me
01:20:061 (3,4) - Move the 3 1/4 forward. Move the 4 1/2 forward. -k
02:23:460 (1) - This sounds wrong. - fixed
02:29:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This sounds really bad. - ok to me

Yomeiro wrote:

Hikafun

Here are also some timing sections 10ms late, but not that much..... maybe change this~ Urgh ._.

00:19:348 (1) - Sharp slider is sharp.... can you make this one a bit smoother? (Like this maybe~) Changed.
00:20:755 (1) - ^ Changed.
00:28:255 (6) - Add NC? o.o Sure.
00:29:192 (1) - Remove NC? :3, can you make it so that , 00:28:255 (6) and 00:29:192 (1) are symmetrical? (basically 1 two grids left~) Sure.
Can you add something from 00:38:098 - 00:39:036? (Maybe a break like jericho did from 02:32:005 - 02:33:880 in his diff~, feel free to add a Spinner or Slider though~) Break.
^, from 01:00:598 - 01:01:536 this time~ Break.
01:18:294 (4) - Can you try and stack the end of this one with 01:17:473 (1)? Sure.
01:23:801 (1,2,1) - Oh gawd, this spacing.... ;_;, It's not like this is not playable, but I'm not sure what you intend to do with that there (it just looks weird...)~ can you fix it maybe to something like this~? (Maybe chage the Combo pattern to 123, 123 or 123456 as well then~) Rearranged.
Can you add something from 02:32:473 - 02:33:411? (Spinner/Slider/Break?) :3 Break.
03:00:598 (1,1,1,1) - Can you change this to a 1234 Combo-Pattern? No.

For some reason, the first half of this map is awesome and at the same time some parts are not, and the second half is just awesome.
Onto the next diff~

Yomeiro wrote:

I guess since there are more diffs now, I'm giving this one another look again~

General

So you added the diff's from jericho and Hikato.
Why not add their names to the Tags? :3 - added
The Filesize is 23.1 MB. Can you get it to < 20 MB somehow? >< - its ok

Easy

02:29:192 (1) - Uhm well, can you make this slider two ticks shorter, so that it end on the white tick? - fixed

Normal

00:41:380 (3) - Make this one end at 00:41:848~ - nah
01:50:755 (3) - ^, let it end at 01:51:223 though~ - nah
01:58:255 (3) - ^, let it end at 01:58:723~ - nah
02:28:255 (3) - I guess I'm pretty much fine with it here, but since you used the other "pattern" more frequently, with that one slider being this tad longer, I would like to see that being changed here as well (make this slider end at 02:28:723~) - nah
02:30:130 (3) - ^, (make this one end at 02:30:598~) - nah


Hard

02:28:255 (3) - Let this one end at 02:28:723? - nah
02:30:130 (3) - ^ at 02:30:598 though~ - nah
I guess there's a slider missing from 02:44:192 - 02:44:661 and that this is not intended? - fixed

Yomeiro wrote:

jericho2442's Rave!!

00:15:364 (1) - Can you let this one stack with the end of 00:15:598 (2)? nope it is done on purpose, to give it a trail back effect
00:17:239 (1) - ^, 00:17:473 (2)~ same
00:19:114 (1) - ^, 00:19:348 (2)~ same
Can you add something from 00:38:098 - 00:39:036? (Maybe a Break like you did from 02:32:005 - 02:33:880~) nah its a lil rest but too small to use a break time
^, from 01:00:598 - 01:01:536 this time~ same
^, from 01:47:473 - 01:48:880 this time~ same
Timing-Section at 01:48:880 (where it's supposed to be?) is 10 ms to late~ (at 01:48:890~) oh lol fixed

Very nice diff other than that, I like your usage of hitsounds and how you used your combo colours~ (1/2 for non-Kiai Parts, and 3/4 for Kiai-Parts)

Well that's it, you already got a star from me some months ago~

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Hikafun]

Same stuff about Stack Leniency.

00:08:333 (2,3,4,5) - I don't agree at stuff like this. <3
00:10:130 (3,4,5,6) - ^ <3
01:48:880 (1,1,2,3,4) - This sudden change of spacing is really confusing to me. <3
01:50:755 (1,1,2,3,4) - ^ <3

I don't like Hikato's difficulty <3

osuplayer111 wrote:

This bitch seems to be ready so <3

Bubbled~

Broetchen8441 wrote:

osuplayer111 wrote:

This bitch seems to be ready so <3

Bubbled~

Well, there are too many innocent girls in that video to fit to the song, but yeah... nobody cares 'bout girls like Nagisa beeing called a bitch
-.-

Sakura Hana wrote:

[jericho2442's Rave!!]
00:46:067 (1,2,3,4) - I have a problem seeing these notes as their dark color blends in with the video in this section
00:47:942 (1,2) - Same as above
00:51:692 (1,2,3) - Here as well
00:58:958 (2,1,2,3) - even tho 2,1 is stacked it's still hard to read as the stack will move 2 above and hitbursts will still hide 2 and 3 from appearing so i'd imagine it's a full 4 note stack at 1/2. you have a point, changed
01:08:333 (1,2) - This goes by so fast and i still had the hitburst on top of the previous note i didnt even know (2) existed. (However from similar parts i had already learned how this pattern worked so it was fine, but remember that a pattern must be readable at all times, and not because of experience/memory >.<) but this time i have to explain , this pattern is readable for one main factor, and that is its powerful contrasted combo colours, obv by having a stacked note it makes the note itself a bit harder to see, but then due to the contrasted combo colours at this point it makes it almost impossible to miss, the pattern aint readable because of experience/memory, it becomes readable due to an design idea what makes the pattern vibrant
01:39:505 (1) - Can't see approach circle due to blending with the video in this section
01:51:223 (1) - Cant see approach circle either for the same reason
[...] And there are plenty others that by this point i'd just recommend you change that colour. to all notes of combo colours, i kinda agree and thus made the colours readable

Sakura Hana wrote:

Mod request by someone who shall not be named.
[General]
You are missing spinner-approachcircle.png in your beatmap set -added

[Hard]
http://puu.sh/3AOS let's see this pattern appears... 7 times! that's quite a lot dont you think? i'd suggest for future maps use less copy/paste =/ -normally i dont use copypaste, it just fits the songs pretty good imo, and plays good aswell
00:30:598 (1) - This circle is blending with the background on this part of the video i'd recommend you color hax it to another of your combo colours
00:43:255 (6) - Once again combo colour is blending i suggest you color hax this combo
01:06:223 (1) - Once again ^
[...] Just like jericho, repeat the process or change the colours. -used jericho's new combo colours

Sakura Hana wrote:

Rechecking~
[Normal]
00:27:317 (2,3) - Spacing error - fixed
00:32:473 (1,2,3) - i dont get this sudden change of spacing. - i didn't change the spacing here ._. but i moved them a bit better
I recommend you double check the spacing here, there are more of these issues in the map - yes sir

[Easy]
03:02:005 (5) - Why stack this note? it feels like you ran out of space to place notes rather than you wanted to stack it o.o - actually i wanted to stack it, but looks better without stacking, so changed it.